Fantasy DARD

[richad]

Nice update

 

[Calm_777]

Update kal

 

[Asif khan]

UPDATE - 8​

Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...

Abb ageee.......

Swara bhi sochne lagi ke mai to ghar pe thi nhi bhai bhi itne sabere kahi bahar nhi jate. Hona ho ye kukaram karne wala ghar ka hi koi hai. Waise bhi gharwalo ka vyavhar bhai ke prati kuch thik nhi hai. Mujhe hi abb bhai ka dhyaan sakhna hoga. Wo soch hi rahi thi ki nurse aakar bolti hai ki
Nurse : mam aap ab patient se mil sakti hai.
Swara : thik hai.

Swara phir mere room me enter katri hai to mujhe fan ko ghurta hua pati hai. Aur daud ke aati hai aur gale lag ke rone lagti hai. Phir thodi der me normal hone ke baad bolti hai
Swara : ab tabiyat kaisi hai.
Mai : waisi hi hai jaisa tum chod kar gayi thi.
Swara : waise ye hua kaise, i mean kya aap ko pata hai ye kisne kiya ya kisi pe shak hai.
Mai : haa hai.
Swara : (serious tone) kispe?
Mai : apni kismat pe.
Swara : majak mat kariye yaha aap ki jaan ko khatra tha thodi der pehle aur aap majak kar rahe hai.
Mai : sahi hi to keh raha hu lagta hai uper wale ne shayad meri kismat hi " DARD " ki sihayi se likh di hai .
Swara : aisa nahi hai , waise mujhe lagta hai ye karne wala jarur ghar ka hi koi dhokebaj hoga.
Mai : ( dard bhari muskan ke sath) dhoke aur mai to milte hi rahte hai jaise we are dating.
Swara : (meri aakhon me dekhke) aisa mat boliye mai aapko kabhi dhoka nhi dungi .
Mai : logo ne dil pe itne zakhm kar diye hai ki ab to kisi se wafa ki bhi umeed chod di hai.

Ye bolte hue meri aakhon me asoon aa gye aur yaad ane laga ki kaise maa mujhe zeher khilate hue bhi nhi katrayi.
Phir swara se maine thodi der baat ki phir usne janvi didi ko phone karke abhi tak ki saari baat keh sunayi.
Janvi didi ne jaise hi ye baat suni unki aakhon se asoon ane lage phone unke haath se chooth gya aur wo zamin pe gir gyi. Girne ki awaj sun ke sab ghar wale janvi didi ke kamre me aagye. Maa janvi didi ko aise gira hua dekh ke maa aur dad ghabra gye aur maa ne unka sar apne god me liye unhe hosh me lane lagi. Thodi der baad janvi didi ko hosh aa jata hai to maa unse puchti hai
Maa : kya hua beti tu aise kaise gir gayi.
Janvi didi : (roote hue) maa kisine Reyansh ko zeher de diya tha wo to acha hua Swara sahi time pe ghar aa gyi aur use hospital le gyi warna pta nhi aaj kya ho jata.
Ye sunke sab ko saanp soongh gaya. Dad , chachi bhi pareshan ho gye. Mom ke reaction kuch tha hi nhi.

Inhe chodte hai yaha aur chalte hai reyansh ke paas.

