Agar writer or ya kisi ko lagta hay hum galat hay so maaf karna
I read this story a long time ago on xosip.com but not the ending part coz it was not came out that time, now I read the ending but not satisfied....there are few reasons I want to mention...
Bahut se readers ne is kahani ko pada or bahut pasand bhi kiya, hame khud pasand hay par kuch cheeje hay jo honi chaiye the
Ab jo main kahne ja raha hoon usko pad ke bahut se readers yeh kahenge ki yeh sirf manoranjan ke liyea hay toh serious kyun lena....par jab itna lambi kahani likhi or itna detail main sex diya toh kuch details or honi chahiye the
Is kahani main sari baat jo hui uska jimewar sab ka thikra anshul ke he ser par phord diya gaya,jab ki anshul he sirf jimwar nahi, swati bhi jimewar hay balke anshul se jayda...
Kahani ka tag fantasy nahi hay so kai sawal hay hamare, agar fantasy hoti toh hum yeh sab kabhi pooch te he nahi kyunki fantasy main toh sab possible hay chahe chand Suraj he kyun na ban jaye...or pani jameen or jameen pani ho jaye...
Kahani main na toh anshul or nahi swati ke background ke bare main bataya gaya, jayse dono asman se tapke ho or in dono ka koi Nate ristedar nahi, anshul or swati ne school phir collage or phir anshul ne office main job par dono ke koi friends circle ke bare main nahi bataya gaya jayse school se collage tak koi friends he na ho jo ajeeb hay, dono kiraye ke makan main Itne saalon se rah rahe par padosiyon se jaan pahchan nahi ye bhi ajeeb hay...
Kahani main aysa lagta hay jayse sirf in kuch kirdaron ko utha ke ek glass glob(woh hota hay na jo gift shop par milta hay glass ka round sa jismain kabhi koi Mahal ya koi building ya koi putla hota hay or jab usko hilaten hay toh usmain snow ya aysa kuch hota hay) main rakh diya gaya hay us chote se round glass glob main inki duniya hay jaha ye or kuch nahi kar sakte siwaye ek he raste par chalen ke.... Aysa bahuton ke saath hua hoga ki woh road par drive karte janrahe hoon or achanak kafi gadiya us road par wapas ati dikhen or koi aapse kahe ki aage traffic hay mat jao toh aap kya kartr hay? Rasta badal te hay ya seedhe jake us traffic main phas jate hay? Par is kahani main dosre raste open he nahi rakhe hay matlab seedhe jake traffic main phasna he hai chae kuch bhi karlo...
Ànshul ka accident hona, ab yaha kitno ko pata hoga ki agar on job, agar husband ko kuch ho jata hay toh uski wife ko uski jagah job dee jati hay agar qualification kam hoti toh koi or job de jati hay,
Kahani main le de ke bas jaiyraj he jaiyraj hay or koi nahi jise dono help mang saken...chalo yeh bhe maan liya....
Ek toh writer ji ne anshul or swati ke dono haat kat diye (matlab samaj gaye na is muhavre ka?)....Jab swati ne jairaj ke yaha jane se mana kiya toh anshul ne pucha par swati ne nahi bataya, ek baat kahna chata hoon ki koi bhi rishta ho chahe pati patni ya gf/bf ya bro/sis yaha tak ke parents or bachon ke beeche...bharosha or vishwaas ek aysa shabd hay jo bahut jaroori hay...chalo mana swati anshul se jayraj ke duara usko physically or sexual harkaten or paise de ke uske saath galat karne wali baat batane main sankoche kar rahe par mota-mota ye hi bata deti ki uski nazar gandi hay or woh usko galat tarike ke choone ki koshish karta hay...kya anshul koi dood peeta bacha hay jo sirf itna bhi na samjhe or uske baad bhi apni biwi ko musibat main dale....duniya ka kaun sa pati hoga jo itna sune ke bad bhi shant or aram se baita rahe jayse kuch matlab he nahi apni patni se chahe uske saath kuch bhi ho....
