Thriller Dead Or Alive

[Death Kiñg]

सबसे पहले आप को अपनी पहली स्टोरी लिखने के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई ।
" Dead or Alive "
" जिंदा या मुर्दा " कहानी का शीर्षक है । और कहानी थ्रीलर है ।
वैसे थ्रील तो पहले अपडेट से ही कर दिया हमें आपने । अरमान को लगता है कि विश्वास मारा गया जबकि वह जिंदा है और ऐशो आराम से भी है ।

दो जानी दुश्मन के बीच की कहानी लग रहा है " डेथ एंड एलाइव " । शायद अरमान के जेल जाने के पीछे विश्वास का ही हाथ हो ! मुझे लगता है अरमान के दोस्त ने उसे सही खबर ही दिया होगा । शायद विश्वास की चालबाजी के कारण वो बेवकूफ बन गया हो ।

खैर ! जो भी हो , राइटिंग स्किल लाजबाव है आप की । एक बेहतरीन कहानी बनने वाली है इस फोरम की यह ।
" You're dead. You are dead Viswas "
" I'm alive buddy. I am alive "

दोनों डायलॉग , सच में , काफी रोमांचित कर गया मुझे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट डेथ किंग भाई ।
पहला अपडेट ही जगमग जगमग कर गया ।

Dhanyawaad Sanju Bro iss samiksha ke liye. Kahani ke last update mein hi pata chalega ke asal mein hua kya tha. Achha laga ke aapko ye dialogues pasand aaye. Thanks Again bhai.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Sarvpratham Sabhi Ko Mera Namaskar ​

Main yaani Death Kiñg haazir hoon aapke samaksh ek chhoti si peshkash ke saath!!

Aapme se kuchh log shayad mujhe jaante honge aur jo nahi jaante wo bhai iss story ke baad jaan jaaenge. Mujhe story writing ka kuchh zyada experience nahi hai par ye ek chhoti si koshish hai meri aur se. Hope aap sabko pasand aayegi.

Tag to Thriller hai kahani ka so thrill aur suspense ka ek mixture samajh sakte hain aap iss story ko. Haan thoda bahut Romance bhi dekhne ko milega, kyonki wo apun ka favourite genre hai. Story zyada lambi nahi hogi, matlab kuchh hi updates mein aapko The End likha dikhaayi de jaayega.

Kaaran ye ki filhaal main ek story likhkar apni writing skills ko thoda check karna chahta hoon isiliye short story likh raha hoon. Aasha hai ke aap logon ko ye kahani pasand aaye. Jald milenge pehle Update ke saath.

Thanks...

Sabse pahle to Death Kiñg bhai lekhan ke kshetra me aane ke liye.

Start thriller story likhne se kar rahe hain jo ki sadharan baat nahi hai lekin aapke reviews dekh kar itna to main sure ho chuka hu ki aapke liye writing karna koi badi baat nahi hogi. Zaahir hai jinke reviews itne behtareen hote hain unki likhi story bhi behtareen hi hogi. Meri taraf se dher saari shubhkamnaye hain bhai.

Thriller prefix mera all time favourite raha hai. Romance prefix par maine abhi tak koi story nahi likhi hai is liye romance ke bare me mujhe koi tazurba nahi hai. Adultery prefix par kabhi koi story na likhne ki baat kahi thi maine lekin apni masumiyat ko side kar ke adultery bhi likh dala. Khair, is story ke bare me yahi kahuga ki behad maza aane wala hai. Thrill suspense romance love story in sabhi ka mix-up padhne me yakeenan maza aayega. Best of luck bhai

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Story Title Dead Or Alive यानि Jeewit athwa Mrit.​

Title kaafi dilchasp hai, waise sach kahu to story title Horror type lagta hai lekin kyoki aap saaf shabdo me bata chuke hain ki story thriller prefix hai jisme thrill suspense aur romance ka tadka rahega is liye man se is sandeh ko mita leta hu.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

चाहत की राह में बिखरे अरमान बहुत हैं...
तेरी याद में हम परेशां बहुत हैं।
तू हर बार दिल तोड़ देता है कहकर की...
मेरी उम्मीदों के अभी दुनिया में मकाम बहुत हैं।।

सह लेता हूं सोचकर बस ये की यारों...
मोहब्बत की राहों में इम्तिहान बहुत हैं।
कोशिश करना तोड़ो ना दिल किसी और का...
मैं शरीफ तो क्या इस दुनिया में बेईमान बहुत हैं।।

