Erotica Dark Seduction (Completed)

[-:Demon King:-]

Indian Princess

About Dark Seduction​

This is a story about an innocent girl Pankhudi whose life gets disrupted by an unknown man who stalks and torments her.

Pankhudi

i remember hearing the girl named Pankhudi in TV serial the acctress was wow so i will try and imagine (my imagination is super powerful ) her as an actress of this fabulous story

stalking can be understandable but tormenting her

ju aaj meri innocence ko lut k rahogi

This is an erotic thriller, with an element of mystery in it. Like most of my writings, the content of this story is really dark. There are some scenes involving BDSM and non-consensual forced sex, so be warned if you find it disturbing.

your content is dark

non-consensual ( i told you last night ki thari personality esi hai ki ju kabhi bhi jabrdasti kar de) i didnt know the proper meaning of this word so i have to ask google for confirmation

This was the first story I wrote, so it is special for me and is very close to my heart. If you find it to your liking, or feel that it could have been better in some way, please let me know by leaving a comment.

yeah i can under stand the first story being close to your heart and all

This version of the story is a little different from the one posted in Xossip from Update 4 onwards.

good i didn't read your stories there (cause you never invited me)

will try to finish this story today

 

[Indian Princess]

Indian Princess

About Dark Seduction​

Pankhudi

i remember hearing the girl named Pankhudi in TV serial the acctress was wow so i will try and imagine (my imagination is super powerful ) her as an actress of this fabulous story

stalking can be understandable but tormenting her

ju aaj meri innocence ko lut k rahogi




your content is dark

non-consensual ( i told you last night ki thari personality esi hai ki ju kabhi bhi jabrdasti kar de) i didnt know the proper meaning of this word so i have to ask google for confirmation



yeah i can under stand the first story being close to your heart and all



good i didn't read your stories there (cause you never invited me)

will try to finish this story today

Thanks for such a detailed comment

Meko thoda darr laging ki aapko yeh story bahot jyada disturbing na lage

I hope you will be able to finish this story without getting scared

Cheers!

 

[-:Demon King:-]

Indian Princess

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Pankhudi's peaceful life was rudely disrupted since the dark shadow of a mysterious stalker started hovering over her. He crept into her life insidiously, she never realized until she was too deep into this terror trap. He threatened to destroy everything she was as a person like some slow poison. Incessant fear overshadowed her mind all the time. She was tormented by fear that kept her on the edge, fear that made her notice even the smallest things, like tiny movements in the shadows and slightest of noises; fear that drained her energy, that she couldn't do anything about.

at one point during this para i thought fear gave her some kinf of superpower

but that was not the point fear drained her, fear can be very dangerous thing it directly impact your heart and brain

well lets see what fear can do and let that stalker do to our very innocent (like me) Pankhudi.

She was never herself since she realized she was being watched all the time. She sat nervously on the couch curled into a ball like a wounded animal as she was talking to her roommate Nisha. Her voice was barely audible as she spoke, "I don't know who he is and what he wants."


"Why didn't you tell me before?" Nisha argued.


"I don't know if you can help me, I don't know if anyone can help me." she said as tears of helplessness rolled out of her eyes.


"Did he hurt or threaten you?" Nisha asked.


"No!" Pankhudi cried, "He doesn't do anything. He just stalks me, watches me all the time." She said this as he handed over an envelope to Nisha.

aah men its scary to see her cry

at first i thought the villian is blackmailing her but she said he is stalking her. its kind of crappy men

Nisha found various photographs of Pankhudi in the envelope, taken at various places, all taken without her notice.


"This is what he does all the time" Pankhudi said, "Some of these were handed over to me by random people, and some were sent by post to this address, and there are some more he emailed to me."


"It seems he knows a lot about you" Nisha said in a worried tone.


"I think he knows everything about me! First these photographs, then I started getting calls at my office, then on my mobile phone. At first they were just blank calls, later he started speaking. And believe me, our conversations are not sweet." Pankhudi cried.

it sounds like a psycho man. obsessed with a girl who don't even know him and all.

tharki bc

i believe that your story title will be proved by the end of the story.

ju will change my way of looking at girls by the end of the story.

their conversation is not sweet ! i didnt even expect it to be sweet men

"Did you ever see him?" Nisha asked.


"No, not yet" Pankhudi sighed, "But I recognize his voice, it is deep and clear as anything. He has called me several times. Each time a different number or a private number."

i dont know if this private number thing is real or not. but i like it.

how did she recognized his voice, so maybe she knows him and that tharki is taking advantage of some crossed paths.

"This is frightening. I think we should report to the police." Nisha suggested.

if you fear a sexual harassment you should go to the ladies police

i attended a lecture when professor of mine told me that you have to be very careful in corporate society. law favors girls in this type of cases.

it was a good lecture (ethics moral and all ) ()

Pankhudi said nothing. She just closed her eyes tightly took a deep breath and handed over another envelope to Nisha. This envelope contained her pictures, taken from the window of her own apartment. Pankhudi was changing her clothes and perhaps a portion of the curtain was left open. Unlike most of those skinny girls, Pankhudi's weight was on the heavier side, she had a beautiful womanly curvy body. The photographs were taken from such a sensual angle that captured the best of each and every curve of her voluptuous body. An admirer of erotic art would appreciate the artistic angle of photography that captured her lovely cleavage of her curvaceous breasts as she slipped down her top and unhooked her bra. There was another one taken from behind that showed her lovely brown legs as she removed her jeans and managed to get a sneak peek at her ass crack showing though her slightly lowered panty. For someone who admired this wheatish complexioned maiden, she might have well looked like a goddess of sensuality as her beautiful long raven hair hanged down her shoulders flanking her naked breasts, with such a subtle expression of purity adorned on her face. Pankhudi was a doe-eyed beauty. Her face was so expressive, it virtually told her story. Her eyes were sad yet so full of innocence. Whatever was visible of her skin in the photographs, looked like smooth satin that would tempt anyone to want to touch and find out what it really feels like.

ahh men sometimes it sucks to be beautiful or handsome

just yesterday i have seen a pic on insta that a girl threw acid on boys face cause he rejected her. (i know lots of girls are victims but it is not about gender)

the way you described Pankhudi even chhota virus was growing.

you have some pure writing skill (just in the wrong language, if you were a hindi section writer i am sure you will be on top for erotics )

But Pankhudi was no admirer of her nude pictures taken without her notice and consent, neither was Nisha. Those pictures sent a chill down Nisha's spine as she realized she too was within the reach of this tormentor. She was upset more than angry.


"How the hell did he manage to click these?" Nisha said nervously as beads of sweat emerged on her forehead, "He could have my pictures too!"


"It is possible" Pankhudi said, "But he is not bothering you, is he? He didn't send you your pictures, did he?"

how can you be sure that he don't have Nisha's pictures he may be saving it so use it after getting Pankhudi

"Pankh this is serious! We have a man stalking you all the time and lurking around our house and you still think we shouldn't be going to the police. Don't you realize he is just as much a threat to me as much he is to you?"


"Please" Pankhudi begged, "I know this is disturbing, but please let it be. I am afraid I am not strong enough to deal with the consequences." She paused for a while and then broke down crying uncontrollably. "I don't know..." she said, "I don't know why he is doing this to me! I don't know what he wants...I've begged him to tell me several times but..."


"What does he say?" Nisha asked out of irrepressible anxiety.


"He says he is getting that he wants" Pankhudi said amongst her tears.

he got what he wants so that means he is getting kick out of all this situation and the way pankhudi is right now.

