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Abh agge...

Baby apni beti fari ko apne seene se lagaye leti rehi , voh mehsus karti rehi apni beti ko ,
baby abh ravi ke bare me soch rehi thi , uff uski bhi koi galti nai thi , yeh toh tha nai ke ravi janbuz kar fari se na milne aya ho ,

ravi kyu nai aya , voh kaha tha , yeh bat baby dil ki gehrai se samazti thi , use pata tha ravi kaisa insan hai , ravi se badkar uski beti ko pyar , es dunia me koi nai kar sakta ,

"are utho tum dono , jana nai hai kya..." kat muskrate hue boli , voh naha kar ready ho chuki thi ,

"hmm , chalo , ik mint meri beti toh ready hui hi nai..." baby uth kar fari ka matha chumte hue boli ,

"baby me tyar karti hu , chalo meri bachi ayo jaldi..." kat bhi fari ke pas akar use god me uthate hue boli ,

"fari ko kya pasand hai , vahi pehna do.." baby , fari ke kapde use dikhate hue boli ,

"baby yar ik bat kahu , fari ke baalo ne muze bahut preshan kiya , tum yaha thi nai , yeh muzse kehti , baalo ki do chotyia karo , maa kasam , meri toh halat kharab kar di , lekin dhere dhere mane baalo ke design banana sikh liya , hai na betu..." kat , fari ke baalo ki chotyia banate hue boli ,

"han mumma..." fari , kat ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

karib 1 ghante bad sab tyar the , baby ne ik leave application likh di thi , tain ki fari ko school se kuch dino ki leave mil jaye ,

phir dono ghar se bahar akar school bus ka intzar karne lagi , jab tak bus ati , tab tak baby ne kapdo se bhara bag gadi ki diggi me rakh liya ,

karib 10 mint bad school bus bhi a gai , kat ne voh leave application bus me bethi ik teacher ko de di , or vapis baby ke pas a gai , kat ne ajj bhi mehsus kiya , bus driver use kaise ghur ghur kar dekh reha tha , lekin usne yeh normal bat samaz kar chod diya ,

baby ne gadi start ki or tino jungle ki traf nikal padhe , tino me hassi-mazak chalta reha , kyu ki pariwar jab sath ho , tab khushyian hi milti hain...


vahi dusri traf....

ravi gadi se gyab hoker ik anjan si jagah par pahunch gya tha , as-pas hara bhara jungle tha , or ik zopdi si dikh rehi thi , ravi preshan sa hua us zopdi ki traf badne laga ,

"hlo koi haii , kisne muze gyab kiya , ladna hai , samne ayo , me shetian hu , shetian , samne ayo , buzdil kahi ke..." ravi zopdi ki traf badte gusse me chila kar bola ,

ravi ne zopdi me ghus kar dekha , zopdi ik dam khali thi , ander koi nai tha , ik chota sa bistar tha , ghas ka , ik mitti ka matka tha pani ka , or kuch nai ,

"kon haiiii , shetian ko bula , khud chup gya , samne ayoo ..." ravi zopdi se bahar akar gusse se chila kar bola ,

"raviii , gussa kam karo , shant raho , wakht ne tume badal diya , kisan se shetian , yahi toh wakht ki maar hai , kal apne gaon me the , ik khushhal jindgi gujarte hue or ajj ik darinde ban gye ho..." ik rahasmayi awaz ravi ko sunai di , par yeh sirf awaz thi , kuch dikhai nai de reha tha ,

"huuu , kon ho app , samne kyu nai ate..." ravi ne paglu ki trah as-pas nazar dodate hue bola ,

"jab tum tut chuke the , tab tume vapis behj diya , me vahi hu , bhul gye kya..." vahi awaz phir se ravi ko sunai di ,

"baba..." ravi ghutno ke bal beth gya , usne saar zuka liya , use sab yad tha , insan chahe jis mukam par pahunch jaye , apni jindgi ke kale din kabhi nai bhul sakta , jin lamhu ne dard diya ho , us dard ke ghav kabhi koi bhula nai sakta ,

"han me hu , tume toh bahut jalad yad a gya..." phir se vahi rahasmayi awaz ravi ko sunai di ,

"baba , apko kaise bhul sakta hu , app ne nayi jindgi di muze , agar app , han app , us wakht muze vapis na behjte , me na toh apni seema ko pa sakta or na apni komal ko , app mere liye sab kuch ho..." ravi ne behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"mane toh insan ko vapis behja tha , par tum toh shetian ban gye..."

"baba halato ne muze shetian bana diya , ik darinda bana diya , pyar pate pate me darinda ban gya , lekin baba me bura nai hu , lad reha hu khud se , apne usi pyar ko pane ke liye , hasshh , app sab jante ho , kuch nai chupa apse..." ravi ne akhen band kar behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"han janta hu beta , shiv bhagwan ko tum ache lage , tumare karam ache lage , or me toh shiv ka sevak hu , jo voh chahte hain vahi kehta hu , vahi karta hu , tumne jindgi ki har ladai pyar se jeeti hai , bure logu ko achai ke raste par laye , ache logu ka sath diya , lekin..." baba bolte bolte tham sa gye ,

"lekin kya baba..." ravi bhi thoda preshan sa hoker bola ,

"behan ka pyar nai mila..."

"nai mila baba , usi behan ke liye toh tadaf reha hu , jab bhi use pana chahta hu , tab koi na koi burai mere raste me a jati hai , es bar..." ravi abhi bol hi reha tha ke baba bech me bol padhe ,

"es bar ring pehne voh aurat a gai , hota hai , shiv kehte hain , yeh sansar nashhen hai , kuch bhi jevat nai hai , jo sundar hai use bhi nasht hona hai , tumari komal ik rahasmayi ladki hai , use pana , kisi ke bas ki bat nai , shiv kehte hain , aisi ladki ka janam sadyion me ik bar hota hai , jo paviterta ke sath janam leti hai , or akhri sans tak paviter rehti hai..." baba ki awaz ne ravi ko sab sachai batate hue bola ,

"par baba , me use chahta hu , janta hu voh anokhi hai , es dunia se alag hai , lekin me use paker rahuga..."

"voh aurat dunia barbad kar degi , use map chahyie , voh us takat ko pana chahti hai , jo shiv bhagwan ne chupa rakhi hai , es dunia se , tum rok pauge use ..." baba ne ravi ko chetavni si dete hue bola ,

"rokuga or maruga bhi , me use us paviter takat tak kabhi nai pahunchne dunga , chahe meri jaan kyu na chali jaye..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ravi marna asan nai hota , apni jindgi par nazar dalo , tum akele nai ho , me akela hu , sansar se door , kudrat ke bech , shiv se juda hua , tum akele kabhi the hi nai , tumari jindgi kai jindgyion se judi hui hai , tumari patni , tumari behne , tumse pyar karne wali premikyian , tum mar nai sakte , agar tume akele rakhna hota , toh me tume apne pas se kabhi door jane hi nai deta , shiv ne muzse kaha , tume ant karna hai , us shetiani ring ka , dunia ko mukti dilao us shetian ring se , sadyion se jo pap prithvi par badh reha hai , voh sab es ring ki burai ke karan badh reha hai , har buri cheez ka ik kainder hota hai , insan agar bura hai toh es burai ka kainder uska man hai , agar prithvi par burai hai , toh eska kainder voh ring hai..." baba ki shant or naram awaz ravi ko sab samaza rehi thi , unke ik ik shabad me vastvik sachai thi ,

"hasshh , par baba voh ring us aurat ne dharan ki hui hai , or agar voh apni icha se ring nai utaregi , tab tak me uska kuch nai bhigad sakta , kya karu , meri pori takat viarth hai ..." ravi ne apna chehra zuka kar bola ,

"tum bahut kuch kar sakte ho , tumne apni jindgi kaha se suru ki , or ajj tum kaha pahunch gye , tum behad khas ho , khud ko kam samazna , kisi bhi insan ke liye hanikarak hota hai , koi bhi insan kamzor nai hota , use bus khud ki pehchan karni hoti hai , ring kyu hai , kis liye hai , tume ring se ladna hai , na ke us aurat se , ring ko nasht karne ki traf badoge , tab voh aurat khud ba khud nasht ho jayegi..."