लौट आ अब तो मेरी जान, थक सा गया हूं...
ये राहें वैसे भी सुनसान बहुत हैं।
फक़त तेरी मोहब्बत मांगी थी मैंने, तू पलट गई कहकर...
जरूरत नहीं तुम्हारी, मेरी ज़िंदगी में पायदान बहुत हैं।​

Kya baat hai, start khubsurat shayari ke sath. Is shayari me hi kai saari baate aisi hain jo apne aap me hi koi sandesh de rahi hain. Zahen me kuch Chitra se ubhar aaye. Bahut hi khubsurat panktiya thi bhai

Mohabbat Kya Hai?? Ek seedha sa sawaal maatra teen shabdon ka, par shayad iska jawaab utna saral nahi. Mohabbat shayad kisi ke liye mazaak ho, kisi ke liye ek bhram ho to wahin kisi ke liye Mohabbat shayad sab kuchh ho...

Par wo kehte hain naa jab koyi cheez aapki zindagi mein kuchh adhik hi importance banale tab aksar wo aapse door ho jaaya karti hai. Ye Mohabbat jab pas ho to sukoon hi sukoon hai par jab door ho jaaye to Jannat bhi Dozakh lagne lagti hai.

Khair, Ye Ishq to cheez hi aesi hai ke ispar jitni bhi charcha kar lo kam hi hai... Jisse zyada jaankari chahiye ho wo bhai khud pyaar mein pade aur fir oopar likhe gaye do paragraph ka practical experience mil sakega... Baat karen iss kahani ki to aapko aesi hi ek Prem Kahani milegi jiska aaghaz kaisa bhi ho anjaam ek dum apratyashit hoga!!

Bas yahi kahunga ke kuchh bhi ho, chaahe wo Prem hi kyon naa ho kabhi bhi uski importance kisi ki Zindagi se adhik nahi ho sakti & most importantly everyone must remember that Karma is a Bitch... It spares no one!!

So, iss kahani mein issi Mohabbat... Issi Heartbreak... Issi Karma aur issi Zindagi ke chand pehlu dekhne ko milenge aapko aur ant mein bas yahi sawaal reh jaayega ke...

Is He... DEAD OR ALIVE!!!​

Mohabbat ki baat jab aati hai to zahen me na jane kitni hi kahaniya aur na jane kitne hi aise chehre ubhar aaye hain jo mohabbat me ya to abaad ho gaye ya fir fana ho gaye. Ye wo ehsaas hai jise har koi paana chaahta hai fir chaahe iske liye ya iske dwara kitni hi badi keemat kyo na chukaani pade. Khair is chapter ko padh kar yahi prateet hota hai ki kahani me mukhyatah prem prasang hi rahega kintu is tareeke ka jo kahani ke title ko justify kare. Ab ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki Death Kiñg bhai is kahani ke dwara ham sabko kis tarah se aur kitna romanchit karte hain.

 

[Death Kiñg]

Sabse pahle to Death Kiñg bhai lekhan ke kshetra me aane ke liye.

Start thriller story likhne se kar rahe hain jo ki sadharan baat nahi hai lekin aapke reviews dekh kar itna to main sure ho chuka hu ki aapke liye writing karna koi badi baat nahi hogi. Zaahir hai jinke reviews itne behtareen hote hain unki likhi story bhi behtareen hi hog

Bahut bahut shukriya Shubham bhai protsahan ke liye. Koshish yahi rahegi ke kahani readers ko pasand aaye!

Thriller prefix mera all time favourite raha hai. Romance prefix par maine abhi tak koi story nahi likhi hai is liye romance ke bare me mujhe koi tazurba nahi hai. Adultery prefix par kabhi koi story na likhne ki baat kahi thi maine lekin apni masumiyat ko side kar ke adultery bhi likh dala. Khair, is story ke bare me yahi kahuga ki behad maza aane wala hai. Thrill suspense romance love story in sabhi ka mix-up padhne me yakeenan maza aayega. Best of luck bhai

Bhai satya to yahi hai ke agar kuchh tarah ki ichhaon ko pare rakh kar yahaan kahani padhen log to Thriller/Romance section superhit ho jaayega. Aesa nahi hai ke Incest stories bekaar hoti hain par kuchh ek ko chhodkar sabmein plot ke naam par bas yahi hota hai ... Baaki ju to hamesha masoom writer hi rahoge ...

