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Abh agge...
Dusri traf ....
Sham ke 6 baj rehe the , baby akeli apne room me bethi ro rehi thi , roti bhi kyu na , akhir uska pyar , uski jaan , uska sab kuch , ajj ik pathar ki murat bana betha tha ,
Jise ajj uske hath ki chuhan bhi thik nai kar pa rehi thi , baby es sab me apni hi galti manti thi ,
baby dil me ik dard liye tadaf rehi thi , voh apne app ko ravi ka doshi manti thi , agar voh us din jungle na jati toh ajj uska ravi thik hota ,
baby abh ravi ki asliyet janti thi , use pata tha , ke uska ravi ik vampire tha , voh vampires ki aisi halat par reserch kar rehi thi , lekin use abh tak es bare me kuch pata nai chala tha ,
baby abhi bed par bethi ro hi rehi thi , ke katlyn uske liye kuch khane ko leker a gai , use bhi dukh tha ravi ki aisi halat par ,
katlyn , baby ke pas akar beth gai , usne baby ko jab rote dekha toh voh etne dino ka dard jo usne apne ander daba rakha tha , voh dard uski akhon se behne laga ,
katlyn rone lagi , baby ne jab katlyn ko rote dekha , tab usne apni khubsurat akhon se behte asnuyion ko hatho se saf kiya or katlyn ko apne gale laga liya ,
"kat , kyu ro rehi ho tum.." baby ne katlyn ke asnyuion se bhege galo ko saf karte hue bola ,
"baby tum pichle 7 dino se dukhi ho , na kuch thik trah se khati ho na peti ho , kya karu me , (rote hue) me tume dard me nai dekh sakti , kyu kar rehi ho yeh sab.." katlyn ne baby ke galo ko chumte hue rote hue bola ,
"toh kya karu me , ravi ki aisi dardnak halat muzse dekhi nai jati , voh ander hi ander mar reha hai , or me , or me , kuch nai kar sakti.." baby ne or bhi jor se rote hue bola ,
"ohh meri jaan , voh thik ho jayega , yeh lo gun.." katlyn ne ik gun baby ke hathion me dete hue bola ,
baby herian si hui katlyn ki traf dekhti rehi , katlyn ne baby ke hatho me gun pakada , use apne mathe ke bechu bech rakh liya or boli ,
"baby me tume dukhi or rote hue nai dekh sakti , pls muze mar do , me tumse beintha pyar karti hu , or muzse yeh sehan nai ho reha ke tum es trah har pal roti reho , muze dard ho reha hai ander hi ander , muze mar do baby , pls .." katlyn ne rote hue bola ,
baby ne ika ik gun door fenk di or katlyn ko apni bahu me bhar liya or uske pore chehre ko chumne lagi , kuch der baby katlyn ke chehre ko chumti rehi , uske hontho ko chusti rehi ,
"kat , muze maf kar do , me abh kabhi nai royugi , muze samaz a gya ke mera ravi jalad hi thik ho jayega , par me apni jaan ko aise dard me nai dekh sakti , abh me khush rahugi , jaisa tum kahugi vaisa hi karugi.." baby ne katlyn ke hontho ko bar bar chumte hue bola ,
kuch der dono esi trah apas me pyar karti rehi , or phir katlyn ne baby ko apne hathion se khana khilya or use apne sath leker let gai ,
baby ka dard toh katlyn ne khatam kar diya tha , par ik ravi tha jiska dard abh har gujar rehe pal ke sath nafrat ke us selab me parvartit ho reha tha , jis me uska pavitar prem kuch lamhu ke liye behne wala tha ,
ravi abh dhere dhere ring ka gulam banta ja reha tha , kya chupa tha anne wale wakht me , ring ka rahasye abhi bhi vaise hi tha , jaisa sadyion pehle tha ,
Dusri traf....
rat ke 8 baj rehe the , dining table par seema sabko khana khila rehi thi , kisi ka bhi man nai tha , khana khane ko , lekin seema jabardasti sabko khila rehi thi ,
sabki akhen bus usi room par ataki hui thi , yaha se ravi bahar anne wala tha ,
"maa bhyia thik hoker subah bahar ayege na.." rema ne thoda nam akhen kar bola ,
"han mera bacha , apni maa ki bat par vishwas kar , subah hote hi tera bhi tum sabko pyar se gale lagayega..." seema ne rema ke baalo par pyar se hath phirate hue bola ,
"bhabhi komal dedi kaha hai , pichle 7 dino se hamne use nai dekha.." rimi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,
"han bhabhi komal kaha hai , voh toh bhyia ke bina ik pal nai reh pati thi , kaha hai voh.." shurti ne bhi rimi ki traf dekhte hue bola ,
"hashh , dekho meri ik bat dyan se sun lo , tum sab ki sab , ajj ke bad komal ka nam es ghar me koi nai lega ..." seema ne sabki traf dekhte hue bola ,
"maa yeh kya bol rehi ho app , agar bhyie ne hamse pucha toh kya bolege ham.." rema ne khane khate khate ruk kar bola ,
"bhabhi , ravi toh ik pal bhi komal se door nai reh sakta .." shurti bhi khana bech me hi chodte hue boli..
