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Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
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UPDATE- 118

Rajnandini vaha se chali gayi shree ke paas sone ke liye…maine uth kar darwaja andar se lock kiya aur agni ko bistar par le aaya....vahi margret ne jab dekha ki sab so gaye hain to vah chupke se uth kar vo sutli wala patakha liya aur pahuch gayi chitra ke paas...jaha vo gahri neend me thi.

Margret (mann me)—ab maza chakhati hu isko….bahut pareshan kiya hai isne mujhe aur sonalika ko….

Bas kya tha ye soch kar usne uss sutli wale bomb ko chitra ke dono pairo ke beech jaangho ke nikat rakha aur machis jala kar usme aag laga di….aag lagate hi fauran vaha se bhaag kar apne bed par let gayi aur dhamaka hone ka intazar karne lagi.

Idhar maine agni ko apni baaho me bhar kar uska ghoonghat uthaya hi tha ki tabhi…….

Ab aage…..

Maine agni ka ghoonghat uske khubsurat chehre se hataya hi tha ki tabhi jor se kuch fatne aur kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz kano me sunayi padi….jise sun kar hum dono bhi chounk gaye.

Darwaja khol kar main jaise hi bahar nikla to chitra ke chillane ki awaz aa rahi thi…baki sab bhi apne apne room se bahar aa gaye…main turant uske paas pahuch gaya jo ki apne dono pair jod kar baithi huyi chilla rahi thi…uske niche ke kapde bhi jal gaye the.

Aadi—kya baat hai chitra..tum cheekhi kyo…?

Chitra (chillati huyi)—main uss kutiya ko chhodungi nahi….haaye….randi ne meri usme hi bomb phod diya…

Megha—beti..kisne aur kisme kya phod diya…?

Chitra—aaaahhhh….maa ji main ab apko kaise batau…? Ye sab uss margret ka kiya dhara hai…mujhe sote dekh kar usne chupke se mere pairo ke beech me bomb phod diya…mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai vaha par..aaaaa

Adii—abhi theek ho jayega tumhara dard..

Maine uske sir par hath rakh kar ankhe band kar li thodi hi der me uska dard jata raha….maine rajnandini ko chitra aur margret dono ko samjhane ko kaha.

Rajnandini ne dono ko apne room me bula kar samjhaya…margret aur chitra, dono ne apni apni galtiyo ke liye ek dusre se mafi maang li…kintu chitra mujhe chhod kar jane ke liye taiyar nahi huyi phir bhi….sanyog se uss samay shree bhi vahi moujud thi…jab usne sari baate suni to uske dil me chitra aur margret dono ke liye gussa aur mujhse doori ke liye uske dil me dard paida hone laga..magar rajnandini ki moujudgi ki vajah se vah shant rah gayi.

Idhar maine agni ko uska patni hone ka adhikar de diya…aaj ki raat vah khil kar kali se phool ban gayi thi….iss sambhog se agni ko apni sabhi shaktiyo ka gyan ho chuka tha….

Agni (shocked)—kya mere andar bhi shaktiya hain….?

Adii—haan, tum agni se uttapann huyi ho..tumhare andar agni ki shakti hai..bas har din kuch samay dhyan lagane me lagati raho…dhire dhire tum unka prayog karna bhi sikh jaogi.

Iske pashchat vo meri baaho me simat kar so gayi…agle din rajnandini ne mujhe sari baat batayi..jisse main bhi kuch pareshan sa ho gaya.

Rajnandini—chitra to apni mukti ke liye taiyar hi nahi hai..ab kya karna hai rishi….?

Adii—ab to gurudev hi usko samjha sakte hain…aaj uske sath mujhe gurudev vishwamitra ji se milna hoga.

Rajnandini—kaha jana hoga unse milne ke liye…?

Adii—kahi nahi…chitra ko yahi mere room me bula lena…main apne dhyan me unka aahvahan kar ke unse chitra ko samjhane ki vinti karunga..

Rajnandini—theek hai..

Uske baad maine rajnandini ko apne bahupash me jakad liya aur uske ras bhare hotho ka madhur ras pine laga… kintu vaha shree ke aane se hum ek nahi ho sake…mujhe aur rajnandini ko iss tarah ek dusre ki baaho me dekh kar shree ka mann kuch vyathit sa ho gaya jise maine bhaanp liya…halanki shree ke mann me rajnandini ko le kar koi galat bhavna nahi thi..vo ye bhalibhanti janti thi ki rajnandini ka mere upar sabse adhik adhikar hai..vo meri patni hai…uske dukh ka karan ye tha ki iss adhikar ki vajah se usko apna pyar khud se door hota hua mahsoos ho raha tha.

Rajnandini—kya baat hai putri…? Tum kuch dukhi si lag rahi ho... ? koi taklif hai kya ... ?

Shree (gale lag kar)—nahi maa...bas apko kafi der se dekha nahi tha to khojte huye yaha aa gayi.

Rajnandini (mathe ko chumte huye)—meri pyari beti...mujhe bhi iss baat ka behad dukh hai ki main tujhe apni god me nahi khila saki...ab jab tujhe paya hai to tu vivah ke yogya ho chuki hai....rishi, ab meri beti ke liye kisi yogya var ki talash karni padegi.

Apni maa rajnandini ke mukh se apne vivah ki baat sunte hi shree ko aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki kisi ne uske seene me kaante chubho diye ho...uski ankho me pani aa gaya...vah aasha bhari nazro se meri taraf dekhne lagi.

Adii—nandini,shree meri bahan bhi hai aur beti bhi...kintu tumhari beti hai..uski ek maa aur bhi hai...mujhe lagta hai ki abhi vivah ki baat karne ka uchit samay nahi aaya hai.