Mai 2 din tak hospital me raha phir mujhe ghar jane ki permission mil gayi. Mai sachme ghar nhi jana chahta tha par kar bhi kya sakte the kyuki na 10th ki marksheet ab tak aayi thi na hi itne paise the ki apna gujara kar saku is liye majburi me ghar jana pada.
Jaise hi mai ghar pahucha saimaa maa ake gale lag gayi aur rone lagi phir boli.
Saima maa : kaisi abhagan maa hu mai jo apne bete ka thik tarike se khayal bhi nhi rakh saki.
Mai : nhi maa aap abhagan nhi hai balki kismat meri kharab hai ki mai aapke pet se paida nhi hua.
Saimaa maa : pagal kahika kuch bhi bolta hai.
Aise hi kuch der baate chali phir mai apne room me chala gya. Kuch din sab aise hi chalta raha ab swara mera kuch jada hi khayal rakhne lagi thi. Janvi didi mujhse baat karke mafi mangna chahti thi par mere samne aane ki unki himmat nhi ho rhi thi.
Aise hi kuch din baad mera 10th ka result aagya. Maine apne school me top kiya tha 96.8% ke sath. Swara aur saimaa maa ko chod kar isse kisiko faraq nhi pada. Mai kush tha kyuki maine padhai me bahut mehnat ki thi kyuki dadaji ne mujhse kaha tha "Knowledge is power and you should be politically knowledgeable "
Sab achcha chal raha tha par chachi se ye sab dekha nhi gaya phir ek din mai kitchen me pani pine gaya tha mai jaise hi pani pike palta aur bahar jane laga, mai chachi se takra gya aur mai aur chachi gir gye. Phir kya tha ho gya natak shuru.
Chachi : ooo ram mardiya kamine ne... Aaahh
Mai : chachi itne bhi jor se nhi lagi hai aur galti bhi aapki thi isme.
Chachi : haa kamine tu to yahi kahega apni manhusiyat to dikhti nhi tuje.
Mai aur kuch kehta usse pehele hi chachi jor jor se rone lagi aur chillane lagi. Mujhe kuch samaj nhi aya chachi ab ro kyu rahi hai. Chachi ki awaj sun kar sare ghar wale waha aa gye phir mai samajh gaya ki chachi ne jaan bujh ke kiya hai .
Chacha : kya hua Kamya? Aise niche kyo leti ho.
Chachi : iss manhus ne mujhe dhakka dekar itne jor se niche gira diya.
Dad : teri itni himmat ki tune mere ghar ke sadasay ko nuksan pohochane ki koshish ki aaj tujhe koi nhi bacha sakta.
Ye bolke dad apne room me chale gye aur apne sath ek mota danda lekar aagye. Jaise hi dad ne mujhe marne ke liye hath uthaya swara unke samne aa gyi aur boli.
Swara : koi mere bhai pe hath nhi uthayega. Mujhe to aap logo ka vyavhar dekhkar lagta hai bhai ko jeher bhi aap logo ne diya hai.
Dad : ha diya bhi ho to kya ab tu muhje sikhayegi ki mai kya karu ya kya nhi. Shikha iss apne kamre me le jao.
Mom swara ko waha se jabardasti le gyi. Phir kya tha dad ne mujhe pitna shuru kar diya. Chacha ki akhon me asoon the kyuki unko pta tha ki isme meri koi galti nhi hai. Dad mujhe mare ja rahe the kabhi pairo pe kabhi hathon pe kabhi pith pe tu kabhi chati pe. (saima maa ki tabiyat kharab thi isliye wo aaj nhi aayi thi) Aise hi aadhe ghante tak ye chalta raha bichme ek baar mere sar pe bhi lag gayi. Mai jamin pe gir gaya tha jab dad ka man bhar gya to wo bole.
Dad : ab tu mere ghar me nhi reh sakta. Mere aane se pehle tu is ghar se chala jana chahiye.
Aur wo chale gye aur reh gye mai aur chacha mera sharir khun se san gaya tha hoth fat gye the, sar fat gya tha, hath sine aur baki jagah nile nishan pad gye the. Chacha badi mushkil se mujhe mere room tak le gye aur mujhe lita ke bole. (janvi kahi bahar gyi thi)
Chacha : mai hath jod ke tumse mafi mangta hu beta ki mai kuch kar nhi saka. Mujhe pata hai isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai.
Mai : maafi mat magiye aap bade hai mujhse.
Chacha : thik hai beta ab tum aram karo.
Mai : an mujhse aram nhi hoga chacha ji aur na hi iss ghar me raha jayega.
Cahcha : ye kya keh rahe ho beta tum to iss ghar ke chirag ho.
Mai : kya aapne kabhi kisi baap ko apne ghar ke chirag ko bujhate dekha hai. Agr mai aur yaha ruka to ye log meri aatma ko noch ke kha lenge iss liye aap mujhe mat rokiye kyuki ab aur sehen nhi hota.
Chacha : thik hai beta mai samajh ta hu par ye kuch paise rakho kaam ayenge.
Maine bhi jada kuch nhi bola aur rakh liye chacha ji ke jaane ke baad jaise taise khud ko utha ke apne kuch kapde aur sare documents pack kiye aur bag me bhar ke bahar ki aur chal pada. Sidiyo se utar ke jab hall me pahucha tab waha koi nhi tha, tabhi mujhe meri princess ki yaad aayi par ab mai yaha reh kar kuch aur nhi seh sakta tha iss liye chup chap gate se ghar ke bahar aa gya. Mai abhi bhi khun se sana hua tha watchmen bhi meri ye halat dekh hairan tha. Mai usse bina kuch bole bahar aa gya aur bahar aake ghar ko dekhne laga. Phir waha se aage aagya mai bina kuch soche chala ja rha tha tabhi amit ne mujhe dekh liya aur meri halat dekh ke pareshan ho gya aur bhagte hue mere paas aagya bola.
Amit : naam bta us madarchod ka jisne tujhe hath lagane ki himmat ki. Sabo jamin ke 6 feet niche gad dunga.
Mai bina kuch bole uske sine lag ke rone laga. Meri ye halat dekh uski aakhon me bhi asoon aa gye. Wo khud ko sambhal ke bola.
Amit : ye rona band kar aur hospital chal.
Phir wo mujhe bike pe bitha ke hospital le gaya. Waha poch ke jab doctor ne mujhe dekha to uski aakhen phati ki phati rwh gayi aur wo bola.
Doctor : kis janwar ne inhe mara hai.
Mai : sir ye zakhm bhi apne hai aur dene wale bhi.
Doctor : god i can't believe ki koi kisi ko iss bedardi se maar sakta hai.
Phir unhone meri dressing ki. Hath me fracture tha. Phie hum hospital se bahar aa gye. Wo bola
Amit : ab bata ki kya hua hai
Phir maine use aaj ki saari baat bta di .
Amit : samaj nhi ata kaise maa baap hai tere acha hua jo tune ghar chod diya chal ab mere sath mere ghar.
Mai : nhi bhai mai nhi aa skta balki ab mai iss sheher me hi nhi rehna chahta
Amit : pagal ho gya hai kya ? Jaiga kaha khaiga kya.
Mai : kahi bhi jau par ab iss narak me nhi jii sakta. Aur tu mujhe nhi rokega tujhe meri kasam.
Jaise hi amit ne ye suna wo mere gale lag gaya aur rone lga maine bhi use kaske gle lga liya. Phir kuch der bad wo bola
Amit : thik hai mai tujhe nhi rokunga par wada kar mujhe kabhi nhi bhulega.
Mai : ye bhi koi bolne ki baat hai. Jab bhi kuch ban jaunga to tujhse jarur milunga.
Phir usne mujhe station chod diya. Mai bina soche jo train mujhe dikhai di usme chad gaya.


