Incest Bheed me akela (abhay)

[Riky007]

story hai ye real noi hai uske baad kahun to jo bhi hota achche ke liye hota hai aap jaisa bol rahe wo sab normal aadmi ke liye sahi hai lekin jo special hote unko jada sangharsh karna padhta I think you understand

अरे भाई, स्टोरी है ये सही बात है, लेकिन ये शकुनी और अपशकुनी वाला कांसेप्ट असली जिंदगी में भी होता है, और गांव देहात में आजकल भी एक लड़के को कम और दूसरे को ज्यादा माना जाता है, हां स्टोरी होने की वजह से कुछ exaggerated रूप में दिखाया है। पर होता है ये सब

 

[king cobra]

अरे भाई, स्टोरी है ये सही बात है, लेकिन ये शकुनी और अपशकुनी वाला कांसेप्ट असली जिंदगी में भी होता है, और गांव देहात में आजकल भी एक लड़के को कम और दूसरे को ज्यादा माना जाता है, हां स्टोरी होने की वजह से कुछ exaggerated रूप में दिखाया है। पर होता है ये सब

leave this topic brother duniya ma bahut kuch hota hai hum to darshak hain bas aage writer ka dimaag badal jata reader sab kara dete hain lekin fir wo baat nai rah jati hai writer ko apne hisaab se chalne deo dekhte kya hota hai

 

[Ak47203]

Waiting bhai

 

[andyking302]

Update - 11
Recap -
sir - to fir mene woh paise kyu liye yahi naa
bache jis jagha aaj tak sahi se net ke tower nahi aate us jagha itne bade collage school or hostel or pata nahi kis kis chez ka khayaal rakhna padta h mujhe
tumhe kya lagta h itna paisa sarkaar deti hogi mujhe
nhi
kabhi kabhi kuch accha karne ke liye apne hath bhi gande karne padte h

mere pass ab kahne ke liye kuch nhi nahi tha

Ab aage _____

Me apne hostle room m baitha hua tha
mere hatho me yoda tha or aankho me aasu

pr itne sab ke baad bhi mujhe apni life ka sabse zaruri design lena tha

ab aage kya

me army join kar sakta hu m koi diploma kar sakta hu

Pr ab me kuch karna nahi chahata tha
mene 11 saal un umeedo ko pura karne m laga diye jo kisi ne mujhse lagai hi nahi thi

ab me apne jiwan me shanti cahta tha
Shayaad ye duniya mere liye nahi thi
ya shayaad m hi is duniya is_samaj ke layak nahi tha

Raat 8 bje

me bus stop par khada hua tha mere samne se pata nahi kitni hi bus guzar chuki thi fir mere samne ek bus aake ruki

Canduckter - kashi kashi kashi ye kashi wale aa jao bhaiya

log kahte h ki jab insaan ke pass kuch naa ho to woh bhagwan ki taraf bhagta h mene bhi wahi kiya or baith gya bus me
is_baat se be khabar ki subha ek ayisi khabar sunne ko milegi ki sab hil kar rah jayige

subha subha bus kashi pahuch gyi mene waha pahuch kar nashta kiya
or baith gya ek paid ke niche
thabhi mujhe ek awaz aayi

yaha kyu baitha h udas bacha

mene nazar utha kar dekha to ek sadhu maharaj mere samne khade the

me - apne jine ki wajha dhund raha hu baba

sadhu - baithe batihe kuch nahi milta bacha jab tak bhagwan ki khoj me nahi nikloge to bhagwan milige kahase

ye bol kar baba chalte bane
pr sath ke sath mujhe sikh bhi dete gye
mere pass kuch nahi tha to kyu naa ek saniyasi ka hi jiwan jiyu
ye soch kar me jaldi se baba ke pass bhaga

me - baba baba mujhe saniyasi banna h mujhe bhi bhag... Ke path (raste) par chalna h

sadu - hahahaha putr ye asan nahi h saniyasi woh jo apna jiwan ji chuka ho
jise paise ka lobh naa ho
kaam(sex , hawas) ki icha naa ho
Kisi se duwesh (dushmani) naa ho
man me mail naa ho
jab tum ye sab kar loge apne aap hi saniyasi ban jaoge

me - kuch bhi ho baba par ab mujhe aapke sath hi rahna h

sadhu - jaisi teri iccha


or ye bol kar baba muskura diye

Ham abhi ek t.v ki dukaan ke samne se nikal hi rahe the ki tabhi meri nazar ek news par padi

repoter - breaking news shimla ke ek jamane me sabse famous rahe roseworld hostle par hamla bomb blast m mare gye 70 se bhi zada chattr

ye sab dekh kar mera halak hi sukh gya or meri aankho m aasu aa gye

pr ye news sirf yahi nahi or bhi kai jagha chal rahi thi

(Place 1 thakur haveli)

reporter- raat 2 baje hua tha bomb blast marne wale ke naamo me ek naam jane mane busnessman ranveer thakur ke bete abhay thakur ka bhi h

or ye sunte hi ghar me kisi ko khushi hui kisi ko afsos pr 3 log ayise bhi the jinki aankho me aasu the

(Place 2 ek or badi haveli)

admi - haahahahhahaha thakur ka ek pilla to hamare bina kuch kiye hi mara gya

Admi_2 - yes sir or agle mahine ki hone wali kushti me hamara pahalwaan thakuro ke pahalwan ko hara kar unke jale pr or namak chidkega

admi_1 - ye khel tab khatm hoga jab ham thakuro ke ghar ki har aurat or ladki ko apni or apne pariwaar ke mardon ki rakhail bana dige
hahahahaha

(Place 3 unknown)

aurat - kya baat h lagta h bhag... Bhi hamare sath h tabhi to 1 1 karke sare thakuro ko utha raha h

admi - iske baad hame kya karna chaheye

aurat - hame kuch nahi karna h bas dekhna h or intzaar karna h thakuro ke kamzor hone kaa
fir ham thakuro ke ilake par bhi raaj krige

(Place 4 secret)

bichara ye to bina baat hi bali chad gya
hahaahahahahhaahha

(Place 5 unknown)