Shree vaha se uth kar chali gayi apni ashu purit ankhe liye apne room me...rajnandini bhi uske piche piche chali gayi...dophar me rajnandini apne sath chitra ko le kar mere paas aa gayi...maine room ko sound proof kar diya jisse ki yaha hone wale wartalaap ki awaze bahar kisi ko sunayi na de sake.

Chitra (hath jod kar)—didi, main aap ke hath jodti hu..mujhe adii se door mat kijiye...adii ke liye mera prem aap ke jitna sachcha na sahi kintu main uske bina nahi rah sakti...adii ke bina meri mukti sambhav nahi hai...akhir main bhi to adii ki patni hu...adii ne khud meri maang me sindur bhar ke mujhe apni patni swikar kiya hai...phir mujhe usse door kyo hone ko kah rahi hain... ? ab se main kisi ko pareshan bhi nahi karungi.

Adii—pagal, tumhe door koun kar raha hai mujhse... ? aur maine kab kaha ki tum meri patni nahi ho... ? main to bas tumko sab ki tarah hasil karne ka upaay bata raha hu..jisse tum bhi rajnandini ki tarah mere sath meri biwi ban kar rah sako.

Rajnandini—rishi ki baat sahi hai...chitra tum to meri choti bahan jaisi ho…main bhi chahti hu ki tum hamare sath raho..isliye hi to tumhe apna sharir paane ka tarika bata rahi thi.

Main dhyan me baith gaya aur guru vishwamitra ka aavahan karne laga...lagbhag aadhe ghante ke athak prayas ke baad guru brahmarshi vishwamitra hamare samne jyotirmay roop me prakat huye.

Vishwamitra—ankhe kholo vats..

Adii—pranam gurudev..

Vishwamitra—tumhara kalyan ho..

Rajnandini/chitra—pranam gurudev..

Vishwamitra—sada saubhagyavati bhav..

Adii—gurudev.. ! chitra mujhe apna pati swikar kar chuki hai..kintu iss yoni me sambandh kaise adhik samay tak rah sakta hai... ? ab aap hi uska marg darshan kijiye..

Rajnandini—haan gurudev...chitra apni mukti ke liye taiyar hi nahi ho rahi hai..aap hi iska samadhaan kiijiye..

Chitra (anshu bahate huye)—main ye manti hu ki main achchi nahi hu...logo kp tang karti rahti hu...isliye adii aur didi mujhse picha chhudana chahte hain...kintu gurudev main eshwar ki shapath kha kar kahti hu ki main adii se behad prem karti hu...aur uske bina mujhe mukti ke baad bhi kahi shanti nahi milegi.

Vishwamitra—beti, prem to parameshwar ka anmol vardan hai...adii ka uddeshya tumhe apne se door karna nahi hai balki tumhe sasharir apni patni ke roop me pana hai...kuch pane ke liye kuch khona bhi padta hai...prem ko bhi apni pariksha deni padti hai...kintu isse prem samapt nahi ho jata hai....rajnandini ko hi dekh lo...usne apne prem ke liye sadiyo tak intazar ka dukh sahan kiya...agni ko dekho, usne patni hote huye bhi lambe samay tak pati sukh se vanchit rahi kintu isse uska prem kam to nahi ho gaya na.... ? tum bhi agar adii ko pana chahti ho to tumhe bhi iss pariksha se gujarna hi hoga…tum to bahut bhagyashali ho ki dusri yoni me hone ke bavjud bhi adii ne tumhe apni patni swikar kiya, itna hi nahi tumhe patni hone ka sukh bhi pradan kiya usne….main tumhe vardan deta hu ki agar tumhara prem sachcha hua to adii tumhe avashya hi milega..

Chitra—main adii ko paane ke liye har pariksha se gujarne ke liye taiyar hu gurudev...aap hi bataye ki mujhe aisa kya karna hoga jisse adii mujhse kabhi door na ho... ?

Vishwamitra—iske liye tumhe sabse pahle iss chudail yoni se mukt hona hoga...uske pashchat tumhare poorv karmanusar naya janam milega...jab tum manav janm me paida hogi to tumhe adii jarur milega..

Chitra—lekin isme to bahut samay lag jayega gurudev..

Vishwamitra—yahi to tumhare prem ki pariksha hai putri….ki tum apne prem ko paane ke liye kitna intazar kar sakti ho…?

Chitra—main adii ko paane ke liye apni antim saans tak intazar kar sakti hu gurudev..

Vishwamitra—to phir apni mukti ka marg prashast karne do adii ko putri..

Chitra—agar adii ka pyar paane ke liye mujhe kaanto par bhi chalna pade to main taiyar hu gurudev…jaisi apki aagya….kintu agar adii ne mere manav janam me mujhe nahi pahchana to..?

Vishwamitra—main tumhe ashirwad deta hu putri ki tumhe apne adii se milne ke pashchat ke apne sabhi janmo ka gyan usko dekhte hi smaran ho jayega…

Chitra—theek hai gurudev…

Vishwamitra—safal manorath bhav

Iske pashchat gurudev vishwamitra antardhyan ho gaye…maine aane wali amavashya ke din usko iss kasht daayak yoni se mukti dilane ka soch liya.

Raat me aaj bhi rajnandini ne apni jagah agni ko bhej diya…agni mera sanidhya pa kar kusumlata ki bhanti mahak uthi thi..agle din jab main bathroom se naha kar jaise hi bahar nikla vaise hi achanak koi mere seene se lipat kar rone lagi.
 
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