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Incest Bheed me akela (abhay)

Tiger 786

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Location - delhi ek fight club

ek fighter ring me jeet kar nach gana kar raha tha

Comentater - aaj khas Africa se waha ke mashoor fighter (dillen locha) ko bulaya gya h
3 log pahle hi inse apni pasliya tudwa chuke h kya ab koi ayisa h jo inhe hara sake
harane wale ko milega 25 lakh ka inaam

fighter - common common

punlic bhi intzaar me baithe thi
ki koi aaye
unhe to apna satta lagana unhe kya kon mare ya jiye

club owner- yaar kaha fas gya is sale ko bula kar socha tha isse bulauga apna koi na koi banda hara hi dega or
paisa hi paisa hoga
par sala paise leke ye haar nahi raha or hara ise koipa nhi raha
public ko ×4 de raha hu tab bhi sale sab isi par paisa laga rahe h
(Jin logo ne match par paisa lagaya h ya satta lagaya woh samajh gye honge yaha kya baat chal rahi h)

Sab log soch me hi the ki ab kon ladega ki tabhi
ek ladka bheed me se nikalta h

me try kru kya

Ek lada jo 6 ft se bhi lamba tha lambe lambe baal hatho me anguthi lamba cauda
chale to ayisa lage jaise
jungle me sher chal raha ho

fighter - common boy show me what you gonna do

Ladka - (😈) i make sure u will regret

ladka andar jata h refree hath milwata h or fight

tannnnnn

fighter - boom boom boom boom bang bang

ladke ko punch pe punch rahe the or ladka bas smile ke sath maar kha khata jaa raha tah

4 ro taraf log locha locha bol rahe rhe

locha - blady loser or bol kar ek zor ki kick karta h

ladka uski kick pakad leta h

ladka - now it's my turn

or boom boom boom boom

Or bas locha ayise niche girta h jaise sukhi hui patti
sab taraf sannata cha gya tha kisi ko bhi umeed nhi thi ki locha harega

par owner ki balle balle ho gyi thi is waqt kyuki sabne apne paise locha par hi lagaye the aaj owner ne 1 hi fight m apne 3 mahine cover kiye the

10 min baad owner us ladke ke sath office m baitha tha

owner - ye lo tumhare 25 lakh or agar tum mera club join krlo to isse bahut zada kama sakte h ham

ladka - mujhe tumhari chillar ki zarurat nahi h tum chaho to ye sab rakh sakte h

owner - ki aankho me chamak aa gyi woh hath bhada kr beg ko pakadta usse pahle hi ladke ne uspe hath rakhke kaha

Ladka - par uske liye tume mera ek kaam karna hoga

owner - kaam kaisa kaam

ladka - ****** city is shehar ke har bade admi ki kundli mujhe chaheye khas kar raja or 4 pariwaar

Owner - par tum kya kroge jaan kar

ladke ne owner ki baat sun kar apna hath paiso wale bag ki taraf bhadaya

owner - ho jayega ho jayega me to bas information ke liye
hehe subha tak aapka kaam ho jayega

ladka - pahle informar the naa to aaj bhi wahi kaam kro or krane wale se koi sawal nahi

ye bol kar ladka waha se chalta bana or owner ye soch kar heran tha ki 15 20 saal purani baat kisi itne jawan ladke ko kaise pata
par free ke 25 lakh ka sawal tha kaise kaam naa karta lag gya kundli nikaalne

me delhi ki market me chal raha tha 3 din ho chuke the apni duniya me wapas aaye mujhe
Pahle socha ki sidha hi jaa kar ek sath sabko mout ki nind sula dun

Fir khayal aaya ki mout to rahat ka rasta h asli dard to zindgi deti h

Yahi soch kar me delhi aa gya meri city ke sabse pass tha
bas farak sirf itna tha ki yaha sarkaar ki chalti h or waha aaj bhi raja ki

me sidha jaa kar ek godown me ghus gya

me - maal taiyaar h

admi - arii baba tumare hath kya aladin ka chirag lag gya baba itna sara sona itna sara sona to mene sunhaar hote hue bhi nahi dekha
bolo sahi kahi tume kahi gada hua khazana to nahi mil gya

me - bakwas ho gyi ho to paise

Sunhar - aryy to ye dekho naa baba tumhare account me pure 20 caror daal diye h
or ye rahe tumhare 50 lakh jo tumne mage the

mene beg liya or chalta bana

yahi soch rahe ho naa mere pass sona kaha se aaya to jis duniya se aaya tha waha kagaz ke nahi sone ke sikke chalte the
ab jo janwar me maarta tha unhe bech kar jo sikke aate the unhe apne he pass rakhta tha

halaki waha par mere plan kuch or the
Par ab yaha tha to plans bhi badal gye the

2 4 khass or anokhi chezain leke aaya tha waha se yaha woh chezain lakho caroro ki thi

waise to mere pass abhi bhi 100 caror ke laghbag ka sona pada hi hua rha
par zarurat ka kya h raja se takkar jo leni thi

delhi aake sabse pahla kaam kiya tha ****** city ke bare m puchne ka normal logo se pata chala ki ****** city ka ek raja h or 4 pariwar h yahi nev h is city ke
Kisi ko bhi un pariwar ke logo ke bare me zada khas jaankari nahi thi isiliye ek khabri ka pata karna pada

pata chala delhi ka ek zamane ka mashoor khabri aaj fight club chalata h

(Agle din subha 10 bje)

me or Suleman khabri ek room me baithe hue the or samne hi ek badi screen lagi hui thi

(To aayiye dosto ab waqt h abhay ke sath sath ham bhi thoda bahut apne kirdaro ko jaan lete h)

suleman se remote uthaya or button dabaya

s - sabse pahle

(Intro time)


Raja - jai veer singh - age 50
****** City ka raja h apne sehar ki tarakki cahta h or cahta h 4ro pariwar iske sath mil jaye taki *************************************
waise ghamandi h

Rani netra singh - age 38 apne zamane m itni khubsurat thi ki inke liye raja ko pange lene pade
aaj maharani h apni beti se bahut pyaar karti h

rajkumari depti singh - age 21 figure 34 26 34 khubsurati ki misaal h abhi London m h pichle 2 saal se masters kar rahi h kuch waqt me loutne wali h
gusse ki bahut tez h

( Abhi ek baat clear kar dun ki ye sari details suleman bata raha h to sabhi details sachi h ya juthi ye waqt hi batayega khass kar logo ka nature)

ab aate h yaha ke 4 badshaho ke bare m matlab yaha ke 4 pariwar
sabse pahle aata h

(Chaudhary pariwar)

syaam Chaudhary - age 65 aaj bhi kadak h
biwi mar chuki h
fir bhi apne pariwar ka mukhiya bana baitha h iske bete iski baat aankh band karke maante h

bhiku - bada beta age 43 pahalwani karta h gusse ka tez h apna bussness sambhalta h apne pariwaro ko duro se zada uper karna cahta h

sashi (wife of bhiku) age 40 house wife h apne pati se darti h or apne 3 bacho se pyaar karti h

ajit - (2nd son of shayam) age 42 ye bahut tez h apni biwi ke kahe par chalta h
ye ek din apne bhai ki power cahta h par pahle baki pariwaro ko khatm karna

manju(w/o=ajit) ye bahut tez h apne aapko maharani ki tarha dekhti h age 45 apne pati se umar me badi h par power me nashe m apne se chote ladke ko fasa liya
hot h figure 38 30 38

vikram (son of bhiku) kamina h thakur pariwar se nafrat karta h ye kisi se pyaar bhi karta h aage pata chalega
age 24

tinka (2nd son of bhiku) pahalwan h hawas bhari padi h isme
ise jo palle pad jaye use hi chod deta h
Ghar me baki sab ki tarha pahlwan h
age 22

Vani (d /of/ bhiku) ye apne ghar me sabse alag h khubsurat h par gussa apne baap se mila h
Ye bhi kushti karti h daav pech me ise iske bhai kabhi nahi hara pate
Hight 5,10 figure 34 28 36 age 20

Gopal (son of ajit) age 22 hight 5, 8 inch is ghar ke mardon me yahi h jiski hight 6 se kam h
body theek thak h par sala hawsi h iska bas chale to vani par bhi chad jaye par fatti h ki kahi maar na de
lund size 5 inch

hema ( d of ajit) age 21 figure 36 28 38 bahut hi chuddakd h ise bas land chaheye apne bhai or tinka ke niche hamesha hi aane ko taiyaar rahti h
par ye sab sirf iski maa ko pata h

Chaudhary family ka busness guns ka h legal or inlegal ye log kidnapping firoti sattelment wagera wagera ye sab kar the h

ab aati h ****** city ki sabse paise wali family

(Thakur family)

dhananjay thakur - age 71 ab buddha ho chuka h zadatar ghar me hi rahta h chezon se retair ment le chuka h

savetri thakur - age 69 ye bhudiya aaj bhi kadak soubhav ki h
Sabse zada pyaar apne pote se karti h or uske baad iski sabse ladli h ....
dono me iski jaan basti h

Ranveer thakur - age 49 hight 6 ft pahalwan h to hast pust h
apna bussness sambhalta h
or sath hi sath apne office ki ek do ladkiyo ke sath muh bhi maarta rahta h

Kajal thakur (wife of ranveer) age 47 hight 5,9 rang gora figure 36 30 38 waise to apne pati ke sath apne office sambhalti h
par abhi leave par h agle 2 mahine m beti ki shadi h

sanjay thakur - age 48 apne bhai ke sath bussness karta h ye Sharif insaan h bahar muh nahi maarta

kamini thakur - age 45 apne pati beti ke alawa apni jithani ki choti beti se bahut pyaar karti h figure 34 27 36

divya thakur - (badi beti ranveer thakur ki)
Age 25 sabse saral or acchi khubsurti me thakur pariwar me shayad hi koi ise chu sake figure 34 24 36
abhi collage m teacher h par 3 mahino me shadi h isliye ghar bitha diya gya h

Rani thakur ( beti no 2 of ranveer thakur)
khubsurat or ghamandi dono ek sath h ye ladki sirf apni Chachi or bhai ki sunti h
bahut piche pade par kabhi ghass nahi dali isne ise koi ayisa chaheye jo iske bhai jaisa ho

age 23 figure 36 26 36

avni thakur age 23 figure 34 26 35 rani thakur or isme ratti bhar bhi farak nahi h nature wise to use padh liya matlab ise padh liya
dono hi doctori ki padhai kar rahi h

arav thakur - hight 6 ft baal chote hi rakhta h rang gora body iske abs jaise bahar aane ko rahte h
agar koi dekhe to kisi film ka hero hi samjhe
kahne ko to thakur pariwar ka karta dharta dhananjay or ranveer h par abhi yahi chala raha h sab

suleman - bhai waise kuch bhi kaho ladka dikhta zabarjast h

abhay -(daravni awaz me) suleman kya tu apni aankho se bore ho gya h
ya tu cahta h ki me kisi awara kutte ko teri aankhe laga dun

ye sunkr suleman ko andaza ho gya tha ki uski waat lag sakti h isi liye or zada naa bolte hue aage ki details dene laga