Ek admi bhagta hua aata h

or waha baithe 2re admi ke kaan me kuch kahta h

admi_2 - thakur sahab ko phone lagao ham khud unka dukh baatne jayige




or isi tarha se 5 alag alag jagha se gadiyo ke kafile chal dete h thakuro ke ilake m thakuro ka gam baatne

kuch sach me gam baatne jaa rahe the kuch jale par namak chidakne
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ab aage kya hoga koi guess

aaj hi aaj me 2nd update de raha hu
kuch like thodi sarhana or thode sawalo ki upeksha karta hu

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann

 

[andyking302]

Update - 12

recap -
or isi tarha se 5 alag alag jagha se gadiyo ke kafile chal dete h thakuro ke ilake m thakuro ka gam baatne

kuch sach me gam baatne jaa rahe the kuch jale par namak chidakne

Aab aage

Thakuro ke ghar matam ka mahol tha kuch dikhave ke liye ro rahe the kuch sach me ro rahe the to wahi
kisi ne apna dukh apne andar daba liya tha

Khair chaltii ka naam gadi h
or zindgi bhi to gadi jaise hi h

abhay ko bhulne me kisi ko zada time nahi laga
abhay to unke zahan me ek hawa ke jhoke ki tarha aaya tha jo aake kuch pal m hi guzar gya

To wahi kuch ke dil me abhay ek yaad ban kar rah gya tha
or yaadon chahe acchi ho ya buri
ek waqt baad unpar dhul jam hi jati h (is baat ko yaad rakhna is kahani or tumhari zindgi me aage kaam aayegi)

abhay ke kisi chahane wale ke dil m yaad dhundli hui to kisi ne usi yaad ko zindgi bana liya

or isi tarha 2 saal or bit gye
(Abhay ki zubani)

in 1 sal or 6 mahine m me mujhe shastro ka accha gyaan ho chuka tha me or sadhu maharaj sabhi pirsiddh mandir me ghum liye the

Pr abhi tak mujhe saniyasi ki upadhi nahi mili thi mere man me abhi bhi gussa tha
meri lakh koshisho ke baad bhi me apne andar ki bhavnao par kabu nahi pa_saka tha

aaj se 6 mahine pahle m or sadhu maharaj ladakh aaye the ek mandir darshan ke liye raat ko ham dono soye
subha jab meri aankh khuli to sadhu waha nahi the

mene socha woh kahi aas pass hi honge
pr dekhte hi dekhte pura din bit gya or raat ho gyi sadhu wapas nahi aaye woh raat mujhe pani pi kar hi guzarni padi

Mere pichle 1 saal or 6 mahine mujhe kabhi bhi bukh se pareshan nahi hona pada tha
sadhu maharaj ko dekhte hi bhakt apni shadha se kuch naa kuch de hi dete the

Sadhu maharaj or me thoda bahut kha pi lete the
hame utni bukh nahi lagti thi

kyuki ab maharaj nhi the to mene bhi mahnat majduri karke apna kaam chalana shuru kar diya tha

mene ek chez note ki thi ki jab tak sadhu maharaj mere sath the tab tak mujhe bukh kam hi lagti thi par jab se woh gye the mere bukh mere hostel ke dino se zada ho gyi thi
shayaad ye sadhu mahatma ke sath ka hi asar tha

mene ladakh me rukne ka hi faisla kiya tha
mere pass rukne ki 2 wajha thi
1 mujhe lagta tha ki sadhu wapas aayige
2 ye jagha bahut shant thi

(Mujhe ladakh aaye 6 mahine ho chuke the)

ek car jisme 3 ladkiya or 1 driver tha woh ladakh ki uchi pahadi par jaa rahe the jahase ek bahut hi khubsurat nazara dekhai deta tha

tabhai ek ladki ki nazar pahadi ke ek bilkul kone par khade ek ladke par padti h
us_ladke ke pass hi ek bag rakha hua tha jis par ek hare se rang ka gudda rakha hua tha

( Ab me ladki ko ladki 1,2,3 likhunga)

ladki_1 - gadi roko
ladki_2 - aryyy kya hua
ladki_1 - (gusse se) mene kaha naa roko gadi

idhar mujhe yaha 6 mahine ho chuke the me daily hi is jagha aake yoga kiya karta tha


aaj bhi m apne ek pair pe khade hoke surya namaskar krne ki jaa raha tha ki kisi ne mera hath pakad kar jor se piche khich liya

Abhi me usse kuch kahta yaa puchta usse pahle hi mere kano me ek ladki ki mithisi awaz padi

ladki - pagal ho kya jo itni si umar me marna cahte ho

me - par me

ladki - haa haa hame pata h me bada pareshan hu
Ghar me khana nahi h bhen ki shadi krani h
nokri nahi h
pr mar gye to socha h ghar walo ka kya hoga

ab uski baat sun kar mujhe gussa aaya

me - (chid kr) pagal ho kya ayisa kuch nahi h

isse zada m kuch bol nahi paya kyuki uski gadi fir se chal padi thi

ladki - ohhhhh matlab Ashiq ho

Me - aryyyy yaar tum

ladki - aryy yaar tum nahi samjhogi
kitna pyaar karta tha me usse yahi kahoge naa

ladki - hame sab pata h tum ladko ka aryy ek ladki ne kya chodd diya marne hi chale aaye

mene aaj tak sirf pagalo ke bare me suna tha aaj ek pagal mere samne hi thi

mujhe laga ki isse bahas karne ka faida nahi m apna beg or yoda ko lene aage jane laga
ki tabhi mere sar par kisi ne kuch or me behosh ho gya

ladki_2 - aree ye aapne kya kiya ye to khud hi mane jaa raha tha naa fir aapne kyu maara

ladki_1- hamne mara nahi bachaya h
ajib ladka h kisi ladki ke liye marna cahta h

ladki_2 - ab kya karna h

ladki_1- karna kya h yaha choda to uthte hi dubara marne jayega
ise sath leke chalte h

fir woh 3no ladki or driver abhay ko gadi me daalte h
tabhi ladki 3 ki nazar kuch dekh kar ruk jati h

ladki_3 - udhar dekho shayaad iska beg h

ladki_2 - par ye marte waqt beg kyu laya hoga

ladki_1- tum dono duffer ho aryy dekho us beg par toy rakha hua h
or ladke thodi na toy se khelte h ye zarur iski girlfriend ne ise gifts diye honge

