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RAAZ

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Update#131

Merey bhai tumhari maa zinda hai sahi salamat jis ka pata Meesum ko chal gya tha aur usey maar dia usi aadmi ne.

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Aadmi ki baat sun k Aly k sath sath us k ghar waley bhi heart se aankhein phadey usey deikh rahey they jesay us ne kch aesa bol dia hai jo k namumkin hai thodi deir k baad Sarfraz aur Anisa ki aankhon main khushi k aansu aa gaey baqi bhi sab khush they lekin Sadia ko darr tha k ab us ka kia ho ga Aly bas kisi soch main gum tha us ne kisi ko call milaya.

Mein: Meri baat dhyaan se sun Kalsoom Sarfraz duniya k kisi koney main hi kiun na ho mujhey bas pata chaiey mujhey nai maloom k naam badal dia hai ya nai mujhey who jagah maloom chalni chaiey tumharey pass ek din ka waqt hai kal esi time mujhey tera phone aa jana chaiey main tujhey un ka photo bheijta hoon.

Sarfraz: Ager us ne Kalsoom ka chahra hi badal dia ho.

Aadmi: Nai badla aur badley ga bhi nai kiun k who usi chehrey se pyaar krta hai.

Mein: Tou kia us ne meri ami k sath.

Aadmi: Nai us ne khud se wada kia hai k jab tuk tumharey baba ko maar nai deta who usey hath bhi nai lagaey ga lekin haan us ka khyaal bakhubi rakhta hai time pe khana deta hai baqi zaroorton ka bhi khyaal rakhta hai.

Aly ko Sadia kch preshan lag rahi thi who yeh bhi janta tha es ki wajah kia hai.

Mein: (Sadia se) Aap preshan na hoon jesa aap soch rahi hn wesa kch nai ho ga aap baba ki bv hn aap ka pura haq hai es ghar pe meri maa k aa janey se aap ki zindagi pe koi asar nai aaey ga.

Aly apney room main chala gya lekin baqi sab ab preshan they k jesa aadmi ne kaha tha Aly ka roop kiun nai badla aadmi bhi shaid esi baat ko soch raha tha.

Anisa: Aap ne kaha tha bhai aap ki baat sun k Guddu ban jaen gey lekin who tou wesay hi hn.

Aadmi: Mujhey aesa lag raha hai jesay koi bht bada tufaan aaney wala hai ab Aly apni maa ko wapis laney main kia kia krta hai koi soch bhi nai sakta mujhey lagta hai apni maa ko bachaney k baad hi shaid us ka roop badal jaey lekin us sey pehley jo nuqsaan ho ga us ka kisi ko maloom nai.

Aadmi ki baat sun k sab dar gaey k ab kia ho ga Aly apney room main tha aur idher udher tehal raha tha us ki aankhein laal theen us ka sir gussay main garam huey ja raha tha us k sir pe paseena nikal aaya tha AC main bhi paseena tou andaza lagaya ja sakta hai k gussay main kitna garam dimagh ho gya tha.

Aly ka sir dard se fata ja raha tha Aly apney dono hath sir pe rakh liey aur dabaney laga k shaid dard se nijat mill jaey lekin koi faida nai hua Aly dard ko berdast nai kr paa raha tha aur us k muh se cheikhein nikalni shuru ho gaen.

Anisa: Yeh bhai k room se kesi smell aa rahi hai.

Gudiya: DD yeh ciggrette ka dhuwan hai bhai smoke kr rahey hn.

Anisa: Oh no fir se.

Anisa ne duplicate key se derwaza khola tou pura room smoke se bhara hua tha samney kch nazer nai aa raha tha Anisa aur Gudiya hath ko lehraye aa gey berhney lageen aur Aly k bed k pass pounch gaen Aly bed pe laita smoke kr raha tha.

Anisa ne Aly k hath se ciggrette kheinch k dustbin main pheinkh di Aly ne jab samney deikha tou samney Anisa aur Gudiya gussay se Aly ko deikh rahi theen lekin dono agley hi pal dar gaen hua yun k Aly ki aankhein full laal theen aur Aly ka matha laal hua para tha.

Anisa: (dertey huey) Yeh kia hua bhai aap ko.

Mein: Kch nai sir dard se fata ja raha hai samjh nai aaye kia krun dard berdast se bahir hai.

Anisa: Chaliey aap merey sath bahir aayen Gudiya tu ja doodh garam kr k hall main le k aa.

Anisa Aly ko le k hall main aa gai aur sofey pe bitha dia aur apney room main chali gai wahan se medicine le k aaye tub tuk Gudiya doodh garam kr k le aaye thi Anisa ne Aly ko medicine di Aly ne doodh k sath medicine le li kch hi deir main Aly k sir ka dard hulka hua lekin khatam nai hua dard ab berdast ki had tuk theek ho gya tha.

Agley din sab hall main beithey baatein kr rahey they Aly bas khamosh tha usey intezar tha bas ek call ka thodi hi deir main usey call aaya us ne jhat se pehli ring pe hi utha lia.

Mein: Haan bol kaam hua.

