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Chapter 1 : Days of Humiliation
Update 6
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Ek Shaher me bani ek society me Bane ek Ghar me Ek ladki apne hatho me book liye padhai kar rahi thi. Tabhi Ghar me door pe knock hota hai.
"Knock"
"Knock"
Ladki turant jakar Ghar ka door kholti hai. Door pe ek aurat khadi thi jisne ek Shadi pahen rakhi thi jo ki bhigi hui thi. Wo ladki us aurat ko dekhti hai jiske chehre pe paseena tha aur wo use gusse se dekh rahi thi. Fir wo aurat us ladki ko ek dhakka de ke ghar ke andar aa jati hai. Wo ladki bhi khud ko sambhalti hai aur door bandh karke us aurat ke pass jati hai.
Aurat : Ye Padhai vadhai chhod aur Mera kaam me hath bata. Pata hai Kitni mehnat karke Ghar chalati hu mein aur Tu hai ki padhai me paise aur samay barbad karna chahti hai.
Ladki : Mummy, Mein achha padhai karungi to fir bad me Aapko ye kuch karne ki nahi jarurat nahi padegi.
Aurat : Tujhe to pata hai na college ki fees kitni hai? Kaha se laungi mein utne paise?
Ladki : Mummy, Mein Puri mehnat karungi aur Bahut hi acche marks laungi. Mujhe Government College me admission mil jayega pakka. Wha utni fees nahi hoti Mummy. Sath me Mein Tution class bhi shuru karungi. Aap Bilkul tension lo.
Aurat : Ese Baato se kuch nahi hota. Tera baap bhi ese hi badi badi baate karta raheta tha. Bhag gaya Hume chhod ke. Kahi Tu Bhi aisa to nahi karne wali na? Haan, Tu bhi esa hi karegi. Apne Baap pe hi gai hai na Tu.
Ladki : Mummy, Ye kesi baate kar rahe ho. Papa ki jarur kuch majburi rahi hogi. Aur Unhone baate hi nahi bahut kuch kiya hai hamare liye. Ye Ghar unhone hi to banaya tha.
Aurat: Meri baat maan lete. Bola tha Mahoosiyat ko Ghar me na Lao. Par Nahi, Le Aaye Us Manhoos ko!! Tab se hi chha gayi hai na Is Ghar pe Manhoosiyat.
Ladki : Mummy, Aap fir se ye sab brfizul ki baate le ke beth gai.
Aurat : Mere baatein yaad na karne se kuch badal nahi jayega.
Ladki : Badlega to Baate yaad karne se bhi nahi.
Wo Aurat Us ladki ki baat sunke usko ek thappad laga deti hai.
Aurat : Zubaan bahut chalti hai Teri. Ab Sun, Ye padhai wadhai nahi. Kal se Tu bhi Mere sath Kam karne chalegi Samjhi?
Aur fir Wo Aurat Ladki ke Jawab ka intezar kiye wha se chali jati hai. Idhar Wo Ladki Ankho me Anshu liye wha ese khadi thi jaise koi Statue.
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Forensic Lab ke Ek Cabin me Doctor Piyush ke Samne S.P. Ankush bethe the. Ankush ke hatho me report thi jise wo bade dhyan se dekh raha tha.
Piyush : Strange! Agli baar ke jesi same condition hai Deadbody Ki. Body me se sara Khun nikal liya gaya hai aur uski jagah ek Unknown liquid chemical hai. Body me se heart bhi gayab hai. Aankhe bhi gayab hai. Aage ki har Deadbody me same yahi chije dekhi gayi thi.
Ankush : Kya ye kisi Psychopath ne kiya ho sakta hai?
Piyush: Possible. Par the Thing is ke Ye chemical akhir kya hai? Testing Kiya humne to kaafi Mysterious results mile hai hume!
Ankush: To Ye chemical exactly hai kya fir? Kya purpose hai iska?
