Incest Deewangi - A brother sister love story

[parkas]

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Viraj ko kaafi saare log mil kar Peet rahe the...jisme Rohan aur uski gang thi...bht uchal rha hai, Apne aap ko bht bda studd smjhta hai saale tjhe twriaukat dikhayenge, diii..pyar ka ye sila diya aapne kyuuu...isse acha toh mjhe maar deti...pyar nahi hawas hai teri, aur aaj tere ander ki aag ache se mita dungi Rohan maaro isko, dii nahi plzzz..nahiiii..aaahhh ..diiiiiii...........
Issi ke sath viraj ki ankhe khul jati hai aur wo hosh me achuka tha, nurse jese hi usko dekhti hai wo doctor ko bulane chali jati hai...

Viraj : ( apne jo kiya h mere sath wo mai kabhi nahi bhulunga, apne viraj ka pyar dekha h ab dekhogi meri beintehaa nafrat Miss Natasha Kapoor....)
Doctor : Mr. Viraj Kapoor kesa feel kr rhe aap??
Viraj : thik hu doctor sahab thank you mjhe nayi zindagi dene ke liye...
Doctor : thankyou toh aap. Apni behen ko boliye jo aapko yamraj ke pass se wapis le ayi, nahi toh we declare you dead pta nahi aap kese wapis se Zinda hogye, wo kehte h na uper wale ki marzi ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti khair u take care...aur zada move mat kriye aapki kayi jagah fractures h thoda time lagega thik hone me..

Doctor bahar aate hai...

Doctor : dekhiye ab aap log usse mil skte hai lekin ek ek krke aur koi aisi baat mat kriyega jisse wo stress le okay...
Madhuri : pehle Mai jaungi mjhe apne laal ko dekhna hai...
Mr. Kapoor: thik h bhai tum hi pehle jao wese bhi tum maa ho uski...jao mil lo apne bete se..

Madhuri ander jaati hai toh viraj ko dekhte hi uske ankho me ansu ajate hai wo viraj ke pass jaake baith jati hai...

Madhuri : ye kya haal bna liya apna hnn, bolti thi na dheere chalaya kr lekin nahi mani tune meri baat khair chod jo hona tha ab ho gya lekin tjhe meri kasam aaj se abhi se mjhse wada kr ki tu gaadi tez nahi chalayega, kr waada...
Viraj : thik h maa waada...
Madhuri : mera pyara bachaa, ab tu jaldi se thik hoja fir dekh tjhe kese pehle jesa hatta katta krdungi khila pila ke...
Viraj : thik h maa aap jesa bologi krungaa..
Madhuri : mera Raja beta ( aur dheere se uske sar pe hath fer deti hai ) chal ab mei jati hu tere papa bhi tujhse milne ke liye kitna pareshan ho rhe h...

Madhuri bahar aati h fir Mr. Kapoor ander jaate hai..

Mr. Kapoor : mere sher kesa h tu ab hnn jada mat soch jo hogya so hogya, aur tu thik hoja tjhe nayi gaadi dilwa dunga mei thik h...
Viraj : (dheere se) I love you papa..
Mr. Kapoor : I love you too bete, chalo ab aaram kro okay Natasha bechari kal se bht pareshan h usse bhejta hu kal wohi thi jo mandir me jaake tere liye prasad layi rhi jisse khakar tu Aaj humare samne hai...ye kehkar Mr .Kapoor bahar ajate hai aur Natasha ko ander jaane ke liye kehte h lekin Natasha waha nahi hoti hai...
Mr. Kapoor : arey Madhuri ye Natasha kha??
Madhuri : abhi toh yahi thi achanak kha chali gyi, shayad washroom gyi hogi aati hi hogi..

Idhar Natasha washroom me ro rahi thi uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki viraj ke samne jaye, wo kese usko face kregi yahi sab soch ke wo ander Jane se dar rahi thi tabhi uske mobile pe Mr . Kapoor ka call ata hai...

Mr. Kapoor : beta kha aap, itni der hogyi hai jaldi aoo apne bhai se nahi milogi..
Natasha : hnn...arahi hu papa wo bas washroom me thoda tym lag gya...aur wo ICU ke bahar ajati hai...
Madhuri : areyy tu kha thi Jaa mil le usse...
Natasha : (darte huye room me enter hoti hai aur dheere dheere chal ke viraj ke bagal me baith jati hai, viraj ki ankhe band thi ) bhaiii... ( Viraj aankhe khol ke ek nazar Natasha ko dekhta hai) Mjhe maaf krde bhai, mei janti hu meine jo Kiya hai uski maafi nahi h lekin such bhai mei khud nahi janti thi mjhe kya ho gya tha, kese meine wo sab krdiya, lanat h mujh par, mei tere layak nahi hu bhai maaf krde na mjhe...aur wo rone lagti h..
Viraj : ( apne Mann me..maafi nahi milegi di aapko, tadapna padega mere pyar ke liye jis tarah mei tadpa hu )
Natasha : kuch bol na bhai teri chuppi mei bardasht nahi krskti hu, plzzz kuch toh bolde...
Viraj : kya jo meri beizati college me aapne ki h wo sab thik krdogi aap bolo..mjhe ghaseet kr college ke bahar fek diya gya isse baddtar kya ho skta hai, nafrat krta hu mei aapse aur zindagi bhar krta rahunga..chali jao aap...

Tab tak nurse ajati hai, chaliye ab bahar jahiye patient ko medicine leke rest Krna hai please madam bahar jaiye...Natasha room se bahar ajati hai...

