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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

Jaisa ki aap sabko maalum hai abhi pichle hafte he humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time Pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit chat thread toh pehle se he Hind section mein khulla hai.

Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske aalwa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne kaa mouka bhi milega Taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab k liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai Xforum k sabhi readers k Uppar apni chaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.

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Sabhi party enjoy kar rahe the magar Margret mujhe hi chor nazaro se dekh rahi thi….


Margret (mann me)—adi….I Love You…kaise kahu…himmat nahi hoti…mere mom dad ki haisiyat tumhare barabar ki nahi hai…izhar karne se darti hu kahi tu mujhe thukra na de…mai tumhe bahut pyar karti hu adi….


Maine bhi use ghurte huye dekh liya….dhire se uske pass jake apne hatho se khila diya..jisse uska chehra khil utha….


Isi tarah party aadhi raat tak chalti rahi…phir sabhi guest jane ke baad mai bhi apne room me aa gaya magar room me aane ke baad mere sath badi hi ajeeb ghatna ghati…….


Ab Aage……………..


Mai jaise bistar par let kar sone laga to mujhe aisa laga ki kamre ke andar koi moujud hai….maine ankhe khol kar room me charo taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha lekin mujhe kuch bhi nahi dikha….


Mai din bhar ki bhag doud se thak gaya tha to ise apna bhram maan kar phir ankhe band kar ke sone ka prayas karne laga……


Jaldi hi mujhe need aa gayi….magar need me bhi mujhe aisa lagne laga ki koi mujhe awaz e raha hai.. maine apni ankhe khol li…….


Mere samne ki table ke upar vahi subah vala ullu baitha tha….mai use yaha dekh hairat me pad gaya ki ye yaha kaise aaya……..


Mai abhi ye soch hi raha tha ki mere kano me phir se kisi ki awaz gunjne lagi……..


“Shukriya dost tumne aaj meri jaan bacha kar mujh par bahut bada upkar kiya hai…mai tumhara ehsaan mand hu”…….


Awaz sunkar mai hairat se apne charo or baar baar dekhne laga magar koi nahi dikha…..mai ye dekh gahri soch me pad gaya…..ki koun hai jo dikhayi to de nahi raha lekin bolne ki awaz aa rahi hai…


Mai—koun hai..? Jo bhi hai samne aao……


"Ye meri hi awaz hai...apne samne dekho.......aditya "......


Maine ghabrakar samne dekha to mujhe us ullu ke sivay kuch nahi dikha........tabhi vo ullu udkar mere bistar par aa gaya....meri to phat ke hath me aa gayi....


Mai turant kood kar bistar se niche utar gaya.....tabhi mujhe uss ullu ke bolne ki awaz aayi......


"Ghabrao mat aditya......ye mai hi bol raha hu....mere pass aao...daro mat".......


Ab to meri solid phati.....ek ullu kisi insan ki bhasa kaise bol sakta hai....nahi..nahi jarur kuch gadbad hai.. mai yahi soch raha tha aur usko dekhe ja raha tha.......


"Mere pass aao aditya....mai tumhara dost hu....dusman nahi"........


Mai (darte huye)—t..u..m.......y.a.ha.n kaise ......aaye...aur...t..u..m.....hamari bhasa kaise bol sakte ho.... ?


Ullu—Pahle tum mujhse darna band karo tab mai tumhe sab kuch bataunga....mere pass aao....


Mai darte huye bistar ke ek kone par dhire se baith gaya.....kya pata kab mujh par jhapat pade...


Mai—ab bolo......yahan kyo aaye ho.....aur hamari boli kaise bol lete ho.... ?


Ullu—mai to ek maha tapaswi rishi ke shrap se ullu ban gaya.....mera naam munish hai...mai ek dev putra hu....


Mai—shrap.....kaisa shrap..... ?


Munish—Bahut samay pahle ki baat hai....himalay ki tarayi me rishi ashtavakra tapasya kar rahe the… unka sharir kamar se lakwa maara hua tha…jisse vo bade hi bedhange tarike se hilte dulte chalte the ek baar mai dharti lok ghumne ki abhilasa se swarg se prithvi par aa gaya…aur ghumte ghumte himalay ki taraf chala gaya…..


Munish—mai bahut hi sundar tha...jiska mujhe behad abhiman tha apni sundarta par....ghumte huye meri nazar un Ashtavakra Rishi ke upar chali gayi.....unki aisi hirni jaisi chal dekh kar mai koutuhal vash unke piche piche chalne laga....


Munish—unke pichhe chalte huye main baar baar unka mazak udata ja raha tha.....lekin vo mujhe dekhte aur phir aage badh jate....lekin mai unka uphas lagatar karta hi raha.....