There was silence after that. Nisha hugged Pankhudi as now they both were equally apprehensive.


"As of now" Pankhudi said, "I will stop answering calls from unknown numbers. Let's hope this passes away like a nightmare."

even there is hope like that i think it will not pass with time.

Pankhudi stayed away from her family and she was introvert by nature. Perhaps that had something to do with the fact that she had so much to deal with alone. She could barely find time or energy to socialize. Normally a 24 year old beautiful girl like her would have a boyfriend or even be married. But Pankhudi never found the kind of man she was looking for. She wanted a strong and mature man, who would understand and support her but at the same time respect her for being an independent person. And she wasn't interested in casual flings. There were far more important and serious things in her life that she had to handle.

sometimes the problem with introvert is they dont know how to ask someone for help, i mean really they may feel shy, embarrassed about the topic etc.

pankhu is relly

girls like her are few now a days and someone like this villan are trying to defy her innocence.

After the tense conversation, both the girls hit the sheets to get some sleep. But Pankhudi could barely sleep. Her body was tired from the day's work but her mind was still so restless. Still she closed her eyes, and tried to sleep. The night grew darker and perhaps it was the cool breeze or the calming silence; for the first time in many nights, she slept. We lose track of time when we sleep, so it was hard for her to tell exactly when, but she heard a creaking noise. Moments later, she felt a hand moving through her beautiful dark hair spread over the pillow like a dark cloud and then brushing across her skin. She could feel from the touch that it was a male hand. Her eyes shot open. She almost froze in fear to see a man sitting next to her bed, she could barely even scream. It was so dark in the room, she couldn't even see him properly, but his presence so close to her made her tremble.


"How are you, cupcake?" He said.

the more i read more i am becoming your fan IP you have such a smooth way of describing element of story.

oh man is that men is a ghost

tharki may have died virgin and became ghost so he can fulfill his unsatisfied desire.

but how did he enter her house at night don't they have security or is it insider someone from society

Her heart skipped a beat as she recognized the voice of her stalker. She wanted to scream, she wanted to run, but fear paralysed her. Tears of helplessness filled her eyes. The man seemed delighted to see a quivering doe lying so helpless before him. There was a devilish smile across his face as he pressed a pillow against her face and began to smother her. Pankhudi could only put up a weak struggle for her life; fear had debilitated her to such extent. With every passing second, she was one step closer to death.


As she was so close to what could be her last breath, she struggled with whatever was left of her strength. And then suddenly, the smothering force was gone, the pillow was gone, the man was gone. She sat up in her bed trembling, all drenched in her own sweat, and breathless. She realized this was only a nightmare.

ah thank god it was a nightmare my thoughts was running around with lots of ideas.

Pankhudi was an asthmatic. She was having an attack; she fumbled around the room to reach the drawer where she had kept her inhaler. Her fumbling and her wheezing made enough noise to wake her roommate.


"Oh my God, Pankh! Are you alright?" She asked as she hurried to support a breathless Pankhudi.


"Yes" said Pankhudi still gasping, "I just had a bad dream"


Nisha helped her get back to the bed. She was concerned about Pankhudi; after all she was like a sister to her. Nisha was one of Pankhudi's closest friends.

oh man such a beautiful girl has so many problems in her life

"Please take care of yourself" said Nisha as she hugged Pankhudi and kissed her forehead, "And if there's anything I can do for you, I am always there. You know that, don't you?"


"I do" said Pankhudi, as she was now feeling calm after Nisha comforted her. But she could barely shake off the fear that haunted her all the time.

well nisha is a good friend.

fighting a fear is all about moral and confidence within you but the more you fear a fear too much you will be gone



She slept the night away somehow. Next day the rays of the morning sun came in through her window and awoke as with their kiss. She looked out of the window, a beautiful day welcomed her.

She got ready for her work. As she stepped out on the street, she could see a busy city around her, everyone going about their business. There were so many people around her, she saw some smiling faces, heard some laughter, some people in a hurry, some others quarrelling, the road traffic with continuous honking of horns, children playing, hawkers hawking...there was so much happening around. She took interest in her ordinary surroundings, hoping that it will help calm the storm inside her head.


She didn't really have any close friends at work; she used to keep to herself most of the times. But her colleagues used to like her because she was a sweet girl and never really created any problems. But that had changed due the recent events in her life. She had become a bundle of nerves since she was being stalked. She was running scared of her own shadow, and her rising anxiety was affecting her work life as well. She had been cranky, irritable and had been getting into fights lately.

i feel for you Pankhudi

The day was uneventful. But she'd jump every time her phone rang. She didn't receive any call from any unknown number that day, but her anxiety compelled her to keep checking if she had missed any.


After she was done with her job, she had some time free before her college. She usually would go home after work, but today she didn't feel like. There was a park near her office. She walked in, the beautiful plants, flowers and the laughter of children playing there was soothing her mind. She bought herself a cotton candy, and sat on a bench near a fountain. The wind sprinkled the fountain mist on her. The evening sunlight was spread like a golden robe all around her.


The smell of the cotton candy she was holding brought back beautiful memories of her younger days - how she was a part of a family, with her parents and younger sister; she yearned for those days when everything was so sheltered and protected. Pankhudi hailed form a small town. Her father died of an incurable illness. She was not very fond of her father, but after his death, her family suffered a serious setback as he was the only earning member of their family. There was a loan to repay, and resources were so meagre. Her mother was uneducated; she started working as a housemaid and could barely make both ends meet. Still her mother loved both her daughters and provided them the best she could. But as fate would have it, her mother had an accident that injured her spine and left her paralysed below the waist. Pankhudi now had to take responsibility of her family.


It was the poverty of her family that compelled her to migrate to Mumbai in search of employment to support her family. Pankhudi worked as a receptionist in a construction company and also pursed her education. She studied commerce and dreamed to become a charted accountant someday. She was a hardworking girl, the sole bread-winner of her family, but she was insecure and vulnerable as she faced the world alone.

why gawd why

now i got it why Pankhudi is not taking any reaction against that stalker, she dont have resources and she dont have that many people around her to support her for anything. if her nudes r those semi-nudes were to circulate she will be very brokern.

She wished she could have a loving man in her life in whose arms she could rest, a shoulder on which she could cry. But there are always things that we want, but have to live without.


She was lost in her thoughts when suddenly she was startled as she felt someone tap on her shoulder. She looked around, there was no one! Fear griped her mind again. She was sure she felt something, but there was no explanation to it. It pained her to realize how jumpy she had become, to be startled at absolutely nothing in broad daylight.


She somehow gathered herself and left the park. She was pursuing a post graduate diploma in an evening college. That day she attended her classes, but she could barely concentrate in class. Her perennial anxiety wouldn't let her think about anything other than baseless anticipation of harm that might come her way.

fear of a stalker will ruin her career men, i hate that men right now

She reached home at night. Nisha was already waiting for her. Both the girls were having dinner together. Pankhudi was not even looking at Nisha. She was lost in her own thoughts.


"So" Nisha asked interrupting Pankhudi's thoughts, "How was your day?"


"Good" Pankhudi said as she tried to smile.


Nisha was worried about Pankhudi since she came to know about what she was going through. After dinner, both the girls slipped into their bed. Nisha held Pankhudi in her arms and said fondling her hair, "Don't worry, everything is going to be ok."


"Thanks so much Nisha" Pankhudi said in a sad yet sincere tone, "I don't know what I would have done without you."


