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John ne apna mask utar dia aur jo Chehra samney aaya usey deikh k who aadmi peechay ki traf ludaktey huey gira aur phr khada ho gya us ki aankhein herat se badi ho gaen theen aur mathey pe paseena tha.
Aadmi: Aly.
Aly: Haan mein.
Aadmi: Magar tum tou Canada gaey they na.
Aly: Haan gya tha magar pichley haftey jo abhi gya tha who duplicate tha.
Aadmi: Phir tu mera kch nai bigad sakta tera beta aur behan merey kabzey main hn ager tu ne mujhey nuqsaan pounchaya tou tu unhey hamessha k liey kho de ga.
Aly: Hahahahahahahaha UN KI AANKHON MAIN EK AANSU TERI DARDNAAK MOUT LIKH DE GI TU UNHEY MARNEY KI BAAT KRTA HAI wesay bhi mein tujhey marun ga nai Mein jaan gya hoon tu kon hai Aly tujhey ek aur moqa de ga filhaal tu yahan se bhaag ja kaheen door ager mera irada badal gya tou kuttey ki mout marey ga.
Aadmi kch deir sochta raha us k baad us ne wahan se nikal janey main hi bhalayee samjhi us k janey k baad Aly ne John wala mask dala aur sarey room ki talashi li ek main dono Zayn aur Rabia behosh miley un ko utha k bahir aaya aur gadi main daal k wahan se nikal gya kch hi sec baad wahan bht bada dhamaka hua.
Sadia: (rotey huey) Abhi bhi meri bachi ka kch pata nai chal raha pata nai kis haal main ho gi meri bachi.
Anisa: (shocked) Ayesha Habiba tum yahan.
Sab ne Main derwazey ki traf deikha tou wahan Ayesha aur Habiba khadi mili unhey deikh k sab shocked they aur dar bhi gaey they k sath aly bhi aaya ho ga ager usey pata chala k Zayn aur rabia ghaib hn tou pata nai kia tufaan laey ga who.
Kalsoom: Beta itni jaldi aa gaey tum log ek haftey baad aana tha tum ne.
Ayesha: Ami g hum gaey hi kab they.
Anisa: (shocked) Kia matlab hai es ka.
Habiba: Matlab yeh k hum pichley haftey gaey they jo ab aap k samney gaey who duplicate they.
Habiba ki baat sun k sab shocked ho gaey unhey yakeen hi nai ho raha tha k yeh sab hua hai tou es ka matlab Aly kaheen gya hi nai tou kia usey maloom hai k Zayn aur Rabia kidnap huey hn.
Sab inhi sochon main gum they k bahir gadi aa k ruki sab se pehley Zayn ander aaya us k baad Aly John k roop main Rabia ko goad main utha k le k aaya unhey deikh k sab heran they.
Mueed: (John se) Mein kab se tumhara phoon mila raha hn tumhara phone band kiun tha ager Aly ko pata chal jata tou.
Es sey aagey Mueed kch bolta John ne usey chup rehney ko kaha Rabia ko sofey pe bitha k apna mask utar dia samney Aly ko deikh k sab phr se shocked they aur jab unho ne Aly ki aankhein deikhein jo k laal theen sab darr gaey.
Kalsoom: Beta tum.
Aly: (gussay main) Zayn chal merey sath.
Yeh keh k Aly bahir ki traf chal dia Aly ko gussay main deikh k sab dar gaey they Zayn Aly k pechey pechay chala gya sath main Mueed bhi tha dono gadi main beithey jis main Aly beitha tha Aly ne gadi chalani shuru kr di.
Nasir: Samjh nai aaraha k HARIS mera phone kiun nai pick kr raha.
Haris: Mujhey tou yeh samjh nai aa rahi k undono ko kon utha le gya.