Piyush: Wahi to samjh nahi aa raha! Ye akhir hai kya? Kahi pe bhi esa koi chemical produce nahi hota. To akhir ye kisne banaya aur kyun banaya? Aur ye Deadbody me kyun mil raha hai? Ye sab ek mystery hai filhal to.
Tabhi Cabin ke door pe knock hota hai. Piyush aur Ankush dono ki nazare door pe padti hai aur Door open hota hai. Wha ek aadmi khada tha.
Aadmi : May I Come In?
Piyush : Ji Aap?
Ankush : Ji Ye Hai Mr. Rishi. Ye Ek scientist hai.
Piyush : Oh.. Aaiye Aaiye Rishi Ji.
Fir Rishi andar aa jata hai.
Introduction
Rishi (Age - 51 Years)
Ye ek Scientist hai. Ankush ke kaafi achhe dost hai. Kaafi saalo pahele inki ek function me mulakat hui aur baato baato me dosti ho gai. Samay ke sath inki dosti ghaheri ho gai. Ankush ko jab ye Deadbody ki Mysterious halat ke bare me pata chala tha to usne Rishi ko bula liya tha. Luckily Rishi isi Shahar me Maujud tha to Piyush se milne aa gaya.
Ankush Rishi ko Report deta hai. Rishi bade dhyan se Report dekhne lagta hai.
Rishi : Interesting !!!
Ankush : Ye Chemical konsa hai? Aur Uski Properties bhi Mysterious hai Rishi. Iske baare me Jan na hoga agar Hume Ye Case Solve karne hai to.
Rishi : Ji Bilkul. Mujhe Is Chemical ka sample de do. Mein apni taraf se research karta hu. Okay?
Piyush: Okay.
Rishi : Thik hai Mein filhal Nikalta hu. Mujhe ek Aur Meeting attend karni hai. Ankush, Hum Sham ko milte hai agar Tum free ho to!
Ankush: Mein Free hi hu. Ek kaam Karo na. Raat ka dinner hi sath me karte hai. Thik hai? Dinner ke bad Case se Judi aur baate bhi kar lege.
Rishi : Done.
Fir Rishi Dono ko Bye bol kar wha se chala jata hai.
Piyush : Ankush Ji, Ye Chemical humne already scientific labs me bhijwaya tha jab aage mili Deadbodies me se ye Mila tha. Surprisingly unhe bhi kuch pata nahi chal paya is chemical ke bare me.
Ankush : What!!
Piyush : Ji Haan.
Ankush: Let Rishi Try This. He is a very Intelligent Man. I'm sure Hume kuch na kuch jarur pata chalega Is Chemical ke bare me.
Piyush : Agar Esa hua to kaafi achhi development hogi is mysterious case me.
Ankush : Vaise Abhi Report se ye to clear hai ke Deadbody Mr. Dinesh ki hi hai to ab Body hume unke family ko de deni chahiye.
Piyush: Ji Haan.
Ankush: Thik hai. Mein abhi nikalta hu Piyush Ji.
Fir Ankush Wha se chala jata hai aur sidhe apne Office aa jata hai jaha Home Minister ke sath dopahar ko Uski Meeting hone wali thi.
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Ahan Apne Class Room me aata hai. Waha Pahele se Kaafi Students Maujud the. Maira bhi classroom me bethi hui thi. Wo to Ahan ke aane ka hi wait kar rahi thi. Ahan ko Class Room me aate dekh hi wo apni jagah se uth ke uske pass pahunch jati hai. Par Wo Ahan ke face ko dekh ke shock ho jati hai.
Maira (Apna hath aage badhakar) : Happy Birthday Ahan!
Ahan ek najar Maira pe dalta hai aur fir Bina kuch bole waha se jane lagta hai. Maira use jate hue dekhkar uske piche piche Jane lagti hai.
Maira : Ahan !!!
Ahan me Maira ki awaj to suni par wo use ignore karke apni jagah pe aake Beth gaya. Idhar class me Maujud students ki najare ab in dono ko hi dekh rahi thi.
Maira Apni Seat se usne banaya hua Birthday Card aur Poster leke wapas Ahan ke pass aa kar beth jati hai.
