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Thriller Dead Never Lie ~ A Love Story
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ladake ne ungalee utha kar roshanee kee aur ishaara kar diya..," vahaan! ham sab vaheen rahate hain.. us havelee mein!"
"matalab... matalab tum.. tumhaaree kuchchh lagatee hai kya vo?" rohan ko rah rah kar jhatake se lag rahe the....
"par us havelee ka raasta kidhar se hai.. ham to dhoondhate dhoondhate thak gaye.. aur tum ghar kyoon nahee gaye abhee tak.. yahaan kya kar rahe ho..?" nitin ne bachche se savaal kiya..
"main kho gaya hoon ankal.. mujhe bhee raasta nahee mil raha.. itane deeno se dhoondh raha hoon.." ladake ne utanee hee maasoomiyat se javaab diya..
"kkkitane deeno se..?" ladake ke har javaab ke saath dono ke dil kee gati badhatee ja rahee thee..
" 74 saal se....?"
"bhaag nitin.. bhaag.. ham phans gaye nahee to.. samajh le maare gaye.." rohan ne nitin ka haath pakad kar apanee aur kheencha.. bhaagane ke lie.. par jaane kyoon nitin vahaan se hil nahee paaya...shaayad utsukataavash," kyoon mazaak kar rahe ho yaar? kyoon jhooth bol rahe ho..?"
is baar ladake ke chehare par shikan aur shadiyo puraanee tadap ubhar aaee," main mazaak kyoon karoonga ankal? mare hue log jhooth nahee bolate!"
rohan kee vaheen khade khade ghighee baandh gayee.. jis tarah kee ajeebogareeb paristhitiyaan vahaan utpann ho rahee thee, jis tarah se vo bachcha unhe mila aur jo kuchchh usane bola.. dono ke kaleje baahar nikal aane par utaaroo ho gaye.. rohan ko ahasaas ho raha tha kee usane yoon paagalapan mein yahaan aakar kitanee badee bhool kee hai.. vo khade pair vahaan se bhaagana chaahata tha, par nitin ko vahaan chhchodakar kaise bhaage.. vo bas nitin ke ishaara karane ka intazaar kar raha tha, jisane ghabaraahat mein apanee rivolver us bachche par taan dee," get aaut phrom hiyar?"
"kya ankal?" nanhe se bachche ke chehare se naadaanee aur maasoomiyat chhoo chhoo kar tapak rahee thee..
"dafa ho jao yahaan se! bhaag jao..."
" par mujhe ek baar ghar chhchod aao na.. mujhe ghar nahee mil raha hai..!" bachche ne vinamrata se praarthana kee...
sirf us ladake kee vo pyaaree see aavaaz hee thee jo ab tak unhe pairon par khade rahane laayak saahas de rahee thee.. par aage badhane kee to baat sochana bhee ab dushvaar tha.. nitin ne rohan kee aankhon mein dekha aur vo ulte paanv ho lie.. kuchchh door tak yoonhee saavadhaanee poorvak pichhe dekhate dekhate jab vo us bachche kee aankhon se aujhal ho gaye tab jaakar rohan kee aavaaz nikalee," raasta yaad hai na bhaee...?"
"seedha chalata rah.. ab apanee bakabak band rakh thodee der" nitin ne gusse se usako jhidak diya..
usake baad to unhone keechad vaale raaste se hote hue sadak par jaakar hee dam liya.. tab tak to shaayad saans bhee gin gin kar le rahe the... dono tezee se ek doosare ka haath pakade hue aage badhane lage.. ab mendhakon ka tarraana unako kisee bhoot nagaree mein chal rahe rahasyamayee sangeet se kam nahee lag raha tha.. jhaadiyon mein zara see bhee sarasaraahat hote hee dono kee saanse jam jaatee thee.. raam ka naam japte japte aakhirakaar vo apanee gaadee tak pahunch hee gaye... par jahaan paidal jaane mein unako ek ghante se bhee zyaada ka samay laga tha.. vaapas aane mein aadha ghanta bhee nahee laga...
"saale, kahaan maut ke munh mein le gaya tha too mujhe..?" nitin ne gaadee staart karake be-intaha paseene se sana apana chehara pauchchha..
"soree bhaee.. mujhe nahee pata tha ki...." rohan bhee ab dhang se saanse le pa raha tha..