"Try and sleep Pankh" Nisha said, "I can't bear to see you in this condition."


Pankhudi nodded and turned around to switch off the lights. She noticed the glow on the screen of her mobile phone. She picked it up and her expression changed instantly. Her hand trembled as she held the phone; the message on the screen read - 1 missed call - private number.


She didn't say anything to Nisha. She just put the phone aside. She was firm on her decision.

dont know what to say

she is broken from inside by her fear

A few days went by. They were all uneventful, except that she continued to get calls from a private number. She just did not answer them. She was beginning to feel strong now. Nisha was happy that Pankhudi was slowly recovering from whatever was tormenting her.


Her stalker kept calling her without getting a response from her for a few days. And then he suddenly became silent. Normally one would take it as a positive sign, but Pankhudi's sixth sense was telling her otherwise. If he is not calling, perhaps is busy planning a more ominous move. She ironically became more apprehensive because of his inactivity.

yeah her sixth sense is right
those types of psycho will never left you alone

Pankhudi was being more alert than usual because she was anticipating a sudden move from her stalker. Sometimes she would freak out seeing her own shadow or reflection in the mirror. And then one day she managed to catch a glimpse of something that could have been him. She was having dinner with Nisha when she saw a silhouette at her window. She screamed seeing it.


"Nisha! He is right there...he is watching us!" she said screaming.


Nisha immediately left the dining table and ran towards the window. But there was no one.


She went to Pankhudi, put a hand on her shoulder and said, "Relax dear, no one is here!"


"But I saw something I am sure!" said Pankhudi still trembling.


"Pankh, it is over now. Just relax!" said Nisha comforting her, "He even stopped calling you. He'll never come back now."


"I don't know Nisha," Pankhudi said, "I am feeling scared."


"Just relax sweetie," Nisha said, "Have dinner and go to sleep. Everything is going to be ok. I've been invited to a party tomorrow. Maybe you should come along. You need some fresh air."

yeah she could use some fresh air and new faces but then again life in mumbai will show you new faces everyday

Pankhudi believed Nisha for a while. She tried to convince herself that perhaps Nisha was right. She tried to believe that her life was going to be ok again. Nisha took Pankhudi along to the party. They had a great time there...it was so much relief for Pankhudi after having gone through such stressful times. She was enjoying the few happy moments of her life.


After the party, the girls returned home. Pankhudi reached into her purse to find the key of their apartment. She withdrew her hand with a scream as she felt intense pain. She noticed a sting mark on her hand. She was in tremendous pain, she was feeling dizzy and for a moment thought she was going to faint.


Nisha quickly opened the door with her key and took her in. She made Pankhudi sit down and switched on the lights and looked carefully in her purse to find out where that sting came from. She found a live scorpion in it. She screamed seeing it.


The phone rang. Pankhudi answered it.


"Did you like my little gift, sunshine?" the voice over the phone said.


Pankhudi panicked as she recognized the voice. She shouted on the phone, "Stop it for God sake! Oh...What do you want...why are you doing this to me?"


"You stopped taking my calls sugar, so I had to give you a wakeup call. This was just to remind you. It's not over." the voice said coldly.


Pankhudi was already in so much pain. She started crying. Nisha understood it was him. She violently snatched the phone from her hand and said to him, "Look you son of a bitch, leave Pankh alone! What the fuck do you think you are doing?"


"Stay out of this if you love your life." he said in a voice clear and cold.


"You think this bullshit is going to scare me? You are a loser and coward, and I am pretty sure you don't have the balls to show your face in broad daylight."


"That you shall find out soon." he said in a threatening tone and hung up. Nisha too put the phone aside.


She then picked up that scorpion with a pair of tongs, took it to the balcony and crushed it. She then went to comfort Pankhudi. She took her to a local doctor who gave some medicines to reduce her pain.

i just want to find that how the hell he can come close to her purse so that he can put a living scorpion in it

nisha's bravery is one thing but she is fighting a psycho and they are unpredictable.

dont know what will happen soon

Pankhudi had to rest the next day. She had developed fever due to the scorpion sting. The wound was still very painful. Every time she felt the pain, it made her think of him. It made her realize how much of an intricate watch he kept over her.


Nisha too was disturbed because of the recent events. But unlike Pankhudi, Nisha was from a well off family. She was in Mumbai only to pursue her education. She had good financial and social support from her family. She never had to face any hardships in life like Pankhudi. Besides she had learned martial arts in school. She was capable of defending herself; that made her a more confident woman. She really cared for Pankhudi, she understood her, and really wanted to help her. But she still couldn't get why Pankhudi chose to suffer rather than asking for help.

yeah same man if you are not capable to fight then ask someone who can do it on your behalf.

Nisha was however unaware that her interference had angered this mysterious stalker and now he had become a real threat to her as well. One morning as usual she went to college. But there was something unusual waiting for her in her locker. She found an envelope with her name written in bold on it. She opened the envelope and read the note that was place inside it.


It read -


You think you are one hell of a fighter, don't you? Don't play with fire. Stay out of business you don't understand.


With an expression of disgust on her face she tore the note away. In the evening she told Pankhudi about it.


"If he wants you to stay away...please stay away Nisha", Pankhudi said.


"I am not a coward" Nisha argued, "to desert a friend when she is facing a problem."


"It is more complicated than you know Nisha, I am grateful for your support...but please don't get yourself too deep into this" Pankhudi said.


"What do you mean by more complicated?" Nisha asked angrily, "What are you not telling me?"


"I am sorry, I can't tell you." Pankhudi begged with tearful eyes, "Please stay away Nisha and please don't tell anyone...please..."


When Pankhudi began to cry, Nisha didn't ask her much. She hugged her and said, "How can I help you if you keep me in the dark? Still I respect your wish. But if you ever want to tell me something, you know I would listen, right?"


Pankhudi nodded.

men this is getting more and more exciting not because of Pnakhudi's condition or nisha's because there is more to the story then it is already told, Pnakhudi is hiding something and well i will read it

After that day there wasn't much conversation between the two. Pankhudi kept to herself most of the time. She struggled with her fear all by herself.


The morbid fear took its toll on every aspect of her life. She was performing poorly at her workplace, she failed in her exams. It was like her world was falling apart.


On one apparently normal day, Pankhudi was seated at the reception table. She received a call from her boss, who summoned her to his cabin on the top floor.


She had to take the elevator. She was a claustrophobic; she was never very fond of elevators. But she had no choice here, coz she couldn't climb all the stairs up to the top floor. She controlled her anxiety somehow and entered the elevator. It stopped at many floors and more and more people kept stepping in. She had to move towards the rear end of the elevator. And then suddenly there was a power cut. The lift stopped and it was all dark.


Pankhudi panicked already. She was afraid of closed spaces and now she was in a dark closed space. Even after a few minutes the elevator wouldn't move. Now people began to lose patience and there was chaos. The dark elevator had become so noisy already as everyone got so impatient. And to her horror, she felt a strong male hand wrap around her face and another hand push her against the wall of the elevator. The man pinned her against the wall, and his other hand pressed hard against her mouth and nose preventing her from screaming or even breathing. She struggled in his grip but her attempts were too feeble. And since there was so much commotion in the lift already, no one could sense her struggle.


