Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Smith_15]

Chamatkaar part 2 come

 

[Smith_15]

Chamatkaar part 2 in pdf

 

[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[malhotra.nisha]

interesting & gripping story. Must read for everyone.

 

[111ramjain]

Waiting

 

[ASannd123]

UPDATE- 122​

Main dubara uth kar vaha gaya aur malba hatane ke liye jhuka to phir se vahi hua…maine kayi bar koshish ki, natiza vahi nikla..mere jhukte hi koi utha kar door phenk deta…aisa lag raha tha ki vo aatmaye behad kroadh me aa chuki hain…

Udhar bahar ka mousam aur bhi bhayanak ho chuka tha…tez hawao ke sath sath ghanghor barish bhi hone lag gayi thi…mandir me sabhi pareshan aur chinta me doobe huye the…ki tabhi ek cheekh ne unke kaan khade kar diye..

“Rajnandiniiiii…..bachaaoooooo…….maaaaaaa…..bachaooooooo....aaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....mummyyyyyy”

Urmila (bechain)—ye…ye to mere adii ki awaz hai….lagta hai ki mera beta kisi musibat me haii….

Megha (tension)—haan didi…mujhe bhi yahi lag raha haii..

Iss cheekh ne sabhi ke hosh uda diye....urmila aur megha pareshan ho kar vaha se bhagne lagi...lekin khatra ne rok diya unhe mandir ke bahar nikalne se...

Urmila (rote huye)—mujhe jane doooo....mera adiii musibat me haiii....vo mujhe bula raha haiiii...

Khatra—mujhe maaf karna malkin....mere malik ka yahi adesh hai ki main aap ko yaha se na jane du...aap chinta na kare, malik ko kuch nahi hoga...

Megha (rote huye)—hame jane do khatra....tum ek maa ke hriday ko nahi samajh sakoge...tum mard ho na...

Rajnandini (tension)—maa ji khatra shayad sahi kah raha hai….ye unn dust aatmao ki koi chaal hai..hame yaha se bahar nikalne ki…..mere rishi ko kuch nahi hoga…..aap nirash na ho…bhole nath sab theek kar denge….

Halanki rajnandini khud bhi andar se bahut hi pareshan aur chintit thi lekin phir bhi apne aap ko kisi tarah vyagra hone se roke kar sab ko samjhane me lag gayi…haalat sabhi ki vaisi hi thi..sab mujhe le kar tension me aa chuke the iss cheekh ko sun kar.

Magar tabhi unki ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki jiske baad sab ke sabra ka baandh toot gaya aur mari kahi sabhi baato ko bhul kar vo chillate huye mandir se bahar ki taraf bhagne lage….

Rajnandini (cheekh kar)—rishiiiiiiiiiii

Urmila—adiiiiii

Megha—nahii……

Shree—adiiiiiiiiii..

Agni—nahiii….ye nahi ho sakta…..

Chitra (rote huye)—nahii…ye main nahi hone dungi…adiiiiii

Mandir se thodi hi doori par adii khoon se lathpath haalat me jamin par pada hua tha aur jor jor se sab ko madad ke liye chillaye ja raha tha…ye dekh kar sab ki ankhe chhalak aayi dard aur chinta se..aur phir khatra ke bar bar samjhane ke baavjud bhi vo nahi ruke aur jor jor se rote chillate huye sabhi mandir se bahar nikal kar uss khoon se lathpath shakhs ki taraf bhagne lage…

Sab vaha tak pahuchte ki tabhi vaha char bhayanak shakal surat wale log achanak se prakat ho gaye aur uss jamin me pade shakhs ko ghasit kar le jane lage kahi…

Urmila (rote bhagte)—nahiii…ruk jaoooo….mere bete ko chhod do…..mat maro use…..

Sabhi unke piche piche barish me bhigte, girte phir uth kar bhagne lagte chillate huye lekin unke paas tak nahi pahuch pa rahe….dekhte hi dekhte vo sabhi uss jagah pahuch gaye jaha par jamin se khod kar nikale gaye nar kankal rakhe gaye the….vaha pahuchte hi vo charo ruk gaye aur jor jor se hansne lage…bahut bhayanak hasi…

Itni bhayanak hasi sun kar sabhi ke dil kaamp uthe…aur phir dekhte hi dekhte vaha ek ke baad ek hazaro bhoot, pret, chudail aur bhi kayi tarah ke jeev samne aane lage gusse se tilmilaye huye….aur tab unke ashcharya ki seema hi na rahi jab vo khoon se lathpath shakhs yakayak uth khada hua aur ek bhayanak shakal me badal gaya haste huye…

Rajnandini (tension)—maa ji…hamse bahut badi galti ho gayiii…..hum rishi ki kahi baat to bhool hi gaye….

Shree (ghabrate huye)—maa..ab kya kareee…..adii to yaha hai hi nahi…

Daniel (darr)—bhago…vapis mandir me….

Sab (chillate huye)—jaldiii chaloooooo...

Sab bhagne ke liye jaise hi mude to samne bhi unn sab ko khade paya....unn gusse me doobi aatmao ne unn sab ko charo taraf se gher liya tha...

