Fantasy Destiny ko koi nhi badal sakta jo likha h hoke rahega.

[MasterShubham]

Naya member hu par naya reader ya naya writer nhi hu, samjhdaar ko ishara kafi h. Main ye nhi bolunga ki update din mein ik bar aayega ya week mein ik bar kyunki plot clear h aur mostly har update bhi pahle hi type kiye ja chuke h par agar kabhi network ki problem hui to wo exceptional case h. Story meri file mein complete h pichle 1 saal se likh raha hu is story ko. Yaha jab dekha ki jyadatar writer 1-1 saal, 1-1 week mein 1 update dete h aur fir story ko adhura chhod bhag jate h to sabse jyada dukh mujhe hota kyunki main har story ko dil se jodkar read karta. Meri pahli preference fantasy supernatural powers aur adultry h but aisa nhi h ki mujhe incest se parejh h. Yaha apko sab colours milenge par pariwar ki ijjat maan maryada sabse upar aur behan and maa wo sakshi hote jisko kabhi us najar se nhi dekh sakta main. Haalanki yaha mom aur sis ka bol bala h but apne apne sanskar and morals h isliye different mindset ke log mind na kare.

Anyways ye story h eik aise pariwar ki jo ki bahut pahle se ik gaon, ik kasbe, ik sehar ke nhi balki ik puri khaap ke mukhiya rahe h jaise baliyan khap ke 84 gaon, thakur ki chobisi isi tarah bahut si biradri ki alag alag khap h aur ik aisi hi khap ke mukhiya h is story ke mukhya kirdar. Ye kahani ik aise ladke ki jo is khaap ke mukhiya ke ghar paida to hua par badkismati se uski maa chote umar main chal basi aur fir kisi karanwash uske baap ki nayi shadi aur uski soteli maa ki mahtvakansha ke chalte uske sath hue durvyavahaar aur uska pratishod uske bad sachai ka gyan aur supernature ki entry aur ik bade yudh ki taiyari. Supernatural powers ke sath mili jimmedari aur sath mein pariwarik jimmedariyan aur apni jiwansangini/yo ke sath bitaye yaadgar pal ki ik vishesh dimag ki upaj apke samne prastut h.

Main apke reply/ comment (positive negative) ka wait nhi krunga bas is story ke update krunga. Agar pasand aaye to apne vichar jarur rakhe.

Dhanyawaad.
( shuruat kal se)

 

[Avi Goswami]

 

[Harry34John]

Bhi ap ky update ka intzar ha dakty aur writer ki traha ho ya alag

 

[Vk248517]

Naya member hu par naya reader ya naya writer nhi hu, samjhdaar ko ishara kafi h. Main ye nhi bolunga ki update din mein ik bar aayega ya week mein ik bar kyunki plot clear h aur mostly har update bhi pahle hi type kiye ja chuke h par agar kabhi network ki problem hui to wo exceptional case h. Story meri file mein complete h pichle 1 saal se likh raha hu is story ko. Yaha jab dekha ki jyadatar writer 1-1 saal, 1-1 week mein 1 update dete h aur fir story ko adhura chhod bhag jate h to sabse jyada dukh mujhe hota kyunki main har story ko dil se jodkar read karta. Meri pahli preference fantasy supernatural powers aur adultry h but aisa nhi h ki mujhe incest se parejh h. Yaha apko sab colours milenge par pariwar ki ijjat maan maryada sabse upar aur behan and maa wo sakshi hote jisko kabhi us najar se nhi dekh sakta main. Haalanki yaha mom aur sis ka bol bala h but apne apne sanskar and morals h isliye different mindset ke log mind na kare.

Anyways ye story h eik aise pariwar ki jo ki bahut pahle se ik gaon, ik kasbe, ik sehar ke nhi balki ik puri khaap ke mukhiya rahe h jaise baliyan khap ke 84 gaon, thakur ki chobisi isi tarah bahut si biradri ki alag alag khap h aur ik aisi hi khap ke mukhiya h is story ke mukhya kirdar. Ye kahani ik aise ladke ki jo is khaap ke mukhiya ke ghar paida to hua par badkismati se uski maa chote umar main chal basi aur fir kisi karanwash uske baap ki nayi shadi aur uski soteli maa ki mahtvakansha ke chalte uske sath hue durvyavahaar aur uska pratishod uske bad sachai ka gyan aur supernature ki entry aur ik bade yudh ki taiyari. Supernatural powers ke sath mili jimmedari aur sath mein pariwarik jimmedariyan aur apni jiwansangini/yo ke sath bitaye yaadgar pal ki ik vishesh dimag ki upaj apke samne prastut h.

