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Intro main kuch nai bht mistakes haan jo confuse kr rhi haan on ko correct kroo or character ko sort kroo or pics bhi add kroo.

Okay. Ek Mistake jo thi Name ki wo to kar diya Mene Correct. Abhi Aur koi hai to Aap Point out kar dena. Chracaters actually Story me jyada rahege. Aur Rahi baat pics ki to Mein bad me Try karta hu Add karne ki.

Thank You.
 
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This is what happens when someone is doing a copy and paste job but do not want to acknowledge this and do not want to give credit to the original writer. Therefore, the only way out is to change the names in the original story. While changes gets affected at most places, due to carelessness at few places original names remain unchanged. I have noticed this in few other stories on this site.

I anticipate that the writer will contest my observation, but the fact is too obvious for anyone.

This is what happens when someone is doing a copy and paste job but do not want to acknowledge this and do not want to give credit to the original writer. Therefore, the only way out is to change the names in the original story. While changes gets affected at most places, due to carelessness at few places original names remain unchanged. I have noticed this in few other stories on this site.

I anticipate that the writer will contest my observation, but the fact is too obvious for anyone.

:waitwhat::kekw:

When you are accusing someone, then you should come up with Proofs. Anyway, I'll give you a chance to come up with a proof.

So I will post the first update and then you should post the second update. As you said I am copying some other Story, then you will easily have next updates of the story available, so it will not be difficult for you.

:goteam:
 

Xabhi

"Injoy Everything In Limits"
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:waitwhat::kekw:

When you are accusing someone, then you should come up with Proofs. Anyway, I'll give you a chance to come up with a proof.

So I will post the first update and then you should post the second update. As you said I am copying some other Story, then you will easily have next updates of the story available, so it will not be difficult for you.

:goteam:
Bahut sahi guru, bahut achhe...
 

L.king

जलना नही मुझसे नही तो मेरी DP देखलो।
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Ye Story Ek Imagination pe based Story hai. Real World se, Koi Insan se iska koi Connection nahi hai.
Story me Kai baate aapko Logic ke bina ki lag sakti hai agar aap ise real world ke sath compare karo to, Kyuki Story me Super Natural Powers, Magic aur kuch Sci Fi bhi hai.


Rahi baat Story ke Updates ki to Weekly 2-3 Updates hoge.

Agar Story me Kahi Koi galti ho ya kuch Suggetions ho to bezizak bataye. Jis se Mein Story ko Aur achha bana saku
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एक नई कहानी के लिए आपको बहुत बहुत बधाईयां। आशा करते है की यह कहानी बहुत ही मज्जेदार होगी और यह कहानी अपने अंतिम अध्याय तक जरूर पहुंचेगी जैसा की इस मंच की कई कहानियां नहीं पहुंच पाती है।
 
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