Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

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Agla update to bhut shandaar kahani ka hissa hi hai.... Wait for this story ......

Shukriya bhai..
Second part 26th January se start karunga.

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai story ki maa bahen mt kro yar.. poorane plot m aao. Aur ye jo bhi likha h abhi tk isse bhul jao. Aur ese confusing naam mt likho. Naam ese likhoge to confusion hota h aur story se mn bhi uth jaata h. plz app iss update ko bhul jayiye aur kuch interesting likhiye.

Mere dost kahani to abhi start hi nahi huyi aur aap bhulne ki baat karne lag gaye...
Kya ye jaruri hai ki kisi ka har janam me ek hi naam ho...?
Ye comedy thread hai to naam bhi to vaise hi rakhe jayenge na...isme confusion kaisa...?

Apka ye iss story me 5th review hai bhai..aur itna jaldi aapne abhi start bhi nahi huyi kahani ke baare me apna view bata diya...
Bhai aap ko shayad iss kahani ke vishay me adhik jankari hai..meri aapse request hai ki aap hi iska 2nd part likhiye..kyon ki shayad aap mujhse behtar iss kahani ko likh sakte hain bhai
aap likhiye...main jarur padhunga.
Kyon ki main likhunga to apne hi idea se likhunga na bhai...
Iss kahani ka main uddeshya logo ko hasana hai..phir chahe unke chehro par hasi jaise bhi aaye..

 

[anandsngh12]

Kya name choice kiye ho
Super

bas comedy purpose se socha hai ye naam bhai..

 

[anandsngh12]

Superb update brooo..

Waiting for next update

Shukriya Sudipkr bhai

 

[anandsngh12]

Superb update brooo..

Thanks bro

 

[anandsngh12]

Chamatkar 2 update

Abhi start hone me samay hai bhai

 

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bhaii kb shuro karo gaa
Part2

Pahle running stories to complete kar lu bhai

 

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waiting for next part bhai

Running stories me se ek do complete ho jaye pahle bhai phir sochta hu..

 

[anandsngh12]

hansa hansa kar maar dalne ka irada h kya aapaka.
Is kadar mazedaar update tha yah.
Jabardast ekdam lajawab.
Naam bhi ajib the lekin the mazedaar.

Aage ka intjaar

Shukriya Rishabh bhai for liking the trailor of part 2

 

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Iska 2nd part kab tak start hoga anand bhai

Pahle jo running stories hain unhe to complete kar lu bhai..