Thriller Dastan-ae-aladdin=》X~FORUM no.1 Thriller story

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Daastan-ae-aladdin

Episode ~ 1​

Location: Mumbai Central Jail

Jailor- Sabhi kaideyo ko pahadi ki taraf bhejo aaj khudae ka kaam vaha karna hai

Constable- Ji sahaib abhi bhej te hai

Y kah kr Constable jailor k cabin se bahar nikale kr kaidiyo k cells ki taraf chal diya aur vaha ja kr bola

Constable- Ari tum sabhi meri baate dhyaan se suno.....aaj tum logo ko pahadi ki taraf jana hai.....aaj khudae vaho hoge.....ab jalde jalde chalo varna jailor sahaib bhout ghusa honge

Y sune kr sabhi kaide auzar lekr pahadi ki taraf chl diye aur phire pathar thodnai lage

Unhai uhi kaam karti huvi lag bhag 3-4 ghante ho chuke the......es garmi mai itna kaam kr sabhi thak gae the par vo khuch kah nahi sakte the kyuki vo yaha kaide the aur apne kiye ki saza kate rahi thi.....pr en kideyo pr us upar waali ko thodi daya aa gae aur usnai lunch break kr diya.....lunch break hote hi sabhi kaide ek ek kr lunch karne ki leyi jane lage pr ek ladka bina ruke lagatar pathar thodta raha jesi dekh kr constable ko thoda ajeb laga to usnai kaha

Constable- Ari o ladke lunch ho gaya ha thujhe ghante sunae nahi de kya

Par us ladke nai koe jawab nahi diya

Constable- oh hero mai thuje se baat kr raha hu...sunae nahi deta hai kya

Par vo ladka khamos raha aur bs pathar thodnai mai laga raha

Es bar constable ko ghusa aa gaya aur vo us ladke k pass ja kr jor se bola

Constable- Thujhe sunae nahi deta ....mai kb se thujhe awaaz laga raha hu.....bahra hai kya

Es baar vo ladka bola

Ladka- Nahi ....na to mai bahra hu aur na bhuka

Constable- Dekh y haikde apne pass rakh.....lunch ho gaya hai....ja kr khana kha le....varna saam tk es dhup mai bhuke pet teri haikde bhi en pathro ke tarah tute jae ge

Constable ki es bate ko ansuna kr te huvi vo ladka pathar thodta raha...jesi dekh kr us constable ko ghusa aa gaya aur vo bola

Constable- Ja mar mujhe kya

y kah kr vo constable vaha se chala gaya

aur vo ladka lagatar pathar thodta gaya...... phire dhire dhire saari kaide wapas kaam pr lag gae.....din dhal gaya aur raat ho gae
phire sabhi kaideyo k sath vo ladka wapas apne cells mai chla gaya....tabhi un mai se ek kaide us ladke k pass aakr bola

Kaide- Bhai aap ka koe warte hai

Ladka- Nahi....kyu

Kaide- To aapne subh khana kyu nahi khaya

Ladka- Kyuki mujhe bhuk nahi hai

Kaide- Bhuk to sb ko lagte hai chahi vo ensan ho ya janwar khana to sb khate hai

Ladka- Nahi sab nahi

Kaide- Mtlb?

Ladka- Murda log kabhi khana nahi khate

Kaide- pr aap to zinda ho....dekho saas bhi le rahi ho

Ladka(hse kr)- ha bs saas he le rahai hi

Y bate sune kr vo kaide us ladke ki aakho mai dekh nai laga

y dekh kr us ladke ko hirane hoe aur vo bola

Ladka- Kya dekh raha hai

Kaide- dard....jo aapke dil me hai

es bate pr vo ladka khamos raha tabhi vo kaide bola

Kaide- Bhai....mai nahi janta aap ko y dard kise mila....aur apne esi apne dil mai kyu daba kr rakha hai.....pr meri maa kahte
hai....ki dard batnai se kam hota hai....to aap mujhe bataeyi ki aakhir kya huva jes ki karn aap ki y halate ho gae

Ladka(angaro bhari aakho se)- Janta hu pr....mai nahi chahta ki y dard kam ho

Use ladke ki aakho ki angare dekh kr vo kaide dar jata hi aur kahata hai

Kaide- tke hai bhai...agar aap nahi chahte to mate bataeyi.....pr aap kam se kam khana to kha legeyi....mujhe apna doste samje legeyi