( Rathod pariwaar)

shanti Rathod - age 63 ye budhiya nagin h iske bare m bas itna jaanlo ki agar ye kisi ko pani bhi pilayegi to usne zahar hi hoga

sourav Rathod - age 44 hawsi h hight 5,10 ladki ho ya orat ya koi budhiya agar iska land khada hua to ise chut chaheye hi chaheye
abhi iski nazar kisi par h kahani me aage pata chalega

mohit Rathod -age 43 ghar ka dusra beta hight 5,9 iske bare m aage kabhi baat hogi

neelam Rathod - rang gora age 39 ye apne pati ki tarha hi h ise apne pati ko dusro ke uper dekhne me maza aata h
figure 40 30 40

ramiya Rathod (pahle thakur thi Dhananjay thakur ki beti)
mohit Rathod ki biwi ye zadatar maike m hi rahti h kyu pata nahi

priya Rathod - khubsurat chulbuli abhi 12th h ramiya or mohit ki beti h agle saal 18 ki ho jayegi
apni nani ke ghar me rahti h

gaurav Rathod - (son of sourav) iske bare m bas itna jaanlo ki ise bhi apne baap ki tarha ladkiyo ko randi bana ke chodne me maza aata h
ab iski nazar h ......... .... Par

rathod ka kaam h daru baar hotels

(Sangwan pariwar )

padeep Sangwan - ye abhi kuch saal pahle hi is pariwaar ka mukhiya bana h
age 47
baki is pariwaar ke log kaise h kisi ko nahi pata

bhoomi sangwan- apne pati ka sath deti h age 45

raju sangwan - apne bhai ke kahne m chalta h age 44

veena sangwan - kaisi h kisi ko nahi pata age 22

rahul sangwan - ye nashebaz h age 24

raja sangwan - age 23 kaisa h aage pata chalega

raju sangwan ne shadi nahi ki kyu pata nahi

Sangwan family ye raja ki sena or raja ka boder sambhalte h waise to inka kaam pashu palan ka bhi h

suleman - bhai 1 din me bas ye hi pata kar paya

mene ek lambi saasli kuch logo ke bare me jaan kar gussa bhi aaya

ab me aapko apne bare m bhi bata hi deta hu

me abhay thakur - age 21 par lagta apni umar se zada hu mere baal mere kandho se niche tak aate h meri dadhi bhi thodi badi h mere hath me anguthiya or game me loket or Chen hamesha hi hoti h
meri hight 6,2 h ab rang gora hi h mere abs bhi thik thak dikhte h par me body bulder ki tarha nahi hu
admi mujhe dekh kar aksar hi dar jate h wahi
Ladkiya pata nhi woh to yaha hi pata chalega
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aaj ke liye itna hi or sorry bhai log late ho gya
kuch log zada hi wait kar rahe the par likhne me busy tha

sach me isme bahut time laga likhne me
ek din photo kha gye par unhe daalne baitha to din hi waste hi hote

jitne late hue ho hisaab kar lige
Superb update
 

Tiger 786

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ek nayi subha ek naya din thakur haveli

maa maa aaj kya bana h nashte m jaldi do hame collage jana h

kajol - aao tum dono sab taiyaar bhi ho gye bas tum hi dono late ho

rani or Avni bhi aa kar nashta karne baith jati h

Puri thakur family sath me nashta kar rahi thi bas ek ko chhod kar

ranveer - kya woh abhi tak nahi jaagi

kajal - aapto jaante hi h

ranveer - banao us ladki ko kajal 1 mahine se ghar par ho tum ek ladki ko shadi ke liye razi nahi kar payi

kamini - ayisi baat nahi ham sabhi divya ko banane ki puri koshish kar rahe h

ranveer - kya khak koshish kar rahe ho tum log aryy pata h naa raja sahab ki shart ke mutabik pahle hamari 3no betiyo ki shadi baki ke pariwaro me hogi tabhi ham apne bete ki shadi rajkumari se kar payige

jhananjay - bulao use ham apni poti se baat karke dekhte h

kajal uper jati h ek kamre me jisme sirf andhera hota h

kajal light jalati h to dekhti h ki ek ladki jo koi or nahi divya hi h ek badisi book padh rahi thi
( Beauty and tha beast)


Kajal - divya itni si roshni me tume kuch dikh bhi raha h
chalo daining table par wait kar rahe h

divya - (tank bhari muskaan ke sath)
kya baat h maa aaj kon mujhe samjhane wala h ki gaurav accha ladka mujhe usse accha nhi milega bla bla

divya ki baat sun kar kajal ki nazre jhuk gyi use pata tha uski beti sahi kah rahi h

bachpan se shararti or chulbuli divya bahut pahle hi ek dum se shant or apne aapme rahne wali ladki ban gyi thi 5 saal pahle uski beti ne sabse baatin karna kam kar diya tha
or 3 saal pahle jab uski or uski behno ki shadi ek samjhote ke liye tay kardi gyi jabse hi uski ye sabse samajhdaar or kahe ki beti bagawat par utar aayi h
pahle usne aate hi ghar me tod fod machai
fir usne sabse baatin karna band kar diya
thakur pariwar ko isse bachne ka ek hi rasta sujha
or unhone gaurav Rathod ko parmisn dedi ki divya ko impress kre
par is idea ne ulta asar kiya gaurav Rathod divya ko pareshan karne laga
divya ne ghar walo se kaha to unhone kaha ki hone wala pati h janoge samjhoge nahi to kaise chalega
divya ne apne collage se hi chutti leli or ab 1 mahine se ghar me band thi

kajal ko bhi ye moka laga apni beti ko shadi ke liye manane ka to woh bhi office na jaa kar subha sham apni beti ke man me gaurav ke liye pyaar jagane ki koshish karne lagi
waise to ye

sintific tarika h agar kisi ke aas pass din me 21 22 baar ek hi baat bolo to insaan use hi sach maan leta h par divya pata nhi kis matti se bani thi

kajal - mujhe kuch nahi sunna chup chap nashta karne aao

Or bol kar chalti bani woh kai baar apni is beti ke samne sharmindgi mahsus karti thi jise woh apne gusse se chupane ki koshish karti thi

ayisa nhi tha ki rani or Avni ne is baat ki khilafat nahi ki thi woh bhi raji nahi thi par yaha
arav ne apna pyaar dikhaya apni bahno ke liye
or apni dono bahno se wada kiya ki agar shadi se pahle unhe kisi se pyaar hua to woh unki shadi usse hi karwayega

par divya or Arav ki shuru se hi banti nahi thi isliye use apne bhai ki baat par ratti bhar bhi bharosa nhi hua

thodi der baad divya bhi table par thi
or pura thakur pariwar bhi akhri baar jab abhay jab ghar chod kar gya tha us waqt ke mukable thakur pariwaar me kam log the ab ayisa kyu h aage pata chalega

dhananjay - divya tum hamari poti ho par tume pata h hamne kabhi tumme ramiya or Arav me kabhi koi farak nahi kiya h
or hamare pyaar ke hi Karan jaha tumhari choti bahno ko aakele Chaudhary or Sangwan pariwar me jana h
tumhe Rathod pariwar me jana h jaha tumhari bua ka sath milega

divya - mujhe koi farak nahi padta dadaji chahe kuch bhi ho jaye me ye shadi nahi krugi

ranveer - bahut hua ladki tum bhool gyi ho tum kisse baat kar rahi ho
aryy ham bhi dekhte h tum kaise ye shadi nahi krogi

divya aksar hi apne baap se dar jaya karti thi
ab ye uske woh bachpan wale papa nahi the jo uski zidd man jaya karte the
ab woh bas Arav ki suna karte the
or 9 saal pahle jab kisi baat par divya ne Arav ko thappad mara tha to uske baap ne bina socha samjhe use bahut mara tha
Tab se hi divya apne baap se darne lagi thi

savitri - rahanedo ranveer me to kahti hu ye ayise nahi sunegi
mujhe to lagta h aaj bhi ispar us manhus ka saya h bachpan se uske sath khelne se roka hota to aaj ye bhi meri baki dono potiyo jaisi hoti

Divya - bas dadi bas bahut hua ab to uska picha chhod do mere bhai ko mare hue 5 saal ho chuke h
Abto uska naam lena band kardo kab tak har buri chez ke liye usko zimmedar mante rahoge jo is duniya m hi nahi h

Or ye bol kar divya bina kuch sune apne kamre me chali gyi
or bed par let kar rone lagi
aaj bhi ghar me sab uske bhai se nafrat hi karte h
par woh to mar chuka h uske marne ke baad bhi ghar wale aaj bhi har buri chez ko uske bhai se jod diya karte the
par divya jaanti thi ki dudh ki dhuli to woh bhi nahi thi
kuch galtiya to usse bhi hui thi kya (aage pata chalega)

par is sab ke bich thakur pariwar me koi ayisa bhi tha jispar kisi ka dhiyaan nahi gya woh apni alag pareshani m tha
(Kon aage pata chalega)

2 ladkiya collage m baatin karti hui chali jaa rahi thi

yaar rani kabhi kabhi to lagta h di sahi bol rahi h ghar walo ne bina puche pata nhi kaha shadi tay kardi h

rani - tu pagal h Avni ary mujhe mere bhai par pura bharosa h agar hame kisi se pyaar hua na to bhai kuch na kuch kar hi lega
didi ko to bas bhav khane ki adat ho gyi h

tabhi kisi ne Avni ka hath pakad liya

avni - rokey mera hath chod ye kya batamezi h

rokey - dekh Avni me kitni baar bol chuka hu me pyaar karta hu tujhse

avni - or me bhi kitni baar bol chuki hu ki mujhe tujhme koi interest nahi h

rokey - dekh Avni me kuch nahi jaanta pyaar se maanja warna

Rani - lagta h rokey tu apni aukat bhool gya h
tu jaanta h naa ham kis pariwar se aate h
or agar hamare bhai ko pata chala to

rokey ****** city ke dsp ka beta tha or dono ladkiyo ko manchalo ko jhelne ki adat thi isi wajha se unhone kisi se nahi kaha tha par aaj rokey ne hadd kardi thi usne Aaj Avni ka hath pakad liya tha

waise to rokey ki bhi Arav se fatti thi is sahar me kam hi log the Jo arav se abhi tak nahi pite the warna woh aksar hi ladko ko pit diya karta tha kabhi behno ke liye to kabhi rajkumari ke liye

rokey - me nahi darta tumhare bhai se rani pyaar kiya h mene avni se
or me use apni bana kar hi rahuga
me bhi dekhta hu mujhe kon rokta h aaj Avni se shadi kruga

rokey aaj pagal ho gya tha subha hi drugs liye the to aaj control nahi kar paya feelings
par tabhi

kaattttt aaaaahhhh boom or rokey dur jaa gira


pahli katt ki awaz rokey ke hath tutne ki thi
dusri aaaahhh rokey ke chekhne ki
or 3ra boom rokey ko laat padne ki

jab sab log apne shok se bahar aaye to dekha ki ek ladka bina kisi expression ke rokey ko dekh raha h

ladkiya use dekh kar kho hi gyi thi itna lamba cauda khule hue lambe baal or bahut sare gale me loket

Ladka - kai baar log bhul jate h ki apni hadd m rahna chaheye
or ye bol kar chalta bana

jab tak rani or Avni kuch samajh pati woh collage me andar jaa chuka tha

Ladka toilate me jata h or apne beg me se ek toy bahar nikaalta h

ladka - yoda tujhe pata h mujhe kabhi kabhi khud se hi dar lagta h

me thakuro ko sirf barbaad karke yaar maar ke chodna nahi cahta
Usse naa mujhe shanti milegi naa tujhe
me unse unka sab kuch cheen luga
unka rutba , unka paisa , unka ghamand , unki taqat , unki izzat , or akhir me unhe bas ek chez milegi zindgi bar ki zillat or dard
bas intzaar h jab me apni puri tagat hasil karlu
tab tak is khel ko dusre tarike se khelte h

yoda mout to aram hoti h
asli dard to zindgi deti h......