Munish—akhir meri aisi uddandata dekh kar unko kroadh aa gaya aur unhone apne kamandal se jal apni hatheli par lekar mujhe shrap de diya......


Ashtavakra (kroadh me)—Uddand abhimani dev putra....ye sharir jaisa bhi hai us parmeshwar ki rachna hai.....tu baar baar mere andekha karne par bhi uss prabhu ki rachna ka uphas udaye ja raha hai.... tu nishchay hi dand ka bhagidar hai....tujhe apni is sundarta par bahut abhiman hai na to ja mai Ashtavakra tujhe abhi isi waqt shrap deta hu ki tu ek Ullu ki yoni me janam lekar yaha vaha dar dar bhatakta rah.......


Aur unhone apni hatheli ka jal mere upar chhidak diya......unke ghor shrap se mai bhaybheet ho gaya aur unke charno me girkar hath jod ke unki anunay vinay karne laga......


Munish—mujhe kshama kar dijiye Rishivar.....mujhse vinodvash bahut bada apradh ho gaya....mujhe maf kare hey maharshi......aap to maharshi hain....aap to daya ke sagar hain....mujhe kshama dan de muni shreshtha...


Meri aisi anunay vinay se un maharshi ka kroadh shant ho gaya......Rishi to hote hi dayalu hain....Pal me Tola aur Pal me Masha...yahi rishi muniyo ka swabhav hota hai......


Ashtavakra—Jis tarah dhanush se nikla teer aur gujra hua samay kabhi vapis nahi aata usi tarah mera shrap bhi atal hai....vo vapis nahi ho sakta......kintu mai tumhari shrap mukti ka upay avashya kar sakta hu......


Munish (hath jod)—kripaya vo upay bataye maharshi......


Ashtavakra—Jab koi nek aur raham dil vala insan tumhari giddho (eagles) se raksha karega…vahi tumhari mukti ka kaaran bhi banega…..vo jaise hi tumhara sparsh karega usi kshan tum mere shrap se mukt ho jaoge…..tumhe shrap mukt karne ke badle me us insan ko kayi adbhut shaktiyo ki prapti hogi jinse vo jan kalyan aur dushto ka sanghar kar sake…….


Munish—apki badi kripa munivar…..


Kuch samay baad mere sharir me tez dard uthne laga aur mai dev yoni se is ullu ki yoni me aa gira…tab se mai in giddho se apni jaan bachane ke liye poora din bhagta rahta hu……aur jyada tar samay kisi na kisi ped ki kandrao me hi vyateet karta hu……

Un giddho se apni jaan bachane ke chakkar me ek baar mai ek jahaz ke andar chhup gaya aur Bharat se yaha aa pahucha…….


Aaj mai bhojan ki talash me bahar nikla tha ki tabhi giddho ka ek jhund mere pichhe lag gaya….mai unse bhagte bhagte thak kar tumhari gadi ke samne ja gira……


Mere upar tumhari gadi chadhne hi vali thi ki tumne achanak brake laga kar use rok liya aur meri jaan bach gayi……


Tabhi mujhe un Ashtavakra rishi ki baat yaad aa gayi …ki tumhi mujhe shrap mukt kar sakte ho….aaj tumne meri jaan bachakar unka kathan satya kar diya…..tum behad nek dil aur raham dil ho….


Mai uss ullu (munish) ki kahani sun kar dang rah gaya….mere liye ye kisi ajoobe se kam nahi thi…jis par mai to kya koi bhi yakin nahi karega aaj ke jamane me….lekin mai to khud hi ek ullu ko insani bhasa me baat karte dekh aur sun raha tha……


Mai—chalo mai maan bhi lu ki tumhari baat sahi hai to phir tum mujhe subah dikhe kyo nahi jab mai gadi se niche utra……


Munish—mai tumhari gadi me chhip kar baith gaya tha,,,,,aur usme hi chhip kar yaha tak aa gaya…ab tum mujhe apne hatho se sparsh kar ke mujhe shrap mukt kar do…….


Mujhe yakin to koi khas nahi tha uski kahani par lekin usse pichha chhudane ki garaj se darte darte uske pass jake pith par apna hath rakh diya……


Uski pith par mera hath touch hote hi jo hua vo sab dekh kar to meri ankhe hairat se khuli ki khuli rah gayi…..
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Margret—Thanks aunty….vo Adi kaha hai….


Urmila (mushkura kar)—Ja uske room me chali ja…vahi milega vo …..


Margret doudte huye aditya ke room ki or badh jati hai…


Urmila (mann me)—pagal hai….mai bhi ek aurat hu…tere mann ki baat bhali bhanti samajhti hu.....


