Fantasy Corruption

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Update#135
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Sab shocked they Aly k behaviour se k Aly ko kia hua sab se zyada tou Kalsoom shocked main thi k kch deir pehley tou acha bhala tha ab kia hua lekin baqion ko samjh aa gai thi k Aly Guddu k roop main wapis aa gya hai aur ab us ka zehan ek bachay jesa hai.

Sarfraz ne Kalsoom ko galey se laga lia us k baad Anisa bhi Kalsoom k galey lagi phr nana ki family Kalsoom se milli ab bari aaye Rehana aur Rabia ki who bhi Kalsoom se millien Kalsoom ne bina koi sawal kiey un ko galey se laga lia us k baad Kalsoom Sadia k bhi galey lagi.

Sab ghar aa gaey Aly sarey rastey Kalsoom k sath es trhah raha jesay chotey bachay apni maa k sath rehtey hn Kalsoom abhi bhi shocked thi k Aly ko achanak hua kia hai Ghar main Ayesha aur Habiba khana tyaar kr rahi theen who airport nai gai theen.

Kalsoom: Ye achanak Guddu ko kia hua hai aesay bachon jesa kiun bertaw kr raha hai.

Anisa: Ami ghar chal k aap ko sab bata dein gey abhi chup rahein.

Sab ghar pounchay un ka sawagat Ayesha aur Habiba ne kia Kalsoom un ko deikh rahi thi aur achanak hi unhey galey se laga lia sab es baat se heran they k Kalsoom bina sawal kiey sab se hans k kiun mill rahi hai jabkeh na tou Sadia, Rehana aur Rabia ko janti hai na hi Ayesha ko Habiba ko janti hai lekin ab who bachi nai badi ho gai hai.

Sarfraz: Kalsoom tum se kch baat krni hai.

Kalsoom: Koi nai Merey betey ne sab bata dia hai mujhey aur mujhey es baat se koi farq nai perhta mujhey bas apney bachon se milney ki khushi hai ab tou meri char aur betian hn do bahu k roop main aur do meri behan ki beti k roop main.

Kalsoom ki baat sun k Sadia ki aankhon se khushi k aansu aa gaey sab baatein kr rahey they k achanak Aly roney laga Kalsoom ne Aly ko galey se laga lia.

Kalsoom: Kia hua merey bachay ko.

Guddu: Ami mujhey na bhook lagi hai mujhey khana khilao na.

Kalsoom: Haan merey bachay chal tujhey apney hathon se khilati hoon.

Us k baad sab dinning table pe aaye aur sab ne khana khaya Kalsoom ne Aly ko apney hathon se khana khilaya khana khaney k baad Aly ko neend aaney lagi Aly ab bilkul kisi bachay ki trhah ho gya tha Kalsoom ne us ko bed pe le ja k sula dia aur hall main aa k beith gai yahan sab beithey they.

Kalsoom: Tou ab kon mujhey btaye ga k Aly k sath asal main kia hua hai.

Aadmi: Mein btata hoon.

Us k baad Aadmi ne Aly ki bachey honey se le k ab tuk ki sari kahani suna di jisey sun k Kalsoom ki aankhon se aansu nikalney lagey baqi sab ki aankhon main bhi ansu they Kalsoom apney betey ki dardnak zindagi k barey main sun k ander se hill gai thi.

Kalsoom: Ab merey Guddu k sath kia ho ga.

Mueed: Aanti Dua karein k us k dushmanon ko na pata chaley Aly k es roop k barey main nai tou us k sath jo ga hum soch bhi nai saktey kiun k ab who es situation main nai hai k un ka muqabla ker sakey who tou ab kisi k uncha bolney se hi dar jata hai.

Kalsoom: Tou kia ab mera bacha aesay hi rahey ga.

Aadmi: Shaid us ka roop change ho jaey keh nai saktey k kab aur ager change ho gya tou aap ko Aly dobara nai miley ga.

Aadmi ki baat sun k Kalsoom phr se roney lagi Anisa ne Kalsoom ko galey laga lia.

Anisa: Aap chinta na karein Ami hum Aly ko kch nai honey dein gey humara Pyaar Aly ko wapis laye ga Ami.

Aadmi: Mueed do din baad election hn Aly ne mujhey ek kaam dia tha who tum kr dena lekin shawdani se kisi ko kaan o kaan khaber na ho.

Mueed: G boliey.