Ab unke yaha se bhag kar phir se mandir me jane ka marg band ho chuka tha....vo sabhi dust aatmaye unki taraf badhne lagi...ye dekh kar sab darr aur khauf se adii...adii chillane lage.

Unko paas aate dekh juliya darr kar piche ko bhagi lekin tabhi kisi ne usko pakad kar hawa me utha liya aur apne bade bade nakhun uske komal sharir ke aar paar kar diye...vo jor se cheekhi aur phir shant ho gayi...vo nishachar uska khoon pine me lag gaya.

Ye drishya dekhte hi sab ke rongte khade ho gaye...ab vo bakio ki taraf badhne lage aur jaise hi ek ne urmila ko pakadne ke liye hath aage kiya vaise hi kisi ne usko utha kar patak diya.

Ye chitra thi jo behad gusse me aa chuki thi...usne gusse me aate huye ek ek kar ke unn sabhi nishacharo ko patak patak kar maarna shuru kar diya...khatra bhi uske sath ho liya usne bhi unki dhunayi shuru kar di...

Khatra—choti malkin....aap piche hat jao....inn sabhi ka maqsad hi tumhe qaid karna hai...tum piche hato....

Chitra (gusse me)—nahii....main aaj inn sab ko khatam kar dungiiii....

Lekin dono ye bhool gaye ki vo sankhya me bahut jyada hain aur ekta me badi taqat hoti hai...chitra aur khatra jab ladne me lag gaye to unka dhyan iss baat se hat gaya...sabne ek sath mil kar dono ko gher liya aur ekattha hamla kar diya dono par...

Idhar main uss malbe ko hata hi nahi pa raha tha kyon ki kisi taqatwar shakti ne mera suraksha kawach tod diya tha aur samay bhi bahut ho gaya tha...shaam ka andhera apna sir uthane laga tha...maine phir se apni talwar ko yaad kiya aur uske aate hi maine ab ki baar talwar ko uss malbe wali jagah par gaad diya.

Talwar ka jamin se sparsh hote hi vaha cheekh pukar mach gayi....talwar se nikalne wali tez roshni ne sabko jalana shur kar diya...vaha jitni bhi shaktiya thi sab bahar ki taraf bhagne lagi.

Maine jaldi se vaha ka malba hataya to mujhe chitra ki dead body nazar aa gayi...maine usko utha kar turant hi adrishya ho kar bahar aa gaya...lekin samne ka to nazara hi kuch aur tha...

Adii (jor se)—vahi ruk jaooo....agar kisi ne chitra ko hath bhi lagaya to theek nahi hoga....mere paas chitra ki dead body dekh kar sabhi mere upar toot pade ek sath...

Ye dekh kar rajnandini aur agni ka gussa bhadak gaya aur dono ki ankhe gusse se lal ho gayi....agni ki ankho se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi jisme sabhi jalte huye cheekhne lage...vahi rajnandini ne apne baalo me bandha juda khol diya

Juda khulte hi uske baalo ne taandav macha diya....uske khule baal hawa me lahrate huye sab ko baandhne lag gaye...maine kisi tarah se khud ko unke changul se azad kiya..lekin unki sankhya kam hi nahi ho rahi thi...

Ye dekh kar sanjay bhaiya aur daniel jaldi se unn nar kankalo ki taraf jane lage unme aag jalane ke liye magar isse pahle ki vo kuch kar paate unn kankalo ne dono ko lapet liya aur vo dono bhi unki hi biradari me shamil ho gaye.

Adii (chillate huye)—agniiii....apni shakti se unn sabhi nar kankalo ke dher me aag laga do...tabhi ye marenge aise kam nahi honge ye kabhi...

Meri baat sunte hi agni ne uss dher ki taraf apni nazar ghumayi aur agle hi pal uss dher me aag jal uthi...vaha charo taraf sirf cheekhe hi sunayi dene lagi thi....sab jalte huye idhar udhar bhagne lage.

Sab aa kar mujhse lipat gaye...mujhe apne teeno logo ko khone ka dukh bhi tha..megha bhi roye ja rahi thi..kintu ab pachtane se kya fayda hone wala tha.

Chuttad—iss dead body ka kya karna hai... ?

Adii—antim sanskar…

Chitra ki ankho me ek bar phir se anshu tapakne lage meri baat sun kar…vo aa kar mere seene se lag gayi..main sabhi ko le kar mahal aa gaya…mousam ab phir se khul chuka tha….jabki mere dost shavyatra ki taiyari karne lage main chitra ko poore samman ke sath vida karna chahta tha.

Sab chitra ko samjhane me ek bar phir lag gaye lekin vo sirf roye hi ja rahi thi…aaj mujhe bhi uske jane ka dukh mahsoos ho raha tha..aaj main bhi khud ko apahij sa mahsoos kar raha tha.