Y bate sune kr us ladke ki aakho mai dard utar aaya aur vo bola

Ladka- mai koe rishta nahi banana chahta kyuki ek baar pahle bhi mai sb khuch kho chuka hu.....ab dobara kise ko nahi khona
chahta hu

Us ladke ki aakho ke dard ko us kaide tk pahochani mai der nahi lagi....aur vo kaide bol pada

Kaide- Tke hai bhai agr aap koe naya rishta nahi banana chate to na banae kam se kam khana to kha legeyi......plzz es bar na mte kahana

Ladka- Tke hai...vesi tumhara kya naam hai

Kaide- Kabir singh.....pr es nachiz koghar wali pyaar se kabir kah kr bulate hai...bake meri doste to mujhe pyaar se kuta kamina
chutiya khuch bhi kah kr bula lete hai....vesi aapka kya naam hai

Ladka- Ali - Naam mai kya rakha hai

Y kah kr dono canteen mai chlai gae
Canteen mai pahoch kr kabir nai do thaliyo mai khana liya aur Ali ke pass aa gaya aur khana khanai laga usnai khana khate hue ali se bate karne ki kosis ke pr ali khamos raha ...jesai dekh kr kabir bhi chup chaap apna khana khanai laga

en dono k khuch na bolnai se jaha y dono bethai the vaha to sanata tha pr enk pass mai bethae 2 kaide bate kr rahai the

Kaide 1- Lukha bhai lagta hai aapko jail ka khana bhoute pasande aa gaya

Lukha(hs kr)- Nahi Aslam bhai ase to koe bate nahi hai

Aslam(mazak mai)- ase hi bate hai lukha bhai....tabhi to aap ander- bahar kar rahi ho....har 2-3 hafto se jail mai aa jate ho phire 2-3 bade jamanate kara kr bahar chlae jate ho

Lukha(gahre saas lete huvi)- Kya kare jab bahar hote hai to andar ke yaade aate hai......aur jab andar hote hai to bahar ke

Aslam- Vesi es bar aapnai kya kiya

Lukha(nirash hote huvi)- Kiya to khuch nahi....yahi to rona hai

Aslam- Mtlb? mai khuch samjha nahi

Lukha- Ari karnai hi wala tha ki tabhi mamla begade gaya

Aslam(aashchray se)- Mtlb?

Lukha- Mtlb tumhai vo news batae ge....udar dekh tv mai..(constable se)- abe oh constable awwaj tez kr

Constable(dar se)- karta hu sahaib

Y kah kr constable nai tv ki awaaz tez kar de jesh pr ek news reporter news de raha tha ki

News repoter- Aaj Lukha ko dobara saza ho gae hai jes k karn use mumbai central jail bheja gaya....y pichlai do mahino mai chothi bar
hai jab use jail bheja gaya hai....pr har baar vo sabuto ke aabhav mai bail pr bahar aa jata hai.....lekine es baar vo bahar nahi aa pae ga kyuki es baar usnai jo kiya hai uske liye kannon use nahi bakshega .......kyuki es bar usnai y sabite kr diya k vo ek darinda hai.....usnai es bar ek manshik roop se ashaksham ladki k sath jabardasti karnai ki kosis ke.....pr uski y kosis kamyab nahi ho pae...kyuki us ladki k apahij chacha nai use bacha liya ....pr es darmiya us ki moute ho gae...pr vo ladki abhi shurakshite hai....sutro k hisab se pata chla hai ki us ladki ka naam sana hai v uski chacha ka naam Sikander tha

Y sb sune jaha ek taraf aslam aur lukha apne bato mai magan the vahi dusri aur koe esa tha jeski aakho mai khune utarna suru hogaya tha tabhi tv par use ek awwaj sunae de jesi sune kr uska y khune aaso mai badal gaya

News reporter- Hmari swadata nai es ladki se bate karnai ki kosis ki par y ladki keval ek baate dohra rahi hai ki aap khude hi dekh y es video cilp mai

Reporter- To bataeyi kya huva aapki sath....kya karne ki kosis ke lukha nai

Sana- Mera bhai aae ga aur mujhe tum sabe se dur le jae ga....aae ga mera bhai....mera Alaadin bhai mujhe yaha se bhoute dur le jae
ga....bhoute dur

