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राइटर रोज ऑनलाइन आता है, लेकिन एक कमेंट भी उससे नही लिखा जाता, ऐसे कहानी याद भी किसे रहेगी, फिर २ ४ महीने बाद नींद से जागेगा और २ ३ अपडेट दे कर फिर सो जायेगा।
Lagta Ye forum hi copy paste forum hai her writer alag alag forum ki story ko is site par copy paste kar rahe aur jab udhar update nahi aata ya story band kar dete hai to idhar bhi update nhi dete aur na comment ka jawab dete ki update kab dega
 

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(Abhi tak aapne dekha ki sanjay ke sath kya kya hua ab zara waqt ko thoda piche_ le chalte hai or dekhte h ki sanjay ke pass se jane ke baad abhay ke sath kya kya hua)

To chacha ke pass se aane ke baad mene ek round jungle wale ghar par mara or fir flat par aa gya
ab mere pass karne ko kuch tha nahi or uper se subha subha vani ne mujhe jaldi jaga diya tha to lette hi mujhe nind aa gyi mujhe nahi pata ki me kab tak sota raha tha likin jab me utha to raat ho chuki thi
or mere pet me chuhe daud rahe the

mene bina time dekhe hi chabhi uthai or chal diya hotel khana khane (likin mujhe jaldi hi ahsaas ho gya ki me late ho chuka hu kyuki ****** city ki rods normal raat ke mukable zada shant thi mere time dekha to pata chala 11.30 ho rahe the

to mene car ko highway ki taraf le_liya kyuki ek dhabe hi hai jo puri raat khule rahte hai

mene ek dhabe par khana khaya or is_sab me mujhe raat 1 baj gya

ab raat ke 1 bje rods sunsan thi meri car ek ayise raste par thi jo waise hi khali rahta tha
me apni speed se chal raha tha ki tabhi mene dekha ki road par meri car se thodi dur 4 ladke jinke hath me chaku hai woh 1 ladke ko gher kar khade hai or woh ladka road par ghutno ke bal baitha hua hai

g1 - bahut bhaag liya petar bahut baag liya tujhe boss se panga lene ki kimat to chukani hi padegi

petar - apun ko to yakin_ich nahi horela boss apun ko marne ke waste 4 4 log ko bheja h

gunda 2 - kaiko iski mach mach sunne ka bidu maar ke khatm kar naa isko

Gunda 3 - maaf karna Peter par tune galat kiya apan log ko apni aukaat malum honi chaheye

or ye bol kar gunda 3 petar ki taraf badh jata h

petar - apun ko maar doge kya abe apun tum log ke sath kaam karta tha
abyy apne baad apni item kaa khiyaal kon rakhega

par lagta tha jaise petar ki baaton ka unsab par koi asar hi nahi ho raha tha
petar ko bhi kahi naa kahi pata tha ki uska waqt aa hi gya h usne bhi apni aankhain band karli

gunda_3 ne chaku nikaala or apna hath uper ki taraf utha diya taki tezi se waar kar sake

ki tabi peep peep peeep peeep

Jaise hi gundo ne apne itne pass se car ka horn suna to pahle to woh thoda dar gye likin jab unhone us car ki taraf nazar ghumai to unhone dekha

ki ek car jo unse thodi hi dur khadi h or baar baar unke unpar dipper maar rahi h
Or to or car wale ne car ke andar ki light bhi jala rakhi h jis wajha se unhe saaf saaf dikh raha tha ki us_car me sirf ek ladka baitha hua h
jo andar baith kar unhe ayise expression de raha tha jaise woh use bore kar rahe ho

g3 - ( abhay ko dekhte hue ) bhai ab kya kre isne to hame dekh liya

g1 - boss ne saaf saaf kaha tha is_kaam ko karte waqt koi bhi sabut yaa gawha mat chodna

pahle iska hi game baja

or G1 ki baat sunte hi g3 or g4 meri taraf bhagne lage
waise to mera inse kuch lena dena nahi tha par sala rasta rok ke time waste kon karta h

me - (man me ) ufffff ye duniya ek sidhe sadhe insaan ko shanti se ghar bhi nahi jane degi


Woh log meri taraf badh rahe the to me bhi car se bahar aa gya
mujhe unke irade samajh aa rahe the
or jaise hi g3 or g4 meri range me aaye

booom kaattttt

(mere pahle g4 ke muh par laat maar di
or g3 ke kuch samajhne se pahle hi uska ek hath bhi tut chuka tha)

g4 jab tak laat se sambhalta tab tak use ek zor ki laat apni chhati me lagti mahsus hui or woh dur fik gya

me - mera rasta chhod do baki tum jo kro mujhe usse matlab nahi h tum log.......

petar - sambhalkeee...

meri baat khatm hone se pahle hi petar zor se chikha or me turant hi apni jagha se hat gya or mere hatte hi us_jagha se ek chaku guzra jo ki g3 ke hath me tha

or bas mujhe uksane ke liye itna hi kafi tha
mene g3 ki gardan pakdi kaaatttt karke ghuma_di

or 2 min baad waha 4 log pade the jinme se 3 ki halat kisi pite hue kutte jaisi thi or g3 ka to batane ki zarurat hi nahi h woh
H se tha ho chuka tha

or petar muh fade ye sab dekh raha tha

Mene apna kaam khatm kiya or car ki taraf jane laga

bosss bosss apun ko bhi sath lelo - kahta hua petar sidha meri car me baith gya

me - utar

petar - kya bhai apun ko bhi sath lelo naa

Mene bina kuch kahe car chaladi asal me to petar ne bhi mujhe chaku lagne se bachaya tha

petar - bhai aap to kya lokhand (loha) mafik ho kya jabar lade bhai tum

petar - waise bhai apun ka naam petar h or aapka

me - apna muh band rakh

or iske baad petar kuch nahi bola or ham flat tak aa gye

petar - bhai kya ghar h apun log kaa ek dum mast

me - mera ghar

petar - kya bhai apun bhi to aapka hi h naa

Mene isse baat karne se accha sona samjha isliye mene pahle petar ko fasted box diya or jake apne apne room me so gya

(Petar ne apne zakhmo par patti watti ki or woh bhi wahi sofe par so gya)



(Petar ab zara iske bare me thoda bahut jaan lete h
petar ek tapori h or usse bhi zada ek maskhara jise lambi lambi fekne ka shok h iske juth or feekne ki koi sima nahi h ye itna lamba bhi fek sakta h jitna aap soch bhi nahi sakte
par dil kaa accha h
anath h baki iski or story aapko aage pata chal jayegi )



Ting tong ting tong

subha subha abhay ke flat ki ghanti baj rahi thi abhay abhi bhi ghode bech kar so raha tha

par baar baar ghanti bajne se petar ki nind khul jati h

(petar jhallate hue darwaza kholta h or samne dekhte hi uske muh me jo gali thi woh muh me hi rah jati h or badle me nikalta h)

petar - kya item subha subha kaiko pareshan kar reli h raat ko aana abhi sona h apun ko

petar ke muh se ye shabd nikle hi the ki chatakkkk karke ek thappad uske muh par padta h or ek hi thappad me mano petar ki sari nind hawa ho gyi ho