"par baba , ring ko kaise nasht karu , jab ke es dunia me sab jante hain , ring amar hai , use koi nai maar sakta , vaise bhi voh ring nai , meri behan suhana hai , jo muze paker apna badla lena chahti hai ..." ravi ne suhana ko yad kar thoda gusse me bola ,

"suhana toh seema hai , or seema ne tume pa liya hai , tumari patni bankar , ring kabhi suhana thi hi nai , ring ik burai hai , shetian ka ansh..." baba abhi bol hi rehe the , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"me kuch samaza nai..."

"jab suhana ne 6 kuwari kanyion ki bali di , tab brehmand me virajman shetian , apni supat awashta se jag utha , suhana ke man ke bheter upzi beintha burai or nafrat ne shetian ko bahut parbhavit kiya , use suhana achi lagi , jab suhana bar bar use apna pita kehti rehi , tab shetian ne use apni beti man liya , apni burai ka ik ansh usne , suhana ko vardan ke roop me de diya , abh suhana apne pita se jud chuki thi , uske ander uske pita shetian ki bemisal buri takato ka ansh palne laga tha , voh bura ansh jevat prani jaisa tha ..." baba abhi bol hi rehe the , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"ohh toh phir ring kaise bani..." ravi sab kuch janne ki icha se utsuk hote hue bola ,

"batata hu , jara dheraz rakho , jab voh bura ansh suhana ke man me palne laga , tab suhana ke man me burai ka parbhav es kadar badh gya , ke use apne pita ke elava kuch dikhai nai de reha tha , or ik dusra maksad tha , apne pita se milne ki beintha icha , uski icha shakti or voh bura ansh dono mil gye , tab suhana khud ik shetian ki devi ban gai , pari log me antim yudh me , usne sab ko mar diya , pari log tabah kar diya , tab tumari behan sumon , jo abh rema ke roop me janam le chuki hai , usne apni kali shaktiyion se suhana ke jism ka nash kar diya..."

"acha toh rema ne suhana ko mara tha , yeh bat toh me janta hu , khushi ne batai thi..."

"han , rema ne suhana ka ant kiya tha , suhana ka jism jal kar rakh ho gya , par shetian ka voh jevat ansh abh bhi azad tha , rema ne apni pori takat laga , ik ring ka nirman kiya , or us ansh ko us ring me dal diya , rema es jung me behad kamzor ho gai thi , tabhi use bhi kisi ne dhoke se mar diya ..." baba ne rema ke bare me batate hue kaha ,

"abh samaz gya , me sab samaz gya , ring me shetian ka ansh hai , use ik jism chahyie , voh jism bhi vahi chahti hai , jisne uske ansh ko sabse pehle dharan kiya tha..." ravi sab samazta hua bola ,

han , or voh jism kiska hai..." baba ne ik swal kiya ,

"matlab seema ka jism..." ravi ika ik bola ,

"han , seema hi suhana hai , ring ko jism bhi seema ka hi chayie , ik bat or , agar seema ne ring dharan kar li , toh voh komal ki bali degi , or shetian pori trah se jagrit hoker , es prithvi par phail jayega , voh nash kar dega , ik ik insan ka , ik ik jevat cheez ka , tume rokna hai , ring ko , ring seema ke jariye komal tak pahunche , usse pehle tume ring ka nash karna hoga..."

"baba me samaz gya , kyu kal rat us aurat ne muze komal ke nazdik nai jane diye , voh us aurat ne nai , ring ne kiya tha , ring chahti hai , komal paviter rehe , eska matlab ajj tak , me komal ke karib na ja saka , kyu ki ring komal ki bali dena chahti hai , kyu ki akhri bali suhana ko meri behan ruhi ki deni thi , or ruhi es janam me komal hai , ohhh sab samaz gya baba me..." ravi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"han , komal ko tum tabhi pa sakte ho , jab ring ka vinash karuge , ring ke jevat rehte , komal kabhi tumari nai ho sakti , yeh es janam me hi nai , har janam me hoga , tumare pas abh bhi wakht hai , ring ko nasht kar do..." baba ne ravi ko chetavni dete hue bola ,

"baba , pehle muze us aurat ko rokna hoga , use khatam kar , ring ko azad karvana hoga , phir me ring ka ant kar sakuga..."

"us aurat ko marna etna asan nai hoga , tumari behan rema , tumare or us aurat ke bech hamesha khadi rehegi , tume usse bhi ladna hoga , uske ander vahi shaktiyian jagrit hain , jo pichle janam me uske pas thi..."

"kya karu phir me , kis trah roku me us aurat ko..."

"ik rasta hai , rema ko kisne mara tha , yeh pata kar lo , ho na ho , shyad esi aurat ne rema ko mara tha , tume rema ko yeh ehsas dilana hoga , ke voh galat hai , jab rema ko ehsas hoga , tab rema us aurat ko khatam kar degi , uske bad tum ring ke ander jaker uska ant kar dena..." baba ki awaz ne ik rasta ravi ko batate hue bola ,

"matlab , ring ke ander jaker , me kuch samaza nai..."

"abhi eska wakht nai , pehle tum us aurat ke bare me socho , shiv ki us paviter takat ki raksha karo , shehar me phail rehi burai ka ant karo , tumari ik beti bhi hai..." baba ki awaz ne ik swal kiya ,

"han baba , fari nam hai uska , par me uska badkismat baap , use koi khushi nai de paya , uski nazarion me meri pata nai kaisi chavi ban rehi hogi , baba ik bat sache dil se kahuga , me apni beti ko bahut pyar karta hu , bahut jayda , par kabhi jata nai paya , par app kyu puch rehe ho..." ravi ne fari ko beintha yad karke nam akhon se bola ,

"wakht anne par batauga , fari ko mera pyar dena , voh bahut khas ladki hai , ik din voh tumare liye kuch bahut bada karegi , tum ik ache baap banna , abh jao ghar..."