Nasir kch bolta bahir firing ki awaz aaney lagi aur sath hi cheikhon ki Nasir aur Haris abhi kch samjh patey unhey main gate pe Aly full gussay main nazer aaya us k kaprey khoon main nahayee huey they Aly k sath sath Mueed aur Zayn bhi they Aly ko apney samney deikh k un ki phat k hath main aa gai Aly chal k un k samney chala gya.
Aly: (gussay main) Mein ne manah kia tha na k meri Family ko aankh utha k bhi nai deikhna tujhey ek baat samjh nai aati mujhey khud apney gussay se darr lagta hai aur tu Merey gussay ko badawa de raha hai.
Nasir: Deikho hum ne kch nai kia.
Aly: (gussay main) Kia nai hai lekin plan tou bnaya tha na HARIS ne tumhey dhoka dia terey betey ka naam istemaal kia usi ne Zayn aur Rabia ko kidnap kia aur ager who unhey maar deta tou tumhara naam aata en sab main lekin who aesa kr nai paya tou ab tum batao tumharey sath kia krun.
Haris: Mein PM hn tum mujhey kch nai kr saktey.
Aly: Mein chahun tou ek sec main teri hakumat khatam kr doon ga tu mujhey PM honey ki dhamki na de.
Nasir: Humein shod do.
Aly: Itna sab krney k baad bhi tumhey shod doon wesay bhi terey betey ne GUJRAL ka naam istemaal kia hai mein kch na bhi krun tou who maar de ga kahan marey ga kab marey ga yeh usey maalom hai tum dono hakumat ka maza lo mera beta Election nai ladey ga ab yeh tum dono pe hai k tum GUJRAL se kesay bachtey ho.
Yeh keh k Aly wahan se nikal gya sath main Mueed aur Zayn bhi they jab Aly ghar pouncha tou us ki halat deikh k sab shocked they Aly apney room main gya aur nahaya kaprey badley aur bhair aa k hall main beith gya kisi main bhi himmat nai ho rahi thi k Aly se sawal karey akhir main Mueed ne kia bolna shuru kia.
Mueed: Kesay tujhey kesay pata chala k yeh sab honey laga hai.
Aly: Haleema ko aa leney de.
Haleema ka naam sun k Mueed shocked ho gya sath main Gudiya bhi aur Anisa bhi baqi sab bhi shocked they jo hleema ko jantey they kch hi deir main Haleema aaye who Mueed se mili aur phr Aly se mili aur us k sath hi sofey pe beith gai.
Aly: Haleema mein kch puchna chahta hn tum se.
Haleema: Haan puch na kia puchna hai tujhey.
Aly: Us sey pehley mein bata doon k hua kia tha.
Mueed: Haan bata.
Aly: Zayn aur mera Accident hua tha jis main mujhey laga tha k koi Zayn ko marna chahta hai jis ne accident kerwaya tha us ko Intelligence ne paker lia who doosrey mulk ka Intelligent Agent tha jo k yahan Terrorism pheila raha tha us se pucha kis k kehney pe us ne yeh sab kia lekin us ne bataney se inkaar kr dia tou mein ne apney tareekey se pata laganey ki sochi.
Mera pehla doubt Nasir aur us k betey pe gya lekin who yeh nai kr saktey they phr HARIS pe doubt gya jo k mujhey laga k who kr sakta hai kiun k us ka baap merey qabzey main hai us ko dhoondney ki koshish ki tou pata chala he is dead kisi ne usey maar dia hai jab us ki body samney aaye us ka Post Martem hua tou pata chala k kab mara who lekin yeh shocking tha merey liey kiun k us k baad bhi who Nasir aur us k betey k sath deikha gya tha.
Mueed: Ek min HARIS mar gya tou who kon hai phr.
Aly: Yehi baat mujhey preshan kr rahi thi k HARIS k bheis main who kon hai merey aadmion ne bht pata chalaya lekin nakamyaab rahey lekin ek din mujhey ek khaber mili (Haleema se) Acha Haleema yeh batao k Saqib ki Family ko janti ho tum.