Raat gahri hote hote sab kuch shant ho gaya...iss ghatna ko ek mahatma ne apne dhyan me dekh liya aur vo apne shisyo sahit turant hi yaha ke liye rawana ho gaye...jo bhi unhe raste me milta jata vo sab batate jate.

kafi log ekatthe ho chuke the aur jaise jaise logo ko apni rajkumari chitralekha ki khabar milti ja rahi thi vaise vaise logo ki sankhya badhti ja rahi thi….vo mahatma bhi chitra ki iss antim yatra me shamil hone ke liye shisyo sahit aa chuke the…dhire dhire door door se bhi log aate ja rahe the iss chamatkar ko dekhne ke liye.

Kisi insaan ki vastavik lokpriyata ka andaza uski mout ke baad hi hota hai….zindagi me to bahut se swarth admi ko ek dusre ke darwaje par le jate hain…lekin admi marne ke baad tamam swartho aur jarurato se mukt ho jata hai… kuch bhi to nahi rah jata..na daulat rahti hai,, na kursi rahti hai aur na haisiyat rahti hai….bas mitti ka putla, jo raakh banne ko rah jata hai.. tab malum hota hai ki vah kis ke kitne kaam aaya…

Aupchariktao ke baad jab chitra ki arthi uthi tab malum hua ki chitra kya cheez thi…? Bahut se log the uski iss shavyatra me aur har ankh anshuo se bhari thi….apni zindagi me chitra ne jane kitne logo ka dard baanta hoga, kitne logo ka bojh uthaya hoga..? aaj vahi log chitra ko apne kandho par uthaye huye the..

Har kisi ki juban par aaj sirf chitra ka hi naam tha…har koi chitra ki khubiya, uski zindagi se judi ghatnaye, unsi judi yaade aur uske guno ki hi charcha kar rahe the.

Maine chitra ki dead body ko mukhagni di…aag lagte hi chitra ka maya roopi sharir kahi vileen ho gaya panch tatvo me aur vo mujhse door kahi bahut door hoti chali gayi…lekin uske antim shabd ab tak mere kano me goonj rahe the..

"Rukhsat Huye Teri Gali Se,
Hum Aaj Kuch Iss Kadar..
Sab Logo Ke Muh Par Ram Naam Tha,
Aur Mere Dil Me Bas Tera Hi Naam Hai.”


Chitra ki Poori Kahani Aur Iss Jagah Ka Jikra Chamatkar II part me ayega, Kyon Ki Abhi Yaha Se Judi Kuch Cheeze Pending Chhod Raha Hu.
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Chamtkar 2 kab aayega agar aaya hai tho kha per mileyga link do bhai

 

[ASannd123]

UPDATE- 126​

Adii (mann me)—rajnandini sach ko kaise bardast kar payegi…? Vo to iss ghatna kram se poori trah anjan hai abhi tak…kya vo shree ko swikar kar sakegi apni hi soutan ke roop me…? Uske dil par kya beetegi jab use pata chalega ki uski apni hi beti, apne baap se pyar karti hai aur usse shadi kar ke uski patni aur khud rajnandini ki soutan banna chahti hai…?

Rajnandini (bechain)—gurudev..aapne meri baat ka jawab nahi diya…vo do ladkiya koun koun hain…?

Vishwamitra—putri, main jo kuch bhi kahne ja raha hu, use dhyan se sunna aur vichlit nahi hona…..tumhare rishi ki tumhare siwa hone wali baki saat me se paanch …margret, priyamvada, agni, radha aur sonalika..ye to tumhare samne hi hain jinke baare me tum bhali bhanti janti ho…ab aate hain jinke baare me tumhe nahi pata..jo adirishi ki patniya banegi…aur vo do ladkiya hain…..

AB AAGE…….

Urmila (mann me)—hey bhagwan..! meri bahu ko ye katu satya bardast karne ki sahan shakti dena..

Rajnandini (bechain, utsuk)—gurudev, ab bolte bolte ruk kyo gaye….? Bataiye na…main hone wali apni dono bahno ka naam janne ke liye atyant vyakul ho rahi hu..

Vishwamitra—putri, rishi ki hone wali inn paanch patniyo ke alawa anya do hone wali patniya hain..ek to jise tum sab janti ho aur usse mil bhi chuki ho….

Sabhi (shocked)—hum use jante hain aur mil bhi chuke hain…! Magar koun hai vo…?

Vishwamitra—rishi ki hone wali 6th patni hai vo aur uska naam hai…Aleeza.

Aleeza ka naam sunte hi sabhi shocked ho gaye….kuch der vaha sannata chha gaya…lekin agle hi pal sabhi ke chehro par akrosh ke bhaav umadne lage.

Urmila (dard)—aap ye kya kah rahe hain gurudev…aleeza aur mere bete ki biwi…?

Megha—nahi gurudev…ek bar phir se dhyan laga kar dekhiye…jarur koi aur hi ladki hogi..

Shree (gusse me)—iss aleeza ki vajah se hi hamara hasta khelta pariwar barbad ho gaya tha…main dubara aisa hargij nahi hone dungi.

