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Mr.X796

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Bahut dard bhara update tha ye bhai. Ise padhkar ankho se ashu behne lage. Yaar aisa kaise ho gya. Filhaal to apne hi dusmano se gehre ghav de rahe he. Kya kat ko itane din jo ravi ne pyaar kiya wo sab baikar tha. Kya use ravi ke us pyaar ki koi kadar nahi rahi.
Waiting 4 next update
Bilkul sach kaha bhai aapne kai bar main bhi inke madhya pyar ko samajh nahin pata hun yesa lagta hai ravi se sirf lagav raha hai aur yesa kai bar ho chuka h seema , reema sur komal ke sath bhi yese mamle ho chuke hain jisse unpar gussa bhi aata hai jaise sach chupana ya yese mamlo main sath rahna jisme ravi marte marte bacha hai lekin ravi bach hi jata hai jisse kahin na kahin ravi kathputli jaisa lagta hai is par kuch kshenge aka bhai kya sirf mere ko lagta hai ya phir . . . .
 

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Bilkul sach kaha bhai aapne kai bar main bhi inke madhya pyar ko samajh nahin pata hun yesa lagta hai ravi se sirf lagav raha hai aur yesa kai bar ho chuka h seema , reema sur komal ke sath bhi yese mamle ho chuke hain jisse unpar gussa bhi aata hai jaise sach chupana ya yese mamlo main sath rahna jisme ravi marte marte bacha hai lekin ravi bach hi jata hai jisse kahin na kahin ravi kathputli jaisa lagta hai is par kuch kshenge aka bhai kya sirf mere ko lagta hai ya phir . . . .

nai nai bhai.. app sach keh rehe ho.. ravi kathputli hi toh hai.. but use bhi samazna hoga apko.. uske character ko samazna bahut mushkil hai... uska character koi koi insan hi samaz sakta hai...

bhai 6 saal ho gye es story ko likhte likhte , but life me abhi tak muze ik hi reader mila hai , jo ravi or kahani ke sabhi patro ko samaz paya hai , voh hai Sona jii...

ravi me ik ego hai , ghamand hai , voh zukna nai chahta , or aise dunia ke har insan me hota hai , dunia ka har insan khud ko khubsurat dikhata hai , agar ravi apni jindgi me halato me anuroop chalta toh ajj voh kahi or hota , but kai shap aise hote hain , jo pichle janam se leker agle janam tak sath chalte hain ,

janta hu ravi ke sath hamesha apne hi dhoka karte hain , par inme se ik bhi ladki , kisi or ki bahu me nai gai , insani man chanchal hota hai , or ladkyion ka man sabse jayda chanchal hota hai , vaise bhi fari se door rehna uske liye acha hoga , or jo uske sath ho reha hai , kahi na kahi , uska rasta abhi galat hai , ik din ayega , jab use sab ehsas hoga , tab voh jindgi ke har arth ko samaz jayega.. :hug:
 

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superb update
kat apne purane roop me vapis aa gayi hai.
usne ravi se insani roop chin liya.
vo to sahi samay par khushi aakar ravi ko le chli gayi.
ravi ka gussa badh raha hai.
kat ne ravi se uska roop chinkar galti kar di.
ab vo devil se bhi jyada khtarnaak ho gaya.
usne use uski beti se alag kar di.
chahe kat kitna bhi shaktishali ho lakin ek pita ke gusse ka samna nhi kar skti.
ab uska bhi tod jaldi hi ravi nikal lega.
ravi apni beti ke liye saitani sena se mukabala karne ke tyair ho gaya.
 
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nai nai bhai.. app sach keh rehe ho.. ravi kathputli hi toh hai.. but use bhi samazna hoga apko.. uske character ko samazna bahut mushkil hai... uska character koi koi insan hi samaz sakta hai...

bhai 6 saal ho gye es story ko likhte likhte , but life me abhi tak muze ik hi reader mila hai , jo ravi or kahani ke sabhi patro ko samaz paya hai , voh hai Sona jii...

ravi me ik ego hai , ghamand hai , voh zukna nai chahta , or aise dunia ke har insan me hota hai , dunia ka har insan khud ko khubsurat dikhata hai , agar ravi apni jindgi me halato me anuroop chalta toh ajj voh kahi or hota , but kai shap aise hote hain , jo pichle janam se leker agle janam tak sath chalte hain ,

janta hu ravi ke sath hamesha apne hi dhoka karte hain , par inme se ik bhi ladki , kisi or ki bahu me nai gai , insani man chanchal hota hai , or ladkyion ka man sabse jayda chanchal hota hai , vaise bhi fari se door rehna uske liye acha hoga , or jo uske sath ho reha hai , kahi na kahi , uska rasta abhi galat hai , ik din ayega , jab use sab ehsas hoga , tab voh jindgi ke har arth ko samaz jayega.. :hug:
Thanks bhai clear karne ke liye :superb:
 
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And bhai ek request hai jab jung suru hoto plz update me gap mat rakhna . Hum smjte he ke aapki job and health ke bare me but bhai ho ske to danvi sena wale update me gap mat ho vo plz dekhna
bhai bus 1 din ka gap rehega story , fighting updats jaladbazi me nai likh sakta , agar 1vs1 hoti toh likh leta , but team vs team hai , toh 1 din ka gap rehega , vada kiya hai , yeh part jalad hi complete hoga , bus yeh jung ke updates ke bad... shukariya :hug:
 

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Abh Agge...