Awaz: Jee sir kaam ho gya hai.

Mein: Bol kahan hn who.

Awaz: Pichley 15 salon se who Israel hn.

Mein: (shocked) Kia?

Awaz: Jee sir aur jo unhey wahan le gya tha who bhi aaj kal waheen hai kisi kaam ki wajah se wahan gya hai.

Mein: Israel main kahan.

Awaz: Sir yeh aap ko DOCK pe pata chal jaey ga.

Mein: Theek hai tumhey inaam mill jaey ga.

Dock ka suntey hi Aly ko maloom ho gya tha k mamla kch zyada hi serious hai.

Sarfraz: Kia pata laga kahan hai Kalsoom.

Mein: Israel.

Aly ki baat sun k sab shocked they Kalsoom Israel kia kr rahi hai aur wahan gai kesay.

Sarfraz: Lekin who wahan kesay gai.

Mein: Yeh tou mujhey bhi nai pata kal mujhey Israel jana hai apni maa ko leney.

Aly ne kisi ko phone kia.

Mein: Meri baat dhyaan se suno Austria ki factory main sab employee ko nikal k aur kch gundon ko daal k aag laga do abhi esi waqt samjh gaey baqi mein aa k deikhta hoon mein apney plane se nikal raha hoon factory main aag ki khaber puri duniya deikhey Pakistan se le k Canada tuk her koi news deikhey.

Aadmi: Tum krna kia chah rahey ho.

Mein: Merey aadmi ne jab btaya k Address Dock pe ja k miley ga es ka matlab hai k mamla bht hi zyada peichida hai mein koi risk nai lena chahta kisi ko bhi maloom nai perna chaiey k mein kaha ja raha hoon esi liey Austria main factory main aag lagwa di hai takeh un ko mujh pe shak na ho k mein Israel ja raha hoon.

Dock hamara code word hai Austria main location hai mein wahan jaun ga wahan ek aadmi mujhey address de ga waheen se mein khufiya tor pe Israel jaun ga.

Aadmi: Hmmmm apna khyaal rakhna.

Mein: Mujhey apni perwa nai bas maa ko sahi salamat le aaun ager Israel ne kch bhi ghalat kia duniya k nuqsay se us ka wajud hi khatam kr doon ga.
Badiya update yani ab ek bihat khatarnak khooni muqabla shuru hone wala hain.
 

RAAZ

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Update#132
Aadmi: Hmmmm apna khyaal rakhna.

Mein: Mujhey apni perwa nai bas maa ko sahi salamat le aaun ager Israel ne kch bhi ghalat kia duniya k nuqsay se us ka wajud hi khatam kr doon ga.

Aly apney Plane main Austria janey k liey tyaar ho gya her traf news pheil gai thi k Austria main Ak Group of Company ki Factory ko Aag lagi hai Ghanton ki flight k baad Aly Austria pouncha wahan se who Factory gya wahan se roop badal k who wahan se ghaib ho gya.

Aly Factory se Dock pouncha wahan pe usey ek aadmi ne ek parcel dia usey le k Aly Austria main baney apney ghar aa gya ghar pounch k us ne parcel khola us main her ek detail thi kahan rakha gya hai security kitni hai Israelian Gov kitni support kr rahi hai.

Khatra bht tha Mosad bhi es main shamil thi aur Israelian Army bhi matlab bht bada kheil kheila ja raha tha mamla shaid us ki maa tuk ka nai tha kch aur bhi tha shaid Pakistan main honey waley Election.

Mein: Arey haan Election yeh mein kesay bhool gya matlab kch honey laga hai es election main kch bada ho ga ya tou apni pasand ki party layen gey ya kch aur ho ga jesa k ladayee jhagra, fasad, bomb blast wagheira kch bhi ho jaey mujhey pata lagana chaiey.

Aly ne kisi ko phone lagaya.

Mein: Meri baat dhyaan se sun mamla bht hi ghambeer hai mujhey kisi bhi halat main DG ISI se baat krni hai unhey bas yeh msg bheij de k Aly baat krna chahta hai who samjh jaen gey.

Awaz: G abhi msg bheijta hoon.

Aly ne apney bag se ek device nikali aur usey on kia yeh ek cell phone type device thi jo k na tou trace ho sakti thi na hi tape kch hi deir main usi device pe phone aaya.

Mein: Salam.

DG: W Salam kaho kia baat hai Aly sab theek hai na.

Mein: Kch bhi theek nai hai sir mujhey khaber milli hai k Israel main meeting ho rahi hn Pakistan main election ko le k usi silsiley main aap se baat krni thi.

DG: Haan mein janta hoon wahan meeting ho rahi hn tum kia kehna chahtey ho.

Mein: Sir aaj tuk kch nai manga hai mein ne bas jo kaha gya who kia hai Pakistan k liey Meri maa ko kidnap kr k Israel main rakha gya hai ek tou mujhey unhey bachana hai doosra mujhey yeh pata lagana hai k wahan aakhir chal kia raha hai kia plan kr rahey hn who.