Rajnandini (stabdh)—gurudev..! aap ye kya kah rahe hain…? Main ye kabhi nahi bhul sakti ki uss aleeza ki vajah se hi mere rishi ko kitni taklif uthani padi….uski vajah se hi rishi ko ghar se nikala gaya..uske upar galat aarop lagaye gaye….uski to main shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahti…kshama kare gurudev..main aleeza ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi aur na hi rishi ke aas paas uski parchhayi padne dungi kabhi bhavishya me..

Adii (shocked)—gurudev…uss aleeza ke karan hi meri mummy ko dard bhara jeevan jeene ko vivash hona pada.. main khud bhi use kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta.

Agni (gusse me)—agar vo mujhe kahi mil gayi to main use jinda jala dungi.

Margret—main bhi use maaf nahi karungi..

Ek ek kar ke sabhi ne aleeza ke prati apni narazagi vyakt karte huye uske meri patni banne par asahmati prakat kar di….shree aur agni to aleeza ka naam sunte hi behad gusse me aa gayi thi.

Vishwamitra—putri, kya tum janti ho ki iss sansar me sabse mushkil kaam koun sa hai... ?

Rajnandini—kya gurudev... ?

Vishwamitra—kisi ne tumhare sabse priya vyakti ko nuksan pahuchane wale ko kshama karna, yahi sabse mushkil kaam hai iss sansar me...do akshar ka ye shabd ‘kshama’ jitna saral dikhta hai vastav me isko jeevan me utarna utna hi kathin hai...aur jisne bhi iss kshama roopi gun ko aatmasaat kar liya vahi vastav me sachcha yogi hai.. vahi mahan hai, vahi jeevan me har pariksha me kamyab hota hai..kshama maanviya jeevan ki adharshila hai...jiske jeevan me kshama hai, vahi mahanta ko prapt kar sakta hai...kroadh, ahankar ko janam deta hai jabki kshama uss kroadh janit ahankar ko nasht karta hai....kshama karna sabse shreshtha dharma hai...kshama veero ka abhusan hai, kshama karne ke samaan koi tap nahi hai...darasal, kisi ko kshama karna kamjori nahi hai balki mann me kroadh aur ahankar ko palte rahna kamjori hai...apne kroadh ko samajh kar use shant karna, ahankar ki sewa na kar, dusro ki bhavnao ko samajhna, udarta dikhana, yeh kamjori nahi balki purusharth hai...agar koi apne dushman ko saza dene ki yogyata rakhne ke baad bhi use kshama kar deta hai to ye uski kayarta nahi, balki uski mahanta hai...shastro me bhi kaha gaya hai..

नरस्य आभरणं रूपं रूपस्य आभरणं गुण:।
गुणस्य आभरणं ज्ञानं ज्ञानस्य आभरणं क्षमा।।
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Vishwamitra—manusya ka abhusan uska kudarati roop hai aur uss roop ya sundarta ka abhusan uske andar nihit gun hain..koi kitna bhi sundar kyo na ho agar usme koi achche gun nahi hain to uski sundarta kisi kaam ki nahi hai issi prakar kisi me achche gun to hain kintu usme gyan ki kami hai to bhi koi matlab nahi hai uske gun ka aur koi kitna bhi gyani kyo na ho agar uske andar kisi ko kshama kar sakne ki kshamta nahi hai to uska ye gyan vyarth hai jaha prem hai vaha ahankar,dwesh, eershya, kroadh, nafrat jaisi bhavnaye nahi honi chahiye.

Vishwamitra—vaise bhi putri, ye mat bhulo ki aaj agar tum apne rishi ke paas ho to uski sabse badi vajah aleeza hi hai...agar usne adii ke upar vo aarop nahi lagaye hote to usko ghar se bhi nahi nikala jata aur agar ghar se nahi nikalta to radha, priyamvada, usko kabhi nahi pa sakti thi aur na hi margret aur sonalika ke dil sachche me prem ka sanchar ho sakta tha..aur shayad tum bhi megha beti jo chahti thi vo nahi pa pati...aur na hi rajnandini aur rishi ka milan sambhav ho pata kyon ki use apni vastavik pahchan hi na mil pati...tum sab ko to aleeza ka ehsaan manna chahiye jiske karan sabhi ko apna apna pyar mil saka hai...aleeza ne jo kuch kiya vo niyati ka likha lekh tha jise ghatit hona hi tha..uski vajah se hi tumhari sadiyo ki prem tapasya safal huyi hai.

Gurudev ki baato ne sab ko niruttar kar diya...sab ke mann me aleeza ko le kar jo nafrat ki bhavna jagrit huyi thi vo ab vilupt ho chuki thi unke hriday se.

Rajnandini—mujhe kshama kare gurudev...main apne prem ke avesh me kuch jyada hi uddwelit ho gayi thi..kintu aleeza to mere rishi se prem hi nahi karti to phir vo uski patni kaise banegi... ?

Vishwamitra—aleeza vastav me apne poorv janam me bhi adirishi ki patni hi thi...vo jinn lok ki rajkumari thi..kintu jab use pata chala ki azgar ne adirishi ko maar diya hai to vah ye dard bardast na kar saki aur usne khud hi apne jeevan ka ant kar liya...iss janam me use vo sab baate yaad nahi hain kintu jaise hi vo tum dono ko ek sath dekhegi to use sab yaad aa jayega aur uske dil me phir se vahi prem jagrit ho jayega.