Story Title Dead Or Alive यानि Jeewit athwa Mrit.​

Title kaafi dilchasp hai, waise sach kahu to story title Horror type lagta hai lekin kyoki aap saaf shabdo me bata chuke hain ki story thriller prefix hai jisme thrill suspense aur romance ka tadka rahega is liye man se is sandeh ko mita leta hu.

Waise iske baad ek Horror plot bhi hai apne dimaag mein!!

Kya baat hai, start khubsurat shayari ke sath. Is shayari me hi kai saari baate aisi hain jo apne aap me hi koi sandesh de rahi hain. Zahen me kuch Chitra se ubhar aaye. Bahut hi khubsurat panktiya thi bhai

Mohabbat ki baat jab aati hai to zahen me na jane kitni hi kahaniya aur na jane kitne hi aise chehre ubhar aaye hain jo mohabbat me ya to abaad ho gaye ya fir fana ho gaye. Ye wo ehsaas hai jise har koi paana chaahta hai fir chaahe iske liye ya iske dwara kitni hi badi keemat kyo na chukaani pade. Khair is chapter ko padh kar yahi prateet hota hai ki kahani me mukhyatah prem prasang hi rahega kintu is tareeke ka jo kahani ke title ko justify kare. Ab ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki Death Kiñg bhai is kahani ke dwara ham sabko kis tarah se aur kitna romanchit karte hain.

Poori koshish hogi ke kahani apne title aur genre ko justify kar paaye.

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai aapki is pratikriya ke liye.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Baaki ju to hamesha masoom writer hi rahoge ...

Bilkul bhai, danke ki chot par

Waise iske baad ek Horror plot bhi hai apne dimaag mein!!

Horror stories ke maamle me Harshit bhai ka jawaab nahi. Khair intzaar rahega

Bhai satya to yahi hai ke agar kuchh tarah ki ichhaon ko pare rakh kar yahaan kahani padhen log to Thriller/Romance section superhit ho jaayega. Aesa nahi hai ke Incest stories bekaar hoti hain par kuchh ek ko chhodkar sabmein plot ke naam par bas yahi hota hai ...

Kuchh writer ki galti aur kuch readers ki. Majburi me wahi likhna padta hai jo readers pasand karte hain. Kuch to aise bhi hain jo zyada se zyada comments paane ke chakkar me kahani ko aisa bana dete hain ki kahani ki maa bahan ek ho jaati hai. Hairat ki baat hai ki iske bavjood readers use bade chaav se padhte hain aur kar ke param santusti pa lete hain.

 

[TheBlackBlood]

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PROLOGUE UPDATE​

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TANNNN... TANNNN... TANNNN...

“Chal re 513... Koyi milne aaya hai terese!!”

Yerawada Central Jail, Pune... Yahin ka nazara tha ye jahaan ek Cell ki salaakhon par ek dande se maarne ke baad, uske taale ko kholkar andar zameen par baithe ek yuvak se kahe the ye shabd, hawaldaar saahab ne. Pratikriya mein wo yuvak chehre par jigyasa liye utha aur uss hawaldaar ke peechhe hi chal diya.

Chehre par cuts ke nishaan, badhi huyi dadhi aur halke lambe baal uski appearance ka hissa the. Saath hi uske jail ke kapdon par likha number – 513... Jiss se hawaldaar ne usse pukaara bhi tha dekha jaa sakta tha. Wo dono chalte huye pahunche meeting window ke kareeb jiske baad wo hawaldaar side mein chala gaya.

Wahin ye yuvak window ke doosri taraf khade ek badi si physique ke hatte – katte aadmi ki taraf prashan janak nazron se dekhne laga jispar wo aadmi bas ek kameeni si muskaan bikher diya!! Wo muskaan dekh kar ye yuvak laghbhag uchhal pada. Iske chehre se khushi tapak nahi balki beh rahi thi.

Iski ye haalat dekh kar wo aadmi bhi muskurane laga,

Yuvak (Prisoner) – Haashhhh... Aakhir, aakhir mera badla poora hua!! I'm the best, I'm the bloody best. Mujhe koyi nahi Hara sakta.

Aadmi – Mera nahi hamara badla launde...

Yuvak (Prisoner) : Haan yaar wahi, waise kaise Maara usse?? Aasan maut to nahi di naa...

