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Nub_Ag

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Abh Agge...

Rema kuch der vaise hi khud ko mehsus karti rehi , use apne ander kuch ajeeb sa mehsus ho reha tha , jaise uske ander kuch tha ,

"ufff , mera saar dard kar reha hai , ohh shhhh , kya karu..." rema apne saar ko dono hatho me kas kar dabate hue khud se hi boli ,

rema ki akhon ka rang vaisa hi kala tha , jo or bhi gehra hota ja reha tha , rema bina nahaye hi washroom se bahar a gai , voh dhere dhere agge badh bed par let gai , use abh dundla dundla sa hi dikh reha tha ,

rema ne apni akhen band kar li , abh use kuch rahat si mehsus ho rehi thi ,

"remaaaaahhhh..." ik behad dhemi awaz ne rema ki soch par viram laga diya , rema ne akhen khol as-pas dekha , par kuch nai tha ,

"ahhhhh , meraa sarrr..." rema tez dard se kahrahti hui apna saar pakad kar uth bethi ,

"remaahhhh..." phir se ik dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , rema ne phir se chehra ehder ohder kar dekha , par use kuch dikhai na diya ,

"ufffff , kon haiii ..." rema ne akhen band kar chila kar bola , jaise hi rema ne akhen band ki , use kuch dikhai dene laga ,

ik behad sunsan or veran jagah , charo traf agg hi agg , us agg ki uchi uchi lapto ke bech , use ik ladki dikhai di , uff yeh komal thi , jo agg me jal rehi thi , apne hi mayajaal me fasi hui ,

"ohh komalll dediiiiii , app es halat mee..." rema ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola , voh komal ki chavi ko saf dekh pa rehi thi ,

"remaaaahhhhh , bhyiaa kaa sathhh denaaa.." komal ne agg me jalte hue apne man me hi bola , uske man ki awaz rema saf sun pa rehi thi ,

"dediiii , me bhyia ka khyal rakhugiii , parrr , dediii , appp bhi aa jaooo , plsss.." rema ne rote hue bola , usse apni behan ki yeh halat dekhi nai ja rehi thi ,

"remaahhhh , me n..naaii.. aa..s...ss...saktiiii.." komal ne dard me kahrahte hue bola , or ika ik agg ki lapte tez ho gai or komal us dard me chekhne lagi , rema se komal ki yeh halat or dekhi na gai , usne apni akhen khol li ,

rema kuch der roti rehi , or phir uth kar room se bahar chali gai , abh rema , voh rema nai rehi thi , voh badal chuki thi ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi akhen fade us khofnak aurat ko ghure ja reha tha , voh aurat or koi nai , uski behan rekha thi ,

"aahahahahaaa , ravi , yeh hai , mera hukam ka ikka , abh tum ese mar nai sakte , kyu ki , yeh tumari behan hai , lekin yeh tume mar sakti hai , kyu ki yeh ik shetain hai..." biman shah ne haste hue thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

ravi sofe se uth khada hua , or rekha ki traf badne laga , barso bad , apni behan se mil reha tha , voh bhi es halat me ,

jo pyar ravi ne rema ko diya tha , vahi pyar usne apni badi behan rekha ko bhi diya tha , par ghar chodne ke bad , takriban 9 saalo bad , ajj voh rekha ko dekh reha tha ,

yaha ravi ki akhon me pyar or nami thi , vahi rekha ki akhon me , bus veshipan tha , uska jism etna byank tha , ke ravi apni hi behan se nazarian nai mila pa reha tha ,

baby abhi samne ki traf dekh rehi thi , usne abhi piche palat kar nai dekha tha , voh bus ravi ke chehre ko dekh rehi thi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi ke voh piche palat jaye ,

"rekha dediiii..." ravi ne behad pyar me bola ,

rekha ne vaise hi khamoshi se ravi ko ghur kar dekha , or phir palak japakte hi baby ke karib pahunch gai ,

"rukoo dediii..." ravi chila kar bola , par tabhi rekha ne apna ik hath baby ke kande par rakh diya , phir voh jor se chekhi , uski veshi byank dant , dikhne lage , jinko dekh ravi bhi kamp sa gya ,

baby bhi kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus kar , ander tak kamp gai , uski akhen or khul gai or gulabi honth kampne lage ,

"dediii , rukooo , baby koo chodd doo , apka gussa muz par haiiii , muzeee marr doo.." ravi ne rekha ki traf badte hue bola ,

par tabhi rekha ik bar or jor se chilayi , uski byank chekh sun , room me mazod sabhi log dar se kamp sa gye ,

baby ne himet juta jaise hi piche palat kar dekha , rekha ka byank roop dekh , baby toh jaise sun si padh gai , rekha jeti jagti , shetian ki murat thi ,