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.aaj ke liye itna hi
big brother this is for you
Fantastic update
 

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Tiger 786

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Location principal's office

principal - nhi nhi bilkul nhi ab tum is collage me bilkul nahi rah sakte

abhay - 50 lakh diye h tujhe

principal - apne paise le jao aryy 50 lakh ke liye me apni jaan nahi de sakta
tum jaante bhi ho kisse panga liya h

ek to tumhare pass koi degree nhi hai naa koi cartifekit h aryy woh sab chodo tumhare pass to ek adharchard tak nahi h
tum hindustani ho Pakistani ho nepali ho
ya koi atankwadi ho ye sab jane bina bhi mene tume addmission diya or tumne kya kiya aate hi sarkari admi ke bete se panga or woh bhi ayisa waisa nahi hath hi tod diya

abhay- 1 caror

parincipal- ( ek dum naram awaz me) aryy mujhe sarkar se itna dar nhi lagta par us kutte ke piche Chaudharyo ka hath h tum samajh hi sakte ho

abhay - 3 caror or mere sath kuch bhi hua to teri zimmedari nhi hogi

principal -(ruk ruk kar haste hue) hehe hehe hehe me tumhara ye collage tumhara aryy me to bolta hu ye pura sahar tumhare kro jo karna h

abhay uth kar jane laga or fir darwaze ke pass ruk kar bola
abhay - ek baat bolu tu hasa mat kar tujhe dekh kar ayisa lagta h jaise suar ki shakl ka koi ghada has raha ho

principal - hehe hehe hehe beta tume dekh kar to mujhe mere papa ki yaad aa gyi woh bhi mujhse bilkul yahi bolte the
par beta woh paise

abhay - 2 ghante m pahuch jayige khushi se mar mat jaiyo bho...ke

location hospital

Hello Hello bhai me me rokey

samne se - aaaaahhhh haa bol kutte kyu call kiya
aahhh kya chus rahi h meri rand

rokey - bhai aaj me aapka kaam kar hi deta par pata nahi sala koi naya ladka aa gya
(Rote hue) bahut mara bhai bahut mara mera hath bhi tod diya

samne se - tu kis kaam ki baat kar raha h
Uuffff randi aaj to ghar par koi nahi h mujhe apni gand hi dete

rokey ko samajh aa gya tha ki galti se hi sahi usne bahut sahi time par phone kiya h uska bhai abhi full mood m h

rokey - bhai aapki woh Avni thakur wali baat
bhai me aaj hi kaam kar deta kya ban kar aayi thi bhai or bhai aaj jo uski gand lag rahi thi me to aaj hi use aapke niche lane wala tha

samne se - aaahhh aahhhh oooohhhhh kis chinal ka naam le liya kon he woh madarchod jo mere or meri hone wali rakhail ke bich me aaya
kal tak intzaar kar aaj zara is sali ki gand maarlu

asal baat ye thi ki rokey Avni ko pana cahta tha par use pata tha ki agar usne Avni par sidhe hath dala to Arav thakur or pura thakur khandan uske piche pad jayega
isi liye usne Chaudhary khandan ke ke suputr ko vani ki taraf attract kiya

avni waise bhi kamal ki dikhti thi or uper se Avni sangwan pariwar ki hone wali bahu thi to agar koi or Avni se shadi karega to sangwan pariwar ki bezzati hogi

or rokey ko bhi bas Avni ko chodna hi tha to dono me deal hui rokey Avni se shadi krega Chaudhary pariwar thakuro se rokey ko bachayega or inaam ke tor par dono hi Avni ke sath raatain rangin krige

rokey ko bhi koi dikkat nhi thi bhale hi woh duniya ke samne Avni se shadi krega par kaha likha tha ki baad me Avni se man bhar jane ke baad woh dusri shadi nahi kar sakta ..

Location canteen

avni Avni kabse dekh rahi hu kis soch me dubi hui h

avni - yaar rani me us_ladke ke bare me soch rahi hu jaha pura collage hamare uper marta h fir bhi koi madat ke liye nahi aaya or jisne madat ki woh hamse baat karne ke liye ruka bhi nahi

rani - tu in ladko ko nahi jaanti meri bhen woh naya ladka lagta h aate hi usne ham jaisi khubsurat ladkiyo ko pareshani me dekha to socha madat karke hero ban jata hu agar ek bhi impress ho gyi to baki ke saal maze me katige

par bichara shayaad abhi hamari city ke bare m sahi se nahi jaanta yaha raja or 4ro pariwaro ki chalti h bhale hi police or mantri ham logo ke kaam or hamare family members ko hath naa lagate ho par tujhe kya lagta h rokey or uska baap us_ladke ko zinda chodige kabhi nahi

Avni - (pareshan) to hame uski madat karni chaheye

Rani - kahi meri bhen ko woh lambe baal wala passand to nahi aa gya kahe to aru(Arav) se baat kru

Avni(blush) - nhi nhi ayisa nhi h
Fir ek dum apne ghamandi avtaar me aati hui

Ham thakur h kisi ka ahsaan nahi rakhte
Usne hamari madat ki ham use bata kar uski madat krige
Uske baad woh mare jiye hame kya

Me - principal se baat karke apni car ki taraf jaa hi raha tha ki

oye ladke hamari baat suno

ye avni thi woh apna ahsaan chukane aayi thi
mere kareeb aa kar mere samne khadi ho gyi

avni - dekho tumne hamari madat ki h waise to hame tumhari madat ki zarurat nahi thi par ham thakur h kisi ka ahsaan nhi lete is liye bol rahi hu bhag jana yaha se tume nahi pata kisse panga liya h tumne

avni bas bole jaa rahi thi or uske samne khada ladka bas gusse se use dekh raha tha
avni apni baat puri karti ya kuch or bolna shuru karti ki

ladke ne avni ko apne samne se ayise side kiya ki jaise woh koi bekar ki chez ho
ek pal to avni ko laga ki woh hawa me h

or fir apni black car jo mini truck ke design me thi usme baithta hua bola

ladka - dubara mere raste me mat aana

or bol kar woh chalta bana

Avni abhi bhi shok me hi khadi thi aksar ladke usse baat karne ke liye bahane dhunda karte the or is_ladke ne use ayise side kar diya jaise uski koi keemat hi naa ho

rani - Avni tu theek h naa
avni- hmmm
Rani - kitna ghamandi h ye hamne apna ahsaan utar diya ab ye jane or iska kaam

me apne hotel room me baitha hua tha aage ki planing kar raha tha
me jis hisaab se paise uda raha tha mujhe nahi lagta tha mera ye sara sona bhi uske liye kafi hoga

mene apne hath se ek ring nikali or uspar 1 bund khun dala fir ungli uske andar daal kar zamin par kuch likhne laga
me likh kar 4 kadam piche hua to us ring se ek darwaza khul gya

me us ring me gya to waha mere sone ka kher pada hua tha
par mujhe kuch or bhi dhundna tha isse kaam nahi chalne wala tha

ayisa nhi tha ring me or saman nahi tha usme thode bahut heere bhi the par mera unhe nikaalne ka mud nahi tha ki tabhi meri nazar padi ek choti si potli par
or meri aankho me chamak aa gyi

asal me ye laal chandan ke beej the waha kabhi kabhi hame jungle me rukna padta tha or waha sone ke liye jagha nahi hoti thi
tab hame master vanraj se chandan ke beej leke jane padte the
ye jadui beej the agar ek baar zameen par touch hue to turant hi ped ban jaya karta tha
ayisa nahi tha jungle me or ped podhe nahi hote the par chandan ki khasiyat thi ki koi janwar uske 5 metar ke dayire m nahi aa pata tha

waha chandan normal tha par yaha mujhe pata tha chandan bahut mehga hota h or ek chandan ke ped ko bada hone me 30 se 40 saal ka time lagta h (ye fact h goggle kar lena)

Mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye jadu yaha kaam karta h yaa nahi par ghar to lena hi tha to risk lene me kya jata h

mene call lagaya or Suleman ke contact me ek admi ke pass chala gya

admi - sir bataiye aapko kaisa ghar chaheye

me - kisne kaha mujhe 1 gahr chaheye me 2 luga

admi - (khushi ke sath) boliye sir

Me - ek jungle ke pass jisme bahut sari khali jagha ho
Or dusra kahi bhi chalega

admi - ok ok sir no problem ho jayega

place sanjay's office

Admi - btao sanjay kya faisla h tumhara

sanjay - dekhiye mere pass abhi dene ke liye itne paise nahi h

admi - to kya hua tumhara bhai 1000ro caroro ka malik h tum sangwan pariwar ke samdhi banne wale ho to ye 35 40 caror ki mamuli rakam kya badi baat h tumhare liye

us admi ne ye bol kar sanjay ki taraf dekha to uski shakl ayisi ho gyi thi jaise us_admi ne jane anjane uski dukhti rag par hath rakh diya ho

sanjay - aap samajhiye mere pass itni badi rakam nahi h abhi dene ke liye

admi - dekho sanjay abhi tumhare pass itna paisa h nahi apne bhai se tum magna nahi cahte
to ab bas tumhare pass ek hi raasta bachta h

sanjay - (jhijhak ke sath) konsa raasta ......... Sahab

admi - apni beti ki shadi hamare pote se krado
hamara pota to pahle hi tumhari beti ko passand karta tha
par tumhare bhai ne tumhari beti ki shadi un_ jungleyo me pakki kardi

sanjay - par ayisa kaise ho sakta h aapke pote ki shadi to....

admi - ham apne chote pote ki baat kar rahe h
sanjay ye to tum bhi jaante ho sangwan khandan ka dab_daba ham 3no se kam h uper se unhe pass h kya aryy pahredaar h raja sahab or hamare behad me pade rahte h

or dekho sanjay bura mat manna par
or kahne ko to tumhara bhai bhi hamara samdhi banne wala h par agar
dekha jaye to tumhare sath bhed bhav kiya h tumhare bhai n

sanjay samne wale ko ayise dekhne laga jaise usne farsi m kuch bola ho

Admi - ab dekho naa tumhare bhai ne apni badi beti ki shadi Rathod pariwaar jinka itna bada sharab ka dhanda h
or choti wali ki hamare yaha jinka itna bada bandookon ka kaam h waha pakki ki
or tumhari beti_ki us registaan me jaha agar ******* se hamla hua to pahle mare jayinge sangwan
or ho sakta h sath me tumhari ......

soch kar jawab dena sanjay zada waqt nahi h tumhare pass

waise to us_insaan ne apni baat puri nahi ki par sanjay samajh gya uska matlab .
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Tiger 786

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us admi ke jane ke baad sanjay ne ek peg banaya or pine laga sath sath uske dimag me 2 saal pahle ki ghatna chal rahi thi

( Short flashback )

Sanjay or ranveer dono bhai hamesha se ek sath hi rahe the dono bhaiyo me ram laxman jaisa pyaar tha

dhananjay thakur ke pass pahle bas kheti hi hua karti thi
pahle 4ro pariwaro me thakur sabse kamzor mane jate the

fir ranveer ko collage me kajal se pyaar ho gya
likin ranveer ke pyaar ka vimaan udne se pahle hi niche aa gya jab use pata chala kajal ke pariwar ke pass kitna paisa h

usi din ranveer ne faisla kiya ki woh bussness krega or kajal ke kabil banega
jab ye baat ranveer ne sanjay se kahi to woh bhi aankh band karke apne bade bhai ke sath khada ho gya
dono bhai jut gye mahnat karne me
unhe pata tha dhananjay thakur kheti or kisani ko hi apna dharam maante h woh kabhi bussness ke liye ek paisa nahi dege
(kahte h naa abba nhi manige)

dono bhaiyo ne kaam kiya or collage ke 1pahle saal me hi thik thak paisa kama liya
Ek din kajal ne samne se ranveer ko approach kiya kajal ek bade baap ki beti thi ranveer jaisa pahlwan or hansome ladka use pahle din hi bha gya tha par woh cahti thi ki ranveer usse baat kre
or jab 1 saal intzaar ke baad bhi ranveer ne usse koi baat nahi ki to kajal ko hi aage aana pada

khair kajal ko jab pata chala ki ranveer sirf uske liye paisa kamana cahta tha to kajal ka pyaar assman tak pahuch gya
khair kajal ke ghar wale kabhi is_rishte ke liye taiyaar nahi hue
par kajal ne apne man ki kari natija kajal or ranveer ki shadi

dhananjay is mamle me cool nikle unhone kaha pyaar karke use nibhana mardo ka kaam hota h

Dusri taraf kajal ke aane ke baad dono bhaiyo ko bahut sahara mila kyuki kajal bussness family se thi to usne ranveer or sanjay ko bahut kuch bataya

Isi waqt ek chez or hui woh tha guruji ka aana
guruji ke ashirwad or kajal ki salha ne kuch ayisa asar dikhaya ki ranveer ne kabhi palat kar dekha hi nahi
ranveer tarakki karta chala gya or sanjay apne bhai ke sath har acche bure mod par khada raha

fir thakur pariwar ne alag alag chezain dekhi or 8 10 saal pahle ranveer ne ek bahut bada faisla liya
mission 1000 caror club me shamil hone ka mission
or ranveer apne biwi bacho ke sath yaha ka bussness sanjay ke uper chod kar mumbai chala gya