"lekin agar muze apse phir se milna hua toh..." ravi ne jamen se uthte hue bola ,

"shiv ko yad karke , muze yad kar lena , me a jauga , jao abh..." baba ki awaz ne etna kaha , ravi gyab hoker vapis kabile me pahunch gya , usi nadi kinare yaha kal rat voh rema ke sath wakht beeta reha tha....

vahi dusri traf...

dhupehar ke 2 baj rehe the , joker apni building me ehder ohder ghum reha tha , voh betab tha , apne purane dushman ravi ko mat dene ke liye ,

Eliza subah se us formule par kam kar rehi thi , formula ban kar tyar tha , bus Eliza kuch badlav chahti thi , jo usne abh tak shyad pore kar liye the ,

apne kam ke wakht bhi , voh bus lara ko yad karti rehi , lara ke bina uski jindgi mayus si ho gai thi , lara se uska rishta behad gehra tha , lara uski es dunia me antim dost thi , uske dil ke behad karib thi ,

apne formule ko complete kar Eliza , joker ke pas pahunch gai , joker apne jadu se Eliza ko ik behad parchin khandar me le gya , yeh parchin khandar shehar ke bahar tha , sadyion purana , ajj chahe yeh khandar me tabdel ho chuka tha , lekin eski tuti-futi deeware eski mazodgi ka ehsas ajj bhi logo ko karvati rehti thi ,

"sir ham yaha kyu aye hain..." Eliza beth ne khandar ke niche ik gupt gufa me sedyian utar niche jate hue bola ,

"Eliza yahi toh dafan hai , mere dushman ravi ki mout ka raz , ahahahahu , abhi dikhata hu , kon hai voh..." joker behad vehshi andaz me bola ,

phir Eliza kuch na boli , joker use gupt gufa se hoker tehkane me le gya , lekin vaha charo traf ghor andhkar tha , joker ne apni hath ki chutki bajai toh tehkhane ki deewaro par aag ki machale jalne lagi ,

jab vaha halki halki roshni charo traf phail gai , tab Eliza ki nazar tehkhane ke bechu bech ik tabot par gai , joker us tabot ko dekh behad khush hua , joker ne tezi se agge badh us tabot ko khol diya , uske ander ik yodha ki mummy thi ,

"sir yeh kiski mummy hai ..."

"Eliza yeh ik khukar yodha , bereham katil , burai ka partik , eska nam hai Marko , hazaro saal pehle marko ne es shehar par hi nai , es prithvi par etna kohram machaya tha , me bata nai sakta , logo ke taze khoon se nahata tha , bereham , darinda , purani kathaon me ese narag ka beta kaha jata hai , abh es formule se me marko ko vapis jinda karuga , marko us ravi ko jaan se mar dega , ahahaha , abh hogi tabahii..." joker ne Growth formule ki bottle khol , ik boond marko ki bejan pattyion se dhaki mummy ke mathe par dal di ,

Eliza beth ki mehnat , or joker ki kali takato se mil kar bana Growth formula abh apna asar dikhane laga , dhere dhere marko ka jism hara padhne laga ,

Eliza beth or joker tabot se thoda door ho gya , ik tez dhamaka hua tabot me , safad dhua tabot se bahar nikalne laga , or tabhi ik hath tabot ke bahar nikala , or phir uth kar beth gya , narag ka beta marko.....


vahi dusri traf....

ravi nadi kinare betha tha , uske man ke behter kai swal chal rehe the , jindgi kya hai , voh pehla din , jab voh kheto me kam kar reha tha , uski behan rema uske liye khana layi thi , phir uska or rema ka ik anokha rishta bana , phir voh shehar aya ,

shehar akar komal , shurti or rimi se mila , seema uski jindgi me ayi , saima uski jindgi me ayi , phir voh komal or seema se alag hua , juhi uski jindgi me ayi ,

phir khushi uski jindgi me ayi , dhere dhere use apna khoya sab kuch mil gya , jab voh mar kar darinda bana , tab ring uski jindgi me ayi , or ajj use pata chala , voh komal ke karib kyu nai ja sakta , ik hi toh karan tha , ring ,

lekin abh ravi ke man me kuch chal reha tha , voh yeh tha , use apni beti fari se milna tha , use gale laga rona tha , ik baap ke man me kitni bhavnayian janam leti hain , yeh apni beti ko dikhana tha ,

ravi , baba se milne ke bad , apni beti se milne ke liye tadaf reha tha , uska man vichlat hua padha tha , uske dil ki har dhadkan me bus fari , fari nam gunj reha tha ,

ravi apni beti ke liye kuch karna chahta tha , ik acha or adarsh baap banna chahta tha , pata nai baap beti ka yeh rishta , abh kaha , kis traf agge badhta , par ik bat toh teh thi , ravi apni beti ke liye , jaan de bhi sakta tha , or kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta tha...


to be counited....[note- friends ring ki pori detail bata di hai , kuch swalo ke jawab apko mil gye honge...]

 

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Abh agge...

Baby apni beti fari ko apne seene se lagaye leti rehi , voh mehsus karti rehi apni beti ko ,
baby abh ravi ke bare me soch rehi thi , uff uski bhi koi galti nai thi , yeh toh tha nai ke ravi janbuz kar fari se na milne aya ho ,

ravi kyu nai aya , voh kaha tha , yeh bat baby dil ki gehrai se samazti thi , use pata tha ravi kaisa insan hai , ravi se badkar uski beti ko pyar , es dunia me koi nai kar sakta ,

"are utho tum dono , jana nai hai kya..." kat muskrate hue boli , voh naha kar ready ho chuki thi ,

"hmm , chalo , ik mint meri beti toh ready hui hi nai..." baby uth kar fari ka matha chumte hue boli ,

"baby me tyar karti hu , chalo meri bachi ayo jaldi..." kat bhi fari ke pas akar use god me uthate hue boli ,

"fari ko kya pasand hai , vahi pehna do.." baby , fari ke kapde use dikhate hue boli ,

"baby yar ik bat kahu , fari ke baalo ne muze bahut preshan kiya , tum yaha thi nai , yeh muzse kehti , baalo ki do chotyia karo , maa kasam , meri toh halat kharab kar di , lekin dhere dhere mane baalo ke design banana sikh liya , hai na betu..." kat , fari ke baalo ki chotyia banate hue boli ,

"han mumma..." fari , kat ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

karib 1 ghante bad sab tyar the , baby ne ik leave application likh di thi , tain ki fari ko school se kuch dino ki leave mil jaye ,

phir dono ghar se bahar akar school bus ka intzar karne lagi , jab tak bus ati , tab tak baby ne kapdo se bhara bag gadi ki diggi me rakh liya ,

karib 10 mint bad school bus bhi a gai , kat ne voh leave application bus me bethi ik teacher ko de di , or vapis baby ke pas a gai , kat ne ajj bhi mehsus kiya , bus driver use kaise ghur ghur kar dekh reha tha , lekin usne yeh normal bat samaz kar chod diya ,

baby ne gadi start ki or tino jungle ki traf nikal padhe , tino me hassi-mazak chalta reha , kyu ki pariwar jab sath ho , tab khushyian hi milti hain...


vahi dusri traf....

ravi gadi se gyab hoker ik anjan si jagah par pahunch gya tha , as-pas hara bhara jungle tha , or ik zopdi si dikh rehi thi , ravi preshan sa hua us zopdi ki traf badne laga ,

"hlo koi haii , kisne muze gyab kiya , ladna hai , samne ayo , me shetian hu , shetian , samne ayo , buzdil kahi ke..." ravi zopdi ki traf badte gusse me chila kar bola ,

ravi ne zopdi me ghus kar dekha , zopdi ik dam khali thi , ander koi nai tha , ik chota sa bistar tha , ghas ka , ik mitti ka matka tha pani ka , or kuch nai ,

"kon haiiii , shetian ko bula , khud chup gya , samne ayoo ..." ravi zopdi se bahar akar gusse se chila kar bola ,