Margret jaise hi adi ke room me enter huyi to samne ka scene dekhkar uski ankhe fati ki fati rah gayi….


Ab Aage……………..


Mujhe dekhte hi vo ekdam hairan rah gayi…..


Margret (mann me)—ye adi hi hai ya koi aur hai…? Par adi itna change kaise ho gaya….abhi raat me to aisa nahi tha jab hum mile the…..par chehra to adi ka hi hai…


Meri nazar jaise hi us par padi to maine use ghurte huye paya…mai samajh gaya vo itni shocked kyo hai…


Mai—arey margret achchha hua tum aa gayi....mai bor ho raha tha….arey vaha kyo khadi ho…andar aao na…aur aise ghur kyo rahi ho….


Margret—vo….tum adi hi ho na…..


Mai—ha yaar mai adi ka bhoot hu......adi nahi hu....pagal chal aaja andar


Margret andar aa gayi lekin uska yu ghurna kam abhi bhi nahi hua tha.....


Mai—kya hua...


Margret—tum aise...mera matlab tum night me to aise nahi the…phir abhi….


Maine uth kar door lock kiya aur phir uske pass baith gaya….


Mai—dekh mai na tujhe sab kuch bata sakta hu...agar tu kisi ko na batane ka vada kare to…kisi ko bhi matlab kisi ko bhi nahi batane ka….


Margret—theek hai…promise….


Mai—ok to suno…..achchha kal subah tumhe yaad hai ki maine new car ki test drive ke time achanak brake lagaya tha…


Margret—ha yaad hai…kyo..aur tumne kaha tha ki koi billi aa gayi thi samne…


Mai—vo maine jhooth kaha tha...dar asal baat ye hai ki....


Phir maine margret ko kal ki poori kahani detail me batayi....jaise jaise mai aage batata ja raha tha vaise uska muh sursa rakshasi ki tarah khul ke bada hota ja raha tha......


Jab meri baat khatam huyi to maine use dekha vo ekdam shock me thi….jaise maine uski pakad ke gand me ghused diya ho aur dard se uska muh aise khul gaya ho…


Mere bar bar hilane ke baad vo shock se vapis louti……


Margret—kya ye sach hai..adi..jo tumne bataya….mujhe to yakin hi nahi ho raha hai…how its possible


Mai—pahle mujhe bhi nahi hua tha...par sab dekhne aur khud par jhelne ke baad yakin na karne layak kuch bacha hi nahi…..


Margret—mujhe to ab bhi ye sapna jaisa lag raha hai….


Mai—ruk mai tere samne kuch try karta hu…hu…kya karu….achchha ha…tum ek kaam karo…


Margret—kya karu….


Mai—aone mann me kuch bhi socho...mai tumhare mann ko padhne me apna dhyan lagata hu... dekhte hain kitna kaam karta hai…


Margret—ok


Margret (mann me)—main aur kya sochu adi….jab bhi kuch sochti hu tum hi nazar aate ho mujhe…I Love You adi..


Mai to shocked ho gaya kyonki uski baate mujhe aise sunayi pad rahi thi jaise ki vo mann me nahi balki jor se bol rahi ho….


Margret—bolo kya maine…batao....


Maine use bata diya jo bhi abhi vo apne mann me soch rahi thi...usne apne muh me hath rakh liya…


Mai—margret kya sach me tum mujhse pyar karti ho….


Margret—iska matlab tumne mujhe jo kuch bhi bataya vo sab sach tha….ha adi mai tumhe bahut chahti hu….ab se nahi bachpan se hi…..lekin ye pyar hai yeh ab samjh payi hu…..


Maine use apni baho me aane ka ishara kiya vo turant mujhse lipat gayi…….lekin pata nahi aaj mujhe subah se hi kya ho raha hai…ladki ko dekhte hi mann me ulta sidha khyal panapne lagte hain aur yaha to vo mujhse chipki huyi thi……


Tabhi pata nahi mere mann me kyo aisa vichar aaya ki main apna dhyan margret ko nangi dekhne me lagau ....


Maine jaise hi ye vichar ki taraf apne dhyan ko kendrit kiya kuch hi pal me margret mujhe nirvastra nazar aane lagi....

Sharir me ek lesh matra kapde ka namonishan nahi……uska poora sharir bhara hua tha….gori to thi hi vo… ek til uski chuchi par aur ek left jangh par dikh raha tha....niche ekdam chikna saf suthra maidan tha


Lagta hai india me chal rahe kachra hatao swachchhta abhiyan ki bhanak usko lag gayi thi...ek bhi jhante nahi thi...mera to rom rom bhan bhana gaya.....