Vani - ke bola dubara bol thari khal naa taar (utar) dun
( Ji haa doston ye koi or nahi hamari pahalwan hi h jo subha subha aaj fir se padhari h )


Petar - sorry sister

vani - haa haa ab thik se par tu h kon

petar - me me me
(Petar ki hawa ek hi thappad me tight ho gyi thi or usne ayise koi kaam kiye nahi the jo batane layak ho)

vani - me me ke kre h memna se ke
hatttt pare

is sab se be khabar me mast apne bed par soya pada tha ki tabhi

cchhhhaaapppaaakkk

Karke mere muhh par pani padta h
mujhe laga ki sote hue kisi ne hamla to nahi kar_diya me nind me hi ladne ki position me aa jata hu

vani - ab ke mare se bhi kushti ladega ke

Mene dekha to mere samne vani khadi thi or uske hath me jug tha

me - pagal h kya ayise kon uthata h

vani - to ke din mesone dun tanne or raat me konsi chaukidari kre se tu jo din me sove h

me - tumhe usse kya me din me soyu yaa raat me

vani - ohhh zada tees maar Khan naa baniya kar
tanne socha bhi se ki mare balak ke kiha karige ki mayi jawan se or baba budha

mene ek nazar vani ki taraf dekha sach me ye ladki pagal h
Me vani ki taraf dekh hi raha tha ki meri nazar side me khade petar par padi jiske dono hath uske gaal par the or woh muh fade vani ko hi dekh raha tha
abhi me kuch bolta usse pahle hi

Petar - bhaaabhiiiiiiii bhabhi bhabhi apun ko maaf kardo bhabhi apun aapko ghar me aapne se roka apun aapko bhai ke kamre me bhi aane se roka

me - ( man me ) sale duniya bhar ke pagal meri zindgi me h or jo nahi h woh aaye jaa rahe h

me sar hilata hua kapde badalne chala gya

vani - bas bas ke kre se or yo bhabhi bhabhi ke laga rakha se tanne tu bhai se ke iska

Petar - nhi apun bhai ka body gurd h

vani - hahahahaha tu body guard se tu to khud ki body ne guard naa kar sakta


aaj ke liye itna hi sorry bhai log time nahi mil raha tha itne din se tum logo ko pata hi hoga ki on bhi nahi aaya me

par tnsn nhi apan cover kar lige jitna bhi late hoga
Bohot hi badiya update
 

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abhi ham log ek park me the jaha me warm_up kar raha tha running or exercise ke liye
Hame mere flat se yaha tak aane me 15 min lage the
or in 15 min me mujhe lagne laga tha ki

hariyana or mumbai mere dono taraf h or bichme fasa hua hua bichara me

kyuki naa to mujhe aadhi baat vani ki samajh aati thi naa hi petar ki or pata nahi kaise ye dono ek dusre ki baat samajh rahe the
(Sach hi kahte h ek pagal ko dusre pagal ki baat samajhne ke liye kisi bhasha yaa boli ki zarurat nahi hoti)

Hamne running start ki 1 2 3 4 abhi hame bhagte hue 4 rounds hi hue the ki
petar - huuufffff huffff bhai bhai apun se nahi bhaga jata ab apun ka ho gya
ye bol kar petar ruk gya sala kutte ki tarha haaf raha tha

ab me or vani hi bache the kal vani ke sath runnig karke me ye to samajh hi gya tha ki ye kamzor to bilkul nahi h

or hua bhi wahi vani mere sath 8 round tak tiki woh abhi or bhag sakti thi

9 round tak meri puri body pasine se bhig chuki thi mene apni t-shirt utaar kar petar ko dedi or last ke 3 lap (round) fast speed me bhagne laga

ab mera to pura dhiyaan running me hi tha isliye mujhe nahi pata chala

likin park me baithi sari hi ladkiyo ki nazar ab mujhpe thi

ladki 1 - wao kya ladka h yaar

ladki 2 - abs dekh naa 6 pack h

ladki 1 - haye iske cahre se nazar hate to kahi or dekhu naa

bhale hi me ladkiyo ki nazar se be_khabar tha par koi tha jo is_sab par bada hi dhiyaan de rahi thi thi

Or woh thi vani

vani - (man me ) dekh dekh kaise deede faad ke dekhe h or usne dekho laaj sharam sab bech khai se chore ne


vani - (dono ladkiyo ko awaz deti hui) ree kha javegi ke usne yaha thari maa khadi dekhai naa deti ke

or jee naa dekhai de to ude(udhar) aake dekhau tanne

woh ladkiya vani ki baat sun kar ghabra jati h or idhar udhar dekhne lagti h

Par abhi mere 11 chakkar hi hue the ki waha khadi aurton ke group me se ek aurat ki awaz vani ki sunai deti h

Aurat 1 - iska to auzaar bhi kamal kaa hoga

aurat 2 - haa sahi kaha kisi kacchi kali ke uper chadhega to jaan hi nikaal dega

aurat 3 - ye to agar hampar bhi cadh gya naa to nas nas dukha dega
badi hi kismat wali hogi jiski banzar zamin par ye roz pani dega

aurat 2 - aryy kya pata abhi bhi de raha ho tumhe to pata h aaj kal ke ladko ka
or agar ye nahi bhi dega to mujhe to lagta h bahut dewani hogi iski

pahle to aurto ki baat sun kar vani ka cahta sharm se laal ho gya
Likin aage unki baat sun kar vani ke dimag me kuch aaya

vani -(man me ) yaha to bas 2 din se bhagan waste aave se to yo gadar macha rakha isne

choriya to chodo lugaia bhi piche padan lagi ib (ab) ke kre
me to iske sath naa rah sakti naa 24 ghante aakhade kon javega
tabhi vani ko kuch dhiyaan aaya or usne apni nazar ghumai uski taraf ji haa petar
jo abhi bhi kutte ki tarha haaf raha tha