Reporter- Bataeyi

Sana- bhoute dur le jae ga mera bhai tum sb se samjhai

News reporter- Hmari swadata nai es ladki k bhai k bari mai aas pass sabhi se phucha to unhoni bataya ki eska bhai jail mai hai kyuki usnai apnai puri parivaar ko mar dala tha ....sune kr yakine nahi hota ki ase log bhi hmari samaj ka hisa hai...ek ladka apne hi parivar walo ko mar kar jail mai betha hai

Y awwaz sune kr koe tha jo apne aashu rok nahi pa rha tha aur y aur koe nahi balki ali tha

Ali(mann mai )- Meri pari zinda hai.....use khuch nahi huva.....vo zinda hai..usai use raate khuch nahi huva tha...pr uske kya halate ho gae hai........aaj meri bhen meri pari dar dar ki thokari kha rahi hai....aur kevale use yasmin k karn ....pr ab aur nahi....mai aa raha hu pari tumhari pass....aur ek wada karta hai tumhai dhukh daine wali ko tumhara bhai zinda nahi chodega ...mai aa raha hu un sabhi se intekam leni.....yasmine ko uski dhoke ka dard dine...usnai mujhe se mera sb khuch chin liya ...mera naam.... mera parivar....mera doste....sb khuch...jo merai liye maine rakhta tha....aur ab mai use sai uska sbe khuch chienae lunga....zindagi ka zahreela khel usnai shuru kiya tha aur ab esi khatam mai karuga....pr uske liye mujhe yaha se nikalna hoga....aur meri pari k pass jana hoga...pr kaise...soch ali........soch liya

Y soch kr ali apne jagah se uthe gaya aur bahar jane laga jesi dekh kr kabir bola

Kabir- Kaha ja rahi ho bhai

Ali- apne sahi jagah

Y kah kr ali vaha se chla gaya y bate kabir ko ajeb lagi aur vo bhi ali k piche chle diya aur vaha ja kr usnai dekha ali ek pathar ko dusri pathar pr ghesh raha tha .....y usai ajeb laga es liye usnai ali se pucha

Kabir- Kya kr rahi ho bhai....aur y pathar pr pathar kyu ghesh rahi ho

Ali- taki eski dhar tej ho jae

Kabir- aur uska tum kya karoge

Ali-dhar tej r ki mai do murder karuga

Y sune kr kabir chock gaya aur bola

Kabir-k...kya ...kaha....murder

Ali- ha

Kabir- kyu aur kiska

Ali-tumhare kyu ka jawab mai tumhai bate mai bataoga lekine tumhare kiska ka jawab hai lukha
aur aslam

y sune kr kabir aur chock gaya aur bola

Kabir- kya .....vo dono ....tum jante ho unki pahoch kaha tke hai

Ali- mai y to nahi janta ki unki pahoch kaha tk hai.....pr mai y jarur janta hu ki jalde hi unki pahoch
upar waali tke ho jae ge

Kabir-dekho pagal mte bano....agar tumnai unhe mara tu unki aadmi hmai ese jail mai zinda gade
degay

Ali- vo esa tb karege na jab vo maregay .....agar vo mari hi na to

Kabir-abhi tum hi to kah rahi the ki tum unhai mar donge aur abhi tum kah rahi ho vo maregay
nahi...aakhir tum karna kya chahte ho

Ali- vo dono kutee ki moute maregay par zinda rahi gay

Kabir- mai tumhara mtlb nahi samjha

Ali- Samjhe jao gay....vo bhi bhoute jalde

Kabir- aakhire tumhare dimage mai kya chle raha hai

Ali- mai tumhai nahi batao ga kyuki jo chiz mai tumhai kr kai dikha sakta hu....vo batani ki kya
jarurate hai

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THANKS FOR READING

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SURYAA

 

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wonderfull update dekhte hain Ali kaise bahar nikalta hai jail se aur apna badla kaise leta hai sabse aur han purani baten jo hui story me unko baad me dikhana jab badla complete hone wala ho

 

[Suryaa]

wonderfull update dekhte hain Ali kaise bahar nikalta hai jail se aur apna badla kaise leta hai sabse aur han purani baten jo hui story me unko baad me dikhana jab badla complete hone wala ho

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