Jairaj ke ghar jane ke baad swati ka usko job ke liyea kahna...bhai toh kaun job dila ke apni haat ayei murgi jane dega...phir jairaj ka asli khel suru hua swati ke saath jo ki anshul ke khilaf bhadkana or emotionally or sexual usko or open karn apne liyea....swati ne usko apne pati or bacho ki liyea swikar kar liya chalo theek hay jindagi main bahut se aysa time har kisi ke saath ata hay jaha na chate hue bhe except karna parta hay....par phir swati ka khud hawas main jairaj ke saath sab karna or anshul ke liyea najariya badalna jayse woh koi cheej he nahi...usko ghrina ki najar se dhekna, uska anshul se chird kar bat karna jayse uska use baat karana koi tauheen ho....or anshul ka dono ke aysi awajen jo sirf sex ke waqt hi nikalta or bister ka waisa awaj karna jo sirf sex ke waqt he hota hay uske baad bhi miya smaj nahi pa rahe andar kya horaha, itna andha wishwas.... kya miya kamre main 3-4 aurat or mard hay jo samj rahe ki woh uski biwi nahi....bhai jab pata hay ki band kamre main sirf or sirf jairaj or swati hi hay toh or kya chahiye samjne ke liyea or kaise samjhoge!!!... Is ko toh koi bhi badi asani se samhnlega ki andar kya ho raha or oopar se itne sare khule indication diye gaye hay uske baad bhe kamal hay bhai....itna seedha or bhodu bana diya hay writer ne anshul ko....agar koi kahta hay ki swati ne woh sab majboori or apne pariwar ke liyea kiya toh galat hay.....haan suru main swati ne majboori or pariwar ke liyea kiya par baad main woh sab khud apni marji se kiya hawas main, tab koi majboori nahi the jo saaf pata chalta hay yaha tak ke usne apne bacho tak par dhayan dena kam kar diya ek maa ho ke....
Agar koi kahta hay ki jairaj he galat hay toh ye sahi nahi....mana swati suru main galat nahi the jo bhi kiya majboori main par baad main woh bhi utni he galat thi jitna jairay......swati ka khud ko jairay ki rakhail or randi kahna, apne pati ko neecha dikhana or jairaj ko importance dena...jairaj jab anshul ko namard kahna or swati ka apne pati ke defence main kuch na kah kar balke muskurana apne pati ko namard kahalwana ye jante hue bhi ki woh nahi hay or jo is waqt uske halat hay woh accident ki wajah se hay....or suru se end tak jairaj se sirf unprotected sex kiya swati ke saath par kabhi ye nahi dikya ki swati ne pills lena suru kiya ho or nahi uske periods ke bare main jo ki na ho ye namumkin hay is age main unless woh jairaj se pregnant ho gaye ho jo ki woh bhi nahi tha....
Ending bhi ajeeb hay, kitni jagah jahan swati ne khud besharamo ki tarhan bina dare anshul ke samne he kai harkaten ki, itna sab khule aam hone baad bhi yeh dikhaya gaya ki na anshul ko kuch pata or nahi swati ko ki uske pati ko sab pata hay uske or jairaj ke bare main bhai kamal hay itna shoor sharaba kiya dono ne raat-raat bhar or kai jagah toh khullam khula uske baad bhe kamal hay kamal hay
Hello brother!
I admire that you have given so much thought into the detail of the story. As you have mentioned that despite being a work of fiction it should have given more explanation to the events that are are happening here ,as i have witnessed that erotica can somewhat create a perception among readers about certain actions as depicted in this story.
Here is my analysis of the story which may give readers some answers of their questions before the author presents the 2nd part.
The reason people liked this story so much is because of the dialogues ,the emotions and mainly the change of behaviour of the characters as the story progresses ,which we usually see and hear in real life like in the news about how extramarital affairs functions. Many readers (including me!) may have connected ourselves with Anshul and it induces some pessimism about love and loyalty , even delivers a heart break.
