Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Acme]

Waiting for next update bhai

 

[sonukale]

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[Anurag]

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[shahnaz123]

Super update
Dono hi update behtareen hain
Pichhla update was marvelous
Gaon me barish aur uss samay ke halat ka bahut hi behtareen varnan kiya hai
Apki lekhni lajawab hai
Aise shudh hindi ke shabdo ka prayog bahut hi kam dekhne aur padhne ko milta hai
Apki story ko padhne ki vajah se hamko bhi inn shabdo ke baare me pata chal jata hai jisse kuch sikhne ko milta hai.
Shree se aisi hi ummed thi
Kuch ek incident ko chhod kar shree ka kirdar bahut shandar raha hai

Iss laash ne to tabahi phailana shuru kar diya, kabra se nikalte hi
Rajnandini ka character bahut hi attractive lag raha hai
Voh rishi se behad prem karti hai
Charo dosto ki dosti bhi mast hai
Jinme se do ne yaha aane k baad shadi kar li h
Shayad ye sab comedy purpose se kiya hai...?
Chatur singh ne kis ko dekh liya, jisse vo hairan hai....?

Over all both updates were mind blowing
Adii aur Rishi ka kya chakkar hai...?
Voh dusra ladka koun tha jo ashram me pahle se hi behosh tha....?
Dono ka phir kya hua....?
Agle update ka badi betabi se intazar anand sir
But you should don't take stress for updates.

 

[Nkmahakal]

Waiting

 

[Viraj Raj]

Shandar update bhai

Waiting...

 

[Sudipkr]

Waiting for next update brooo

 

[anandsngh12]

UPDATE-78​

Gangu—sahi kaha yaar tune….achcha chuttad tu rahne de hum bhabhi ke hath ki chaay pi lenge.

Chuttad—haan, jisse tum dono uske kaan mere khilaf bhar sako….isse achcha to yahi hai ki tum yahi chaay pi lo. Saalo kamino hamesha mujhe blackmail karte rahte ho.

Chuttad teeno ko mann hi mann gaali dete huye paas ki hi dukan par chaay lene chala gaya…..chaay lekar jaise hi vo palta tabhi uski nazar kisi par padi jise dekh kar chuttad ke hosh ud gaye….uska muh kisi avishvashniya ashcharya se khula ka khula rah gaya.

Ab Aage……..

Chuttad apne dosto ke liye chaay lekar jaise hi vapis muda to uski nazar samne ki ek bade bunglow ki balcony par chali gayi jaha koyi tahal raha tha, jisko dekh kar chuttad bilkul hairan ho gaya.

Chuttad (shocked)—Ye kaise ho sakta hai….? Ye namumkin hai….Jarur main achche se soya nahi hounga raat me jisse mujhe dristi bhram ho raha hai.

Usne apni ankho ko do teen baar meech kar punah uss oor dristi ghuma kar dekha kintu poorva paridrishya me kinchit matra bhi koyi parivartan nahi hua.

Vah ek tak mook darshak ki bhanti uss chehre ko khade khade thaga sa dekhta raha jab tak ki vo uski nazro se ojhal nahi ho gaya.

Uss avishwashniya chehre ke dristi ojhal hote hi vah uske vishay me hi sochta hua apni mitra mandli ke paas lout aaya tab tak chaay bhi thandi hokar burf ban chuki thi.

Chuttad ko iss tarah hairan pareshan dekh kar uske baki sathi bhi sochne lage ki ab isko kya ho gaya jo aise kisi murjhaye gulab ki tarah chehra banaye huye hai.

Nangu—aise kyo pareshan dikh raha hai chuttad….kahi raste me subah subah tujhe akela dekh kar kisi ne tere pichhwade me apne nal ka connection to nahi laga diya.

Pangu—hahaha….mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hai….tabhi itna samay lag gaya isko loutne me.

Gangu—ye bhi koi chaay hai…bilkul thandi….ek bhi kaam sahi se nahi kar sakta…ye chuttad ka chuttad hi rahega.

Chuttad—yaar..maine abhi abhi Rajnandini ko dekha hai.

Chuttad ki baat sun kar teeno jo ki chaay ka sip le rahe the unke muh se furrrrrr kar ke poori chaay bahar aa gayi teeno ghur kar chuttad ko dekhne lage.

Teeno (ek saath)—Kyaaaaaaaa…..?

Nangu—tera dimag to sahi hai na….? kahi bhabhi ne raat me tujhe jyada to nahi nichod liya….?