"aabe soree ke bachche.. ye bata aakhir neeroo hai kaun? kya laiphaada hai tera usse.. aur usane tujhe yahaan kyoon bulaaya tha..." nitin ne banaavatee gusse se kaha.. usako is baat ka sukhad ahasaas tha ki vo sakushal vaapas laut aae.. vahaan se
gaadee ne jaise hee raftaar pakadee.. usako ahasaas ho gaya kee kuchchh na kuchchh gadabad zaroor hai," gaadee pankchar ho gayee hai.. shaayad.. ab kya karen?" kahakar nitin ne gaadee kee raftaar dheemee karate hue usako said mein rok diya...
ladake ne ungalee utha kar roshanee kee aur ishaara kar diya..," vahaan! ham sab vaheen rahate hain.. us havelee mein!"
"matalab... matalab tum.. tumhaaree kuchchh lagatee hai kya vo?" rohan ko rah rah kar jhatake se lag rahe the....
"par us havelee ka raasta kidhar se hai.. ham to dhoondhate dhoondhate thak gaye.. aur tum ghar kyoon nahee gaye abhee tak.. yahaan kya kar rahe ho..?" nitin ne bachche se savaal kiya..
"main kho gaya hoon ankal.. mujhe bhee raasta nahee mil raha.. itane deeno se dhoondh raha hoon.." ladake ne utanee hee maasoomiyat se javaab diya..
"kkkitane deeno se..?" ladake ke har javaab ke saath dono ke dil kee gati badhatee ja rahee thee..
" 74 saal se....?"
"bhaag nitin.. bhaag.. ham phans gaye nahee to.. samajh le maare gaye.." rohan ne nitin ka haath pakad kar apanee aur kheencha.. bhaagane ke lie.. par jaane kyoon nitin vahaan se hil nahee paaya...shaayad utsukataavash," kyoon mazaak kar rahe ho yaar? kyoon jhooth bol rahe ho..?"
is baar ladake ke chehare par shikan aur shadiyo puraanee tadap ubhar aaee," main mazaak kyoon karoonga ankal? mare hue log jhooth nahee bolate!"
rohan kee vaheen khade khade ghighee baandh gayee.. jis tarah kee ajeebogareeb paristhitiyaan vahaan utpann ho rahee thee, jis tarah se vo bachcha unhe mila aur jo kuchchh usane bola.. dono ke kaleje baahar nikal aane par utaaroo ho gaye.. rohan ko ahasaas ho raha tha kee usane yoon paagalapan mein yahaan aakar kitanee badee bhool kee hai.. vo khade pair vahaan se bhaagana chaahata tha, par nitin ko vahaan chhchodakar kaise bhaage.. vo bas nitin ke ishaara karane ka intazaar kar raha tha, jisane ghabaraahat mein apanee rivolver us bachche par taan dee," get aaut phrom hiyar?"
"kya ankal?" nanhe se bachche ke chehare se naadaanee aur maasoomiyat chhoo chhoo kar tapak rahee thee..
"dafa ho jao yahaan se! bhaag jao..."
" par mujhe ek baar ghar chhchod aao na.. mujhe ghar nahee mil raha hai..!" bachche ne vinamrata se praarthana kee...
sirf us ladake kee vo pyaaree see aavaaz hee thee jo ab tak unhe pairon par khade rahane laayak saahas de rahee thee.. par aage badhane kee to baat sochana bhee ab dushvaar tha.. nitin ne rohan kee aankhon mein dekha aur vo ulte paanv ho lie.. kuchchh door tak yoonhee saavadhaanee poorvak pichhe dekhate dekhate jab vo us bachche kee aankhon se aujhal ho gaye tab jaakar rohan kee aavaaz nikalee," raasta yaad hai na bhaee...?"
"seedha chalata rah.. ab apanee bakabak band rakh thodee der" nitin ne gusse se usako jhidak diya..
usake baad to unhone keechad vaale raaste se hote hue sadak par jaakar hee dam liya.. tab tak to shaayad saans bhee gin gin kar le rahe the... dono tezee se ek doosare ka haath pakade hue aage badhane lage.. ab mendhakon ka tarraana unako kisee bhoot nagaree mein chal rahe rahasyamayee sangeet se kam nahee lag raha tha.. jhaadiyon mein zara see bhee sarasaraahat hote hee dono kee saanse jam jaatee thee.. raam ka naam japte japte aakhirakaar vo apanee gaadee tak pahunch hee gaye... par jahaan paidal jaane mein unako ek ghante se bhee zyaada ka samay laga tha.. vaapas aane mein aadha ghanta bhee nahee laga...
"saale, kahaan maut ke munh mein le gaya tha too mujhe..?" nitin ne gaadee staart karake be-intaha paseene se sana apana chehara pauchchha..