Ladki_2 - awwww kitna pyaar karta h naa apni girlfriend se kash mujhe bhi koi ayisa mile

ladki_3 - ab aapka ho gya ho to us beg ka kya karna h

ladki_1- karna kya h bag bhi sath leke chalte h ham log 1 month ke liye yaha aaye h
is ek mahine me hi iski jaan bacha kar kuch punya kaa kaam karte chalige

Meri aankh khuli mere sar me dard ho raha tha
mene apne sar par hath laga kar dekhne ki koshish ki

par me apna hath hila nahi saka mere dono hath badhe hue the

Par jab mene bolne ki koshish ki to me bol bhi nahi paa raha tha

Mene jab apne halato par gor kiya to pata chala ki mere hath bandhe hue the mere pair bandhe hue the
or mere muh par bhi tape lagaya gya tha

ye sab dekh kar me dar gya mujhe laga mujhe kisi ne kidnappe kar liya h

mujhe lete lete 30 min ho gye the tabhi darwaja khulne ki awaz aayi
mene dekha to pata chala ye wahi pagal ladki h
jo mujhse kuch naa kuch bol rahi thi

ladki - chalo accha hua tum uth gye
Ham tumhare liye saaman lene gye the

uske baad woh mujhe kuch kapde or handcuffs dikhane lagi

Ladki - dekho ham ayise hi kisi ko marne nahi de sakte is liye hamne faisla liya h ki jab tak marne ka bhoot nahi utar jata tumhare sar se tum hamare sath hi rahoge

ladki- haa haa hame pata h tum yahi soch rahe hoge ki tum nahi manoge
pr hamare yaha koi kitna bhi naa kre ham use mana hi lete h
tume bhi ham mana hi lige

or pata nhi kya kya us ladki ki bad bad chalti rahi
par sach kahta hu mene aaj tak jitni bhi ladkiya dekhi thi ye unme sabse zada khubsurat thi

1 ghante or mujhe uski bad bad jhelni padi woh mujhe or gyaan deti usse pahle hi room me do ladkiya or aa gyi

ladki_2 - are Dipti kisse baat kar rahi ho

ab zara un ladkiyo ko introduce kar dete h

ladki -1 = Dipti
ladki_2= madhu
ladki _3= vishali

Dipti - dekho mare hue ladke ko hosh aa gya

me- (man me) kya kaha isne mara hua ladka
ye sabse badi pagal h

madhu- oye mare hue ladke
apna naam btao

Me (manne) - muh pe tape lagake puch rahi h


vishali- ary pagal madhu pahle apna naam bataya jaata h

fir unhone mujhe apne naam bataye or apni bak bak fir shuru kar di
pr abhi bhi mere muh se tape nahi hataya

me- ummm ummmm

dipti - dekho mare hue ladke hame pata h tum tape hatane ko kah rahe ho par ham nahi krige ye
agar tum chilla diye to ye hotel wale hame tumhara kidnapper samajhke police ko de dige

or police hame pakad kar jail m daal dige
tume pata h agar ye baat hamare mata pita ko pata chali to woh hamara kya krige

me -(manme) ye pagal tune mujhe kidnappe hi kiya h or kis zamane me rahti h tu mata pita kon bolta h

par mujhe toilate lag rahi thi zor ki or me wahi batane ki koshish kar raha tha
pr woh chup hi nahi ho rahi thi

Dipti - haa hame pata h ab tum yahi soch rahe hoge naa ki agar bologe nahi to tum hame kaise bataoge ki tume kab bukh lagi h kab tume susu poti jana h
to hamne uske liye ishare banaye h
1 ungli matlab susu
2 ungli matlab poti
3 ungli matlab khana

Me -(manme) OOO pagalo ki kul devta khana khilate waqt bhi to muh bholna hi padega naa
fir itni mahnat kar kyu rahi h tu

mene turant hi ishara karke 1 ungli dikhadi

dipti - mare hue ladke tum to bhare hue baithe ho insaan thoda to sabar karta h naa

Dipti - vishali jao use kra ke lao
vishali - nahi nahi madhu tu jaa
madhu - mujhe ladko ko krana nhi aata tum dono hi kuch kro

dipti - ek kaam karte h iski aankho par patti bandh kar toilate krate h isko pata hi nahi chalega

me(manme) - nanga to mujhe hona h Sharma ye sab kyu rahi h mujhse bhi to koi pucho ki mujhe tumhare samne karna h ya nahi

khair meri aankho me patti bandh kar mujhe bathroom leke jaya gya

dipti - (mere kaan me dhere se) ab tum kar sakte ho

Us pagal ko ye nahi pata tha ki bhale hi meri aankh band h par me uski awaz to sun sakta hu naa
pr uski awaz itni mithi thi ki meri puri body me sansanhat mach gyi

khair isi tarha waqt bita or khana khane ka time aa gya
ab room me khana rakha hua tha
or woh 3no mere idhar udhar baithi hui thi
par unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mera muh khole ya nahi
akhir dipti ko hi bolna pada

dipti - dekho mare hue ladke ham tumhara muh khol rahe h plzz chillana mat ham jail nahi jana cahte

ye bolte waqt woh itni Masum or pyaari lag rahi thi ki bata nahi sakta

fir darte darte usne muhpe se type hataya or me chup chap khana khane laga

sach to ye tha ki mujhe unke sath accha lagne laga tha me
mujhe kafi saal ho gye the
jab kisi ne ek din me mujhse itni baat ki thi
ye sab meri body me sansani paida karne ke liye kafi tha
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Abhi ke liye itna hi par aaj ek bada update or aayega

Koi guess aage kya hoga

Nice update

 

[andyking302]

Update - 13

(Recap - aaj hi to update diya h aaj bhi recap loge)

khair raat ho chuki thi pure din se dipti mujhe zindgi or uski khubsurti ke bare m bata rahi thi

or me uski khubsurti me khoya hua tha
pata nhi kyu me usse apni nazrein nahi hata paa raha tha

or woh bas apni bad bad par dhiyaan diye hue thi

ab sone ki bari thi or dipti ke cahre se pareshani jhalak rahi thi

dipti - mare hue ladke dekho hamare pass bas 2 rooms h ek me woh dono h or isme ham dono ko sona h
pr ham kabhi kisi ladke ke sath ek room me raat ko nahi ruke

me kuch nahi kah raha tha bas use dekhe jaa raha tha

dipti - ohhhoo mare hue ladke tum kuch bolte hi nahi
accha muh kholte h tumhara chillana nhi

pichli baar khana khate time bhi me chup chap tha isliye mera muh kholte waqt use zada dar nahi laga

me - tum fikr mat kro me bahar so jauga

dipti - mare hue ladke tum hame pagal nahi bana sakte hame pata h tum dubara marne ki koshish kroge