Aadmi: Haris 5 Hulkon se election lad raha hai 3 Punjab se aur do Sindh se Punjab k teeno hulkon main 30,000 caror yeni k her hulkey main 10,000 caror lagana hai aur Sindh main 10,000 caror her hulkey main 5000 caror lagana hai.

Us ki Party purey Pakistan se jeet jaey lekin who nai jeetna chaiey theek hai ab mujhey tumhey btaney ki zaroorat nai hai k Pesa kesay lagana hai kisey lagana hai kis ko dena hai yeh tum achi trhah se jantey ho jao abhi se kaam pe lag jao waqt kam hai.

Aadmi k muh se itni raqam sun k Aly k sarey ghar waley usey aankhein phadey deikh rahey they k yeh kia bola hai abhi aesa tou filmon main bhi nai hota real main itna pesa kahan se aa gya.

Sarfraz: Yeh abhi tum kia bol rahey they itna pesa kahan se aaya.

Aadmi: Aap Aly k peson ki baat kr rahey hn yeh jitni main ne raqam boli hai who Aly k total peson ka 1% bhi nai hai.

Ab kia ek hi din main Shocked de k marey ga sab aankhein badi kiey Aadmi ko deikh rahey they un ko yakeen hi nai ho raha tha es umer main Aly ne itna pesa kama kesay lia aur ager hai bhi tou duniya main es ki khaber kisey kiun nai hai.

Aadmi: Mein yeh tou nai bata sakta k Aly k pass itna pesa kahan se aaya kesay aaya yeh aap ko Aly hi bata sakta hai kiun k mein ne kasam khayee hai k mein kisi ko nai btaun ga wesay bhi kisi ko pata chal bhi jaey tou kia farq perhta hai yaqeen koi nai karey ga aur ager koi Money trail mang le tou Aly k pass who bhi hai aur kisi k pass koi saboot nai k yeh sab black money hai.

Kalsoom: Ya ***** merey bachay ki hifazat krna.

Security: Sahab bahir courior aaya hai Austria se.

Aadmi: Zayn jao lagta hai Zaigham aa gya hai lekin dhyaan se who dhadein na Aly dar jaey ga.

Zayn: G.

Kalsoom: Ab yeh Zaigham kon hai.

Gudiya: Bhaiya ka sheir.

Kalsoom: (shocked) Sheir who jungle wala asli sheir.

Anisa: G Ami.

Tabhi Roaaaaarrrrr ki awaz aayee Aly jaag gya aur roney laga Kalsoom aur Aly ki behnein room main gaen tou Aly dara hua roney laga jesay hi us ki nazer Kalsoom pe gai who us se lipat k roney laga sab Aly k es behaviour se preshan ho gaey they sab se zyada tou Ayesha aur Habiba theen.

Kalsoom: Kia hua merey betey ko kiun rou raha hai.

Guddu: (rotey huey) Mujhey dar lag raha hai Sheir ki awaz aaye ami mujhey ghar main sheir aa gya hai usey baghao.

Kalsoom: Kch nai hua merey bachay who bahir TV deikh rahey they usi main Sheir ki awaz aaye thi bas aur kch nai chal chup ho ja merey pyaara beta.

Aly chup ho gya who Kalsoom se galey laga hua tha aur baqion ki traf heran ho k deikh raha tha.

Guddu: Ami yeh kon hn.

Kalsoom: Beta yeh tumhari behan Anisa.

Guddu: DD per who tou koi aur hai.

Kalsoom: Haan lekin ab bari ho gai hai na es liey.

Guddu: (khush hotey huey) DD, DD aap kahan chali gai thi deikho ami aa gaen.

Anisa: Haan Guddu mujhey pata hai.

Guddu: (Rehana, Rabia, Ayesha aur Habiba ki traf ishara kr k) Yeh kon hn.

Kalsoom: (Rehana aur Rabia ki traf ishara kr k) Yeh tumhari behnein hn jesay Anisa hai na wesay hi yeh bhi behnein hn.

Guddu: Aur yeh.

Kalsoom: Pehley mujhey yeh btao k Mein tumharey baba ki kia lagti hn.

Guddu: (masoom si shakal bana k) Aap tou baba ki BV hn.

Kalsoom: Shabash yeh dono aap ki BV hn.

Guddu: Lekin meri shadi kesay ho gai mein tou bacha hn na aap ne hi kaha tha k jab mein bada hn ga tub hi shadi ho gi Habiba se.

Kalsoom: Haan aap barey ho tou gaey ho deikho khud ko kitney barey ho gey ho.

Guddu: (khud ko deikh k) Haan aap sahi bol rahi ho mein bada ho gya hoon.

