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[Mahiirathore]

Jabardast Update bhaiii
Ab to bechre ka torchar band karva do

Margret or pari adii ko paresan karne koi mokka nhii chodti

Dekhte ab kya sapna dekha or ab kha jana h

 

[Prince sarkash]

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[Arjun Singh 72]

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[sonukale]

Congratulations for completing 4 centuries

 

[aka3829]

Bahut hi achha update tha bhai. Aap apni lekhani ki popularity sirf is baat se laga lo ki aapne update diya 373 page par lekin review dene walo ne apke 400 page pure kar diye reviews dede kar.
Congratulations 400 page pure hone par.
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[Aj1980]

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शानदार
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[Raja thakur]

UPDATE * 58​

Naravali ke khatam hote hi main apne vartaman swaroop me aa gaya…..uske marte hi vaha ka tantra jaal bhi toot gaya….tab tak margret aur sona bhi aa gayi vaha

Dono bhag kar mere gale lag gayi……chitra door se hi khade mujhe dekh rahi thi….ab uski mukti ke liye bhi mujhe kuch to karna hoga

Maine sabhi bachcho ko bandhan mukt kiya…vo sab abhi bhi behad dare huye the aur ghayal bhi….maine apni power se unki halat sahi ki…ab tak subah bhi ho gayi thi

Mai—tum log daro mat bachcho….mai yaha tumhare liye liye hi aaya hu

Ek—maa ke pass jana hai

Mai—hum tumhe tumhari maa ke pass le jayenge beta......sona in bachcho ko sambhalo aur khatra tum apna ye huliya change karo...hamare jaise roop me aao

Khatra—jo hukum mere aaka

Sona aur margret ne un bachcho ko sambhalne lagi….main un sab ko lekar vaha se vapis lout chala….hum phir se vahi aa gaye us khooni nadi ke kinare

Khatra—malik te nadi ka tantra jaal abhi tak nahi toota

Mai—ha..khatra.....aur shayad isliye ki us shaitan ka putra hamare hath nahi laga....vo bach gaya hai

Sona—par vo to pahle hi mar gaya tha na

Mai—vo shaitan ka putra hai itna jaldi kaha marega…..jarur koi aur hi lafda hoga uska

Khatra—to use bhi kyo nahi khatam kar diya

Mai—abhi itna waqt nahi hai hamare pass……in bachcho ki jaan bachana pahle adhik avashyak hai

Sona—to iska matlab vo bhi abhi hamla karega

Mai—karega to jarur par abhi nahi kar sakta kuch

Sona—kyo.... ?

Mai—vo jo kuch bhi karega shaitan ke azad hone ke baad hi kar sakta hai....isliye abhi uske piche jane ka koi matlab nahi hai

Margret—ye nadi phir se mera khoon piyegi....mai to ise khoon pila pila kar hi mar jaungi

Mai—tu na muh band kar ke chup chap hi khadi rahna warna utha kar tujhe nadi me hi phek dunga....meri bahut badi sardardi khatam ho jayegi

Sona—itne sare bachcho ko lekar kaise paar kare.... ?

Mai—ek kaam karo…in bachcho ke sharir se khoon jo bahkar inke kapdo me laga hai na unhe nadi me phek do…aur inhe naye kapde pahna do…..ye nadi jab tak usi khoon ki khushbu me ulajh jayega tab tak hum yaha se nikal jayenge

Sona ne un bachcho ke kapde badal diye aur khoon me bhige unke kapdo ko nadi me phek diya…..maine bari bari se sabka khoon usme daal kar pahle wali jagah se hote huye dusri paar aa gaya

Margret ka khoon nikalne me phir se kadi mashakkat karni padi…..jab jor se usko daant fatkar lagayi tab kahi jakar mushkil se taiyar huyi

Nadi ke is paar aate hi maine us mani ki madad se tilismi darwaje se gujar kar sab ke sath sakushal nikaal gaon aa gaya…jaha abhi bhi vaisi hi shanti thi