Vani - oye tanne naam ke bataya thara

petar - bhabhi petar

vani - haa to patar je agar me thare ko koi zaruri kaam kahu to tu ke mare liye woh kaam krega

petar - bhabhi patar nahi petar
or aap bolo bas bhabhi apun jaan de dega aapke waste

vani - haa to patar patar mari baat dhiyaan se sunn or je is kaam me koi rola paya to tu manne sahi se jaanta koi naa

petar ko vani ki baat sunte hi subha wala thappad yaad aa gya

petar - aapne jitna apun ko bataya utna kafi h bhabhi apun ke liye aap bas bolo kiska game karne kaa h apun ko

vani - patar tu inke sath rahve se naa ( abhay ki taraf ishara karke)

petar - aryy bhabhi aapko bhai_ki sefty ki chinta karne ki zarurat_ich nhi h apna bhai lokhand mafik h uska koi kya krega

ccchhhaaattttaaakkkkk

or is ek ahsaas ke sath petar ki subha wali sari yaadin taza ho gyi ek baar fir vani ne use chatka diya tha

petar - aaaahhhhh bhabhi ab kaiko mare tum apunko

vani - jab tak mari baat puri naa ho bich me boliye naa ib

vani - ab dhiyaan te sun yo kide jave h kiste baat kre se or kitni chori te iska nain mattaka chale h agar yo sari khabar agar tu manne naa dega to patar_patar me maa kasam kha ke kahu su thare te
jiwan me tu kabhi patar patar naa kar pavega

petar - par bhabhi bhai apun ko hamesha thodi naa sath rakhega

vani - kyu tu to bodyguard se naa or woh to sath hi rahve se

petar - bhabhi baat asal me ye h ki.......(uske baad petar apni puri kahani vani ko batata h )

vani - hmm koi naa me jo kahu woh kar woh rakh lega sath tanne par mari baat

petar - aapka kaam ho jayega bhabhi

Chale yaa tum dono or baatin karne wale ho _abhay ne aate hue kaha

khair uske baad ham log park se bahar jane lage ki_ suno

me - hmmm

vani - manne kuch kahna se thare ko

me - fir se koi dailog marne wali ho kya

vani - naa ji woh manne kahna tha ki me jaa rahi su

me - hmm kal milte h or me kalse alarm laga kar souga

vani - naa ji me ab 2 3 din naa aa saku mari kishti se bengluru me to mare ko jana padega

Vani 3 din ke liye jaa rahi thi ye sun kar ek pal ke liye to mujhe bura laga likin fir socha (chalo chain se sone milega)

me - ok koi......

abbi meri baat puri hoti ki vani ne aage badh kar mujhe lage se laga liya or ye mere liye shoking tha

vani - ( mere kaan me ) suno ji manne yaad avegi thari

Me is_waqt vani ki baahon me tha yaa sach kahu to zindgi me shayaad pahli baar mujhe kisi ne gale lagaya hua tha
or kahi naa kahi mere liye ye moment emotional tha

vani - suno ji

me - ( be_khayali me) hmm

Vani - mari ek baat manoge is_petar ne apne sath rakhlo chora sahi se

me - ( shok me) ok

vani - (mujhse alag hoti hui) chal ib zada chupakne ki zarurat ko na mare sath
or is patar patar ne apne sath hi rakhna

vani ( dhamkate hue ) or je tanne isne apne sath naa rakha or mare ko pata chali to fir agli kushti mari thare sath hi hogi


ye bol kar woh chali gyi

Me - ( hosh me aate hue) aaaaaaahhhhhhhh sale sab pagal log


Uske baad me or petar ghar ki taraf chal diye or ab waqt tha office jane ka...

jaha mujhe nahi pata tha ki mera kya intzaar kar raha h
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Aaj ke liye itna hi bhai log or sorry thoda busy hu aaj kal isi liye naa ke sirf update slow ho gye h balki kahani bhi slow chalani pad rahi h par fikr mat kro

mere free hone tak kahani me kuch bada aane wala h
Bhai yeh petar ka kuch kirdar samaj nahi aaya kya ye jaruri hai kahani mai
Superb update
 

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bhai dekho ab lag raha hai na apun ek_dum rapchik

mene dekha ki petar is baar firse koi laal paint or uske uper koi ful patti wali shirt pahan kar aaya h

Is_waqt me or petar mall me the me petar ko shopping krane aaya tha
kyuki me man hi man ye baat acche se jaan gya tha ki ye afat mere gale pad chuki h or ye itni asani se meri zindgi or mera ghar nahi chhodne wali

me - tujhe jo lena h lele par chal ab

(Dusri taraf - location thakur haveli)

(Avni ki jubani)


Me ready hu papa

Papa - chalo accha h tum aa to gyi warna ham to soch rahe the ki aaj hamari khudki hi party me kahi sabse last me naa pahuche

me - (sad) sorry papa

papa - (haste hue) hahahahaha aryy chill bache me me to mazak kar raha tha aap kabse baat baat par serious hone lagi

( Papa ko nhi pata tha likin jane anjane_me unhone mujhe fir se woh sab yaad dila diya jisse me aaj bhagna cah rahi thi
sach hi to kaha tha papa ne me ayisi kabhi nhi thi me 15 dino me hi kitni badal gyi thi

meri zindgi badal gyi thi meri soch badal gyi thi
Pahle mujhe logo_ko satane me maza aata tha
me jaan_bujh kar sexy kapde pahna karti thi taki ladko ko tease kar saku

rani meri bhen meri bachpan ki best friend woh bhi ab mujhse naraz rahne lagi hai woh cahti h ki me firse pahle ki tarha ho jau

likin jabse mere sath woh hua (kidnapp) tabse me darne lagi hu aksar hi me sochti hu ki agar us din woh nahi aata to

woh se mujhe yaad aaya woh jisne 2 mulaqat me mujhe or meri life ko puri tarha badal kar rakh diya

me use jaha bhi dhund sakti thi jis bhi jagha dundh sakti thi me use dhund chuki thi

ab to ayisa lagne laga hai jaise woh bas mera ek sapna hi tha)

avni avni beta utro bhi

Papa ne mujhe apni soch se bahar nikala mene dekha ki ham ab tak office pahuch chuke the

papa ne kaha tha ki party choti h par jab ham andar pahuche to pata chala ki party itni bhi choti nahi thi
Papa ka pura office staff or unki family se bhi kuch members the

Mera pahle hi yaha aane ka man nahi tha papa or bade papa (ranveer) ki ladai ki wajha se isi_wajha se me aakeli ek seat par jake baith gyi

( Haa to ham kaha the me aapko bata rahi thi uske bare me

Us_din ke baad (mujhe bachane ke)
woh kabhi nahi aaya mene woh ayise gayab hua jaise woh kabhi tha hi nahi

mere pass ab utna waqt bhi nahi bacha h 40 50 din bas
pahle mujhe farak nahi padta tha ki meri shadi kaha or kisse ho rahi h

likin ab abto jaise har bitte din ke sath mera saasin lena mushkil hota jaa raha h

par me jaanti hu me mana nahi kar sakti pariwar ki izzat or bhai ke pyaar kaa mamla h

likin afsos is_baat ka zarur rahega ki mujhe meri life me pahli baar koi passand aaya or me use bata bhi na saki
KASH.........)

mene ek lambi saas_li or

avni beta inse milo ye h mere patner - mr abhi...

papa ki baat sun mene uski taraf dekha jise mujhse mila rahe the or basss

mere andar emotions ka sailab aaya hua tha kyuki mere samne woh khada tha...


hii myself abhi

Me - Avni thakur (man'me) hath to ayise bhadaya h jaise jaanta hi naa ho

mujhe use dekh kar khushi or rona dono aa raha tha par sath sath gussa bhi aa raha tha shayaad me jitni soch kar baithe thi mujhe usse utni importance nahi mili thi

(Abhay ki zubani)


