Harman11
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thanks amtul bhai... abh se story me thoda sex bhi add karuga.. bahut wakht ho gya.. sex update na diya... app batao pehle kiska sex update dalu..Wah bhai kya jabardast update diya he. Dr. Neelam ke sath kuch pyar bhari bate hui he. Lekin ye saali sahiba suzi itna kyu sharma rahi he. Ro jokar bhag kar us rahasmayi aurat ke pass pahuch gya. Lekin ye he kaun jo kaal ke sath hi rehti he. Maya kaya me se to ek nahi he. Ravi ki kamjori to filhaal kat aur fari hi he. Fari ne to badi hi majedaar bate kari he. Jisase haste 2 dono kat aur baby ki halat kharab ho gayi. Idhar lara aur eliza ke beech bhi lesbo scene suru ho gya he.
Waiting 4 next update
welcome bhai.. agar app pehle hi reply dete.. toh yeh nai hota..Thank you so much Bhai
me apki bat samazta hu bhai.. but kya karu.. bahut dil laga kar likhta hu.. toh dard sa hota hai jab koi reply nai karta...Dear Writer (lover of darkness) I don't think that the majority of the users don't like your story, it might be your dilemma, Myself I am following your story since the start till date. It's another word that I don't comment regularly due to privacy & time issues, I always see and read the story daily. You have got nearly 4 Lac views for your story from which you can assume the no of people looking for your story updates!
Personally I love your story! which cant be described in words!
thanks bhai for beautiful reply... han story me lesbian jayda ho gai hain... kyu ki akela hero kya kare... yaha toh ik hi pasina nikal deti hai.. ravi toh ... khair...Awesome Update.....
Sab ache se nipat gaya.. Eliza ko apne kiye bure kaamo pe afsoos ho rha tha.. aaj usse pta chal rha tha ki koi apna apne se dur ho jaye toh kitna dard deta hai. Or usne toh kitni hi jindgiya barbaad ki..
Toh finally Yodha mara diya gaya or vapis jamin mein gadd diya gaya.. acha kiya sale ka attitude jada tha dimag se jada...
Joker bhi time pe nikal liya.. chalo uska bhi circus ka time ho raha hoga...
Eliza or Lara dono premi.. apki story mein ladkiyo ke mail kuch jada hi ho rahe sir ji..
Marko jata jata Ravi ko ek dard de gaya.. usse lag raha vo ek khatarnak, narak ka Prince, badsuraat admi hai jisse koi pyar na karta or uska kaam sirf logo ko marna or darana hai.. Galat.. insaan shakal ya suraat se nahi balki dil se badsuraat ho toh usse dar lagta hai.. vo toh dunia ko bachane k liye apni premikayo se apni behano tak se ladh gujar gaya... yeh hota hai ek khubsurat dil.. jisse har koi pasand karta hai....
Fari ko apna chintu mil gaya.. par iss chintu ka raaz kya hai.. or vo ladkiyo wali baat kya tha bhala..?
Shukriya Sir ji ki apne story wapis start kardi.. main kal Update padne aya toh dekha sala thread close ka notice chipka rakha hai... kal toh man na kiya read karne ka toh aaj kiya hu read...
Chalo kisi ke kehne se aap wapis toh aye.. waise main soch raha tha ki apko PM karu fhir maine socha aap toh reply nahi karoge toh nahi kiya...
Thanks sir ji hamari baat itni jaldi manne k liye..
Bhai me aapko kya salah de sakta hu. Story ke hisab se jiska no. lagana ho laga do. Hume to maja hi ayga padhkar.thanks amtul bhai... abh se story me thoda sex bhi add karuga.. bahut wakht ho gya.. sex update na diya... app batao pehle kiska sex update dalu..