Rajnandini—kyaaa..aleeza jinn lok ki rajkumari anamika hai... ?

Vishwamitra—haan, yahi vajah hai ki adii ne jab usko dekha to anjane me hi sahi uski taraf akarshit ho gaya.

Rajnandini—theek hai gurudev..mujhe aleeza swikar hai...main jarur usse milne jaungi....ab kripa kar ke mujhe meri akhiri soutan ka naam bhi batane ki daya kare...

Shree (dhadkate dil se, mann me)—hey bhagwan..gurudev mera naam le..kuch aisa chamatkar kar do..

Vishwamitra—putri, main tumhe rishi ki akhiri patni ka naam batane ke liye taiyar hu kintu tumhe bhi mujhse vada karna hoga ki tum naam sunne ke baad vyagra nahi hogi, apna dimagi santulan barkaraar rakhogi…bas ye samajh lo ki ye vidhata ka likha lekh hai aur isme hi sab ka aur jagat ka kalyan nihit hai.

Rajnandini (pareshan)—aisa kya batane wale hain aap gurudev jise sunne ke baad mere dimagi santulan khone ki apko ashanka ho rahi hai…? Agar ye vidhata ka lekh hai to main apko vachan deti hu gurudev..aap nihsankoch uska naam bata sakte hain.

Vishwamitra—rishi ki hone wali satvi aur antim patni aur koi nahi balki tumhari aur rishi ki apni hi beti shree hai.. ye ek kadwa sach hai…

Rajnandini (shocked)—kyaaaaaaa…..s.h.r.e.e…..?

Gurudev ki iss baat ne jaise rajnandini ke hriday me bhuchaal la diya….uska dimag chakrane laga…uske upar to jaise aasmaan hi toot kar gir gaya tha iss sach ko sunte hi…vo iss sach ko sahan nahi kar pa rahi thi aur dhadam se niche gir kar achet ho gayi…

Adii (chilla kar)—nandiniiiiiii….kya hua tumhe….? Ankhe kholo nandini….dekho agar tum nahi chahogi to main tumhe vachan deta hu ki kabhi aisa nahi hoga….tumhari razamandi ke bina main kisi ko bhi swikar nahi karunga.

Megha—jiska darr tha akhir vahi hua…..bechari itna bada sadma bardast nahi kar payi…

Adii (rote huye)—gurudev..! dekhiye na meri rajnandini ko kya ho gaya hai…vo ankhe hi nahi khol rahi hai…kuch kijiye gurudev…kuch kijiye….nahi to main bhi jivit nahi rah paunga apni nandini ke bina…

Vishwamitra—adhir mat ho vats…satya hamesha kadwa hi hota hai…use swikar karne me kuch waqt to lagta hi hai rajnandini ko shayad aise satya ka anuman nahi tha isliye vo isko sunne ke baad use sahan nahi kar payi aur achet ho gayi hai….main abhi use hosh me lata hu.

Gurudev ne apne kamandal se jal apni anjuli me le kar use abhimantrit kar ke rajnandini ke upar chhidak diya.. jal ke chheente padte hi rajnandini hosh me aane lagi aur hosh me aate hi vo rona chalu kar di.

Rajnandini (rote huye)—ye aap mujhse kis janam ka badla le rahe hain gurudev…? Jo aisa maha paap karne ke liye hame uksa rahe hain...bhala ek pita apni hi putri se shadi kaise kar sakta hai... ? aur iss paap ko aap vidhata ka lekh bol rahe hain…? Nahii..hargij nahii…main aisa jaghanya paap kabhi nahi hone dungi…mujhe apki baat swikar nahi hai…aapse to maine hum sab ka kalyan karne ki kamna ki thi lekin aap to ulta hame paap ki aag me dhakelna chahte hain…saare sansar ki nazro me mujhe aur rishi ko nicha dikhana chahte hain…ye main kabhi nahi hone de sakti…kabhi nahiii…pita apni putri ka kanyadan karta hai..uska palan posan karta hai na ki khud uska bhog karta hai. Kaise guru hain aap jo ek pita ko use apni hi putri ka bhog karne ki salaah de rahe hain…?

Rajnandini ki baate ek oar jaha shree ke dil me kisi jahreele teer ki bhanti chubh rahi thi to vahi baki sab bhi tension me aa chuke the…na to mere paas rajnandini ki baato ka koi jawab tha aur na anya kisi ke paas…shayad yahi vajah thi ki hamne ab tak iss satya se rajnandini ko anjan hi rakha tha…hamari ankhe sirf gurudev par hi tiki huyi thi ab to.

Vishwamitra—tumhari baat apni jagah sahi hai putri…kintu jo maine kaha hai vo aksharshah satya hai…iske piche ek bahut bada karan hai jisme sabhi ka kalyan chhupa hua hai…bas ye samajh lo ki agar ye nahi hua to tum apne rishi ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kho dogi.