"Easy...easy, cupcake." He whispered in her ear.

oh so he has access to her office building too

is it her boss or what

well

She freaked out even more when she recognised the voice. She had only heard his voice till now. Now he was actually there in person. Her worst fear had come true. It was too dark, she couldn't see anything, but she did get a good idea about his strength. He started moving his hand over her body getting a good feel of her curves. She was wearing a lovely salwar suit. He roughly pulled her dupatta away. She could do nothing but whimper in his grip as he moved his hand to her front and squeezed her boobs hard. He got a blissful feeling of warmth as he continued squeezing her soft mounds. Then he moved his hand lower, between her legs. She brought then closer instantly to deny him access.


"Open up." he ordered as he sharply pinched her ass as a punishment for rebellion.


Pankhudi was struggling for breath. It was like he held her life in his hands. She obeyed, and he rewarded her by shifting his grip away from her nostrils enough to allow her to breathe. He stroked her thighs with his other hand and then felt her pussy through her salwar. He continued rubbing hard for some time. Then he moved his hand to her firm ass and groped it roughly. She whimpered as she felt him try to insinuate his fingers in her ass crack. He continued feeling her body over and over again. And then he suddenly let go of her.


Pankhudi was too flustered to even react. She couldn't tell who among all the people in the lift the person who just molested her was. She just stood there in the corner, stunned from the unexpected attack.


The power was restored in some time. There were so many men in the elevator; she looked at all of them in horror. Any one of them could be her stalker, but she was in no position to point out to anyone. She hurriedly picked up her dupatta lying on the floor and covered herself. It took a long time for her to recover from this shock. Her fear reached a new level when she realized that she was not safe even in her office.


When she returned home, she didn't tell Nisha about it. She was losing her mind, and everything happened so suddenly and unexpectedly. She was too disturbed to even want to talk about her ordeal to anyone.

the way he left her half satisfied that will be defining moment, i think soon the stalking will end and he will force his way into pankhudi.

well IP i may not like all the tormenting of pankhudi but as a writer you have solid skills

your way of style and describing are good and your flow in the story is quit good you never lost your flow and you have kept every detail in the story even the smallest thing

i like it

will read next update

 

[Indian Princess]

Indian Princess

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at one point during this para i thought fear gave her some kinf of superpower

but that was not the point fear drained her, fear can be very dangerous thing it directly impact your heart and brain

well lets see what fear can do and let that stalker do to our very innocent (like me) Pankhudi.




aah men its scary to see her cry

at first i thought the villian is blackmailing her but she said he is stalking her. its kind of crappy men



it sounds like a psycho man. obsessed with a girl who don't even know him and all.

tharki bc

i believe that your story title will be proved by the end of the story.

ju will change my way of looking at girls by the end of the story.

their conversation is not sweet ! i didnt even expect it to be sweet men




i dont know if this private number thing is real or not. but i like it.

how did she recognized his voice, so maybe she knows him and that tharki is taking advantage of some crossed paths.



if you fear a sexual harassment you should go to the ladies police

i attended a lecture when professor of mine told me that you have to be very careful in corporate society. law favors girls in this type of cases.

it was a good lecture (ethics moral and all ) ()



ahh men sometimes it sucks to be beautiful or handsome

just yesterday i have seen a pic on insta that a girl threw acid on boys face cause he rejected her. (i know lots of girls are victims but it is not about gender)

the way you described Pankhudi even chhota virus was growing.

you have some pure writing skill (just in the wrong language, if you were a hindi section writer i am sure you will be on top for erotics )



how can you be sure that he don't have Nisha's pictures he may be saving it so use it after getting Pankhudi





he got what he wants so that means he is getting kick out of all this situation and the way pankhudi is right now.



even there is hope like that i think it will not pass with time.





sometimes the problem with introvert is they dont know how to ask someone for help, i mean really they may feel shy, embarrassed about the topic etc.

pankhu is relly

girls like her are few now a days and someone like this villan are trying to defy her innocence.




the more i read more i am becoming your fan IP you have such a smooth way of describing element of story.

oh man is that men is a ghost

tharki may have died virgin and became ghost so he can fulfill his unsatisfied desire.

but how did he enter her house at night don't they have security or is it insider someone from society




ah thank god it was a nightmare my thoughts was running around with lots of ideas.




oh man such a beautiful girl has so many problems in her life



well nisha is a good friend.

fighting a fear is all about moral and confidence within you but the more you fear a fear too much you will be gone



She slept the night away somehow. Next day the rays of the morning sun came in through her window and awoke as with their kiss. She looked out of the window, a beautiful day welcomed her.




i feel for you Pankhudi



why gawd why

now i got it why Pankhudi is not taking any reaction against that stalker, she dont have resources and she dont have that many people around her to support her for anything. if her nudes r those semi-nudes were to circulate she will be very brokern.





fear of a stalker will ruin her career men, i hate that men right now




dont know what to say

she is broken from inside by her fear




yeah her sixth sense is right
those types of psycho will never left you alone



yeah she could use some fresh air and new faces but then again life in mumbai will show you new faces everyday




i just want to find that how the hell he can come close to her purse so that he can put a living scorpion in it

nisha's bravery is one thing but she is fighting a psycho and they are unpredictable.

dont know what will happen soon



yeah same man if you are not capable to fight then ask someone who can do it on your behalf.





men this is getting more and more exciting not because of Pnakhudi's condition or nisha's because there is more to the story then it is already told, Pnakhudi is hiding something and well i will read it



oh so he has access to her office building too

is it her boss or what

well



the way he left her half satisfied that will be defining moment, i think soon the stalking will end and he will force his way into pankhudi.

well IP i may not like all the tormenting of pankhudi but as a writer you have solid skills

your way of style and describing are good and your flow in the story is quit good you never lost your flow and you have kept every detail in the story even the smallest thing

i like it

will read next update

Wow such a detailed review!

Itna detailed to aaj tak koi comment nahi kiya

You are an awesome reader

 

[-:Demon King:-]

Thanks for such a detailed comment

Meko thoda darr laging ki aapko yeh story bahot jyada disturbing na lage

I hope you will be able to finish this story without getting scared

Cheers!

to tell you the truth i am literally scared men, of all the things i don't like non-consensual, it is disturbing for me to read a boy forcing a girl to do his biding like that, i like the sound of BDSM and Rough sex but it has to be consented.

i hope i complete this story if not i dont know

update 2

 

[Indian Princess]

to tell you the truth i am literally scared men, of all the things i don't like non-consensual, it is disturbing for me to read a boy forcing a girl to do his biding like that, i like the sound of BDSM and Rough sex but it has to be consented.

i hope i complete this story if not i dont know

update 2

Ek kaam karo phir yeh story rehne do, it is extreme dark.

Read The Girl next Door, woh thodi kam dark hai

 

[-:Demon King:-]

Indian Princess

It took a few days for Pankhudi to recover from the shock of what happened in the lift. Nothing happened for the next few days. Her tormentor always allowed her a period of a few days to breathe, before he stormed into her life again.

This time he was taking longer. It had been almost 2 weeks since Pankhudi didn't receive any call from him. She was apprehensive yet she was secretly hoping that something happened to him and that he'd never come back in her life again.

After having lived a peaceful life for an unexpectedly long interval, Pankhudi was becoming nervous again. This was his cruel game. He would always let anticipation build up to such an extent, that the tension itself became a tormenting factor for his prey. Any of his attacks weren't half as bad as the fear of them. That was a fact.

yeah that's true, it impacts the mind like that you always expect it to happen and then it didn't so your mind will work extra that something else is going on and all

her peaceful life is gone men and in the anticipation of something about to happen she can't even enjoy the break

And soon the expected occurred. He met her again. Pankhudi was returning from her college. Suddenly she felt a strong arm grab her from behind. She struggled to free herself but the man holding her was too strong. There was no one around. Perhaps he followed her all the way to find the right opportunity and right place to grab her.