Mujhe yaha aaye 30 min se zada ho gye the par jabse ham yaha aaye the avni bas mujhe hi ghure jaa rahi thi

Mene chacha ke samne nahi bataya tha ki me avni ko jaanta hu ya avni mujhe
or sach kahu to mujhe farak bhi nahi padta tha

petar - bhai kya dhasu mahol jamela h idhar aap roz ayise mahfil me aata h kya

me - tujhe kya lagta h petar ye mushaira chal raha h
office party h ye

me - petar kab tak mere sath rahke bore hoga jaa jake kuch khaale

petar - aapko apun ki kitni firak h bhai apun kahi elomsan naa ho jaye

me - (chid ke) petar woh firak nahi fikar hota h or elomsan nhi emotional

petar - ek hi baat h bhai chalo apun khake aata h agar khana khatm ho gya to

Me - chalo accha hua gya
abhi petar ke jane ke baad mene chain ki saas_li hi thi ki

avni - hii

me - (ignor) hello

avni - kya ham baat kar sakte h

mene ek nazar avni ki taraf dekha fir ne chal diya sanjay or baki logo ke pass
matlab mera jawab saaf tha mujhe avni se koi bhi baat nahi karni thi

avni ( man'me ) aaahhhh ye samajhta kya h khudko
jab dekho akad dikhata rahta h
tum mujhse baat nahi kroge naa theek h ab dekho me kya karti hu

idhar me sanjay or baki logo ke pass aa gya or unse baatin karne laga baat kya me bas unki bakwas sun raha tha kyuki mujhe zada bolna waise hi passand nahi tha
in bakwas logo ne mujhe 15 mint me hi paka diya

Me - (man'me) nikal_le beta yaha se warna ye budhe paka ke mar dige

mene chalne ke liye apni nazrain ghumai or mujhe kuch ayisa nazar aaya ki mujhe hart fail hote hote bacha
mene dekha ki avni petar ke kandhe sahla rahi h or petar ki aankho me mote mote aasu h

me - ye kya ho raha h or ye sala ro kyu raha hai

10 min baad me or petar car me the ham ghar wapas jaa rahe the par herani ki baat ye thi ki aam tor par bak bak karne wala petar chupchap bas mujhe ghure jaa raha tha

me - or kitni der ayise hi dekhta rahega tu mujhe

petar - bhai apun ko aapse ayisa umeed nahi tha

me - kaisa umeed

petar - bhai apun aapse bahut zada dislipointed h
aryy apna nhi to kamse kam apun ki izzat ka to khayaal rakha hota

me - woh dislipointed hota h petar

petar - apun ki sister ki life ki Watt laga di aapne or abhi bhi aapko apun ki English ki padi h

me - tu batayega usne kya kaha tujhse

petar - huuuuhhhhh


me - (uper ki taraf dekhte hue man'me) bhagwan kya me pahle kam pareshan tha jo tu mujhe ayise pagal dene laga h ab

petar - ab ayise uper ki taraf dekh ke kya mafi mang rahe ho bhai aapko ayisa ......

me - (chid kar) chup ek dum chup ab kuch mat bolna

idhar mujhe nahi pata tha avni ne petar se kya bola h or dusri taraf

avni - ( apne mobile ko dekhte hue) tum mujhse baat nahi karna cahte the na ab dekho mere pass tumhara sidha address hi aa gya
Taiyaar ho jao mr.... Kalse tumhari life badalne wali h



Ladka - ab to woh pahalwan bhi nahi h ab to kuch kar bahna zada din nahi h hamare pass

ladki - tu chinta naa kar bhai me kalse hi kaam par lag jaugi

ladka - bahna tu kar to payegi naa

ladki - hahahahahaha jab mere husn se mera saga bhai nahi bach saka to woh to gair h
free ki chut dekhte hi kutta ban jayega

ladka - haahahahhahaha.....


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.aaj ke liye itna hi akhir kya kaha hoga Avni ne ayisa petar se or kya karne wale h ye bhai bhen abhay ke sath


agla update 3 din ke andar
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(Recap - aakhri update me aapne padha ki kis tarha avni ne petar ko abhay ke khilaf bhadkaya )

aab aage

2 din baad

sahi kahe tha mara baba ghodi ki lagam dhili naa choddi jati
or yaha hamne chori ki lagam dhilli chhoddi


ke faida itne admi itni tagat ka bhiku jab ham hamare ghar ki choriya ne naa rok sakte

Is_waqt Chaudhary haveli me sannata chaya hua tha ayisa is haveli me salo se nahi hua tha

jaankaar log jaante the jab bhi chaudharyo ke ghar me shanti chati h to woh bas aane wale tufaan ki dastak deti h

is_samay shyam Chaudhary kamre me baithe hue the or unke sath unke 2no bete or sabhi pote the
shyaam Chaudhary ke samne table thi , jis par kuch photos pade hue the jinme dekhai de rahe the ek ladki or ek ladka

Aaj shyam Chaudhary gusse me the or baki sare dare hue
yaha tak ki jis bhiku chaudhary ko log janwar danav or pata nhi kis kis naam se bulate the
us bhiku chaudhary ke chahre ki hawaiya bhi udi hui thi

Likin in sab me 2 log ayise bhi the jo dar ke mare kaap rahe the unhe apni mout apne samne nazar aa rahi thi
or woh log the tinka or gopal dono ki itni buri halat thi ki pucho mat

Vikram - ab is dono ka karna kya h

gopal -(dar dabate hue) karna kya bhaiya apna hi sikka khota h chaudharyo ki izzat itni sasti nhi h ki koi bhi khel jaye

tinka - (moke kaa faida uthate hue) or ib to pure ****** sahar ne pata chalan do ki chaudhary apni izzat bachan khatir apna bhi khun baha sake h

abhi dono ne apni baat kahke khatm ki hi thi ki
thaaaddddaakkkk tadaakkk
1 1 danda dono ke pairo pe pada

s.c (shyam Chaudhary)
manne khushi hui yo jaanke ki mare baad mare bete naa sahi par mare pote apni izzat ka itna khayaal kre h
par budhi ka vikas naa hoya tabhi itni_si baat pe apni bhen ka khun bahan_ke liye raji ho gaye

khun bahega zarur bahega par apna nhi is chore ka

vikram - par dada naam kya h is chore ka

s.c - abhiii


magar lagta h aaj ki raat ****** city me ye bijli sirf ek pariwar par nhi balki 2 pariwaro par giri h

Location thakur haveli

abhi ham zinda h mare nhi jo tum is_tarha ki harkat par utar aaye Ranveer


Dhananjay thakur bhi aaj bahut gusse me the
aaj unke vishwas ko thes pahuchi thi
unhe aaj apna pariwar tutta hua nazar aaya tha
or agar aaj bhi woh bich me nhi aate to thakur pariwar ek dusre ka dushman ban jata

aaj dari hui to savitri devi bhi thi unhe samajh nhi aa raha tha ye kaise ho gya kyu ho gya kab ho gya

wahi Kamini ki aankho me khun utar aaya tha usne kabhi bhi apne bacho or apni jethani ke bacho me farak nhi kiya ulta apni jethani ke bacho ko apni beti se zada pyaar diya apni jethani ko apni bahan ka darja diya likin.....