Ravi dhere dhere apne kadam badata , us room ke samne pahunch gya , yaha uski beti admit thi , uske dil me ik gussa , ik dard sa tha , voh etna bechain kabhi nai hua tha , mano fari , uski jindgi ka sabse eham hissa ban chuki thi , yeh bechaini tabhi door honi thi , jab ravi use apni bahu me bhar leta ,

ravi ne darvaja khola or ander ghus gya , kat or fari dono bed par leti hui thi , kat ne fari ko apni bahu me bhar rakha tha , jaise koi use cheen ka le jana chahta ho , maa ki mamta thi ya yu kehlo ik dar tha uski akhon me ,

kat , ravi ko dekh uth kar beth gai , fari apne papa ko dekh beintha khush ho gai , uske masom chehre par ik muskan bhikar gai ,

"meri bachii..." ravi etna bol tezi se agge bada , or fari ko apne agosh me le liya , uska chehra chumne laga , apni beti ko hospital me dekh , uski akhan behad nam ho gai ,

"papa me thik hu..." fari muskrate hue boli , use ehsas ho gya tha , uske papa ro rehe hain , vaise bhi fari ka dimag abh ik aam ladki se jayda tez tha ,

"tum , tum , ohhh , tum yaha kaise a gaii , meri beti ummaa , abh me tume koi taklef nai hone dunga..." ravi behad nam akhon se fari ka matha chumte hue bola ,

"papa , rona band karo , me thik hu , bus jara si behosh hui thi , baby or kat mumma muze hospital le ayi , abh darne ki bat nai hai..." fari behad nam akhon se boli , apne papa ka dard , usse bardasht nai ho reha tha ,

"daru naii , fari kaise na daru meri beti , tume jara si bhi anch ati hai , mera dil dard se bhar jata hai , agar komal ko yeh pata chal jata , voh kitna roti , tum hamari jindgi ka sabse eham hissa ho , tumare papa tumare bina kuch nai , unki koi kemat nai..." ravi behad nam akhon se dard bhare shabado me bola , yeh shabad dil ki gehrayi se fut rehe the ,

"ohh ho , papa me thik hu , kat mumma app batao na papa ko , meri toh bat nai sun rehe voh.." fari muskrate hue kat ki traf dekhte hue boli ,

"han ravi , fari sahi bol rehi hai , voh abh bilkul thik hai , ham sham ko shehar ja rehe hain , apne ghar , kyu hai na fari..." kat muskra kar boli , par fari khamosh ho gai , voh khamoshi se ravi ki traf dekhne lagi , mano usse jawab mang rehi ho ,

"ghar , konse ghar , hamara ghar toh kabile me hai , vahi toh hai hamara pora pariwar , tum , tum kehna kya chahti ho..." ravi ik dam se chonk kar bola ,

kat muskrate hue ravi ki bat sun khamosh ho gai , use pata tha , yahi hoga , but fari ke samne voh aisi batian nai karna chahti thi , kyu ki jab dono gusse me bat karte toh , fari rone lagti ,

abhi kat kuch bolne hi ja rehi thi ke dr.nelam ander a gai , ravi use dekh bahut khush hua , kuch pal ravi ne dr.nelam se batian ki , par usne mehsus kiya , fari or kat khamosh hai , unke chehro par ik udasi , ik dard , ik akelapan sa dikh reha tha ,

"dr.nelam app jara fari ka khyal rakhna , me or kat abhi ate hain , muze fari ka kuch saman khaird kar lana hai..." ravi , kat ke man ke halat samazte hue bola ,

"are yeh koi kehne wali bat hai , me hu na apni beti ke pas , tum dono ja ayo... " dr.nelam muskrate hue boli ,

dr.nelam ki bat sun ravi or kat muskrane lage , phir voh dono room se bahar a gye , abh dono ko koi aisi jagah chahyie thi , yaha unko koi preshan na kare , voh dono hospital se bahar akar , thodi door bane ik garden me jaker beth gye , vaha log toh the , par etne nai the ,

"shukariya..." ravi muskra kar bola ,

"kis bat ka..."

"are tum , meri beti ko hospital le ayi , uska khyal rakha , es liye.." ravi , kat ki akhon me dekhte hue bola , jab ki kat thoda sakpaka gai , ravi ke hontho se "meri beti" sun kar ,

"voh meri beti bhi hai ravi , me maa hu uski , me khyal nai rakhugi , toh kon rakhega..." kat apni bhavnayion ko chupa muskrate hue boli ,

"mane kab kaha ke nai hai , but shehar jane wali bat meri samaz me nai ayi , matlab kya hai eska..." ravi bahut gehri nazarion se kat ka chehra dekhte hue bola ,

"matlab , matlab , hmm , toh yeh bat hai , samazti hu ik pita ke dard ko , par ravi , tum , tum apni beti ki jaan khatre me dal rehe ho , vaha chudail jaisi tumari behan hai , jab tak voh us ghar me hai , fari vaha nai jayegi..." kat muskrate hue behad gusse me boli ,

"shut up , meri behan koi chudail nai hai.." ravi ik dam se uthte hue bola , use beintha gussa a reha tha kat par ,