Maira : Ahan! Aaj Tumhara Birthday hai aur Mein Tumhare liye Ek Gift lai hu.
Ahan uski baato ko ignore karta hai aur apne Bag se Notebook nikalne lagta hai.
Maira : Ahan! Mein Tumse baate kar rahi hu. Aur Ye Tumhe Face pe kya hua hai?
Ahan abhi bhi na to kuch bolta hai aur nahi Maira ke taraf dekhta hai.
Maira Ahan ke face ko pakad ke apne taraf karti hai.
Maira : Aha…
Ahan : How dare You ! Tum Mujhe touch kese kar sakti ho? Jao yaha se…
Maira : Tum Mere sath esa kyun kar rahe ho? Mein to Aaj Tumhare birthday hai to ek special gift lai hu par Tum to Mujhe ese ignore kar rahe ho jese Mera koi wajud hi nahi hai!
Ahan : Haan To kis ne kaha tha Mere liye gift lane ko? Jao yaha se apni Gift leke. Mujhe na hi Tumhari koi Gift chahiye aur na hi Tumhari wishes.
Maira : Ahan Plz. Dekho to sahi. Tumhe pasand Aayega I'm sure. Mene kaafi mehnat se banayi hai Tumhare liye ye special Gift.
Fir Maira Poster open karke Dikhati hai. Ahan Us Poster pe apni Potrait ko dekhta hai aur fir apni Nazare Fer leta hai.
Maira : Achhi nahi hai kya Ahan?
Ahan : Nahi. Ekdam Ghatiya hai ye! Ab Please Tum Mujhe tang karna bandh kar do aur jao yaha se.
Maira : Achhi nahi hai? To kya please Tum Mujhe bataoge Kaha kami hai? Mein Use sudharugi aur Is se achhi Potrait banaungi Tumhari !
Ahan (Chillate hue) : ENOUGHHH
Ahan apni jagah se khada ho jata hai aur Wo Poster apne hatho se fad deta hai. Wha Rakha Birthday Card bhi wo fad kar fenk deta hai.
Ahan : Mere se dur raho Tum. Samjhi ?
Aur Fir Ahan wha Classroom se chala jata hai.
Maira ankho me anshu liye Ahan ko wha se jate dekhti hai. Fir Wo Jameen pe pade Poster aur Birthday Card ke tukdo ko dekhti hai.
Idhar Class ke sabhi Students ye tamasha dekh rahe the. Kuch to kaafi khush the ye tamasha dekhkar. 2-3 ne to video bhi bana liya tha.
Student 1 : Sala Ye Manshoos ke sath chutiya bhi hai.
Student 2 : Abey Ye Dono hi Chutiya hai. Ek Ye bewkuf jo us Manhoos me pata nahi kya dekh ke pagal ho gai hai. Aur Dusra wo Chutiya jise kutta bhi bhav na deta wo iske samne apni akad dikha raha hai.
Uski baat sunke kuch students hasne lage.
Maira ke kaano me bhi kuch kuch ghuspus sunai de rahi thi. Fir wo bhi Ankho me Anshu liye Classroom se bahar chali jati hai.
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Vikram aur Naina apni Car me beth kar Karishma ke Office ke taraf jaa rahe the.
Naina : Vikram, Kitni Ajeeb baat hai. Karishma jesi badi sakhsiyaat, Itne bade Businesswoman ki PA ne uske sath meeting ke liye bulaya hai. Hum to jante bhi nahi ekdusre ko. Akhir kya baat ho sakti hai?
Vikram: Mein bhi wahi soch raha hu Naina. Akhir unhone Meeting ka topic only business related hi bataya hai par Aaj Tak Hum kabhi unke contact me nahi aaye. Humare level ka business owner hota koi to fir bhi kuch samajh me aata. Par Ye to Apni country ke top me aate hai. Hum se kai guna rich hai. Fir Akhir Kyun?