wahi Kajal ki aankhain sharm se jhuki hui thi aakhir aaj uske pati ne harkat hi ayisi ki thi

arav - dad are you mad aap kya soch rhe the
aapne chachu ke kaam ko band krane ki koshish ki

ranveer - mujhe maaf kardo sanjay me lalach me andha ho gya tha
or hath jod kar khada ho gya

ranveer gusse me tha par woh bewakuf nhi tha use samajh aa gya tha ki bhanda phut chuka hai agar abhi usne baat ko nhi sambhala to bahut kuch bigad sakta h

ranveer ke ayisa karte hi sabki nazrain sanjay ki taraf chali gyi
(is_waqt koi bhi ladki waha moujud nhi thi)

savtri - beta dekh bada bhai h maaf karde use dekh kaise hath jod ke khada h

arav - haa chachu papa se galti ho gyi unhe maaf karde
Or sath ke sath mujhe bhi bahno ki shadi ki taiyari or baki chezon me itna ulajh gya ki dad or aap sab par dhiyan hi nhi de_paya

arav ko pata tha pichle kuch waqt se usne sab dekh kar undekha kar diya tha or isi_liye uska chacha uspr bhi satka hua hai
or woh koi risk lena nhi cahta tha

kajal - haa sanjay ham sabko maaf kardo hamse bahut badi bhul hui h

sanjay sab dekh raha tha agar purana sanjay hota to ab tak ye baat khatm bhi ho chuki hoti likin ab sanjay badal chuka tha
ab sanjay ko ye ek moke jaisa lag raha tha

sanjay - theek h maa papa aap log chahate h naa me ye baat yahi khatm kar dun to theek h par meri ek shart h

sanjay ki baat sun kar sab log canfuse the

dhananjay - kaisi shart

sanjay - me nhi cahta ki avni ki shadi Sangwan pariwar me ho
likin kyuki raja sahab se wada pitaji ne kiya tha to me shadi to nhi tod sakta par me aapse ek wada cahta hu ki agar shadi se pahle meri beti ko koi or ladka passand aata hai yaa woh khud is shadi se mana karti hai to
YE SHADI NHI HOGI

or bas boooommmmm

sabhi ke totte udd chuke the sanjay ne aaj dhamaka kar diya tha

arav ki muthi gusse me kas gyi thi
ranveer ka sar ghum gya tha
kajal ki aankhain badi badi ho gyi thi
Dhananjay thakur ko bas almost 2nd hart_aatack aa hi gya tha
savitri devi ki aankho me aasu aa gye the

likin yaha sabse buri halat to khud Kamini ki thi woh aankh or muh fade sanjay ko dekh rahi thi akhir uske pati ko hua kya tha itni himmat use to yakin hi nhi ho raha tha

arav - ( khudko sambhalte hue) haahahaha chachu aap bhi kaisi baatin karte h me to pahle hi apni bahno se wada kar chuka hu k......

sanjay -( bichme tokte hue) me koi tumhari bahno ki tarha bacha nhi hu arav jise tum wade ki lolipop de doge or me maaan jauga
or me ye aap logo se sirf puch nhi raha hu balki bata raha hu
agar meri beti ek baat bhi ye kaha ki use ye shadi nhi karni to koi bhi matlab koi bhi mujhe is shadi ko todne rok nhi payega...

ye bol kar sanjay wahase chala jata hai or uske piche piche kamini bhi dhire dhire sab log apne apne kamre me pahuch jate h

raat 1 bje ranveer chhat par baitha daru pi raha tha

ranveer - ye sab us_ladke ki wajha se hua h
nhi chhodunga sale tujhe dekh luga
ABHIII KE BACHE...

or in do bade pariwaro ke log jis admi ko galiya de rahe the woh admi is waqt baithe hue kuch soch raha tha or uske man me petar ka sawal chal raha tha

petat - (nashe me) bhai apun kabhi kabhi sochta h ki ye jo sala koi bhi pahli baar ghadi baya hoga usko kaise malum din me 24 ghante hote h usko kon bataya hoinga

me - soch se bahar aate hue ye sala kya sawal tha....

aaj ke liye bas itna hi or
Aapko kya lagta hai abhay ne 2 din me ayise konse kand kiye h or ab kya hone wala h abhay ke sath
sorry for late bhai log
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Next day - roz ke mukable aaj mousam thoda zada hi garam tha ye suraj ki khudki marzi thi yaa ****** city me biti hui raat ka asar tha ye to pata nhi likin bhale hi thakur pariwar me kuch logo ke liye kal ki raat kaisi bhi rahi ho par kuchke liye to ye din bhi normal hi tha
or unhi normal logo me se ek thi avni jo baithe baithe apne man me kuch soch rahi thi

kya hua choti kya soch rahi hai

ye awaz sun kar avni ke hotho par pyaari si muskaan aa gyi woh jaanti

thi ab uski pareshani ka hal use mil hi jayega uski badi bhen ke pass har chez ka jawab hota hi hai

avni - di kya ayisa nhi ho sakta ki hame thoda or time mil jaye shadiyo ke liye

avni ki baat sun kar divya soch me pad jati hai

divya - choti tu mujhe sach sach bata kya tu sirf or time cahti hai yaa tujhe ye shadi nhi karni
dekh agar ayisa kuch hai to tu mujhe bata sakti hai tu bhi jaanti hai me khud ye shadi nhi karna cahti

divya ki baat sunkar avni me bhi
himmat bandhti h

avni - (haklate hue) d d di w wo me ye shadi nnnn nhi karna cahti

Avni ki baat sunkar jaha divya heran thi to usse kahi zada khush bhi thi
use lag raha tha jaise ekdum se uski ye choti bhen samajhdaar ho gyi hai

divya - tu fikr mat kar choti me aaj hi is shadi ke natak ka end kar dungi

avni - (khush ho kar) kya sach di aap ayisa kar sakti ho

divya -(aankha maarte hue) try karne me kya jaata hai
or jabse me aakeli thi ab to tu hai naa mere sath or waise bhi abhi to 2.5 mahina bacha hua hai

hamare pass ye nhi to kuch or dhund hi lige

or ayise hi dono bahne sham ki planing me jut gyi is_baat se bekhabar ki koi or bhi tha jo unki baatin sun raha tha

ab ye baatin sunne wala insaan kya tufaan layega ye to waqt hi batayega

ji woh jo aapne raat ko kaha kya woh
sanjay jaanta tha ki kamini raat se usse baat karne ke liye bechain h
isi liye woh bola

sanjay - haa kamini agar hamari beti ko woh shadi nhi karni hui to fir me woh shadi nhi hone dunga fir chahe mujhe
uske liye koi bhi kemat kyu naa chukani pade