"aaaaaaaaaannnnhhhhhhhhh..." baby akhen band kar dar se kampte hue jor se chekhi , uski chekh etni tez thi ke lag reha tha jaise uska gala fat gya ho ,

rekha ne baby ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , baby ke pair abh hawa me zul rehe the , uski gardan ko rekha ne hath me kas rakha tha ,

"naii dediii..." ravi gusse se chilata hua rekha ki traf bhaga ,

rekha , baby ko uper uthaye hi , ravi ki traf dekh jor se chekhi , or baby ko hath se uper uthaye hi , ik traf ko fenk diya , baby uddti hui kanch ki khidki se ja takrai , pori kanch or lakadi ki voh khidki tut kar chakna chur ho gai , baby besudh hoker dewar ke sath hi niche gir gai ,

ravi ik dam se rekha ke samne khada tha , un dono ke bech bahut kam fasla tha , rekha apni vheshi nazarion se ravi ki akhon me dekh rehi thi ,

"chali jaoo , varnaaa , apko mar dunga mee.." ravi ne hath ki muthyion ko kas kar bola ,

"yeehiaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha jor se chekhi or ravi ko sath leker gyab ho gai , vaha se gyab hote hi dono ik andhere se nahaye jungle me pahunch gye ,

ravi sidha us jungle me jamen par ja gira , or uth kar as-pas dekhne laga , kyu ki rekha vaha nai thi ,

"dedii , samne ayoo..." ravi ne chila kar behad gusse me bola , or tabhi rekha uske samne a gai , andhere me uska roop or bhi khofnak lag reha tha ,

phir rekha ne bijli se bhi tez uddte hue , ravi ko gardan se pakad liya , or utha kar , door fenk diya , ravi uddta hua , ik pedh se ja takraya ,

ravi ki pith us pedh se lagte hi , pedh bhi jad se ukhad kar , ravi ke sath hi gir padha ,

"ahhhhh , shhh..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua khada ho gya , lekin abh vaha koi nai tha , us khofnak jungle me abh shanti thi ,

ravi ne apni akhen band ki , phir jab usne apni akhon ko khola toh , voh lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , or uska pora badan agg me jal reha tha ,

"rekhaa dediiiiii , samne ayooo..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uska badan abh behad lal ho chuka tha , pora badan agg ki tez lapto me nahaya hua tha ,

tabhi rekha phir se ravi ke samne a gai , ik ajeeb bat thi , voh abh tak kuch nai boli thi , bus khamosh thi ,

ravi gusse me pagal hua , rekha ki traf bhaga , or uske pas jaker , udd kar , ik jordar punch rekha ke chehre par kar diya , punch jadte hi ravi jamen par ik ghutne ke bal beth gya ,

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , tab voh herian reh gya , kyu ki rekha par uske punch ka koi asar nai hua tha ,

"ufff dedii , etni takatwar , ohhh , kya karuuu..." ravi ne vapis uthte hue khud se hi bola ,

"yaaaeeiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha ik bar or jor se chekhte hue ravi ke pas ayi ,

"ahhhhhhhhhh..." ravi ne gusse me kuch punch rekha ke chehre par jad diye , par rekha ko kuch asar na hua , phir rekha ne ravi ki gardan ko dono hatho me pakad use uper utha liya , or vaha se gyab ho gai ,

"ahhhh shhhhh..." ravi vapis usi flat me farsh par a gira ,

"ahahahahaaa , dekh li takat , yeh mera maksad pora karegi , jo komal na kar payi..." biman shah ne haste hue bola ,

ravi jamen se utha or ghutno ke bal bethte hue bola ,

"mm...me , akela nai huuu..." ravi ne dard se kahrahte hue muskra kar bola , or tabhi room me ik bar andhera chaa gya , jab dubara halki roshni hui , tab biman shah ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

"pitaaa jiii ..." ravi ne lagdate hue kaal ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

rekha , kaal ko dekh vaha se gyab ho gai , jaise vaha thi hi nai , abh vaha bus joker , or lara hi bache the ,
.
"me bhi ayi hu , ravi..." ik aurat ne andhere se bahar ate hue bola ,

"maya ..." ravi thoda ghambir hoker bola , ravi ko vishwas nai ho reha tha ke maya uski madad ke liye ayegi , kyu ki maya , kabhi haweli se bahar nai nikalti thi ,