Lets' see
Fellow reader ! As you have mentioned that in this story that Anshul was held responsible for everything that happened to them like how his decisions forced his wife onto the bed of Jairaj. I obviously think that Swati is the prime character who has acted selfishly and displayed many actions that violate the moral duty of a housewife and a mother. But Anshul too have to share some blame as the reasons why Jairaj , ( i would like to say the best word would be) COERCED & SEDUCED Swati was because of what Anshul failed to provide for Swati which Jairaj used an opportunity to lure and trap her. The First and most important among them are-
"SEXUAL SATISFACTION " - Sex is a necessary activity for functioning of a healthy relationship and there are plethora of cases where people in sexless marriages often stray and look for sexual pleasure elsewhere . It has been reported and a well known fact that the people who commit adultery show low rational thinking when it comes to satisfy their carnal desires. We humans are not perfect and Swati was obviously not even close to it. Due to her husband's condition he wasn't been able to give what she literally was craving or i say DYING for as mentioned in the starting of the story. According to what i've read Anshul was not just able to perform sexually but is evident that he somewhat showed signs of low libido ( Now it can be because of his accident, he certainly would have more important things in hand to focus on like the sustenance of his family and the stress of not finding a job may be the reason behind it ) when Swati wanted to have some intimate time together when Jairaj first sucked Swati's breasts. If he wasn't able to perform vaginal sex , he could have performed oral sex on her as majority of women do not orgasm from penile penetration but certainly can have them by clitoral stimulation ( the reason for vibrators) as clitoris is the only body part designed for the sole purpose of sexual pleasure or he could have used different sexual and non sexual techniques to culture their intimacy, but i assume that like many husbands he was unware of these things or may have somewhat very formal and conservative attitude towards sex, while we see Jairaj was clearly experienced in the f$$$ing department , he was wild ,bold and rough in bed ,he was into passionate kissing, finding and touching the sensual and erogenous parts of Swati , the erotic verbal humiliation of Swati which which is close to BDSM , giving her oral and also receiving from her , making her feel beautiful by buying her sexy clothes ,women like this kind of stuff ,They like to be beautiful before their partners ,it gives them immense pleasure knowing that their partners are pleased with their body and appearance but as mentioned in the first line of the story ,Swati spent more time on her household chores and wasn't able to take care of herself so when Jairaj did everything thing to polish her into what i say a "CHARMING WOMAN" she obviously liked it . I can certainly say this is the major reason for Swati's betrayal - lack of sex and it is 100% truth that Swati was seriously sex starved . We know how it can be frustrating to go without sex and women like it too as much as men. But sex should not control this much as to corrupt ourselves.
FINANCIAL PROBLEMS - you may have heard that women are attracted towards men with wealth and fortune and they are right to do it ? Why ? Because evolutionary psychology suggests that women tend to choose mates with resources to provide for her and her children. It is not that they are only into money but don't you think how can a man be worthy to start a family if he can't provide for them . Also just like women gets pleasure by giving their men pleasure , men also feels like men when they give their wives and children all the luxuries of comfort . Swati was clearly frustrated with her financial situations and as the writer has decided and you have said that they weren't able to find any other stable source of income. Swati was attracted to Jairaj because he was providing for her family which is heavily pointed when Jairaj bought Swati the furniture. He could've provided her with any thing that she desires which gave her some security and safety in life to relax.
CHANGE IN BEHAVIOUR OF SWATI TOWARDS ANSHUL & JAIRAJ WAY OF SEDUCTION - It can be seen that Swati has started to show feelings of disappointment , frustration and annoyance towards her husband. There are many reasons behind it .