Jaise saare jahaan ki jigyaasa iske hi chehre par apna thikaana banaaye huye thi ye sawaal poochhte waqt,

Aadmi – Aasan Maut!? Huhh...

Ek vyangya sa kiya usne in shabdon ko bolte huye. Jisse sunkar koyi aur to shayad chidh jaata par wo yuvak, uski aankhon mein chamak dikhne lagi...

Aadmi : Pehle kutte ke jaisa maara usse... Aur jab tasalli ho gayi aur saath hi saara gussa nikal gaya fir... Fir uske chehre par tezaab daalkar pet mein chaaku ghonp diya...

Ek shaitaani hasi hanste huye iss darindagi ki kahani sunaayi thi iss aadmi ne jisse sunkar uss yuvak ki to jaise banchhe khil gayi... Wo pehle to Raavan ke jaise hasa aur fir oopar ki aur dekh kar chillakar bola...

Yuvak – Ye hota hai nateeja... Mujhse... Armaan se bhidne ka!!! Maine kaha tha ke tu mar jaayega aur tu mar gaya re... YOU'RE DEAD... YOU'RE DEAD VISHWAS...


A Day Earlier {Ek Din Pehle} :-

Ek bada sa bangla hai ye jiske hall mein ek Raja ke jaisi kursi par Royal andaaz mein hi baitha hai ek ladka. Chehre par ek jung jeetne waali smile hai aur uske saamne baithi ek ladki uski taraf excitement se dekh rahi hai... Par wo ladka kisi aur hi soch mein hai. Tabhi wo achanak se khada hua aur dheere se budbudaya...

Ladka – Tumhe laga tum meri maut ka kaaran ban jaaogi aur main mar jaaunga... Nahi... Main Amar hun!! Amar hun main & my friend Armaan... I'M ALIVE BUDDY... I'M ALIVE...




Stay Tuned...

Kya baat hai starting me hi thrill aur suspense ka tadka laga diya death king bhai..
Update ka size bhale hi chhota tha lekin Kafi intresting tha. Do paksho ke beech ki dushmani ka gahra maamla prateet hota hai. Armaan aur vishwaas dono hi character apne aap me dilchasp hain kyoki jaha ek dusre ko maar dene ka daawa kar raha hai wahi dusra bata raha hai I'M ALIVE BUDDY...IM ALIVE. Jail me jisne khabar di wo shayad kisi saajish ka shikar ho gaya hai. Khair abhi to shuruaat hai. Abhi bahut si baate abhi andhere me hain lekin is chhote se update ne zahen me ye jaanne ki jigyasa badha di hai ki aakhir dono paksho ke beech ka asal maamla kya hai. Death Kiñg bhai bahut hi badhiya lekhni ka namuna pesh kiya hai ju ne. Maine pahle hi kaha tha ki jiske reviews itne behtareen hote hain uski writing to behtareen hogi hi.

 

[Naik]

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PROLOGUE UPDATE​

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TANNNN... TANNNN... TANNNN...

“Chal re 513... Koyi milne aaya hai terese!!”

Yerawada Central Jail, Pune... Yahin ka nazara tha ye jahaan ek Cell ki salaakhon par ek dande se maarne ke baad, uske taale ko kholkar andar zameen par baithe ek yuvak se kahe the ye shabd, hawaldaar saahab ne. Pratikriya mein wo yuvak chehre par jigyasa liye utha aur uss hawaldaar ke peechhe hi chal diya.

Chehre par cuts ke nishaan, badhi huyi dadhi aur halke lambe baal uski appearance ka hissa the. Saath hi uske jail ke kapdon par likha number – 513... Jiss se hawaldaar ne usse pukaara bhi tha dekha jaa sakta tha. Wo dono chalte huye pahunche meeting window ke kareeb jiske baad wo hawaldaar side mein chala gaya.

Wahin ye yuvak window ke doosri taraf khade ek badi si physique ke hatte – katte aadmi ki taraf prashan janak nazron se dekhne laga jispar wo aadmi bas ek kameeni si muskaan bikher diya!! Wo muskaan dekh kar ye yuvak laghbhag uchhal pada. Iske chehre se khushi tapak nahi balki beh rahi thi.