"hmm , ravi , anna padha , tum jaisa insan nai dekha mane , etna pyar karne wala , or tumari behan komal , ufff , us jaisi ladki , sadyion tak nai dekhi mane , me toh kya , mere sath koi or bhi aya hai..." maya ne ghambir hoker muskra kar bola ,

tabhi maya ke piche se do ladkyian or samne a gai , yeh kaya or shaya thi , jinse ravi haweli me mila tha , abh voh bhi ravi ki madad karne ayi thi ,

"kaya , shaya , tum dono.." ravi herian sa hota hua bola , kyu ki en dono ko kaal ne haweli me kaid kar rakha tha ,

ravi behad khush tha , akhir uska plan kam kar gya tha , joker ko ulza kar , kaal ko vaha lana tha ,

jab tak ravi ne biman shah ko ulza rakha tha , tab tak kaal ne apni shakti se , ik mayajaal rach diya tha , abh biman shah es building se bahar nai ja sakta tha ,

"ahahahaaahaa , kaal , tumse milkar acha laga , tum ajj bhi vaise hi ho , jaise pehle the , kuch nai badla wakht ne , na tume or na muze , par , par , ik bat yeh hai , me badal chuka hu , or tum muze rok nai sakte..." biman shah ne apne asli roop me ate hue bola , abh voh joker ban chuka tha ,

"joker , tumne apni mariyda ko toda hai , ham insano se door rehte hain , tume eski saza milegi..." kaal ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ohh , mane apni mariyada ko toda , toh tumne konsa palan kiya hai , tumne , tumne us komal ko marne nai diya , use vampire bana diya , kyu , insan ka janam hi marne ke liye hota hai , par tumne , us bhagwan ke banaye nizam ko tod dala , phir tum kaise sahi hue..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"komal , voh meri beti hai , voh insan nai thi , agar voh marti , tab voh rekha jaisi shetian ban jati , use vampire bana , ik nayi jindgi di , jaise tume di thi , komal ne apni us nayi jindgi ko apne jeene ka jariya bana liya , usne apne bhai me , apni pori dunia dekh li , par tumari bhuk badti gai , tume es dunia par adhikar karna tha , abh tum batao , tum or komal , kaise ik ho sakte ho..." kaal ne behad shant hoker bola ,

"ahahahahaahaa , komal tumari beti hai , ravi tumara beta hai , es liye en dono ko tumne ik nayi jindgi di , par ik hai , jise mane nayi jindgi di , rekha , nam hai uska..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"sale , me tuze jaan se mar dunga , bol , meri behan ke sath kya kiya tune..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ravi shant ho jao , abhi swal rekha ka nai , es joker ka hai , ese rokna jaruri hai..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,

"muze , ahahahahahaa , muze , rokne se pehle , ravi , agar tum apne ghar par nazar dal lete , kyu ki , jante ho rekha kaha gai hai , nai jante , me bata deta hu , voh tumare ghar gai hai..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"kyaaaa , pita ji muze ghar jana hoga , meri behane insan hai , rekha dedi , unko mar degi..." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"nai , abh tum nai ja sakte , agar mane mayajaal toda , toh joker bhag jayega , tum nai ja sakte..." kaal ne thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

"par pita ji , rekha dedi bhi toh gai na , me kyu nai ja sakta , meri behane masom hain , insan hai voh , agar rekha dedi ka byank roop unhonu dekh liya , nai nai , muze jana hoga..." ravi ne apni akhen band karte hue bola ,

"ruko sona , pita ji thik bol rehe hain , tum nai ja sakte..." seema ne sofe se uthte hue bola ,

"pita ji , app eski bation me mat anna , yeh seema nai hai .." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ravi , me janta hu , jo kuch ho reha hai , seema kya hai , yeh bad me dekh lenge , pehle joker se nipat lete hain..." kaal ne apni akhon ka rang lal karte hue bola , jise dekh joker bhi kamp sa gya .... kya kaal sach me etna takatwar tha...

"ahhhhh rr...raviiii..." baby ne apne khoon se lathpath chehre ko dono hatho me dabaye dard se kahrahte hue bola ,

ravi bhag kar baby ke pas chala gya , ravi ne ghutno ke bal bethte hue , baby ka saar apni jangu par rakh liya ,

"ahhhhh.. rr...raviii...t..tt..tumari...jj..juhi...kk..ka...aa...antim....w...wakh...tt...aa..gyaa...bb..babuu." baby ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola ,

"ehhh juhi , aisa mat bol , me , me , tume kuch nai hone dunga , me bacha lunga tuze , me kaise , kaise , bhul gya tuze..." ravi ne beintha chekhte rote hue bola ,