"Miss me, sugar?" he said whispered in her ears. That made her freeze instantly.

In her last encounter she had only felt his presence in absolute dark. That was when she got an idea about his strength. Today she saw that he was not just strong but also very tall, and from whatever was visible of his hand to her, she could tell that he was fair. She was helpless in his grip.

"Uh-uh" he said before she could speak anything, "If you scream, I'll slash your throat." He touched the cold blade of the knife he was holding in his other hand to her cheek. The blade was so cold that it sent a chill down her spine.

i don't know what other readers said about it but in my opinion this game is like a slow rape he is raping her but slowly tormenting her life, breaking her mind and all, for me it will never be a seduction it will always like a slow rape a slow poison.

Amidst her hopeless struggle, she happened to see a tattoo of a scorpion on his hand. It was dark, yet the black tattoo made a good contrast with his fair skin and was quite conspicuous in the golden yellow street light. It reminded her of the pain she suffered from the scorpion sting that was deliberately inflicted onto her, as a punishment for not taking his calls. Perhaps he could relate himself to a scorpion. He was only tormenting her, causing her pain and anguish, but he never did any real harm to her, yet.

if pankhudi is saying that he didn't harm her yet then i think my opinion is too different from her, he is mind raping her giving her fear of being stalked and exposed and she is thinking that he didn't do any real harm

She felt him first kiss and then lick her cheek. She squirmed as she was unable to stop him.

"You are so beautiful, Pankhudi!" he whispered in her ear in a deep sensual voice, "So soft and lovely, true to your name..."

"Please" she begged in a poorly audible voice, "Please let me go, please stop all this. I just want to live my life in peace."

The man chuckled and said, "You still don't understand cupcake....this is not about what 'you' want."

The he slipped the knife into her top from above and slowly cut through the fabric. She was wearing a lovely red top and blue jeans, as she preferred wearing casuals for college. As she saw her top being cut she wanted to struggle franticly, but she was afraid the knife would hurt her. His eyes growled in pleasure as he watched the fabric separate showing her cleavage; he cut further down till her bra was visible.

i am definitely sure that he is psycho man, getting a plesure by tormenting a girl cutting her dress in the middle of nowhere and all

"No! Please stop it!" she begged.

"Shut up!" he raid rudely, as he slipped the knife under her bra strap. Perhaps the knife was too sharp or the strap too weak, but it snapped instantly.

"NO!" she screamed, "Please don't! How will I go home like this? Please stop!" she begged, now struggling for her dignity.

"The more you speak, the more I'll use my knife." he warned coldly as he slipped the knife under the other bra strap and cut if off too. Pankhudi began to cry out of helplessness. But she didn't dare to speak anymore. She stood quietly sobbing in his hold.

He held her for some time. When he saw that she had stopped resisting and protesting, he smiled and said, "Good girl, you'll learn fast. See you later, sunshine."

Then he pushed her so violently that she fell to the ground. By the time she could get up, he was gone. She never got to see his face.

She was hurt as her tender skin was peeled off as it rubbed against the road. She looked at her torn top; she found herself in an embarrassing situation. Her bra was clearly visible from the midline slit in her top, and with both the straps gone, it was practically useless. She searched desperately to find some safety pins in her purse, she could find only 2 of them, and she had a long journey back home, that too by public transport. She put her top together with whatever pins she had. She was thankful to the dark that saved her dignity to some extent. But even a casual observer could still see a lot through her pathetic attempt to fix the rent in the fabric.

i think his motive is to let him rape her silently

i didn't know i was going to see such a thing in stories then again i read the few parts of that 50 shades and anything is possible men

its dark for me

She somehow reached her apartment. She then closed the door behind her and broke down crying uncontrollably. She had been strong all the way long, now she wanted to vent her anguish.

Nisha was already home. When she saw Pankhudi with half torn clothes, skinned palms and elbows, and eyes full of tears, instant rage filled her mind. Pankhudi had to tell her what happened.

"That bastard did this to you?" Nisha growled, "I'd break every bone in his body if I ever saw him."

Pankhudi didn't reply. She didn't seem to be comforted by Nisha.

"Pankh this is enough! We are going to the police right now!"

"NO!" Pankhudi shouted, "Not the police....we are not going there!"

"Are you out of your mind?" Nisha shouted back, "You are not willing to report because that guy has some of your nude pictures? Does that mean he owns your life? Does that mean he can do whatever he feels like to you and we won't react?"

"It is not just about the pictures!" Pankhudi said, "I have a serious reason for not going to the police."

"You've said that before....now you better start talking." Nisha said sternly.

"I can't tell you Nisha, I really can't....going to the police will do me more harm than this guy."

"What do you mean?"

"I deserve everything that he is doing to me." Pankhudi said in a soft submissive tone as more tears continued to flow out of her eyes.

oh men

what the hell is she mean by i deserve it

is there a plot twist i see

"What nonsense!" Nisha shouted. Then her expression softened and she said tenderly, "Pankh, you are my friend, you are like a sister to me, and you don't deserve any of this bullshit!"

"You call me a friend. You care about me, don't you?" Pankhudi asked softly.

"Of course I do! And that is exactly why I want to help you." Nisha replied.

Pankhudi bowed her head and slowly went down on her knees before Nisha.

"Then do me a favour," Pankhudi begged, "Please don't tell about this to anyone"

Nisha felt so awkward to see Pankhudi kneeling before her. She had always loved and respected her. Nisha kneeled too and hugged her and said softly in her ears, "I just wish that you would trust me."

Pankhudi said nothing. She just got up and went to her room.

Nisha was extremely upset; Pankhudi wasn't willing to tell her why she didn't want to go to the police. Nisha was afraid that something serious might happen soon, and she won't be able to help Pankhudi. She thought for a long time and decided to approach the police herself.

sometimes you have to fight a fear at the risk of your life. i have fear of height till i go to high rises and try to look from gallery or terrace you have to fight your own fear.

i want to know what reason pankhudi is trying to hide

Nisha decided to visit the nearest police station after her college. Some of her lectures were canceled so she was free early. She was in two minds already. She was going against the will of her friend whom she was trying to help. She wasn't even sure that her decision was right. She was walking through a lonely street lost in her own thoughts, trying to settle the turmoil going on in her head. When suddenly she felt like she was being followed. It was a hot afternoon and there was no one on that street so she became even more uneasy. She heard footsteps of someone behind her. Then she felt a sharp tap on her shoulder. When she turned around a liquid was splashed right onto her face. She could feel the liquid sting her skin, but the pain in her eyes was excruciating. The attack was so sudden; she couldn't even brace herself for it. She screamed hysterically and could see nothing.

Nisha was screaming in pain when she suddenly felt someone grab her hair. She heard a familiar voice speak spitefully in her ears, "I asked you to stay away, didn't I? Consider this a demonstration and listen to me carefully bitch, if you don't learn to keep that hole in your face shut, next time I splash a liquid at you, it will melt every bit of the flesh on your face."

He left after pushing her to the ground. Nisha was in intense pain for a long time. There was no one around to help her. After a long time, the pain subsided on its own. She reached into her purse to remove the water bottle she carried in it. She splashed water over her face and eyes. She was slowly able to open her eyes. She thanked her stars that her eyesight was intact. She fumbled to find the little mirror she kept in her purse. Her skin was intact too. But her mind was no longer intact. She was severely traumatized by this incident.

now i hereby declare this man psycho and no matter how much pankhudi accept him letter or he loves her i will not see him as rational or normal

nisha was brave but still everyone has inside fear of their own life so now she can't help

but what i want to know is how did he know that she was going to police

and second thing mumbai has no stranger around i thought that was impossible ahead

She reached her apartment somehow but she couldn't shake off the fear that had gripped her mind.