Iski ye haalat dekh kar wo aadmi bhi muskurane laga,

Yuvak (Prisoner) – Haashhhh... Aakhir, aakhir mera badla poora hua!! I'm the best, I'm the bloody best. Mujhe koyi nahi Hara sakta.

Aadmi – Mera nahi hamara badla launde...

Yuvak (Prisoner) : Haan yaar wahi, waise kaise Maara usse?? Aasan maut to nahi di naa...

Jaise saare jahaan ki jigyaasa iske hi chehre par apna thikaana banaaye huye thi ye sawaal poochhte waqt,

Aadmi – Aasan Maut!? Huhh...

Ek vyangya sa kiya usne in shabdon ko bolte huye. Jisse sunkar koyi aur to shayad chidh jaata par wo yuvak, uski aankhon mein chamak dikhne lagi...

Aadmi : Pehle kutte ke jaisa maara usse... Aur jab tasalli ho gayi aur saath hi saara gussa nikal gaya fir... Fir uske chehre par tezaab daalkar pet mein chaaku ghonp diya...

Ek shaitaani hasi hanste huye iss darindagi ki kahani sunaayi thi iss aadmi ne jisse sunkar uss yuvak ki to jaise banchhe khil gayi... Wo pehle to Raavan ke jaise hasa aur fir oopar ki aur dekh kar chillakar bola...

Yuvak – Ye hota hai nateeja... Mujhse... Armaan se bhidne ka!!! Maine kaha tha ke tu mar jaayega aur tu mar gaya re... YOU'RE DEAD... YOU'RE DEAD VISHWAS...


A Day Earlier {Ek Din Pehle} :-

Ek bada sa bangla hai ye jiske hall mein ek Raja ke jaisi kursi par Royal andaaz mein hi baitha hai ek ladka. Chehre par ek jung jeetne waali smile hai aur uske saamne baithi ek ladki uski taraf excitement se dekh rahi hai... Par wo ladka kisi aur hi soch mein hai. Tabhi wo achanak se khada hua aur dheere se budbudaya...

Ladka – Tumhe laga tum meri maut ka kaaran ban jaaogi aur main mar jaaunga... Nahi... Main Amar hun!! Amar hun main & my friend Armaan... I'M ALIVE BUDDY... I'M ALIVE...




Stay Tuned...

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shuruwat bhai
Lagta h yeh do dosto ki kahani h jo pehle bahot achche dost huwa kerte thai or ab ek doosre k bahot bade dushman
Ek jail m h doosra Raja ki zinadagi jee raha h
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Zaberdast

 

[Lucky..]

Sarvpratham Sabhi Ko Mera Namaskar ​

Main yaani Death Kiñg haazir hoon aapke samaksh ek chhoti si peshkash ke saath!!

Aapme se kuchh log shayad mujhe jaante honge aur jo nahi jaante wo bhai iss story ke baad jaan jaaenge. Mujhe story writing ka kuchh zyada experience nahi hai par ye ek chhoti si koshish hai meri aur se. Hope aap sabko pasand aayegi.

Tag to Thriller hai kahani ka so thrill aur suspense ka ek mixture samajh sakte hain aap iss story ko. Haan thoda bahut Romance bhi dekhne ko milega, kyonki wo apun ka favourite genre hai. Story zyada lambi nahi hogi, matlab kuchh hi updates mein aapko The End likha dikhaayi de jaayega.

Kaaran ye ki filhaal main ek story likhkar apni writing skills ko thoda check karna chahta hoon isiliye short story likh raha hoon. Aasha hai ke aap logon ko ye kahani pasand aaye. Jald milenge pehle Update ke saath.

Thanks...

for starting new story Bhai

 

[Death Kiñg]

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UPDATE – 1​

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G.D. Schools & Colleges...

Pune shehar ka sabse bada educational institution Jahan padhne waale vidyarthi apne aap mein hi kaamyabi ki nayi bulandiyon ko chhoo lete hain. Chaahe wo Academics ho ya fir sports, chaahe Arts ho ya Discipline yahaan ke students har cheez mein awwal hain. Iss waqt yahaan iss College ke gate ke baahar khadi hai ek ladki. Paaon mein casual shoes, oopar safed rang ki leggings aur saath mein light green kurti... Gale mein ek pendant jiske neeche chhote se size ka “M” juda hua tha... Honthon par ek prakritik gulaabi rangat, kaanon mein earrings joki morpankh ke resemblance ke the aur ant mein uski aankhein... Patli dandi ka wo chashma shayad uski aankhon ko kuchh alag hi darsha raha tha.