"raviii , gussa kam karo , shant raho , wakht ne tume badal diya , kisan se shetian , yahi toh wakht ki maar hai , kal apne gaon me the , ik khushhal jindgi gujarte hue or ajj ik darinde ban gye ho..." ik rahasmayi awaz ravi ko sunai di , par yeh sirf awaz thi , kuch dikhai nai de reha tha ,

"huuu , kon ho app , samne kyu nai ate..." ravi ne paglu ki trah as-pas nazar dodate hue bola ,

"jab tum tut chuke the , tab tume vapis behj diya , me vahi hu , bhul gye kya..." vahi awaz phir se ravi ko sunai di ,

"baba..." ravi ghutno ke bal beth gya , usne saar zuka liya , use sab yad tha , insan chahe jis mukam par pahunch jaye , apni jindgi ke kale din kabhi nai bhul sakta , jin lamhu ne dard diya ho , us dard ke ghav kabhi koi bhula nai sakta ,

"han me hu , tume toh bahut jalad yad a gya..." phir se vahi rahasmayi awaz ravi ko sunai di ,

"baba , apko kaise bhul sakta hu , app ne nayi jindgi di muze , agar app , han app , us wakht muze vapis na behjte , me na toh apni seema ko pa sakta or na apni komal ko , app mere liye sab kuch ho..." ravi ne behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"mane toh insan ko vapis behja tha , par tum toh shetian ban gye..."

"baba halato ne muze shetian bana diya , ik darinda bana diya , pyar pate pate me darinda ban gya , lekin baba me bura nai hu , lad reha hu khud se , apne usi pyar ko pane ke liye , hasshh , app sab jante ho , kuch nai chupa apse..." ravi ne akhen band kar behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"han janta hu beta , shiv bhagwan ko tum ache lage , tumare karam ache lage , or me toh shiv ka sevak hu , jo voh chahte hain vahi kehta hu , vahi karta hu , tumne jindgi ki har ladai pyar se jeeti hai , bure logu ko achai ke raste par laye , ache logu ka sath diya , lekin..." baba bolte bolte tham sa gye ,

"lekin kya baba..." ravi bhi thoda preshan sa hoker bola ,

"behan ka pyar nai mila..."

"nai mila baba , usi behan ke liye toh tadaf reha hu , jab bhi use pana chahta hu , tab koi na koi burai mere raste me a jati hai , es bar..." ravi abhi bol hi reha tha ke baba bech me bol padhe ,

"es bar ring pehne voh aurat a gai , hota hai , shiv kehte hain , yeh sansar nashhen hai , kuch bhi jevat nai hai , jo sundar hai use bhi nasht hona hai , tumari komal ik rahasmayi ladki hai , use pana , kisi ke bas ki bat nai , shiv kehte hain , aisi ladki ka janam sadyion me ik bar hota hai , jo paviterta ke sath janam leti hai , or akhri sans tak paviter rehti hai..." baba ki awaz ne ravi ko sab sachai batate hue bola ,

"par baba , me use chahta hu , janta hu voh anokhi hai , es dunia se alag hai , lekin me use paker rahuga..."

"voh aurat dunia barbad kar degi , use map chahyie , voh us takat ko pana chahti hai , jo shiv bhagwan ne chupa rakhi hai , es dunia se , tum rok pauge use ..." baba ne ravi ko chetavni si dete hue bola ,

"rokuga or maruga bhi , me use us paviter takat tak kabhi nai pahunchne dunga , chahe meri jaan kyu na chali jaye..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ravi marna asan nai hota , apni jindgi par nazar dalo , tum akele nai ho , me akela hu , sansar se door , kudrat ke bech , shiv se juda hua , tum akele kabhi the hi nai , tumari jindgi kai jindgyion se judi hui hai , tumari patni , tumari behne , tumse pyar karne wali premikyian , tum mar nai sakte , agar tume akele rakhna hota , toh me tume apne pas se kabhi door jane hi nai deta , shiv ne muzse kaha , tume ant karna hai , us shetiani ring ka , dunia ko mukti dilao us shetian ring se , sadyion se jo pap prithvi par badh reha hai , voh sab es ring ki burai ke karan badh reha hai , har buri cheez ka ik kainder hota hai , insan agar bura hai toh es burai ka kainder uska man hai , agar prithvi par burai hai , toh eska kainder voh ring hai..." baba ki shant or naram awaz ravi ko sab samaza rehi thi , unke ik ik shabad me vastvik sachai thi ,

"hasshh , par baba voh ring us aurat ne dharan ki hui hai , or agar voh apni icha se ring nai utaregi , tab tak me uska kuch nai bhigad sakta , kya karu , meri pori takat viarth hai ..." ravi ne apna chehra zuka kar bola ,

"tum bahut kuch kar sakte ho , tumne apni jindgi kaha se suru ki , or ajj tum kaha pahunch gye , tum behad khas ho , khud ko kam samazna , kisi bhi insan ke liye hanikarak hota hai , koi bhi insan kamzor nai hota , use bus khud ki pehchan karni hoti hai , ring kyu hai , kis liye hai , tume ring se ladna hai , na ke us aurat se , ring ko nasht karne ki traf badoge , tab voh aurat khud ba khud nasht ho jayegi..."

"par baba , ring ko kaise nasht karu , jab ke es dunia me sab jante hain , ring amar hai , use koi nai maar sakta , vaise bhi voh ring nai , meri behan suhana hai , jo muze paker apna badla lena chahti hai ..." ravi ne suhana ko yad kar thoda gusse me bola ,

"suhana toh seema hai , or seema ne tume pa liya hai , tumari patni bankar , ring kabhi suhana thi hi nai , ring ik burai hai , shetian ka ansh..." baba abhi bol hi rehe the , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"me kuch samaza nai..."

"jab suhana ne 6 kuwari kanyion ki bali di , tab brehmand me virajman shetian , apni supat awashta se jag utha , suhana ke man ke bheter upzi beintha burai or nafrat ne shetian ko bahut parbhavit kiya , use suhana achi lagi , jab suhana bar bar use apna pita kehti rehi , tab shetian ne use apni beti man liya , apni burai ka ik ansh usne , suhana ko vardan ke roop me de diya , abh suhana apne pita se jud chuki thi , uske ander uske pita shetian ki bemisal buri takato ka ansh palne laga tha , voh bura ansh jevat prani jaisa tha ..." baba abhi bol hi rehe the , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"ohh toh phir ring kaise bani..." ravi sab kuch janne ki icha se utsuk hote hue bola ,

"batata hu , jara dheraz rakho , jab voh bura ansh suhana ke man me palne laga , tab suhana ke man me burai ka parbhav es kadar badh gya , ke use apne pita ke elava kuch dikhai nai de reha tha , or ik dusra maksad tha , apne pita se milne ki beintha icha , uski icha shakti or voh bura ansh dono mil gye , tab suhana khud ik shetian ki devi ban gai , pari log me antim yudh me , usne sab ko mar diya , pari log tabah kar diya , tab tumari behan sumon , jo abh rema ke roop me janam le chuki hai , usne apni kali shaktiyion se suhana ke jism ka nash kar diya..."

"acha toh rema ne suhana ko mara tha , yeh bat toh me janta hu , khushi ne batai thi..."