Dekhte hain ye safar ab kaha le jata haiiii.........

Very nice update

 

[Asif khan]

UPDATE - 9​

Mai : ye bhi koi bolne ki baat hai. Jab bhi kuch ban jaunga to tujhse jarur milunga.
Phir usne mujhe station chod diya. Mai bina soche jo train mujhe dikhai di usme chad gaya.

Abbb aaggeee.........

Mai window ke paas wali jagah par baith gaya . Train chal padi saamne ek umar daraj aurat baithi thi jo mere ghaav dekh rahi thi aakhir usne puch hi liya.
Aurat : beta ye itni sari chote kaise lagi.
Mai : ji ye to wakt ki maar hai, bhar jayegi.
Aurat : beta jada dard to nhi hai.
Mai : ji ghaav to upri hai par rooh ke zakhm zaroor "DARD" de rhe hai.
Aurat : tumhari baato se lagta hai kismat ke sataye hue ho.
Mai : (dard bhari muskuraht ke sath) kismat ka kya hai ye bhi bakiyo ki tarah sath chod gyi , sath hai to bas "DARD" ye bakiyo ki tarah dhokebaaz nhi hai.
Aurat : tum akele ho, tumhare ghar wale kaha hai. Dikhne se to 16-17 saal ke lagte ho.
Mai : (has ke) gharwale unhone hi to ghar se nikal diya hai.
Iske baad dono ke bich shaanti cha gyi. Aurat samajh gyi ki lafke ke saath kuch bohot bura hua hai.
Mai : waise ye train kaha tak jayegi .
Aurat : ye to Delhi jaa rhi hai, tum kaha ja rhe ho.
Mai : jaha manjil le jaye.
Aurat : mera naam nitya hai.
Mai : Nitya ji mera naam Reyansh hai. Nitya : nice name.
Mai : kya faida aise naam ka jise koi lena hi nhi chahta.
Nitya : tumhari baato se lagta hai nyi shuruwat karna chahte ho aur pta hai jab nyi shuruat karni ho to har purani aur kadwi yaado ko bhulana padta hai.
Mai : ye yaade ye to mere akas hai jab bhi bhulna chahta hu to saamne aake khade ho jaate hai.
Ye bolte hue mere aakhon me aasoon aa gye. mera jawab sun ke aur mere akhon me asoon dekh ke nitya ji ka dil tadap utha unse mujhe gale laga liya aur boli.
Nitya ji : mujhe nhi pta tumhe kaunsa gum hai par itnisi umar me itni gehri baate sun ke lagta hai jaise bohot si chizo se guzre ho.
Mai unse alag hote hue kaha.
Mai : ji ab jo ho gya so ho gya . Aap batayi ye ki aap kaha ja rhi hai .
Nitya ji : beta mai to mumbai jaa rhi hu.
Mai : chalo kuch der ke liye hi sahi apka sath to mila.
Aise hi safar kata aur nitya ji bhi mumbai me utar gyi aur reh gye mai aur meri tanhayi.
Khair train ka aur mera bhi akhri station aa gya Delhi mai bhi apna saman leke utar gya.
Bhuk lagi thi to aagya ek chote se hotel me . Khana khatam karke bahar aur bahar aa gya ab sawal ye tha ki raat kaha gujare room abhi le nhi sakta tha kyuki paise kam the aur room le leta to khata kya isliye ek park me aa kar wahi ek bench par let gaya aur aaj ke baare me sochne laga phir pata hi nhi chala kab nind aa gyi.

Wahi mere ghar... sorry sorry Mr. Raghuveer Rajpuj ke ghar me.

Mai nikl gya tha uske baad sab apne apne room me the. Swara ko uske room me band kar diya tha papa ne. Jab saima maa aai to kaam nipta ke jab mere room me aayi to mujhe nahi paya

Dekhte hai aggee kya hota hai.....

Zabardast shandar update

 

[Proud pandit]

Apki story bhut acchi hai

 

[Smith_15]

Nice
Next update please

 

[Reza]

Waiting

 

[A.A.G.]

waiting....

 

[Calm_777]

3 baje tak dosto

 

[Naik]

3 baje tak dosto

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