Margret ne tabhi apne pink hotho ko mere hotho se jod diya aur jor jor se kiss karne lagi....mai to pahle se hi subah se is rog ka mariz bana hua hua tha to kaise pichhe rah jata.....


Maine bhi uska hoth chusan comptition me badh chadh ke hissa le liya.....mere hatho ne bhi apni harkat shuru kar di thi ab….jo pahle uski pth par the ab vo uski gand ki golaiyo ka maap lene lage the daba daba kar....


Iska natija ye hua ki margret poori madhosh hoti chali gayi.....mere sar pe bhi us munish ki di huyi shakti ka asar ho raha tha jiske vashibhut hokar mera ek hath uske chutdo se uthkar sine par aa gaya aur dhire dhire uski kathor chuchiyo ko ragadne laga.....


Lekin hamara ye kaam shastra ka shubharambh jyada der tak nahi chal paya kyon ki mummy bahar se hi awaz lagane lagi ki mere dost bahar mera wait kar rahe hain....


Phir bhi jaldi jaldi se margret ke dono doodh ko kas kas kar masal diya bari bari..vo dard se chhat pata gayi......


Margret—aahhhhaaahhh....adi....pls......dhire......itni jor....se nahi.....dard hota hai...pls...adi...dhire


Mai—margret aaj raat yaha rukogi..pls....mai aaj dhyan laga kar apni shaktiyo ka pata karunga...tum bhi sath rahna.....rukogi na mere sath....aaj raat bolo na....


Vo bechari to abhi huye vakiye se hi nahi ubar payi thi....ki adi ne uske raat me rukne ko bol diya....vo samajh gayi adi kya chahta hai.....

Margret—(sharma kar) huu.....par ghar me kya kahungi……


Mai—bol dena…kuch bhi....mere liye itna bhi nahi karogi…


Margret—theek hai….tumhare liye kuch bhi karungi adi…


Phir maine margret ko samjhaya ki sab se kya bolna hai...ek bar phir smooth kiss ke baad hum bahar aa gaye…


Mere baki dosto ka bhi vahi haal hua mujhe dekh jo kuch der pahle margret ka tha…..


Franklin—ye tujhe kya hua adi….kal to theek thaak tha….


Mai—kuch nahi yaar…vo mai kuch dino se body banane ki medicines kha raha hu ye sab uska hi asar hai.. kal shayad maine jyada hi kha li thi..to reaction ho gaya…


Juliya—jarur isne hi tujhe jyada medicines khilayi hogi…jungli billi kahi ki


Magar nazaro ne juliya ko bhi nangi karke dekhne lagi aur kaith ke bhi kapde utar diye…..sidhe sidhe shabdo me kaha jaye to ye wali shakti kisi ko bina kapdo ke dekhne ke kaam aati hai…bas uske jis body parts ko dekhna ho us par apni ankhe focus kar do aur sab kuch khula dekho….


Ye shakti ka prayog to samajh me aa gaya…aur ye bhi munish mc bahut bada wala stri gaami hai mujhko bhi aisi ulta sidhi shakti de gaya harami….


Maine juliya aur kaith ko jee bhar ke nangi dekha…..phir meri car me baith kar college nikal gaye admission ka pata karne…..

बहुत खूब आदि को शक्ति मिल चुकी हैं। उसमे से एक शक्ति है की किसी का बॉडी बिना कपड़ो के देख सकता हैं। जिसकी सुरूवत वो कर चुका हैं। मार्ग्रेट ने आदि से अपने प्यार का इजहार कर दिया हैं जिससे आदि ने भी काबुल कर लिया हैं। अब रात में आदि मार्ग्रेट के साथ क्या क्या करने वाला हैं खुद को मिली शक्तियों को जानने के लिया। आनंद सिंह जी बहुत रोचक और जबरदस्त रहा अब तक का अपडेट:applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:
 
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Mai jakar sidha apni gadi ke paas visible hua jise maine ek sunsan jagah par parilok jane se pahle invisible kar gaya tha

Gadi ko visible karke hum dono usme baith kar ghar aa gaye....mere sath sonalika ko dekhte hi mummy bahut khush huyi

Sona ne bhi apni taraf se koi kami nahi chhodi....jakar unke pair chhuye phir kahi gale lagi..uske in sanskaro se mummy bahut impress huyi usse

Urmila—achcha hua beti tu aa gayi....kaisa raha safar....