"han , rema ne suhana ka ant kiya tha , suhana ka jism jal kar rakh ho gya , par shetian ka voh jevat ansh abh bhi azad tha , rema ne apni pori takat laga , ik ring ka nirman kiya , or us ansh ko us ring me dal diya , rema es jung me behad kamzor ho gai thi , tabhi use bhi kisi ne dhoke se mar diya ..." baba ne rema ke bare me batate hue kaha ,

"abh samaz gya , me sab samaz gya , ring me shetian ka ansh hai , use ik jism chahyie , voh jism bhi vahi chahti hai , jisne uske ansh ko sabse pehle dharan kiya tha..." ravi sab samazta hua bola ,

han , or voh jism kiska hai..." baba ne ik swal kiya ,

"matlab seema ka jism..." ravi ika ik bola ,

"han , seema hi suhana hai , ring ko jism bhi seema ka hi chayie , ik bat or , agar seema ne ring dharan kar li , toh voh komal ki bali degi , or shetian pori trah se jagrit hoker , es prithvi par phail jayega , voh nash kar dega , ik ik insan ka , ik ik jevat cheez ka , tume rokna hai , ring ko , ring seema ke jariye komal tak pahunche , usse pehle tume ring ka nash karna hoga..."

"baba me samaz gya , kyu kal rat us aurat ne muze komal ke nazdik nai jane diye , voh us aurat ne nai , ring ne kiya tha , ring chahti hai , komal paviter rehe , eska matlab ajj tak , me komal ke karib na ja saka , kyu ki ring komal ki bali dena chahti hai , kyu ki akhri bali suhana ko meri behan ruhi ki deni thi , or ruhi es janam me komal hai , ohhh sab samaz gya baba me..." ravi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"han , komal ko tum tabhi pa sakte ho , jab ring ka vinash karuge , ring ke jevat rehte , komal kabhi tumari nai ho sakti , yeh es janam me hi nai , har janam me hoga , tumare pas abh bhi wakht hai , ring ko nasht kar do..." baba ne ravi ko chetavni dete hue bola ,

"baba , pehle muze us aurat ko rokna hoga , use khatam kar , ring ko azad karvana hoga , phir me ring ka ant kar sakuga..."

"us aurat ko marna etna asan nai hoga , tumari behan rema , tumare or us aurat ke bech hamesha khadi rehegi , tume usse bhi ladna hoga , uske ander vahi shaktiyian jagrit hain , jo pichle janam me uske pas thi..."

"kya karu phir me , kis trah roku me us aurat ko..."

"ik rasta hai , rema ko kisne mara tha , yeh pata kar lo , ho na ho , shyad esi aurat ne rema ko mara tha , tume rema ko yeh ehsas dilana hoga , ke voh galat hai , jab rema ko ehsas hoga , tab rema us aurat ko khatam kar degi , uske bad tum ring ke ander jaker uska ant kar dena..." baba ki awaz ne ik rasta ravi ko batate hue bola ,

"matlab , ring ke ander jaker , me kuch samaza nai..."

"abhi eska wakht nai , pehle tum us aurat ke bare me socho , shiv ki us paviter takat ki raksha karo , shehar me phail rehi burai ka ant karo , tumari ik beti bhi hai..." baba ki awaz ne ik swal kiya ,

"han baba , fari nam hai uska , par me uska badkismat baap , use koi khushi nai de paya , uski nazarion me meri pata nai kaisi chavi ban rehi hogi , baba ik bat sache dil se kahuga , me apni beti ko bahut pyar karta hu , bahut jayda , par kabhi jata nai paya , par app kyu puch rehe ho..." ravi ne fari ko beintha yad karke nam akhon se bola ,

"wakht anne par batauga , fari ko mera pyar dena , voh bahut khas ladki hai , ik din voh tumare liye kuch bahut bada karegi , tum ik ache baap banna , abh jao ghar..."

"lekin agar muze apse phir se milna hua toh..." ravi ne jamen se uthte hue bola ,

"shiv ko yad karke , muze yad kar lena , me a jauga , jao abh..." baba ki awaz ne etna kaha , ravi gyab hoker vapis kabile me pahunch gya , usi nadi kinare yaha kal rat voh rema ke sath wakht beeta reha tha....

vahi dusri traf...

dhupehar ke 2 baj rehe the , joker apni building me ehder ohder ghum reha tha , voh betab tha , apne purane dushman ravi ko mat dene ke liye ,

Eliza subah se us formule par kam kar rehi thi , formula ban kar tyar tha , bus Eliza kuch badlav chahti thi , jo usne abh tak shyad pore kar liye the ,

apne kam ke wakht bhi , voh bus lara ko yad karti rehi , lara ke bina uski jindgi mayus si ho gai thi , lara se uska rishta behad gehra tha , lara uski es dunia me antim dost thi , uske dil ke behad karib thi ,

apne formule ko complete kar Eliza , joker ke pas pahunch gai , joker apne jadu se Eliza ko ik behad parchin khandar me le gya , yeh parchin khandar shehar ke bahar tha , sadyion purana , ajj chahe yeh khandar me tabdel ho chuka tha , lekin eski tuti-futi deeware eski mazodgi ka ehsas ajj bhi logo ko karvati rehti thi ,

"sir ham yaha kyu aye hain..." Eliza beth ne khandar ke niche ik gupt gufa me sedyian utar niche jate hue bola ,

"Eliza yahi toh dafan hai , mere dushman ravi ki mout ka raz , ahahahahu , abhi dikhata hu , kon hai voh..." joker behad vehshi andaz me bola ,

phir Eliza kuch na boli , joker use gupt gufa se hoker tehkane me le gya , lekin vaha charo traf ghor andhkar tha , joker ne apni hath ki chutki bajai toh tehkhane ki deewaro par aag ki machale jalne lagi ,

jab vaha halki halki roshni charo traf phail gai , tab Eliza ki nazar tehkhane ke bechu bech ik tabot par gai , joker us tabot ko dekh behad khush hua , joker ne tezi se agge badh us tabot ko khol diya , uske ander ik yodha ki mummy thi ,

"sir yeh kiski mummy hai ..."

"Eliza yeh ik khukar yodha , bereham katil , burai ka partik , eska nam hai Marko , hazaro saal pehle marko ne es shehar par hi nai , es prithvi par etna kohram machaya tha , me bata nai sakta , logo ke taze khoon se nahata tha , bereham , darinda , purani kathaon me ese narag ka beta kaha jata hai , abh es formule se me marko ko vapis jinda karuga , marko us ravi ko jaan se mar dega , ahahaha , abh hogi tabahii..." joker ne Growth formule ki bottle khol , ik boond marko ki bejan pattyion se dhaki mummy ke mathe par dal di ,

Eliza beth ki mehnat , or joker ki kali takato se mil kar bana Growth formula abh apna asar dikhane laga , dhere dhere marko ka jism hara padhne laga ,

Eliza beth or joker tabot se thoda door ho gya , ik tez dhamaka hua tabot me , safad dhua tabot se bahar nikalne laga , or tabhi ik hath tabot ke bahar nikala , or phir uth kar beth gya , narag ka beta marko.....


vahi dusri traf....