"soree bhaee.. mujhe nahee pata tha ki...." rohan bhee ab dhang se saanse le pa raha tha..
"aabe soree ke bachche.. ye bata aakhir neeroo hai kaun? kya laiphaada hai tera usse.. aur usane tujhe yahaan kyoon bulaaya tha..." nitin ne banaavatee gusse se kaha.. usako is baat ka sukhad ahasaas tha ki vo sakushal vaapas laut aae.. vahaan se
gaadee ne jaise hee raftaar pakadee.. usako ahasaas ho gaya kee kuchchh na kuchchh gadabad zaroor hai," gaadee pankchar ho gayee hai.. shaayad.. ab kya karen?" kahakar nitin ne gaadee kee raftaar dheemee karate hue usako said mein rok diya...
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gaadee ne jaise hee raftaar pakadee.. usako ahasaas ho gaya kee kuchchh na kuchchh gadabad zaroor hai," gaadee pankchar ho gayee hai.. shaayad.. ab kya karen?" kahakar nitin ne gaadee kee raftaar dheemee karate hue usako said mein rok diya...
rohan sahamee huee nazaron se nitin ko dekhane laga," soree yaar.. meree vajah se..."
nitin usakee baat par dhyaan die bina gaadee se utara aur taiyar chek kie.. chaaron taiyar zameen mein dhaanse hue se the.. sabakee hava gaayab thee.. nitin vaapas gaadee mein aaya aur apana sir pakad kar baith gaya...," ab kya karen.. ek mein pankchar hota to.."
"agala gaanv kitanee door hai bhaee.." rohan khud kee naasamajhee se nitin ko bhee pareshaanee mein daal dene ke kaaran sharminda tha..
"hoga koee 5-7 kailaameetar aur.. kyoon?" nitin ab saamaany ho chuka tha.. jo hona tha vah to ho hee chuka tha.. ganeemat thee jo ho sakata tha, vah nahee hua..
"vahaan tak le chalo kisee tarah.. shaayad vahaan koee pankchar lagaane vaala mil jae.."
aur koee chaara bhee nahee tha.. nitin ne gaadee dheere dheere ludhakaanee shuroo kee...
gaanv aate hee unhone pahale hee ghar ke saamane gaadee rok dee.. ye ghar gaanv se baahar tha.. kuchchh alag hatakar," yahaan poochhte hain.. gaanv mein koee pankchar lagaane vaala ho to..."
dono gaadee se utare aur daravaaje ke saamane jaakar us par thapakee lagaee..
"kaun?" ghar ke andar se aaee nihaayat hee meethee aavaaz ne unake kaano mein misharee see ghol dee... aavaaz kisee navayauvana kee lagatee thee..
"jee.. ham baahar se aae hain.. thodee madad chaahie..!" nitin ne rohan ke bolane se pahale hee javaab de diya...
"baapoo! vo aa gaye.." andar se ladakee kee vahee sureelee aavaaz baahar tak aa rahee thee..
yahaan to rah rah kar jhatake lag rahe the.. nitin ne rohan kee aur dekha aur dheere se bola," ye to is tarah se kah rahee hai jaise ye hamaara intajaar hee kar rahe the.." kahakar dono saavadhaan ho gaye....
chharrrrrrrrrrarar.. daravaaja puraana tha.. isee aavaaz ke saath khula.. ek baar ko to is aavaaz ne bhee unako dara diya tha.. kahate hain na doodh ka jala chhaachh ko bhee phoonk phoonk kar peeta hai...
kareeb 60 saal ke adhed aadamee ne daravaaja khola.. usakee aavaaz mein bhee utanee hee madhurata thee.. upar se neeche tak dono ko dekha aur bola," puraane teele se aae ho na...?"
"jjee.. kya matalab? puraana teela? ham kuchchh samajhe nahee..." dono kee haalat dekhane laayak thee.. rohan man hee man soch raha tha.. ye raat kisee tarah se gujar jae..
"tumhaare pairon mein ye chipachipa sa keechad laga hai na.. iseelie poochachha.. ye vaheen ka keechad hai!" buddhe ne bina kisee shanka ke unase kaha..
dono ne jaise hee neeche jhuk kar dekha..," haan par..?"
"tumane khoonee talab ke paas se guzare hoge beta... aa jao.. andar aa jao!" buddha kahakar pichhe ghoomane laga...
"jjiee.. jee.. nahee.. dhanyavaad.. vo.. hamen bas.. yahee poochchhana tha ki.. yahaan pankchar koee lagaata ho to.. hamaaree gaadee.." rohan ke lie pal pal kaatana mushkil ho raha tha...