Mai—badhiya mom

Urmila—tere rishtedar to kuch nahi bol rahe the na

Sona—vo to bas apne matlab ke hain….main jiyu ya maru unki bala se….lekin mummy ji..vo

Urmila—ha…bol beti

Sona—pahle to vo mujhe pahchanne se bhi inkar kar diye….badi mushkil se inke samjhane par ye mane ki mai unki door ki relative hu….lekin…

Urmila—aage bol beti..kya hua phir…

Mai—kuch nahi hua mummy…mujhe khana do..bhukh lagi hai

Urmila—chup kar…ruk thodi der….dekh nahi raha sona beti kitni tension me hai…ha..tu bol beti

Sona –mere relatives ne mujhe inke sath india se yaha tak aane ki baat suni to mujhe ulta sidha bolne lage aur phir jabran meri inse court marriage karwa di

Urmila—kyaaaaaa….

Mai to uski baat sunkar hairat se muh phade use dekhta hi rah gaya….ye isne kya naya drama chalu kar diya

Mai—ye…ye..sab jhuth hai mummy

Urmila—chup…tu beech me mat bol…..kya ye sach hai beti…?

Sona—mujhe maf kar dijiye mummy ji….mai us samay majbur ho gayi thi….darasal jab mere rishtedar inko lekar mere upar galat aarop laga rahe the to mujhse galti se nikal gaya ki mai inki biwi hu

Urmila (shock)—phirrr….?

Sona—inhone mana kar diya…bole ki mai jhuth bolti hu…to unhone jabran hum dono ki shadi kara di lekin aap chinta mat kijiye mai janti hu aap kisi aur ko chahte hain…mai apke raste me rukawat nahi banungi…mai kal hi divorce paper par signature kar dungi…mai india vapis lout jaungi

Mai (shocked)—ye sab kuch jhuth hai mummy…iski kisi baat ka yakin mat karna aap…

Urmila—tum kahi nahi jaogi beti….aaj se ab se tum is ghar ki bahu ho..samjhi

Mai—mummy aisa nahi ho sakta…ye jhuth hai

Urmila—mai janti hu tu margret ki vajah se is bechari ko jabardasti jhuthi sabit karna chahta hai.. lekin kaan khol kar sun le....sona ko maine apni bahu maan liya hai aur tu bhi ise apni patni ka haq de samjha ....nahi to mujhse baat bhi mat karna....chal beti tu mere room me

Mummy apne sath sona ko apne room me le gayi aur yaha mai lute huye musafir ki bhanti thaga khada rah gaya

Mai (mann me)—baap re...kitni chalu ladki hai...margret ko patane ki jagah mummy ko emmotional karke jhuthi kahani sunakar unki nazaro me meri biwi ban baithi...ab margret ka kya hoga...use malum padega to vo mujhe kachcha hi kha jayegi

Mai room me jakar fresh hua aur apna mobile nikal kar check kiya to usme bahut se missed call the.. jinme se kuch mere friends ke , kuch julia ke , 50 margret ke aur karib 150 missed call shree ke the

Mai (mann me)—itne missed call shree didi ke…?..kahi koi phir se lafda to nahi ho gaya….call kar ke dekhta hu

Maine shree ke mobile par isd call laga di…..kuch der me ring jane lagi lekin call pick nahi ho rahi thi do teen baar try kiya..tab jakar call recieve hua…..mai baat karte huye bahar garden me aa gaya

Mai—hello..didi

Udhar se—hello..koun…adi..mai mousi bol rahi hu…

Mai—pranam mousi

Megha—sada khush rah....kaisa hai tu....ek baar bhi call nahi kiya yaha se jane ke baad....jate hi bhul gaya na hame

Mai—nahi mousi...mai bilkul theek hu...agar bhul jata to call karta kya abhi... ?..

Megha—didi kaisi hain... ? mujhe kabhi yaad karti hain ki nahi.. ?

Mai—mai darasal bahar se abhi aaya hu....ghar me ruka nahi tha aane ke baad...aap log kaise hain..sanjay bhaiya ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab aur shree didi kaha hain... ?

Megha—teri meharbani se sab theek hain beta....aur shree bhi yahi hai...tujhse bahut naraz hai

Mai—vo kyo.... ?

Megha—mujhe kya pata beta...bas jab se tu gaya hai raat din teri hi baat karti rahti hai....tujhse baat karne ke liye phone lagati hai aur jab tu nahi uthata to bechari dukhi hokar rone lagti hai....le ab tu hi mana usko

Megha—le kar le baat adi se....