ravi nadi kinare betha tha , uske man ke behter kai swal chal rehe the , jindgi kya hai , voh pehla din , jab voh kheto me kam kar reha tha , uski behan rema uske liye khana layi thi , phir uska or rema ka ik anokha rishta bana , phir voh shehar aya ,

shehar akar komal , shurti or rimi se mila , seema uski jindgi me ayi , saima uski jindgi me ayi , phir voh komal or seema se alag hua , juhi uski jindgi me ayi ,

phir khushi uski jindgi me ayi , dhere dhere use apna khoya sab kuch mil gya , jab voh mar kar darinda bana , tab ring uski jindgi me ayi , or ajj use pata chala , voh komal ke karib kyu nai ja sakta , ik hi toh karan tha , ring ,

lekin abh ravi ke man me kuch chal reha tha , voh yeh tha , use apni beti fari se milna tha , use gale laga rona tha , ik baap ke man me kitni bhavnayian janam leti hain , yeh apni beti ko dikhana tha ,

ravi , baba se milne ke bad , apni beti se milne ke liye tadaf reha tha , uska man vichlat hua padha tha , uske dil ki har dhadkan me bus fari , fari nam gunj reha tha ,

ravi apni beti ke liye kuch karna chahta tha , ik acha or adarsh baap banna chahta tha , pata nai baap beti ka yeh rishta , abh kaha , kis traf agge badhta , par ik bat toh teh thi , ravi apni beti ke liye , jaan de bhi sakta tha , or kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta tha...


to be counited....[note- friends ring ki pori detail bata di hai , kuch swalo ke jawab apko mil gye honge...]

Both hi vadiya update Hy veer g
 

Prince Charlee

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Bohat hi zabardast update thi. Ring ka rahasay to pata chal hi gaya hai. Aur yah joker ne bhi Marko ko zinda kar diya hai dekhte hai woh kya tabahi lata hai.
Baby aur Kat bhi jungle me aa rahe hai aur baba ke mutabiq Fari ka bhi bohat aham role hai woh kya hai yah to age chal ke hi pata chale ga.
Baba ne Ring ko khatam karne ka rasta to bata diya hae dekhte hai Ravi kaise Reema ko uski mout ke bare me sachai batata hai.
 

Pankaj123

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Super update boss
Finally ab baap beti ka pyar dekhne ko milega Jo shyd hi kisi story ne abhi tak highlight kiya ho
Waiting for next...
 

sam4321

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Ring ka rahasay ka to pata chala aur is hi ke sath ye bhi pata chala ki baba koi sadharan vyakti nahi hai. Baba ji ne ravi ko sahi samay par shetian banne se rokne ki koshish ki hai. Aur ravi ko uske pita hone ki yaad dilai hai. Aur aise kahi rahasya ke upar se parda uthaya hai jiske bajese ravi ko komal ,rema ,seema ,aur us aurat ke bareme sochane par majbur kar diya.

ab ravi ko ring se seema ko bhi bachana hoga.

ab rema apne is janam mai jise wo apni maa manti hai matlab seema, aur apne pichale jaman ki maa matlab wo aurat aur ring in sab maise wo kis ka sath degi yebhi sochane wali baat hai.

mast update bhai , is update ne kahani ko ek disha di hai.
 

Sona

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update-69

Abh agge...

Baby apni beti fari ko apne seene se lagaye leti rehi , voh mehsus karti rehi apni beti ko ,
baby abh ravi ke bare me soch rehi thi , uff uski bhi koi galti nai thi , yeh toh tha nai ke ravi janbuz kar fari se na milne aya ho ,

ravi kyu nai aya , voh kaha tha , yeh bat baby dil ki gehrai se samazti thi , use pata tha ravi kaisa insan hai , ravi se badkar uski beti ko pyar , es dunia me koi nai kar sakta ,

"are utho tum dono , jana nai hai kya..." kat muskrate hue boli , voh naha kar ready ho chuki thi ,

"hmm , chalo , ik mint meri beti toh ready hui hi nai..." baby uth kar fari ka matha chumte hue boli ,

"baby me tyar karti hu , chalo meri bachi ayo jaldi..." kat bhi fari ke pas akar use god me uthate hue boli ,

"fari ko kya pasand hai , vahi pehna do.." baby , fari ke kapde use dikhate hue boli ,

"baby yar ik bat kahu , fari ke baalo ne muze bahut preshan kiya , tum yaha thi nai , yeh muzse kehti , baalo ki do chotyia karo , maa kasam , meri toh halat kharab kar di , lekin dhere dhere mane baalo ke design banana sikh liya , hai na betu..." kat , fari ke baalo ki chotyia banate hue boli ,

"han mumma..." fari , kat ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

karib 1 ghante bad sab tyar the , baby ne ik leave application likh di thi , tain ki fari ko school se kuch dino ki leave mil jaye ,

phir dono ghar se bahar akar school bus ka intzar karne lagi , jab tak bus ati , tab tak baby ne kapdo se bhara bag gadi ki diggi me rakh liya ,

karib 10 mint bad school bus bhi a gai , kat ne voh leave application bus me bethi ik teacher ko de di , or vapis baby ke pas a gai , kat ne ajj bhi mehsus kiya , bus driver use kaise ghur ghur kar dekh reha tha , lekin usne yeh normal bat samaz kar chod diya ,

baby ne gadi start ki or tino jungle ki traf nikal padhe , tino me hassi-mazak chalta reha , kyu ki pariwar jab sath ho , tab khushyian hi milti hain...


vahi dusri traf....

ravi gadi se gyab hoker ik anjan si jagah par pahunch gya tha , as-pas hara bhara jungle tha , or ik zopdi si dikh rehi thi , ravi preshan sa hua us zopdi ki traf badne laga ,

"hlo koi haii , kisne muze gyab kiya , ladna hai , samne ayo , me shetian hu , shetian , samne ayo , buzdil kahi ke..." ravi zopdi ki traf badte gusse me chila kar bola ,

ravi ne zopdi me ghus kar dekha , zopdi ik dam khali thi , ander koi nai tha , ik chota sa bistar tha , ghas ka , ik mitti ka matka tha pani ka , or kuch nai ,

"kon haiiii , shetian ko bula , khud chup gya , samne ayoo ..." ravi zopdi se bahar akar gusse se chila kar bola ,

"raviii , gussa kam karo , shant raho , wakht ne tume badal diya , kisan se shetian , yahi toh wakht ki maar hai , kal apne gaon me the , ik khushhal jindgi gujarte hue or ajj ik darinde ban gye ho..." ik rahasmayi awaz ravi ko sunai di , par yeh sirf awaz thi , kuch dikhai nai de reha tha ,

"huuu , kon ho app , samne kyu nai ate..." ravi ne paglu ki trah as-pas nazar dodate hue bola ,

"jab tum tut chuke the , tab tume vapis behj diya , me vahi hu , bhul gye kya..." vahi awaz phir se ravi ko sunai di ,

"baba..." ravi ghutno ke bal beth gya , usne saar zuka liya , use sab yad tha , insan chahe jis mukam par pahunch jaye , apni jindgi ke kale din kabhi nai bhul sakta , jin lamhu ne dard diya ho , us dard ke ghav kabhi koi bhula nai sakta ,

"han me hu , tume toh bahut jalad yad a gya..." phir se vahi rahasmayi awaz ravi ko sunai di ,

"baba , apko kaise bhul sakta hu , app ne nayi jindgi di muze , agar app , han app , us wakht muze vapis na behjte , me na toh apni seema ko pa sakta or na apni komal ko , app mere liye sab kuch ho..." ravi ne behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"mane toh insan ko vapis behja tha , par tum toh shetian ban gye..."