Madhuri : mil ayi apne bhai se bht khush hua hoga na wo, arey hum dono jada pyar wo tujhse krta h Natasha..
Mr. Kapoor : arey Madhuri kyu nhi krega aakhir ghar me wo uski sbse badi supporter jo hai...
Madhuri : ye aapne thik kaha...
Natasha : (wo kuch nahi bol rhi thi bas soch me doobi huyi thi, viraj mjhse nafrat krta hai??.. wo mjhse nafrat kese kr skta hai mei toh uski jaan hu na, meine bht galt kiya hai uske sath lekin mei jald hi sab thik krdugi dekhna, uski nafrat ko pyar me badal dungi mei, wo viraj ke sath bitaye huye pal yaad krne lagti hai ki jab usne viraj ko kiss kiya, viraj ne usse bra panty me dekha tha, aur jab viraj ne uski nabhi ko touch kiya tha, kese wo usse chedta rehta tha aur uske lun ko jo khada tha usse bra panty me dekh kr, badmashh...uske chehre pe smile ajati hai,......viraj tum sirf mere ho sirf mereee...)
Madhuri : oye kha khoyi huyi ho...hum kabse tujhse kuch puch rhe hai...
Natasha : maa, papa wo mera bhai hai sirf mera smjhe aap dono aur wo mjhse milke sbse jada khush tha ab dekhna aap log mei usse kitna jaldi thik krdungi
Madhuri : mera beta bht lucky hai ki usse Natasha jesi itni care krne wali behen mili hai..
Natasha : nahi maa mei bht lucky hu ki mjhe viraj jesa bhai mila h jo mjhse behad pyar krta hai...aap dono ne kuch khaya Piya nahi kal se mei aap dono ke liye coffee le ati hu aur kuch snacks okay..
Mr. Kapoor : thik h beta jao le aoo

Natasha coffee lene hospital ki canteen chali jati hai aur khud se kehti hai

Natasha : Viraj tune Meri nafrat dekhi hai, pyar dekha hai lekin ab tu dekhega meri DEEWANGI.....


Natasha ki ye deewangi kis hadd tak jayegi jaan ne ke liye Stay tuned guys.....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Behenkarakshak bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

 

[Gaurav1969]

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Madhuri Natasha ko uthati hai...

Madhuri : natasha uth beta sambhal khud ko, ( wo Natasha ke muh pe pani maarte huye usse uthati hai ), uth tashu chal na hospital le chal mjhe Mera bachaa, mjhe usse dekhna hai..
Natasha : hnn maa kuch nahi hoga mere viraj ko chalo hume jald se jald hospital pahuchna hoga ( wo gaadi nikalti hai aur dono maa beti badhawas si halat me hospital pahuch jate hai jha sharad pehle se maujood the )
Mr Kapoor : madhuri, Natasha humara betaaa, wo foot foot kr rone lagta hai..
Madhuri : kha hai wo kha hai mera laal?? ( Wo rote huye idhar udhar dekhne lagti hai)
Mr. Kapoor : wo udhar ICU me admit hai.. (madhuri aur natasha ICU ke ander jhankte hai jha viraj ko letaya hua tha aur doctors ki team usse observe kr rhe the )
Natasha : ( ye meine kya kr diya, apne gusse ki aag me apne hi bhai ko hi jala diya, akhir kiya hi kya tha usne..mjhse pyar hi toh kiya tha uski itni badi saza dedi meine, ek badi behen hone ke naate usse smjhana chahiye the aur meine kya kiya usko sabke samne beizzat krdiya...

Tabhi ICU me se doctors bahar aate hai wo bht jaldi me the...

Mr Kapoor: Dr sahab viraj kesa..??
Madhuri : mera baccha thik ho jayega na Dr??
Natasha : mera bhai kesa h btaiye na Dr plzz..
Doctor : dekhiye Mr. and Mrs. Kapoor, accident bht hi bura hua h wo Zinda hai filhal ye hi bht badi baat h warna aise accidents me bachna next to impossible hota hai khair condition bht critical hai sir me bhi chot ayi hai ho skta h internal bleeding bhi ho multiple fractures bhi h... wese Natasha kon hai??
Natasha : ji Dr. Me hu Natasha uski badi behen..
Doctor : dekhiye usne 2 - 3 baar aapka naam liya hai ab mjhe jaane dijiye uska operation jald se jald Krna padega warna kuch bhi ho skta hai baaki ab aap bhagwan se prathna kijiye...

Doctors viraj ko OT me leke chale jaate hai jha pe uska operation suru ho jata hai, sab uske liye prathna krte hai wahi Natasha hospital me Bane mandir me ghutno ke bal baith jati hai aur bhagwan se prathna krne lagti hai..

Natasha : hey bhagwan kyu mere viraj ke sath ye sab hua, ye sab toh mjhe jesi ladki ke sath hona chahiye tha, jo mjhe apni jaan Maan ta tha uski hi jaan aaj mere wajeh se khatre me hai, usse bacha lijiye chahe toh mjhe saza dijiye lekin usse bacha lijiye , ( wo fufut kr rone lagti hai ) aise samay me bhi wo mera naam le rha tha, bhai mei tere pyar ke layak nahi hu, kyu kiya tune mjhe jesi ladki se pyar jisne tjhe sirf takleef Diya akhir kyuuu???

Tabhi OT me se ek nurse bahar ayi sab usse viraj ke baare me puchne lage Natasha bhi bhagi bhagi agyi...

Natasha : kesa h mera bhai..
Nurse : dekhiye patient ki halat bht kharab hote ja rhi h agar aisa hi hua toh usse bachana mushkil ho jayega ab hatiye mjhe Jane dijiye...
MR. & Mrs. Kapoor : humara beta...( Dono lagbhag sadme me agye the )

Natasha fir se mandir ke pass jake khadi ho jati h, tabhi ek aurat aati hai aur kehti hai pass me ek bholenath ka mandir h badi manyata hai uss mandir ki beti tum waha jao aur bhagwan shiv ki puja krna dekhna wo teri Murad poori krdenge.. der mat kr beti ja aur Prasad leke ana aur usse mariz ko khila Dena wo thik ho jayega, Natasha ye sunte hi mandir ke taraf dauda padti hai raat ka samay tha uski bhagte bhagte uski sandal bhi toot jati hai wo nange pair daudne lagti hai..