Saqib ka naam sun k Mueed Haleema aur Gudiya shocked ho gaey aur aankhein phadey usey deikhney lagey.
Mueed: Saqib? Wohi Saqib jisey tu ne mara tha? us ka kia us ki Family ka kia krna hai.
Aly: Haleema batao.
Haleema: Us ki family main us k maa baap aur behn hi thi jisey mein janti thi aur koi nai tha.
Aly: Us ka bhai Shoaib jisey tum aaj tuk nai mili na hi Saqib ne tumhey us k barey main bataya yeh sab usi ka kia dhara hai who apney bhai ki mout ka baadla le raha hai.
John ne apna mask utar dia aur jo Chehra samney aaya usey deikh k who aadmi peechay ki traf ludaktey huey gira aur phr khada ho gya us ki aankhein herat se badi ho gaen theen aur mathey pe paseena tha.
Aadmi: Aly.
Aly: Haan mein.
Aadmi: Magar tum tou Canada gaey they na.
Aly: Haan gya tha magar pichley haftey jo abhi gya tha who duplicate tha.
Aadmi: Phir tu mera kch nai bigad sakta tera beta aur behan merey kabzey main hn ager tu ne mujhey nuqsaan pounchaya tou tu unhey hamessha k liey kho de ga.
Aly: Hahahahahahahaha UN KI AANKHON MAIN EK AANSU TERI DARDNAAK MOUT LIKH DE GI TU UNHEY MARNEY KI BAAT KRTA HAI wesay bhi mein tujhey marun ga nai Mein jaan gya hoon tu kon hai Aly tujhey ek aur moqa de ga filhaal tu yahan se bhaag ja kaheen door ager mera irada badal gya tou kuttey ki mout marey ga.
Aadmi kch deir sochta raha us k baad us ne wahan se nikal janey main hi bhalayee samjhi us k janey k baad Aly ne John wala mask dala aur sarey room ki talashi li ek main dono Zayn aur Rabia behosh miley un ko utha k bahir aaya aur gadi main daal k wahan se nikal gya kch hi sec baad wahan bht bada dhamaka hua.
Sadia: (rotey huey) Abhi bhi meri bachi ka kch pata nai chal raha pata nai kis haal main ho gi meri bachi.
Anisa: (shocked) Ayesha Habiba tum yahan.
Sab ne Main derwazey ki traf deikha tou wahan Ayesha aur Habiba khadi mili unhey deikh k sab shocked they aur dar bhi gaey they k sath aly bhi aaya ho ga ager usey pata chala k Zayn aur rabia ghaib hn tou pata nai kia tufaan laey ga who.
Kalsoom: Beta itni jaldi aa gaey tum log ek haftey baad aana tha tum ne.
Ayesha: Ami g hum gaey hi kab they.
Anisa: (shocked) Kia matlab hai es ka.
Habiba: Matlab yeh k hum pichley haftey gaey they jo ab aap k samney gaey who duplicate they.
Habiba ki baat sun k sab shocked ho gaey unhey yakeen hi nai ho raha tha k yeh sab hua hai tou es ka matlab Aly kaheen gya hi nai tou kia usey maloom hai k Zayn aur Rabia kidnap huey hn.
Sab inhi sochon main gum they k bahir gadi aa k ruki sab se pehley Zayn ander aaya us k baad Aly John k roop main Rabia ko goad main utha k le k aaya unhey deikh k sab heran they.
Mueed: (John se) Mein kab se tumhara phoon mila raha hn tumhara phone band kiun tha ager Aly ko pata chal jata tou.
Es sey aagey Mueed kch bolta John ne usey chup rehney ko kaha Rabia ko sofey pe bitha k apna mask utar dia samney Aly ko deikh k sab phr se shocked they aur jab unho ne Aly ki aankhein deikhein jo k laal theen sab darr gaey.
Kalsoom: Beta tum.
Aly: (gussay main) Zayn chal merey sath.