"ummm , sssssshhh , b..bbabu..k..kk...kat...kkaa...kk...khyal...r..rakhnaaaaa..." baby ne etna bol apni akhen band kar li , ravi jor se chilata hua , uske chehre ko chumne laga , lekin baby , voh toh ja chuki thi ,

"juhii , juhii , tum meri atma ka voh hissa hai , jise koi muzse alag nai kar sakta , juhiiii , utho juhiiiiii , me marr jaugaaa , uthooo , juhiiiiiiiiiii , dekh , muze tera hath chahyie , muze khelna hai esse , uthna juhiiii , me pagal ho jaugaaa , juhiiiiii , ehhh , juhi meri jaan , mane mara tha , teri nisha ko , mar muze , marrr , aree martiii kyuuu naiii , juhiiii plsss , muze chod kar mat jaaa , pehle komal chali gai , abh tumm...juhiiiiiiii " ravi ne sadme me jate hue rote hue bola , voh pagal ho chuka tha , use kuch hosh nai tha , sab bus usi ko dekh rehe the , joker udas tha ,

"bechariii , ufff , ravi tum ho eske katil , tumne mara hai juhi ko , tumne , ahahahahahaaauuuuu ..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"rekhaaa dediiii , me tuze aisi mout dunga , tu yad rakhegi muze , meri masom juhi ko mar diya , muze mar deti..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ahahahaaahaaa , rekha ko kaise maroge , voh toh pehle hi mar chuki hai , ahahahaahahahuu..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola , jab ki ravi chonkte hue use dekh reha tha , uske kadmo me bejan baby ka jism padha hua tha....


to be counited....[ ik bar baby ki pori jindgi ko yad kar lena... kuch ajeeb sa feel hoga.. jaise baby sach me thi.. voh koi character na hoker ik.. jinda ladki thi.. OR han kal rat ko update ayega.. )









Emotional update juhi ke sath sahi nahi hua bhai aur rekha didi ke sath bhi woh bhi mar chuki hai kaal ne kaha ki agar komal mar jati toh woh bhi rekha jaisi ho jaati lekin rekha toh kaal ki beti nahi thi toh kaise aur kat ko jab baby ke baare me pata chalega tab kat ravi se naraz ho sakti hai khair rekha ke baare me jaane ke liye next update ka intezaar:waiting:
 

Abhi

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Rekha to ravi par havi ho gayi.
Usne maar maar kar ravi ki halat khrab kar di.
Ravi rekha ki ladai krte waqt kaal ko bula liya.
Usne aakar ek mahakaal rach diya.
Jisse jokar bhag nhi paye.
Kaal ke sath maya or kaya saya bhi aayi.
Rekha ne baby ko mar di.
Ravi ne rekha ko marne ki kasam khayi.
Rekha ab ravi ki bahne ko marne ghar ki tarf gayi.
Vahan uska samna rema se hogi.
Kya vo rema se jeet payegi.
Jokar ne rekha ko kya bana diya
 
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update-42

Abh Agge...

Rema kuch der vaise hi khud ko mehsus karti rehi , use apne ander kuch ajeeb sa mehsus ho reha tha , jaise uske ander kuch tha ,

"ufff , mera saar dard kar reha hai , ohh shhhh , kya karu..." rema apne saar ko dono hatho me kas kar dabate hue khud se hi boli ,

rema ki akhon ka rang vaisa hi kala tha , jo or bhi gehra hota ja reha tha , rema bina nahaye hi washroom se bahar a gai , voh dhere dhere agge badh bed par let gai , use abh dundla dundla sa hi dikh reha tha ,

rema ne apni akhen band kar li , abh use kuch rahat si mehsus ho rehi thi ,

"remaaaaahhhh..." ik behad dhemi awaz ne rema ki soch par viram laga diya , rema ne akhen khol as-pas dekha , par kuch nai tha ,

"ahhhhh , meraa sarrr..." rema tez dard se kahrahti hui apna saar pakad kar uth bethi ,

"remaahhhh..." phir se ik dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , rema ne phir se chehra ehder ohder kar dekha , par use kuch dikhai na diya ,

"ufffff , kon haiii ..." rema ne akhen band kar chila kar bola , jaise hi rema ne akhen band ki , use kuch dikhai dene laga ,

ik behad sunsan or veran jagah , charo traf agg hi agg , us agg ki uchi uchi lapto ke bech , use ik ladki dikhai di , uff yeh komal thi , jo agg me jal rehi thi , apne hi mayajaal me fasi hui ,

"ohh komalll dediiiiii , app es halat mee..." rema ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola , voh komal ki chavi ko saf dekh pa rehi thi ,