Naina : I just hope Ke ye Humare Business ke liye aur Humare liye benefit koi deal ki baat ho. Aur Sahi me Itne bade Businessman aur Businesseswoman ke sath contact wakai humare liye faydemand to hai hi.
Vikram: Haan, Bas Ab kuch der. Fir sab clear ho jayega.
Itne me hi Car ki break lagti gai. Car ek Alishan corporate building tak pahunch chuki thi. Car se utarkar Vikram aur Naina Us building me jaate hai aur formalities khatam karke Karishma ke cabin ke pass pahunch jate hai.
Wha Monika khadi thi.
Monika : Welcome Mr. Vikram aur Mrs. Naina.
Vikram and Naina: Thank You.
Monika: Please Give me few seconds. Mein ma'am se contact karti hu.
Vikram: Okay. Sure.
Fir Monika apna Mobile nikalkar Karishma ko Call karti hai aur kuch baat karti hai. Baat Khatam karte wo Call end karke apna Mobile fir se rakh deti hai.
Monika: You can go in.
Vikram: Thanks.
Fir Vikram aur Naina Karishma ki Cabin ke andar aa jate hai.
Cabin Me Karishma akeli ek chair pe bethi thi. Vikram aur Naina samne rakhi chair pe baith jate hai.
Vikram and Naina: Good Morning Ma'am.
Karishma: Good Morning Mr. Vikram and Mrs. Naina.
Vikram: Ma'am, Your PA called me and she said….
Karishma: Yaa, I wanted to meet you both and I want to discuss something related to business.
Vikram: Yes Ma'am.
Karishma: So, I know your company is not doing well. Now You have only one last Factory and it is also about to shut down.
Vikram: Yes Ma'am. Actually we are trying our best to boost our business but ..
Karishma: If this is your best then I'm not sorry to say that You both have poor business skills.
Vikram aur Naina dono Karishma ki baate sunke shock the. Karishma ne jese dono ko unho zalil karne ke liye bulaya tha.
Karishma: Anyways, I have still one offer for you.
Vikram: Please Tell us Ma'am.
Karishma: We have one Fabrication Factory in other state. We will sell you that factory at a fair price. We will also give you deals for the products which is going to be manufactured in that Factory.
Vikram: Ma'am, But we are not in condition that…
Karishma: Well, I don't want your money. You just have to move out in that other state and don't need to come here again in your whole life. We will purchase your last Factory in a decent amount.
Vikram aur Naina Karishma ki baat sunkar Ek dusre ko dekhne lage.
Karishma: Well, I don't think that a poor skilled businessman like you will get a better opportunity like this. Doing business with our company is the dream of many skilled businessmen.
Vikram ek baar fir se mare gaye taunt se shock ho gya. Usko aadat nahi thi. Par Wo kar bhi kuch nahi sakta tha. Akhir Samne Karishma thi. Ek successful aur rich businesswoman. Wo bakhubi janta tha ke Uske jese kai businessman ko wo jab chahe tab tabah kar sakti hai aur uske jesi kai companies to ye ese hi kharid le.
Fir Vikram fir se Karishma ki offer pe sochne laga. Wo Sochne laga ke ye offer uske company ke liye kaafi beneficial tha ek tarah se par tabhi use khyal aaya ke Karishma jesi businesswoman bina wajah ke to esa offer Dene se rahi.
Naina: What amount will we get for our factory?
Karishma: Way more than you deserve. Tumhari Factory ki Valuations hai 8 CR 24 lacs. We will give you 24 CR 72 lacs. Humari Us factory ki value hai 24 Crs.
Naina : Kya Mein is meherbani ki wajah jaan sakti hu?
Karishma: Nahi. Koi aur questions? Deal final?
Vikram: Yes.
Karishma: Good. My Team will contact you soon for further process. You can leave now.
Vikram aur Naina apni chair se khade hote hai aur Karishma ki Cabin se chale jate hai.
Unke jate hi Monika Cabin me aa jati hai.
Monika: Did they accept the offer?
Karishma: Do you think that they're gonna get a better offer than this in their whole life?
