Erotica Dark Seduction (Completed)

[Indian Princess]

Congo for completing one more superb story.

Finally it's end liitle happy way For poor pankh. Good too see that pankh was able to change armaan liitle bit into a gud man.

You narrative skills is mind blowing, I really like your writing.. Will suggest u y dnt u try hand on writing a book. Can bet u will surely get a lot of success. And haa if u decide ever to write I won't going to purchase,bcoz book ka sbse pehla print mai le jaunga.

See you in next story

Thank you for your awesome review.

This Armaan Pankhudi couple is very close to my heart. This is more or less my story and why I am into BDSM

Writing a book this dark would be painful. Most of my writings are so dark and people often complain. Book chaap diya toh chahne waalon se jyada joote maarne waale milenge

Now waiting for your review on A Game of Chess :waiting2:

 

[Imyours]

Thank you for your awesome review.

This Armaan Pankhudi couple is very close to my heart. This is more or less my story and why I am into BDSM

Writing a book this dark would be painful. Most of my writings are so dark and people often complain. Book chaap diya toh chahne waalon se jyada joote maarne waale milenge

Now waiting for your review on A Game of Chess :waiting2:

I mean to say that you shud to write a book nt on dark seduction only, you can try ur hand on love book and I m sure u will do justice..

 

[Riya rani]

Any other stories u wrote plz tell me

 

[Indian Princess]

Any other stories u wrote plz tell me

Two others

The Girl Next Door
A Game of Chess

 

[john stinston]

Superb story again well the title suits you
Should have read this one before "A game of chess" Now i know how Pankhudi did not break after what meera did to her as Armaan did that to meera too and also how Armaan had that much connection to his sources in both the stories.
This one has a hint of 50 shades trilogy (the book not the movie) but yet it is different in so many ways. Armaan suffered in childhood and that shows in what he does to those girls but pankhudi was far more innocent that Armaan fell in love with her at last Which he realised later when she denied to be a slut but still Armaan deserves a punishment though for what he did. And who was the girl beside pankhudi cabin as she was also shouting when Armaan was with pankh so it can't be Armaan and it is Armaan place so who was torturing her. His Associates.
Will be nice to see a sequel where pankh gets what she deserves she was so innocent or maybe even an epilogue.
You have a nice writing skill that i believe you have been told so many time hoping to read more of your stories.........

 

[Indian Princess]

Superb story again well the title suits you
Should have read this one before "A game of chess" Now i know how Pankhudi did not break after what meera did to her as Armaan did that to meera too and also how Armaan had that much connection to his sources in both the stories.
This one has a hint of 50 shades trilogy (the book not the movie) but yet it is different in so many ways. Armaan suffered in childhood and that shows in what he does to those girls but pankhudi was far more innocent that Armaan fell in love with her at last Which he realised later when she denied to be a slut but still Armaan deserves a punishment though for what he did. And who was the girl beside pankhudi cabin as she was also shouting when Armaan was with pankh so it can't be Armaan and it is Armaan place so who was torturing her. His Associates.
Will be nice to see a sequel where pankh gets what she deserves she was so innocent or maybe even an epilogue.
You have a nice writing skill that i believe you have been told so many time hoping to read more of your stories.........

Thanks for much for your review. I wrote this story 6 years ago, but the characters are so close to my reality that I managed to maintain consistency in my recent stories.

Pankhudi is a sweetheart does not desire revenge. She is compassionate towards Armaan and she healed him with her love. And he loved her just as much. Armaan will never be able to find another girl who knows the bitter truth about him and still doesn't hate him. She is a pure soul who knows only how to love, just like Armaan described her in a game of chess when Meera dominates him. His love for her is so deep that he was willing to suffer anything to make sure she is safe.

Also one more thing if you noticed, Pankhudi and Naina are very similar characters. Armaan always has some kind of an soft corner for sweet and innocent girls like them that is why he tries to stop Neil. Neil doesn't listen and Naina dies. Naina's love for Neil was so deep that she made sure no one finds her body after death so that there can be no evidence against Neil and his friends. She just wanted him to be happy, and both Armaan and Neil acknowledge this. Several years later when Armaan meets Pankhudi and she begs Armaan in a similar way as Naina begged Neil, he melts almost instantly.