Natasha : bhai mei tjhe kuch nahi hone dungi...( Bhagte bhagte uska pair patthar se takra jata hai wo gir jati h jisse uske ghutna me chot lagti hai lekin wo jhat se khadi ho jati hai aur dard ki parwah na krte huye mandir pahuch jati hai, mandir me koi nhi tha, halki andhi bhi chal rhi thi jisse dhul mitti aur sukhe patte mandir me agye the wo jaldi se pas me pade jhadu se mandir ko saaf krti hai aur fir bhagwan ki murti ke samne diya jalati h aur puja krne lagti hai wo bhagwan ko khush krne ke liye tandav krne lagti hai aur viraj ke pran ki bheek mangne lagti hai, tabhi eka ek tez andhi chalne lagti hai, dusri taraf doctors poori koshish kr rhe the viraj ko bachane ki lekin viraj ki halat toh bigadte hi ja rhi thi..
Nurse : Dr. Patient ki pulse girte hi ja rhi hai...
Doctor : shock dena padega nurse taiyari kro jaldi we don't have much time...
(Doctors viraj ko shock Dene lagte hai )
1,2,3....shockkk...

Idhar Natasha andhi me nachte nachte thak kr girjati hai aur tabhi bhagwan ji ki murti ke uper se ek fool girke unke charna me ajata hai Natasha ye dekh kr jaldi se uss fool ko uthati hai aur prasad me jo laddu pada tha wo uthake jaldi se hospital ke taraf bhagti hai

Natasha : mei arhi hu viraaajj...
( Wo bhagte bhagte hospital pahuch jati hai aur jab wo wha pahuchti hai toh dekhti h ki OT ki lights band ho chuki hai aur doctors bahar arhe hai)
Sab bhagte huye doctor ke pas ajate hai..
Sharad : kesa h mera beta Dr.
Madhuri : wo thik h na ab Dr. Boliye na kuch aap chup kyu h..
Doctor : dekhiye Mr. And Mrs. Kapoor we are sorry humne aapke bete ko bachane ki poori koshish kri lekin...
Madhuri : lekin kya doctor...
Doctor : sorry Mrs. Kapoor hum usse nahi bacha paye......
Madhuri : nahiiiiiiii.......( Wo behosh ho jati hai )
Mr. Kapoor : viraaaajjjj mere bete nahiiii.....
Natasha : aisa nahi hoskta...ye sach nahi ho skta viraj mjhe chod ke nahi ja skta ( uske kadam ladkhadane lagte h, wo bhagti huyi OT ke ander ghus jati hai)

Nurse viraj ke uper safed kapde ko dalne hi wali hoti hai ki Natasha usse dhakel deti hai...
Natasha : tumhari himmat kese huye mere bhai ke uper ye kapda daalne ki,, viraj dekh mei agyi hu ab tu thik hojayega, ( wo uss fool ko bhagwan ka naam lete huye viraj ke mathe pe rakhti hai aur prasad ke tukde ko viraj ke muh ke ander daal deti hai...lekin kuch nahi hota wo jor jor se rone lagti hai ) uth ja na bhai maaf krde mjhe, tu jo saza dega mjhe manzur hai lekin mjhe chod ke mat Jaa mar jaungi mei tere bina, viraaajjjj....uth tu abhiii (wo usse chati pe mukke marne lagti hai) tjhe uthna hi padega tu mjhe chod ke nahi ja sktaaaa...viraaaaajjjj ( aur tabhi wo ek zor ka mukka viraj ki chati me fir se maarti hai jisse viraj ki saanse ek dum se wapis ajati hai )
Nurse: miracle, ye toh chamatkar ho gya, meine apne medical career me aisa pehle kabhi nahi dekha wo doctors ko bula leti hai...
Doctors : hatiye aap sab mjhe dekhne dijiye, ye toh kamal hogya mareez mar ke wapis Zinda hogya hai...ye toh sirf bhagwan ki shakti se hi possible hai, (viraj ko wapis se saare medical equipments pehna diye jate hai aur firse observation me rakha jata hai, doctors OT se bahar aate h)

Doctor : badhai ho Mr and Mrs Kapoor aapka beta ab khatre se bahar hai lagta hai kisi ne poore Dil se uske liye prathna kiya tha
Mr. Kapoor : thank you so much Dr. Sahab...
Nurse : thank you aap inki behen ko boliye aaj ye jinda h toh sirf unki wajeh se...
Madhuri Natasha ko gale se lga leti hai aur dono maa beti ek dusre ke gale lag kr rone lagti hai...

Mr Kapoor : apne Jeb se pese nikalte hai aur nurse ko dete hai hospital me mithayi batwa dijiye mera beta ab khatre se bahar hai...
Madhuri : kya ab mei apne bete se mil skti hu??
Doctor: abhi patient ko thoda stable hone dijiye fir ap log usse mil skte hai...

Kapoor family me Khushi leher daud gyi thi kaale badal hat gye the ek naye sawere ka aagman ho chuka tha, Natasha bhagwan ka dhanyawad krti hai ki unhone uski puja sweekar ki aur viraj ko thik krdiya, ab dekhna ye tha ki viraj ke hosh me aane ke baad kya hoga, kya wo Natasha ko maaf krega ya suru hogi
DEEWANGI ki ek nayi dastaan, jaane ne ke liye stay tuned

So viraj condition become worse at the hospital .Natasha's prayers help him to bring out of danger . Bro is plot pe aap kuch naya try karte na jaise ki viraj thik to ho jata hai but usko kuch medical problems as a curse milti hai .
Its my thoughts but as a writer you know this story best than anyone else.
Keep writing and keep growing

 

[Vikash007]

Super update

 

[Behenkarakshak]

Finally the worst that can happen to viraj just happened at fresher's party . Feeling sad for him . Why is Natasha's feelings so fragile ,at this instant its angry at next instant its loving ,at another its guilty . Bahut hi sensitive hai natasha . Dekhte hai kya haal rehta hai viraj ka accident ke baad

Story ka title h DEEWANGI, bht jald aap logo ko pta chalega ki ye deewangi Viraj ki h ya Natasha ki???
Pyar jab junoon ban jaye toh ya to wo abaad hota h ya barbaad

 

[kingkhankar]

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Viraj ko kaafi saare log mil kar Peet rahe the...jisme Rohan aur uski gang thi...bht uchal rha hai, Apne aap ko bht bda studd smjhta hai saale tjhe twriaukat dikhayenge, diii..pyar ka ye sila diya aapne kyuuu...isse acha toh mjhe maar deti...pyar nahi hawas hai teri, aur aaj tere ander ki aag ache se mita dungi Rohan maaro isko, dii nahi plzzz..nahiiii..aaahhh ..diiiiiii...........
Issi ke sath viraj ki ankhe khul jati hai aur wo hosh me achuka tha, nurse jese hi usko dekhti hai wo doctor ko bulane chali jati hai...