Shree (jor se)—mujhe nahi karna koi baat vaat...jab use meri koi chinta hi nahi hai to mai kyo jabardasti use majbur karu baat karne ke liye...kah do use

Megha—sun liya adi beta....kitni naraz hai

Mai—hunnn...jara phone dijiye didi ko

Megha—shree le adi se baat kar

Shree—mujhe nahi karna hai koi baat

Megha—adi beta ab kya karu…vo bahut gusse me hai abhi

Mai—aap speaker on karo

Megha—kar diya

Mai—mousi …mai to aaj hi ghar louta hu….mobile ghar me hi tha…abhi dekha to maine aate hi pahla call didi ko kiya…khair jab vo mujhse baat hi nahi karna chahti to mai ye sim hi tod deta hu..ok bye

Shree (mann me)—kahi adi ne sach me sim tod di to mai phir baat kaise karungi usse…mere paas to uska yahi ek number hai

Ye sochte hi shree ne turant jhapta maar kar megha mousi ke hath se phone cheen liya…..

Shree (jaldi se)—sim nahi todna adi….nahi to phone ke andar ghuskar teri tange tod dungi mai samjha

Mai (mushkura kar)—jab koi hamse baat hi nahi karna chahta to mai ye sim rakh ke kya karunga

Shree—to tune ek baar bhi call kyo nahi kiya….ulta mai karti hu to call pick bhi nahi karta….ek to khud hi galti karta hai upar se sim todne ki dhamki bhi deta hai

Mai—mai sach me mobile ghar me bhul gaya tha…sorry

Shree—tu sach kah raha hai... ?

Mai—apki kasam...pakka wala sach

Shree—to itne din kaha gaya tha aisa jo dusre mobile se ek call bhi nahi kar sakta

Mai—vo mai sona ko uske ghar drop karne gaya tha…aur apka no. Mobile me feed tha

Shree—kyaaaa... ?sona…ye vahi to nahi sonalika…?.

Mai—ha..vahi hai

Shree—lekin tune to mujhe bataya tha ki uska ghar yaha india me hai….ab uska ghar vaha kaha se aa gaya…? Aur vo vaha gayi kaise…? Tune jate samay kaha tha ki vo apne ghar chali gayi hai…?.. tune mujhse sab jhuth bola na adi….ye sab teri g/f hain ya phir call girls

Mai (mann me)—uuiiima---ye to maine socha hi nahi….ki didi ko to maine kuch aur hi bata kar rakha tha…ab kya bolu unse

Shree—adi…ab bol chup kyo hai…kyo bola tune mujhse jhuth..bol

Mai—didi aap galat samajh rahi ho…actually..vo kya hai na ki sona yaha apne papa ke sath aayi hai.. yaha unke koi relatives rahte hain…to unke papa ne mujhe sona ko chhod ke aane ko kaha

Shree—tu sach kah raha hai

Mai—na…na…mai jhuth bol raha hu

Shree—sorry adi...mera na aaj kal dimag hi kharab ho gaya hai

Mai—its ok…..

Shree—adi….mujhe bhi tere paas aana hai…pls…mai tere sath rahna chahti hu

Mai (bekhayali me)—mere paas already pahle se do do hain…aur main unse hi bahut pareshan hu

Shree—kyaaaa…?

Mai—mmmera matlab…hai ki mai do do padhayi karta hu na…uski baat kar raha hu

Shree—mujhe aana hai tere paas…kuch kar na…nahi to mai ghar se bina kisi ko bataye bhag ke aa jaungi tere paas

Mai—ye galat baat hai didi…ab aisi kya dikkat hai…?..sab to theek kar diya tha maine…?

Shree (mann me)—ab tujhe kaise batau adi….tune sab theek to kar diya…lekin jate jate tu mujhe dil ka rogi bana gaya…

Mai—kya hua didi…chup kyo ho…?

Tabhi mere mobile me margret ka phone aane laga...ab mai kya karta...uska call uthane ke liye shree ko hold me lena padta...uska call mere uthane se pahle hi cut ho gaya

Shree—mujhe yaha kuch bhi achcha nahi lag raha hai...bas teri yaad raat din bahut aati hai..pls..kuch kar na adiii...pls

Mai—ok...ok..mai jaldi hi kuch karta hu...theek hai apna dhyan rakhna mai raat me video call karunga...tab aram se der tak baate karenge

Shree (khush)—sach me karega

Mai—ha...pakka karunga raat me..ok..bye

Shree—ok..bye..adii…mai night me wait karungi

Mai shree didi ka call cut kar ke jaise hi andar jane ko hua ki tabhi koi gate se andar aaya…use dekhte hi maine apna sar pakad liya

Mai—isko bhi abhi hi yaha aana tha….ab mera kya hoga….chal beta ho gaya ab to tera kalyan

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Mai shree didi ka call cut kar ke jaise hi andar jane ko hua ki tabhi koi gate se andar aaya…use dekhte hi maine apna sar pakad liya

Mai—isko bhi abhi hi yaha aana tha….ab mera kya hoga….chal beta ho gaya ab to tera kalyan

Ab aage……….