(Me cahta to use bata sakta tha ki woh galat soch rahi h par mujhe pata tha
agar use pata chala ki
me nahi marne wala tha to woh mujhe khud se dur kar degi)

Me - (sad face ke sath) tum sach me samajhdaar ho
ok me isi room me so jata hu tum andar se lock kardo

me use bas dekhte rahna cahta tha isi liye ye bola tha kyuki mujhe itna to pata chal hi gaya tha ki ye bacho jaisi h

dipti - (manme) kahi iska plan hamare sone ke baad yaha se bhagne ka to nahi h tabhi itni aasani room me rahne ke liye maan gya
par ise ayise bandha to ise kitni taklif hogi

dipti- dekho mare hue ladke tum zada smart mat bano hame pata h
hamare sone ke baad tumhara marne kaa plan h
idhar hath do apna

mene apna hath dipti ki taraf bhadaya par waise hi dipti ne ek handcuff mere hath me daal diya or uska dusra hissa apne hath me bandh liya

dipti - mare hue ladke ab tum cah kar bhi nahi bhag sakte

iske baad dipti ne ham dono ke bich pillow ki diwaal banai or aankhain band karke lait gyi

mujhe pata tha itni jaldi woh soyi nahi hogi is liye me bhi uski taraf nahi dekh raha tha

par shayaad ham dono ke hi din tezi se dhadak rahe the
or shayaad ye ham dono ke liye hi ye pahla moka tha jab ham dono hi kisi ladke ya ladki ke sath ek hi room me the

dipti- mare hue ladke ham tumse ek baat puche

me - hmmm

Dipti - tumhara naam kya h

ab ye sawaal sun kar me hadbada gya tha kyuki abhay thakur duniya ke liye mar chuka tha or me itne salo se anatho wali hi zindgi ji raha tha
pichle 2 salo se kisi ne kabhi mera naam nahi pucha tha or agar pucha bhi to mene has kar taal diya
par aaj me nahi taal sakta tha or naa hi taalna cahta tha

me - abhi

dipti- accha naam h

uske baad usne kuch nahi pucha or so gyi
me bahut raat tak use hi dekhta raha pr fir meri bhi aankh lag gyi

Subha jab meri nind khuli to mere uper kuch wajan wajan sa laga
mene aankh khol kar jab dekha to dipti mere sine par sar rakh kar so rahi h

me bata nahi sakta mujhe us waqt kaise feel ho raha tha mera dil use chumne ka kar raha tha
par me use bas dekhta hi raha
30 min baad uski body me halchul hui to mene apni aankhin band karli

dipti - ne jab apni aankhain kholi to use abhi ka cahra dikha

dipti (manme)- kitna pyaara lag raha h naa ye sote hue kon bewakuf ladki thi jo itne acche ladke ko chhod kar chali gyi

par fir dipti apna hath khol kar bathroom chali gyi or waha se pani girne ki awaz aane lagi me samajh gya woh naha rahi h

dipti - abhi abhi tum jaag rahe ho kya

me samajh gya tha ki woh cheq kar rahi h ki me jaag raha hu ya nahi
Kyuki mene dekha woh jaag kar sidha hi bathroom chali gyi thi

me - haa me jaag raha hu

dipti - to kya tum thodi der ke liye bahar jaa sakte ho mujhe change karna h

me - ok me chala jata hu

dipti - (manme) aryy kahi ye moka dekh kar mar naa jaye

dipti - nhi nhi tum bas apna muh dusri taraf karke apni aankhain band karlena

mene muh dusri taraf kar liya kuch second baad mujhe darwaza khulne ki awaz aayi
mene socha kyu na ise pareshan kiya jaye

mene apni aankhain kholi or me ye bol kar use darane wala tha ki me palat raha hu ki

tabhi mujhe samne wale chote shishe me se mene dekha ki woh apni bra ka hukk bandh rahi h
uski body uska figure sab kamal kaa tha
me apni palkain jhapkana bhul gya

khair usne kapde pahne or uske baad me bhi bathroom me fresh hone gya

ab mere din isi tarha bit rahe the
me or dipti 24 ghante sath rahte
din me woh log alag alag jagha ghumne jate or sare waqt dipti mujhe apni bak bak sunati rahti

me kam hi bolta tha par jaise haa hu accha
dipti kamre me mere hath me handcuff lagake rakhti or bahar jati to ek pal ke liye bhi mera hath aapne hath se alag naa karti

Ab ham dono hi Kai Kai baar ek dusre ki aaonkon me kho jate the hame samajh nahi aa raha tha ye konsi feeling h
kam se kam mujhe to nahi

mere abhi tak dipti ko apni pichli zindgi ke bare m kuch nahi bataya tha
mene bataya tha mujhe nahi pata mere maa baap kon h mene jabse hosh sambhala khud ko army training camp me hi paya tha
or ye baat kahi tak sahi bhi thi

meri kahani jaan kar uski aankhon me aasu aa gye the or usne mujhe gale se laga liya tha ye pahli baar tha jab kisi ne mujhe gale se lagaya tha
last time mujhe yaad nahi kisne mujhe gale se lagaya tha

khair dipti ne mujhe bataya ki woh madhu or vishali 3no hi dost h or ghar walo se zidd karke 1 month ke liye ghumne ke liye aaye h

madhu or vishali bhi kai baar hamara mazak udaya karti thi jaise Laila Majnu Heer Ranjha
Or pata nahi kya kya bolti thi

isi tarha haste khelte mazak masti me kab 28 din nikal gye pata hi nahi chala

ek raat dipti mujhe room me band karke madhu or vishali ke pass chali gyi
jab woh wapas aayi to thodi serious lag rahi thi