Rajnandini (tension)—aap kahna kya chahte hain…?

Vishwamitra—ab jo main tumhe batane ja raha hu use dhyan se sunna aur apna sanyam mat khona...

Rajnandini (sisakte huye)—ab aur bhi koi kadwa satya janne ko bacha hai aapke mukh se... ? bata dijiye..isse kadwa to nahi hoga na...

Vishwamitra—to suno phir iss ghatna ke piche ka karan...(phir gurudev ne azgar ke vardan ke baare me sab bata diya)…yahi vajah hai ki shree ko maine tumhare garbh se nikal kar megha ke garbh me sthapit kiya tha…jis kaam se sansar ka kalyan hota ho vo kabhi paap nahi ho sakta....jis jhuth se kisi begunah ki jaan bach rahi ho, vo jhuth bhi paap nahi kahlata.....aur phir shree khud bhi to adii se prem karti hai, usse shadi karna chahti hai.

Rajnandini (shocked)—kyaaaaa.... ?

Vishwamitra—haan putri ye satya hai....azgar ke aatank ko samapt karne ke liye iss ghatna ka hona atyant jaruri hai warna vo dusht tumhare rishi ko khatam kar dega....har taraf paap ka samrajya phaila dega vo...kisi ladki ki izzat surakshit nahi rahegi....ab faisla tumhe karna hai ki tum bhavna me bahti ho ya jagat kalyan ke vishay me sochti ho.. ?

Rajnandini (sisakte huye)—nahiii...nahii main rishi ko kuch nahi hone dungi....maine bahut intazar kiya hai uske liye ab aur uski judai bardast nahi kar sakti.....mujhe ye paap bhi karna manzoor hai lekin rishi ko khona manzoor nahi hai.

Akhir rajnandini ne gurudev ki baat ko maan liya...shree ka murjhaya chehra khushi se khil utha...use apne jeevan ki manchahi murad jo mil gayi thi....main aur rajnandini uske baad england chale gaye aleeza ke paas...mujhe jinda dekhte hi vo hairan rah gayi...phir uski nazar rajnandini par gayi to use chakkar aane laga aur uske sir me tez dard paida ho gaya jaise ki vo rajnandini ko dekh kar kuch yaad karne ki koshish kar rahi ho...antatah dimag me jor dalne par use sab dhire dhire yaad aane laga...aur sab yaad aate hi uski ankho se chhal chhal kar anshu bahne lage..vo bhag kar hum dono ke pairo me gir gayi aur apni galti ke liye mafi mangne lagi....shree ne use utha kar apne gale se laga liya.

Phir maine aur rajnandini ne uske pita alexander se mil kar sab sach bata diya jise sun kar vo behad hairan ho gaye.. thodi der vaha rukne ke baad hum sabhi pari lok vapis lout aaye....jaha agle din badi hi dhumdham se sabhi ka vivah sampann ho gaya.

Sabhi loko me khushiya ek bar phir se lout aayi thi....rajnandini ne sabhi ko week ke ek ek din nirdharit kar diye the mere sath raat me rahne ke liye...uske baad ka poora hafta rajnandini ke liye hota tha....aise hi samay gujarta gaya hasi khushi me..khatra ka vivah bhi maine jinn lok ki ek jinni se karwa diya tha...vo bhi ab khush tha...hamare sath hi murugan aur maina bhi khushi se pari lok me hi rahne lage the...halanki iss dauran azgar ne kayi bar pari lok par hamla karwaya kintu har bar use muh ki khani padi.

Udhar kilwish ki tapasya bhi poori ho gayi thi...kuch vardan pa kar vo aur bhi shaktishali ho gaya tha...jab use pata chala ki sonalika ki shadi ho chuki hai to vah aag babula ho gaya aur azgar ke sath mil kar khatarnak sazish banane me lag gaya....

Samay ka pahiya apni gati se chalta raha....har taraf sukh shanti ka vatavaran sthapit ho chuka tha....sabhi lok ke prani hasi khushi apna apna jeevan yaapan kar rahe the...iss beech rajnandini, aur shree maa banne wali thi jabki margret, sonalika, agni, radha, aleeza aur priyamvada ek ek ladko ki maa ban chuki thi...paanch rajkumaro ke paida hone aur rajnandini aur shree ke garbhvati hone se hum sabhi khushi me doobe huye the.

Jab azgar ko rajnandini aur shree ke maa banne wali hone ki khabar huyi to vah thoda chintit ho gaya....kuch soch vichar karne ke uparant usne kilwish ke sath mil kar sazish ki yojna banayi....ussi samay asamayik rajnandini ki maa ka achanak nidhan ho gaya.

Jab ye suchna rajnandini ko mili to vah gahre dukh ke sagar me doob gayi…main rajnandini ke sath uski maa ki antim yatra me shamil hone ke liye tabhka koyilee gaon pahuche hi the ki vaha gaon ki ast vyast halat dekh kar hairan rah gaye..har taraf laashe hi laashe bichhi huyi thi...