Viraj : ( apne jo kiya h mere sath wo mai kabhi nahi bhulunga, apne viraj ka pyar dekha h ab dekhogi meri beintehaa nafrat Miss Natasha Kapoor....)
Doctor : Mr. Viraj Kapoor kesa feel kr rhe aap??
Viraj : thik hu doctor sahab thank you mjhe nayi zindagi dene ke liye...
Doctor : thankyou toh aap. Apni behen ko boliye jo aapko yamraj ke pass se wapis le ayi, nahi toh we declare you dead pta nahi aap kese wapis se Zinda hogye, wo kehte h na uper wale ki marzi ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti khair u take care...aur zada move mat kriye aapki kayi jagah fractures h thoda time lagega thik hone me..

Doctor bahar aate hai...

Doctor : dekhiye ab aap log usse mil skte hai lekin ek ek krke aur koi aisi baat mat kriyega jisse wo stress le okay...
Madhuri : pehle Mai jaungi mjhe apne laal ko dekhna hai...
Mr. Kapoor: thik h bhai tum hi pehle jao wese bhi tum maa ho uski...jao mil lo apne bete se..

Madhuri ander jaati hai toh viraj ko dekhte hi uske ankho me ansu ajate hai wo viraj ke pass jaake baith jati hai...

Madhuri : ye kya haal bna liya apna hnn, bolti thi na dheere chalaya kr lekin nahi mani tune meri baat khair chod jo hona tha ab ho gya lekin tjhe meri kasam aaj se abhi se mjhse wada kr ki tu gaadi tez nahi chalayega, kr waada...
Viraj : thik h maa waada...
Madhuri : mera pyara bachaa, ab tu jaldi se thik hoja fir dekh tjhe kese pehle jesa hatta katta krdungi khila pila ke...
Viraj : thik h maa aap jesa bologi krungaa..
Madhuri : mera Raja beta ( aur dheere se uske sar pe hath fer deti hai ) chal ab mei jati hu tere papa bhi tujhse milne ke liye kitna pareshan ho rhe h...

Madhuri bahar aati h fir Mr. Kapoor ander jaate hai..

Mr. Kapoor : mere sher kesa h tu ab hnn jada mat soch jo hogya so hogya, aur tu thik hoja tjhe nayi gaadi dilwa dunga mei thik h...
Viraj : (dheere se) I love you papa..
Mr. Kapoor : I love you too bete, chalo ab aaram kro okay Natasha bechari kal se bht pareshan h usse bhejta hu kal wohi thi jo mandir me jaake tere liye prasad layi rhi jisse khakar tu Aaj humare samne hai...ye kehkar Mr .Kapoor bahar ajate hai aur Natasha ko ander jaane ke liye kehte h lekin Natasha waha nahi hoti hai...
Mr. Kapoor : arey Madhuri ye Natasha kha??
Madhuri : abhi toh yahi thi achanak kha chali gyi, shayad washroom gyi hogi aati hi hogi..

Idhar Natasha washroom me ro rahi thi uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki viraj ke samne jaye, wo kese usko face kregi yahi sab soch ke wo ander Jane se dar rahi thi tabhi uske mobile pe Mr . Kapoor ka call ata hai...

Mr. Kapoor : beta kha aap, itni der hogyi hai jaldi aoo apne bhai se nahi milogi..
Natasha : hnn...arahi hu papa wo bas washroom me thoda tym lag gya...aur wo ICU ke bahar ajati hai...
Madhuri : areyy tu kha thi Jaa mil le usse...
Natasha : (darte huye room me enter hoti hai aur dheere dheere chal ke viraj ke bagal me baith jati hai, viraj ki ankhe band thi ) bhaiii... ( Viraj aankhe khol ke ek nazar Natasha ko dekhta hai) Mjhe maaf krde bhai, mei janti hu meine jo Kiya hai uski maafi nahi h lekin such bhai mei khud nahi janti thi mjhe kya ho gya tha, kese meine wo sab krdiya, lanat h mujh par, mei tere layak nahi hu bhai maaf krde na mjhe...aur wo rone lagti h..
Viraj : ( apne Mann me..maafi nahi milegi di aapko, tadapna padega mere pyar ke liye jis tarah mei tadpa hu )
Natasha : kuch bol na bhai teri chuppi mei bardasht nahi krskti hu, plzzz kuch toh bolde...
Viraj : kya jo meri beizati college me aapne ki h wo sab thik krdogi aap bolo..mjhe ghaseet kr college ke bahar fek diya gya isse baddtar kya ho skta hai, nafrat krta hu mei aapse aur zindagi bhar krta rahunga..chali jao aap...

Tab tak nurse ajati hai, chaliye ab bahar jahiye patient ko medicine leke rest Krna hai please madam bahar jaiye...Natasha room se bahar ajati hai...