Pangu—lagta hai ki ye ab din me bhi sapne dekhne lag gaya…?

Chuttad—nahi maine koi sapna nahi dekha…..itni der isliye hi huyi ki main Rajnandini ko dekhne me khoya hua tha.

Gangu—ye sab bakwas hai….ye hamari subah subah lene ki koshish kar raha hai.

Chuttad—main sach bol raha hu….tum sab ki kasam….Rishi ki kasam….maine abhi abhi Rajnandini ko dekha hai.

Iss baar teeno ke chehro par gambhirta ke bhaav chha gaye kyon ki unko bhali bhanti gyat tha ki un charo me se koi bhi Rishi ya Rajnandini ki jhoothi kasam kabhi nahi khata tha….chuttad ki baat se teeno ab hairan the.

Pangu—Kintu ye kaise mumkin ho sakta hai…..? Rajnandini yaha kaise aa sakti hai….?

Nangu—kaha dekha tune Rajnandini ko.... ? kua usne bhi tujhe dekha tha...... ? agar usne bhi tujhe dekh liya tha to Phir usne tujhe pahchana kyo nahi..... ?

Chuttad—vaha chaay ki dukaan ke paas me jo bada bunglow hai uske chhat me maine usko tahalte huye dekha hai....yahi to main bhi soch raha hu ki ye kaise sambhav hai.... ?

Gangu—arey to phir chaay ko phenko aur chalo jaldi se uss bunglow ke baare me pata karte hain ki vo kis ka hai

Chuttad—shayad tu sahi kah raha hai hame iss baat ka pata lagana chahiye jaldi hi.

Sab jane ko taiyyar ho gaye kintu pangu kisi soch me khoya hua tha...usko aise khoya hua dekh kar baki teeno bhi uske paas aa gaye aur usse hilane lage.

Nangu—ab isko kya hua.... ? tu kaha ki duniya ki sair karne chala gaya ab…?

Pangu (serious)—Yaar main kuch soch raha hu.

Teeno—kya….? Hame bhi to bata.

Pangu—dekho ye to nishchit hai ki chuttad ne jisko bhi dekha hai vo Rajnandini to nahi ho sakti.

Chuttad—abe paheliya mat bujha…sidhe mudde ki baat kar…pahle se hi mera dimag sunn hua pada hai.

Pangu—dekh ye baat hum charo ke alawa aur koi nahi janta ki Rajnndini maa banne wali thi jab Rishi ki rahasmay tarike se mout huyi to….aur hamare grah par Azgar ka aatank ka karan bhi bachche paida na hone dena hai.

Gangu—tu kahna kya chahta hai…..?

Pangu—tujhe yaad hai jab Rishi hamesha uss bachche ko lekar pareshan rahta tha aur kisi sadhu se milne gaya tha.

Teeno—haa...yaad hai.

Pangu—to kahi ye Rishi aur Rajnandini ki beti, Shree to nahi........ ?

Teeno (shocked)—kyaaaaaaaa...... ?

Pangu—Tumhe yaad hoga ki jab Rishi kisi sadhi se mil kar louta tha to uske baad hi Rajnandini ke garbh ka abhikarshan ho gaya tha....aur chuttad ne bhi Rishi ko apne sapne me yaha dharti par dekha hai to ye bhi to sambhav hai ki Rishi yaha aaya hoga tabhi shree yaha hai.

Chuttad—Teri baat me dam hai yaar.

Nangu—Ye to hamne socha hi nahi.

Gangu—hame chal kar pata lagana chahiye ki vo kiska bunglow hai.... ? aur uss ladki par bhi hame nazar rakhni hogi aur ye bhi janna hoga ki kya uska naam shree hi hai.... ?

Teeno—haa chalo.

Teeno uss dukan wale ke paas pahuch gaye aur beech beech me uss bunglow par bhi nazar doudane lage ki shayad shree ek baar phir se unke ankho ko dikhayi de jaye.

Gangu—bhai ye itna bada bunglow kisi mantri ka hai kya..... ?

Dukandar—Arey bhai inko nahi jante.... ? Ye duniya ke top businessman Anand Rajvansh ji ka bunglow hai aur uske bagal me unke chachere bhai Ajeet Rajvansh ka.

Pangu—tab to unke bachcho ke maze hain.

Dukandar—kaha bhai….anand sahab pahle England me rahte the…unka ek hi ladka tha aditya…..jab se uski mout huyi hai tab se anand ji ki biwi bechari coma me hai…

Nangu—tab to ab unke chachere bhai ajeet ki chandi ho gayi…anand ji ke ab koi aulad nahi bachi to poori property unke bachcho ko hi milegi…maze hain bhai ab unke.