After 2 Days:
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Anchor: Nazrein aaj purey mulk main Election ho rahey hn log apney pasandeeda leader ko vote kr rahi hn voting time subhah 8 bjey se le k sham 5 bjey tuk hai us k baad counting shuru ho gi ab deikhna yeh hai k kon c party yeh election jeetti hai Leading party do hi hn Sarfraz shb ki Awami Insaaf Party aur Nasir shb ki Muslim League H.

 

[kINg_deVil]

update de dia hai

 

[kINg_deVil]

yeh update shaid aap ko pasand na aaye lekin zaroori tha kch baatein Kalsoom ko clear krwana theen aur Guddu ko relation k barey main btana tha Ab mein Monday se update doon ga kiun k abhi mujh se milney merey czn aaye hn door se tou update nai de paun ga

 

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reply ka intezar rahey ga

 

[Ash123]

yeh update shaid aap ko pasand na aaye lekin zaroori tha kch baatein Kalsoom ko clear krwana theen aur Guddu ko relation k barey main btana tha Ab mein Monday se update doon ga kiun k abhi mujh se milney merey czn aaye hn door se tou update nai de paun ga

No tension bro we understand bas meri to dua ha ap wapis puri tarha fit and fine ho jao
Shaandar,Super and fantastic update as always apki story ma agar ghalti ho bhi to( jo hoti nahi) apka writing style aesa ha ka pata hi nahi chalta or update end ho jata ha

 

[King]

Superb update bhai

 

[crazyrex]

Superb update hai bhai

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Boht achi update thi

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

Keep going

Will wait for next update

 

[RAAZ]

Update#130​

Aaj Aly ki Shadi Habiba k sath thi Sab bht khush they khaas kr k Habiba ki Family Aly ka nikah Habiba k sath ho gya rukhsati hui aur sab apney ghar ko aa gaey agley din Valeema us k baad Aly k nana g apney gaun ja chukey they Aly apney room main apni maa ki tasveer k aagey khada apni maa ko tasveer main deikhey ja raha tha.​

Mein: Aaj aap ka sapna pura kr dia maa aap ne hi kaha tha na k mera Habiba se nikah ho deikho maa mein ne Habiba se nikah kr lia DD ka bhi nikah kr dia kash aap jahan hoti tou kitna acha hota aap deikh rahi hn na sab kitney khush hn.​

Mein ne khud ko janwar bana lia lekin apni Family ki rakhsha aaj bhi kr raha hoon maa pata nai kiun mujhey aesi beemari lagi k mein janwar ban jata hoon maa mujhey aaj aap ki bht yaad aa rahi hai.​

Aly ne itna hi kaha tha k kisi ne us k kandhey pe peechay se hath rakha Aly ne mud k deikha tou us ki behan Anisa thi us ki aankhon main aansu they.​

Anisa: Kia hua bhai aaj khushi ka din hai aur aap dukhi hn.​

Mein: Mein dukhi nai hoon DD bas maa ki yaad aa rahi hai aaj ager who zinda hoteen tou apni family ko khush deikh k kitna khush hoteen who.​

Anisa: Haan bhai lekin hum kia kr saktey hn bhai uper waley ne jitni zindagi likhi thi maa ki utni hi who jee payen.​

Mein: (gussay main) Nai DD utni nai kisi ne un ki zindagi cheen li maar dala humari maa ko mein usey zinda nai shodun ga bas ek baar pata chal jaey k who kon tha us k baad us ka who haal karun ga k duniya hi kanp uthey gi.​

Anisa Aly ko gussay main deikh k darr gai Anisa ne Aly ko galey se laga lia Aly shant hua tou Anisa usey bahir le aaye yahan sab dinner pe us ka wait kr rahey they sab ne raat ka khana khaya aur apney apney room main chaley gaey aaj Aly k sath Ayesha k sath sath Habiba bhi thi.​

Subhah sab nashtey k liey dining table pe ikhattha they aur sath sath baatein bhi kr rahey they ek haftey k baad election they usi pe baatein ho rahi theen nashtey k baad sab hall main ja k beith gaey.​

Aadmi: Aly aaj waqt aa gya k jis kaam k liey tum ne mujhey bheija tha who tumhey btaun.​

Mein: G dada mein tyaar hoon btaeye kia pata chala.​

Aadmi: Mein tumhey btaun ga lekin us sey pehley tumhey bata doon k meri puri baat suno gey us k baad ho kch bolo gey beech kch bhi nai pucho gey.​