ye pahli baar tha jab mene dipti ko serious dekha tha

me - kya hua koi pareshani h kya

dipti - kuch nahi so jao kal baat krige

Dusre din jab meri aankh khuli to dekha dipti pahle se hi taiyaar baithe h

dipti - ye lo apne kapde taiyaar ho jao ham bahar chal rahe h

mene kapde pahne or chal diye car me baith kar ek sunsaan jagha dipti ne car roki

dipti - abhi me tumse kuch kahna cahti hu

ye sun kar mera din tez tez dhak dhak karne laga mere kaan garam ho gaye the
itna andaza to mujhe bhi tha
Bas pahal karne ki himmat nahi thi

dipti - abhi i love you

bas itna sunte hi mere sharir me jhunjhuni doud gyi me khushi me nachana cahta tha par ham ladke man me chahe jitne khayali pulaw banale jab kahne ki bari aati h to zubaan ko lakwa maar jata h

wahi aaj mere sath hua me use i love you 2 to bolna cahta tha par awaz gale me se bahar hi nahi aa rahi thi

dipti - tumhe meri kasam h abhi kuch mat bolo
Ham naa nahi sun sakte

ye ladki sach me hi pagal thi kasam de kar mere muh par tala lagwa diya

khair uske baad woh kuch nahi boli or me cah kar bhi bol nahi saka

ham dono hotel pahuche to veshali or madhu hamara hi wait kar rahe the
par dipti ki shakal dekh kar hi woh samajh gye ki kuch to gadbad h

woh dipti ko apne room me le gye
me dipti or apne room me aa gya ab dipti ne naa bolne ke liye kasam di thi me cahta to likh kar bata sakta tha ki me bhi usse pyaar karta hu
par usme feel nahi aati

mene socha kyu naa kuch acche fool dekar dipti ko parpose kiya jaye

me nikal gya fool lene is baat se be khabar ki aage mere sath kya hone wala h
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ab aage kya hoga abhay ke sath
konsi nayi musibat intzaar kar rahi h abhay ka
ya koi purani degi abhay ke darwaze par dastak

comment karke btao

Nice update bha

 

[MAD. MAX]

Hum writer ki jo marji hogi wahi hoga Ab suno duniya me kuch bhi free nai hai sab hasil karna padta hai agar aap me dam hai to sab aapko chahegen han ek cheez free me mil jati aksar ma ki mamta baki sab kamana padta hai bhai

Maa ki mamta kamani pdti hai ek chote bachee ko bi jise jnme hue kuch 2 din hue ho ky uspe bi ye laagoo hota hai ky bhai

 

[MAD. MAX]

story hai ye real noi hai uske baad kahun to jo bhi hota achche ke liye hota hai aap jaisa bol rahe wo sab normal aadmi ke liye sahi hai lekin jo special hote unko jada sangharsh karna padhta I think you understand

अरे भाई, स्टोरी है ये सही बात है, लेकिन ये शकुनी और अपशकुनी वाला कांसेप्ट असली जिंदगी में भी होता है, और गांव देहात में आजकल भी एक लड़के को कम और दूसरे को ज्यादा माना जाता है, हां स्टोरी होने की वजह से कुछ exaggerated रूप में दिखाया है। पर होता है ये सब

leave this topic brother duniya ma bahut kuch hota hai hum to darshak hain bas aage writer ka dimaag badal jata reader sab kara dete hain lekin fir wo baat nai rah jati hai writer ko apne hisaab se chalne deo dekhte kya hota hai

Hum sirf apni apni thinking share kr skte hai
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Lekin writer ki thinking ni badal skte hai
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Q ki usne story continue rakhne ke lye pehle se sb tyaar kr rakha hai
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Islye enjoy kro aane update me ky hota hai

 

[andyking302]

Update- 14
Recap -
mene socha kyu naa kuch acche fool dekar dipti ko parpose kiya jaye

me nikal gya fool lene is baat se be khabar ki aage mere sath kya hone wala h

(mega update)

Bhaiya woh ful kitne ka diya

Ful wala - 50 ka 1

me - bhaiya ladki ke liye lene h konse dun or itne me kitne aa jayinge

ye bol kar mene use 500 ka note diya

ful wala - aryy sahab ayisa bolo naa ladki ka chakkar h
to ladki ke liye woh gulab wala fashion purana ho gya
ab to bookey (guldasta) lagta sahab
pr aap tensn nako lo me itne me bhi bana ke deta

ye bol ke ek thik thak sa bokey bana kar mujhe pakda diya

me aaj bahut khush tha or ye kehna bhi galat nahi hoga ki jabse me paida hua hu ye meri life ka sabse khushi din tha

mujhe pyaar hua tha or sabse khushi ki baat ye thi ki jisse me pyaar karta tha usne khud mujhe parpose kiya tha

me bokey leke hotel ki taraf jaa hi raha tha tabhi kuch police walo ne mujhe rok liya

Hawaldaar - kyu bhai badi jaldi me dikh raha chal idhar aa chequing krwa

me - aryy sir jane do naa jaldi me hu or mere pass to koi bike or car bhi nahi h
to meri kis baat ki cheking

h - muh naa chala ladke idhar aa

mene bhi socha kyu faltu ki bahas karna jaldi se cheking krata hu or dipti ke pass jata hu
waise bhi konsa me charas ganja supply kar raha tha

Me - lelo sir or jaldi se free kro

h - haa woh to dekhte h

hawaldar mujhe cheq karne laga pahle mere pair fir jeb fir belt or fir shirt

par jaise hi uska hath meri shirt ki jeb par pada
usne jaldi se andar hath daal kar usme se ek ring nikali

pahle to meri kuch samajh nahi aaya par jab aaya to meri bhi aankhain fati ki fati rah gyi itni mahgi anguthi meri jeb me kaha se aayi

or dekhne se hi woh lakho ki lag rahi thi sone ki uper shayaad hira bhi laga hua tha

aaguthi dekh kar police wale bhi sawdhan ho gye or jaldi se mujhe pakad kar hatkadi lagadi
jab tak mere kuch samajh aata me police jeep me tha

me- sir meri baat suniye ye ring meri nahi h

H- haa teri nahi h isi liye to pakda h tujhe
kisi or ki chura ke bhaga h

me - nahi sir mene kisi ka kabhi kuch nahi churaya mujhe to pata bhi nahi woh ring kaha se aayi meri jeb me

