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Ankh lagte hi mere samne ek drishya ubhar aaya…..jisme ek jagah par bahut log kuch janwaro ki khal ke kapde lapet kar charo taraf baithe huye hain

Vahi beech me ek akhade ka maidan bana hua hai jaha par ek behad hasin husna ki malika khadi hokar apne charo oor ghum kar vaha baithe logo ka apni nazaro se avlokan kar rahi hai

Tabhi us bheed me se ek ladka jo majbut kad kathi ka dikh raha tha tha us ladki ke paas aa gaya…dono ke beech kuch bate huyi aur phir dono apas me bhid gaye

Us ladke ne us ladki ko kamar se pakad liya aur niche patakne ka prayas karne laga….lekin us ladki ne uske balo se pakad ke ghuma diya aur utha kar dur phek diya

Vo ladka apni jagah par hi chit hokar let gaya ye dekh kar dusra ladka usse ladne ke ke liye uske samne aa gaya… ab dono me dhar pakad chalu ho gayi

Sab ise me khoye huye the ki tabhi aas maan se koi jalti huyi cheez tezi se aakar us jungle me giri jisse vaha us jalne wali cheez ke girne se pedo me aag pakad li

Dhire dhire ye ye aag ek ped se dusre ped phir tisre.aise karte karte poore jungle ko apne ghere me lene lagi…. Vaha aag lagne se dhuwa ka tez gubbar uthne laga

Lekin aag lagne ki jagah kuch duri par thi jisse in logo ko is baat ka ehsaas nahi hua ki mrityu unki taraf tezi se apne kadam badha rahi hai

Vo sab to apne hi rang me mast the…..ladki ne us ladke ke pairo me apni taang phasa kar ek daav lagaya jisse vo ladka khud ko sambhal nahi paya aur niche gir gaya

Uske girne ke baad ek tisra ladka bheed me se nikal kar ladki ke samne aa gaya….aur dono me kushti chhan gayi…. Beech me ladke ne na jane us ladki kya kaha ki jisse vo bhadak kar gusse me aa gayi

Usne gusse me ladke ki gardan pakad ke jamin se upar utha liya aur phir vaha se dur phek diya....lekin ye ladayi yahi band nahi huyi us ladke ke girte hi agla maidan me aa gaya

Idhar vo aag prachand roop dharan kar chuki thi aur poore jungle ko apni kroadhagni se bhasma karti huyi un logo ki taraf tezi se badhne lagi

Ab aalam ye ho gaya tha ki vo ladki behad gusse me aa chuki thi to jo bhi ladka uske samne aata vo use kshan bhar me utha utha kar patakne lagi…ek ladke ka to usne hath hi tod diya

Idhar ye jungle ki agni vikral roop dharan kar ke sab ko apna graash bana rahi thi to udhar vo ladki gusse me apne samne aane wale har ladke ki haddiya tod rahi thi

Vo aag ab in logo se adhik door nahi thi..shighra hi inke paas tak pahuch jayegi jis raftar se vo aage badh rahi thi… meri ankhe yahi khul gayi

Main (mann me)—mujhe is aag ko rokna hoga…nahi to sab usme jal kar bhasma ho jayenge….mujhe turant hi vaha jana hoga us aag ko bujhane ke liye

Ye mann me khyal aate hi maine khatra ko vaha ka dhyan rakhne ko bol kar turant us aag vali jagah ko yaad kiya aur apni jagah se adrishya ho gaya

Apni jagah se adrishya hokar main sidhe us jungle me aag wali jagah par aa gaya….maine turant apni ankhe band kar ke jal tatva ka smaran kiya

Aur phir vaha par..kuch hi pal me mere hatho se pani ki tez dhar nikalne lagi….aag ka vartaman swaroop kafi ugra ho chuka tha jisse use bujhane me bahut pareshani ho rahi thi

Maine sabse pahle use aage badhne se rokne ka soch vaha pani ki bouchhar karne laga…ek hi jagah par itni tez barish hone se agni dheemi padne lagi aur uska ugra roop shanaih shanaih shant hone laga

Shant hote hote vo bujhne lagi to maine ab sab taraf jal vrishti shuru kar di jisse dhire dhire use bhujhane me mujhe kamyabi milne lagi

Udhar bhale hi us agni ka ugra roop shant hone laga ho parantu idhar us ladki ke ugrata me koi kami nahi aayi thi balki uske ulat vo aur bhi gusse me aa chuki thi

Abhi bhi ek ke baad ek ladke usse bhidne ke liye maidan me utarte ja rahe the kintu ab unme se koi bhi do minute se adhik uske samne tik nahi pa raha tha

Maine jab poori aag thandi ho gayi to vapis jane ke mud gaya to mere kano me kuch logo ki awaze goonjne lagi to mai jigyasa vash usi disha me agrasar ho gaya

Mai jaise hi vaha pahucha to dekha ki ye to vahi jagah hai…mai bhi koutuhal me aakar uski ye fight vahi ruk kar dekhne laga