Madhuri : mil ayi apne bhai se bht khush hua hoga na wo, arey hum dono jada pyar wo tujhse krta h Natasha..
Mr. Kapoor : arey Madhuri kyu nhi krega aakhir ghar me wo uski sbse badi supporter jo hai...
Madhuri : ye aapne thik kaha...
Natasha : (wo kuch nahi bol rhi thi bas soch me doobi huyi thi, viraj mjhse nafrat krta hai??.. wo mjhse nafrat kese kr skta hai mei toh uski jaan hu na, meine bht galt kiya hai uske sath lekin mei jald hi sab thik krdugi dekhna, uski nafrat ko pyar me badal dungi mei, wo viraj ke sath bitaye huye pal yaad krne lagti hai ki jab usne viraj ko kiss kiya, viraj ne usse bra panty me dekha tha, aur jab viraj ne uski nabhi ko touch kiya tha, kese wo usse chedta rehta tha aur uske lun ko jo khada tha usse bra panty me dekh kr, badmashh...uske chehre pe smile ajati hai,......viraj tum sirf mere ho sirf mereee...)
Madhuri : oye kha khoyi huyi ho...hum kabse tujhse kuch puch rhe hai...
Natasha : maa, papa wo mera bhai hai sirf mera smjhe aap dono aur wo mjhse milke sbse jada khush tha ab dekhna aap log mei usse kitna jaldi thik krdungi
Madhuri : mera beta bht lucky hai ki usse Natasha jesi itni care krne wali behen mili hai..
Natasha : nahi maa mei bht lucky hu ki mjhe viraj jesa bhai mila h jo mjhse behad pyar krta hai...aap dono ne kuch khaya Piya nahi kal se mei aap dono ke liye coffee le ati hu aur kuch snacks okay..
Mr. Kapoor : thik h beta jao le aoo

Natasha coffee lene hospital ki canteen chali jati hai aur khud se kehti hai

Natasha : Viraj tune Meri nafrat dekhi hai, pyar dekha hai lekin ab tu dekhega meri DEEWANGI.....


Natasha ki ye deewangi kis hadd tak jayegi jaan ne ke liye Stay tuned guys.....

Very good update.

 

[LASYBOY]

Waah Bhai Maza aagaya

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Viraj tune Meri nafrat dekhi hai, pyar dekha hai lekin ab tu dekhega meri DEEWANGI.....
Waiting For Next Update bro

 

[Gaurav1969]

Continued...

Viraj ko kaafi saare log mil kar Peet rahe the...jisme Rohan aur uski gang thi...bht uchal rha hai, Apne aap ko bht bda studd smjhta hai saale tjhe twriaukat dikhayenge, diii..pyar ka ye sila diya aapne kyuuu...isse acha toh mjhe maar deti...pyar nahi hawas hai teri, aur aaj tere ander ki aag ache se mita dungi Rohan maaro isko, dii nahi plzzz..nahiiii..aaahhh ..diiiiiii...........
Issi ke sath viraj ki ankhe khul jati hai aur wo hosh me achuka tha, nurse jese hi usko dekhti hai wo doctor ko bulane chali jati hai...

Viraj : ( apne jo kiya h mere sath wo mai kabhi nahi bhulunga, apne viraj ka pyar dekha h ab dekhogi meri beintehaa nafrat Miss Natasha Kapoor....)
Doctor : Mr. Viraj Kapoor kesa feel kr rhe aap??
Viraj : thik hu doctor sahab thank you mjhe nayi zindagi dene ke liye...
Doctor : thankyou toh aap. Apni behen ko boliye jo aapko yamraj ke pass se wapis le ayi, nahi toh we declare you dead pta nahi aap kese wapis se Zinda hogye, wo kehte h na uper wale ki marzi ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti khair u take care...aur zada move mat kriye aapki kayi jagah fractures h thoda time lagega thik hone me..

Doctor bahar aate hai...

Doctor : dekhiye ab aap log usse mil skte hai lekin ek ek krke aur koi aisi baat mat kriyega jisse wo stress le okay...
Madhuri : pehle Mai jaungi mjhe apne laal ko dekhna hai...
Mr. Kapoor: thik h bhai tum hi pehle jao wese bhi tum maa ho uski...jao mil lo apne bete se..

Madhuri ander jaati hai toh viraj ko dekhte hi uske ankho me ansu ajate hai wo viraj ke pass jaake baith jati hai...

Madhuri : ye kya haal bna liya apna hnn, bolti thi na dheere chalaya kr lekin nahi mani tune meri baat khair chod jo hona tha ab ho gya lekin tjhe meri kasam aaj se abhi se mjhse wada kr ki tu gaadi tez nahi chalayega, kr waada...
Viraj : thik h maa waada...
Madhuri : mera pyara bachaa, ab tu jaldi se thik hoja fir dekh tjhe kese pehle jesa hatta katta krdungi khila pila ke...
Viraj : thik h maa aap jesa bologi krungaa..
Madhuri : mera Raja beta ( aur dheere se uske sar pe hath fer deti hai ) chal ab mei jati hu tere papa bhi tujhse milne ke liye kitna pareshan ho rhe h...

Madhuri bahar aati h fir Mr. Kapoor ander jaate hai..

Mr. Kapoor : mere sher kesa h tu ab hnn jada mat soch jo hogya so hogya, aur tu thik hoja tjhe nayi gaadi dilwa dunga mei thik h...
Viraj : (dheere se) I love you papa..
Mr. Kapoor : I love you too bete, chalo ab aaram kro okay Natasha bechari kal se bht pareshan h usse bhejta hu kal wohi thi jo mandir me jaake tere liye prasad layi rhi jisse khakar tu Aaj humare samne hai...ye kehkar Mr .Kapoor bahar ajate hai aur Natasha ko ander jaane ke liye kehte h lekin Natasha waha nahi hoti hai...
Mr. Kapoor : arey Madhuri ye Natasha kha??
Madhuri : abhi toh yahi thi achanak kha chali gyi, shayad washroom gyi hogi aati hi hogi..

Idhar Natasha washroom me ro rahi thi uski himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki viraj ke samne jaye, wo kese usko face kregi yahi sab soch ke wo ander Jane se dar rahi thi tabhi uske mobile pe Mr . Kapoor ka call ata hai...