Rajnandini (dukhi)—ye sab kya hai rishi... ?

Adii—abhi pata karta hu..

Maine dhyan laga kar dekha to sab meri ankho ke samne ujagar ho gaya...ye sab azgar ne kiya tha..ye sab dekhte hi mera gussa badhne laga...lekin rajnandini ne mujhe kisi tarah se rok diya....maine aag ki shakti ka prayog kar sabhi ka antim sanskar karne ke pashchat pari lok lout aaya...Pari lok vapis aate hi mujhe jabardast jhatka laga...mahal me har taraf jor jor se rone ki awaz aa rahi thi....mera mann kisi anhoni ki ashanka se bhar gaya...hum dono jaldi se mahal me andar aa gaye jaha sabhi baithe ro rahi thi...mujhe dekhte hi vo sab aur jor jor se rote huye meri taraf bhagi..

Margret (rote huye)—adiiii....hamare bachche.......

Rajnandini (bechain)—…kya hua hamare bachcho ko…? Jaldi bata..mera mann bahut ghabra raha hai…?

Urmila (rote huye)—beta...hamare saato bachche aur shree mahal se gayab hain...na jane kaha honge..koun le gaya unhe.. ?

Sonalika (rote huye)—sab didi ke kamre me ek sath so rahe the...shree didi unke paas me hi thi….jab hum unhe dekhne vaha gaye to vo nahi mile hame.....haay mera beta.....

Rajnandini (shocked)—kyaaaaaaa.... ?...(rote huye)..rishi meri shree aur hamare bachche la kar do hame...vo to bechare chal bhi nahi sakte abhi...jarur isme azgar ki koi chaal hai...

Main dhyan laga kar baith gaya...sach me hi ye azgar ka hi kiya dhara tha…usne hi meri anupasthiti ka fayda utha kar adrishya halat me unhe yaha se le gaya tha…ye dekhte hi meri ankhe gusse se tamtama gayi....

Adii (gusse me)—azgarrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....

Main turant vaha se gusse me mahal se bahar jane laga to rajnandini aur baki sab bhi mere piche aane lage...maine sab ko apni kasam de kar vahi rok diya lekin rajnandini nahi mani aur vo mere sath hi chal padi.

Main gusse me tamtamate huye jaise hi dark lok pahucha to vaha azgar ke sainik kuch logo ko baandh kar unke upar jul kiye ja rahe the.

Maine jaise hi azgar aur uske sainiko ko vaha logo par julm karte dekha to mera gussa bhadak gaya….main unko ek ek kar ke yamlok pahuchane laga….dusri taraf ka morcha rajnandini ne sambhal liya halanki vo iss samay ladne ki halat me nahi thi kyon ki uske garbh ka akhiri waqt chal raha tha.

Adii (chillate huye)—azgarrrrr.....kaha chhupa hai kaayar.... ?

Azgar (gusse me)—shayad tujhe pata nahi ki Azgar kewal fufkar nahi marta balki vo apne shikar ko poora nigal jata hai….rajnandini sirf meri thi aur meri hi rahegi....agar tujhe apne bachche chahiye to rajnandini ko mere hawale kar de

Adirishi—aaj tere paapo ka ghada bhar chuka hai dust..apne anzam ke liye taiyar ho ja ab...agar mere ek bhi bachche ko ya shree ko jara bhi kharonch aayi to tujhe aisi mout marunga jo poori srasti me sirf teesri baar hogi.

Meri baato se tilmila kar Azgar ne mere upar aag phenki chalu ki lekin maine usko pani se bujha diya….usne pani ka upyog kiya to maine usko hawa se uda diya…..usne mere upar badi badi chattano ki barish ki to unko maine bijli ki shakti se visfot kar diya beech me hi.

Maine uske upar burf ka prayog kiya to usne apni aag ki shakti se usko pani bana diya….maine bijli se usko kabu me karna chaha to usne bhi apni shaitani bijli se usko madhya me hi rok diya….

Phir vo adrishya ho kar vaar karne laga..kabhi idhar se to kabhi udhar se to kabhi charo taraf se ek sath…jisse sab log ghayal hone lag gaye….ye dekh kar maine apni anguthi ki shakti se adrishya ho gaya aur to uska vaar bhi kuch samay ke liye ruk gaya aur vo samne pratyaksh aa gaya.

Mujhe vaha na dekh kar usne samjha ki main usse darr kar bhag gaya hu …to vo ab rajnandini ki taraf apni gandi niyat se badhne laga…iss avsar ka labh utha kar maine phir se uss divya talwar ko yaad kiya aur uske hath me aate hi maine sidhe uske samne prakat ho gaya…

Mujhe iss tarah se achanak apne samne dekh vo chounk gaya…vo kuch karta ki uske pahle hi maine uss divya talwar ko uske sine me aar paar kar diya jisse uska dusra kawach toot gaya.

Uska kawach todte hi mere sine me asahniya dard hone laga aur main jor se chillate huye vahi dhadam se gir gaya… mere chillane ki awaz se rajnandini ka dhyan meri taraf khich gaya aur vo mujhe niche pade dard me tadapta hua dekh kar rote huye daud padi.

