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Thriller Dead Never Lie ~ A Love Story

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Thakur

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:thanks: for this story bhai :love:
Ye story xb par padhni reh gayi thi, aur baad me jab padhne gaya tab delete ho gayi thi, do post Complete story here
 

Abhi

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Hey guys ye story maine nahi likhi hai aur na hi mujhe writer ka naam pata hai Edit - Writer name Deepak (shakespeare001), ye story xossip me puri complete post hui thi but bad me sare update remove ho gaye pata nahi kyu, har koi waha comment kre ki ye story chahiye , padhni hai but nhi mili , lekin kuch din phle ye story mujhe mili. Mai chahta to ye story ka link de skta tha ya puri post kr skta tha ek bar me, but phr log ek bar me padhenge phr ho gya, mai chahta hu ye parts me post ho taki logo ka intrest bane aur aur log bhi is site ko regular visit kare. Is story me mera 0% credit hai mai bas copy paste kar raha
MAi xossip par pichle 2 salo se juda hua tha.
Lakin mere waqt bhi ye story delete kar diya gaya tha.
Phir maine ise kissi dusre forum par padha .
Apne start karke accha kiya.
Ye story logo ko phir se padne ko millegi
 

Ashux3

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Update - 2

rohan ne kahaanee sunanee shuroo kar dee.....

"aabe, ye kya tha?" rohan achaanak hee aasapaas kee ghanee jhaadiyon se apanee aur uchchhal kar aae gilaharee numa jaanavar ko dekhakar uchchhal kar teevrata se ek aur hat gaya.. jaanavar kee uchhaal mein jis prakaar kee teevrata thee, usse yahee prateet hua kee usane unn par hamala karane ka prayaas kiya tha...," toone isake daant dekhe?"

kareeb 10 - 10 pheet kee lambee chhalaang lagaata hua vo us ubad khaabad raaste ke doosaree taraph kee jhaadiyon mein kho gaya..

dono 2 pal vaheen khade hokar us ajeebogareeb gilaharee ko aankhon se aujhal hote dekhate rahe.. aur phir se apanee anjaan manzil kee aur badh chale..

"aph.. kahaan le aaya yaar...? kitana sannaata hai yahaan? yahaan par to aadamee kee jaat bhee nazar nahee aatee... kitana ajeeb sa lag raha hai yahaan sab kuchchh... tujhe lagata hai yahaan tujhe teree neeroo mil jaegee..? ... dekh mujhe to lagata hai kisee ne tera ulloo banaaya hai.. kyoon bevajah apanee raat barbaad kar raha hai... aur meree bhee.. chal vaapas chal!" nitin ne bolate hue saavadhaanee baratne ke iraade se rivolver nikaal kar apane haath mein le lee..

"aisee baat nahee hai yaar.. vo yaheen rahatee hai.. aasapaas, dekhana! koshish karenge to vo hamen zaroor milegee.. vo agar nahee milee to main paagal ho jaunga yaar!" rohan ne aage chalate chalate hee baat kahee...

nitin aage aage bahut chaukanna hokar chal raha tha.. chaukanna hona laajimee bhee tha.. jahaan is samay vo the, us jagah ke aasapaas koee shahar ya gaanv nahee tha.. har taraph sannaate kee bhayaavah see chaadar pasaree huee thee... aavaazen agar aa rahee thee to maindhako ke tarrane kee, aur rah rah kar jhaadiyon ke jhuraput mein kuchchh rengate hone kee...door door tak krtrim roshanee ka naamonishaan tak nahee tha.. bas aadhe chaand aur timatimaate hue taaron kee hulkee phulkee roshanee hee thee jo unako raasta dikha rahee thee.. raasta bhee aisa jo na hone ke hee baraabar tha.. kaheen uncha, kaheen neecha.. beech beech mein gahare gahare gaddhe.. itane gahare kee dhyaan se na chala jae to achaanak poora aadamee hee unamen gaayab ho jae.. dono aur kareeb 4 - 4 pheet oonchee jhaadiyaan thee...

"ab raasta soph hota to gaadee hee le aate.. tujhe kya lagata hai..? yahaan par koee insaan rahata hoga.. aur vo bhee ladakee.. sach bataana, khud tujhe dar nahee lag raha, yahaan ka maahaul dekh kar..." nitin ne chalate chalate rohan se savaal kiya...

"dar lag raha hai tabhee to tumhe lekar aaya hoon bhaee.. nahee to main akele hee na chala aata.." rohan ne javaab diya..aur achaanak hee uchchhal pada," nitin dekh.. aage pakkee sadak dikhaee de rahee hai.. main na kahata tha.. ham zaroor kaamayaab honge... aage zaroor koee bastee milegee... dekh lena!"

"aabe bastee ke bachche.. usse koee dhang ka raasta bhee to poochchh sakata tha too.. aakhir vo log bhee to shahar jaate honge..?" nitin ko bhee aage ka raasta pichchhale raaste ke muqaabale behatar dekh kar kuchchh ummeed bandhee....

"yaar, kya karoon, jab yahee ek raasta bataaya usane...!" rohan ne tezee se chalana shuroo kar chuke nitin ke kadamon se kadam milaate hue kaha....