Yeh keh k Aly bahir ki traf chal dia Aly ko gussay main deikh k sab dar gaey they Zayn Aly k pechey pechay chala gya sath main Mueed bhi tha dono gadi main beithey jis main Aly beitha tha Aly ne gadi chalani shuru kr di.
Nasir: Samjh nai aaraha k HARIS mera phone kiun nai pick kr raha.
Haris: Mujhey tou yeh samjh nai aa rahi k undono ko kon utha le gya.
Nasir kch bolta bahir firing ki awaz aaney lagi aur sath hi cheikhon ki Nasir aur Haris abhi kch samjh patey unhey main gate pe Aly full gussay main nazer aaya us k kaprey khoon main nahayee huey they Aly k sath sath Mueed aur Zayn bhi they Aly ko apney samney deikh k un ki phat k hath main aa gai Aly chal k un k samney chala gya.
Aly: (gussay main) Mein ne manah kia tha na k meri Family ko aankh utha k bhi nai deikhna tujhey ek baat samjh nai aati mujhey khud apney gussay se darr lagta hai aur tu Merey gussay ko badawa de raha hai.
Nasir: Deikho hum ne kch nai kia.
Aly: (gussay main) Kia nai hai lekin plan tou bnaya tha na HARIS ne tumhey dhoka dia terey betey ka naam istemaal kia usi ne Zayn aur Rabia ko kidnap kia aur ager who unhey maar deta tou tumhara naam aata en sab main lekin who aesa kr nai paya tou ab tum batao tumharey sath kia krun.
Haris: Mein PM hn tum mujhey kch nai kr saktey.
Aly: Mein chahun tou ek sec main teri hakumat khatam kr doon ga tu mujhey PM honey ki dhamki na de.
Nasir: Humein shod do.
Aly: Itna sab krney k baad bhi tumhey shod doon wesay bhi terey betey ne GUJRAL ka naam istemaal kia hai mein kch na bhi krun tou who maar de ga kahan marey ga kab marey ga yeh usey maalom hai tum dono hakumat ka maza lo mera beta Election nai ladey ga ab yeh tum dono pe hai k tum GUJRAL se kesay bachtey ho.
Yeh keh k Aly wahan se nikal gya sath main Mueed aur Zayn bhi they jab Aly ghar pouncha tou us ki halat deikh k sab shocked they Aly apney room main gya aur nahaya kaprey badley aur bhair aa k hall main beith gya kisi main bhi himmat nai ho rahi thi k Aly se sawal karey akhir main Mueed ne kia bolna shuru kia.
Mueed: Kesay tujhey kesay pata chala k yeh sab honey laga hai.
Aly: Haleema ko aa leney de.
Haleema ka naam sun k Mueed shocked ho gya sath main Gudiya bhi aur Anisa bhi baqi sab bhi shocked they jo hleema ko jantey they kch hi deir main Haleema aaye who Mueed se mili aur phr Aly se mili aur us k sath hi sofey pe beith gai.
Aly: Haleema mein kch puchna chahta hn tum se.
Haleema: Haan puch na kia puchna hai tujhey.
Aly: Us sey pehley mein bata doon k hua kia tha.
Mueed: Haan bata.
Aly: Zayn aur mera Accident hua tha jis main mujhey laga tha k koi Zayn ko marna chahta hai jis ne accident kerwaya tha us ko Intelligence ne paker lia who doosrey mulk ka Intelligent Agent tha jo k yahan Terrorism pheila raha tha us se pucha kis k kehney pe us ne yeh sab kia lekin us ne bataney se inkaar kr dia tou mein ne apney tareekey se pata laganey ki sochi.
Mera pehla doubt Nasir aur us k betey pe gya lekin who yeh nai kr saktey they phr HARIS pe doubt gya jo k mujhey laga k who kr sakta hai kiun k us ka baap merey qabzey main hai us ko dhoondney ki koshish ki tou pata chala he is dead kisi ne usey maar dia hai jab us ki body samney aaye us ka Post Martem hua tou pata chala k kab mara who lekin yeh shocking tha merey liey kiun k us k baad bhi who Nasir aur us k betey k sath deikha gya tha.
