Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[anandsngh12]

Wah kya jabardast update diya he bhai. Ek dum fadu tha. Vishvamitr ke dwara diya gya shama ka gya to ati uttam laga. Unke dwara dono patniyon ke me se Aliza ka maam to mujhe bhi ascharya me daal gya. Lekin bhai aapne kisi ke sath bhi sex nahi dikhaya ye galat baat he. Lagta he ki 2nd part me flashback me sab dikhaoge. Azgr ke sath fight jabardast thi. Lekin kilwish ne to pari lok me akraman kr diya he waha ka kya hoga. Rajnandini ke pet me bhi azgr ne laat mar di. Dusare part me chitra bhi wapas ayegi kya. Aur 10 saal baad ye kaun si jagah he jaha itani thand he. Aur ye aurat kaun he jisNe safed saari pahen rakhi he. Aur kiski lash ko dekh rahi he. Pari lok me un saabhi patniyon ka kya hua. Bahut sare sawal he.
Waiting 4 next Part of this story.

Update me jo sex scenes aur jo kuch pending hain unhe sunday ko rewise kar ke add kar dunga ussi update me.
Baki jo last ka suspense aur kilwish ke hamle ke baad kya hua vo sab next part me ayega.
Chitra ka character second part me dikhayi dega.
Aleeza ka jikra isliye hi maine pahle hi kar diya tha kahani me..har ghatna ke piche koi na koi reason jarur chhupa hota hai.

 

[anandsngh12]

Wah kya jabardast update diya he bhai. Ek dum fadu tha. Vishvamitr ke dwara diya gya shama ka gya to ati uttam laga. Unke dwara dono patniyon ke me se Aliza ka maam to mujhe bhi ascharya me daal gya. Lekin bhai aapne kisi ke sath bhi sex nahi dikhaya ye galat baat he. Lagta he ki 2nd part me flashback me sab dikhaoge. Azgr ke sath fight jabardast thi. Lekin kilwish ne to pari lok me akraman kr diya he waha ka kya hoga. Rajnandini ke pet me bhi azgr ne laat mar di. Dusare part me chitra bhi wapas ayegi kya. Aur 10 saal baad ye kaun si jagah he jaha itani thand he. Aur ye aurat kaun he jisNe safed saari pahen rakhi he. Aur kiski lash ko dekh rahi he. Pari lok me un saabhi patniyon ka kya hua. Bahut sare sawal he.
Waiting 4 next Part of this story.

Pending sawalo ke jawab next part me mil jayenge.
Second part maximum comedy based hi hoga lagbhag 80% with love, thrill, suspense, action and romance
kuch cheeze sunday ko add kar ke update revise karunga
Sath me ek jhalak next part ki bhi mil jayegi

 

[anandsngh12]

Awesome end of the 1 chapter
Bhai isi thread pe start karoge ki alag par
Keep posting

Second part ke liye fresh thread hi start karunga.
Jiska Title hoga 'Hansna Mana Hai (Chamatkar Part- II)'

 

[anandsngh12]

Mast update bhai Nice ending ab mayajal suru hoga

Mayajal ko close kar ke uski jagah dusra thread start karunga halanki kuch updates usme se hi honge kahani me.

 

[anandsngh12]

wa bhaii wa maza aya giee


Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai kahani ko pasand karne ke liye

 

[anandsngh12]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Shukriya bhai sath bane rahne ke liye.

 

[anandsngh12]

Brilliant update Anand ji.... Great going

Shukriya Naina ji kahani ko pasand karne auriss sahyog ke liye main apka hriday se aabhari hu,
Kahani ka agla bhag jiska ki title hoga 'Hansna Mana Hai (Chamatkar Part-II)' jaldi hi sab ke samne hoga...Jiski ek jhalak sunday ko issi thread me post karunga.

 

[anandsngh12]

Jabarzast update hai... To azgar phir se kisi dusre grah pe hahakar macha raha hoga or yaha... Rishi phir maara gaya.... Kya shree or uske bachche .... Bache honge yaa unko bhi maar diya hoga.... Bechari nandini pahle bhi uske garbh ko nasht kar diya tha azgar ne or iss baar bhi.... Or wahan kilvich ne.... Pata nhi kya kiya higa koi zinda bacha ki nhi kuchh pata nhi..... Kintu ye mahila koun thi.... Jo vidhwa roopi liwaj me kisi ki lash dafna rahi thi yaa kabr khod ke lash nikal rahi thi.... Dusre parnt ka besabri se intezaar rahega bhai....

Pending suspenses ke jawab agle part me mil jayenge.
Baki kuch scenes jo rah gaye the unhe sunday ko post karunga update ko revise kar ke.
Sath me ek jhalak agle part ki bhi dekhne ko milegi...
Next part ka title hoga.. 'Hansna Mana Hai (Chamatkar Part-II)'

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai kya masst update he.

Lekin shree aur wo baachhe logo ka kya huya ye patabna chala.

And many many thanks for chapter 1

Aur dher sarw badaiy apko chapter 1 complete karne ke liye.

Age ka part is thread chalu hoga ya kisi naye thread ye jarur batana.

Thanks

Bahut bahut dhanyawad mitra iss sahyog ke liye.
Pending suspenses ke jawab agle part me mil jayenge.
Next part ka title hoga..'Hansna Mana Hai (Chamatkar Part-II)'
Agla part naye thread me hi start karunga.

 

[anandsngh12]

Superb ending bro......waiting for next part

Shukriya bhai sath bane rahne ke liye.