Hum usi mandir me pahuch kar shani dev ko naman kiya…..budhiya maayi bhi hame vahi mil gayi….ham sab bachcho ke sath jinda dekh kar vo bahush khush huyi…maine uske pair chhukar uska ashirwad liya

Budhiya—tumhe sahi salamat dekh kar mai bahut khush hu beta

Mai—ye sab ka aur mujhe chahne walo ke ashirwwad ka parinam hai jo mai apne karya me safal raha aur apna vachan poora kar paya

Budhiya—tum bahut bahadur ho beta

Mai—aap mujhe kuch bata sakti hain ki in bachcho ka pariwar yaha se kaha gaya hai jisse main inhe unki maa tak pahucha saku

Budhiya—mai adhik to nahi janti kintu yaha se uttar disha me gaye the sabhi....vaha ke junglo me kuch kabilo ke pariwar rahte hain...ye sab pahle vahi ke rahne wale the....shayad vahi gaye ho

Mai—yaha se kitni doori par hoga vo jungle aur us kabile ka kuch naam agar gyat ho to batane ka kashta kare

Budhiya—mai sirf do hi kabilo ke naam janti hu ek utha aur dusra patak

Margret (jor se haste huye)—uthaaaa.... patakkkkk.....hihihihihi.....daal....nikaallll......hihihihihi

Mai—tujhe bahut hasi aati hai na....ye...le

Margret—uuuuiiii...maaaaa.....mar gayiiiii....mummyyyyy....adiiiii...

Margret utha patak naam sun kar kuch jyada hi has rahi thi to maine use utha kar vahi niche bistar par patak diya jisse uski cheekh nikal gayi

Mai—ab samajh aa gaya utha patak

Sona (dhire se)—adiiii....mujhe daallll...nikallll samjha do...jaise is aate ki bori ko utha patak samjhaya hai vaise hi

Mai—chup.....tere dimag me hardam vahi chalta rahta hai jab dekho

Margret—meri kamar....hiii...lagta hai toot gayi

Mai—achcha hai....mera picha to chhutega kisi tarah se

Budhiya—kyo daant rahe ho beta bechari bachchiyo ko

Mai—ye dono koi bechari nahi hain maayi ....ye aafat ki pudiya hain… (margret ki oor hath utha kar) aur is bewakoof ke chakkar me mai aaj marte marte bacha hu

Margret—aaahhh…..maine kya kiya hai…jo itna bhadak raha hai mujh par

Mai—kya kiya haiiii….?…jab tujhe maine mana kiya tha na ki mere paas us ghere ke andar mat aana chahe kuch bhi ho jaye to kyo aayi….?..tum dono ke chakkar me main bhi kaid ho gaya…pith me kitne kode khane pade par tumhe usse kya farak padta hai….

Margret—to mai kya karti…vo log itne bhayanak lag rahe the….agar mera khoon pi jate to mai mar jati na

Mai—tera khoon pine se tu marti ya na marti par vo jarur mar jate…unhe bhi tera khoon hazam nahi hota..... unhe bhi loose motion ho jata

Budhiya (haste huye)—ab chhod bhi de bechari ko...galti ho gayi usse

Mai—aap nahi janti maayi...jab se ye dono meri jindagi me aayi hai tab se meri khushiyo ko grahan lag gaya hai

Sona (kaan me)—to jaldi se mujh se shadi kar ke 10-12 bachcho ke baap ban jao mai tumhare piche bhagna chhod dungi….phir time hi nahi rahega...mai to kahti hu ki is kaam ke liye yahi sahi jagah hai...daal aur nikaallll

Mai (upar se niche tak ghurte huye)—kyaaaaaaa... ?..mujhe koi machine samajh liya hai tumne....kaha se mai inke beech phans gaya

Chitra—mera bhi jawab do.....kab shadi karoge..... ?