Par jo cheez usmein sabse khaas thi wo thi uski aankhon mein jhalakti ek anjaani si masoomiyat. Wo masoomiyat jo bata rahi thi ke ye ladki shayad prakriti ki sabse khubsurat kalakriti hai. Shayad yahi chehra hai wo thikaana jahaan saare jahaan ki khubsurti dera daal sakti thi. Khair, wo ladki jo gate ke paas khadi uss college ko nihaar rahi thi, uski aankhon mein thoda sa bhay aur bahut saari jigyaasa spasht dekhi jaa sakti thi. Usne ek baar apne chashme ko thoda set kiya aur College mein enter kar gayi. Wo sab taraf nazren ghumaati huyi chal rahi thi ke tabhi usne dekha ke ek jagah par kaafi students ghera banaye khade hain aur wahan se aa rahi music ki dhun wo ladki saaf sun sakti thi.

Ab insaani pravriti ka ek bada hissa hai jigyasa matlab excitement aur ussi ks chalte wo ladki bhi uss bheed ki taraf badhne lagi. Jaise – jaise wo nazdeek jaa rahi thi music ki dhun usse clearly sunaayi de rahi thi joki usse mantramugdh bhi karne lagi thi. Jab wo uss sthaan par pahunchi to usne paaya ke ek ladka parking mein ek bike par baitha harmonica par ek dhun baja raha tha...

HMMM.. HMMHM... HMM... HMHMM.. HM HMM HM...

HM HMM HM.. HM...HMMMHM HMM HM..

Wo apni hi duniya mein mashgool aankhen band kiye hua tha par uske aas paas kitne hi students ki bheed lagi huyi thi aur ho bhi kyon naa, jab bhi talent ka pradarshan hota hai appreciation milta hi hai. Wahi yahaan ho raha tha. Par wo ladki un sab students se kuchh alag thi, wo ek tak uss ladke ko hi dekhe jaa rahi thi... Uska wo chehra jispar halki beard bhi maujood thi, uska hairstyle jo kuchh alag hi tha, uska bike par baithne ka wo posture... Sab kuchh uss ladki ko apni taraf kheench raha tha. Aaj se pehle usne kabhi aesa feel nahi kiya tha jaisa abhi kar rahi thi. Asal mein wo iss waqt kuchh feel hi nahi kar rahi thi!! Uske dil mein kuchh ajeeb sa ho raha tha jisse wo filhaal samajhne ke kaabil nahi thi.

Khair, kuchh derr baad uss ladke ne apne mobile ke bajne par aankhen kholi to wahaan lagi bheed ko dekha. Usne sabhi par ek nazar daali aur apne mobile ko kaan se lagaane laga ke tabhi... Tabhi uske dimaag ne kuchh seconds pehle dekhi ek tasveer uske zehen mein dobara chala di. Ye chehra, ye kuchh adhik hi haseen tha. Usne Mobile ko nazarandaz kiya aur waapis se uss bheed par nazar daali par wahaan wo nahi thi. Wo ladka ek dum se bike se utha aur idhar udhar dekhne laga. Tabhi uski nazar wahaan se jati ek ladki par padi. “Haan ye wahi hai... Par aaj se pehle isse kabhi nahi dekha!!” Yahi vichaar kaundhe uss ladke ke dil mein.

Par tabhi uske kandhe par ek haath aaya, wo palta to swayam hi uske honthon par ek muskaan ubhar aayi. Usne saamne waale ladke se haath milaya aur dono gale lag gaye.

[L 1 – Musician ... L 2 – New Guy]

L 1 – Aaj to bade bade log aaye hain College mein!!

L 2 – Haina! Dekh le fir tameez se baat kariyo hamse.

L 1 – Haan haan kyon nahi bilkul, aapse tameez se hi baat karenge hum ARMAAN Saahab!!

Armaan – Chal chal drama band kar aur bata kya chal raha hai aaj kal?

L 1 – Kya chalna hai bas wahi boring zindagi. Saala ab to College bhi aane ki ichha nahi hoti.

Armaan – Maine bola tha ke ek chhokri pata le, apne aap life mast ho jaayegi. Par nahi tumko to Turu Luvv chahiye. Bhaisahab aaj ke time mein naa milta hai sacha pyaar!