As far as what Pankhudi got out of this, well, Armaan was a rich and powerful man who married her after the events in A Game of Chess and now she has a settled secure life like she would have never been able to afford on her own. Armaan's punishment, well, I think the man has been through enough in his life. He is smart and gets away with a lot of things. But he has surrendered completely to Pankhudi and she may hurt him if she wishes and he would let her. But she doesnt want to hurt him, she believes that this world needs love, there is enough of pain already.

Like I said in my reply to your review on A Game of Chess, I plan to write a short story of upto 4000 words on the aftermath of the Armaan Pankhudi relationship. Sometimes I get second thoughts about it coz, although it would be a soulful piece written from my heart, I feel it would sound a bit melodramatic with no thrill like the rest of the story and I am not sure how many readers would want to read it.

 

[john stinston]

Thanks for much for your review. I wrote this story 6 years ago, but the characters are so close to my reality that I managed to maintain consistency in my recent stories.

Pankhudi is a sweetheart does not desire revenge. She is compassionate towards Armaan and she healed him with her love. And he loved her just as much. Armaan will never be able to find another girl who knows the bitter truth about him and still doesn't hate him. She is a pure soul who knows only how to love, just like Armaan described her in a game of chess when Meera dominates him. His love for her is so deep that he was willing to suffer anything to make sure she is safe.

Also one more thing if you noticed, Pankhudi and Naina are very similar characters. Armaan always has some kind of an soft corner for sweet and innocent girls like them that is why he tries to stop Neil. Neil doesn't listen and Naina dies. Naina's love for Neil was so deep that she made sure no one finds her body after death so that there can be no evidence against Neil and his friends. She just wanted him to be happy, and both Armaan and Neil acknowledge this. Several years later when Armaan meets Pankhudi and she begs Armaan in a similar way as Naina begged Neil, he melts almost instantly.

As far as what Pankhudi got out of this, well, Armaan was a rich and powerful man who married her after the events in A Game of Chess and now she has a settled secure life like she would have never been able to afford on her own. Armaan's punishment, well, I think the man has been through enough in his life. He is smart and gets away with a lot of things. But he has surrendered completely to Pankhudi and she may hurt him if she wishes and he would let her. But she doesnt want to hurt him, she believes that this world needs love, there is enough of pain already.

Like I said in my reply to your review on A Game of Chess, I plan to write a short story of upto 4000 words on the aftermath of the Armaan Pankhudi relationship. Sometimes I get second thoughts about it coz, although it would be a soulful piece written from my heart, I feel it would sound a bit melodramatic with no thrill like the rest of the story and I am not sure how many readers would want to read it.

I would certainly like to read it as it would be interesting that how an innocent girl like pankhudi and a guy like armaan finds balance in their life. At first they seems to be the two side of a river but they met and fell in love but aftermath is more difficult as old habits due hard. So it would be interesting to read and you are a wonderfull writer, never doubt yourself.
I dont know about others but i would love to read that.

 

[Indian Princess]

I would certainly like to read it as it would be interesting that how an innocent girl like pankhudi and a guy like armaan finds balance in their life. At first they seems to be the two side of a river but they met and fell in love but aftermath is more difficult as old habits due hard. So it would be interesting to read and you are a wonderfull writer, never doubt yourself.
I dont know about others but i would love to read that.

Thank for your encouragement. I will certainly consider writing it.

You know this couple reminds me of the yin and yang symbol, how they are polar opposites yet they complement each other and find peace and balance in each others company.

 

[Indian Princess]

I would certainly like to read it as it would be interesting that how an innocent girl like pankhudi and a guy like armaan finds balance in their life. At first they seems to be the two side of a river but they met and fell in love but aftermath is more difficult as old habits due hard. So it would be interesting to read and you are a wonderfull writer, never doubt yourself.
I dont know about others but i would love to read that.

I've just posted the story in A Game of Chess thread, let me know your thoughts.

 

[-:Demon King:-]

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will give you my best review