Main apke reply/ comment (positive negative) ka wait nhi krunga bas is story ke update krunga. Agar pasand aaye to apne vichar jarur rakhe.

Dhanyawaad.
( shuruat kal se)

Wah atiutttam mitra pahli bar aisa story padhne ko milega jo incect base par nhi hai.




Congratulations for new thread.






Waiting bro

 

[tpk]

congrats

 

[Naik]

for new thread brother

 

[aalu]

phir se swagat hain shubham saar....

 

[Zaigham Bhatti]

Naya member hu par naya reader ya naya writer nhi hu, samjhdaar ko ishara kafi h. Main ye nhi bolunga ki update din mein ik bar aayega ya week mein ik bar kyunki plot clear h aur mostly har update bhi pahle hi type kiye ja chuke h par agar kabhi network ki problem hui to wo exceptional case h. Story meri file mein complete h pichle 1 saal se likh raha hu is story ko. Yaha jab dekha ki jyadatar writer 1-1 saal, 1-1 week mein 1 update dete h aur fir story ko adhura chhod bhag jate h to sabse jyada dukh mujhe hota kyunki main har story ko dil se jodkar read karta. Meri pahli preference fantasy supernatural powers aur adultry h but aisa nhi h ki mujhe incest se parejh h. Yaha apko sab colours milenge par pariwar ki ijjat maan maryada sabse upar aur behan and maa wo sakshi hote jisko kabhi us najar se nhi dekh sakta main. Haalanki yaha mom aur sis ka bol bala h but apne apne sanskar and morals h isliye different mindset ke log mind na kare.

Anyways ye story h eik aise pariwar ki jo ki bahut pahle se ik gaon, ik kasbe, ik sehar ke nhi balki ik puri khaap ke mukhiya rahe h jaise baliyan khap ke 84 gaon, thakur ki chobisi isi tarah bahut si biradri ki alag alag khap h aur ik aisi hi khap ke mukhiya h is story ke mukhya kirdar. Ye kahani ik aise ladke ki jo is khaap ke mukhiya ke ghar paida to hua par badkismati se uski maa chote umar main chal basi aur fir kisi karanwash uske baap ki nayi shadi aur uski soteli maa ki mahtvakansha ke chalte uske sath hue durvyavahaar aur uska pratishod uske bad sachai ka gyan aur supernature ki entry aur ik bade yudh ki taiyari. Supernatural powers ke sath mili jimmedari aur sath mein pariwarik jimmedariyan aur apni jiwansangini/yo ke sath bitaye yaadgar pal ki ik vishesh dimag ki upaj apke samne prastut h.

Main apke reply/ comment (positive negative) ka wait nhi krunga bas is story ke update krunga. Agar pasand aaye to apne vichar jarur rakhe.

Dhanyawaad.
( shuruat kal se)

Zabardast Starting bro
Keep Posting
And
Waiting for next update

 

[MasterShubham]

Note:- Waise to bahut si khaap h humare bharat desh mein aur main tahe dil se un khap ki ijjat bhi karta hu. Yaha liye gaye kisi bhi khap ya vyakti ya place ka naam kalpnik h, in khas namo ka hona sirf sanyog matra h. Ye story sirf manoranjan ke uddeshya se likhi ja rahi h is story ka irada kisi bhi vyakti, samudaye ko hurt karna nhi h.