"ohh ho , matlab usne chudail ka makeup kiya tha , lekin , lekin , ahhh ravii , sachai ko tum nakar nai sakte , tumari behan ne sab par hamla kiya , unko dard diya , agar bhagwan na kare , fari us wakht hamare sath hoti , toh , eska jawab hai tumare pas koi..." kat behad gusse me boli , voh ravi duara rema ka pakash lene se behad naraz ho gai thi ,

"nai hai , koi jawab nai hai , lekin rema ko apni galti ka ehsas ho jayega , dubara kabhi voh aisa nai karegi , me vada karta hu tumse , abh pls ghar chalo , sab intzar kar rehe hain..." ravi , behad naram sehbhav se bola ,

"tum , tum , bevkuf ho , me kab se samaza rehi hu , tume , ohuuu , tume kuch samaz nai ata , tumari behan normal nai hai , voh gusse me akar tabahi macha sakti hai , tum , tum , es bat ko sawikar kyu nai karte , dekho , thoda thande dimag se socho , hamare sath shehar chalo , dekho agar tum nai a sakte , toh me , me hu na fari ke sath , tum milne a jaya karna..." kat behad prem se ravi ke gaalo ko sehlate hue boli ,

"ahahaha , meri beti , mera khoon , or huk kisi or ka , yeh sambhav nai hai , me khud uski raksha kar sakta hu , or me apne pariwar se use alag nai hone dunga , tume lagta hai , voh tumare sath khush rehegi , jo pyar use pariwar me mila hai , voh tum akele nai de sakti , kat , meri beti mere sath jayegi , yeh mera akhri faisla hai..." ravi gusse ke antim shikar tak pahunchte hue bola ,

"yahhhh , yeh kabhi nai hoga , voh mere sath rehegi , us chudail ke saye me , meri beti kabhi nai jayegi , me aisa hone nai dungiiiiii..." kat beintha gusse me boli , uska sharir fatne laga , akhon se asnu behne lage ,

"ahhhhhh tum , tum pagal ho gaii hoo , ronaa bandd karooo , ahhhhh kattt rona band karoo , me , me kamzor ho reha huu..." ravi , kat ke beintha gusse ki tapash ko bardasht na karte hue jamen par ghutno ke bal beth gya , kat ke jism se nikalti tez urza , ravi ke jism ko jalane lagiii ,

"mee jivikaa huu , katt naiiii , me har jeev ka ansh huu , brehmand ke har jev ki urza ki shakti hai muz mee , me tume khatam kar dungiii devilllll , jo kamm parii logg me adhuraaa reh gyaaa , voh abh poraaa karugiiiiii..." kat or bhi gusse me chekhte hue boli ,

tez hawa chalne lagii , asman me badal garaz uthe , prithvi kampne lagi , kat pori prithvi ke jeevo ki urza khich rehi thi , jisse uske jism ka tez abh badta ja reha tha , aisa gussa use pari log me bhi kabhi nai aya tha ,

"ahahahaaa , tum , tum haar jaugiii jivika , tum ahhhhh uffff tum devil se nai jeet saktii , devil ka gussa abhi tumne dekha hi kaha haiiii , ahhhhhhh tum insanoo ko kamzorr karrrr rehii hoo , mee naii marr saktaaa , muze shap milaa haiii pitaa jii see..." ravi apne jism me hote beintha dard ko mehsus karte hue bola , ravi ka jism fatne laga tha , voh kamzor ho hoker jamen par gir gya , uske moh se khoon behne laga ,

kuch cheezo ka nirman esi liye hota hai , tain ki voh cheeze control me rehe , erth ko gravity control me rakhti hai , or samaz ke banaye niyam , pariwar ko , esi trah devil ko control karne ke liye jivika ka nirman hua tha , jivika ik urza thi , usne janam nai liya tha , voh brehmand ki sabse badi urza ka ik ansh tha , jise marna kathin tha ,

"ahhh meri batt man jaooo , doorr ho jaoo meriii betiii seee , varnaaa marrr jaugeee..." beintha tez chalte tufan ke bech kat , ravi ko behad kamzor karte hue boli ,

"ahahaha , mar doo , koiii batt naiii , par zukugaa naiii , ahhhhhh me apniii betii ke liyee jaan deee saktaa huu katlynnn..." ravi dard me kahrahte hue beintha haste hue bola ,

"tum marr naii sakteee me jantiii huu , parrr me tume sadyion tak aise hi tadfa saktiii huu..." kat or bhi gusse me apne jism se nikalti roshni se ravi ko jalate hue boli ,

"toh tum bhiii ahhh doorrr rahugiii meriii betiii see , me naiii jukugaaa , chahe sadyoin tak yeh dard sehna padheee , prithvi ke ant aaahhhhhhh ki tum jimedar hogiiiii , sirf tumm..." ravi or bhi dard me kahrahte hue bola , devil bane rehna uske liye shap tha ,

"tum jiddii hoo , us wakht ruhi se door naii hue , or abh meri beti se door nai ho rehe ho , me tumari jidd tod dungi devil , tume zukna hoga jivika ke agge..." kat behad gusse me boli ,