When Pankhudi returned in the evening, she told her about this awful incident. She was shocked and speechless to hear that. She felt doubly crushed.

"It was some sort of a strong astringent." said Nisha sobbing.

Pankhudi listened in horror imagining what would have happened had it been a corrosive.

"I would have never been able to forgive myself had something happened to you today." said Pankhudi and hugged Nisha tightly, "This is why even I wanted you to stay out of this."

"I was only trying to help you." Nisha said.

"At what cost?" Pankhudi shouted, "It could have been an acid! Don't you understand? This guy is too dangerous. He's giving you a taste. Just a taste. He wants you to know what he's capable of doing to you. And it seems to me that he doesn't really want to hurt you, so don't force him to!"

"But I can't just watch him torture my friend." Nisha argued.

"There is something I should have told you before" Pankhudi said in a sad tone. Then she quietly got up and took out an envelope from a drawer and gave it to Nisha. Nisha quietly opened it. She was shocked to see the pictures inside.

oh so finally suspense will be cleared

nisha is a good friend

"What is this?" Nisha asked.

"What does it look like?" Pankhudi said.

"It looks like you were removing the gold chain and bracelet from a dead woman." Nisha said.

Pankhudi took a deep breath and said, "Do you remember three months ago when my younger sister Palak was ill? You know that my family is facing financial difficulties. I was desperately in need of money. I tried all my options, but I couldn't raise that much money."

Pankhudi continued, "One night while returning home, I found this woman lying on the side of the road, all bathed in her own blood....there was no one around. I tried to wake her up but she didn't respond. I thought she was dead. I couldn't make out what had happened to her, whether she was stabbed or she met with an accident. I saw that she was wearing a golden chain and bracelet, and I quietly took it off. Just as I was about to walk away, I saw her move, she was groaning and begging for help in a faint voice..."

"So?" Nisha asked nervously, "What did you do?"

"I walked away," Pankhudi said bowing her head in shame, "I walked away and I left her there to die. She was alive, Nisha! And I didn't have the heart to help her because I didn't want to return her gold. She died because of me!"

Pankhudi started sobbing and continue, "Next day I read in the newspaper that police found her body and they are suspecting robbery as the intention of murder. I didn't kill her, but these pictures can link me to her murder. I needed money for my sister's medical bills. I was never greedy beyond that, I was just in desperate need...." Pankhudi cried, "Now I am paying for it...that is why all this is happening to me. I left that woman there to die. I could have saved her life, but I didn't."

Pankhudi paused for a while to swallow her guilt and continued, "If he sends these pictures to the police, I will be behind bars....then what will happen to my family, Nisha? My mom can't even walk".

"But he could kill you Pankh..." said Nisha in a worried tone.

i dont know this reason is valid to be a victim of this torture

there are lots of way to be out of this situation

if he can take pictures even at that time and he too left that woman to die then i think he is not good man psycho man

she can ask nisha for help with the money as nisha is a good friend and with strong financial background (why not ask her )

i dont think he is going to kill pankhudi she has more use for her alive then dead

"If he wanted to kill me, he would have done it already" said Pankhudi assertively, "I don't know what he wants to do to me. He isn't even blackmailing me. He doesn't even tell me what he wants. He is just tormenting me, like he just wants to watch me suffer. And don't you realize? I have no choice but to suffer at his hands."

Nisha just kept looking at her, feeling her pain.

"My own deeds have brought this upon me." Pankhudi said with remorse, "I deserve everything that he is doing to me!"

"No you don't!" said Nisha as she hugged Pankhudi tightly, "You are a good person. You don't deserve all this. You are my best friend. I can't watch all this happen to you."

"It's ok Nisha" Pankhudi said, "I care about you just as much as you care about me. And I don't want you to suffer because of me. Please leave this house as soon as possible. Leave me to my fate."

"I will pray for you" said Nisha tearfully, "And I won't tell anyone....I promise."

Pankhudi tried to at least look strong. Nisha managed to arrange for her accommodation at another place far away from Pankhudi. Pankhudi wanted that at least Nisha to be safe and live a peaceful life.

pushing away your only few friends is not good in my book but thinking about their safety is good

well lets see what happens next

With Nisha gone, Pankhudi returned to living her life on her own, preparing herself to face whatever horrors that were in store for her, all by herself.

With every passing day, it was getting difficult for Pankhudi to carry on all by herself. With every breath she took, she braced herself for another ruthless attack from her stalker. And she knew there was nothing she could do to stop him.

She missed Nisha a lot; her support had made life easier for Pankhudi. Pankhudi held a photo frame in her hand with had pictures of her and Nisha. The smiling faces of two beautiful girls reminded her of her happier days. Everything was alright in her life; she was working, earning, studying, and trying to secure a future for herself and her family. She had dreams; she had a life of her own. All was fine, till two months ago when she first began receiving her pictures and other signs the stalker was giving to make her realize that she was being watched. Perhaps he had been watching her since longer. It was a tragedy how this evil shadow of her stalker drowned her once cheerful and promising life in fear and gloom. Days and nights were now equally dark for her. She moved her fingers gently over the picture as a tear drop fell out of her eyes.

Suddenly her phone rang. She walked nervously towards it, anticipating an unpleasant conversation. She knew she could no longer afford missing his call.

But she calmed down when she saw the name of the caller. It was her mom.

"Hello, mom" she said in a nervous tone.

"Hello dear, how are you? It's been a long time since you visited us." Her mom said.

"Ya, actually mom, I am really busy these days. I am sorry I couldn't come."

"You sound nervous, is everything ok?"

"Ya..ya, I am fine mom. I am really fine. How are you? How is Palak? Everything alright over there?"

"We are fine dear. Pankh, is there something you are not telling me? I am your mother you know; I have a feeling that something is bothering you."

"Nothing mom, its just the stress. Working, studying and all that you know."

"I understand dear, you do so much for us. What would we do without you? I am so proud of you my dear."

"I love you mom."

"I love you too. Do come home if you find time."

Pankhudi then hung up. She loved her family a lot. That little conversation with her mom soothed her tortured mind, at least for some time.

She continued to go about her work and college, constantly being under the shadow of fear. She was trying to be strong, well, what choice did she have?

It was one usual day when she returned home after college. It was late in the night. She put her purse on the couch casually and entered to the bedroom to find her clothes in the closet. As soon as she entered the bedroom, she heard the door being close behind her. She turned around and to her horror, there was a man standing right next to the door blocking her exit. His gaze was piercing, yet his body language was so relaxed as he rested his back against the wall. He stood there with folded hands and was lustfully looking at her from head to toe with a confident smile on his lips.

His presence made her quiver. A man of such charming looks was standing before her. He was the same tall fair man she had encountered before. Today for the first time ever she saw his face. He had very attractive sharp features, with a charismatic personality.

"Who are you?" she asked.

"Honestly cupcake, do I need to introduce myself?" he said with a smile. She recognized his voice. Now she knew for sure that it was the man who had been stalking her.

"How did you enter my house?" she said with her voice almost breaking.

He said nothing. He just showed her the key he held in his hand. She recognised the keychain. It was a key which Nisha had when she lived with her. She panicked to see the key in his hand.