"ajeeb premika hai teree.. ek to raat mein milane kee zid karee aur upar se raasta aisa bataaya.. chal dekh.. lagata hai ham pahunchane hee vaale hain.. udhar lait dikhaee de rahee hai.." nitin ne apanee baee taraph haath utha kar ishaara karate hue kaha...

dono baee taraph mude hee the kee achaanak thithak gaye..," yahaan to paanee hai..yaar!" rohan ne apane kadam vaapas kheenchate hue kaha..

"humm.. koee taalaab lagata hai..chal.. aage se raasta hoga... !" nitin ne rohan se kaha aur dono phir se seedhe raaste par chal pade..
 

Ashux3

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MAi xossip par pichle 2 salo se juda hua tha.
Lakin mere waqt bhi ye story delete kar diya gaya tha.
Phir maine ise kissi dusre forum par padha .
Apne start karke accha kiya.
Ye story logo ko phir se padne ko millegi
Thankyou sir
 

Ashux3

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Update - 3

kuchchh aage jaakar unako ek pagadandee see baee aur jaatee dikhaee dee.. dono ne aankhon hee aankhon mein us raaste par sahamati jataee aur us aur badh chale...

"oh teree ma kee aankh.. yahaan to keechad hai..! chal vaapas chal.. ye raasta nahee hai.." man hee man nitin us ladakee ko kos raha tha jisake pyaar mein paagal rohan apane saath saath usakee bhee durgati kar raha tha...

"yaar, aadhe raaste to aa hee chuke hain... aage chalakar talab mein dho lenge pair.. ab vo lait bhee nazadeek hee dikhaee de rahee hai..." rohan ne maayoosee se nitin ko dekhate hue kaha..

"chal saale.. agar phir bhee ladakee nahee milee to dekh lena... aisee bakavaas jagah maine aaj tak nahee dekhee" badabadaata hua nitin phir se rohan ke aage aage chalane laga...

"dekhee kyoon nahee hai? too to maastar hai aise thikaano ka... aadhee jindagee to toone jangalon mein guzaar dee.. mujh par ahasaan karane ke lie bol raha hai kya?" rohan ne us par majaakiya vyangy kiya...

"haan.. guzaaree hai.. magar aise thode hee.. poore bandobast ke saath chalana padata hai.. too to mujhe aise le aaya jaise ham unake janvai hain aur hamaare intazaar mein vo kisee eraport par palaken bichchhae baithe honge.. raam jaane kis ghadee kaun jaanavar baahar nikal aae? vo to achchchha hua mein kam se kam apanee rivolver saath rakhata hoon.. koee bharosa hai aisee beehad sunasaan jagah ka.." nitin ne sambhaal sambhaal kar pair rakhate hue bola... dono kee pent keechad ke chhcheenton se ghutano tak san gayee thee..

usake baad zyaada der unako chalana nahee pada.. kuchchh door aur chalane par vo ek soph suthare raaste par pahunch gaye.. raasta puraane jamaane kee chhhotee chhhotee eenton se bana hua tha.. vo jagah koee chauraaha lag rahee thee.... paanee ka vo taalaab yahaan tak bhee phaila hua tha.. " chal, apane pair soph karake aage chalate hain.. ab vo ghar bhee zyaada door nahee lagata..." rohan ne gaharee saans lete hue kaha..

dono ne vahaan paanee mein apane pair dhoe aur phir se aage badh gaye...

"yaar, yahaan galiyaan aur deevaaren to itanee dikhaee de rahee hain.. par ghar kahaan hain.. ? kya is gaanv mein vo ek hee ghar hai jahaan lait jal rahee hai...?" nitin ne hairaanee se rohan kee aur dekha...

"maine poochachha nahee yaar.. kya pata ek hee ho.. chal.. too chalata rah!" rohan ne khisiyaee huee billee kee tarah se betuka sa tark diya aur apane pyaar ko paane kee ummeed mein aage badhata raha.. nitin ke saath saath..

bade hee vismayakaaree anubhav ka saamana dono ko karana pad raha tha.. kaafee der tak chalane ke baad bhee vo roshanee unase abhee bhee utana hee door lag rahee thee.. unhone galiyaan bhee badalee, par har baar kuchchh door chalate hee phir se vo roshanee theek unake saamane aa jaatee.. aur phir se unako usee raaste par chalate rahane ka ahasaas hota...
 

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Ashux3

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Ye kahani 2010 mein Deepak bhai ka likha hua hai xossip par Deepak bhai ka xossip ka naam shakespeare001 tha issi id se iss kahani ko likha tha

Hello sir aapse ek request h bhut log is story ki link mng rhe but maine to apna movite nta diya ki story update se post krunga to kya aap please is thread me jitne bhi link wle cmnt h unhe delete kr denge aur waise bhi dusre site k link share krna rules k oppose hai , maine report kr di h
 
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Hello sir aapse ek request h bhut log is story ki link mng rhe but maine to apna movite nta diya ki story update se post krunga to kya aap please is thread me jitne bhi link wle cmnt h unhe delete kr denge aur waise bhi dusre site k link share krna rules k oppose hai , maine report kr di h

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