L 1 – Abbe jaa na! Koyi naa koyi to hogi hamare liye bhi. Jisse usne banaya hoga sirf aur sirf mera ho jaane ke liye.

Ye baat usne aankhen band karke ek khoye huye lehze mein boli par uski aankhen tab ek jhatke mein khul gayi jab abhi kuchh pal pehle dekha wo dhundhla sa chehra uske dimaag mein dobara aa gaya.

Armaan – Chal achha tu dhoondh apni soulmate. Apan chala.

L 1 – Chala... Kidhar!? Aaj bhi College tafri karne hi aaya hai kya?

Armaan – Haan aesa ich samajh le. Waise Bade Bhaiya ne bulaaya tha. Bole kuchh kaam hai unhe.

L 1 – Chal theek hai main bhi chala class mein.

Dono ne haath milaaya aur wo ladka palat gaya. Par wo kuchh hi kadam chala hoga ke ek chit parichit si aawaz uske kaanon mein padi aur wo aawaz thi – “HEYYY... VISHWAS”...

Wo palta to apne aap hi uske chehre par ek badi si muskurahat aa gayi. Uss aawaz ki maalkin joki ek behadh hi haseen ladki thi, chalti huyi iske nazdeek aayi aur dono ne ek doosre ko hug kiya.

Vishwas – Aaj late kaise ho gayi?

Ladki – Arre yaar raaste mein Scooty puncture ho gayi thi. Ussi sab mein time lag gaya.

Vishwas – Chal aa to gayi na. Ab jaldi chal class ka time ho raha hai.

Ladki – Oh ho! Class ka time? Shreeman Vishwas Mhatre kabse classes ke liye tensed hone lage!?

Vishwas (Muskurakar) – Jabse Miss Shravani Classes ko bunk karne lagi hain.

Shravani – Ae kya bol raha hai! Main classes miss nahi kiya karti.

Vishwas – Achha aesa kya... To kal uss Aditya ke saath bike par chipak ke kidhar jaa rahi thi?

Shravani iss baat par thoda sa hadbada gayi aur ye dekh kar Vishwas ki muskaan gehri ho gayi.

Vishwas – Hmm.. Hmm.. Boliye naa Madam kaahe chup ho gayi?

Shravani – Tu kitna kameena hai re. Koyi aese poochhta hai kisi ladki ko?

Vishwas – Nahi. Par tu ladki kidhar hai!!

Ye bolkar wo wahaan se bhaag gaya aur idhar Shravani usse jaate dekh kar muskurane lagi. Aur fir halke se “Bandar” badbada kar aage ki taraf chal padi.


College Auditorium...

Kuchh classes ke baad sabhi students ko yahaan iss auditorium mein bula liya gaya tha. Kaaran, aaiye jaante hain. Saamne stage par khade hain College ke Director saahab aur kuchh bol rahe hain.

Director – Students, I feel very proud to announce a new feather in our College's Cap. Iss baar bhi hamare hi College ne National Music Fest mein first prize jeeta hai. Aur pichhle teen saalon ki tarah hi iss baar bhi the winner iss Vishwas Mhatre... Vishwas come on the stage my boy!!

Apna naam sunkar Vishwas stage par pahunch gaya aur usse wahaan dekh kar Jahan Shravani ka chehra khila hua tha wahin un students mein maujood ek ladki ka chehra bhi dekhne yogya tha. Ye wahi ladki thi jo subah parking mein bhi maujood thi. Wo bas saamne stage par khade uss ladke ke chehre ko dekhe jaa rahi thi aur tabhi uske munh se halke se aawaz nikli – Vishwaaasss...

Aur agle hi pal wo khud hi hadbada gayi. Khair, idhar Vishwas ko Director Saahab ne puraskrit kiya aur jab wo Stage se neeche aaya to Shravani bhaagkar uske nazdeek aayi aur uski peeth par ek jama diya...

Vishwas – Aahh... Kya karti hai Chuhiya!!

Shravani – Kya bola tune?

Vishwas – Kya bola... Tera naam bola Chuhiya, aur tu ye haath zyada mat chalaya kar. Din ba din hinsak praani banti jaa rahi hai.

Shravani – Tu kya bolta rehta hai re... Main to tujhe shaabashi de rahi thi. Mera sar ooncha kar diya tune!

Vishwas – Jeeta main to tera sar ooncha kaise hua?