kamini - par ham aakele sab logo ke khilaaf kar bhi kya sakte hai

sanjay - (rahasyamayi musaan kee sath) pahle shayad me kuch nhi kar pata par ab ek raasta hai mere pass

isse pahle kamini kuch kahti sanjay kamre se jaa chuka tha
woh is waqt office jana cahta tha use pata tha raat me jo hua uske baad aaj woh breakfast ghar par naa hi kare to accha h

ruko

abhi sanjay apne kamre nikal kar thodi dur hi pahucha tha ki use ek gusse bhari awaz sunai padi
sanjay ne palat kar dekha to paya uski maa use gusse se ghur rahi hai

savitri devi - (gusse me) mere sath aao

or use ek khali kamre me leke jati hai

S.d - kya baat hai sanjay kya cahte ho tum

sanjay - me kuch nhi cahta maa

s - to kya tum pariwar ko todna cahte ho kyu kar rahe ho ayisa

sanjay - me pariwar ko nhi tod raha maa bas apni beti ki zindgi bacha raha hu

s - ( gusse me ) to kya ham apni poti ka bura cahte hai
hamne unki shadi sahar ke sabse bade pariwaro me pakki ki hai
or agar

maan bhi liya jaye ki tum shadi tod bhi lete ho to kya kroge apni beti ka kaha se dhundoge itne bade or amir pariwar yaa kisi garib or bhuke nange me uski shadi krane ka irada hai tumhara

sanjay - me apni beti ki shadi kahi bhi ho kisi se bhi ho par mujhe itna to pata hai agar meri beti in_pariwaro ke alawa kahi bhi gyi to khush hi rahegi

s - or tumne socha hai agar hamare pariwar se 1 bhi beti kam hui to arav ki bhi shadi ruk jayegi
tumne ek bhi baar arav ke bare me socha hai
bhul gye jab usne pahli baar rajkumari ko dekha tha tab kya haal hua tha uska

sanjay - mujhe sab yaad hai maa par ek ke pyaar ke liye sabki kubani kaha tak theek hai
agar arav ka pyaar sacha hai to rajkumari uski hoke hi rahegi par uske liye me kisi or ki zindgi bhale hi naa sahi par apni beti ki zindgi bilkul barbad nahi hone dunga
ye kah kar sanjay to chala jata hai par savitri devi ke dimag me ek flashback chalne lagta hai




( flashback)

dadi dadi dadi dadi

ary ary kya hua mere lalla ko ayise bhagta hua kyu aa raha hai

arav - dadi mene aaj ek bahut hi beautiful girl ko dekha

dadi (savitri) - hahahaha mera lalla ghar ke liye bahu dekh ke aaya hai

arav - ( blush ) dadi woh girl bahut beautiful hai

dadi - theek hai lalla pahle tu bada hoja fir ham teri shadi usi se kara dige

us _waqt arav sirf 6 saal ka tha isi wajha se savitri devi ne uski baat par zada dhiyaan nhi diya likin usdin ke baad se to jaise arav ke sar par us ladki kaa bhoot hi sawar ho gya
woh aksar hi us_ladki ko kahi naa kahi dekh leta or fir aake pure ghar ko batane lagta

likin ek din

dadi dadu mene aaj fir us girl ko dekha woh bahut beautiful lag rahi thi

dhananjay - aryy chote thakur sahab to uska naam pata bhi puch lete ham kara dete usse apki shadi

arav - dadu aaj mene use papa ko bhi dekhaya papa batao naa

ranveer - beta aap andar jao me sabko bata dunga or bade logo wali meeting bhi karni hai fir thodi der me papa or mamma aate hai

arav - ok papa

kajal - ( haste hue ) kya baat h ji aakele aakele bahu ko dekh bhi aaye or mujhe bataya tak nhi

sanjay - par bhaiya aap

to raja sahab ki anniversary me gye the naa aapko woh ladki kaha mil gyi kya woh bhi kisi bade pariwar se hai

ranveer - ( pareshan hote hue ) isi baat ki to dikkat h kash ko woh kisi pariwar se hoti to ham kuch bhi karke mana lete par woh rajkumari hai or arav ki zidd ko to aap log jaante hi ho
ab to ham bas ek hi prathana kar sakte hai ki waqt ke sath sath arav ke sar se ye rajkumari kaa bhoot utar jaye

ranveer ki baat sun kar sabki hawaiya udd gyi thi bhale hi woh sahar ke sabse tagatwar pariwaro me se 1 the par woh raja ki barabari nhi kar sakte the or ye baat woh sab acche se jaante the

savtri - rajkumari hai to kya hua uski shadi bhi to kisi naa kisi se hogi hi or tum sab dekhna mera lalla sabse accha hai

dhananjay - apna muh band rakho savitri

s - par

d - mene kaha naa muh band matlab band

dhananjay thakur ne thakurain ka muh to band kra diya par unke man ko shant nahi kar paye
waise to thakur pariwar me sabhi arav ko pyaar karte the par savitri devi kaa pyaar un_sabse bahut zada tha
ye kahna bhi galat nahi hoga ki savitri devi apne pote ke pyaar me pagal thi

or jaisa ki pichle kuch salo me savitri devi ko adat pad gyi thi ki jab bhi unke man ka kuch naa hota to unhe bas ek hi admi yaad aate or woh the guruji...

haa to jaisa ki aapne bataya savitri devi hame bhi waisa hi lagta hai rajkumari ke liye arav se bahtar koi nhi likin ye itna asan bhi nahi hone wala

savitri devi - guruji aap to maha gyani h sharv shaktiman hai aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nhi hai

guruji - (muskurate hue) tum hamari param bhakt ho savitri devi or hame

sabse zada preya bhi ho parantu yaha hamare karne se kuch nhi hoga yaha to sab kuch arav ko karna hoga

s.d - kya karna hoga guruji

guruji - **************

s - theek hai guruji mera lalla ye kaam krega or aaphi to kahte ho mera lalla khas hai

guruji - haa ham jaante h savitri devi
parantu ek baat ka sadev dhiyaan rakhna tumhare pote ki iss jiwan yatra me tumhe hi uski sahayata karni hai tumhe uski sankatmochan banna hai

ab ye to nhi pata guruji ne ye baat kyu kahi thi par savitri devi par uska asar ayisa hua ki woh sach me arav ki dhal ban gyi

agle din

arav apne television par baitha video game khel raha tha

s. - lalla idhao aao hame baat karni hai

a - dadi aap ruko me bas mario khel ke aata hu

s - theek hai lalla me to tumhari us girl ke bare me baat karne aayi thi

pata nhi us ladki ka ayisa konsa asar tha arav par jo woh uske bare me sunte hi sab kuch chhod deta tha

arav - kya hua dadi aapko bhi woh mili kya

dadi - lalla tumhe pata hai woh ladki kon hai

arav - nhi dadi

dadi - lalla woh ladki rajkumari hai or unka naam hai dipti

arav - kya dadi woh beautiful girl real ki princess hai or kya woh meri friend banegi

dadi - haa woh sach ki princess hai par woh aapki friend nhi ban sakti kyuki aap uske layak nhi ho

arav - ( canfuse ) dadi fir mujhe uska friend banne ke liye kya karna hoga

dadi - beta tumhe uske layak banna hoga sabse tagatwar sabse accha tumhe ayisa banna hoga jiske aage sab sar jhukaye
tumhe ayisa banna hoga jise dekh kar raja khud tumhara hath mage rajkumari ke liye

arav - me ayisa banuga dadi

dadi - par ayisa banna asan nhi h tumhe bahut mahnat karni hogi shayad sabse zada mahnat kya tum kar paoge

a - ji dadi me kruga

or bas fir kya tha us_din ke baad se arav puri tarha badal gya use karate shok pahle se tha us_din ke baad se arav har chez seekhne laga jo bhi woh seekh sakta tha ladai me ho ya kahi or se use jo bhi milta woh seekhta use sabse bahtar jo banna tha