"baba halato ne muze shetian bana diya , ik darinda bana diya , pyar pate pate me darinda ban gya , lekin baba me bura nai hu , lad reha hu khud se , apne usi pyar ko pane ke liye , hasshh , app sab jante ho , kuch nai chupa apse..." ravi ne akhen band kar behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"han janta hu beta , shiv bhagwan ko tum ache lage , tumare karam ache lage , or me toh shiv ka sevak hu , jo voh chahte hain vahi kehta hu , vahi karta hu , tumne jindgi ki har ladai pyar se jeeti hai , bure logu ko achai ke raste par laye , ache logu ka sath diya , lekin..." baba bolte bolte tham sa gye ,

"lekin kya baba..." ravi bhi thoda preshan sa hoker bola ,

"behan ka pyar nai mila..."

"nai mila baba , usi behan ke liye toh tadaf reha hu , jab bhi use pana chahta hu , tab koi na koi burai mere raste me a jati hai , es bar..." ravi abhi bol hi reha tha ke baba bech me bol padhe ,

"es bar ring pehne voh aurat a gai , hota hai , shiv kehte hain , yeh sansar nashhen hai , kuch bhi jevat nai hai , jo sundar hai use bhi nasht hona hai , tumari komal ik rahasmayi ladki hai , use pana , kisi ke bas ki bat nai , shiv kehte hain , aisi ladki ka janam sadyion me ik bar hota hai , jo paviterta ke sath janam leti hai , or akhri sans tak paviter rehti hai..." baba ki awaz ne ravi ko sab sachai batate hue bola ,

"par baba , me use chahta hu , janta hu voh anokhi hai , es dunia se alag hai , lekin me use paker rahuga..."

"voh aurat dunia barbad kar degi , use map chahyie , voh us takat ko pana chahti hai , jo shiv bhagwan ne chupa rakhi hai , es dunia se , tum rok pauge use ..." baba ne ravi ko chetavni si dete hue bola ,

"rokuga or maruga bhi , me use us paviter takat tak kabhi nai pahunchne dunga , chahe meri jaan kyu na chali jaye..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ravi marna asan nai hota , apni jindgi par nazar dalo , tum akele nai ho , me akela hu , sansar se door , kudrat ke bech , shiv se juda hua , tum akele kabhi the hi nai , tumari jindgi kai jindgyion se judi hui hai , tumari patni , tumari behne , tumse pyar karne wali premikyian , tum mar nai sakte , agar tume akele rakhna hota , toh me tume apne pas se kabhi door jane hi nai deta , shiv ne muzse kaha , tume ant karna hai , us shetiani ring ka , dunia ko mukti dilao us shetian ring se , sadyion se jo pap prithvi par badh reha hai , voh sab es ring ki burai ke karan badh reha hai , har buri cheez ka ik kainder hota hai , insan agar bura hai toh es burai ka kainder uska man hai , agar prithvi par burai hai , toh eska kainder voh ring hai..." baba ki shant or naram awaz ravi ko sab samaza rehi thi , unke ik ik shabad me vastvik sachai thi ,

"hasshh , par baba voh ring us aurat ne dharan ki hui hai , or agar voh apni icha se ring nai utaregi , tab tak me uska kuch nai bhigad sakta , kya karu , meri pori takat viarth hai ..." ravi ne apna chehra zuka kar bola ,

"tum bahut kuch kar sakte ho , tumne apni jindgi kaha se suru ki , or ajj tum kaha pahunch gye , tum behad khas ho , khud ko kam samazna , kisi bhi insan ke liye hanikarak hota hai , koi bhi insan kamzor nai hota , use bus khud ki pehchan karni hoti hai , ring kyu hai , kis liye hai , tume ring se ladna hai , na ke us aurat se , ring ko nasht karne ki traf badoge , tab voh aurat khud ba khud nasht ho jayegi..."

"par baba , ring ko kaise nasht karu , jab ke es dunia me sab jante hain , ring amar hai , use koi nai maar sakta , vaise bhi voh ring nai , meri behan suhana hai , jo muze paker apna badla lena chahti hai ..." ravi ne suhana ko yad kar thoda gusse me bola ,

"suhana toh seema hai , or seema ne tume pa liya hai , tumari patni bankar , ring kabhi suhana thi hi nai , ring ik burai hai , shetian ka ansh..." baba abhi bol hi rehe the , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"me kuch samaza nai..."

"jab suhana ne 6 kuwari kanyion ki bali di , tab brehmand me virajman shetian , apni supat awashta se jag utha , suhana ke man ke bheter upzi beintha burai or nafrat ne shetian ko bahut parbhavit kiya , use suhana achi lagi , jab suhana bar bar use apna pita kehti rehi , tab shetian ne use apni beti man liya , apni burai ka ik ansh usne , suhana ko vardan ke roop me de diya , abh suhana apne pita se jud chuki thi , uske ander uske pita shetian ki bemisal buri takato ka ansh palne laga tha , voh bura ansh jevat prani jaisa tha ..." baba abhi bol hi rehe the , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"ohh toh phir ring kaise bani..." ravi sab kuch janne ki icha se utsuk hote hue bola ,

"batata hu , jara dheraz rakho , jab voh bura ansh suhana ke man me palne laga , tab suhana ke man me burai ka parbhav es kadar badh gya , ke use apne pita ke elava kuch dikhai nai de reha tha , or ik dusra maksad tha , apne pita se milne ki beintha icha , uski icha shakti or voh bura ansh dono mil gye , tab suhana khud ik shetian ki devi ban gai , pari log me antim yudh me , usne sab ko mar diya , pari log tabah kar diya , tab tumari behan sumon , jo abh rema ke roop me janam le chuki hai , usne apni kali shaktiyion se suhana ke jism ka nash kar diya..."

"acha toh rema ne suhana ko mara tha , yeh bat toh me janta hu , khushi ne batai thi..."

"han , rema ne suhana ka ant kiya tha , suhana ka jism jal kar rakh ho gya , par shetian ka voh jevat ansh abh bhi azad tha , rema ne apni pori takat laga , ik ring ka nirman kiya , or us ansh ko us ring me dal diya , rema es jung me behad kamzor ho gai thi , tabhi use bhi kisi ne dhoke se mar diya ..." baba ne rema ke bare me batate hue kaha ,

"abh samaz gya , me sab samaz gya , ring me shetian ka ansh hai , use ik jism chahyie , voh jism bhi vahi chahti hai , jisne uske ansh ko sabse pehle dharan kiya tha..." ravi sab samazta hua bola ,

han , or voh jism kiska hai..." baba ne ik swal kiya ,

"matlab seema ka jism..." ravi ika ik bola ,

"han , seema hi suhana hai , ring ko jism bhi seema ka hi chayie , ik bat or , agar seema ne ring dharan kar li , toh voh komal ki bali degi , or shetian pori trah se jagrit hoker , es prithvi par phail jayega , voh nash kar dega , ik ik insan ka , ik ik jevat cheez ka , tume rokna hai , ring ko , ring seema ke jariye komal tak pahunche , usse pehle tume ring ka nash karna hoga..."