"komal abh es dunia me nai rehi , voh mar chuki hai.." seema ne rote hue bola ,
"kya ..." rema , rimi or shurti ik dam se chila kar boli , unki akhon me asnu ubhar aye the ,
"yeh sab kab hua mom.." rema ne beintha rote hue bola ,
"meri bachi , tumare bhyia ki jaan bachne ke liye komal ne apni jaan kurban kar di , tumare bhyia un adamkhor logo ko marne ke liye gye the , tab komal ne apni jindgi kurban kar , tumare bhyia ko bacha liya par.." seema rote hue bolti bolti ruk gai ,
"han maa bolu agge.." rema bhi rote rote sab sun rehi thi ,
"han bhabhi agge bolu.." shurti bhi rote hue boli ,
"par komal ne ravi ke dil me apne liye nafrat paida kar di , es nafrat ko ravi sehan nai kar paya or koma me chala gya , komal ke pas or koi rasta nai bacha tha , ik ki jaan toh jani hi thi , lekin komal ne apne paviter prem ko sabit kiya or ravi ko bacha liya , es liye jab ravi subah thik hoker bahar ayega , tab tum sab aise behave karna jaise komal es dunia me kabhi mazod hi nai thi , varna tumara bhai phir se koma me chala jayega.." seema ne apni nam akhon ko saf karte hue bola ,
"meri komal etna pyar karti hai apne bhai se , apni jindgi kurban kar di , ham kaise chupa payegi es dard ko ..."shurti ne rote hue bola ,
"yeh sab tum sab ko karna hi hoga , tumare bhyia ko komal ke bare me or pichle 7 din kya kya hua , eska kuch bhi yad nai hoga , tum sab uski har bat me sath dena , jo bhi puche.." seema ne sabki traf dekh kar bola ,
"par maa agar bhyia ko komal dedi yad hui toh..." rema ne seh bhavik hi yeh swal kar diya ,
"han bhabhi phir kya hoga.." shurti bhi rema ke samazdari se bhare swal se parbhavit hote hue boli ,
"dekho ya toh ravi komal ko bhul chuka hoga , ya phir uske man me komal ke liye beintha nafrat hogi , kyu ki use aisa mehsus hoga , jaise komal ne use pyar me dhoka diya hai , tab ham sab bhi use yahi ehsas dilayegi ke voh sahi hai , komal ne use dhoka diya hai or voh ghar chod kar chali gai.." seema ne phir se nam akhen kar bola ,
"ohh etna bada zuth .."rimi ne rote hue bola ,
"rimi me bhi janti hu ke yeh bahut bada zuth hoga , lekin hame yeh zuth bolna hi hoga , komal mar chuki hai , usne tumare bhai ke dil me jo nafrat chodi hai , voh nafrat hamare pyar se kam hogi , bhul jao komal ko tum sab , tum bhi use bevafa samazo , tain ki tumara bhai apni agge ki jindgi jee sake , tum sab ko meri batian samaz a gai na..."
"maa ham apne dil par pathar rakh bhyia se zuth bol lenge , tain ki voh khush reh sake , maa lekin komal ham sab ke dil me amar rehegi , ham sab uski poja karegi , uski kurbani jaya nai hogi , voh bhyia ko khush dekhna chahti thi , ham uski yeh akhri icha jarur pora karegi , maa , ham apne dil par pathar rakh lengi , vaise bhi aurat ka dil bahut vishal or gehra hota hai , ham sab komal ke bevafa hone ka dard apne ander sama lengi.." rema ne rote hue bola ,
rema ne vahi bola , jo sabki juban kehna chahti thi , sab ki akhen nam thi , abh shyad unke liye bhi komal bevafa ho chuki thi , komal abh voh bevafa ladki thi , jisne apne bhai ko dhoka diya or use chod kar chali gai....
to be counited.....
ab aur kya kahu. Aapko wapas dekhnkar to aisa lag raha he jaise pata nahi mene kise wapas dekh liya ho itna khush hu me aaj. Aur aate hi dhamake bhi karne suru kar diye. Suhana ki kahani bhi achi chal rahi he aur baby aur kat ka pyar bhi aage bhad raha he. Seema ne sabko samjha bhi diya he ki unhe kaise behave karna he jab ravi bahar ayega. Lekin in sab me komal ko itani badi saza kis baat ki de rahe ho. Wo waha andhere me bhatak rahi hogi ya kaid hogi aur yaha use bewafa ka naam diya ja raha he. Ufff ye to jite ji tejab peene wali baat he. Khair aapne jo bhi socha hoga achha hi socha hoga. Me to bas itna hi janta hu ki puri story me bechari komal ko kabhi bhi sukun bhari jindagi jine ko nahi mili aur ab maut se battar jindagi bhi mili to wo bhi us ilzam ke sath jo kisi ko bhi jinda lash bana dega. Mere liye ab tak ki kahani ka main character KOMAL hi rahi.