Isi tarha waqt bita sanjay ne company ko sambhala or sath hi sath thakur pariwar ko bhi

dusri taraf Ranveer ne bhi kafi mahnat ki or kuch hi salo me woh 1000 caror tak pahuch gya

ranveer wapas aaya or dono bhaiyo ne fir se sab sath me karna shuru kar diya

agar ye koi film hoti to pakka yaha happy ending likha aa jata par real life me ending zadatar happy nahi hoti

ranveer laut kar aaya par ab ranveer sanjay ka woh bhai nahi rah gya tha jo hua karta tha woh rude ho gya tha company ke jo faisle dono bhai sath me liya karte the woh ranveer akele lene laga tha

or fir ek din woh hua jo nahi hona chaheye tha

Ranveer - sanjay tumne jo khan interpricess ka oder liya tha uska kya hua

sanjay - ji bhaiya mene maal bhej diya h woh 3 dino me pahuch jayega

ranveer - nahi uski zarurat nahi h phone karke kaho us maal ko khanna brothers ke yaha supply karna h

sanjay - kya hua bhaiya sab theek

ranveer - haa mujhe khanna brother's ka call aaya tha woh usi maal ke liye hame 25 lakh zada dene ko taiyaar h
bas unki shart ye h ki unhe maal khan interpricess se pahle chaheye

sanjay - par bhaiya ham already advance pakad chuke hai
Or uper se Khan interpricess hamare sath hamare shurwati dino se kaam kar rahi h
ayise me sirf 20 25 lakh ke liye unhe chodna sahi nahi hoga

ranveer - sanjay mujhe mat sikhao ki mujhe kya karna h

sanjay - ok par bhaiya aap kahoge kya Khan interpricess ko

ranveer - bolna kya h sidhi si baat h kisi pagal employe ne advance le liya hoga hame is bare m kuch nahi pata

sanjay - par bhaiya paise mene khud pakde the kisi employe ne nhi

ranveer - haa to kya hua

sanjay - bhaiya meri salo ki jaan pahchan h woh log kya sochige mere bare m

ranveer - (chid kar) sanjay meri ek baat dhiyaan se sunlo bhale hi office ke bahar tum mere bhai ho par is office me tum mere bas ek employee ho jaise baki sab h
or yaha sirf ek boss h woh hu main

Waise dekha jaye to ye baat kafi logo ke liye ek choti si baat ho sakti h
likin sanjay ke liye ye ek pal me uski zindgibhar ki mahnat ko mitti me milane jaisa tha

kya kaha tha uske bhai ne ye compney uski h or yaha woh bas ek employee h
sanjay apne cabin se nikla or office se bahar ki taraf jane laga woh office me kaam karne wale har insaan ki taraf dekh raha tha
Par aaj uski aankho me woh ruab woh boss wali chamak nahi thi
aaj tak use lagta tha ye sab uske liye kaam karte h or woh apne bhai ke sath kaam karta h
par aaj use pata chala tha ki woh bhi unhi logo me se ek tha

fir kya tha sanjay ne ranveer ke sath kaam karna band kar diya
kajal ne sanjay ko samjhaya bhi
par ranveer ne ek baat bhi usse wapas aane ko nahi kaha

uske baad sanjay ne apna alag kaam shuru kar diya
ghar me sabko aaj bhj ayisa lagta tha ki dono sath hi kaam karte h par unhe kaha pata tha ki dono bhaiyo me ab pahle jaise baat nahi h
ranveer ghar me kabhi kabhi sanjay se kuch na kuch bola karta tha or sanjay bas haa hu me jawab de diya karta tha

sanjay shuru se hi shant rahne wala insaan tha to kisi ko bhi uske andar koi change mahsus nahi hue
uski or uski biwi bol chaal band hue to or bhi kai saal beet chuke the (reson aage pata chalega)
To sanjay me jo badlav aaye woh kamini ne bhi notice nahi kiye

sanjay ne apna alag kaam khola woh contract leke buildings and ghar ayisi chezain banwane laga usne koshish ki ranveer ki company se apna kaam alag rakhane ki

shuru shuru me sab sahi tha par fir sanjay ke hath laga ek mall ka contract sanjay ne apna sab kuch usme laga diya likin abhi bhi use 35 caror ki zarurat thi
sanjay bahut hi lachar mahsus kar raha tha use pata tha itni badi rakam is pure sehar me ginti ke log hi de sakte h
sanjay ne apne bhai ki jagha kisi or se madat magne ka faisla kiya or .......... Se 35 caror ka loan utha liya

deal ke hisaab se sanjay ka mall 2020 me complete ho jana chaheye tha
par carona aaya or lockdown lag gya or sanjay ka loan jo 35 tha ab woh 40 ke lagbhag pahuch gya tha

sanjay ki company or bhi jagha kaam kar rahi thi or waha se bhi theek thak paisa aa raha tha par woh paisa mall me lagana tha agar mall ka kaam band hua to sanjay road par aa jata

waise to sanjay jaanta tha ki woh ek naa ek din Chaudhary's Ka sara paisa chuka hi dega par aaj hui baaton me sanjay ke man me ek shak paida kar diya tha

Kya uska bhai uski beti ke sath bhi wahi kar raha tha jo uske sath kiya tha
kya uska bhai us behad me apni beti ki shadi kra sakta tha
jawab tha nahi kyuki agar use karani hoti to woh Rathod ke liye divya
or chaudhay ke liye rani ko nahi chunta

sanjay jaanta tha ghar 3no hi bure the woh jaan kar apni betiyo ki zindgi barbaad kar rahe the kyuki aage jaa kar uska beta raja ban sake
or aage jaa kar woh sabse tagatwar ho jaye

uska bhai ye kurbani de raha tha kyuki Arav uska beta tha
Par woh ye kurbani kyu de raha h
woh bhi Arav ke liye

sanjay jaanta tha ki thakur pariwar or khas kar uska bhai arav ki kitni sunta h
agar arav ne ek baar bhi apne baap se kaha hota ki chacha ko wapas bulalo to ranveer hath pair jod kar bhi use banane aata woh nahi aaya matlab arav ne nahi kaha

sanjay soch me duba hua tha......

or ab dekh lete h hamara abhay kya kar raha h
aryy yaha itna andhera kyu h
Ohhhh shayaad raat ho rahi h
par saala light hi jala leta
nhi nhi ye to koi sunsaan si jagha lag rahi h

abhay is waqt ek sunsaan behad me apni car ke bounat par baitha hua tha or pass me yoda baitha hua tha yoda ke aage ek glass rakha tha
Ab ye to samajh hi jao usme kya hoga wahi car ki dusri side me daru ki kuch khali bottles padi hui thi

abhay - yoda ye zindgi badi madar...d h sali kisi ke sath insaaf hi nahi karti

Isme kuch log acchai ka mukhota odd kar puri duniya ka pyaar paa lete h

or kuch ko puri zindgi ek bund pyaar naseeb nahi hota

tu kahi or kyu jaata h mujhe ho lele

abhay (emotional voice) kya me itna bura tha ki meri puri zindgi me bas ek insaan bhi mujhse pyaar nahi kar saka

sabne chod diya mujhe mummy papa dada dadi chacha chachi bua sabne

Yaha tak ki didi ne bhi woh bhi mujhse nafrat krti hogi naa

mujhe laga tha ki meri ye pyaar naa milne wali kismat mere gahr me hi kaam karti hogi par

tujhe to yaad hi hoga kya hua tha

tujhe pata h Yoda me kabhi kabhi sochta hu kash me khun karke jail chala jata
kamse kam mujhe ye to pata hota meri rihai kab h

par jis dard me main har pal jeeta hu ye dard sirf meri zindgi ke sath hi khatm hoga
meri koi rehai nahi hogi

or apni zindgi ko yaad karke abhay ki aankho se ek bund aasu ka gir jata h

Kuch pal baad paatttt karke ek bottle tutne ki awaz aati h

abhay - ab bas bahut hua ab me dard dunga sabko
Ab mujhe farak nahi padta kon kusurwar tha or kon begunha saza sabko milegi

me jaanta hu is_ladai me kuch ayiso ko bhi dard milega jinka koi lena dena nahi h

par mene pahle hi kaha tha zindgi sabke sath insaaf nahi karti

english me bole to

(life is unfair)


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Tiger 786

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Location Chaudhary's farm house.....

aam tor par is farm house ko Choudhary apni aiyashi or apne kale kamo ko chupane ke liye kiya karte the
par aaj hamesha ke mukable yaha kuch zada bheed thi

abhi is jagha 6 se 8 ladke the or farm ke andar ek sand jaise ladke ke aage rokey baitha hua tha
or ye shirimaan koi or nhi ye the tinka Chaudhary

tinka - itne admi kafi h

rokey - haa bhai itne kafi h
us akele ke liye to 2 3 hi bahut the par me aaj hi avni thakur se shadi kar lena cahta hu taki raat ko woh aapke niche ho

tinka - agar ayisi baat h to me bhi sath hi chalta hu kyuki tere sirf shadi karne se kuch nahi hoga agar tu use chod nahi paya to

aap nhi uske sath me jauga

Ye ek awaz thi is ghar ke ek or chirag or tinka ke chacha ke bete gopal Chaudhary ki

tinka - gopu ye tera kaam nhi h

gopal - agar tum waha gye or kisi bhi tarha ki koi gadbadi ho gyi to yaha sab tumhare gusse ke bare m jaante h
tum apne aap par kabu nahi rakh_pate
tumhare gusse ki wajha se sabko pata chal jayega ki is kand me chaudhary pariwar ka hath h
or hamare kand ki wajha se galti se bhi thakuro ne hamse rishta toda ya raja tak baat pahuchai to dadaji or tauji hamare sar kaat kar ek ko hath rakhne ke liye istmaal krige to dusre par pair rakhne ke liye

tinka ko baat sahi lagi bhale hi tinka bahar khud ko Chaudhary pariwar ka sabse bada or tagatwar dikhata ho par andar hi andar woh jaanta tha ki chaudhri pariwar me usse zada bekaar koi nahi tha

or uska ye bhai gopal jo chaudharyo me sabse kamzor h
jiski bahar itni zada izzat nhi h or jo khud ko hamesha hi Sharif dikhata h ye kitne tez dimag wala or kamina h

tinka - thik h tu jaa par naam naa aaye

Idhar gopal rokey and gang jisme koi 6 se 8 ladke the woh collage ki taraf nikal rahe the to wahi dusri taraf

Jaldi chala naa yaar itni slow kyu drive kar rahi h

rani - ab kya uda dun scotty h hawai jahaj nhi
or aaj tune car bhi nahi lane di pata h naa dhul mitti se face kharaab ho jata h

avni - nhi car se agar traffic me fas jate to socha h kitna or time lag jata

rani - teri collage me konsi flight chut rahi h

avni - nhi yaar mujhe pakka lag raha h aaj kuch hoga collage me

rani ko kal wali baat yaad aati h
rani - to tu kyu jaldi jana cahti h ab tujhe bhi ladai karni h kya

avni - nahi yaar pata nahi kyu par kal se hi bura feel kar rahi hu usne meri faltu me hi sahi par madat to ki h naa
isi liye aaj ham waha jaldi pahuch jayige or jab rokey usse apna badla lega or use sach me help ki zarurat hogi tob ham aru(arav) ko call karke us lambe baal wale ki madat kar dige
choti madat ke badle badi madat ham thakur h naa
dekha mera idea

rani - waoo yaar tu to bahut smart h

avni - dekha par kabhi ghamand nahi kiya

3rd place

subha subha ki dhup_se meri aankh khuli

me - aaaahhhh sali ye daru kya chez h puri duniya hi idhar se udhar kardi

mene uth kar idhar udhar dekha to bahut sari khali bottle padi hui thi
or ek khali glass yoda ke aage rakha hua tha

me - sale yoda itni pi tune raat_ko fir bhi sidha baitha hua h pakka bewda nikla re tu to

fir mene yoda ko liya or car se sidha hotel pahucha

waha jake sabse pahle nahaya
par abhi bhi mere sar me dard ho raha tha sharaab ki wajha se mene kal pahli baar sharaab pi_thi

pahle jab bhi mujhe gussa aata tha jab me shikaar par nikal jata tha
khun baha kar aksar hi mera gussa shant ho jaya karta tha
par kal rani or Avni ko dekhne or unki baat sunne ke baad me mujhe fir se gussa aa gya tha ab yaha koi ayisi jagha to thi nahi jaha me khun baha saku
isi liye naa cahte hue bhi mujhe sharaab ka sahara lena pada

khair nashe ki wajha se me pahle hi late utha tha par ab mujhe bukh bhi lag rahi thi to mene pahle khana oder kar diya
mujhe is sab me thoda time or lagne wala tha