"he he he he.. aa jao.. andar aa jao..!" buddhe ne bade pyaar se rohan kee baanh pakadee aur haule se andar kheench liya... rohan mein jaise pratirodh karane kee taaqat bachee hee na ho.. kathaputalee kee tarah vo andar usake saath ghus gaya...
gaadee ne jaise hee raftaar pakadee.. usako ahasaas ho gaya kee kuchchh na kuchchh gadabad zaroor hai," gaadee pankchar ho gayee hai.. shaayad.. ab kya karen?" kahakar nitin ne gaadee kee raftaar dheemee karate hue usako said mein rok diya...
rohan sahamee huee nazaron se nitin ko dekhane laga," soree yaar.. meree vajah se..."
nitin usakee baat par dhyaan die bina gaadee se utara aur taiyar chek kie.. chaaron taiyar zameen mein dhaanse hue se the.. sabakee hava gaayab thee.. nitin vaapas gaadee mein aaya aur apana sir pakad kar baith gaya...," ab kya karen.. ek mein pankchar hota to.."
"agala gaanv kitanee door hai bhaee.." rohan khud kee naasamajhee se nitin ko bhee pareshaanee mein daal dene ke kaaran sharminda tha..
"hoga koee 5-7 kailaameetar aur.. kyoon?" nitin ab saamaany ho chuka tha.. jo hona tha vah to ho hee chuka tha.. ganeemat thee jo ho sakata tha, vah nahee hua..
"vahaan tak le chalo kisee tarah.. shaayad vahaan koee pankchar lagaane vaala mil jae.."
aur koee chaara bhee nahee tha.. nitin ne gaadee dheere dheere ludhakaanee shuroo kee...
gaanv aate hee unhone pahale hee ghar ke saamane gaadee rok dee.. ye ghar gaanv se baahar tha.. kuchchh alag hatakar," yahaan poochhte hain.. gaanv mein koee pankchar lagaane vaala ho to..."
dono gaadee se utare aur daravaaje ke saamane jaakar us par thapakee lagaee..
"kaun?" ghar ke andar se aaee nihaayat hee meethee aavaaz ne unake kaano mein misharee see ghol dee... aavaaz kisee navayauvana kee lagatee thee..
"jee.. ham baahar se aae hain.. thodee madad chaahie..!" nitin ne rohan ke bolane se pahale hee javaab de diya...
"baapoo! vo aa gaye.." andar se ladakee kee vahee sureelee aavaaz baahar tak aa rahee thee..
yahaan to rah rah kar jhatake lag rahe the.. nitin ne rohan kee aur dekha aur dheere se bola," ye to is tarah se kah rahee hai jaise ye hamaara intajaar hee kar rahe the.." kahakar dono saavadhaan ho gaye....
chharrrrrrrrrrarar.. daravaaja puraana tha.. isee aavaaz ke saath khula.. ek baar ko to is aavaaz ne bhee unako dara diya tha.. kahate hain na doodh ka jala chhaachh ko bhee phoonk phoonk kar peeta hai...
kareeb 60 saal ke adhed aadamee ne daravaaja khola.. usakee aavaaz mein bhee utanee hee madhurata thee.. upar se neeche tak dono ko dekha aur bola," puraane teele se aae ho na...?"
"jjee.. kya matalab? puraana teela? ham kuchchh samajhe nahee..." dono kee haalat dekhane laayak thee.. rohan man hee man soch raha tha.. ye raat kisee tarah se gujar jae..
"tumhaare pairon mein ye chipachipa sa keechad laga hai na.. iseelie poochachha.. ye vaheen ka keechad hai!" buddhe ne bina kisee shanka ke unase kaha..
dono ne jaise hee neeche jhuk kar dekha..," haan par..?"
"tumane khoonee talab ke paas se guzare hoge beta... aa jao.. andar aa jao!" buddha kahakar pichhe ghoomane laga...
"jjiee.. jee.. nahee.. dhanyavaad.. vo.. hamen bas.. yahee poochchhana tha ki.. yahaan pankchar koee lagaata ho to.. hamaaree gaadee.." rohan ke lie pal pal kaatana mushkil ho raha tha...
"he he he he.. aa jao.. andar aa jao..!" buddhe ne bade pyaar se rohan kee baanh pakadee aur haule se andar kheench liya... rohan mein jaise pratirodh karane kee taaqat bachee hee na ho.. kathaputalee kee tarah vo andar usake saath ghus gaya...