Sweetkaran
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Ye Story Ek Imagination pe based Story hai. Real World se, Koi Insan se iska koi Connection nahi hai.
Story me Kai baate aapko Logic ke bina ki lag sakti hai agar aap ise real world ke sath compare karo to, Kyuki Story me Super Natural Powers, Magic aur kuch Sci Fi bhi hai.
Rahi baat Story ke Updates ki to Weekly 2-3 Updates hoge.
Agar Story me Kahi Koi galti ho ya kuch Suggetions ho to bezizak bataye. Jis se Mein Story ko Aur achha bana saku.
Story me Kai baate aapko Logic ke bina ki lag sakti hai agar aap ise real world ke sath compare karo to, Kyuki Story me Super Natural Powers, Magic aur kuch Sci Fi bhi hai.
Rahi baat Story ke Updates ki to Weekly 2-3 Updates hoge.
Agar Story me Kahi Koi galti ho ya kuch Suggetions ho to bezizak bataye. Jis se Mein Story ko Aur achha bana saku.
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Introduction
Introduction me bas Aapko Characters ka thoda overview dekhne ko milega aur unke bich kya relationship hai wo dikhne ko milega. Baki Character ka nature kesa hai, Unke POV aur baki sab aapko story me aage jan na hoga, Analyze karna hoga.
Ahan (Age- 18)
Yeh hai Story ka Main character.
12th abhi abhi pass kiya hai aur isi City ke ek bade clg me BBA me admission liya hai.
Vikram (Age-45)
Ahan ke Dad. Ye ek Factory ke Owner hai.
Sandhya
Ahan ki Maa. Ahan ke Birth ke 3 Month bad hi unki aur Ahan ke Twin sister ki death ho gai thi.
Ishana (Age- 21)
Vikram aur Sandhya ki badi beti aur Veer ki Badi bahan. Filhal BBA khatam karke MBA kar rahi hai.
Naina (Age-40)
Ye Vikram ki Dusri wife aur Ahan ki Step Mom. Vaise Naina Sandhya ki Cousin Sister bhi hai. Naina Vikarm ki Factory management me help karti hai.
Ayushi (Age-20)
Naina ki Badi Beti hai aur Ahan ki badi Step Sis. Filhal Ye Ahan ke Same clg me BBA ke Final Year me study kar rahi hai.
Sakshi (Age- 18)
Naina ki Chhoti beti hai aur Ahan ki Step Sis. Isne bhi Ahan ke sath hi same clg me BBA me admission liya hai.
Sanjeev (Age- 43)
Vikram ka Chhota bhai aur Ahan ke Chachaji. Inka khud ka Transport ka business hai.
Pallavi (Age- 41)
Sanjeev ki wife aur Ahan ki Chachi. Ye Ek Housewife hai.
Yash (Age- 20)
Sanjeev aur Pallavi ka Beta. Ye Same clg se BBA ke Final Year me study kar rahi hai. Ayushi ka classmate hai.
Tanya (Age-18)
Sanjeev aur Pallavi ki Beti. Isne bhi Ahan ke sath hi same clg me BBA me admission liya hai.
Ye Tanya ki Best Friend hai.
Roshni (Age-41)
Vikram ki chhoti bahan aur Ahan ki bua.
Inka Shadi ke kuch saal baad hi Divorce ho gya tha aur Tab se ye Isi Family ke sath raheti hai.
Jis Clg me Ahan ne admission liya hai waha ki Dean hai.
Rahul (Age- 20)
Roshni ka beta. Ye bhi Same clg se BBA kar raha hai aur Third Year me hai. Yash ka classmate aur kaafi achha Dost hai.
Juhi (Age-18)
Roshni ki Beti. Isne bhi Ahan ke sath hi same clg me BBA me admission liya hai.
Ye Sab Ek alishan Villa me sath rahte hai.
Inke Villa me kuch Sevants bhi Kaam karte hai.
Ramesh (Age-51)
Ye As a Driver Kaam karta hai.
Chhaya
Ye Ramesh ki wife thi jiski abhi kuch saalo pahele Death ho chuki hai.
Ravi (Age-26)
Ramesh aur Chhaya ka Bada Beta. Ye as Security Guard kam karta hai.
Riya (Age-22)
Ramesh aur Chhaya ki Beti. Ye Villa aur asspass ke Garden ki Saaf Safai ka kaam karti hai.
Naveen (Age-20)
Ramesh aur Chhaya ka chhota Beta. Ye Bhi ab Driver ka kaam karta hai.
Usha (Age- 46)
Ye Villa me as Cook kaam karti hai.
Atul (Age- 50)
Usha ka husband. Pahele Ye bhi as Driver Job karta tha. Par Bad me ye Kahi bhag gya aur Aaj wo kaha hai, Zinda hai bhi ya nahi, Kisi ko nahi pata.
Dipak (Age- 26)
Ye Usha aur Atul ka beta hai. Ye Ab As Security Guard Job karta hai.
Fagun
Ye Usha aur Atul ki Beti hai. Jab ye chhoti thi tab hi kisi ne isko kidnap kar liya tha aur uske bad ye kabhi nahi mili.
Ye Dono Family Villa ke bahar bane Rooms me rahete hai.
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Xabhi
"Injoy Everything In Limits"
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for the story Bhai...Sandar introduction diya aapne ek baat btaiye ye Sandhya or shraddha Alag alag hai Ya same hi hai...
Intro main kuch nai bht mistakes haan jo confuse kr rhi haan on ko correct kroo or character ko sort kroo or pics bhi add kroo.
Abhishek Kumar98
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Congratulations for your new thread kosish karna regular rahne ki and pura support milega bhai ok and nice Introduction lage raho bhai
This is what happens when someone is doing a copy and paste job but do not want to acknowledge this and do not want to give credit to the original writer. Therefore, the only way out is to change the names in the original story. While changes gets affected at most places, due to carelessness at few places original names remain unchanged. I have noticed this in few other stories on this site.
I anticipate that the writer will contest my observation, but the fact is too obvious for anyone.
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Bro disappointe nai krna kisi ko bhi bs motivat kroo takey wo saab ki axhi tarhaan maat sakey