Margret dandanate huye andar ja rahi thi….maine ye dekh jaldi se bhag kar uske pass aa gaya jisse ise bahar se hi kuch gol mol ghuma kar philhal abhi to rawana kar du

Mai—aao margret..my sweet heart…mai tumhara hi intazar kar raha tha

Margret (gusse me)—tum to mujhse baat hi mat karo….dhokebaaz

Mai—arey andar kaha ja rahi ho….aao hum yaha garden me baith kar pyar ki meethi meethi baate karenge

Margret (bhadak ke)—achchha pyar ki baate….my foot

Vo andar jane lagi to maine uska hath pakad ke khich liya….kiss karne ki koshish ki shayad isse maan jaye..lekin ab kya batau in ladkiyo ka..kiss bhi nahi karne di

Margret (jor se)—chhod mujhe adi…pahle us par wali pari se nipat lu…phir tujhe batati hu

Mai—koun pari... ? achchha achchha tum sona ki baat kar rahi ho....

Margret (mere pair me jor se maar kar)—achcha ab sona ho gayi ho...chhod mujhe

Mai—arey vo galti se nikal gaya….tumhe agar usse milna hai to india jana padega na

Margret—jyada bano mat…..mai kal yaha aayi thi…aunty ne sab bataya mujhe…dono ki kali kartute

Mai (mann me)—mummy ne itni badi baat mujhe nahi batayi

Mai—dekh gussa thook de...meri anarkali

Margret (gusse se)—ha..aaj anarkali bol ke kal mujhe bhi kisi deewar me chunwa dena

Mai—sachchi kahta hu ..mujhe kuch nahi malum

Margret—par mujhe malum hai....tere lakshan india se hi use dekhte bigad gaye the….mujhse jhuth bol ke use yaha chup chap le aaya….aunty se bhi jhuth bola

Mai—mujhe sach me nahi pata tha....vo kab yaha aa gayi

Margret—nahi ...tujhe to kuch pata hi nahi hai…..use dekhte hi tere muh me lar tapakne lagi

Mai—ye to sarasar arop hai mujh par

Margret—tune aunty se bhi jhuth bola….mujhe bina bataye chup chap uske sath parilok nikal gaya.. jisse akele me chupke se shadi karle…..ab to tu bahut khush hoga uske sath muh kala karke…maine tujhe us din kuch karne nahi diya na

Mai—mai kuch bhi nahi kiya....aur shadi bhi nahi ki....bilkul god promiss

Margret—mujhe teri kisi baat par yakin nahi hai...chhod mujhe...mujhe uss nak kati se milna hai pahle

Mai—arey vo to apne parilok me hai…yaha kyo talash rahi ho bechari ko

Margret—aur kitna jhuth bolega…abhi meri aunty se baat huyi hai….unhone sab bata diya

Mai (dhire se)—ye mummy bhi na....kutte ke pet me ghee aur aurto ke pet me koi baat hazam hi nahi hoti

Marhret—mera phone tak nahi utha rahe the….ab ye haalaat ho gaye hain

Mai—mai bathroom me tha...uthane ke pahle hi cut ho gaya

Margret—itne din se bathroom me hi the…hai.na…kya kar rahe the itne din bathroom me

“Arey margret beta….aao andar aao”….piche se mummy ne akar kaha

Mai (mann me)—inko to aur chain nahi hai

Urmila—baith..beti..mai tere liye coffee lati hu

Margret (dhire se)—aur koi nahi dikh raha yaha...vo chudail kaha hai

urmila—jab tak...ye le laddu kha...

Margret—wow...bahut sweet laddu hain

“Ha…vo meri aur inki shadi ke hain…aur du kya”…kitchen se nikalte huye sona ne kaha

Sona ko dekh kar aur uski baat sunte hi laddu margret ke beech gale me phans gaya....aadha to usne turant ugal diya…..aur gusse se meri oor dekhne lagi

Mai (mann me)—ye sona...margret ko patane aayi hai ki use aur bhadkane

Margret—kiski shadi...kaisi shadi.... ?

Sona—meri aur inki...chahe to mummy se puch lo

Margret—tu bahar nikal…tune adi par jarur koi jadu kiya hai…aur mummy par bhi

Sona—tu gussa mat ho....mai to tujhe batane aane hi wali thi

Margret—tu bahar nikal yaha se bas....adi sirf mera hai

Sona—meri shadi ho chuki hai…

Margret (gusse me)—adiii….cheater…

Mai—vo..nahi….vo toot jayega

Lekin usne ek na suni aur kaanch ka glass fek ke marne lagi...mai ek taraf hat gaya...glass ke tootne ki awaz sun mummy bahar aa gayi

Urmila—adi..ye kya tod phod kar rahe ho

Mummy ko dekhte hi margret ne jor jor se rona chalu kar di…mai bhi sakpaka gaya…ab ise kya hua

Urmila—kya hua beta... ? kyo ro rahi ho…?

