Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[aka3829]

Wah kya jabardast update diya he bhai. Ek dum fadu tha. Vishvamitr ke dwara diya gya shama ka gya to ati uttam laga. Unke dwara dono patniyon ke me se Aliza ka maam to mujhe bhi ascharya me daal gya. Lekin bhai aapne kisi ke sath bhi sex nahi dikhaya ye galat baat he. Lagta he ki 2nd part me flashback me sab dikhaoge. Azgr ke sath fight jabardast thi. Lekin kilwish ne to pari lok me akraman kr diya he waha ka kya hoga. Rajnandini ke pet me bhi azgr ne laat mar di. Dusare part me chitra bhi wapas ayegi kya. Aur 10 saal baad ye kaun si jagah he jaha itani thand he. Aur ye aurat kaun he jisNe safed saari pahen rakhi he. Aur kiski lash ko dekh rahi he. Pari lok me un saabhi patniyon ka kya hua. Bahut sare sawal he.
Waiting 4 next Part of this story.

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome end of the 1 chapter
Bhai isi thread pe start karoge ki alag par
Keep posting

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai Nice ending ab mayajal suru hoga

 

[Nadan Dill]

wa bhaii wa maza aya giee


Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

 

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Naina]

Brilliant update Anand ji.... Great going

 

[Tiwari_baba]

Jabarzast update hai... To azgar phir se kisi dusre grah pe hahakar macha raha hoga or yaha... Rishi phir maara gaya.... Kya shree or uske bachche .... Bache honge yaa unko bhi maar diya hoga.... Bechari nandini pahle bhi uske garbh ko nasht kar diya tha azgar ne or iss baar bhi.... Or wahan kilvich ne.... Pata nhi kya kiya higa koi zinda bacha ki nhi kuchh pata nhi..... Kintu ye mahila koun thi.... Jo vidhwa roopi liwaj me kisi ki lash dafna rahi thi yaa kabr khod ke lash nikal rahi thi.... Dusre parnt ka besabri se intezaar rahega bhai....

 

[The Phoenix]

Bhai kya masst update he.

Lekin shree aur wo baachhe logo ka kya huya ye patabna chala.

And many many thanks for chapter 1

Aur dher sarw badaiy apko chapter 1 complete karne ke liye.

Age ka part is thread chalu hoga ya kisi naye thread ye jarur batana.

Thanks

 

[aks 21]

Superb ending bro......waiting for next part

 

[Prince Charles]

superb ending dear...