Anshul made easy for Jairaj to take advantage of Swati by moving into his flat. She , at first hated Jairaj and didn't want to do that , She even warned her husband about it ( WOMEN CAN SENSE ABOUT SOMEONE'S CHARACTER BETTER THAN MEN , HE SHOULD HAVE LISTENED TO HER !) but Anshul naively accepted his offer , Then he allowed or i say told her to sleep in Jairaj's bedroom ( Now this is clearly fiction as what i can see of Anshul is that he wasn't fond of Swati wearing such revealing attire so then how he could've let her sleep with another man,. But then the problem with him was that he thought highly of him and also that he was like a father to her .BIG MISTAKE THERE! ) . Now Swati was forced to be in the same room with him and couldn't do much to stop him from having sex. She tried to point to her husband but he failed to notice, so she accepted her fate. She may be angry towards Anshul wondering how naïve and timid he can be. Meanwhile Jairaj was planting seeds of doubt in Swati's mind that Anshul didn't care for her and was not bothered protecting her from him, that he did not deserved to be her husband. Now this is a classic strategy to scatter any alliance by divide and conquer. He said how ANSHUL can he let her sleep with him or how he has suppressed her desires which were not true. Anshul was a good man , he saw goodness in everyone and that's why he trusted both Jairaj and Swati , not strongly but BLINDLY. Women say they want their husband to trust them that's what Anshul did here. Swati was initially having a sexual relationship with Jairaj but during their time together she too started to develop feelings for him because of the intimacy they were sharing . He would say to her to live life fully and freely which can be seen as a good advice but his intentions were not good which Swati did not came to understand because of the sexual pleasure she was getting from him . Jairaj actually was saying to her that " SHE SHOULD FORGET ABOUT HER DUTIES TOWARD HER FAMILY AND SHOULD FOCUS MORE ON THEIR BEDROOM ACTIVITIES " . Jairaj basically used propaganda to fool her. He indeed wanted Swati to enjoy their sex sessions because he did not wanted to make love to a lifeless body , He was feeling proud to snatch another man's wife and the mother of his children to become his whore. HE DIDN'T LOVED HER , IT WAS ALL SEX & LUST TOWARDS SWATI AND WHAT SWATI WAS HAVING WAS INFATUATION & LUST. I can support this by saying that men pay way more, much much more for high class escort services than regular prostitutes ? WHY , IF BOTH OF THESE PROVIDE SEXUAL SATISFACTION, THEN WHY PAY DOUBLE , TRIPLE OR MORE ? The answer is that the escort services provide not only just plain sex but also a fake illusion of control and importance for the customers whereas by visiting some street prostitute you are in and out before you even knew it. Jairaj was also attracted specially to her because it was hard for him to get her as she was a dutiful housewife who would never let him touch her , it was like a game for him and she was his trophy, that's why when Swati asked why he was pursuing her despite getting any women in their area. He would constantly abuse ,humiliate and degrade her husband's reputation before her , Now Swati was clearly under Jairaj's spell and all the sex was clearly affecting her mind. She too started to feel that her husband didn't loved her and was only thinking about himself as Anshul was not doing anything to get a job and was letting his family stay at Jairaj and eat and live for free which decreased his reputation in front of Swati . NOW THIS IS MORE OR LESS TRUE , ANSHUL SHOULD'VE ARRANGED FOR SOME PLACE WHEN HE HAD SUSPICIONS ABOUT HIS WIFE & JAIRAJ. I THINK AFTER SUCH A TOUGH TIME HE BECAME TOO MUCH COMFORTABLE IN JAIRAJ'S HOUSE . Swati thought about Jairaj's helping her as love and care but it was more of a bribe to corrupt her. ALTHOUGH ANSHUL IS A PERFECT & FATHER MATERIAL ,one his his major flaw was his lack of assertiveness and his cowardice towards both Jairaj & his wife which only allowed her to shamelessly court her lover. Remember it is written in scriptures that an adulterous woman always have hostility towards her husband because she sees him as a hinderance in fulfilling her lust. Anshul should have talked with Swati in a more manly and strict manner while he expressed his feelings . The conversation could have gone like this- He could ask her why she always remained angry with him , not even looking at him ,always humiliating him with a combination of emotions and in a demanding tone. Swati didn't feel any attraction towards her hubby because all her needs were met by her lover , he was clearly replacing Anshul from the duties of her husband. Swati smiled shamelessly when Jairaj would humiliate her hubby because she knew she can't do anything and that her hubby isn't capable of doing anything, so she had somewhat accepted her fate and then why not try to grab full benefit of this moment. Isn't this what we are doing reading about Jairaj humiliating Anshul just like she get pleasure from her lover insulting her hubby. She may be thinking that this a way of punishing her hubby for what she thought was his mistake for what is happening to her.