Mr. Kapoor : beta kha aap, itni der hogyi hai jaldi aoo apne bhai se nahi milogi..
Natasha : hnn...arahi hu papa wo bas washroom me thoda tym lag gya...aur wo ICU ke bahar ajati hai...
Madhuri : areyy tu kha thi Jaa mil le usse...
Natasha : (darte huye room me enter hoti hai aur dheere dheere chal ke viraj ke bagal me baith jati hai, viraj ki ankhe band thi ) bhaiii... ( Viraj aankhe khol ke ek nazar Natasha ko dekhta hai) Mjhe maaf krde bhai, mei janti hu meine jo Kiya hai uski maafi nahi h lekin such bhai mei khud nahi janti thi mjhe kya ho gya tha, kese meine wo sab krdiya, lanat h mujh par, mei tere layak nahi hu bhai maaf krde na mjhe...aur wo rone lagti h..
Viraj : ( apne Mann me..maafi nahi milegi di aapko, tadapna padega mere pyar ke liye jis tarah mei tadpa hu )
Natasha : kuch bol na bhai teri chuppi mei bardasht nahi krskti hu, plzzz kuch toh bolde...
Viraj : kya jo meri beizati college me aapne ki h wo sab thik krdogi aap bolo..mjhe ghaseet kr college ke bahar fek diya gya isse baddtar kya ho skta hai, nafrat krta hu mei aapse aur zindagi bhar krta rahunga..chali jao aap...

Tab tak nurse ajati hai, chaliye ab bahar jahiye patient ko medicine leke rest Krna hai please madam bahar jaiye...Natasha room se bahar ajati hai...

Madhuri : mil ayi apne bhai se bht khush hua hoga na wo, arey hum dono jada pyar wo tujhse krta h Natasha..
Mr. Kapoor : arey Madhuri kyu nhi krega aakhir ghar me wo uski sbse badi supporter jo hai...
Madhuri : ye aapne thik kaha...
Natasha : (wo kuch nahi bol rhi thi bas soch me doobi huyi thi, viraj mjhse nafrat krta hai??.. wo mjhse nafrat kese kr skta hai mei toh uski jaan hu na, meine bht galt kiya hai uske sath lekin mei jald hi sab thik krdugi dekhna, uski nafrat ko pyar me badal dungi mei, wo viraj ke sath bitaye huye pal yaad krne lagti hai ki jab usne viraj ko kiss kiya, viraj ne usse bra panty me dekha tha, aur jab viraj ne uski nabhi ko touch kiya tha, kese wo usse chedta rehta tha aur uske lun ko jo khada tha usse bra panty me dekh kr, badmashh...uske chehre pe smile ajati hai,......viraj tum sirf mere ho sirf mereee...)
Madhuri : oye kha khoyi huyi ho...hum kabse tujhse kuch puch rhe hai...
Natasha : maa, papa wo mera bhai hai sirf mera smjhe aap dono aur wo mjhse milke sbse jada khush tha ab dekhna aap log mei usse kitna jaldi thik krdungi
Madhuri : mera beta bht lucky hai ki usse Natasha jesi itni care krne wali behen mili hai..
Natasha : nahi maa mei bht lucky hu ki mjhe viraj jesa bhai mila h jo mjhse behad pyar krta hai...aap dono ne kuch khaya Piya nahi kal se mei aap dono ke liye coffee le ati hu aur kuch snacks okay..
Mr. Kapoor : thik h beta jao le aoo

Natasha coffee lene hospital ki canteen chali jati hai aur khud se kehti hai

Natasha : Viraj tune Meri nafrat dekhi hai, pyar dekha hai lekin ab tu dekhega meri DEEWANGI.....


Natasha ki ye deewangi kis hadd tak jayegi jaan ne ke liye Stay tuned guys.....

Now the wings have been changed natasha changes her stance from hatred to love and viraj do exactly the opposite . Lets see what will happen next .by the way has viraj been restrigated from college . I think mr kapoor influence will help him

 

[Behenkarakshak]

Now the wings have been changed natasha changes her stance from hatred to love and viraj do exactly the opposite . Lets see what will happen next .by the way has viraj been restrigated from college . I think mr kapoor influence will help him

Ya may be...you will soon get to know..

 

[mistyvixen]

Ya may be...you will soon get to know..

Add mom and sister love triangle if possible.... you're writing great till now...but it's my humble advice to avoid using emojis in the story

 

[Mrxr]

Continued...

Part -5 ( The Confession, Fresher's Party & Heart Break)

Natasha : ( scooty me wo lagatar roye ja rhi thi aur viraj ko bole ja rhi thi ) tune kyu kiya mere sath aisa, mere pyar ka mazak bna diya tune, meine tjhe kya smjha aur tu kya nikla, kabhi nhi socha tha viraj ki tu Aisa krega, teri harkato se shak hua tha lekin meine socha ki nahi tu aisa nahi hai lekin tu toh usse bhi bura nikla, mei tjhe kabhi maaf nahi krungi, I hate you

Viraj : ( car me baith te hi usne ciggerate jalayi aur ek lamba kash kheecha aur fir usne gaadi ko rocket ki speed se dauda di ) di ek din tmhe ehsas hoga ki mei tumse kitna pyar krta hu aur fir tum khud mjhe accept krogi aur aaj ke dance competition me jeetuga toh mai hi, ( aur apne car ke music ka volume badha deta hai jisme song baj rha tha " tujhe hasil krunga ye jid hai chahe kuch bhi kare ye jaha" )

Dono college pahuch jaate hai Natasha viraj ki gaadi dekhti hai lekin ignore krte huye seedhe auditorium pahuch jati hai jaha pe fresher's party ka program chal rha tha.

Prachi : ohh my my.....dekho toh kon agya hai..( sabki nazar Natasha pe padti hai aur sab Natasha ko ghurne lagte hai, ladko ke toh jese dilo me hulchul mach jati sab gossip krne lagte hai 'natasha kitni hot lag rhi h' 'iske jesi toh aaj pure college me koi nhi dikha rhi hai' ' yrr ye jise bhi milegi uski toh chandi ho jayegi' , ladke hi nahi ladkiya bhi Natasha ko dekh kr fukne lagi)
Rohan : Natasha you are looking amazingly gorgeous
Natasha : tum sabka ho gya toh chale dance h humara aur mjhe ye dance competition har haal me jeetna hai aur uss viraj ke bache ko uski aukat dikhani hai, Rohan ye sun kr khush hogya..
Rohan : ye huyi na baat Natasha this is called spirit and aaj toh uss do kaudi ke junior ki band bja dunga.