"remaaaahhhhh , bhyiaa kaa sathhh denaaa.." komal ne agg me jalte hue apne man me hi bola , uske man ki awaz rema saf sun pa rehi thi ,

"dediiii , me bhyia ka khyal rakhugiii , parrr , dediii , appp bhi aa jaooo , plsss.." rema ne rote hue bola , usse apni behan ki yeh halat dekhi nai ja rehi thi ,

"remaahhhh , me n..naaii.. aa..s...ss...saktiiii.." komal ne dard me kahrahte hue bola , or ika ik agg ki lapte tez ho gai or komal us dard me chekhne lagi , rema se komal ki yeh halat or dekhi na gai , usne apni akhen khol li ,

rema kuch der roti rehi , or phir uth kar room se bahar chali gai , abh rema , voh rema nai rehi thi , voh badal chuki thi ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi akhen fade us khofnak aurat ko ghure ja reha tha , voh aurat or koi nai , uski behan rekha thi ,

"aahahahahaaa , ravi , yeh hai , mera hukam ka ikka , abh tum ese mar nai sakte , kyu ki , yeh tumari behan hai , lekin yeh tume mar sakti hai , kyu ki yeh ik shetain hai..." biman shah ne haste hue thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

ravi sofe se uth khada hua , or rekha ki traf badne laga , barso bad , apni behan se mil reha tha , voh bhi es halat me ,

jo pyar ravi ne rema ko diya tha , vahi pyar usne apni badi behan rekha ko bhi diya tha , par ghar chodne ke bad , takriban 9 saalo bad , ajj voh rekha ko dekh reha tha ,

yaha ravi ki akhon me pyar or nami thi , vahi rekha ki akhon me , bus veshipan tha , uska jism etna byank tha , ke ravi apni hi behan se nazarian nai mila pa reha tha ,

baby abhi samne ki traf dekh rehi thi , usne abhi piche palat kar nai dekha tha , voh bus ravi ke chehre ko dekh rehi thi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi ke voh piche palat jaye ,

"rekha dediiii..." ravi ne behad pyar me bola ,

rekha ne vaise hi khamoshi se ravi ko ghur kar dekha , or phir palak japakte hi baby ke karib pahunch gai ,

"rukoo dediii..." ravi chila kar bola , par tabhi rekha ne apna ik hath baby ke kande par rakh diya , phir voh jor se chekhi , uski veshi byank dant , dikhne lage , jinko dekh ravi bhi kamp sa gya ,

baby bhi kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus kar , ander tak kamp gai , uski akhen or khul gai or gulabi honth kampne lage ,

"dediii , rukooo , baby koo chodd doo , apka gussa muz par haiiii , muzeee marr doo.." ravi ne rekha ki traf badte hue bola ,

par tabhi rekha ik bar or jor se chilayi , uski byank chekh sun , room me mazod sabhi log dar se kamp sa gye ,

baby ne himet juta jaise hi piche palat kar dekha , rekha ka byank roop dekh , baby toh jaise sun si padh gai , rekha jeti jagti , shetian ki murat thi ,

"aaaaaaaaaannnnhhhhhhhhh..." baby akhen band kar dar se kampte hue jor se chekhi , uski chekh etni tez thi ke lag reha tha jaise uska gala fat gya ho ,

rekha ne baby ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , baby ke pair abh hawa me zul rehe the , uski gardan ko rekha ne hath me kas rakha tha ,

"naii dediii..." ravi gusse se chilata hua rekha ki traf bhaga ,

rekha , baby ko uper uthaye hi , ravi ki traf dekh jor se chekhi , or baby ko hath se uper uthaye hi , ik traf ko fenk diya , baby uddti hui kanch ki khidki se ja takrai , pori kanch or lakadi ki voh khidki tut kar chakna chur ho gai , baby besudh hoker dewar ke sath hi niche gir gai ,

ravi ik dam se rekha ke samne khada tha , un dono ke bech bahut kam fasla tha , rekha apni vheshi nazarion se ravi ki akhon me dekh rehi thi ,

"chali jaoo , varnaaa , apko mar dunga mee.." ravi ne hath ki muthyion ko kas kar bola ,

"yeehiaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha jor se chekhi or ravi ko sath leker gyab ho gai , vaha se gyab hote hi dono ik andhere se nahaye jungle me pahunch gye ,

ravi sidha us jungle me jamen par ja gira , or uth kar as-pas dekhne laga , kyu ki rekha vaha nai thi ,