She was also liking Jairaj because of his physique and manliness. Now again if we consider what attracts women sexually toward a man from the view point of evolutionary psychology, one of thing is definitely a muscular body as it is often seen when Swati used to stare at Jairaj's chest and biceps ,she felt bliss while lying in the strong arms of her lover. Now even Anshul was also intimated by Jairaj's muscular body which made him feel less of a man . The reason is that women like men with such body characteristics is because they subconsciously think that a strong man will protect them from any danger and will scare away any threat from other men. Also it indicates better genes which can passed to next generation. You can search online that women prefer men with broad shoulders , chest , glutes and abs. Femininity always get attracted towards masculinity and vice versa that is the fundamental mechanism of sexual attraction, One of the primary reason why men join gym is to sculpt their bodies to attract desired mates . It is like male sexual strategy.( Please don't tell me you are not one them, even I am ! ) Also Jairaj was showing some of the desired behavioural traits such as dominance and assertiveness which further seduced Swati as women like to be safe in their men arms
But i have confusion on whether Swati loved her hubby or not at the end . Many things indicate that she did , like taking care of his health , bathing him and putting him to sleep but Jairaj was infecting her mind and manipulating her to spend more time with him which resulted in the decline of the quality of their relationship. Swati & Anshul didn't sleep together on the same bed since they got there, neither did they hugged or kissed each other. Now all of these scenarios paved the way For the closeness of Swati & Jairaj . He also flirted with her and appreciated her on her cooking and her beauty which Anshul often failed to do so. This may have foster some resentment towards her hubby. She many times mentioned to her hubby that if he did not like her behaviour then why he is not arranging for any other home of her and the kids and take them away, maybe she too wanted to get out of this situation but then again it would be her strategy to shut Anshul because she knew that he was not capable of arranging another place for them. One of the reasons that Swati was always irritated when Anshul asked her about the unusual marks and her changed behavior because many a times it is seen that when people engage in extramarital affairs they often become short tempered and lash out at even small things when their respective spouses confront them. One of the reasons for this type of behaviour is that they feel guilt and shame of what what they were doing and also they try to blame their spouses for their affair thinking that they are the reasons which pushed them into the arms of another men/women, instead of recognizing their own fault , it a self defense mechanism of the mind. Swati may have left her shame and modesty in the bedroom with her lover but she knew she was someone's wife. But i think the main reason would be that she thought Anshul is trying to take away her source of pleasure which she was clearly addicted to . Think if you want to spend some time with your partner but them someone interrupts you , you would feel irritated by them which was also happening here. But at end when Anshul was f$$$$ing her , she too wanted to cooperate with him which showed that now she can get from her hubby what she wanted form him and Anshul also realized what can happen if he remained ignorant regarding his conjugal duties. I am not saying Anshul is responsible for his wife straying , it was 100% his wife's fault, her behaviour may have provided us with erotic pleasure and entertainment but this type of behaviour is not something which can't happen in real life and is the most disturbing and frightening. Swati's parents were deceased but what would they have thought if they saw that their married daughter becomes a whore for a such a low life ,betraying her hubby which they selected for her keeping in mind that he was a caring man, What would both her daughters and son would think knowing what shameful acts their mother did even in their presence. Swati mistakes Jairaj's lust and greed for love and care and her husband's care as weakness . Anshul also failed to realized Jairaj's intentions before it was too late. There are plenty of moments when we can feel Anshul's deep pain when he saw another man touching his wife, his wife massaging his body , letting him keep his head in her lap but at last eventually witnessing the final act as he wept at his helplessness and misery , This became more painful when he saw that his daughter saw him crying and thought how his family is starting to crumble because of this bastard who is satisfying his lust with his wife and her mother. Try to put yourself in his position. Swati clearly acted like a bitch even outside the bedroom , she forgot about how her husband had gone through so much pain and may have lost his confidence and his spirit due to his paralysis.