Likin woh meri koi baat sunne ko taiyaar hi nahi the akhirkaar ham pahuch gye
police station

hawaldaar - sahab pakad laya ise jine aaj subha 10 lakh ka sona udaya tha

me sunke dar gya 10 lakh mere sapno me bhi kabhi ek sath nahi aaye the ye churane ki baat kar raha tha


daroga - (Hariyanvi me) ke bhai Ghana Tees maar Khan samjhe h khudne
tanne ke sochi police pakad payegi ko ni

me - sir mene koi chori nhi ki sach bol raha hu

daroga - haa haa maan liya tanne naa ki
Yo aaguthi baki ke gahno ke sath pade pade bore ho rahi thi is liye nikal gyi tere sath ghumne

ye sun sabhi police wale hasne lage

daroga - dekh chore sachi sachi bol de sone ka haar or payal kidhar h
tanne pata bhi h kaha hath saaf kiya h tune
bata de warna hame or tarike bhi aave h

me - sir me kasam kha ke kah sakta hu mera kisi chori me koi hath nahi h

daroga - ayise ye bole ko ni le jao isne

mujhe sab police walo ne jail me daal diya or fir unhone mujhpe laat ghuse barsana shuru kar diye
jab 10 mint mujhe sahi se pit liya tab fir daroga aaya

daroga - bata chore kaha h sona

me -(dard se karhate hue) sir mujhe nhi pata me sach bol raha hu

daroga - ok mene maanli teri baat aryy koi ladke ki dawa daru karwao

me ins..... Ki baat sun kar khush ho gya ki kam se kam police ko meri baat ka yakin to aaya

par tabhi baki ke sare police wale hasne lage mujhe unki hasi kuch samajh nahi aayi

hawaldar1- ji sahab acche se karte h

or thodi hi der m jake lathi or dande le aaya

me- nahi nhi mujhe mat maarna me sach bol raha hu mene kuch nahi kiya

par kuchi der me waha mere dard se karhane or rone awazain aa rahi thi

me - nhiiii aaaaaaa matttt maro aaaaahhhh
mujhe chod do sahab

wahi dusri taraf ins.... Kisi se phone par baat kar raha tha

daroga - sun liya maidam jaisa aapne kaha tha 3rd degree de rahe h sale ko

2nd parson - hmmm bas dhiyaan rahe mare naa
or itna maarna ki kuch dino tak sahi se uth naa paye

idhar meri dhunai hoti rahi woh sone ki puchte par mere pass konsa sona tha

me subha se hi maar kha raha tha mere pairo ki halat kharaab thi
me sahi se apne hath nahi utha pa raha tha
ab mere muh se awaz bhi nahi nikal rahi thi

par ab mujhe chot ka ahsaas nahi ho raha tha
purani choto ke zakh hi itne ho gye the

khair mujhe acchi tarha se pitne ke baad woh mujhe chhod ke chale gye

Ab mujhe pade pade raat ho gyi thi
mujhe baar baar dipti ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi mujhe pata tha ki woh mere liye pareshan ho rahi hogi

pr meri to aankhain bhi sahi se nahi khul rahi thi me waha pade pade hi so gya
subha daroga ki awaz se meri aankh khuli

ins- maidam dekho jaisi aapne kahi thi bilkul same modle banaya h hamne

ladki- hmm

Ye bol usladki ne apne hath se ek mota sa lifafa diya or chalti bani
mene uski halkisi jhalak dekhi woh mujhe jani pahchanisi lagi

par me itne dard me tha ki kuch naa bol paa raha tha naa hi mujhe sahi se kuch dekhai de raha tha
par itna to me samajh hi gaya tha ki mujhe kisine fasaya h

Par bahut sochne ke baad bhi mere dimag me koi naam nahi aaya
or jo aaye unke liye me 2 saal pahle hi mar chuka tha

khair mujhe waha jail me aaj 3 din ho chuke the aaj meri halat thodi theek thi

me - sir kya me ek phone kar sakta hu

hawaldaar ne pahle mujhe thodi der dekha fir bol

h- haa karle
Or bol kar sell ka lock khol diya

me ladkhadate kadmo se bahar nikla
mere hath or pair usdin ki maar ki wajha se abhi sahi se ubhre nahi the

mene phone uthaya mere hath me abhi bhi bahut dard tha par
ye dard dipti se baat karne ki khushi se kam tha
mera aaj call karna zaruri bhi tha kyuki mujhe yaad tha ki agar mene aaj call nahi kiya to dipti wapas chali jayegi

mene hotel call kiya
udhar se receptionist ne call uthaya

me - hello kya me room number 105 me dipti Singh se baat kar sakta hu

R- ok apna naam bataye

me - me abhi

r - ok sir let me check

fir thodi der baad receptionist ne kaha

r- sorry sir par miss dipti Singh ne 2 din pahle hi checkout kar liya tha
par aaka yani mr. Abhi ka saman hamare pass hi h aap jab chahe claim kar sakte h

Pahle jaha dipti ke jane ki khabar sun kar mera dil ghabra gya tha wahi mera saman sun mujhe thodi rahat mili
Or mere dimag me ek idea aaya

Khair isi tarha din bitne lage
Ab me dheere dheere thik ho raha tha
Mene police walo ki chaplusi shuru kardi thi
Me unki malish karta baatin karta
Or meri mahnat rang bhi layi 15 hi din baad unhone mujhe chhod diya
Mujhe hotel or waha se jaldi se dipti ke pass jana tha

Me hotel pahucha or receptionist se saman maga usne mujhe saman diya

Me - miss kya mere doston ne mere liye koi or msg choda h

R - nhi sir koi msg nahi choda

Me - miss kya mujhe mere friends ka address mil sakta h

Receptionist mujhe ajib nazron se dekhne lagi
Soch rahi hogi kaisa dost h apne friends ka address bhi nahi pata

R- sorry sir ye hamare policy ke khilaf h

Me - par woh mere dost h

R- ohhh ab me samjho majra kya h
sir ye ladakh h yaha aksar hi log enjoy karne aate h
Ladkiya aksar ayisa karti h jab woh family or apne boyfriend ke bina aati h kisi ladke ke sath maze karti h or chali jati h