Location collage

Yaar 2 ghante se zada ho wait karte karte ab to sab log class me bhi jane lage h

un_ladko me se 1 bola jo abhay ko pitne aaye the
woh log subha bahut jaldi aa gye the collage ke sab log bhi ab apni apni classes me jane lage the

Rokey bhi bahut time se intzaar kar kar ke irritat ho gya tha
tabhi uski nazar kisi par padi

rani - yaar Avni lagta nhi h ki woh aayega

Avni - haa yaar lagta h meri baat maan gya chala gya hoga city chhod kar
accha h jaan bach gyi uski

rani - tujhse kisne kaha ki uski jaan bach gyi hogi ye bhi to ho sakta h rokey ne kal hi uska kaam tamam karwa diya ho

ye sun kar kahi naa kahi avni bechain ho uthi use nahi pata tha woh kya feel kar rahi h

anvi - to ho jane de hame kya

bhale hi andar se avni kuch bhi feel kre par woh kabhi bhi apne ghamand par apni feelings ko havi nahi hone deti thi

rani - chal class me chalte h
ye kah woh dono class ki taraf chal deti h

ki tabhi rani ki aankho ke aage andhera cha jata h

Agle hi pal kuch ladke ek ladki ko car me daalte h or 2 car tezi se collage se rawana ho jati h
Or unse thodi hi piche ek or car chalne lagti h jaise uska un_dono cars se uska koi wasta hi naa ho

me collage ke tak pahucha to mene dekha ki collage se badi hi speed se 2 car nikli or uske kuch sec.... Baad ek or car collage se nikli jis par mene dhiyaan nahi diya

me andar ghusa hi tha ki meri nazar kuch logo par padi jo bhaag kar ek ladki ki taraf jaa rahe the
me bhi tezi se harkat me aaya or jab pass jake detha to ye rani thakur thi mujhe sab samajh aane me zada der nahi lagi or me dubara gadi ki taraf bhaga

10 min baad me road par car ko tezi se bhaga raha tha

waise to me car or zada tez bhaga sakta tha par mujhe car itni acchi tarha se nahi aati thi mene mushkil se 4 5 din hi delhi me seekhi thi or 10 15 din se hi chala raha tha
Kyuki mujhe nhi laga tha ki mujhe kabhi car race bhi karni padegi

par me fir bhi apni auqat se tez chala raha tha

dusri taraf rani ko behosh karke avni ko agwa karke le gye ye khabar thakur pariwar tak pahuch gyi or thakur pariwar ki beti lapata hui thi to bakiyo ko kaise na pata chalta

chaudhary's house

tinka ko rokey ne phone karke bata diya tha ki avni thakur ko unhone utha liya h or ab woh mandir jaa raha h usse shadi karne

is khabar ko sunne ke baad tinka ke pair zamin par nahi the use lag raha tha ki usne ek hi war me thakur or sangwan pariwar dono ko hi chitt kar diya

use laga ye baat jab uske bapu or papa ko pata chalega to woh use bhi vikram ki tarha layak samjhinge isi khushi me woh unhe batane bhaga

likin jab tinka shyaam Chaudhary kr room ke aage pahucha tab

shyaam - pata lagwao bheku pata lagwao kiss suar ki aulaad ki itni himmat hui jo hamara khel bigaadne ki himmat kar raha h

bhiku - par baapu ye to acchi hi baat h naa ki koi avni thakur ko utha kar le gya ye thakur or sangwano dono ke muh par thappad jaisa h

shyaam - tu ullu h bhiku ullu aryy kya tu nahi jaanta ki kal hi me sanjay se kis bare m baat karke aaya hu

bhiku - jaanta hu baapu par ek baat mere samajh me nahi aa rahi ham thakuro ki ek beti se shadi kar to rahe h ab aap dusri bhi kyu laana cahte ho

shyaam - teri budhi kabhi maar dhad khana or pahlwani ke alawa or kahi chali h jo aaj chalegi

aree bail budhi tujhe kya lagta h kal ko jab woh thakuro ka lounda raja banega to sabse zada tagat kiske pass hogi

bheku - 3no me barabar hi hogi 1 1 beti jo jaa rahi h sabke ghar

shyaam - yahi wajha h ki mene apne baad ghar ka mukhiya tujhe ya ajit ko chod kar vikram ko chuna h

bhiku - baapu kyu bhigo bhigo ke juta maar raha h batana h to batade

shyaam - to sun mene maana ki 3no pariwar 1 1 ladki se shadi karne wale h par tu ramya thakur ko kaise bhool gya bhale hi uski shadi kafi saal pahle rathodo me ho gyi ho par h to woh bhi thakur pariwar ki beti hi naa
isi liye me cahta hu ki hamare ghar bhi thakur pariwar ki 2 beti aaye
or is wajha se hamare 2 faide honge

bhiku - ye sale rathod baji maar gye
par bapu 2ra konsa faida h

shyaam - sangwan pariwar boder ko cantrol karta h isi liye jab bhi hame hamara maal bahar ya andar lana hota h to unhe paise khilane padte h
hamara 25% munafa har saal sale sangwan le jate h
jab ham uske hisse me thakur ki 1 bhi beti nahi aane dege tab ham sangwano ka hissa bhi bade aram se hadap sakte h

bhiku - par baapu woh to Rathod bhi hadap sakte h naa 2 beti to unke pass bhi hongi

shyaam - hahahahaha uska intzaam bhi dheere dheere ho jayega rathod hamare samne muh bhi kholne layak nahi rahige hahahahahaha

bahaar khade tinka ke pairo ke niche se zamin nikal rahi thi use laga tha usne bada teer mara h par use kaha pata tha ki uska ye teer ghum kar uske dada ki gand me ghus jayega

usne socha woh bada khiladi ban gya h khel ka par ab use samajh aa raha tha ki uske dada or baap ke muqable woh bacha hi h
kya khel khel raha tha uska dada or pata nahi jitna uske baap ko bata raha h usse kitna bada khel h ye

par ab uski gand bhi fat rahi thi usne galti se hi sahi par shyaam Chaudhary ki puch par pair rakh diya tha jise agar bhanak bhi lagi ki avni thakur wale mamle me uska hath h to uske baap ko mamla thama dega or uska baap kitna bada jallad h iska andaza isi baat se lagaya jaa sakta h

ki ek baar jab galti se nashe me uske mama ne uske dada ko chutiya bola tha to uske baap ne uski jubaan hi kaatdi thi

tinka bhaga or jaldi jaldi rokey ko phone lagane laga

tinka - utha madarchod utha kaha mar gya bhen ka loda

dusri taraf collage ko chavni me tapdeel kar diya gya tha thakuro ke admi police
yaha tak ki sangwan ke admi collage nahi jung ka mahol lag raha tha

or apne office me baitha principal - apne cahre ka pasina pouch raha tha use lag raha tha isme mera hath h kyuki me kal hi aaya tha or aaj thakuro ki ladki gayab ho gyi

principal - kis manhus ghadi me ye ladka mujhe mila tha aree kya kahuga thakuro se meri jaan to gyi ab

Me abhi bhi un_gadiyo ke piche tha woh ab sunsaan road ki taraf bhad rahi thi
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Kya hoga aage ab kya abhay bacha payega Avni ko
or kya hoga principal ke sath
Janne ke liye padhte rahe
bheed me aakela (abhay)
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Ise hosh me lao kya kar rhe ho jaldi kro agar thakuro ne hame dhund liya naa to jaan se hath dho baithege
rokey chillate hue bola

asal me rokey or uske admi mandir pahuch chuke the
rokey jaldi se cahta tha ki uski or avni ki shadi ho jaye taki cah kar bhi thakur use hath naa laga sake

Agle 10 mint me hi sab taiyariya puri ho chuki thi
pandit ji bhi samajh gye the ye mamla gadbad h par apni jaan kise pyaari nahi hoti

avni -(rote hue) rokey dekh mujhe chhod de me wada karti hu tujhse koi kuch nahi kahega teri jaan nhi lige plzzz mujhe jane de

avni roye jaa rahi thi ye woh ghamandi avni thakur nahi dikh rahi thi jo gussa naak par chadaye ghumti thi ye to koi dari hui ladki lag rahi thi jo bas rone ke alawa kuch nahi kar sakti thi

asal me avni or rani ghar ki 2 woh bigdi hui ladkiya thi jinhe shuru se bas ye dikhaya gya tha ki ye duniya pariyo ka mela h or iske raja unke baap or dada
unhone kabhi problem's dekhi hi nahi or agar kabhi thakur pariwar par musibat aayi bhi to inhe usse dur hi rakha gya rani or avni dono ko hi logo ko pareshan karne me bada maza aata tha
isiliye aaj jab avni musibat me thi to bas woh ro hi rahi thi

rokey - meri jaan tu meri fikar mat kar ek baar tujhse shadi karke tujhe chodlun fir thakur to kya unke purkhe bhi mujhe hath nahi laga payige



Location collage

aaaahhhh bachao hamne kuch nahi kiya aaaahhhh nhi nhi or mat maro

ye ek class room tha asal me jab thakuro ko pata chala ki unki ek beti collage behosh mili or dusri agwa ho gyi h to ranveer sanjay arav or dhananjay thakur sab pahle collage hi bhage police ke pass jane ka matlab nahi tha thakuro ke ek phone par hi puri shahar ki police apne sare kaam chod kar chal deti

jab sab collage pahuche to waha ke students arav ko bade gor se dekh rahe the kuch ke liye woh villain tha to kuch ke liye ideal

thakuro ko waha jake 5 mint nahi lage ye pata lagane me ki rani or avni ka jhagda kal hi rokey ke sath hua tha jisse unhe kisi naye ladke ne bachaya tha

zahir si baat h ayise time par sabka shaq rokey par hi gaya or bas shamat aayi rokey ke dost classmate padosi rishtedar yaha tak ke jis dukaan par rokey baith kar chai pita tha thakuro ne use bhi utha liya tha

fir shuru hua arav ka tandav usne belt uthai or jo mila jaise mila bas sutne laga

thakuro ke admi shehar me 4ro taraf khoj bin kar rahe the kuch rods or dukano se cctv ki phuteg cheq maar rahe the

Unhe abtak pata chal chuka tha ki rokey kis taraf gaya h

jab thakuro ko pata chala ki is_kand me rokey ka hath h or uska baap kon h to unhe laga isme chaudhary's ka bhi hath ho sakta h kyuki rokey ka baap chaudharyo ka admi tha

par unki soch par pani ferne kaa kaam khud shayaam Choudhary ne kiya rokey ke baap ko khud thakuro ke hawale karke sath hi satb puri chutt bhi dedi ki agar beti ke liye maarna bhi pade to maar dena

waise to rokey kaa baap police wala tha par yaha ka kanun hi 4 pariwar chala rahe the use bhi apni jaan ki bahut chinta hone lagi thi

is_sab ke bich ek or ayisa insaan tha jiski saas atki hui thi woh tha tinka chahdhary

Trin trin trin trin

tika jab se rokey or sabko phone kar raha tha likin koi uska phone pich hi nahi kar raha tha

hello

tinka - madarchod kaha mar gye the tum sab kab se phone kar raha hu

gopal - relax bhai relax yaha sab theek chal raha h par rokey or uske admi busy h or mujhe pata h tujhe avni thakur ko chodne ki jaldi h
Par ayise kamo me time lagta h

Tinka - maa chudaye Avni thakur agar apni or meri gardan bachana cahta h to shadi rok or ladki ko kuch mat hone dena

gopal hoshiyari ke mamle me kam nahi tha use samajhne me der nahi lagi ki agar uska sanki bhai apni or uski gardan ki fikar kar raha h to isme zarur uske dada or tau involve ho chuke hai

gopal gadi se utar ke mandir ki taraf bhaga ki tabhi..