"baba me samaz gya , kyu kal rat us aurat ne muze komal ke nazdik nai jane diye , voh us aurat ne nai , ring ne kiya tha , ring chahti hai , komal paviter rehe , eska matlab ajj tak , me komal ke karib na ja saka , kyu ki ring komal ki bali dena chahti hai , kyu ki akhri bali suhana ko meri behan ruhi ki deni thi , or ruhi es janam me komal hai , ohhh sab samaz gya baba me..." ravi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"han , komal ko tum tabhi pa sakte ho , jab ring ka vinash karuge , ring ke jevat rehte , komal kabhi tumari nai ho sakti , yeh es janam me hi nai , har janam me hoga , tumare pas abh bhi wakht hai , ring ko nasht kar do..." baba ne ravi ko chetavni dete hue bola ,

"baba , pehle muze us aurat ko rokna hoga , use khatam kar , ring ko azad karvana hoga , phir me ring ka ant kar sakuga..."

"us aurat ko marna etna asan nai hoga , tumari behan rema , tumare or us aurat ke bech hamesha khadi rehegi , tume usse bhi ladna hoga , uske ander vahi shaktiyian jagrit hain , jo pichle janam me uske pas thi..."

"kya karu phir me , kis trah roku me us aurat ko..."

"ik rasta hai , rema ko kisne mara tha , yeh pata kar lo , ho na ho , shyad esi aurat ne rema ko mara tha , tume rema ko yeh ehsas dilana hoga , ke voh galat hai , jab rema ko ehsas hoga , tab rema us aurat ko khatam kar degi , uske bad tum ring ke ander jaker uska ant kar dena..." baba ki awaz ne ik rasta ravi ko batate hue bola ,

"matlab , ring ke ander jaker , me kuch samaza nai..."

"abhi eska wakht nai , pehle tum us aurat ke bare me socho , shiv ki us paviter takat ki raksha karo , shehar me phail rehi burai ka ant karo , tumari ik beti bhi hai..." baba ki awaz ne ik swal kiya ,

"han baba , fari nam hai uska , par me uska badkismat baap , use koi khushi nai de paya , uski nazarion me meri pata nai kaisi chavi ban rehi hogi , baba ik bat sache dil se kahuga , me apni beti ko bahut pyar karta hu , bahut jayda , par kabhi jata nai paya , par app kyu puch rehe ho..." ravi ne fari ko beintha yad karke nam akhon se bola ,

"wakht anne par batauga , fari ko mera pyar dena , voh bahut khas ladki hai , ik din voh tumare liye kuch bahut bada karegi , tum ik ache baap banna , abh jao ghar..."

"lekin agar muze apse phir se milna hua toh..." ravi ne jamen se uthte hue bola ,

"shiv ko yad karke , muze yad kar lena , me a jauga , jao abh..." baba ki awaz ne etna kaha , ravi gyab hoker vapis kabile me pahunch gya , usi nadi kinare yaha kal rat voh rema ke sath wakht beeta reha tha....

vahi dusri traf...

dhupehar ke 2 baj rehe the , joker apni building me ehder ohder ghum reha tha , voh betab tha , apne purane dushman ravi ko mat dene ke liye ,

Eliza subah se us formule par kam kar rehi thi , formula ban kar tyar tha , bus Eliza kuch badlav chahti thi , jo usne abh tak shyad pore kar liye the ,

apne kam ke wakht bhi , voh bus lara ko yad karti rehi , lara ke bina uski jindgi mayus si ho gai thi , lara se uska rishta behad gehra tha , lara uski es dunia me antim dost thi , uske dil ke behad karib thi ,

apne formule ko complete kar Eliza , joker ke pas pahunch gai , joker apne jadu se Eliza ko ik behad parchin khandar me le gya , yeh parchin khandar shehar ke bahar tha , sadyion purana , ajj chahe yeh khandar me tabdel ho chuka tha , lekin eski tuti-futi deeware eski mazodgi ka ehsas ajj bhi logo ko karvati rehti thi ,

"sir ham yaha kyu aye hain..." Eliza beth ne khandar ke niche ik gupt gufa me sedyian utar niche jate hue bola ,

"Eliza yahi toh dafan hai , mere dushman ravi ki mout ka raz , ahahahahu , abhi dikhata hu , kon hai voh..." joker behad vehshi andaz me bola ,

phir Eliza kuch na boli , joker use gupt gufa se hoker tehkane me le gya , lekin vaha charo traf ghor andhkar tha , joker ne apni hath ki chutki bajai toh tehkhane ki deewaro par aag ki machale jalne lagi ,

jab vaha halki halki roshni charo traf phail gai , tab Eliza ki nazar tehkhane ke bechu bech ik tabot par gai , joker us tabot ko dekh behad khush hua , joker ne tezi se agge badh us tabot ko khol diya , uske ander ik yodha ki mummy thi ,

"sir yeh kiski mummy hai ..."

"Eliza yeh ik khukar yodha , bereham katil , burai ka partik , eska nam hai Marko , hazaro saal pehle marko ne es shehar par hi nai , es prithvi par etna kohram machaya tha , me bata nai sakta , logo ke taze khoon se nahata tha , bereham , darinda , purani kathaon me ese narag ka beta kaha jata hai , abh es formule se me marko ko vapis jinda karuga , marko us ravi ko jaan se mar dega , ahahaha , abh hogi tabahii..." joker ne Growth formule ki bottle khol , ik boond marko ki bejan pattyion se dhaki mummy ke mathe par dal di ,

Eliza beth ki mehnat , or joker ki kali takato se mil kar bana Growth formula abh apna asar dikhane laga , dhere dhere marko ka jism hara padhne laga ,

Eliza beth or joker tabot se thoda door ho gya , ik tez dhamaka hua tabot me , safad dhua tabot se bahar nikalne laga , or tabhi ik hath tabot ke bahar nikala , or phir uth kar beth gya , narag ka beta marko.....


vahi dusri traf....

ravi nadi kinare betha tha , uske man ke behter kai swal chal rehe the , jindgi kya hai , voh pehla din , jab voh kheto me kam kar reha tha , uski behan rema uske liye khana layi thi , phir uska or rema ka ik anokha rishta bana , phir voh shehar aya ,

shehar akar komal , shurti or rimi se mila , seema uski jindgi me ayi , saima uski jindgi me ayi , phir voh komal or seema se alag hua , juhi uski jindgi me ayi ,

phir khushi uski jindgi me ayi , dhere dhere use apna khoya sab kuch mil gya , jab voh mar kar darinda bana , tab ring uski jindgi me ayi , or ajj use pata chala , voh komal ke karib kyu nai ja sakta , ik hi toh karan tha , ring ,

lekin abh ravi ke man me kuch chal reha tha , voh yeh tha , use apni beti fari se milna tha , use gale laga rona tha , ik baap ke man me kitni bhavnayian janam leti hain , yeh apni beti ko dikhana tha ,

ravi , baba se milne ke bad , apni beti se milne ke liye tadaf reha tha , uska man vichlat hua padha tha , uske dil ki har dhadkan me bus fari , fari nam gunj reha tha ,

ravi apni beti ke liye kuch karna chahta tha , ik acha or adarsh baap banna chahta tha , pata nai baap beti ka yeh rishta , abh kaha , kis traf agge badhta , par ik bat toh teh thi , ravi apni beti ke liye , jaan de bhi sakta tha , or kisi ki jaan le bhi sakta tha...


to be counited....[note- friends ring ki pori detail bata di hai , kuch swalo ke jawab apko mil gye honge...]

Nice update
Ring ka raaz pta chl gya
Joker ne marko ko zinda kr diya dekhte hai ravi uska kaise samna krega
Baba ne btaya ki fari bi special hai mtlb uske pass bi powers hongi
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