Shravani – Arre hum dono alag thode hi naa hai. Tu jeeta to matlab main jeeti. Laa idhar de meri trophy.

Vishwas – Aeee... Halwa hai kya! Dost hai to dost ki tarah reh, girlfriend kyon banti hai!

Shravani – Teri girlfriend!! (Laughs) Teri girlfriend. Kya joke maara hai!!

Vishwas – Hass kyon rahi hai. Maana ke tu thodi ajeeb dikhti hai par main chehron ki beizzati nahi karta.

Shravani – Lekin main to karti hoon naa, teri girlfriend. Dekhiyo tu single hi marega, tere jeevan mein nahi aa sakti koyi ladki.

Vishwas – Aese kaise... Dekh liyo iss raanjhe ke liye bhi koyi naa koyi Heer zaroor aayegi.

Shravani – Aaye haaye... Chal nikal idhar se warna ladki aaye naa aaye lekin Professor zaroor aa jaayega.

Vishwas bas munh banaakar udhar se kuchh badabadate huye nikal gaya wahin Shravani bhi hanste huye uske peechhe hi chal di. Wahin wo ladki bechari in dono ko yun ek doosre se baat karte dekh ek anjaane se bhaav ke dayare mein ghir gayi thi lekin jaldi hi is sab ko apne dimaag se jhatak kar wo bhi apne raste chal di.

Shaam ke samay ek ladki ek room mein baithi apni kitaabon mein ghusi huyi thi ke tabhi uske room mein ek mahila aati hai.

Mahila – Bas kar MAANVI kitna padhegi. Chal band kar ab books ko.

Maanvi : Kya Aai... Sab log apne bachon ko zabardasti padhaate hain aur aap mujhe padhne se rok rahi ho.

Mahila (Uske sar par haath firakar) – Kyonki meri laado hai hi itni samajhdar. Usse kuchh bhi samjhane ki zaroorat hi nahi padti.

Maanvi (Smiles) – Haan wo to main hun. Achha Aai main zara market jaakar aati hoon. Kuchh books leni hain mujhe.

Mahila – Thik hai. Jaldi aana lekin!!

Maanvi bas muskurakar haan mein sar hila deti hai. Khair, wo apni Scooty uthaakar market ki taraf nikal jaati hai par abhi wo road se baahar ki taraf mudd hi rahi thi ke uska Scooty par se Control chhoot gaya aur usne seedhe saamne se aa rahi ek bike mein Scooty thok di. Dono hi vaahan gir chuke the aur vaahan ke oopar baithe shakhs bhi. Tabhi jo ladka Bike par tha...

Ladka – Andha hai kya Mada...

Aage ki baat uske halak se baahar hi nahi nikli jab usne saamne dekha. Shayad aap samajh hi gaye honge ke ye ladka koyi aur nahi balki Vishwas hi tha. Wo bas saamne road par giri uss ladki ko dekhe jaa raha tha jiski nazar bhi Vishwas par hi tiki huyi thi.

Wo lehraati huyi zulfein... Wo sehmi si aankhen... Wo lazraate honth aur wo masoom sa chehra. Vishwas ke dimaag ne uske kadmon aur haathon ko aage kya karna hai bataya aur Vishwas bhi uski baat maan gaya. Wo utha aur Maanvi ki taraf badha. Maanvi ko laga ke wo museebat mein fans chuki hai aur aakhir accident bhi to uski hi galti se hua tha. Par tabhi Vishwas ne uski taraf haath badhakar usse hairaan kar diya. Maanvi ne uska haath thaama aur uth gayi. Fir Vishwas ne uski Scooty aur apni bike bhi uthaayi aur bola,

Vishwas – Aap theek to hai naa?

Maanvi – J..Ji.. main theek hoon... Wo Sorry maine... Ye galti se hua!!

Vishwas to bas kisi aur hi duniya mein pahunch gaya tha uss madhur aawaz ko sunkar. Kuchh pal ke viraam ke baad wo bola,

Vishwas – Koyi baat nahi par aage se dhyaan se chalaiyega!

Maanvi bechaari to hairaan reh gayi ke usne bina koyi hungama kiye aese hi baat taal di. Par abhi usse ghar jaane ki jaldi thi isiliye wo Vishwas ko ek baar fir Sorry kehkar apne ghar ki taraf nikal gayi. Idhar Vishwas putla bana bass usse jaate dekhta raha aur bass dekhta hi raha...




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