me gadiyo ka picha kar raha tha ki meri gadi ke aage gay(cow) or bakriyo ka jhund aa gya unhe nikalne me 5 min lage mujhe gussa aa raha tha ayisa nahi tha ki mujhe avni ki koi parwah thi mere liye to woh bas ek zaruri mohra tha jiski abhi mujhe zarurat thi or iske bina mera khel bigad sakta tha

janwaro ka jhund gya to mene car bhagadi par aage jake dekha to 2 raste gye hue the mene sidhe raste ki taraf gadi bhagayi par 10 min baad hi mujhe lagne laga tha ki me galat raste par hu kyuki aage to dur dur tak kuch bhi nahi tha mene car back ki or is baar left wale raste par car bhagane laga

thodi der me hi mujhe ek mandir dikhne laga jiske aage gadiya khadi hui thi

(Waha thodi dur gopal ki car bhi thi jis par abhay ne dhiyaan nahi diya)

Ek car gopal se thodi dur mandir ke aage jakar ruki or
ppphhhaaattttt karke darwaza band hone ki awar aayi

Gopal - OOOOO teri ki ye kya bala h

Gopal dekh raha tha us car me se ek lambe baal wala ladka badi tezi se nikla or mandir ki taraf bhaga

Or

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh

2 ladke jo mandir ki sidhiyo ke pass hi khade the woh 20 , 30 sidhiyo se sidhe road par gire

Mere samne ab 4 ladke khade the or rokey mundap me baitha tha avni bhi uske sath baithe thi par mujhe dekhte hi woh or tez tez rone lagi

rokey - sale tera nasib kuch zada hi kharaab h jo apni mout ko dhundta hua khud hi chala aaya

abhay - (smile) meri mout to mujhe us duniya me bhi nahi mili thi tere baski baat nahi

Jab tak kisi ko meri baat ka matlab samajh aata tab tak

Aaahhhhhhh mene samne khade ladke ke pairo ke bich me kaske laat mari or woh wahi lamba lamba pad gya

use dekh kar baki 3no ladke meri taraf chale pahle ke hath me bet tha usne ghumaya or mene niche se nikal kar doge kar diya

or turant hi baki 2no ladko ki aankho me 2 2 ungliya ghusadi
meri ungliya un_dono ki aankho me ghus chuki thi unki aankho se khun bahne laga tha
mene undono ko colar se pakda or pahle wale ki taraf fek diya or woh 3no hi sidhiyo se niche girne lage

ye sab dekh kar pandit ji to behosh hi ho gye avni ko bhi saap hi sungh gya tha usne apne bhai ko 1 2 baar logo ki haddiya todte hue dekha tha uska bhai karate jaanta tha to avni ne jab bhi apne bhai ko kisi ki pitai karte hue dekha to woh hamesha hi bahut stylish or accha dikhta tha par ye kya tha

Ye to sarasar jungli_pan tha ye ladka aankho me ungliya ghusa raha tha avni ko ultiya jaisa ho raha tha par kahi naa kahi use ye sab accha bhi lag raha tha kyuki ye ladka 2 dino me dusri baat uske liye ladai kar raha tha

wahi rokey ki hawa kharaab ho chuki thi

Jab tak rokey koi baat karta tab tak woh hawa me tha or

Boom boom boom boom rokey ke 1 side ke lagbhag sabhi daat tut chuke the

unki naak or kano se khun nikalne laga tha
me abhi bhi use mare jaa raha tha mujhe rukna pada jab mujhe ahsas hua ki kisi ne mujhe piche se pakda hua h

avni - (rote hue)please use mat maro mar jayega

me - tumhe zada fikar ho rahi h to nahi maarta waise bhi pandit yahi h shadi me time nahi lagega

avni - (sisakte hue) woh nahi me nahi cahti ki tum jail jao
please chalo yaha se please

me avni ko lekar waha se nikal gaya

ek black car badi hi tezi se us mandir dur jaa rahi thi jisme ek ladka baitha muskura raha tha

gopal - accha hua usne mujhe nahi dekha warna mera bhi haal un logo jaisa hota

fir kuch soch kar

gopal -(man me ) hahahahahaha mujhe laga tha me apne maksad me kabhi kamyaab nahi ho pauga akhir kaar
ab aayega maza

30 min ke baad us mandir ke aage gadiya aake rukti h

ye thakur ke admi the inhe lead khud arav kar raha tha

jab arav or baki admi andar jake dekhte h to unhe kuch nahi dekhta sivaye khun ke dhabbo ke

admi - sir lagta h yaha ladai hui h

arav - hmmm

arav phone nikaalta h or ranveer ko phone karta h

is_waqt ranveer sanjay or dhananjay badi hi besabri se kisi bhi khabar ka intzaar kar rahe the

waise to 2no bhaiyo me koi khass baat chet nahi thi par aaj beti kaa maamla tha to dono hi sath the
ranveer ka phone baja

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav- ........................

ranveer - kya pure shehar me alart ghoshit kardo chahe kuch bhi ho jaye avni ko kuch nahi hona chaheye sabhi hospital chaan maro

hospital ka naam aate hi sanjay or dhananjay ki saas atak gyi dhananjay kya hua ranveer hamari poti theek to h

ranveer arav ki kahi hui baat batata h

dhananjay - hmmm shant raho ranveer waha khun ka matlab h ki kisi ne avni ko rokey se chudaya h ab dekhna ye h ki use kya chaheye

ranveer - kaise shant rahu papa aapko pata h naa avni ko agar galti se bhi kuch hua to me raja sahab ko kya jawaab duga or ye bhi ho sakta h ki iske baad raja sahab arav or rajkumari ka rishta bhi tod de

ye sun kar waha baithe sanjay ki muthi kas gyi
kitna ghatiya h uska bhai yaha uski ikloti beti ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta h or uske bhai ko abhi bhi apne bete ke rishte ki padi h

arav ne apne admiyo ko phone lagaya

arav - dubara cctv ki futeg cheq kro or mujhe btao ab kon konsi gadiya gyi h or is baar raasta sahi hi batana warna.....

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aaj ke liye itna hi
(Kaha tha naa raat ko milte h)
Ab aage kya hone wala h
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Recap - arav - dubara cctv ki futeg cheq kro or mujhe btao ab kon konsi gadiya gyi h or is baar raasta sahi hi batana warna.....

Location Thakur's haveli

Yaha matam ka mahol tha
kamini(chachi) or savitri(dadi)
ka haal to sabse bura tha Avni ek ki beti thi to dusri ki usme jaan basti thi
divya bichari sabko sambhal rahi thi use bhi apni bahan ki chinta thi

rani sadme me bhi use bachpan se hi lagta tha ki koi bhi unhe chu nahi sakta unke pass paisa or tagat dono thi unka koi kya hi bigad sakta tha parrr aaj uske yakin ko bhi dhakka laga tha

ramiya ko jab ye khabar lagi to woh bhi apni sasural se bhagi chali aayi

ramiya - maa aap royiye mat ham apni puri tagat laga dige par hamari avni ko kuch nahi hone dige zarurat padi to me khud mohit (pati) or jeth ji se baat karke rathod khandaan ki puri tagat laga dungi par hamari avni ko kuch nahi hone dugi

Divya - (muskaan ke sath) haa bua sach me rathod's agar madat kre to Avni mil hi jayegi or waise bhi aap to apne sasural walo ko manana acchi tarha se jaanti hi hogi na

divya ne ek halki hasi ke sath kaha
ye sun kar ramiya ne pahle to divya ko gusse se dekha likin jab usne divya ko gor se dekha to use ayisa kuch nazar aaya jise dekh kar ramiya ki gardan jhuk gyi or uski aankho me aasu aa gye

ramiya ko is_waqt lag raha tha ki woh mar jaye to accha h
Ek waqt tha jab ye bua or bhatiji ek dusre ki jaan hua karti thi divya bachpan se hi ramiya ki chahiti rahi thi
par kahte h naa waqt se sath sab badal jata h.........................

Th thank you_____ -avni haktale hue boli

par mene uski baat ka koi jawab nahi diya ham dono abhi car me the ise bachana mere liye zaruri tha warna mujhe iski koi khass parwah thi nahi
par iske sath rah kar uski bak bak sunna mera gussa bhadatha tha

or iske sath hi nahi thakuro ki baatin unke cahre uske naam sabse nafrat thi mujhe

avni - mujhe bachane ke liye shukriya

me - thodi der chup baitho ham collage pahuchne hi wale h fir 100 200 thank you latter likh kar ek sath mujhe de dena ab apna apna muh mat kholna

avni collage ka naam sun kar hi dar gyi
akhir itna bada hadsa uske sath collage me hi to hua tha

avni - nhi nhi please collage nhi

Me - to kya btao yaha kaha utarna h

avni - kya tum mujhe mere ghar drop kar sakte ho

Mene ek baar use ghura fir haa me gardan hila di
Avni ka ghar matlab thakuro ki haveli hamari haveli meri haveli
agar sabne mujhe pyaar diya hota to me kuch ayise hi shabd ka istmaal kar raha hota

Parrr un_logo ne mujhe diya kya sirf or sirf nafrat zillat or zindgi bhar ka akelapan
or ye to kudrat ka niyam h jo jaisa bota h waisa hi pata h

par mere niyam kudrat se thode alag the me unhe usse kai guna zada loutane wala tha

par aaj nahi to kal mujhe unke samne to jana hi tha isliye mene gadi modli

Location haveli....

ab tak avni ka kuch pata nahi chala tha par arav or uske admiyo ko rokey or uske dosto ki location ka kuch hint mila tha woh sab us taraf gye hue the
Baki ghar ke sare mard wapas aa chuke the

sanjay - kamini tum fikr mat kro hamari beti wapas aa jayegi chahe mujhe uske liye kuch bhi kyu naa karna pade

ye sun kar kamini jo ro ro kar apna bura haal kar chuki thi sanjay ke gale lag gyi

sanjay ke liye ye kisi shok se kam nahi tha kitne hi saal bit chuke the jab uski biwi uske gale lagi ho woh bhi jaanta tha ki apni biwi or apne bich ki duri ka karan woh khud tha par aaj use sach me sukun mil raha tha
ki tabhi

trin trin trin trin

phone ki ghanti baji to divya ne phone uthaya

divya - hello

samne se - maidam ..............

divya - kya

Divya ki awaz itni tez thi ke sab use hi dekhne lage

dhananjay - kya hua

divya - woh dadu gateman ka phone tha woh bol raha tha ki

isse aage woh kuch bolti ki
mummyyyyyy

ek roti hui awaz ne sabko chauka diya kyuki ye awaz avni ki thi jo rote or bhagte hue andar hi aa rahi thi woh aake sidha apni maa ke gale lag gyi

sab khush or shok dono hi the
arav abhi thodi der pahle hi to nikla tha itni jaldi kaise avni ko bacha kar le_aaya

Dadi - (rote hue) kaha chali gyi thi beta tujhe pata h naaa teri budhi dadi ki jaan basti h tum 3no me

savitri ne divya ko ignore hi maar diya tha

khair sabko unka Bharat milap karne me hi 5 mint lag gye the

ranveer - Avni kyu uthaya tha tumhe us rokey ne or arav ne kya kiya uske sath

Ye sun kar avni thodi to chouki fir usne waha jo bhi hua sab kuch bata diya
siwaye aankh me ungli ghusane wali baat ke (thoda desturbing ho jata naa)
ab heraan hone ki bari thakuro ki thi
kisi ne unki beti ki jaan bachai woh bhi 6 ladko se aakele ladke

waise to unhe pata tha ki Arav bhi aakele hi Kai ladko se lad sakta h par kisi or ko apne bete ki barabari karte dekh ranveer ko bilkul bhi accha nahi lag raha tha

ranveer - haa haa thik h thik h sirf 6 se ladke koi teer nahi mara usne mera arav bhi kaiyo se aakele bhid sakta h

sanjay - (chid kar) par yaha baat ladne ki nahi meri beti ki jaan bachane ki ho rahi h
Or sach yahi h ki meri beti ki jaan us ladke ne bachai h naa ki
aap ke bete ne BHAIYA....