Natasha aur Rohan dono stage pe ajate hai aur udhar viraj shruti ke sath parking me tha wo sharab pee rha tha aur shruti usse rok Rahi thi
Shruti : just stop it viraj, ye kya krre ho humara dance h thodi der me announcement kabhi bhi ho skti h aur tum yha drink krre ho plzz ruk jao..
Viraj : tu chup reh smjhi saali mera dimag mat kharab krr ye dance program toh mei hi jeetunga aur tu apne aap ko bht badi dancer samjhti hai kya, bedhango ki tarah nachti hai aur khud ho Shakti mohan samjhti hai...

Tabhi announcement hota hai....

Now it's time to hit the dance floor I request all the contestants to please present on the stage, let's cheer up guys..Natasha aur Rohan dono stage par agye lekin viraj aur shruti nahi aye the...

Shruti : chalo viraj ab bas bht hua...
Viraj : ( bottle khatam krta h aur fek krr bolta hai ) chal tujhe btaya hu dance kese hota hai

Guys, I think dusre contestants shayd nahi ayege toh hum iss competition k winner Natasha aur Rohan ko bna denge...tabhi...

Viraj : viraj Kapoor ke hote koi aur winner!!, mazak hai kya?? let's start, MUUUSIC!!!

"Left leg aage aage right leg peeche peeche " song bajne lagta hai aur dono dance couples dance shuru krdete hai...taliyo aur seetiyon se poora auditorium goonj uth ta hai...Viraj toh Hrithik Roshan ban gya tha wo gazab ka dance kr rha tha aur Natasha ka dance bhi kaafi impressive tha shruti aur Rohan bhi apne partners ke kadam se kadam mila rhe the aur viraj ne toh back flip wagera bhi maar diya jisse judges bhi kaafi impressive hogye wo nashe me tha lekin jesa wo dance krr rha tha Natasha ko lag rha tha ki ye Jeet jayega, Natasha bhi apna best de rhi thi wo gaane ke beech beech me kayi dance forms ka fusion dikha rhi thi jisse audience me uske naam ki hooting hone lagi fir tabhi viraj ne break dance ke steps Krna shuru krdiya jo kamal ka tha dono hi ek se badh kr ek step kr rhe the lekin shayad ab lag rha tha ki viraj hi jeetega aur sab "viraj" "viraj" chilla krr usse motivate krne lage ek taraf Natasha ne bhi poora jor laga diya tha wo kisi bhi hal me iss competition ko jeetna chahti thi lekin jese hi song khatam hone ke last kuch seconds bache the viraj ko achanak wo sab yaad aane laga jo Natasha ne usse thappad maara tha aur uske pyar ko ghinona btaya tha wo dance steps bhulne lga aur nashe me hone ke karan wo gir gya aur wahi Natasha aur Rohan ne song khatam hote hi final step kiya aur results sabke samne tha Natasha dance competition jeet gyi aur viraj haar gaya....judges ne trophy Natasha aur Rohan ko dedi aur viraj aur shruti ko next tym ke liye best of luck bola, viraj bechara wo ab bhi wahi sab soch rha tha aur uski ankhon me ansu the wo toot rha tha...

Rohan : kyu be bada dancer bna firta tha, nikal gyi saari hekdi, bada bol rha tha ki competition tu jeetega tere aage koi nhi tik sakta ab kya hua, sun bsdk tu bas bolta hai bas ka tere kuch h nahi aur aisa bolte huye wo Natasha ke kamar pe hath rakh deta h aur uske hath ko pakad ke trophy usse dikhata hai, dekh chutiye ye hai meri jeet aur tu haar gya...
Viraj : ( jo abhi tak chup tha ek dum se Rohan ka gala pakad liya aur usse buri tarah peetne lag gya ) bsdk tune Natasha ke kamar pe hath kese rakh diya, teri jaan lelunga mei aaj, saale Natasha ke peeth piche gande comments krta hai aur dosti ka natak krta hai madarchod

College staff usse rokne ajate hai aur wo unse bhi jhagadne lagta hai maar Peet krne lagta hai Natasha jo ye sab dekh rhi thi wo gusse me viraj ke pass ati hai aur usse kas ke 2 thappad Marti hai jisse Rohan gusse me uspe maarne ke liye hath uthata hai lekin fir usse dekhte hi ruk jata hai tab tak guards bhi ajate hai aur usse maarne lagte hai viraj bechara itne logo se kese lad skta tha wo nashe me bhi tha wo bas Natasha ko dekh rha tha lekin Natasha toh bas usse gusse me ghur rahi thi wo kuch nahi boli jab wo bilkul thak gya toh staff ne bola ki isse bahar krdo college se aur kal iske Ghar restigation letter bhi pahucha dena, bechare adhmari si halat me viraj ko ghasit te huye Natasha ke samne se le jaya ja rha tha wo halki khuli ankho se Natasha ko dekhta hai aur usse kehta h I love you aur Natasha usse kehti h ki he's drunk isse jaldi se bahar nikalo....

Viraj ke sath aaj bahut galat hua tha usse umeed hi nahi thi ki aisa bhi kuch hoga uske sath uske ijjat ki dhajiya udd gyi thi Viraj Kapoor jo iss college ka sbse popular ladka tha wo ab ek sharabi aur nashedi ladke ke naam se jana ja rha tha viraj kisi tarah uth tha hai aur parking me khadi apni gaadi me baith jata hai wo apne muh pe pani Marta hai aur khud se kehta hai

Viraj : pyar ka ye sila mila mujhe, di apne mere pyar ka kya mazak bnaya areyy jo Krna tha akele me krdeti poore duniya ke samne apne meri ijjat ki dhajiya uda di sab mjh pr hass rhe the mera gurur mera rutba sab mitti me mil gya, aaj mei apni zindagi se haar gya, mana meine galat kiya tha lekin iski itni badi saza kyu di aapne aur viraj foot foot kr rone lagta hai...tabhi usse Karan milta hai..
Karan : bhai ye kya hogya tere sath aaj jo bhi hua wo bht galat hua yrr kyu tu uss Natasha ke liye lada, saale ye ladkiyan aisi hi hoti hai hone deta jo ho rha tha uske sath wo Rohan krta uske sath jo bhi wo chahta tha tjhe kya jarurat thi...
Viraj : Karan mere bhai meine pyar kiya uska ye sila diya mjhe ab ye duniya mera intekam dekhegi, jinhone mjhe apne ghutno pe jhukne ke liye majboor Kiya kal mei unhe ghutno pe jhukaunga fir hasuga jese aaj sab mjhpr hase hai...
Karan : bhai tu chod sab ye le isse pi ( Karan apne Jeb se charas se bhara hua joint nikal ke viraj ko deta hai aur viraj usse jala ke fookne lagta hai)

Idhar prachi Natasha ko kone me le jati hai aur sunane lagti hai...