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Now , again why this story captivated so many readers is that this is not entirely fiction , this types of thing can happen if real life and i assume would be happening at some place. The points which can be learnt from this story are :
1) Never accept anyone's charity for running your home even from close friends and relatives as you will be in debt to them and we can't be sure of any one's intentions now a days just like Anshul accepted Jairaj's help and paid a heavy price for it. Chanakya had said that one of the most painful thing which a man have to bear is to live in someone's else house because at there they do not have any authority over their just like Anshul didn't question anything at Jairaj's house.
2) Men should care about their wife's sexual desires. Many times most men neglect their wives' satisfaction and just satisfy themselves after ejaculating.
Women need sex just as much as men to lead a happily married life. After sex men should not just go back to sleep which is an insult to his woman , rather they should cuddle , kiss and again perform oral on her to bring her orgasm. They should appreciate their women on her looks and try to make her feel realize that he finds her beautiful . You can buy her sexy lingerie and encourage her to take care of herself. Do not feel shy or hold during your sexual sessions . Wives and girlfriends get naked in front of you thinking that they will give you the one thing which they always hide and no other man is allowed to see only to satisfy you so you should also try your best to repay that pleasure. We can see Swati was heavily entranced by Jairaj because he didn't care just about his climax but also brought Swati to the verge of orgasm every time they were in bed, which she always find attractive.
3) Men should need to stand for themselves and their families . I am not talking about violence and aggression but just a little bit of confrontation when something wrong is happening to you, otherwise people will control you just like Jairaj & Swati controlled Anshul and took advantage of him. Women are attracted to men which show personality like the fictional characters which are an icon of masculinity like James Bond , Kabir Singh , Clint Eastwood , Muhammad Ali ( HE HAD A LINE OF WOMEN THROWING THEMSELVES AT HIM BECUASE OF HIS BOLDNESS WHEN TALKING TO SOMEONE OR GIVING ANY SPEECH) etc. I am certainly not saying that women like psychopaths and murderers ( Although before knowing that they were psychopaths , many women are drawn to them.) but they want a man which she can depend on . You may have heard the quote " THE MOST HEAVY WEIGHT , A WIFE CAN CARRY IS THE BURDEN OF A WEAK HUSBAND" . Here weak means someone who is really of no use , like lack of responsibility and i am not talking about any sick person .
Swati also liked and also became aroused how he kept everything under his control even her hubby which cleared her path to pursue her lover.
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I can suggest that Anshul should not die as he should face his fears stand up in front of Jairaj with the help of his son and to Swati and Jairaj a lesson, yes Swati should also be punished for what she had done. She should have to know the pain which her husband suffered because of her betrayal and rejection , she should realise that Jairaj was only using her and was not only tearing just her pussy but also her family too .This should continue as an ADULTERY STORY and not AN INCEST ONE because then it would lose it's originality . I find it hard to imagine that Srini would do something like that to his father as his father clearly loved him and he would definitely respected and loved his father as ANSHUL was genuinely a caring dad , so incest does not make any sense. Swati's children should come to know to about their mother's and Jairaj's affair and then Srini can seduce and bed Jairaj's daughters to claim his dominance over him. This would help to continue the story further and would be interesting like an adventure fiction. Srini can expose Jairaj affair to his brother in law, ASHWIN, about banging his wife and Urvashi being their illegitimate daughter . Maybe ANSHUL could also have some fling with Jairaj's wife ( Not anything sexual but an emotional affair as a plan) which can make Swati jealous , I know ANSHUL is not that stud but remember "WHAT DOESN,T KILL YOU, MAKES YOU STRONGRER". Swati has changed so why not Anshul .Srini could use JAIRAJ' daughters against him. to bring down their father and to throw him from MLA position and positioning himself over there to gain power over Jairaj. ASHWIN can be used as an ally in their plan as he would be more than happy to extract his revenge from Jairaj for making his wife pregnant, he can too bed Jairaj's wife and daughters along with Srini.
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