Dukandar—aisa nahi hai bhai…anand ji ki biwi aur ajeet ji biwi dono sagi bahne hain….ajeet ji ki do aulad hain ..ek ladka aur ek ladki.

Chuttad—naam kya hain unke dono bachcho ke….?

Dukandar—Ladke ka naam Sanjay aur Ladki ka naam Shree hai….bachpan me unka ek beta rahasmay tarike se kahi gayab ho gaya jiska naam Rishi tha….tab se vo bhi bahut dukhi rahte hain.

Ye sunte hi charo ke kaan se dhuwa nikalne laga…..dimag ka to jaise fuse hi ud gaya.

Vahi dusri taraf uss ashram me kanak rishi aur ashtavakra kisi paristhiti par gahan vichar vimarsh kar rahe the… kuch der baad rishi ashtavakra ne kisi ko yaad kiya to vah shakhs turant hi unke samne prakat ho gaya.

‘’Pranam Rishivar, aapne mujhe yaad kiya….?” Uss shakhs prakat hote hi kaha.

Ashtavakra—aao vats Munish, maine tumhe ek vishesh prayojan se yaad kiya hai.

Munish—mere nimitta kya adesh hai munivar….?

Ashtavakra (kisi ki taraf ishara karte huye)—isko apne sath le jao….kuch din pashchat iski yuddh shiksha hogi jo ki swayam brahmarshi Vishwamitra pradan karenge…tab tak isko kuch sansarik gyan se parangat karna tumhara karya hoga.

Munish—kya isko sab yaad aa gaya munivar….?

Kanak—abhi nahi…kintu jab bhi vo usse milega to jaldi hi yaad aa jayega.

Munish—theek hai rishivar.

Ashtavakra—kintu ek baat ka smaran rahe vats, ki ye abhi abhi achet avashtha se chetan may hu hai to abhi iska dil aur dimag poori tarah se iske niyantran me nahi hai to ye jo kuch bhi kisi ko kuch karte huye dekhega vahi khud bhi karne lagega…..lekin jaldi hi vo khud ko niyantrit kar lega.

Munish—theek hai…aisa hi hoga

Kanak (uss ladke ko apne paas bula kar)—Putra tum inke sath jao….jaisa ye kare ya karne ko kahe tum bhi vaisa hi karna.

Vo ladka—go agya gurudev…..(mann me) ye sala yaha bhi aa gaya.

Munish—theek hai gurudev…ab mujhe agya de.

Kanak/Ashtavakra—tumhara kalyan ho vats.

Munish—to chale dost.

Ladka—haa…chalo

Munish usko lekar dev lok aa gaya….jaha uska badhiya aadar satkar hua….munish ki biwi Madhvi atyant roop vati thi….jab munish ne usko sab bataya to usne bhi khoob samman diya.

Munish—madhvi ye aaj se yahi rahenge….ye mere param mitra hain.

Madhvi—aap nishchint rahe…apke mitra mere devar huye….main inka poora dhyan rakhungi.

Bhojan ke pashchat usko alishan bhavan ke ek alishan kaksh me vishram hetu pahucha diya gaya…munish ne apne shayan kaksh ke bagal wale kaksh me hi uske liye vishram ka uttam prabandh kiya tha.

Vo ladka aise makhmali bistar ko pate hi turant let kar so gaya….madhya ratri me achanak kuch awaz se uski need toot gayi…..vah uth kar apne kaksh se bahar nikal aaya aur dekhne laga ki ye awaz kaha se aa rahi hai aur kis cheez ki awaz hai.

Vo uss awaz ka pichha karte huye munish ke kaksh ke darwaje tak aa pahucha….awaz munish ke kaksh ke andar se hi aa rahi thi.

Vo awaz ka pata lagane ke liye darwaje ke chhed se andar jhankne laga…..andar munish aur madhvi poorna roop se nirvastra hokar sambhog me kriya rat the….ye awaz unke sambhog karne se hi uttapann ho rahi thi.

Ladka (mann me)—gurudev ne kaha tha ki jo ye kare vahi tum bhi karna….iska matlab madhvi ke sath mujhe bhi aisa hi karna hai.

 

[Alex123]

Gayi bhais pani me

 

[Raguhalkal]

Kamaal ka update hai kuch raaz kul rahe hai

SHAYAD