Update-1
Bharat desh ka eik khubsurat sa pradesh hai uttar pradesh aur us uttar pradesh ka pachim bhag jo jaatland ke naam se bhi jana jata h. Usi paschim u.p ke eik jile mein ik gaon h xyz, us gaon mein ik pariwar h chaudhary pariwar, ye pariwar sirf naam ka chaudhary nhi hai, ye chaudhrahat is pariwar ne kamai hai, is pariwar ke purvajo ne apne logo ko haq dilane ke liye kayi bar andolan kiye, jail bhi gaye pr apna haq, apne logon ka haq leke rahe, ye silsila aj bhi aise hi chalta aa raha h. Chaudhrahat milna sirf takat aur satta milna nhi h, takat se milti h jimmedari, ye pariwar is bat ko ache se janta bhi h aur samjhta bhi h.
Yahi sab sochte hue, apna ithihas yaad karte hue aj is khap jiske kareeb aspas ke 150 gaon aate the aur is area ki jansankhya lakho mein thi aur kareeb 8 vidhansabha aur 3 loksabha seat isi area ki thi jiska sidha sidha faisale isi khap ke mukhiya hi tay krte the. To sidhi si bat h aise bahubali wale vyaktitva ko kon si political party naraaj karna chahegi. Jis kisi party ne satta ke nashe main aisa karna chaha wo agle hi vidhansabha ya loksabha mein usne mooh ki khayi, ab ye bat sabhi political party samjh chuki thi aur isliye hi is chaudhary pariwar ka dabdaba sirf state ke CM tak nhi balki central ministers tak bhi tha.
Itna powerful admi aj kuch vyathit tha aur apne hi soch mein gum tha aur ye admi koi aur nhi is khapke mukhiya Ch. Harendar the jinki umar 70 saal thi. Unke 3 bete aur 2 beti thi. Harendar ke sabhi bache vyask the aur sabki shadi ho chuki thi. Harendar ke dono damad mein se bada damad sunil dusre khaap ke mukhiya ka beta tha, harendar ke samdhi Surendra ki khaap harendar ki khap jitni badi to nhi thi pr jab dono khap milkar bahut deadly ho jati thi ( baki ke character ke naam dhire dhire btata rahunga).
Harendar ke chintit hone ka karan tha uska pota Sunny Chaudhary jo abhi sirf 10 saal ka tha jab uski maa aur Harendar ki sabse badi putravadhu Gayatri is duniya se kisi bimari ke chalte rukhsat ho chuki thi. Wo gayatri hi thi jisne apni saas shanti devi ke dehant ke bad is pariwar ko iksutra mein piroya hua tha aur is kaam mein uska sath uska pati Karamveer Chaudhary Sunny ke pita bakhoobi sath dete the. Karamveer ik suljhe hue vyakti the bachpan se hi apne pita ko khaap ke faisle aur chintit hote dekha tha aur umar ke sath sath us jimmedari ko samajhte bhi the aur aj wo apne pita harendar ka adha kaam apne kandhon pr le chuke the. Harendar is bat se ashwast the ki unka beta karamveer unke bad is khaap ko sambhalne mein saksham h aur prabal davedar bhi aur waise bhi unke baki ke do chote bete is sab mein na to interested the balki delhi mein apna karobar ache se sirf jama hi nhi liya tha balki usko apni mehnat se ik ache mukam pr phoncha chuke the. Aj wo dono delhi ke hi nhi balke pure desh ke jane mane industrialist the. Harendra isliye vyathit the kyunki na sirf Sunny 1 saal purva apni maa ko khoya tha balki uske baap karamveer ne Sunny ki achi parvarish aur dekhbaal ke liye (jaise aksar kaha jata h ik vidhur ko dusri shadi ke liye aur yahi tark deke samjhaya bhi jata h) dusri shadi sunita se kar li thi jo eik vidhwa thi aur 1 bachi (priya)ki maa bhi. Priya ki umar 7 saal thi. Is shadi ke piche kahi na kahi Harendar bhi jimmedar the kyunki sabse jyada dabab Karamveer pr Harendar ne hi dala tha pr aj Harendar ko us faisle pr pachtava ho raha tha aur uska karan tha Sunny ke sath ho rahe durvyavahaar. Halaki abhi ye sab parde ke piche chal raha tha pr itne umardaraj hone ke sath sath unhone duniya sirf dekhi hi nhi thi balki wo us duniya mein pariwar ke apsi matbhed, jhagde mein faisle bhi diya krte the isliye Harendar us durvyavahaar ko sungh sakte the aur aane wale khatre ko bhi kyunki Harendar Ke tau- chacha ke bacho aur unke pariwar ke man mein chaudhrahat paane ka lalach bhalibhanti jante the bhi the aur khud bhi kayi shadyantra ka shikaar bhi ho chuke the pr unhone un shadyantr ko kabhi kamiyab hone nhi diya pr aj wo Sunny ke liye aane wale khatre ko sungh sakte the pr aj wo lachar the kyunki wo pahle hi Karamveer ko apni khaap ka mukhiya aur sath sath apni sari jaydad Karamveer ke naam kar chuke the aur ab wo kuch nhi kar sakte the. Kafi der aatmachintan karne ke bad wo apne kamre se bahar aate h to dekhte h ki unki nayi putravadhu Sunita living room me tv dekh rahi thi, sunita ko najarandaj krke wo Sunny ko dhundte h pure ghar mein Sunny ko nhi dhundpate to wo samjh jate h aur wo ghar se bahar nikal wo ghar se thodi dur talab ke kinare phonch jate h aur dekhte h ki unka sochna sahi tha talab kinare ik ped( tree) ke kinare gumsum baitha tha sunny. Harendar uske pass jate h to dekhte h ki sunny ki aankh mein aansoo h aur wo iktak talab ko dekhe ja raha h. Sirf 10 saal ka hi to tha sunny.
To be continued.

 

[Rohit1988]

Kuch alag hai aap likhte raho dekhte hai kya kya more aata hai
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