"dedii , samne ayoo..." ravi ne chila kar behad gusse me bola , or tabhi rekha uske samne a gai , andhere me uska roop or bhi khofnak lag reha tha ,

phir rekha ne bijli se bhi tez uddte hue , ravi ko gardan se pakad liya , or utha kar , door fenk diya , ravi uddta hua , ik pedh se ja takraya ,

ravi ki pith us pedh se lagte hi , pedh bhi jad se ukhad kar , ravi ke sath hi gir padha ,

"ahhhhh , shhh..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua khada ho gya , lekin abh vaha koi nai tha , us khofnak jungle me abh shanti thi ,

ravi ne apni akhen band ki , phir jab usne apni akhon ko khola toh , voh lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , or uska pora badan agg me jal reha tha ,

"rekhaa dediiiiii , samne ayooo..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uska badan abh behad lal ho chuka tha , pora badan agg ki tez lapto me nahaya hua tha ,

tabhi rekha phir se ravi ke samne a gai , ik ajeeb bat thi , voh abh tak kuch nai boli thi , bus khamosh thi ,

ravi gusse me pagal hua , rekha ki traf bhaga , or uske pas jaker , udd kar , ik jordar punch rekha ke chehre par kar diya , punch jadte hi ravi jamen par ik ghutne ke bal beth gya ,

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , tab voh herian reh gya , kyu ki rekha par uske punch ka koi asar nai hua tha ,

"ufff dedii , etni takatwar , ohhh , kya karuuu..." ravi ne vapis uthte hue khud se hi bola ,

"yaaaeeiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha ik bar or jor se chekhte hue ravi ke pas ayi ,

"ahhhhhhhhhh..." ravi ne gusse me kuch punch rekha ke chehre par jad diye , par rekha ko kuch asar na hua , phir rekha ne ravi ki gardan ko dono hatho me pakad use uper utha liya , or vaha se gyab ho gai ,

"ahhhh shhhhh..." ravi vapis usi flat me farsh par a gira ,

"ahahahahaaa , dekh li takat , yeh mera maksad pora karegi , jo komal na kar payi..." biman shah ne haste hue bola ,

ravi jamen se utha or ghutno ke bal bethte hue bola ,

"mm...me , akela nai huuu..." ravi ne dard se kahrahte hue muskra kar bola , or tabhi room me ik bar andhera chaa gya , jab dubara halki roshni hui , tab biman shah ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

"pitaaa jiii ..." ravi ne lagdate hue kaal ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

rekha , kaal ko dekh vaha se gyab ho gai , jaise vaha thi hi nai , abh vaha bus joker , or lara hi bache the ,
.
"me bhi ayi hu , ravi..." ik aurat ne andhere se bahar ate hue bola ,

"maya ..." ravi thoda ghambir hoker bola , ravi ko vishwas nai ho reha tha ke maya uski madad ke liye ayegi , kyu ki maya , kabhi haweli se bahar nai nikalti thi ,

"hmm , ravi , anna padha , tum jaisa insan nai dekha mane , etna pyar karne wala , or tumari behan komal , ufff , us jaisi ladki , sadyion tak nai dekhi mane , me toh kya , mere sath koi or bhi aya hai..." maya ne ghambir hoker muskra kar bola ,

tabhi maya ke piche se do ladkyian or samne a gai , yeh kaya or shaya thi , jinse ravi haweli me mila tha , abh voh bhi ravi ki madad karne ayi thi ,

"kaya , shaya , tum dono.." ravi herian sa hota hua bola , kyu ki en dono ko kaal ne haweli me kaid kar rakha tha ,

ravi behad khush tha , akhir uska plan kam kar gya tha , joker ko ulza kar , kaal ko vaha lana tha ,

jab tak ravi ne biman shah ko ulza rakha tha , tab tak kaal ne apni shakti se , ik mayajaal rach diya tha , abh biman shah es building se bahar nai ja sakta tha ,

"ahahahaaahaa , kaal , tumse milkar acha laga , tum ajj bhi vaise hi ho , jaise pehle the , kuch nai badla wakht ne , na tume or na muze , par , par , ik bat yeh hai , me badal chuka hu , or tum muze rok nai sakte..." biman shah ne apne asli roop me ate hue bola , abh voh joker ban chuka tha ,