"Oh my God! Nisha! What did you do to her?" she shouted at him.

i don't think its belong completely to nisha cause he was in her flat few times before for her nudes or semi nudes pics so i think there is more to it

the psycho is finally showing his face

"She is fine!" he said with a smile, "You worry about yourself now pumpkin."

Pankhudi trembled listening to him.

With his eyes fixed on her, he walked towards her. She shuddered with every step he took. She tried to retreat, but her retreat halted as her back touched the wall. He rested his palm on the wall as he leaned towards her and smiled. He touched her cheek lightly with the back of his other hand. She could see the tattoo of a scorpion on his hand that was stroking her cheek. She suddenly recalled the last incident when she had seen that hand with that tattoo. Pankhudi was frozen with fear. He lowered his gazed and fixed it on her full breasts that were rising and falling as she was breathing heavily.

She pushed his hand away. He only smiled at her rebellion. He brought his hand back to her cheek and began to stroke again. She didn't dare to stop him again. He took another step and came close enough to feel her breath. Pankhudi tried to push him away, but her attempts were feeble and he was too strong.

She started crying.

"What do you want?" she said in a barely audible voice that came out of her throat as she was choking as she cried. Her legs couldn't bear her weight anymore. She slowly fell to her knees.

"Please stop this, please..." she said, kneeling submissively before him. His eyes growled in pleasure to watch her surrender.

"Get up, Pankhudi." He ordered in a cold voice.

She struggled with herself to get back up. She didn't dare to disobey him since she knew that he had absolute power over her. His compelling presence made her all the more submissive.

He pressed his body against hers as soon as she was back on her feet. He held her face between his palms and ran his fingers through her hair. He leaned more over her and whispered in her ear, "Right now, I want you to stand right there, and be quiet"

She stood like a statue now, half frozen with fear, and half trying to obey his command. He grinned to watch her obey him without question.

He began to run his hand over her. He started with her hair, then down to her cheek. He then stroked her lips with his thumb, pressed her lower lip firmly against her canine hard enough to draw out blood. Pankhudi squirmed out of pain. He then moved his hand down brushing across her neck to her breasts. He boldly touched her full breasts feeling them through the fabric, and squeezed them alternately. Pankhudi could do nothing other than letting out faint moans of protest. Tears flowed out of her eyes continuously.

"Please....stop" she begged in a faint voice.

He said nothing. He didn't even look at her; he continued playing with her breasts. She couldn't take this violation anymore. She gathered strength and pushed his hand away.

He looked at her in anger and suddenly slapped her. He then grabbed her hair roughly and said, "Didn't I ask you to shut up and stand straight?"

He then pulled her violently and turned her around and pushed her against the wall. He pressed his body against her while his hand slipped under her top from behind and began to grope her breasts again. Pankhudi was stunned to see this sudden violent change in his behaviour. She didn't try to stop him anymore. She truly surrendered to her fate.

She could now feel his breath on her body. He was standing so close; she could smell his masculine scent.

"Unzip your jeans" he said in a stern voice, "Don't make me say twice."

She did as she was told. Immediately she felt his other hand crawl onto her ass. He began to feel it and then started groping it. She stood like an inanimate object. There was nothing she could do to defend herself. She felt so ashamed. His hands were on her most untouched body parts, and there was nothing she could do to stop him.

She was just hoping for it to get over soon. But it felt like an eternity because his touch made her skin burn in humiliation. She could only weakly struggle against the wall that she was facing. He suddenly withdrew both his hands and turned her. He had a wicked smile on his lips when he saw her tearful face with such a defenseless expression. She was soaked in her own sweat and tears, and her brown panty was showing through her unzipped jeans. It was such a degrading experience for her.

"Such a sad sad face" he said with a chuckle, "I am moved. I've had a change of heart. Maybe I should leave you alone..."

Pankhudi eyes brightened. She felt she was finally going to be free. She looked at him with hopeful eyes.

"...for now." he continued, "But I will be back...and don't try to stop me. I will enter and leave here as and when I feel like, do you understand?"

Her hopes were shattered. She just stood with her head bowed before him and eyes shut tight. He smirked to watch her beginning to submit. And then he was gone....leaving Pankhudi with a maddening anticipation of when he is going to come for her again.

It took her a while to recover from the disgust of being groped by a man intruding in her very own bedroom. She took of all her clothes and walked up to the bathroom and turned on the shower. She rubbed her body frantically trying to wash off his touch. She was weeping all along.

She calmed down after some time. She was worried how he managed to get the set of keys which Nisha had. She called her up.

The phone was ringing for a long time. Nisha wasn't answering. Pankhudi was worried. The thought that the stalker might have harmed Nisha was too disturbing for her. She kept calling over and over again and finally Nisha answered.

"How are you Nisha? Is everything ok?"

"I am fine. Sorry I didn't answer earlier. The phone was on silent so I didn't notice. I was worried about you Pankh. Are you ok? Is he still bothering you?"

"No..I..I am fine. I just called you up to know if you have an extra set of keys to this house. I actually needed them. It seems I have lost mine."

"That's strange, the other day I checked in my purse, it was supposed to be there, but I don't know how it was gone. Maybe I carelessly put it somewhere, I don't remember."

"Oh, is it? Never mind. Maybe even I left it somewhere in the house itself, I just need to look harder. Don't worry, I'll manage. You take care."

"Pankh...is everything ok? Is anything the matter?"

"Everything is fine Nisha. I am ok. I'll call you later alright?"

"Ok, take care."

i feel for her men

Pankhudi disconnected the call. She was relieved to know that Nisha was fine. But she didn't know what her own future had in store for her. Before she went to sleep, every night she began to kneel to pray to God to help her come out of this nightmare.

She was a brave woman. She carried on with her life in spite of all that she was going through. Her stalker had stopped calling her after he last visited her. There had been a disturbing calm in her life that used to keep her anticipating what was keeping him so busy; what other tortures were being scheduled.

She knew it wasn't over. She knew he was going to come back. But it had been more than two weeks he didn't make his presence felt. Pankhudi's anticipation was building so much tension in her mind that she could barely sleep. She would awaken in several nights by terrible nightmares – each and every nightmare was about him tormenting her physically. She had to take anti-anxiety medication to calm her nerves enough to get some sleep.

Then one night her nightmare came true. She was awoken by his touch as he moved his hand gently across her body. Her eyes shot open as she realized he was right there, sitting next to her bed. She sat up instantly in her bed and stared at him in fear.

"Shhh...easy, easy child" he said as he took out a knife. Its blade gleamed in the moonlight that was coming in through her window.

He then got up and rested his knee on her bed and bent down to kiss her forehead with the knife still in his hand, caressing her hair with the other hand.

"You were waiting for me, weren't you?" he said with a devilish smile.

"Please don't hurt me!" Pankhudi begged as she tried to drag herself away from him.

"Relax kitten!" he replied coldly, "I am interested in doing a lot other than just hurting you."

He grabbed her by her shoulders and made her lie down. Then he slowly crawled on top of her. She could feel his weight pin her to the bed; she could barely move. She weakly protested by trying to push him away with her flimsy arms. He moved her arms aside easily and touched the blade of the knife to her cheek. She was sweating and breathing heavily out of fear. He could feel her tremble under him. Her plight was a delight to his eyes.