Flashback end

itna sab sochte hue savitri devi thoda emotional ho gyi thi akhir kitni mahnat ki thi unke lalla ne is_din ke liye or jab ye din itna kareeb tha to uske hi ghar me bagawat uthne lagi thi
nhi woh ye nhi hone degi apne lalla ka dil nhi tutne degi

or itna sab sochte hue bhi unke kano me guruji kahe wohi itne salo purane shabd gunj rahe the
(Tumhe uska sankatmochan banna hoga)
ab tak sab log daining table par aa gye the 2 logo ko chhod kar jinme se ek sanjay tha or dusra (aage pata chalega)

arav - papa mujhe aap sabko kuch batana hai

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav - papa dadu pichle kuch dino se jo ghar ka mahol h usse me thoda disturbed feel kar raha hu isi_wajha se mene faisla kiya hai ki me kuch dino ke liye ghumne chala jau


Dhananjay - woh sab to theek hai likin tum jaana kaha cahte ho

arav - dadu me ...... Jaa raha hu

Wahi kisi dusri jagha


Aaaahhhh Maaf kardo didi ab ayisi galti nhi hogi bachao koi to bachao

Kutta

kamina samjhe ke se khudne
isne ke lage se me hamesha ke liye gyi thi ke jo loutke kona aau
je ek baar me pahuch jau fir dekh baandar nach na nachaya naa to mara naam bhi vani chaudhary koni

or yo patar patar ne bhi dekhu jake

delhi airport ke bahar 2 ladke bachao bachao chilla rahe the pit pit kar unka bura haal ho gya tha

par hamari pahalwan to jaise aaj kisi or hi nashe me thi
woh kahi ka gussa kahi utaar rahi thi

hua asal me ye ki vani apne match ke liye banglore gyi thi usne petar ko zimmedari di thi ki woh abhay ke bare me use din me 3 baar report deha par
ab petar to petar hai usne abhay ko bhi bahut phone kiye par usne bhi nahi uthaya yahi karan tha ki maidam ka gussa aaj 7ve asman par tha

or uska shikaar hue ye manchale ladke jinhone vani ke airport se bahar aate hi us par commant maar diya or bas fir kya tha
laat par laat ghuse par ghuse aakhir kaar airport police ko aana pada jiska anjaam ye hua ki vani ko band kar diya kuch or ghanto ke liye

vani - ek baar aan de manne fir dekh ke kru me thare sath

hiccccchhh hiccccc hicccc

Me - ye sala subha subha kon bhagwan se pahle mujhe yaad kar raha hai

me aaj subha der se utha tha aaj acchi baat ye hui ki dono me se koi ladki mera dimag kharaab karne nhi aayi thi
me 10 minutes me taiyaar hoke nikla to

petar - bhai kab tak faltu logo ke mafik pada rahega bole to apne pet me chuha log Bolly boll khel rela hai chalo naa bhai kuch thus ke aate hai

petar sahi kah raha tha bahut time ho gya tha kuch khaya nhi tha isliye mene car nikali or chal diye kuch kahane hamare flat se kuch dur ek markit hai abhi ham jaa hi rahe the ki mene ek ajib chez notice ki aaj pura markit band tha rod khali thi
abhi me iske bare me kuch or sochta usse pahle hi mujhe mere sawalo ka jawab mil gya mere samne 3 cars khadi thi uncars ke samne kamse kam 10 se 12 admi khade the
or unki bich wali par par ek insaan baitha hua tha ...

more than 2.2k words hai or mere sabse lambe updates me se ek


to aapko kya lagta hai kya hone wala aage vani kya kregi abhay ka or woh admi kon hai jo abhay ke samne khada hai
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Hamare samne kuch cars khadi thi or unme se bich wali car par ek ladka baitha hua tha woh tha
TINKA CHAUDHARI

use dekh ke saaf samajh aa raha tha ki uska irada kya hai me or petar car se utre

tinka - oye solanki

solanki - ji bhai

tinka - tujhe ek kahani sunata hu ek baar bakriyo ke jhund me ek kutta ghus jata hai or aakele 4 6 bakriyo ko maar deta hai bakriyo ka jhund kutte se dar ke bhag jata hai
kutte ko lagne lagta hai ki usse zada tagatwar koi nhi par ek din woh kutta sand ke raste me aa jata hai or sand hue kuchalta hua aage nikal jata hai
is kahani se hame kya seekh milti hai

solanki - kya bhai

tinka - agar bakriyo ke jhund me koi kutta ghus aaye or 4 5 bakriyo ka shikaar karle
iska matlab ye nhi ki kutta tagatwar hai or ab woh saand ke raaste me aa sakta hai

tinka - suna tha thare bare me socha ki koi naa bacha hai
likin ab tu baap samajhne laga khudne chaudhary pariwar ki izzat par hath delega

waise to tinka chaudhary pariwar ki izzat ka hawala de raha tha par woh acchi tarha se jaanta tha ki use izzat wizzat se koi lena dena nhi hai
samne khade ladke ne uska kaam 2 baar bigad diya tha or ab use badla chaheye tha or aaj to use family ka bhi support tha uske dada ne pahli baar use koi kaam soupa tha

Tinka - jao re maar dalo

tinka ka bas itna kahna hi tha ki uske sath aaye 10 se bhi zada log hatho me hokey or bat leke abhay ki taraf bhage

itne admiyo ko apni taraf aata dekh kar petar ki to atma hi shareer se nikal gyi

petar - ( darte hue ) bhai ab apun log kya krige

abhay - tu inko thodi der sambhal me aata hu


petar pahle se hi dara hua tha ab abhay ki baat sunkar to uski aankho ke aage andhera hi cha gya

dusri taraf abhay pahle apne khule hue balo ki bandhta hai or fir apne gale se chain or loket wagera nikaalne lagta hai