Kuch ladko ko ye pata hota h or woh bhi enjoy karte h
kuch tum jaise diwane hote h piche pad jate h
tum pahle nahi ho jiske sath ye hua h

mujhe uski bakwas par bahut gussa aa raha tha
par mene kuch nahi kaha or toilate ki taraf bhad gya

me 4ro taraf nazar ghuma raha tha ki mujhe kuch ayisa mil jaye ki me hotel ke reception se dipti ka pata nikaal saku

me toilate m jake khada ho gya or sochne laga tabhi meri nazar fire alarm par padi
or mujhe mera idea mil gya
mene toilate m hi kisi admi se lighter maga or chal diya apna kaam karne

me hotel m 28 din tak tha mujhe pata tha is kaam ke liye konsi jagha sahi rahegi
me hotel ke ek ayise area m gya jaha kisi ki nazar naa pade or kuch kapde apne beg se nikaal kar usme aag lagadi

thodi hi der m hotel m sairan bajne lage or bhagdar ka mahol ban gya
log idhar se udhar bhag rahe the
hotel staff logo ko sambhalne me laga tha
me jaldi se reception aria me gya or computer cheq karne laga


par mujhe dipti naam se do din pahle koi bhi boking nahi mili
mene jaldi se usme madhu search kiya to uske naam se mil gya mene jaldi se address note kiya or nikal gya

1 ghante baad me station par tha train mere saamne khadi thi
Par merii himmat nahi ho rahi thi train me chadne ki
Kyuki ye train usi shahar jaa rahi thi jisne hamesha hi mujhe dard diya
mene himmat ki or chad gya train me
me jaanta tha saalo ho gye the us shehar se wasta khatm hue
ab apne ghar walo ke saamne se bhi guzar jau to pahchanige nahi

m apne shehar jaa raha tha (shaher or baki ki sari information aapko intro me mil jayegi jo kal aayega zadatar patte kal khul jayige)

me ek ghar nhi nhi
banglow naaa ye bhi nhi
haveli nhi bilkul nhi

mahal haa ise yahi kahna sahi hoga

me ek mahal ke samne khada tha
Woh ek bahut bada mahal tha saja dhaja koi 100 log aaa jaa rahe the mera to ise dekh ke hi muh fata ka fata rah gya tha

mere samne se woh jaa rahi thi or mene use awaz di.......

hua asal me ye ki mere sahar aate aate mujhe 20 ghante lage the train se
time sham ke 6 baj gye the
mene auto kiya or chal diya madhu ke ghar ki taraf

par jab me waha pahucha to dekha madhu full taiyaar hoke ek badi si car me baith rahi thi
me madhu ko kuch bolta tab tak woh us car me baith kar nikal chuki thi

Or ab ham yaha the ek bade se mahal ke samne
me - madhu madhu suno

madhu ne meri awaz suni or usne jab palat kar dekha to mujhe dekh kar chauk gyi

madhu - tum yaha kya kar rahe ho or kaha gayab ho gye the tum

me - usdin me ek musibat me pad gya tha
Usse bahar nikalne me time lag gya jab wapas aaya tab tak tum log nikal chuke the
Ab jaldi se btao dipti kaha h mujhe usse milna h
kya woh bhi party h aayi h

dipti kaa naam sun kar madhu ka cahra safeed pad gya tha

madhu - nahi nahi tum usse nahi mil sakte tume uske bare m kuch nahi pata

me - dekho plzz mujhe dipti se milna h plzzz meri madat karo agar tum nahi krogi to jaise mene tume dhunda h dipti ko bhi dhund hi luga

meri baat sunkar madhu thodi der shant khadi rahi

madhu - me tume dipti ko dikha sakti hu par usse milna naa milna tum baad me decide kroge
or plzz is party me koi tamasha mat karna

mujhe madhu ki baat samajh nhi aayi par mene par mene ok kar diya
or waise bhi me konsa hangama karne wala tha

madhu ne mera hath pakda or side m le gyi

Madhu - tumhare pass jo sabse acche kapde ho unhe pahanlo

mene bina sawaal kiya waisa hi kiya
madhu ne mera hath pakda or andar le jane lagi
Gate par gard ne ek baar roka bhi par madhu ko dekh kar fir jane diya

waha itni security thi jitni pm ke pass hoti h

me- yaha koi mantri santri rahta h kya
or itna bada mahal kisi raja ka h kya

Madhu - sahi samjhe ab chup chap chalo

ham andar party me pahuch chuke the waha ek se ek log the par ek rob daar 40 50 saal ka admi stage par baitha hua tha uske sath me koi khubsurat si 35 40 saal ki aurat thi

madhu - dekha tumhari wajha se late ho gye raja sahab aaj major annoucement karne wale h

me- par mujhe kya karna mujhe btao dipti kaha h yaha to dekhai nahi de rahi

Madhu - shanti se dekho sab samajh aa jayega

tabhi us raja ne Mike apne hath me liya
or taliya bajne lagi raja ne hath uper kiya
or sabko shant kraya

Raja - mene aap sabko yaha ek zaruri baat karne ke liye bulaya h

aaj se kai saal pahle hamare pita suargiya raja mahaveer singh ne hamare rajya ko dusman se surakshit rakhne ke liye hamare rajya ke 4 hisse kiye

or un 4ro hisso ko 4 bade or tagatwar pariwaro me baat diya

parntu tagat or zada tagat ke lalach me 4ro pariwaar ek dusre ke dushman ban baithe h
pichle kuch salo se sabhi ek dusre ke khun ke pyaase h

is sab ko rokne or apne rajya ko majbut banane ke liye hamne or charo(4ro) pariwaar ke mukhiyao ne
ek faisla liya h

to aaj ham ye ghoshna karte h ki ham raja jai veer singh apni putri dipti Singh ka vivha


thakur pariwaar ke bete (A.R.A.V - T.H.A.K.U.R) sath pakka karte h

Raja ki baat sun kar sabhi taliya or sitiya baja rahe the

par me ek dum sunn ho gya tha mujhe 1 sath 2 2 jhatke jo lage the
1 dipti ki shadi tay ho rahi thi
2 thakur pariwaar mera pariwar Arav mera bhai
aaj ek baar fir meri zindgi me dastak dene ke liye taiyaar khade the

ek baar fir mujhe lut lena chahata tha mera pariwar meri sari khushiya chenn lena cahta tha