"pagal ladkiiii , ahhh devil ko zukana chahti ho , tum , ahhh , tum , kuch nai kar saktiii , meriii jiddd tume bhi fariii se door rakhegiiii , koi na koiii use ghar le hi jayegaaa , tum haar jaugiii kattt..." ravi behad dard bhare shabado me bola ,

tabhi ik dam se vaha ik blackhole bana , or khushi , ravi ko utha , vaha se gyab ho gaii , kattt dhere dhere shant hone lagi , lekin gussa abhi bhi vahi tha ,

"yahhhhhh , tamasss tum bhi marugiii meree hanthoo see..." kat jor se chekhte hue boli , tabhi kuch palu bad , vaha sab normal ho gya , tufan shant ho gya , lekin us tufan ne kuch hi palu me , sab cheezo ko tehas-nehas kar diya tha ,

kat vaha se udas sa chehre liye hospital ki traf badne lagi , jiska board tufan me tut kar niche gira hua tha , or kuch khidkyion ka kanch bhi tut chuka tha , kat yeh sab dekh or bhi udas ho gai , voh udas chehra or udas man liye hospital ke ander chali gai..

vahi dusri traf...

khushi ne apni teleport karne ki shakti se , ravi ko kat ki kaid se mukat kar diya tha , abh voh ravi ko vansha jungle me le ayi thi ,
ravi jamen par padha hua tha , voh devil roop me tha ,

"ravii , ravii , pls utho na , kya hua vaha par , kat se door rehna tha tume , voh kamzor karti hai tume , kyu gye uske nazdik..." khushi behad prem se ravi ke chehre ko chumte hue boli , devil ka chehra bahut ghinona tha , par prem me surat ka koi mahatav nai hota ,

"ahhh thik hu me tamas , uffff use jaan se mar dunga mee , meri beti ko cheen liya usne , or , or tum muze vaha se kyu le ayi , me mar nai saktaa , tume pata tha..." ravi jamen par lete lete hi akhen khol kar bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"voh , voh , ravi ik musibat a rehi haii , danvi sena , utho tum , me dikhati hu tume..." khushi behad nam akhon se boli ,

ravi uthne ki kossih karne laga , kuch hi palu me voh thik ho gya , or uth kar khada ho gya , or khushi ne use vansha jungle ke us parbat par , us nele pathar se nikalti urza , ravi ko apni shakti se dikha di , jo abh beintha phail chuki thi ,

"yeh sambhav nai hai , prithvi ka raksha kavach koi kaise tod sakta hai..." ravi , khushi ki akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"ravii , tum insani roop me ayo , ham ghar chalte hain pehle , phir koi plan bana kar unse ladege , eska jawab dundna hoga tume..." khushi , devil ke lal chehre ko hath se sehlate hue boli ,

"me a toh chuka hu insani roop me .." etna bol jaise hi ravi ne apne hatho ko ulta karke unki chamdi dekhi , voh chonk sa gya ,

"yeh sab jivika (kat) ne kiya hai , tain ki tum , fari se door raho , ohhh abh kya hoga..." khushi behad sehmi si boli ,

"katttttttttttttt (beintha gusse me ) , me tume tabah kar dungaa , mera roop cheen liya tumneee..." ravi gusse ki antim shikar tak pahunchte hue bola , uski tez chekh se uske charo or jungle me aag lag gai , sab kuch jalne laga , asman se bijliyan girne lagi prithvi par , pori prithvi kamp si gaii ,

"ravii shant ho jaoo , koi rasta hoga , kisi na kisi ko pata hoga , tum pehle jaise ho jayego..." khushi pyar se ravi ko shant karne lagii ,

"naiii ayega mera voh insani roop , me abh yeh lal darinda ban kar rahuga , jisko chute hi insan jal jayege , agar , agar koi insan muze dekhega , toh voh , voh dar se mar jayega , us jivika ne muze hara diya , mera roop cheen liya , me apni beti ke samne kaise ja pauga , meri betiii , fariiiiiiiiiii , tamassss meraa insanii roop vapis layoo varnaa sab kuch jala dungaa , kisi ko jinda nai chodugaa mee , muze meriii betii se milnaa haiiiiiiii..." ravi devil roop me or bhi gusse me ata hua dard bhare shabado me bola , uske jism se aag nikalne lagiii , uska jism fat kar garam jawalamukhi ke lave jaisa ho gya , aisa mehsus ho reha tha , voh aag ka bana hua tha...

tamas behad dar gaii , ik traf ravi ka gussa shant nai ho reha tha , or dusri traf , prithvi ka raksha kavach tutne wala tha , kya hona tha abh , agar etne gusse me ravii , danvi sena se ladta , toh voh pori manav jati ke liye khatra ban jata...