"joker , tumne apni mariyda ko toda hai , ham insano se door rehte hain , tume eski saza milegi..." kaal ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ohh , mane apni mariyada ko toda , toh tumne konsa palan kiya hai , tumne , tumne us komal ko marne nai diya , use vampire bana diya , kyu , insan ka janam hi marne ke liye hota hai , par tumne , us bhagwan ke banaye nizam ko tod dala , phir tum kaise sahi hue..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"komal , voh meri beti hai , voh insan nai thi , agar voh marti , tab voh rekha jaisi shetian ban jati , use vampire bana , ik nayi jindgi di , jaise tume di thi , komal ne apni us nayi jindgi ko apne jeene ka jariya bana liya , usne apne bhai me , apni pori dunia dekh li , par tumari bhuk badti gai , tume es dunia par adhikar karna tha , abh tum batao , tum or komal , kaise ik ho sakte ho..." kaal ne behad shant hoker bola ,

"ahahahahaahaa , komal tumari beti hai , ravi tumara beta hai , es liye en dono ko tumne ik nayi jindgi di , par ik hai , jise mane nayi jindgi di , rekha , nam hai uska..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"sale , me tuze jaan se mar dunga , bol , meri behan ke sath kya kiya tune..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ravi shant ho jao , abhi swal rekha ka nai , es joker ka hai , ese rokna jaruri hai..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,

"muze , ahahahahahaa , muze , rokne se pehle , ravi , agar tum apne ghar par nazar dal lete , kyu ki , jante ho rekha kaha gai hai , nai jante , me bata deta hu , voh tumare ghar gai hai..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"kyaaaa , pita ji muze ghar jana hoga , meri behane insan hai , rekha dedi , unko mar degi..." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"nai , abh tum nai ja sakte , agar mane mayajaal toda , toh joker bhag jayega , tum nai ja sakte..." kaal ne thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

"par pita ji , rekha dedi bhi toh gai na , me kyu nai ja sakta , meri behane masom hain , insan hai voh , agar rekha dedi ka byank roop unhonu dekh liya , nai nai , muze jana hoga..." ravi ne apni akhen band karte hue bola ,

"ruko sona , pita ji thik bol rehe hain , tum nai ja sakte..." seema ne sofe se uthte hue bola ,

"pita ji , app eski bation me mat anna , yeh seema nai hai .." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ravi , me janta hu , jo kuch ho reha hai , seema kya hai , yeh bad me dekh lenge , pehle joker se nipat lete hain..." kaal ne apni akhon ka rang lal karte hue bola , jise dekh joker bhi kamp sa gya .... kya kaal sach me etna takatwar tha...

"ahhhhh rr...raviiii..." baby ne apne khoon se lathpath chehre ko dono hatho me dabaye dard se kahrahte hue bola ,

ravi bhag kar baby ke pas chala gya , ravi ne ghutno ke bal bethte hue , baby ka saar apni jangu par rakh liya ,

"ahhhhh.. rr...raviii...t..tt..tumari...jj..juhi...kk..ka...aa...antim....w...wakh...tt...aa..gyaa...bb..babuu." baby ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola ,

"ehhh juhi , aisa mat bol , me , me , tume kuch nai hone dunga , me bacha lunga tuze , me kaise , kaise , bhul gya tuze..." ravi ne beintha chekhte rote hue bola ,

"ummm , sssssshhh , b..bbabu..k..kk...kat...kkaa...kk...khyal...r..rakhnaaaaa..." baby ne etna bol apni akhen band kar li , ravi jor se chilata hua , uske chehre ko chumne laga , lekin baby , voh toh ja chuki thi ,

"juhii , juhii , tum meri atma ka voh hissa hai , jise koi muzse alag nai kar sakta , juhiiii , utho juhiiiiii , me marr jaugaaa , uthooo , juhiiiiiiiiiii , dekh , muze tera hath chahyie , muze khelna hai esse , uthna juhiiii , me pagal ho jaugaaa , juhiiiiii , ehhh , juhi meri jaan , mane mara tha , teri nisha ko , mar muze , marrr , aree martiii kyuuu naiii , juhiiii plsss , muze chod kar mat jaaa , pehle komal chali gai , abh tumm...juhiiiiiiii " ravi ne sadme me jate hue rote hue bola , voh pagal ho chuka tha , use kuch hosh nai tha , sab bus usi ko dekh rehe the , joker udas tha ,

"bechariii , ufff , ravi tum ho eske katil , tumne mara hai juhi ko , tumne , ahahahahahaaauuuuu ..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"rekhaaa dediiii , me tuze aisi mout dunga , tu yad rakhegi muze , meri masom juhi ko mar diya , muze mar deti..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ahahahaaahaaa , rekha ko kaise maroge , voh toh pehle hi mar chuki hai , ahahahaahahahuu..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola , jab ki ravi chonkte hue use dekh reha tha , uske kadmo me bejan baby ka jism padha hua tha....