Monika: No ma'am. So they accepted the offer. Now what am I supposed to do?
Karishma: Hmmm… Just make sure ke Vikram ki Company bas humari company pe depend rahe.
Monika: Got it Ma'am.
Fir Monika bhi wha se chali jati hai. Aur Idhar Karishma kuch soch me kho jaati hai.
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Jabardast update bro
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Arey nahi ek aur kahani nfrt se bhari start hui. jiska agaaz nfrt se hui hai or anjaam shayad pyar pr khatam hoga. Koi toh kahani nfrt pe hi khtm Ho.
Ab ate hai review pe. Ye kahani ek aise ldke ki hai jisko uske gharwale manhoos smjhte hai. Jo shayad iss kahani ka Hero bhi hai. Ek abhishap jo shayad uske liye vardaan bhi sabit Ho rha hai. Jese ki uske sath kya hone wala hai woh pehle hi jaan leta. Ldka shayad ane wala wqt dekh skta hai. Usko manhoos kyo kehte hai shayad ek reason ye bhi Ho skta hai ke uski maa or uski Twin sister ki maut reason Ho skta hai. OR ye pukhta Tab or ho gya hoga jab business me loses hone lga hoga or uski step maa naina ne uske baap ke kaan bhar diya Ho ke iss sbke piche iss manhoos(Ahan) ke wajah se Ho rha hai. aisa mujhe lgta hai baki writer sahab hi bta skte hai. Ayushi and group ne acha B-Day bnaya lekin sochne wali baat ye hai ke jab ayushi ne kaha ke cake me koi chemical hai jisse ankh kharab Ho skti hai or khane se mar bhi skta hai to ayushi ka dimag nhi thanka ke Ahan ko kuch nahi hua. Lekin Ahan ke internal organs ko shayad kuch damages jhelne pade. Bua or rahul 2 aise members hai jo Ahan ke liye humdrdi rkhte hai. OR unke humdrdi ka kaaran bhi shayad vasiyat hi hai Aj vikram ke sath hai or ane wala wqt me woh apna future Ahan ke sath dekh rhi Ho? Woh dono trf bana kr rkhna chahti hai. OR majburi shyad ye hoga ke woh jayegi kahan talakshuda woh pehle se hai. OR ishana Ahan se nfrt kyo krti hai iska ek jhalak dekhne ko mila lekin sawaal ye bhi uthta hai ki Kya Ahan ye jaanbujh kr rha hai ya iske piche bhi koi kaaran hai. Ishana ko shayad kisi trh ki gltfehmi bhi hui hai past me. Juhi ke mann me thodi bhut humdrdi thi Ahan ke liye lekin iss incident ke baad woh humdrdi bhi khtm ho gai. Ishana yahan se sbse dur jana chahti sath me juhi bhi lekin Ahan ne kaha ke jahan jaoge wahan usko bhi sath paoge. Ahan ne bua ko aisa kyo kaha ki Ayushi ko kuch mat kehna wrna.. Wrna ke baad baat adhuri reh gai Kya bua bhi kuch janti hai ki Ahan ke paas kuch Powers hai? Ahan ne shisha ke samne aisa kya kiya ankhen Band krke ki ab perfect hai. Kya woh apna jakhm sahi or zrurt pdne pr kharab bhi kr skta hai.? Ahan ke face ki surgery pehle ho rkhi hai to Kya uske sath pehle bhi kuch aisa hua hai jisse usko surgery krana padaa? Surgery me sirf surgery hi hui thi? Ya ldka hi badal diya gya? Qki bua ki baate or Ahan ki harkten ye kuch-2 drshata hai face bhi shayad change hai. Baki pta nhi.. Maira jo ek rais maa baap ki aulaad hai jisko Ahan ke liye humdrdi hai ya pyar woh abhi smjh nhi paa rhi hai lekin usko Ahan ka drd bakhubi mehsus hota hai. Lekin Ahan usko bhaw nahi deta. Kya indono ke bich koi connection hai. Ab maira ne Ahan ke Mann ko jitne ke liye