"khadi khadi mera moh kyaaa dekh rehiii hoo , meriii betiii ko layoo , jaooo tamass , tum mere sath thi na har pal , sadyion tak narag me jalta reha , par ruhi naii milii , kyu kiii jivika (kat) thii vaha , abh yaha meriii betii muzse door ho gaiiiiii , tamasss tum muzse pyarrr kartiii ho naa , phirr jaoo meriii betiii ko layoo..." ravi beintha gusse me chekhte hue dard bhare shabado me bola , uske dard bhare bepanah gusse ne tamas ko ander tak hila diya tha ,

"raviii (rote hue) shant ho jaoo , farii tume es roop me dekhte hi mar jayegii , plss shant ho jaoo , ham koi rasta nikal lete hain ..." khushi , ravi ke samne ghutno ke bal bethte hue boli , ravi ke jism se nikalti garam aag se , khushi ka jism bhi lal hone laga tha , par voh devil ki tapash ko sehan kar sakti thi ,

"han , meri betiii marrr jayegiiii , mere es roop ko dekhte hiii , par meraa gussaa kam nai ho rehaa , muze prithvi chodni hogiii , hame vapis hell jana hogaa tamas , or koi rasta naiii haiii , mera gussa abh sadyion tak shant nai hogaaa , hame hell janaa hogaaa..." ravi apne saar ko dono hatho me dabate hue bola , uski akhon ke samne uski beti ka chehra bar bar a reha tha , lekin es bat ka use ehsas ho gya tha , voh kabhi apni betiii se mil nai payegaa...

"raviiii , ham jayege hell , bus ik akhri kam kar le , ik acha kam , ham dono ne pichle pore janam me , pita ji ke banaye nizmo ka toda , abh en masom logu ki raksha kar , ik antim acha kam kar lete hain , or yeh fari ke liye bhi jaruri hai , fari ko bachana hai hame , raviii us danvi sena ka ant kar , voh ring unse cheen lo..." tamas beintha gusse or dard bhare shabado me boli ,

"vofffff voofff (ghurate hue) , tum thik keh rehiiii hoo tamass , me us ring ka kissa abh yahi khatam kar dungaaa , me ladugaaa shetian ki senaa see , parrr yeh koiii achaaa kam naiiii hogaaa , sunaaa tumneee pitaaa jiiiii , me devil huuu , devil tha , or devil hi rahugaaaa , apniiii betiii ko bachanaaa haiii muzeee , chaloo tamassss..." raviiii apne devil roop me or bhi gusse me ate hue bola , khas kar jab usne apne pita ko yad kiya tha... abh shyad jung hone wali thi , ik antim jung , or eska ant ik dardnak roop me hone wala tha...


[me samazta hu ke es update me pics ki jarurat nai hogi , bus mehsus karna update ko :) ]


to be counited....
Superb update bro....
 
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bhai bus 1 din ka gap rehega story , fighting updats jaladbazi me nai likh sakta , agar 1vs1 hoti toh likh leta , but team vs team hai , toh 1 din ka gap rehega , vada kiya hai , yeh part jalad hi complete hoga , bus yeh jung ke updates ke bad... shukariya :hug:




Bhai 1 nai 2 din but bhai me aapko janta hu salo se muje pata h ke jung ke update ki end me h naya twist hoga... Don't worry bhai apne hisab se dijiyega updates
 
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Abh Agge...

Ravi dhere dhere apne kadam badata , us room ke samne pahunch gya , yaha uski beti admit thi , uske dil me ik gussa , ik dard sa tha , voh etna bechain kabhi nai hua tha , mano fari , uski jindgi ka sabse eham hissa ban chuki thi , yeh bechaini tabhi door honi thi , jab ravi use apni bahu me bhar leta ,

ravi ne darvaja khola or ander ghus gya , kat or fari dono bed par leti hui thi , kat ne fari ko apni bahu me bhar rakha tha , jaise koi use cheen ka le jana chahta ho , maa ki mamta thi ya yu kehlo ik dar tha uski akhon me ,

kat , ravi ko dekh uth kar beth gai , fari apne papa ko dekh beintha khush ho gai , uske masom chehre par ik muskan bhikar gai ,

"meri bachii..." ravi etna bol tezi se agge bada , or fari ko apne agosh me le liya , uska chehra chumne laga , apni beti ko hospital me dekh , uski akhan behad nam ho gai ,

"papa me thik hu..." fari muskrate hue boli , use ehsas ho gya tha , uske papa ro rehe hain , vaise bhi fari ka dimag abh ik aam ladki se jayda tez tha ,

"tum , tum , ohhh , tum yaha kaise a gaii , meri beti ummaa , abh me tume koi taklef nai hone dunga..." ravi behad nam akhon se fari ka matha chumte hue bola ,

"papa , rona band karo , me thik hu , bus jara si behosh hui thi , baby or kat mumma muze hospital le ayi , abh darne ki bat nai hai..." fari behad nam akhon se boli , apne papa ka dard , usse bardasht nai ho reha tha ,

"daru naii , fari kaise na daru meri beti , tume jara si bhi anch ati hai , mera dil dard se bhar jata hai , agar komal ko yeh pata chal jata , voh kitna roti , tum hamari jindgi ka sabse eham hissa ho , tumare papa tumare bina kuch nai , unki koi kemat nai..." ravi behad nam akhon se dard bhare shabado me bola , yeh shabad dil ki gehrayi se fut rehe the ,

"ohh ho , papa me thik hu , kat mumma app batao na papa ko , meri toh bat nai sun rehe voh.." fari muskrate hue kat ki traf dekhte hue boli ,

"han ravi , fari sahi bol rehi hai , voh abh bilkul thik hai , ham sham ko shehar ja rehe hain , apne ghar , kyu hai na fari..." kat muskra kar boli , par fari khamosh ho gai , voh khamoshi se ravi ki traf dekhne lagi , mano usse jawab mang rehi ho ,