to be counited....[ ik bar baby ki pori jindgi ko yad kar lena... kuch ajeeb sa feel hoga.. jaise baby sach me thi.. voh koi character na hoker ik.. jinda ladki thi.. OR han kal rat ko update ayega.. )









Maja aa gya bhai iss update me esa feel hua jese avengers end game me thanos ko marne ke liye sab aaye ho,
Ab maja ayega ek sath 2 jaga par fight hogi

1. biman shan ki building me (joker, lara, seema) vs (ravi, kaal, maya, kaaya, shaya) is fight me bahot maja ayega kyu ki ek taraf sab vampire he aur dusri taraf biman, lara, aur seema ke pas kuch alag hi powers he, seema aur biman ki power ka to pata nahi par lara to magical nijja he use bhi harana aasan nahi hoga, aur kaal ke mayajaal ki vaja se ab sabhi us building me ked ho gaye he to dekh te kon last me bahar nikalta he use building mese

2. Ravi ke ghar pe rekha gai he vaha par bhi rekha vs rema fight hogi syad, ab dekhte he vaha kya hoga, kyu ki rema ko uski saktiya abhi thodi der pahele mili he to vo iss fight me apni puri sakti istemal na kar paye syad ya fir uski saktiya uske kabu ke bahar ho jaye aur vo rekha ko jada hi nukasan pahocha de.

Muje bas ek bat puchni thi ke ravi ma abhi kaha he kya vo bhi ravi ke ghar me hi rahe rahi he seema aur rema ke sath kyu ki bahot time se uska is kahani me koi bat nahi hui ke vo abhi kaha he

Juhi urf baby ki life bahot dard vali biti he
Uska bachpan to bahot acha gya par jab vo javan hui vo apni best friend nisha ke sath khus thi par uski khubsurti ke vaja se use don ka bhai use pana chahta tha , use time to ravi to ravi ne use bacha liya fir juhi ko ravi se lagav ho gya vo use leke aai apne pas use bad use ravi se pyar ho gaya but last me use laga ke use pyar ne uski best friend neha ko mar diya he, tab bichari ke dil par kya biti hogi kyu ki ravi aur nisha dono juhi ke dil ke do part the jo ki tut gye nisha ki mout ke bad aur juhi ka dil pather ka ban gya aur vo baby ban gai, us bichari ne bahot dukh dekha jiske mukable use bahot kam khushi mili he, ab uski life me nisha ki jaga kat ne leli he aur ravi ke sath use jo galat fami thi vo bhi dur ho gai he, par kahi na kahi vo apni nisha ko yad kar ke roti hogi tarapti hogi uski yad me uski avaj sunne ke liye jo sayad ab kabhi vo nahi sun payegi.:alright3:

Ravi ki friend rani vampire vo nahi ane vali vapas kahani me ?
jo use aur baby ko jungle me zopdi me mili aur vo ravi ko kaal ke pas le gai thi vo vali rani.:bigboss1:

Iss vale part ke end tak baby ko juhi bana dena means abhi vo foreigner dikhti he plastic surgery ke vaja se but jab vo apne pehele vale roop me aa jayegi tab ravi ka reaction dekh me maja ayega,
Vese bhi videshi ladkiya kitni bhi gori kyu na hu par hamari desi ladki ke chahere ki chamak ke agge uska gora pan bekar he,
Mere pas ek suggestion he apko acha lage to use karna-
"Abhi to baby mar gai he but ap kese bhi use vapis to laoge hi kyu ab vo bhi kaahani me ab komal, seema ke barab he, to jab use dusri life mile usme uska ye banaya huya inasi naki chahera nikal jaye aur uska real chahera vapas aa jaye yesa ho to maja ayega"
Baby yani juhi ko uske real chahere ke sath dekh ke kat ka kya reaction hoga vo use dekh ke khus hogi ya dukhi ?

Bhai bahot maja aa raha he apke sath iss story me bane rahene me, bhai ap bahot ache ho jo apni job me se time nikal ke hame khusiya bat rahe ho aur sabhi ki comments pad ke unhe reply bhi karte ho, aur sorry yar me kuch jada hi bade comment karta hu par kya karu apki story hi yesi he choti comment kar nahi sakta

Thanks bhai yese hi sath banaye rakhna ap bhi
 

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friends next update kal rat ko dunga.. fighting update hai.. toh mushkil se adha hi likh paya tha.. or ajj daru bhi jayda gatak li.. :D
:mad: aaj update do mera wese hi last update se khiska huwa hai mujhe lagta hai ki baby ko kaal jinda karega yaa fir ravi
Isliye ruka hu warna kal ke update ke liye galiya banti hai meri:angry:
 
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