Jab koi bhi ladka usse akele nahi jeet paya to 8-10 ladke ek sath uske upar toot pade….kisi jonk ki bhanti use charo taraf se jakad liya aur ladki ko apne kabu me karne ki koshish karne lage

Ladki apni taraf se poori koshish me lag gayi kisi tarah khud ko unke changul se chhudane ki…. Lekin itne ladko se khud ko azad kara pana itna asan kaam nahi tha

Vo ladki bahut gusse me dikh rahi thi…usne kisi tarah se apna ek hath unse chhudaya aur phir ek ladke ke gaalo me chatttakkk se jad diya…vo ladka ladkhadate huye niche gir gaya

Phir kya tha jaise hi un ladko ka thoda sa dhyan bhang hua to us ladki ne un sab ko utha utha kar patakna chalu kar diya..unke hath pair todne lagi

Jisse unki dard bhari cheekhe vaha goonjne lagi….main chup chap adrishya hokar ye nazara dekh raha tha….vo ladki itne gusse me thi ki un sabhi ladko ke girne ke bavjud bhi unhe patakani lagaye ja rahi thi

Sabhi use shant hone ko chilla rahe the lekin vo kisi ki bhi sunne ko taiyar nahi thi….mujhe ye dekh kar laga ki agar ise roka nahi gaya to ye in sab ko jaan se hi maar degi aise patak patak kar

Main turant visible hokar uske paas pahuch kar us ladki ko kamar se kas ke pakad liya….vo gusse me mujhe utha ke patakne ki koshish karne lagi aur ek jagah to usne kaat liya

Ye dekh mera dimag jhun jhuna gaya...maine gusse se use ghuma ke apne se door phenk diya....vo jakar niche jamin me giri…mai thodi der use vahi khada hoke ghurne laga

Vo ladki uth kar phir mere paas aayi to maine phir se usko utha ke vahi patak diya….is baar vo mushkil se khadi ho payi…aur dono hath jod liye

Use hath jodte dekh main shant ho gaya aur vaha se nikal kar jane laga tabhi vo ladki bhag kar aayi aur mere pairo me jhuk ke baith gayi….mujhe badi hairani huyi uske aisa karne se

Mai (hairan hokar)—ye kya kar rahi ho tum…utho..chhodo mere pair…

Ladki—nahi…mai in pairo ko nahi chhod sakti...aaj se meri jagah yahi hai

Mai—kya matlab…..?

Ladki—aaj se aap mere pati parmeshwar hain aur main apki patni

Mai (shocked)—kyaaaa.... ?

‘’Ye sach hai beta....tumne meri putri ko uske swayambar ke dangal me hara kar jeeta hai….ab aaj se tum hi iske pati ho’’....us bheed me se kisi ne kaha jo shayad uska baap hoga

Main to ye swayambar ka naam sunte hi hairan ho gaya ki ye is ladki ke swayambar ka dangal chal raha tha aur maine jabran beech me apni taang ghusa di

Mai (shocked)—aisa kuch nahi hai…ye sarasar cheating hai…?..dhokha hai mere sath..?..mujhe ulta sidha vision dikha kar jabardasti phasaya gaya hai…..mai is shadi ko nahi manta …

Ladki—agar aap mujhe swikar nahi karenge to mai yahi apni jaan de dungi…maine tan mann se apko apna pati parmeshwar maan liya hai…

Mai (chid kar)—aise kaise raah chalte kisi ko pati maan liya…?..mai is shadi ko nahi manunga

Ladki ka baap—ye hamare yaha ka riwaz hai..ki jab ladki vivah ke yogya ho jati hai to jo bhi ladka use dangal me hara deta hai vahi uska pati hota hai…aur agar koi na hara paye to vo aajivan kuwari rahti hai…yahi hamare kabile ka swayambar kahlata hai

Ladki ka baap—aur aaj meri putri agni ka swyambar ho raha tha….jise tumne jeeta hai…ab meri putri tumhari patni hai..tumhe usko apnana hi hoga

Mai—kyo apnana hoga…ek to tum sab ne mere sath cheating ki aur ab jabardasti apni is pahalwan ladki ko mere gale me phansi ka fanda bana rahe ho

Ladki (agni)—to theek hai..mera antim sanskar hi kar dijiye ab…mai isi waqt apne pran tyagne ko taiyar hu

Mai (mann me)—maine kitni baar socha ki beta kisi ka kalyan mat kar…ye jamana ulta hai...mere sath hi aksar aisa kyo hota hai...kisi ka kalyan karne ke badle me dhan daulat milti hai aur mujhe har baar ek ladki....maa to mujhe ghar me hi ghusne nahi degi..aur sona aur margret se kya kahunga... ?..mai yaha se chup chap adrishya hoke khisak leta hu..yahi theek rahega

Jab naseeb me lode to kaisay to kaisay milege pakodey. Bhai ki kyu waat laga rahay yaha logo ko ek mushkil hain aur bhai ki abhi se 4 ho gaye bhai na dhone ka rahega aur na hi sukhane ka ha ha ha.
BTW very nice update maza aa gaya aur hasi bhi aa rahi hai apney hero ki qismat me

 

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