"ghar , konse ghar , hamara ghar toh kabile me hai , vahi toh hai hamara pora pariwar , tum , tum kehna kya chahti ho..." ravi ik dam se chonk kar bola ,

kat muskrate hue ravi ki bat sun khamosh ho gai , use pata tha , yahi hoga , but fari ke samne voh aisi batian nai karna chahti thi , kyu ki jab dono gusse me bat karte toh , fari rone lagti ,

abhi kat kuch bolne hi ja rehi thi ke dr.nelam ander a gai , ravi use dekh bahut khush hua , kuch pal ravi ne dr.nelam se batian ki , par usne mehsus kiya , fari or kat khamosh hai , unke chehro par ik udasi , ik dard , ik akelapan sa dikh reha tha ,

"dr.nelam app jara fari ka khyal rakhna , me or kat abhi ate hain , muze fari ka kuch saman khaird kar lana hai..." ravi , kat ke man ke halat samazte hue bola ,

"are yeh koi kehne wali bat hai , me hu na apni beti ke pas , tum dono ja ayo... " dr.nelam muskrate hue boli ,

dr.nelam ki bat sun ravi or kat muskrane lage , phir voh dono room se bahar a gye , abh dono ko koi aisi jagah chahyie thi , yaha unko koi preshan na kare , voh dono hospital se bahar akar , thodi door bane ik garden me jaker beth gye , vaha log toh the , par etne nai the ,

"shukariya..." ravi muskra kar bola ,

"kis bat ka..."

"are tum , meri beti ko hospital le ayi , uska khyal rakha , es liye.." ravi , kat ki akhon me dekhte hue bola , jab ki kat thoda sakpaka gai , ravi ke hontho se "meri beti" sun kar ,

"voh meri beti bhi hai ravi , me maa hu uski , me khyal nai rakhugi , toh kon rakhega..." kat apni bhavnayion ko chupa muskrate hue boli ,

"mane kab kaha ke nai hai , but shehar jane wali bat meri samaz me nai ayi , matlab kya hai eska..." ravi bahut gehri nazarion se kat ka chehra dekhte hue bola ,

"matlab , matlab , hmm , toh yeh bat hai , samazti hu ik pita ke dard ko , par ravi , tum , tum apni beti ki jaan khatre me dal rehe ho , vaha chudail jaisi tumari behan hai , jab tak voh us ghar me hai , fari vaha nai jayegi..." kat muskrate hue behad gusse me boli ,

"shut up , meri behan koi chudail nai hai.." ravi ik dam se uthte hue bola , use beintha gussa a reha tha kat par ,

"ohh ho , matlab usne chudail ka makeup kiya tha , lekin , lekin , ahhh ravii , sachai ko tum nakar nai sakte , tumari behan ne sab par hamla kiya , unko dard diya , agar bhagwan na kare , fari us wakht hamare sath hoti , toh , eska jawab hai tumare pas koi..." kat behad gusse me boli , voh ravi duara rema ka pakash lene se behad naraz ho gai thi ,

"nai hai , koi jawab nai hai , lekin rema ko apni galti ka ehsas ho jayega , dubara kabhi voh aisa nai karegi , me vada karta hu tumse , abh pls ghar chalo , sab intzar kar rehe hain..." ravi , behad naram sehbhav se bola ,

"tum , tum , bevkuf ho , me kab se samaza rehi hu , tume , ohuuu , tume kuch samaz nai ata , tumari behan normal nai hai , voh gusse me akar tabahi macha sakti hai , tum , tum , es bat ko sawikar kyu nai karte , dekho , thoda thande dimag se socho , hamare sath shehar chalo , dekho agar tum nai a sakte , toh me , me hu na fari ke sath , tum milne a jaya karna..." kat behad prem se ravi ke gaalo ko sehlate hue boli ,

"ahahaha , meri beti , mera khoon , or huk kisi or ka , yeh sambhav nai hai , me khud uski raksha kar sakta hu , or me apne pariwar se use alag nai hone dunga , tume lagta hai , voh tumare sath khush rehegi , jo pyar use pariwar me mila hai , voh tum akele nai de sakti , kat , meri beti mere sath jayegi , yeh mera akhri faisla hai..." ravi gusse ke antim shikar tak pahunchte hue bola ,

"yahhhh , yeh kabhi nai hoga , voh mere sath rehegi , us chudail ke saye me , meri beti kabhi nai jayegi , me aisa hone nai dungiiiiii..." kat beintha gusse me boli , uska sharir fatne laga , akhon se asnu behne lage ,

"ahhhhhh tum , tum pagal ho gaii hoo , ronaa bandd karooo , ahhhhh kattt rona band karoo , me , me kamzor ho reha huu..." ravi , kat ke beintha gusse ki tapash ko bardasht na karte hue jamen par ghutno ke bal beth gya , kat ke jism se nikalti tez urza , ravi ke jism ko jalane lagiii ,

"mee jivikaa huu , katt naiiii , me har jeev ka ansh huu , brehmand ke har jev ki urza ki shakti hai muz mee , me tume khatam kar dungiii devilllll , jo kamm parii logg me adhuraaa reh gyaaa , voh abh poraaa karugiiiiii..." kat or bhi gusse me chekhte hue boli ,

tez hawa chalne lagii , asman me badal garaz uthe , prithvi kampne lagi , kat pori prithvi ke jeevo ki urza khich rehi thi , jisse uske jism ka tez abh badta ja reha tha , aisa gussa use pari log me bhi kabhi nai aya tha ,

