Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Nadan Dill]

Pahle running stories to complete kar lu bhai

okaY bhaii intzar ha bhaii

 

[Sabhi91]

Pahle jo running stories hain unhe to complete kar lu bhai..

Ye v accha hai. Mujhe laga shayad aap kuch time baad ise suru kare. Isly maine puccha.accha hai ab per day is thread pe aake chek karne ki shayed jarurat nhi hogi

 

[Blackhat007]

Mere dost kahani to abhi start hi nahi huyi aur aap bhulne ki baat karne lag gaye...
Kya ye jaruri hai ki kisi ka har janam me ek hi naam ho...?
Ye comedy thread hai to naam bhi to vaise hi rakhe jayenge na...isme confusion kaisa...?

Apka ye iss story me 5th review hai bhai..aur itna jaldi aapne abhi start bhi nahi huyi kahani ke baare me apna view bata diya...
Bhai aap ko shayad iss kahani ke vishay me adhik jankari hai..meri aapse request hai ki aap hi iska 2nd part likhiye..kyon ki shayad aap mujhse behtar iss kahani ko likh sakte hain bhai
aap likhiye...main jarur padhunga.
Kyon ki main likhunga to apne hi idea se likhunga na bhai...
Iss kahani ka main uddeshya logo ko hasana hai..phir chahe unke chehro par hasi jaise bhi aaye..

Bhai gussa mt ho. Jo mughe lga maine vhi bola h. Aapne bhi bola ki ye mera fith review h. To aap hei btaiye kya isse phle maine koi negative review diya tha.

 

[Blackhat007]

Mere dost kahani to abhi start hi nahi huyi aur aap bhulne ki baat karne lag gaye...
Kya ye jaruri hai ki kisi ka har janam me ek hi naam ho...?
Ye comedy thread hai to naam bhi to vaise hi rakhe jayenge na...isme confusion kaisa...?

Apka ye iss story me 5th review hai bhai..aur itna jaldi aapne abhi start bhi nahi huyi kahani ke baare me apna view bata diya...
Bhai aap ko shayad iss kahani ke vishay me adhik jankari hai..meri aapse request hai ki aap hi iska 2nd part likhiye..kyon ki shayad aap mujhse behtar iss kahani ko likh sakte hain bhai
aap likhiye...main jarur padhunga.
Kyon ki main likhunga to apne hi idea se likhunga na bhai...
Iss kahani ka main uddeshya logo ko hasana hai..phir chahe unke chehro par hasi jaise bhi aaye..

Aur rhi baat likhne ki agr mughe aapki trh likhna aata to bhut phle likhna suru kr deta. Ye aapki story h app hei isse likhiye.

 

[Siraj Patel]

Index updated on page 1

 

[anandsngh12]

okaY bhaii intzar ha bhaii

Thanks bro

 

[anandsngh12]

Ye v accha hai. Mujhe laga shayad aap kuch time baad ise suru kare. Isly maine puccha.accha hai ab per day is thread pe aake chek karne ki shayed jarurat nhi hogi

Agar abhi isko start kar dunga to phir vahi update jaldi dene me problem ayegi..
Vaise 1st jan. ko iske last update me jo shree ki suhagrat ka scene rah gaya tha..vo add kar ke revise karunga.

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai gussa mt ho. Jo mughe lga maine vhi bola h. Aapne bhi bola ki ye mera fith review h. To aap hei btaiye kya isse phle maine koi negative review diya tha.

Gussa hone wali koi baat nahi hai bhai..ye apka apna adhikar hai apni baat kahne ka..

 

[anandsngh12]

Aur rhi baat likhne ki agr mughe aapki trh likhna aata to bhut phle likhna suru kr deta. Ye aapki story h app hei isse likhiye.

Bhai main bhi apki hi tarah ek reader hi hu..

 

[anandsngh12]

Index updated on page 1

Many many thanks siraj bhai for this help.