Jab kisi ka hath mere kandhe par pada to mujhe hosh aaya madhu ne mujhe mere dar or jhatke se bahar nikala

me - y ye ye nhi ho sakta ye log zabardasti uski shadi kisi se kaise kra sakte h

madhu - shant raho thoda sabar kro sab samajh aa jayega

sabhi log - rajkumari ki jai ke nare laga rahe the

ek dum se andhera hua or light ka focus gya vip aria me baithe hue ek handsome se ladke par

Or public ke nare badal gye sabhi log arav Arav ke nare lagane lage

meri aankhain laal ho rahi thi mera salo purana bada hua gussa aaj bahar aane ki kagar par tha

jisne mujhse aaj tak mera sab chhen liya tha aaj ek baar fir woh mera pyaar chenne aaya tha ye me kaise hone dega

me aage bhadta par madhu ne mera hath kas ke pakad liya

or tabhi light ka focus ek baar fir gya mahal ke darwaze par
waha woh khadi thi
green lahge me uski patli kamar uski aankhain uske baal or woh gol gol ghumti lat jo uske hotho tak aati thi


pr mere shok ki wajha woh nahi thi khubsurat to woh hamesha se thi
par woh uski muskaan woh mujhse pyaar karti thi 20 din pahle ro rahi thi kasme khila rahi thi
aaj ek muskaan ke sath kisi or se sagai karne jaa rahi thi

Ek baar fir raja ki awaz mere kano me padi

raja - aap log ye naa soche ki rajkumari ki shadi thakuro me kra kar ham unhe zada tagat de rahe h

hamne or 4ro pariwaro ke mukhiyao ne mil kar ye faisla liya h ki agar rajkumari thakur pariwaar me jaa rahi h
to badle me thakur pariwar ki 3no betiyo ki shadi baki 3no pariwaro me hogi

mahurat ke hisaab se agle kuch salo me sabhi ki shadi kardi jayegi

me - ye kaise ho sakta h woh to mujhse pyaar karti h
or ye bol kar me aage jane laga

madhu - (sad voice) kya tum bhi uski baaton me aa gye

ye sun kar mere kadam Apne aap ruk gye

me - ma matlab

madhu - woh hamesha hi ladko ke sath ayisa hi karti h aaj tak usne apni life me sirf ek ladke se pyaar kiya h
jisse aaj uski shadi tay ho rahi h

me - nhi ye nhi ho sakta tum juth. Bol rahi ho
tum sath thi naa tumne dekhi thi uski halat

madhu- log aksar uski shakl or bholi baton me aa jate h
hame to adat h

me - nhi mujhe vishwaas nahi tumhari baaton par

madhu ne meri taraf dekha or mera hath pakad kar kahi le jane lagi
Woh mujhe ek kone me leke gyi thi
waha jaa kar usne kisi ko phone kiya
thodi hi der me waha ek or ladki khadi thi .... Vishali

madhu - (rote hue) ab isse pucho jo mene kaha woh sach h yaa juth

me - bolo veshali kya ma madhu ne jo kaha wo wo woh sach h

me hakla raha tha meri awaz me kapan thi
meri baat sun kar veshali ne kuch nahi kaha or apni gardan niche karli

meri aankho ke aasu ab bahar bahne lage the
aaj me duniya ko khatm kar dena cahta tha
aaj ek or rishte se dhoka khaya tha mene

me waha se muda or bina kuch kahe chalta bana

(Raat 12 bje)

me station par khada tha me aaj sach me mara tha
mere pass naa ab jine ki wajha thi naa me marna cahta tha

khair thodi der me waha ek train aake ruki mujhe nahi pata woh kaha jaa rahi thi par me usme baith gya

raat 2 bje me ek seat pr baitha tha mere hatho me wahi tha mera bachpan ka pakka dost yoda me use gale lagake aasu bahaye jaa raha tha ki

mene dekha ek ladka or ke orat toilate ki taraf ja rahe h
Ab meri jo umar thi usme me itna jaan gya tha ki ye kyu jaa rahe h

kyuki meri seat us orat or ladke se zada dur nahi thi to me ye bhi jaanta tha ki ye orat apne bete or beti ke sath aayi h

fir bhi ye kisi anjaan ke sath bina ye soche ki agar uske bete ya beti ko pata chala to unpar kya guzregi

me bhale hi apna dard kam karne ke liye kuch nahi kar sakta tha par kisi or ko milne se to bacha hi sakta tha

15 20 min baad mene dekha orat toilate se bahar nikli
or me toilate ke pass jake khada ho gya or jaise hi woh ladka bahar aaya
baki kaa to aapko pata hi h

( Yaha meri last story ki baat chal rahi h (Mathura to bombay)

ab me niche gir raha tha meri abhi tak ki sari zindgi meri nazron ke samne se guzar gyi thi
me is duniya ko mere dard ko sab alvida kahta hu

Or boooom..........

(Flashback end)

3 saaal baaad

kuch jhalak

1
hahahahaahaha ab bas kuch waqt or fir use apni randi banauga

2
Ek admi jiske samne ek taswir thi
tune apni barbadi ka plan khud banaya h ab bas thoda intzaar or karna h

3
tume use moka dena chaheye or dekho to woh h bhi to kitna accha

(Sad voice) hmm tum shayad sahi kahti ho

4
kash koi chamatkar ho jaye hyyy bhag..n mujhe bachale (rote hue)

5
sharab pite hue satta bas kuch dur h hamse bas thoda intzaar or karna h

6
ek jungle kali Ghani Andheri raat me ek ujala chamakta h

orat- par ham us satta ke liye jo kurbani de rahe h uska kya



Bisaat bich chuki thi har piyada apni chal chal raha tha

khel apne rang dikhane wala tha har koi apne pass ek hukum ka ikka chupaye baitha tha
par khel khelne walo ko ye nahi pata tha is khel me ek naye khiladi ki entry jaldi hi hone wali h
jo bisaat palat sakta h


usi jungle me ek light chamakti h or ek awaz aati h jo acche acche ka dil dahlane ke liye kafi thi


Nayak nahi khal nayak hu main
Nayak nahi khal nayak hu main
Zulmi bada dukh dayak hu main
hai pyaar kya mujhko kya khabar
bas yaar nafrat ke layak hu main
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ab mujhe btao ki abhay ke traning part ko dikhana h ya nahi
Short ya long

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann

 

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Waiting for new update bhai