sanjay ki baaton me ek tanz tha jise sabhi ne mahsus kiya

aaj se pahle kabhi bhi arav ke liye ayise shabd is family me use nahi hue the khas kar bado ke bich ek tarha se arav thakur pariwaar ka chiraag tha

baat kisi or hi taraf jate dekh dhananjay ko bich me aana pada

dada - murkho yaha kisi ne meri poti ki jaan bachai h or use shukriya kahne ki bajay tum log bakwas me lage ho jao or use samman ke sath andar lekar aao

dhananjay ki baat sun kar sabko dhiyaan aaya ki jis ladke me avni ki jaan bachai woh abhi tak bahar hi h or yaha sab uski aao bhagat karne ki bajaye bahas me lage hue h

sab log jaldi se bahar pahuche

sannata waha koi car nahi thi sabne avni ki taraf dekha woh bhi heran thi

dusri taraf me apni car me tha

me apne gusse pe cantrol karne ki koshish kar raha tha
ayisa nhi tha ki me un_logo ke samne nahi jaana cahta tha par un_sab ki awaz se hi me apna kabu kho baitha tha

nhi nhi nhi abhi waqt nahi aaya h itni jaldi nahi
sabar karo thakuro

ki tabhi trin trin
mera phone baja

mene dekha ki ye call suleman ka h

me - hello

suleman - bhai ek dhamakedar khabar hath lagi h

me - haa bol

suleman - .....................................................

me - hmmmm

or mene phone rakh diya ab mere honton par ek muskaan thi
Ye hui naa baat
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aaj ke liye itna hi
akhir konsi khabar hogi
or aage kya hone wala h
koi sujhav





Bohot bada jhatka Diya hai thakuro ko abhay ne jo chala gaya Bina mile.
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Location hospital

jis waqt avni apne pariwar walo se mil rahi thi to dusri taraf arav bhi hospital pahuch chuka tha
Use pata chala tha ki rokey or uske dost admit h

Unme se 4 ki halat bolne wali nahi thi rokey serious tha
Unme se bas 2 hi the jinhe halki fulki chot aayi thi
(Jinhe road par feka tha)

Thodi der baad arav doctor ke cabin me baitha tha

arav - doctor kab tak woh kamina theek ho jayega me use apne hatho se saza dena cahta hu
Use batana cahta hu thakur parwar pat hath dalne walo ka kya anjam hota h

doctor - sir aap use saza to tab doge jab woh zinda bachega or agar bach bhi gya to zindgi bhar naa to bol jayega naa kuch soch samajh payega

arav sawal bhari nazro se doctor ko dekhne laga

doctor - isme naa samajhne wali konsi baat h use brain hamreg hua h skull me multiple fackture h bachna mushkil h
Ab isse buri kya halat kroge aap

arav kuch bolta usse pahle hi uska mobile bajne laga phone ghar se tha
Jab arav ko pata chala ki Avni lout aayi h to usne waha kuch or kahna sahi nahi samjha


3 din baad

sanjay apne office me baitha tha or uske samne ek jawan ladka baitha hua tha

sanjay - to abhi kya cahte h aap

me - bas aapki madat karna

sanjay - or aapse kisne kaha ki mujhe aapki madat chaheye

me - un 40 caror ne jinhe aapne chaudhary's se liya h

sanjay ye sun kar heran ho gya tha
kisi ko kaise un 40 caror ke bare me pata ho sakta h jiske bare me usne kisi ko kuch nahi bataya
or chaudhay ke sath usne
non - disclosure agreement bhi to sine kiya tha (is agreement ke hisaab se 2 party's ke bich hui baat kisi 3re ko kahne par ek dusre par case kiya jaa sakta h)

sanjay - tumhe is bare me kaise pata chala kya chaudharys ne bataya me unhe choduga nahi

ME - relax mr sanjay relax aap dono ne hi agreement nhi toda h
par hame to aapki khabar rakhni hi padti h akhir hamare mall par hi to kaam kar rahe h aap

sanjay - choukte hue kya likin woh tender to hame verma group of institutions ne diya tha
to kya tum Mr verma ke bete.....

me - apni soch ke ghode bhagana band kro mene woh mall wala project jispar tum kaam kar rahe ho use takeover kar liya h ab uska malik me hu
or mujhe pata karna hi padta ki mere liye kaam karne wale kisi mushkil me to nahi

sanjay ko ye tum kar pasine hi aa gye use dar tha ki kahi uski compeny ko dept me dekh kar he contact usse cheen naa liya jaye

me - aap fikr mat ki_jiye sanjay ji ham aapko 40 caror de dige

Sanjay - aap bura naa mane to kya me aapse ek baat puch sakta hu

me - haa boliye

sanjay - aap meri help kyu karna chahege jabki aap meri compeny ko karz me dikha kar bade hi aram se ye tender kisi or ko de sakte h to

me - aapke profit ka 40% manzur h to mujhe ayisa karne ki zarurat nahi padegi

ab sanjay ko asli majra samajh aaya tha

busness ki duniya me koi bhi kisi par fevar nahi karta sabko apna faida chaheye hota h
or agar koi bina matlab tumhari help kar raha h to maanlo ya to woh tumhara bahut karibi h ya use kuch ayisa chaheye jo dene me tumhari fatne wali h

Par ab sab clear tha samne wala uska 40 caror ka karz to de raha tha par badle me uske profit me se 40% bhi mang raha tha jiska sidha sa matlab tha 40 caror kyuki sanjay ko mall me se 100 caror ka hi profit hone wala tha
matlab saaf tha samne wala 1 saal me 40 caror deke 80 caror mangne wala tha

sanjay ne bahut der socha fir usne haa kardi
sanjay ke liye ab paisa zaruri nahi tha uski izzat or uski beti zaruri thi
chaudhary usse 40 caror ke badle uski beti cahte the

unke mukable to ye ladka use bahut hi acchi deal de raha tha

Me chacha ke office se nikla or sidha pahucha apne jungle wale ghar
abhi waha 4ro taraf chandan ki khusboo aa rahi thi

me - kya baat h 2 din me 2 saal jitni growth earth par slow hi sahi par bhad to rahe h

Ab jaante h in bite 3 dino me hua kya kya

(Short flashback)

mujhe sulemaan ne chaudhary's or chacha ke bich hui deal ke bare me bata diya tha

mere liye ye ek khushkhabri ki tarha thi mujhe ab thakur pariwar me ghusne ke liye ek bahut bada loop hole mil chuka tha
or ab mujhe avni ki bhi zarurat nahi rahi thi

suleman ke baad mujhe broker ka call aaya

meri passand ki hui property ke papers taiyaar ho chuke the mene pahle woh kaam niptaya
or uske baad mene dubara us sunhaar se bol ke paise maga liye

mene Verma's ko us mall ka dubbe offer kiya to unhone bhi der nahi ki

ab ek kaam bacha tha or woh tha chandan ke beej lagana

mene beejo ko jameen par feka par koi asar nhi hua

mere liye ye ek jhatka tha kyuki inhe zameen ke contact me aate hi ped ban jana chaheye tha par ayisa hua nahi

mene lagbhag 1 ghante tak wait kiya par koi farak naa padte der andar jake so gya

raat ko barish hui

subha jab me uth kar bahar aaya to dekh kar khushi se uchal pada
jo beej mene kal dale the woh raat bhar me mere ghutne barabar ho gye the matlab sidha sidha bola gye to 1 saal ki groth 1 din me

ab mujhe or bhi kaam dekhne the khass kar computer or internet ka sahi se istmaal karna kyuki me jaha padha tha waha tab tak internet nahi aaya tha
bhale hi me phada likha tha or touch screen par call wall pick kr liya karta tha par laptop or computer se abhi mera dur dur tak rishta nahi pada tha

jaha in 3 dino me abhay ki life me ye sab hua wahi kuch or log bhi the jinki zindgi thodi uper niche ho gyi thi

ek taraf avni thi jo ab collage ke naam se bhi darne lagi thi

rani - dekh chal naa yaar 3 din ho gye h collage gye hue kab tak yaha chupi rahegi

avni - me nahi jane wali kahi utha kar to mujhe le gye the naa tujhe kya pata meri kya halat thi us waqt

rani - accha theek h naa ab to mar gya naa woh ab kis se dar rahi h

ji haa rokey ne kuch hi ghante baad dum tod diya tha waise to police wale ke bete ke marne par hangama hona chaheye tha par kyuki mamla thakuro ki beti kaa tha to kisi ne ye janne ki koshish bhi nahi ki ke kisne unhe maara

logo kaa manna tha ki ye kaam arav thakur ka ho sakta h

or ranveer ka manna tha ki woh is case ko daba kar us ladke yani abhay kaa jo ahsaan unpar h use uttar rahe h

halaki ghar me bahut log ayise bhi the jo us_ladke se mil kar uska shukriya aada karna chahate the
par avni ne unhe kuch bataya nhi or to or uske bare me pata lagane ke liye bhi mana kar diya tha

woh nahi cahti thi use bachane wale ko koi bhi pareshani ho

rani bahar jao mujhe avni se baat karni h divya jo sup leke room me aayi thi usne rani ko bahar jane ko kaha

rani - di bura nahi manna par avni meri besty h bachpan se agar me use nahi mana payi pura ghar use nahi mana paya to aapko kya lagta h woh aapki baat manegi jise waise hi ghar me koi passand nahi karta

divya - (gusse se ghurte hue) mene kaha jao warna tum mujhe acchi tarha se jaanti ho

rani waha se muh bana kar chali gyi divya ki bahne ab uske sath aksar hi batamizi kar jaya karti thi
par divya ko unpar gussa nhi taras hi aata tha

woh acchi tarha se jaanti thi uski bahno me abhi bhi bachpana h or woh apni dadi ke sikhaye me usse ayise baat karne lagi h

Divya ko pata tha uska or uski bahno ka rishta ek sode ke liye kar diya gya h
or woh cah kar bhi apni or apni bahno ki madat nahi karpaa rahi h

divya jake avni ke barabar baith jati h

divya - me jaanti hu tum bhi mujhe baki sabki tarha naa_passand karti ho tumhe bhi lagta h me selfish hoke apne bare me soch rahi hu naki family ke bare me
par abhi me yaha tumhare liye baithe hu

tum kab tak yaha baithe rahne wali ho is_room me
i know tumhare sath jo hua woh daravna tha par kya tum apni puri life ayise hi jine wali ho ek room ke andar

avni - haa me nahi jaane wali bahar

divya - thik hai mat niklo me to isliye bol rahi thi kyuki hamare pass sirf 2 mahine hi bache h
Fir tum apna true love kaise dhundogi ab mere pass to option h nahi tum hi dhundne ki koshish krlo

Or tumne to use bhi sahi se thanks nahi kaha jisne tumhe bachaya

Waise to divya jaanti thi ki uski aadhi baatin juth or aadhi andaza thi
par apni bhen ka hosla bhadane ke liye itna to kar hi sakti thi
ye bol kar divya jane lagi

avni - woh to mujhe baat bhi karna passand nahi karta

ye sun kar divya ke hontho par muskaan tair gyi

divya - koshish karti raho kya pata safal ho jayo dekho me to itne salo se kar hi rahi hu.....