uska portrait bnaya hai. Ahan usse dur kyo bhagta hai? Lekin karishma apni beti ki safety ke liye Ahan ki khoj khabar niklwa rhi hai. Dekhte hai Monika Kya information karishma ko deti hai. Avni jo State highway pr khadi raat ke sunsaan me khadi 4 bando se lift leti hai jiske sath 3bande jabrdasti krne ki sochte hai dinesh ko chhod kr shayad inme Dinesh hi iklauta tha jo dharmatma tha. Jisne jayant ki biwi ko bhi in tino se bachaya tha. Lekin avni ne sbse pehle Dinesh ko mara baki teeno ka Kya hua abhi suspense hai. Kya chudail ki jo kahani hai woh sach hai qki avni ko goli lgne ke bawzud nahi mrti siwaye khoon niklne ke. Kya avni hi chudail hai? agr hai to chudail ki nazron me dharmatma Ho Mahatma usko koi frk nhi pdta sbko maar deti hai. Komal naam ki ldki ki entry hui hai jo shayad kuch dhundh rhi hai? Kya woh Ahan ke hi ghar ko dhundh rhi thi? Kya Ahan accidentally komal ke Scotty se takraya? ya jaanbujh kr? Qki Ahan ne komal ko ye bhi kaha ki hum akhiri baar toh mil nahi rhe.? OR jahan tak mujhe lgta hai ane wala wqt woh pehle hi dekh leta hai aise me Ahan ne dekh liya hoga ke komal naam ki ldki arhi hai or woh uske samne agya Ho. OR mujhe lgta hai uska ladkhadana ek jaanbujh kr kiya gya hai. Qki shyad woh khud ko chotil woh apni ichha se kr skta hai or khud ko sahi bhi. Kya Avni ya komal me se koi usha ki beti fagun Ho skti hai.? Qki komal kuch dhundh rhi thi. Fagun wahi jo usha ki beti bachpan me kidnap hui thi. Ab ate hai maa shradha or uski Twin sister pe Kya unka marna ek mehaz ittefaq tha? ya marwaya gya tha.? Qki naina uski cousin hone ke sath -2 uske pati ke ofc me kaam bhi krti thi. OR uski beti ayushi Ahan se umr me badi bhi hai to Kya vikram or naina ke bich tankaa pehle se bhidaa hua tha? Jisse shradha ko rashte se hatana padaa? Agr haa to Kya naina ne akele hi shradha ko marne ka plan bnaya ya vikram ka sath tha? ya naina pehle se shadi shuda thi? 2 safed billiyon ka zikr baar-2 ho rha hai jisse Ahan apna sukh dukh bantta hai. OR shayad woh billiyan bhi smjhti hai. Kya Billi ke paas koi super power hai.? Kya billiyan Ahan ki sevikayen hai? jo Billi roopi wahan maujud rhti hai uski tanhaai me uske sath rhti hai. OR ek baat vikram ko jo lose ho rha hai woh naturally hai? Ya isme Ahan ka hath hai? Qki jb vikram usko maar rha tha Ahan hans rha tha jese woh vikram ko tease kr rha Ho ke maar le Maine to tujhe barbaad kr diya. Kya vikram apna akhiri company bhi daaw pr lga dega? Ajit se laon lekar?
Bura na mano to ek baat puchu writer sahab Kya ye apki pehli I'd hai ya isse pehle bhi koi dusri I'd se kahani likh rhe Ho? Qki apki lekhni kisi kahani ke lekhak se bhot milti hai. Dhanyawad
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Thank You So Much Guy Story padh kar Comment karne ke liye.
I know ke Updates late ho rahe hai kaafi par Time ka kaafi Issue hai. Par Ab Maine decide Kiya hai ke Jitna possible ho paye utna scene cover karke ki sahi Update de diya karunga. Taki Aap sab ka interest bana rahe!
To Ese hi Story padhakr Apna Review dete rahe.
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Ok Bhai we are waiting for your new update