Mueed: Ek min HARIS mar gya tou who kon hai phr.
Aly: Yehi baat mujhey preshan kr rahi thi k HARIS k bheis main who kon hai merey aadmion ne bht pata chalaya lekin nakamyaab rahey lekin ek din mujhey ek khaber mili (Haleema se) Acha Haleema yeh batao k Saqib ki Family ko janti ho tum.
Saqib ka naam sun k Mueed Haleema aur Gudiya shocked ho gaey aur aankhein phadey usey deikhney lagey.
Mueed: Saqib? Wohi Saqib jisey tu ne mara tha? us ka kia us ki Family ka kia krna hai.
Aly: Haleema batao.
Haleema: Us ki family main us k maa baap aur behn hi thi jisey mein janti thi aur koi nai tha.
Aly: Us ka bhai Shoaib jisey tum aaj tuk nai mili na hi Saqib ne tumhey us k barey main bataya yeh sab usi ka kia dhara hai who apney bhai ki mout ka baadla le raha hai.
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Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
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Mein ne aap logon ko btaya tha k meri Almost 4 saal ki czn Sister hai chachu ki beti us ka operation hua tha us ki mother yeni meri Chachi Dostor hn tou Carona ki wajah se un ka almost sara time Hospital main guzer raha hai Canada main jis ki wajah se Czn sister ka sara khyaal mujhey hi rakhna perta hai us ki feed us ka dheyaan k woh button ko na nikal de jo us k tummy ko operate kr k lagaya gya hai jis wajah se mein yahan time nai de paya halan keh mujhey yahan lockdown main zyada time dena chaiey tha lekin nai de paya kiun k majburi thi jis k chaltey nai kr paya.
Mujhey dukh hai k mein apni story ko pichley 3 saal se sahi se time nai de paya hn jo mujhey Xos*** se jantey hn woh yeh baat jantey hn k mein reguler update deta raha hn 2 month ko shod k ek Moharram aur ek Ramzaan baqi record mera Aone hai lekin pichley 3 saal se merey sath bht azeeb hua hai jis ki wajah se mein yahan update nai de paya.
Mujhey Undeikhi Mohabbat 2 shuru krna tha lekin pehley hi 2 stories pending hn woh bhi reh gai Lagan(Chahat) 3 bhi nai kr paya aesay bht si stories hn jo mein nai kr paa raha hn
Jesay hi time milta hai mein Insha***** yahan phr se active hn ga
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Mein ne aap logon ko btaya tha k meri Almost 4 saal ki czn Sister hai chachu ki beti us ka operation hua tha us ki mother yeni meri Chachi Dostor hn tou Carona ki wajah se un ka almost sara time Hospital main guzer raha hai Canada main jis ki wajah se Czn sister ka sara khyaal mujhey hi rakhna perta hai us ki feed us ka dheyaan k woh button ko na nikal de jo us k tummy ko operate kr k lagaya gya hai jis wajah se mein yahan time nai de paya halan keh mujhey yahan lockdown main zyada time dena chaiey tha lekin nai de paya kiun k majburi thi jis k chaltey nai kr paya.
Mujhey dukh hai k mein apni story ko pichley 3 saal se sahi se time nai de paya hn jo mujhey Xos*** se jantey hn woh yeh baat jantey hn k mein reguler update deta raha hn 2 month ko shod k ek Moharram aur ek Ramzaan baqi record mera Aone hai lekin pichley 3 saal se merey sath bht azeeb hua hai jis ki wajah se mein yahan update nai de paya.
Mujhey Undeikhi Mohabbat 2 shuru krna tha lekin pehley hi 2 stories pending hn woh bhi reh gai Lagan(Chahat) 3 bhi nai kr paya aesay bht si stories hn jo mein nai kr paa raha hn
Jesay hi time milta hai mein Insha***** yahan phr se active hn ga