kisi dusri jagha

ek ladki or ladka pasine se tar batar bistar par pade hue the or dono hi bina kapdo ke the dekh kar hi koi bhi bata sakta tha ki yaha thodi der pahle ghamasaan chudai hui hogi

ladki ladke ke lund ke sahla rahi thi

ladki - kya hua abhi se thak gya abhi to mera or man h

ladka - sahi kitni badi randi h 2 baar chod chuka hu ab tagat nahi h mujhme

ladki - tujhe shilajeet khana chaheye ab tagat nhi bachi tujhme

ladka - mera kaam karde usme bahut tagat h kam se kam 3 round krega bade aram se

ladki - kya sach_me woh waisa hi hai jaisa tu bata raha h

ladka - haa ksam se tujhse juth bola h kabhi

ladki - likin tera kaam karne me mera kya faida usse to tera faida hoga naa

ladka - hahahahaha sali agar tune mera kaam kar diya to tujhe bhi to tagde lund milige or sath me jo mujhe milega usme tera bhi to hissa hoga naa

ladki - theek h mai taiyaar hu

ladka - (man_me) ab chaal chalne ki bari meri h
ab tum sab mera vaar dekhna
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aaj ke liye itna hi
waise kya lagta h aage kya hone wala h
comment like or btao kya khayaal h
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Divya ki baat sun kar avni ko himmat milti h or woh collage jane lagti h par ab use
collage me utna interest nhi tha jitna mujhse milne me par ab mene collage jana chhod diya tha mera pura focus alag alag chezon ko seekhne me tha
or sath hi sath me sanjay ke sath mil kar busness par dhiyaan de raha tha
halaki paisa kabhi bhi mera goal nahi tha par aage bina paise ke koi kaam nhi hona tha

me computer chalana theek thak seekh gya tha is sab kuch din lag jate h

ab mujhe kaam karne ke liye ek laptop ki zarurat thi to me woh khareedne gya tha
Ye apple ki shop type thi mene waha jake laptop liya or bahar aa gya

me bahar aake parking me apni car lene jaa raha tha waha thoda sunsaan saa mahol tha ki tabhi

oye jo bhi tere pass h sab chupchap hame dede
ye bolte hue 4 ladke mere samne aa gye unke hath me chaku the

Me - chupchap nikal_lo isi tumhari bhalai h

G1 - nhi to kya kar lega tu

me - mene kaha chale jao warna pure sahar me kuttte ki tarha dauda dauda kar maruga

or ye bol kar me unki side se nikalta hua apni car ki taraf jane laga ki tabhi unmese 1 jo unka boss type tha usne chaku chala diya
or mere hath par cut lag gya

mere hath se khun bahne laga
ab mera mood kharaab ho gya tha

me palta or mere pass wale ki naak par punch maar diya

turant hi baki 2 aaye mene apne hath me baki ke 2no ke hath fasaye or chhhhhaaatt chaaat chhhatt chaaat unke hatho ki haddi 2 2 jagha se tut chuki thi

ab meri nazar us par thi jisne mujhpar chaku chalaya tha or uski fat ke 4 ho gyi thi

G1 - so so so sorry bhai sorry mujhe mujhe maaf karde galti ho gyi

uske hath me chaku tha or me nihatta fir bhi woh kaap raha tha

me - bhag

or bol kar apni car jo thodi hi dur thi usme saman rakhne laga

jab me piche palta to woh 15 20 fut dur tak bhag chuka tha


Woh apni full speed se bhag raha tha woh parking ke bahar pahucha hi tha ki
booom
uski pith par ek kas ke thappad pada or woh kuch duri tak zameen me ghista hua gya

use halki fulki chote aayi thi mene use khada kiya or chhhaattt chhhaattt
uske hothon se khun nikalne laga tha uske cahre par Sujan aa gyi thi

G1 - bhai mujhe maaf kardo aaj ke baad ayisi galti nahi
me pair padta hu aapke

me - bhag

g1 - (herani se dekhta hua) nhi nhi nhi bhai ab nhi

me - 10 tak count bhag gya to chhod duga
1____ 2______3____4

g1 - fir se bhaga

me - 9_____10

Mene fir se uske piche daur lagadi mera man abhi nahi bhara tha

G1 ek bazar me ghus gya tha yaha dono taraf market type thi dukaane lagi hui thi logo ki bhi acchi khadi bheed bhi

Mene fir use daboch liya is_baar ham bazar ke bicho bich the

G1 - (rote hue) nhi nhi bhai mujhe chhod de bhai tujhe teri maa ki ksam h bhai chhod de

Or ye ki G1 ne dusri galti maa ksam de kar mujhe us_maa ki ksam di jisse mujhe mujhe kitni nafrat h me khud nahi jaanta

Ye woh waqt tha jab me out of control ho gya tha mene apni belt nikali or saaaaatttt satakkk ssaattaaaakkk

ahhhh bachao koi to bachao
uski puri pith chil gyi thi usme se khun bahne laga tha par mere dil ko sukun nahi mil raha tha

Waha bheed jama ho gyi thi sab log use daya bhari nazro se dekh rahe the
par mujhse koi kuch kahe itna unme guda nhi tha

Me use or maarna cahta tha mere andar ka jaanwar aaj sach me nikal ke bahar aaya tha
avni ko bachana meri majburi thi
par mujhpar waar karne wale ko chhod dun me ab itna bhi accha nahi tha

mera duniya me bas ek pyaar tha or bas ek hi rishtedar tha woh tha me khud
Or mujhpar waar karne kaa matlab tha apni mout ke karib jana

Abhi mera kuch or karne kaa mood banta ki tabhi
thhhaaadddd koi bhari sa matti ka bartan mere sar par lagta h
ye waar jordaar tha me 2 kadam aage pahuch gya

me - ( gusse me ) iski to

mene piche palat ke dekha to is_baar shok hone ki bari meri thi
kyuki samne koi ladka nahi ek ladki thi

Ladki - ke koi janwar se ke tu bhare bazar me tamasha kar ria se zada zor aan laag ra naa to chal mere sath akhade me nikalu teri hekdi

woh thodi hindi thodi Hariyanvi me boli

(Agar mere suleman ke dikhaye har photo ko sahi se dekha hota yaa ye mujhe kuch din pahle mili hoti to shayaad me ise pahchan leta ki ye vani chaudhary h)

mere sar me achanak se hi chamak si uthi mene hath laga kar dekha to sar se khun bah raha tha

waise to agar meri power puri tarha se wapas aa gyi hoti to naa hi chaku ka ghav kuch ghanto se zada rahta or naa hi kisi matti ke bhari bartan se mera sar fatne wala tha
par abhi naa to mere pass practice karne ka time tha or naa hi mera kuch din ayisa kuch bhi karne ka plan

mene ladki ki taraf gusse bhari nazro se dekha or fir me wapas apni car ki taraf jane laga

Par aaj lagta tha ki meri kismat kuch alag ki mood me thi kyuki mere 4 6 kadam chalte hi piche se ek awaz ne mujhse rukne par majboor kar diya

kisne ye halat ki mere admi ki btao warna tum sab anjaam bhugatne ke liye taiyaar ho jao

mene piche mud ke dekha to ye 5 6 admiyo ki toli thi or bich me koi 40 45 saal ka admi khada hua tha jo ki boss type dikh raha tha

woh ladki bhi hairaan thi ki ye kya ho raha h
use laga tha ki usne kisi bichare ko bachaya h par ab use samajh nhi aa raha tha ki yaha kon bichara h

boss ne g1 ki taraf dekha woh ghayal or adhmari halat me bhi dar se kaap raha tha woh behosh to nhi hua tha par woh meri taraf ishara bhi nahi kar raha tha

itni hi der me gundo me bich se ek chapti naak wala nikla ye wahi tha jo G1 ke group se tha
Or usne meri taraf ungli kardi

mujhe bhi koi farak nahi padta tha isi liye bina ek shabd bole chal diya unki taraf

Woh sab bhi apne sathiyo ki halat dekh chuke the is_liye ek ek karke nahi sath hi aaye

mene bhagte hue hi pass khadi cycle ek hath se utha kar unke uper feki jisse 4 gir gye 2 jab tak mujh tak pahuche kaat kaaaat gardan par ek or dono behosh

or fir to jaise waha hadiyo or cheekho ke bich compitation hi chid gya ek haddi tutne ki awaz hoti to dusri kisi ke chekhne ki

ab gundo ki band bajane baad mene boss ki taraf dekha to meri bhi hawa tight ho gyi

Boss - aage mat bhadna warna ise maar duga aage mat bhadna

me wahi ruk gya usne usi ladki ke gale par chaku rakha hua tha jo thodi der pahle tak mujhse 2 2 hath karne ko bekarar thi

par ajib baat ye thi ki us ladki ki aankho me mujhe zara bhi dar nazar nahi aa raha tha ulta woh to mujhe alag hi nazro se dekh rahi thi

me 2 kadam aage bhada

boss- aage nhi aaana aage nhi aana bol raha hu kaat duga me ise

me fir 2 kadam aage bhada

boss - (haklate hue) dekh aage mat aa me bol raha hu

ab hamara fasla 4 5 kadam ka hi bacha tha
Me fir bhadne laga

boss - tu nahi manega naa to yeh le

or bolte hue chaku chalane laga

par tab tak mene tezi se aage bhad_ke chaku pakad liya
chaku tez tha isi liye hath se fisal gya
jisse us_ladki ke gale ko to kuch nhi hua par mere hath me zarur gahra cut lag gya

ab me boss ka khopda fodna cahta tha ki tabhi ttttthhhhhhaaapppp kaaatttttt kaaaaattttt aaaaahhhhhhhhh
pahle boss ke girne ki awaz aayi or fir haddi 2 jagha se tutne ki

hua ye ki jaise hi usne mera hath kaata ladki ne kandhe se boss ma hath pakda or jhuk_ke use aage khicha jisse woh aage gira
or fir uske hath ko mod diya boss kaa hath kam se kam 2 jagha se tuta tha........



wahi dusri taraf

sir please mujhe bataiye ab to itne din ho gye h....

......... - dekho tum thakur priwar se ho iska matlab ye nahi ki tum daily yaha mera dimag kharaab karne aa sakti ho
me chahu to tume rasticate bhi kar sakta hu

Ye the hamare manniya principal sahab jo kisi bhi tarha avni naam ki musibat ko taal_na cahte the
jo abhay ke jane ke baad se hi principal sahab ko roz pareshan karne aa dhamakti thi

avni ko jabse divya ne himmat di thi tab se use bas ek hi dhun sawar or woh thi us ladke se milne ki jisne use 2 baar bachaya tha

avni ke dil or dimag par ab woh puri tarha cha chuka tha use bas usse milna tha
par jabse woh wapas aayi thi tab se hi woh us ladke ko dekhna cahti thi par woh ladka tha ki collage aata hi nahi tha

pahle to avni ko thodi ghabrahat hui ki kahi us ladke ko kisi ne kuch kar to nahi diya
likin fir use us_ladke ki woh fight yaad aayi jisme woh kuch hi seconds me itne ladko ko pit raha tha

ab avni ko usse milne ka bas ek hi rasta nazar aa raha tha or woh tha us ladke ka address

Pahle to avni ne College ke teacher se leke peon tak sab se pucha likin jab use

tab bhi bhi us ladke ka address nhi mila to woh pahuchi principal ke pass

pahle to principal avni ko dekhke khush ho gya
Kise hone wale raja ki bhen ke sath acche relation nahi chaheye hoge
par jaise hi avni ne mere bare me pucha principal ki to hawa hi nikal gyi

waise to avni ko mera naam tak nahi pata tha
kyuki mene kabhi use bataya nahi par mera huliya hi ayisa h ki andha bhi sunke bata deta

pahle to principal ne use naa samajh aane ka bolke 2 din taal diya fir rules ke naam par

likin ab to avni uski naak me dum krne lagi thi use koi bhi information chaheye thi us_ladke ki naam pata number girlfriend

par bichara principal bhi kaha se batata use to khud mere bare m bas itna hi pata tha ki mera naam abhi h or ye to woh pahle hi avni ko bata chuka tha

akhir_kaar avni ko aaj bhi haar manni hi padi or woh bahar aa gyi


to aaj bhi khali hath

ye awaz thi rani ki jo bilkul bhi avni or uske haal hi ke kiye bartav se bahut zada naa_khush thi

uski bhen or bachpan ki best friend ek ladke ke liye pagal ho chuki thi

naa woh padhai me dhiyaan de rahi thi or naa hi agle kuch dino me hone wali party ki taiyariyo me

woh to bas us_ladke ko dhundne ke chakkar me bavli ho chuki thi

avni - nhi aaj bhi nahi mila
par me uska pata to puch kar hi rahugi ayise nahi to waise hi sahi par principal ko batana to padega hi.......
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ab kya karne wali h Avni or abhay kya dekh kar heran h
kya avni apne maksad me kaamyab ho payegi
aaj ke liye itna hi
raat ko likha h thodisi nind me to writting mistake ho to maaf karna
or naa hi ye story copy paste h

aaj ke liye itna hi
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