Prachi : Natasha are you gone mad?? Ye kya kiya tune, dimag kharab ho gya tha Tera tune viraj ke sath bht glt kiya arey Aisa toh koi dusman bhi nahi krta tune poore college ke aage us bechare ka kya haal krdiya, tjhe pta hai Natasha wo ladka tere liye uss Rohan se lad rha tha, tjhe kya pta ki Rohan ne aaj tere sath kitna ghatiya krne ka plan bnaya tha, khair tu kya smjhegi teri ankho pe Patti bandhi hai lekin tjhe bht jald ehsas hoga ki tune kitna galt kiya hai, tune uske self respect ko thes pahuchaya hai wo pta nahi kha hoga iss time mjhe uski chinta ho Rahi hai...
Natasha : ye sab sunke uske pairo tale zameen khisak gyi thi wo sochne lagi ( ye meine gusse me kya krdiya, hey bhagwan ye meine kya krdiya, wo dhamm se zameen par gir jati hai, viraj ne jo kiya tha wo galat jarur tha lekin jo meine Kiya wo sabse jada galt tha, mera bhai kha h wo mjhe usse dhundna hoga, viraj tu mjhse pyar krta hai na thik h ab se mei Teri behen jise tu apni jaan kehta hai tjhe bht pyar dungi mere bhai, wo apne viraj ke sath me bitaye huye palo ko yaad krne lagti hai hoske toh apni behen ko maaf krdena mei Teri behen kehlane layak nahi hu aur wo viraj ko dhundne nikal jati hai, wo parking me Karan ko dekhti hai...
Karan : arey Natasha!!
Natasha : Karan Viraj ko dekha..
Karan : hnn wo toh ghar chala gya bechara bht ro rha tha tumne thik nahi kiya Natasha...usse meine kabhi aise nahi dekha tha..

Natasha apni scooty seedhe ghar ko dauda deti hai...
Idhar viraj ko bht zada Nasha ho gya tha ek toh usne sharab pi liya tha aur dusri taraf charas ne uske nashe ko do guna badha diya tha wo bht tez raftar me gaadi chala rha tha tabhi samne se aata ek truck achanak se uske samne ajata hai aur viraj truck ke headlight ke roshni me khud ko sambhal nahi pata aur uska bht bhyanak accident ho jata hai uski gaadi truck se takra kr chakna chur ho jati hai aur viraj gaadi me dab jata hai....

Natasha ghar pahuch gyi thi wo viraj ki gaadi khadi nahi dekhti hai toh pareshan hone lagti hai aur ghar me enter hoti hai

Natasha : "viraaaj" "viraaaj" bhai kha h tu??
Madhuri : beta kya hua tere aur viraj ke beech firse jhagda hua kya??
Natasha : nahi maa viraj nhi h kyaa??
Madhuri : nahi beta wo toh abhi tak nahi aya...
Natasha : (uske sabhi doston ko phone lagane lagti hai, lekin sab mana kr dete hai ki viraj unke sath nahi hai..)

Natasha ko dar lagne lagta hai usse yaad ata hai ki viraj ne bht sharab pi rakhi thi aur wo bht tez gaadi bhi chalata tha, wo bhagwan se prathna krne lagi hey bhagwan meri umar mere viraj ko dedena lekin usse kuch mat hone dena nahi toh mei kabhi khud ko maaf nahi kr paungi jeete jee mar jaungi, tabhi Mr. Kapoor ka phone aya...

Mr Kapoor : ( bht rote huye) madhuri humara beta!!!
Madhuri : kya hua sharad aap aise kyu bol rhe h kya hua viraj ko..??
Mr Kapoor : ( rote huye ) wo..woo...viraj ka bht bura accident hua hai uski car truck se takra gyi..

Madhuri ye sunte hi aisa lagta hai ki jese uske sharir se atma nikal gyi ho "AISA NAHI HO SKTAAAA" uske hath se phn chut kr neeche gir jata hai aur wo zameen par gir kar bilakh bilakh kr rone lag jati hai..

Natasha : maa kya hua bolo na kya hua viraj ko...?? ( Wo phone utha ke kaan pe lagati hai aur fir Jo wo sunti hai toh uska bhi wahi haal hota hai wo rote huye jor se cheekhti hai VIRAAAAJJJ!!! aur behosh ho jati hai..

Ye pal bht hi nazuk tha viraj ke sath ek bht bada hadsa ho gya tha Natasha ab kya kregi viraj ka kya hoga, aage kya hona tha ye shayd mei bhi nahi janta tha, lekin aap log aage ki kahani Jaan ne ke liye jude rahiye stay tuned....

Bhai very emotional and heart touching feeling thi viral ki bhai emotions ka kya use kiya Natasha ne thoda sa galat toh kiya viral ke sath but vo bhi apni jagah sahi thi,, abhi kuch time pahla hi toh ushki feelings badalna sure hui thi.ushko khud nahi Pata tha ki vo viraj ke liye kya feel karti hai to aysa karna thik tha itni jaldi vo accept nahi kar payi but college me jo hua vo vo nahi karna tha Natasha ko thappad nahi marna cahiye tha ...ab dekhna important ho gaya hai next update me kya hoga kya viraj koma me Jayga ya fir memory loss hoga aur sirf Natasha ko bhul jayga ya kuch aur....maybe