"ahahahaaa , tum , tum haar jaugiii jivika , tum ahhhhh uffff tum devil se nai jeet saktii , devil ka gussa abhi tumne dekha hi kaha haiiii , ahhhhhhh tum insanoo ko kamzorr karrrr rehii hoo , mee naii marr saktaaa , muze shap milaa haiii pitaa jii see..." ravi apne jism me hote beintha dard ko mehsus karte hue bola , ravi ka jism fatne laga tha , voh kamzor ho hoker jamen par gir gya , uske moh se khoon behne laga ,

kuch cheezo ka nirman esi liye hota hai , tain ki voh cheeze control me rehe , erth ko gravity control me rakhti hai , or samaz ke banaye niyam , pariwar ko , esi trah devil ko control karne ke liye jivika ka nirman hua tha , jivika ik urza thi , usne janam nai liya tha , voh brehmand ki sabse badi urza ka ik ansh tha , jise marna kathin tha ,

"ahhh meri batt man jaooo , doorr ho jaoo meriii betiii seee , varnaaa marrr jaugeee..." beintha tez chalte tufan ke bech kat , ravi ko behad kamzor karte hue boli ,

"ahahaha , mar doo , koiii batt naiii , par zukugaa naiii , ahhhhhh me apniii betii ke liyee jaan deee saktaa huu katlynnn..." ravi dard me kahrahte hue beintha haste hue bola ,

"tum marr naii sakteee me jantiii huu , parrr me tume sadyion tak aise hi tadfa saktiii huu..." kat or bhi gusse me apne jism se nikalti roshni se ravi ko jalate hue boli ,

"toh tum bhiii ahhh doorrr rahugiii meriii betiii see , me naiii jukugaaa , chahe sadyoin tak yeh dard sehna padheee , prithvi ke ant aaahhhhhhh ki tum jimedar hogiiiii , sirf tumm..." ravi or bhi dard me kahrahte hue bola , devil bane rehna uske liye shap tha ,

"tum jiddii hoo , us wakht ruhi se door naii hue , or abh meri beti se door nai ho rehe ho , me tumari jidd tod dungi devil , tume zukna hoga jivika ke agge..." kat behad gusse me boli ,

"pagal ladkiiii , ahhh devil ko zukana chahti ho , tum , ahhh , tum , kuch nai kar saktiii , meriii jiddd tume bhi fariii se door rakhegiiii , koi na koiii use ghar le hi jayegaaa , tum haar jaugiii kattt..." ravi behad dard bhare shabado me bola ,

tabhi ik dam se vaha ik blackhole bana , or khushi , ravi ko utha , vaha se gyab ho gaii , kattt dhere dhere shant hone lagi , lekin gussa abhi bhi vahi tha ,

"yahhhhhh , tamasss tum bhi marugiii meree hanthoo see..." kat jor se chekhte hue boli , tabhi kuch palu bad , vaha sab normal ho gya , tufan shant ho gya , lekin us tufan ne kuch hi palu me , sab cheezo ko tehas-nehas kar diya tha ,

kat vaha se udas sa chehre liye hospital ki traf badne lagi , jiska board tufan me tut kar niche gira hua tha , or kuch khidkyion ka kanch bhi tut chuka tha , kat yeh sab dekh or bhi udas ho gai , voh udas chehra or udas man liye hospital ke ander chali gai..

vahi dusri traf...

khushi ne apni teleport karne ki shakti se , ravi ko kat ki kaid se mukat kar diya tha , abh voh ravi ko vansha jungle me le ayi thi ,
ravi jamen par padha hua tha , voh devil roop me tha ,

"ravii , ravii , pls utho na , kya hua vaha par , kat se door rehna tha tume , voh kamzor karti hai tume , kyu gye uske nazdik..." khushi behad prem se ravi ke chehre ko chumte hue boli , devil ka chehra bahut ghinona tha , par prem me surat ka koi mahatav nai hota ,

"ahhh thik hu me tamas , uffff use jaan se mar dunga mee , meri beti ko cheen liya usne , or , or tum muze vaha se kyu le ayi , me mar nai saktaa , tume pata tha..." ravi jamen par lete lete hi akhen khol kar bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"voh , voh , ravi ik musibat a rehi haii , danvi sena , utho tum , me dikhati hu tume..." khushi behad nam akhon se boli ,

ravi uthne ki kossih karne laga , kuch hi palu me voh thik ho gya , or uth kar khada ho gya , or khushi ne use vansha jungle ke us parbat par , us nele pathar se nikalti urza , ravi ko apni shakti se dikha di , jo abh beintha phail chuki thi ,

"yeh sambhav nai hai , prithvi ka raksha kavach koi kaise tod sakta hai..." ravi , khushi ki akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"ravii , tum insani roop me ayo , ham ghar chalte hain pehle , phir koi plan bana kar unse ladege , eska jawab dundna hoga tume..." khushi , devil ke lal chehre ko hath se sehlate hue boli ,

"me a toh chuka hu insani roop me .." etna bol jaise hi ravi ne apne hatho ko ulta karke unki chamdi dekhi , voh chonk sa gya ,