Margret (rote huye)—aunty mai kisi ko muh dikhane ke kabil nahi rahi…adi ne mere sath…india me jabardasti…….

Urmila (muh me hath rakh ke)—kyaaaa….? Hey ram….adiiiiii

Mai—dono hi jhuthi hain mummy ye…

Sona—ha ye jhuth bol rahi hai

Margret (rote huye)—aap chahe to mera medical check up karwa le…..aur chahe to india me ek ladki ne bhi inhe dekha tha

Urmila—india me…..kooun…?

Margret—shree ne mujhe inke sath dekha tha….vo adi ki mousi ki ladki hai…jo vahi

Mai (mann me)—marwa diya isne to….chal beta nikal le yaha se chup chap…isne to sona se bhi bada wala bomb patak diya mere upar

Urmila (jor se)—adiiiiii…..yahi sikhaya hai maine tujhe…..aur tu india me vaha kaise pahuch gaya…?

Mai—mai kisi shree ko nahi janta...ye sab jhuth hai

Margret –achcha ab mai jhuthi lagne lagi...lo aunty maine shree ka call laga diya hai...aap khud hi puch lo....

Mai (shocked)—ise shree ka no. kaha se mila…pakka isne mere mobile se churaya hoga

Margret—hello shree….mai margret bol rahi hu…..

Margret ne phone mummy ko thama diya speaker on kar ke…udhar shree ne jaise hi suna ki margret bol rahi hai to uska para garam ho gaya

Shree—kutiya..randi…chhinar…tujhe sharam nahi aati…adi ke sath aise raat din nangi hoke sote huye.. tune mere adi ko bhi apne jaise bana diya..nirlajj…char char ladkiya milke uske sath….chhiii.. mujhe to bolne me bhi sharam aati hai

Mummy ne turant phone cut kar diya….maine apna sar pakad liya….mummy to poore shock me thi

Urmila—adii…tum jara mere room me aana

Mai—maine kuch nahi kiya…sachchi….vo shree jhuth bol rahi hai

Sona—mummy ji ye dono jhuth bol rahi hain…ye aise nahi hain

Margret—tu to bolegi hi na…chudail kahi ki….tera kaam to ho gaya na

Urmila—adii…mere room me aao

Mai chup chap sar nicha kiye unke room me chala gaya...thodi der baad unke room se nikalne ke baad mera chehra utra hua tha

Mai chup chap apne room me jake darwaja band karke sone ki koshish karne laga…tabhi munish aa gaya

Munish—aur dost kaise ho….?

Mai—theek nahi hu dost

Munish—sambhog ashtra ka prayog kar rahe ho na..theek se

Mai (mann me)—teri to…..tere is sambhog ashtra ne mujhe barbad kar diya

Munish—nahi dost….aage tumhe iski bahut jarurat padegi…..saat saat ko jo jhelna hai….kuch salah chahiye to mujhe yaad kar lena…mai isme full trained hu

Mai—shukriya

Munish haste huye chala gaya…mere jakhmo par namak chhidak ke….margret aur sona ki kafi der tak tu tu main main chalti rahi..phir vo bhi mere darwaje par ek do laat maar ke chali gayi

Shaam ko dad ke office se aane par mummy ne unhe sona se meri shadi ki baat bata di….sath hi margret ke sath affair ki bhi

Dad—wah beta…tum to baap ke bhi baap nikle…mai to ek se hi pareshan hu…tune do do paal li

Mai—pls dad koi solution batao na…inse pichha chhudane ka

Dad—mai to ghar me hi pareshan hota hu to office bhag jata hu...kam se kam din me bacha rahta hu par tu to vaha bhi nahi bachega

Mai—pls solution

Dad—ab to iska ek hi solution hai beta ki tu ab se nare wali chaddi pahanna chalu kar de...kam se kam beech sadak me nanga hone se bach jayega...ye dono tujhe chhodne wali nahi hain

Mai—aur jiski saat biwi hogi to

Dad—vo...chaddi utarke sadak me us chaddi se apna muh chhupa ke niklega jisse saato me se koi dekh na paye

Mai (mann me)—ye sab us munish ki vajah se hua hai...na uske karan ye shaktiya milti…na sona milti…aur na mai parilok jata..aur na ye saat biwi ka lafda banta …sala tharki kahi ka

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