Mein: Theek hai dada.​

Aadmi: Es sey pehley mein tujhey kch btaun ek flashback hai who sun le.​

Mein: G.​

Flashback​

Aadmi: Baat tub ki hai jab tumharey baba aur ami University main perhtey they tumharey baba ko tumhari ami k sath ek hi nazer main pyaar ho gya tha tumhari ami ko bhi tumharey baba pehli nazer main hi pasand aa gaey they lekin kabhi ziker nai kia.​

Tumharey baba her roz tumhari maa ko deikhney ka koi na koi bahana banatey rehtey es baat se tumhari ami bhi anjaan nai theen un ko bhi maloom tha k tumharey baba un ko shup shup k deikhtey hn dheirey dheirey dono ek doosrey se pyaar krney lagey aur ek din tumharey baba ne tumhari maa ko propose kr dia jisey tumhari maa ne accept kr lia.​

University main koi aur bhi tha jo tumhari maa se utna hi pyaar krta tha usey yeh maloom nai tha k tumhari maa ne tumharey baba ka pyaar accept kr lia hai kiun k who us din aaya hi nai tha uni agley din us ne irada kia k who tumhari maa ko propose kr k hi rahey ga.​

Agley din who gya aur tumhari maa ko propose kr dia lekin tumhari maa ne yeh keh k inkaar kr dia k who kisi aur se pyaar krti hai esi beech tumharey baba aur us aadmi k dermyaan dushmani shuru ho gai aye din dono main jhagra hota rehta lekin tumhari maa ne tumharey baba k sath kabhi nai shoda.​

Tumharey baba ki aur ami ki shadi ho gai nikah waley din bhi hangama hua tha who aadmi dhamki de k gya tha k who badla zaroor le ga aur aesa badla le ga k dono ne socha bhi nai ho ga kheir shadi ho gai dono khushi khushi rehney lagey us k baad Tum aur Tumhari behan es duniya main aaye dono ki zindagi main khushiyan hi khushiyan theen.​

Ek din dono kisi restourent main khana khaney gaey wahan who aadmi bhi tha us ne waiter ko pesay de k tumhari maa k pani k glass main ek goli dulwa di aur pani tumhari maa pee gai dono ghar aa gaey us raat tumhari maa ko naak se khoon nikla jo us medicine ki wajah se hua tha tumharey baba ghabra gaey aur un ko hospital le gaey.​

Us waqt Hospital main bhi who aadmi majud tha us ne Doctor ko pesay de k khareed lia tha doctor ne tumhari maa k test kiey aur ek khaber tumharey baba ko di k tumhari maa ko Blood Cancer hai aur bhi Last stage ab elaaj ka koi faida nai kiun k tumhari maa k pass ek hafta hi bacha hai dono hakka bakka ho k doctor ko deikhney lagey kiun k aesa pehley hua nai tha aur achanak kesay.​

Tumharey baba toot chukey they kiun k who tumhari maa se bht pyaar krtey they doctor ne kch aesi medicine likh k di jis sey tumhari maa ki halat kch khraab si rehti takeh k un ko shak na ho phr din tumharey baba kisi kaam se bahir gaey they ghar main sirf tumhari maa, tum aur tumhari behan hi they.​

Tumhari maa hall k sofey pe beithi thi tabhi who aadmi mask pehn k aaya aur tumhari maa ka muh daba k usey injection laga dia aur wahan se chala gya who injection drasal yeh tha k us sey insaan k dill ki dhadkan bht slow ho jati hai nabz na k braber chalti hai aur insaan behosh ho jata doosrey samjhtey hn k who mar gya hai.​

Yehi tumhari maa k sath hua sab ne samjha k who mar gai hai tumharey baba ko pata chala tou who aur toot chukey they tumhari maa ko dafan kr k wapis aa gaey jab sab kabristaan se wapis aaye usi aadmi ne tumhari maa ki kaber khodi aur tumhari maa ko bahir nikal k usi trhah phr se kaber kr di.​

Merey bhai tumhari maa zinda hai sahi salamat jis ka pata Meesum ko chal gya tha aur usey maar dia usi aadmi ne.

Sorry bhai aapki story aaj dekhi aur aaj se dobara padni shuru kari aur isi update me dhamaka kar dia. Arey baap re jo story ruk si gayi thee usko ek dum se aisay comeback karaya ghazab. Maza aa gaya. Aage bhi update pad kar comment karta hoon. Ab update regular rakhna coz moharram bhi khatam ho chuke hain. Aur.health kaisi hain aapki ab.