He grabbed her hair firmly so she couldn't move her head. The he put his lips on her soft lovely lips, and his tongue reached into her mouth trying to meet hers. This was the first this Pankhudi was feeling a man's kiss, but this was so different from how she had imagined her first kiss would be. She had contemplated it to be a sensuous moment where a man who loved her would hold her in his arms lovingly and kiss her gently, and not a cruel psychopathic stalker holding a knife in his hand and forcing himself on her. She continued her weak struggle but overwhelming despair was adding to her weakness. Pankhudi was trapped in a vulnerable situation. The fact the she couldn't even move on her own will was a bold sign of her helplessness. She was beginning to surrender. Now she was losing control even over her body. She could feel her soul drown in lust as she had actually begun to respond to his touches and kiss.

It would have been a wonderful feeling if she was in the right situation. But here she was struggling against herself. Her mind kept telling her she was not supposed to like it. But her body betrayed.

He kissed her lips long enough for her arouse her lust. And when she began to respond, he cruelly withdrew, and she moaned in disappointment. But he didn't leave her alone either. He advanced below her lips and gave her some deep wild kisses on her neck. She arched her neck in response, allowing him even better access. She had no clue why she was enjoying this.

She felt the knife slip in between her skin and her clothes and then sharply cut the fabric. She then felt his hand touch her skin through the torn cloth.

"Don't you wear a bra when you sleep? That's wonderful!" he said as he touched her bare breasts. This was the first time she felt his hand on her bare breast. Last time he groped her, her bra clinging to her skin had prevented skin-to-skin contact. Her virgin nipples were extremely sensitive. She moaned uncontrollably as he gently brushed past them. She was blissfully drenched in her lust. Her eyes were shut tight as she arched her back and neck. Her dishevelled hair spread all over the bed and a trembling sweat covered body that moved sensually in response to his touches looked so beautiful to his eyes. She looked like a long starved maiden melting in bliss.

He took pleasure in watching her responding like that. He knew that she was already broken to a great extent. All he needed to do now is to deliver one final finishing blow. He licked her nipples to arouse her some more. And then suddenly, he bit her left breast hard enough to leave a mark. The sudden sensation of pain amidst her pleasure rudely awoke her from her lustful trance.

"Stop it! Stop it...please!" she shouted coming back to her senses.

"Really?" he said with a grin, "Do you really want me to stop?"

"Yes. Stop it..please and just leave me alone! Please don't rape me!"

He chuckled when he heard that. Then he pushed his hand inside her panties right between her legs and felt her pussy lips with his finger. This sudden move left her shocked. He stroked her pussy lips a few times, and slid his fingers between them. Her clitoris was already engorged and sensitive. She moaned helplessly. He withdrew his hand and showed her how his fingers had a glistening coat of her lust.

"You call this rape?" he said taunting her.

Pankhudi had no answer. She closed her eyes in shame.

He said as he rubbed his wet fingers on her exposed breasts, "Sweet dreams, cupcake."

And then he got off her and left. Pankhudi pulled the sheet to cover herself. She began to cry. She was shattered within to realize that she no longer had any control over her life, her body or even her soul

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well maybe it is not rape in the eye of pankhudi because she was arousal or what.

then again if rappist try this girls natural system will follow so that doesn't mean it is not rape

till now i dont see a BDSM from you and it is there then i totally missed it

the only person satisfied is that man and his some fetish and BDSM desire

aside from this story i am big fan of your writing you have excellent flow in your writing

try hindi section

next

 

[-:Demon King:-]

Ek kaam karo phir yeh story rehne do, it is extreme dark.

Read The Girl next Door, woh thodi kam dark hai

let me read one more chapter and i will decide it

if it is still extreme i will change the story

by the way it is good till two updates 3rd

 

[Indian Princess]

Indian Princess




yeah that's true, it impacts the mind like that you always expect it to happen and then it didn't so your mind will work extra that something else is going on and all

her peaceful life is gone men and in the anticipation of something about to happen she can't even enjoy the break





i don't know what other readers said about it but in my opinion this game is like a slow rape he is raping her but slowly tormenting her life, breaking her mind and all, for me it will never be a seduction it will always like a slow rape a slow poison.




if pankhudi is saying that he didn't harm her yet then i think my opinion is too different from her, he is mind raping her giving her fear of being stalked and exposed and she is thinking that he didn't do any real harm




i am definitely sure that he is psycho man, getting a plesure by tormenting a girl cutting her dress in the middle of nowhere and all



i think his motive is to let him rape her silently

i didn't know i was going to see such a thing in stories then again i read the few parts of that 50 shades and anything is possible men

its dark for me



oh men

what the hell is she mean by i deserve it

is there a plot twist i see



sometimes you have to fight a fear at the risk of your life. i have fear of height till i go to high rises and try to look from gallery or terrace you have to fight your own fear.

i want to know what reason pankhudi is trying to hide



now i hereby declare this man psycho and no matter how much pankhudi accept him letter or he loves her i will not see him as rational or normal

nisha was brave but still everyone has inside fear of their own life so now she can't help

but what i want to know is how did he know that she was going to police

and second thing mumbai has no stranger around i thought that was impossible ahead



oh so finally suspense will be cleared

nisha is a good friend





i dont know this reason is valid to be a victim of this torture

there are lots of way to be out of this situation

if he can take pictures even at that time and he too left that woman to die then i think he is not good man psycho man

she can ask nisha for help with the money as nisha is a good friend and with strong financial background (why not ask her )

i dont think he is going to kill pankhudi she has more use for her alive then dead





pushing away your only few friends is not good in my book but thinking about their safety is good

well lets see what happens next



i don't think its belong completely to nisha cause he was in her flat few times before for her nudes or semi nudes pics so i think there is more to it

the psycho is finally showing his face



i feel for her men


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well maybe it is not rape in the eye of pankhudi because she was arousal or what.

then again if rappist try this girls natural system will follow so that doesn't mean it is not rape

till now i dont see a BDSM from you and it is there then i totally missed it

the only person satisfied is that man and his some fetish and BDSM desire

aside from this story i am big fan of your writing you have excellent flow in your writing

try hindi section

next

He is tormenting her into submission

It is slow rape as you rightly said.

BDSM is consensual and this story is more of the nonconsent/horror genre.

Although it is a delight for people who prefer nonconsent genre like me, we are twisted people and we have our reasons to like such things.

Other readers would find this story extremely disturbing.

The plot of this story is quite weak compared to my latest 2 stories that I because I wrote this story 6 years ago and I didnt know much about the world that time.

 

[-:Demon King:-]

He is tormenting her into submission

It is slow rape as you rightly said.

BDSM is consensual and this story is more of the nonconsent/horror genre.

Although it is a delight for people who prefer nonconsent genre like me, we are twisted people and we have our reasons to like such things.

Other readers would find this story extremely disturbing.

The plot of this story is quite weak compared to my latest 2 stories that I because I wrote this story 6 years ago and I didnt know much about the world that time.

i know he is tormenting her into submission but what if it is not her desire to be submitted

yeah that's why i said i like BDSM but not non-consensual

yeah everyone has their own way of getting satisfactions and if you remember i told you that you will come any time and take us forcefully and i am right you like non consensual ( I am really of you P

yeah for me it is very disturbing cause i am not a fan of dark stories or dark theory i read it cause i promised you

as a reader i never even went to BDSM cause some writer will think that non consensual and BDSM both are same

no for the first time writing you have great skills men may be there is not a plot or a too good plot for the story but you have written very well dark seduction

(it is that i just don't like forcing someone to do something they don't want to as i dont want to be forced but i like BDSM ever since i watched few clips from 50 shades )