DG: Mein janta hoon Aly k tumhari ami wahan qaid hn ek ghar main ek aesay ghar main jis k aas pass aesa khatra hai jesay us ghar pe Atom Bomb ko point kia gya hai same like that un ki fouj, Mosad aur High Trained Guards sab us ghar ko gheirey main le rakhey hn yeh btao mein kia kr sakta hoon tumharey liey.

Mein: You know sir 20 saal Apni maa k qatilon ko paglon ki trhah donndha hai lekin jab pata chala k who zinda hn tou ab raha nai ja raha unhey deikhney ko mein apni maa ko wapis lana chahta hoon sir I need your help.

DG: Tum ne kia nai kia Pakistan k liey tou kia itni si favour nai kr sakta bolo kia chahtey ho.

Mein: Apney koi aadmi hn wahan.

DG: Haan hn.

Mein: Bas un ka contact mujhey de dijeay baqi mein sab deikh loon ga.

DG: Mujhey tum pe sab se zyada bharosa hai Aly lekin tum jantey ho Israel ko hum ne kabhi accept nai kia as a country aur Israel ki back pe hai America zara si chuk sab berbaad kr de gi tum samjh rahey ho na.

Mein: Mein achi trhah se samjhta hoon sir bas aap mujh pe bharosa rakhein mein Apni maa ko le k wapis aa jaun ga.

DG: Theek hai mein tumhey esi pe msg krta hoon un k contact Best of Luck.

Mein: Thnx sir.

Kuch hi deir main Aly ko msg aaya Aly ne phr se kisi ko phone kis Pakistan main.

Mein: Jaldi se merey doston ko Cargo Plane k zariey Austria bheijo jitni jaldi ho sakey utni jaldi aur baat pheila do k Factory main kch intrument bheija ja raha hai jaldi.

Aly ne khana khaya aur sou gya jab sou k utha tou kch hi ghantey they Cargo Plane ko Austria main aaney k liey time beet gya Aly chal dia Airport wahan ja k us ne ek kamrey jitna box apney plane se nikalwaya aur kagzi karwayee k baad usey apney ghar le aaya container bus k zariey.

Box ko ghar rakhwa k bus ko rawana kr k Box khol dia us main jo bhi they who aram se ghar main chaley gaey us k baad Aly ek room main gya jo k ek special room tha wahan ja k us ne sarey kaprey utar diey siwaye underwear k aur remote se kch kia tou usey apney jism pe kch chubta hua mehsoos honey laga.

Us sey Aly ka gussa berhney laga us ka jism jo k gora tha ab pinkish honey laga aur kch time k baad laal Aly ki aankhein had se zyada laal ho gai theen Aly k chehrey pe sheitani smile thi aur sath main gussa bhi Aly jor se cheikhney laga aur kch hi deir main room normal ho gya aur Aly ab Aly nai raha.

Computer: Welcome Zevil.

Zevil: Im Back hahahahahahahaha.

Zevil ne kaprey pehney aur room se bahir nikal aaya aur study room main chala gya wahan ja k us ne fridge se bear nikali aur sofey pe beith k peeney laga aur plan bnaney laga plan bnaney k baad us ne Aadmi ko phone kia jo us k ghar pe reh raha tha.

Aadmi: Hello Aly.

Zevil: Guess who.

Aadmi Aly ki awaz aur es trhah se bolna pe shocked ho gya aur sofay se girta girta bacha who us awaz ko pehchanney ki koshish kr raha tha zehan pe zor dalney k baad ek naam us k Zehan main aaya aur us naam ko soch k hi us ka shareer Paseeney main naha gya us k chehrey pe darr saaf saaf deikha ja sakta tha Aly ki family us Aadmi ki herkat ko deikh k shocked thi.

Aadmi: (kanpti hui awaz main) Ze ze Zevil.

Zevil: Yo my boy.

Aadmi: (dertey huey) Kia kaam hai.

Zevil: Mein ab Israel rawana honey laga hoon wahan pounch k mein signal doon ga aur tumhey who krna hai jo ab mein tumhey btaun ga.

Aadmi: Theek hai.

Zevil: ***********************.

Anisa: Kia hua aap itna derey huey kiun hn.

Aadmi: Derney wali baat hai Aly ab apney Second last Roop main aa chuka hai.
Nice update bhainmaza aa gaya ab Zevil ke karname dekhnay honge. Aur ab multiple peraonality ke last level pe aa gaya hain aly means aage bus ek bohat bada blank hain a big zero dekhay kaisay bacta ya khatam karta hain isay apna hero aly.
 

Rudra6124

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Bhai mre lie koii purane updates de do yar ye kya baat huyi meri favourite story ko kha se kha pahuncha diya aise thodi hota h
 

kINg_deVil

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No tension bro we understand bas meri to dua ha ap wapis puri tarha fit and fine ho jao
Shaandar,Super and fantastic update as always apki story ma agar ghalti ho bhi to( jo hoti nahi) apka writing style aesa ha ka pata hi nahi chalta or update end ho jata ha
thnx a lot bhai bas aap ki dua hai
 
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