( Abhay ye sab utarte hue itna accha lag raha tha ki agar ye koi movie hoti to zarur abhi background me rock music me khali dram or gutar baj rahe hote )

petar - ( man me ) bhai itni dangerous time pe bhi aapko style maarne ka hai

samne se bhagte hue aane wale admi petar tak pahune hi wale the ki

petar - (aankh band karte hue) ruko

petar ko laga thi koi bat uske sar par padega yaa koi chaku uske pet me ghus jayega
likin kuch sec jab kuch nhi hua to petar ne aankh khoke gundo ki taraf dekha to woh chauk gya
kyuki sab gunde aankho me aavishwash ke sath ek taraf dekh rahe the or jab petar ne unki ankho ka picha kiya to uski aankhain bhi fati ki fati rah gyi

kyuki saamne se abhay chala aa raha tha usne apne hath me ek bullat ka pichla tyre pakda hua tha jiske sath puri bike hi ghisatti hui aa rahi thi

tinka - use kya dekh rahe ho pahle is chamche ko maro

tinka ki baat sunkar uske gundo se pahle react petar ne kiya woh tezi se abhay ki taraf bhaga
likin gunde petar ke pass aate jaa rahe the

petar - (chikhte hue) bhai apun ko bachao

abhay - niche baithja

petar - (canfuse) kya

likin agle hi pal use apne sawal ka jawab mil gya kyuki abhay ne bike ko dono hatho se uper tak utha kar sidha petar ki taraf fekdi agar pear jaldi nhi karta to gundo se pahle bike uski chatni bana deti petar jaldi se zamin par let gya or bas

dhadam skreccccchhhhh
woh bike sidha piche aane wale 4 gundo ke sar se takrai or puri bhed 1 bike ke niche dab gyi
aage aane wale 4ro logoke sar tarbuj ki tarha fat chuke the baki sare unke niche dabe hue the

ye nazara dekh kar ab tak car ke uper baitha tinka bhi khada ho gya tha bike ko puri tagat se khichna yaa use uthana ek baat thi use lagta tha woh bhi ye kar sakta tha par use itni uper utha kar 50 fit dur fek dena ye kuch zada nhi tha
likin lagta tha aaj use kuch or shok lagne wale the kyuki ab tak abhay fir se bike ke pass pahuch gya tha

abhay ne bike ko dubara uthaya or fir se puri tagat se niche pade admiyo ke uper patak diya uska force itna tha ki bike ke anjar panjar dhele ho gye
ab us bike ko dekh kar ayisa lag raha tha jaisi uski kisi truck se takkar hui ho
abhay ke bike ko zamin me maarte hu kuch jake sidha tinka ki car se laga

jab tinka ne us chez ko dekha to woh uske kisi admi kaa dimag tha ye dekh kar to tinka ka dil bhi dar se bhar gya
jaise hi woh dimag aake car se takraya to jaldi se car se ek ladka bahar aaya
gopal chaudhary

tinka ke gundo me se ab bas 3 zinda the ye woh the jo bhagne se sabse slow the or inke bas pair hi wazan se dabe the or jab abhay ne bike ko maarne ke liye uthaya to woh bach gye woh dar se kaap rahe the 2 apni pant gili kar chuke the

woh gunde the chaudhary pariwar ke liye unhone pahle bhi kaiyo ki jaanli thi likin woh jaan lete the insaano ko chitiyo ki tarha kuchalte nhi the
aaj chaudharyrio ne unhe ye kis danav ke saamne daal diya tha

piche khada petar ultiya kar raha tha usne abhay ko pahle bhi logo ki petai karte dekha tha likin abhi ye kya tha
dusri taraf tinka or gopal ko apni mout apne saamne hi dikh rahi thi

gopal - mene bola tha naa khud nhi chalte dur khade hoke dekhte hai par nhi tumhe to marna tha na

abhi ye dono baat kar hi rahe the ki abhay ne unki taraf dekha

abhay - ayeee solanki

solanki - ( kaapte hue ) ji ji ji bhai

abhay - aaj kal har kida makoda khud ko jungle ka raja samajhta hai likin jungle ka sirf ek raja hota hai sher
or me us jungle ke raja ko bhi paltu janwar bana sakta hu fir ye sand or khachhar kya chez hai

ye kahte hue abhay ne dubara bike ka silencer pakda likin usne is baar bike nhi uthai
usne bas bike par ek or pair rakhkar pura silencer hi ukhaad liya
or bhad gya tinka or gopal ki taraf

Gopal koi pagal nhi tha jo marne ke liye khada rahta usne jaldi se tinka kaa hath pakda or dono car leke bhagne lage

abhay ( jaldi se car ki taraf jata hua ) petar inse kachra saaf karwa
or woh khud car leke unke piche jane laga

abhi ****** city ki rods par 2 car tezi se bhag rahi thi log apni jaan bacha kar idhar udhar bhag rahe the

tinka - ye kidhar jaa raha hai yaha se haveli pass hai udharle wahi marige sale ko

gopal - or heveli par kon marega ise tum agar tum ise maar sakte to ham abhi gadi se jaan bacha kar bhag nhi rahe hote or abhi haveli par koi nahi hoga sab godaun par hoge is waqt

gadiya abhi bhi rods par hi thi ki tabhi mere samne kuch bache aa jate hai jhak maar ke mene break maar diye me unke nikaalne ka intzaar kar raha tha ki meri nazar ek aurat par padi jo abhi car me baith rahi thi

us aurat ko dekh bilkul bhi ayisa nhi lagta tha ki uspar waqt ka kuch asar hua hai bas abhi pahle se thodi moti ho gyi thi use dekhte hi meri aankhain gusse se laal ho jati hai

ab mujhe koi farak nhi pad raha tha ki me kiske piche gadi bhaga raha tha ab mujhe us aurat ko dard dena tha

aaj kajal thakur bahut khush thi woh apni betiyo ki shadi ke liye kuch gahane lene aayi thi kuch unhone khareed liye the or kuch ka order de diya tha

unki shadi ke waqt unki family is rishte se zada khush nhi thi isliye unhe unki maa ne kuch nahi diya tha likin woh apni apni betiyo ki sab kuch dingi

kajal thakur - maa me aapki tarha nhi banugi me apni betiyo ko itna dungi ki woh chahe to unhe puri zindgi kuch naa khareedna pade me aapse acchi maa sabit hougi dekhna

likin aakhri baat sochte hi jaise use ek zor ka jhatka laga woh apne aapko ek acchi maa kaise kah sakti thi
usne bhi to apni sabhi olado ke sath niyay nhi kiya tha ye shadi woh apni 1 beti ko pagal bana kar rahe the 2 ri is shadi ke liye taiyaar nhi thi fir bhi kar rahe the
or iske sath hi uske dimag me ek bache ka cahra ubhar kar aaya likin kajal kabhi bhi uska naam nahi leti thi jaise use dar ho ki uska naam lete hi kuch bura ho jayega

abhi kajal apni socho me gum hi thi ki booommmmmm ek car pichese full speed me uski car se takrai or kai metar unki car ko ghasetti hui legyi or raste ke niche fek ke waha se chali gyi.....

aaj ke liye bas itna hi aage kya hoga aapko kya lagta hai janne ke liye padhte rahiye...



aaj bhi 1.2 k se zada hai dekhe nhi
Excellent update
 

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