"yeh sab jivika (kat) ne kiya hai , tain ki tum , fari se door raho , ohhh abh kya hoga..." khushi behad sehmi si boli ,

"katttttttttttttt (beintha gusse me ) , me tume tabah kar dungaa , mera roop cheen liya tumneee..." ravi gusse ki antim shikar tak pahunchte hue bola , uski tez chekh se uske charo or jungle me aag lag gai , sab kuch jalne laga , asman se bijliyan girne lagi prithvi par , pori prithvi kamp si gaii ,

"ravii shant ho jaoo , koi rasta hoga , kisi na kisi ko pata hoga , tum pehle jaise ho jayego..." khushi pyar se ravi ko shant karne lagii ,

"naiii ayega mera voh insani roop , me abh yeh lal darinda ban kar rahuga , jisko chute hi insan jal jayege , agar , agar koi insan muze dekhega , toh voh , voh dar se mar jayega , us jivika ne muze hara diya , mera roop cheen liya , me apni beti ke samne kaise ja pauga , meri betiii , fariiiiiiiiiii , tamassss meraa insanii roop vapis layoo varnaa sab kuch jala dungaa , kisi ko jinda nai chodugaa mee , muze meriii betii se milnaa haiiiiiiii..." ravi devil roop me or bhi gusse me ata hua dard bhare shabado me bola , uske jism se aag nikalne lagiii , uska jism fat kar garam jawalamukhi ke lave jaisa ho gya , aisa mehsus ho reha tha , voh aag ka bana hua tha...

tamas behad dar gaii , ik traf ravi ka gussa shant nai ho reha tha , or dusri traf , prithvi ka raksha kavach tutne wala tha , kya hona tha abh , agar etne gusse me ravii , danvi sena se ladta , toh voh pori manav jati ke liye khatra ban jata...

"khadi khadi mera moh kyaaa dekh rehiii hoo , meriii betiii ko layoo , jaooo tamass , tum mere sath thi na har pal , sadyion tak narag me jalta reha , par ruhi naii milii , kyu kiii jivika (kat) thii vaha , abh yaha meriii betii muzse door ho gaiiiiii , tamasss tum muzse pyarrr kartiii ho naa , phirr jaoo meriii betiii ko layoo..." ravi beintha gusse me chekhte hue dard bhare shabado me bola , uske dard bhare bepanah gusse ne tamas ko ander tak hila diya tha ,

"raviii (rote hue) shant ho jaoo , farii tume es roop me dekhte hi mar jayegii , plss shant ho jaoo , ham koi rasta nikal lete hain ..." khushi , ravi ke samne ghutno ke bal bethte hue boli , ravi ke jism se nikalti garam aag se , khushi ka jism bhi lal hone laga tha , par voh devil ki tapash ko sehan kar sakti thi ,

"han , meri betiii marrr jayegiiii , mere es roop ko dekhte hiii , par meraa gussaa kam nai ho rehaa , muze prithvi chodni hogiii , hame vapis hell jana hogaa tamas , or koi rasta naiii haiii , mera gussa abh sadyion tak shant nai hogaaa , hame hell janaa hogaaa..." ravi apne saar ko dono hatho me dabate hue bola , uski akhon ke samne uski beti ka chehra bar bar a reha tha , lekin es bat ka use ehsas ho gya tha , voh kabhi apni betiii se mil nai payegaa...

"raviiii , ham jayege hell , bus ik akhri kam kar le , ik acha kam , ham dono ne pichle pore janam me , pita ji ke banaye nizmo ka toda , abh en masom logu ki raksha kar , ik antim acha kam kar lete hain , or yeh fari ke liye bhi jaruri hai , fari ko bachana hai hame , raviii us danvi sena ka ant kar , voh ring unse cheen lo..." tamas beintha gusse or dard bhare shabado me boli ,

"vofffff voofff (ghurate hue) , tum thik keh rehiiii hoo tamass , me us ring ka kissa abh yahi khatam kar dungaaa , me ladugaaa shetian ki senaa see , parrr yeh koiii achaaa kam naiiii hogaaa , sunaaa tumneee pitaaa jiiiii , me devil huuu , devil tha , or devil hi rahugaaaa , apniiii betiii ko bachanaaa haiii muzeee , chaloo tamassss..." raviiii apne devil roop me or bhi gusse me ate hue bola , khas kar jab usne apne pita ko yad kiya tha... abh shyad jung hone wali thi , ik antim jung , or eska ant ik dardnak roop me hone wala tha...


[me samazta hu ke es update me pics ki jarurat nai hogi , bus mehsus karna update ko :) ]


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Fantastic update:superb:

Fari or ravi ka milan emotional tha :cry2:
Kat ne ye achha nhi kiya fari ko ravi se dur krke:verysad:
Ravi ka gussa sb tabah kr dega
Kat ne ravi ka insaani roop chheen liya:shocked: ab wo fari se kaise milne jayega:verysad: kat ne dur kr hi diya ravi ko fari se :sigh: ravi ab kisike samne nhi ja skta rimi shruti ke samne bi nhi wo bi dar jayegi ravi ko dekhke
Ravi hell ja ra wapas sbko chhodke ye sahi nhi ho ra:verysad:
Danvi sena ab ravi ke gusse ka samna krenge ravi ka devil roop khtm kr dega unko:nanchaku:
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