Rajnandini jaise hi mere paas pahuchi azgar ne uske pet me jor se laat maar di…vo vahi niche gir ke tadapne lagi..ye dekh kar maine kisi tarah se khada hua aur jaldi se apni talwar uske sine se nikal ke uski gardan katna chaha vaise hi usne apni talwar mere pet me ghusa di.

Rajnandini (cheekhte huye)—rishiiiiiiiiiiii

Mere hatho se talwar chhut kar kaha giri mujhe pata nahi lekin main vahi gir gaya….usne agla vaar meri gardan par karne hi vala tha ki tabhi Ye dekh kar rajnandini ki ankhe rote rote achanak tamtama uthi….azgar meri gardan par vaar karne hi wala tha ki tabhi rajnandini ne apne kesho me use lapet liya aur uske sath hi uske vo kesh usko hawa me utha kar tezi lahrane lage aur phir unhone azgar ko kahi door, bahut door kisi anjane grah me phenk diya.

Meri ankhe band hone lagi thi aur sab kuch dhundhla padne laga tha…saanse bhi thamne si lagi thi….mere muh se bas ek hi shabd nikal raha tha vo bhi badi mushkil se..aur vo shabd tha rajnandini…….rajnandini jamin par hi sarakte huye mere paas aayi aur mere sir ko chumne lagi lipat ke rote huye.

Adii—r..a…..j..nandinii

Rajnandini (rote huye)—nahiii…rishii…tumhe kuch nahi hoga….main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi….hey maa mere rishi ko bacha lo..

Adii—aa…..r.o…m.a.t….m.a.i.n……v.a.pis…..ja.rur…..aun.ga…..ek..din……phir se.....ye….mera….va.da…raha… raj..nan… dini mera … intazar…karn..a..

Rajnandini (rote huye)—nahii..tum kahi nahi jaoge…..main tumhe kahi nahi jane dungi….samjhe na tum….rishii.. rishi… (chehre ko hilate huye) tum kuch bolte kyo nahi..rishii…… (jor se) rishiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…..nahiiiiii….

Aur phir rajnandini jor jor se dahad maar kar rote huye behosh ho gayi….jabki mere pari lok se nikalte hi ussi samay kilwish ne pari lok par hamla kar diya.

10 varsh baad kisi jagah par…..

Kadake ki thandi ka mousam tha…itni thandi ki insan to insan, pakshi bhi apne apne gharondo me sikude pade the.. akash par thaal jaisa gol chandrama, taaro ki baraat ke beech safar kar raha tha.

Charo taraf chandni chhitki huyi thi magar uss chandni ko bhi dharti tak pahuchne ke liye edi choti ka jor lagana pad raha tha kyon ki mahoul me ghana kohra phaila hua tha.

Kabristan me kisi pret ki tarah khade oonche oonche ped hawa ke tej jhonko ke karan itni buri tarah jhul rahe the ki unse lagatar baj rahi sitiyo ki si awaz kisi bhi insan ki reedh ki haddi me siharan douda sakti thi.

Bada hi bhayanak mahoul tha..magar uss aurat ko vah mahoul, vah sardi, aur vo thandi hawa ke jhonke maano chhu tak nahi pa rahe the…uss par kisi bhi prakratik aapda ka koi asar nahi hota nazar aa raha tha…uske dono hatho me ek phawda tha aur uss phawde se vo ek kabra ko khode chali ja rahi thi.

Jism par sirf ek safed saree aur safed blouse tha…dono kalaiyo me chudiya, pairo me payal, lambe kaale aur ghane baal iss tarah bikhre huye the ki uska chehra nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Kabristan me nirantar uske phawde ke jamin se takrane ke karan ‘khatt-khatt’ ki awaz goonj rahi thi…sath hi goonj rahi thi uski kalaiyo me moujud chudiyo ke khanakne ki awaz…kabristan me iss samay door door tak na to koi use dekhne wala tha aur na hi uski chudiyo ki khanak se paida hone wali awaz ko sunne wala.

Jabardast mehnat ke baad usne chaar feet gahri kabra khod li…tab phawda ek taraf phenk kar jamin me rakhi torch uthayi aur uski roshni ke jhaag kabra ke andar dalne lagi.

Vaha kisi ki dead body nazar aa rahi thi…jis par khoon ke chheente aur mitti lagi huyi thi…sir ke paas me to kuch jyada hi khoon laga hua tha.

Uss drishya ko dekh kar koi bhi darr sakta tha..magar uss aurat ne jaise hi uss dead body ko dekha to bas dekhti hi rah gayi…uski ankho me aise bhaav the jaise koi premika apne premi ko dekh rahi ho…

THIS IS THE END OF PART- I​

Chamtkar 2 please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

 

[Smith_15]

Chamatkaar part 1 have read, part 2 please

 

[James22]

Chamatkaar 2 kab tak aa rha he bhai..please jaldi lao kaafi solid he ye

 

[James22]

Jaldi lao bhai chamatkaar 2