Mai (jhallate huye)—ab tu bhi aa ja.....teri hi kami hai ab....pata nahi mere sath hi aisa kyo hota hai

Budhiya—ye udhar muh kar ke kisse baat kar rahe ho....hum sab to is taraf hain...?..udhar to koi nahi hai

Mai—hai na…ek chudail

Chudail ka naam sunte hi margret turant uth khadi huyi aur kud kar meri pith me chadh gayi...aur kas ke pich se hath daal kar meri gardab me apni baahe phasa li

Margret—chudailllll…..?...maine suna hai ye khoon piti hain....mujhe abhi nahi marna hai.....abhi to meri shadi bhi nahi huyi hai

Mai—ooyeee...ye kya kar rahi hai...chal utar niche....jab dekho tab nautanki....

Budhiya—beta koun chudail... ? yaha to koi nahi dikh raha hai...... ?

Mai—hai maayi....yaha ki Rajkumari Chitralekha......uski hi aatma bhatak rahi hai yaha par....uske hi darr se sab yaha se bhag gaye hain

Margret—phir to ye pakka mera kh.........

Mai (beech me hi)—chup….ab agar tune juban kholi to tujhe uske hawale kar dunga samjhi

Sona—to kya vo bhi hamare hi sath hai….?

Mai—haan ….aur ab vo bhi mujh se shadi karne ke piche pad gayi hai

Sab (chounk kar)—kyaaaaaaaa……?

Mai—haa

Margret—par ye aise kaise ho sakta hai…….?

Sona—haa…ye nahi ho sakta….hum nahi hone denge aisa

Abhi sona aur margret ne mana kiya hi tha ki chitra ne un dono ke pass jakar dono ko utha ke niche jamin me patak diya gusse se

Margret—adiiii…meri kamar

Sona—ye kisne dhakka diya mujhe

Mai—chitra ne…..shant ho jao chitra

Chitra (gusse se)—in dono ka mai khoon pi jaungi agar phir se meri shadi me aana kani ki to

Mai—mai baat kar raha hu na...bilkul apni jagah chup chap jakar khadi jao warna mujhe tumko kaid karna padega

Sona—ye to bahut khatarnak hai

Budhiya—maine suna to tha ki yaha ki rajkumari ka naam chitralekha tha jo behad khubsurat thi…….par ye to bahut purani baat hai…aur kya ye vahi hai….?

Mai—haa

Budhiya—par maine to suna tha ki vo swabhav ki bahut achchi thi to vo chudail kaise ban gayi….?

Mai—ab ye to pata nahi mujhe

Budhiya—par ye sha…….(margret aur sona ki abhi huyi halat dekh aage bolna band )

Mai—ab hame yaha se nikalna chahiye…maa ji aap bhi hamare sath chaliye

Sona—ha…chaliye na aap bhi

Budhiya—theek hai beti….jaisa tum log kaho

Margret—adii mai tere sath chalungi….tera hath pakad ke

Mai—kyo mai kahi bhag raha hu kya….?

Margret—nahi......par kahi phir se vo..chu........

Mai samajh gaya vo chitra se darr rahi hai.....isliye maine bhi baat ko aage nahi khicha aur khana pina se free hokar apna aage ka safar shuru kar diya

Hame chalte huye kafi samay ho chuka tha .....sab thak gaye the chalte huye to maine khatra ko vahi par rukne ka intazam karne ko kaha

Khatra ne turant hi vaha ek chhota sa ghar bana diya….hum sab vahi jake aram karne lage aur kuch der ke liye so gaye

Tabhi sote huye mujhe need me hi ek drishya meri ankho me dikhayi dene laga…..ek jagah bahut sare log baithe huye hain..ajib kapde pahne

Vaha ek bahut hi khubsurat ladki se 8-10 ladke jabardasti pakad ke lipte huye hain aur vo ladki apne apko unse kisi tarah chhudane ki koshish kar rahi thi….vaha baithe sabhi log ye dekh dekh kar khub has rahe the

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