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Mrxr

'No object is mysterious. The mystery is your eye'
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Are yaar...de rhe hoon...iss chapter pe tumhare ka diya toh hai shayad 🙄

Number se chal rhe hoon...main toh
ab thoda accha Laga 🤣🤣🤣🤣
And I'm not talking 22 chapter review,
I talk to yesterday question sis.....😁😁
 
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Ye hero ko aapney mom aur sister key sath sex kab hogee.
I am waiting very curiously
Isme heroine kon hai ye baat samjhe mey nahi aarahi he.
Slow seduction hai toh woh dheere dheere develop hoge...heroine aise koi ek main nhi hai...harem hai tags mein...sabka apna role hai.
Thanks 😊
 

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ab thoda accha Laga 🤣🤣🤣🤣
And I'm not talking 22 chapter review,
I talk to yesterday question sis.....😁😁
Abhi wahan pahuche hi nhi main? Chote ek do qn hi toh whi reply kar deti hoon...bade reveiws ka soch ke likhna padta hai 👆
 

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Kal jish pe baat ho rahi thi hamari 😁😁
Karan payal aur akansha ki Age wali 😜😜😜
Ages aage se bahut important honge mujhe bhi yehi lag rha hai...ek din baithke sab fir se revise karne padenge 👀

Socha nhi tha itne jayda details pe dhayan jayega kisi ka...🙄 Aise toh aage bahut hi complex hai story.
 
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Ages aage se bahut important honge mujhe bhi yehi lag rha hai...ek din baithke sab fir se revise karne padenge 👀
Koi tension nahi lene ka thoda thoda karne ka ,jab bhi free time ho tab karne ka....
Socha nhi tha itne jayda details pe dhayan jayega kisi ka...🙄 Aise toh aage bahut hi complex hai story.
Auro ka toh pata nahi par mujhe koi shak hota hai toh main purane chapter ka dobara review karta hu aur Age bhi karta rahunga, kitni bhi complex ho main aur deeply ghushne ko tayar hu....🙃🙃
 
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So here's my first full review on the story

Karan ki story ek aisi journey hai jo fantasy aur emotions ko ek saath leke chalti hai Ye kahani ek aise hero ki hai jo shuru mein ek normal insaan lagta hai lekin jaise jaise uska safar aage badhta hai woh apni asli taqat aur apne rishtey ke maayne samajhta hai

Kahani ki shuruaat ek heartbreaking moment ke saath hoti hai jab Karan apni maa ko ek tragedy mein kho deta hai Yeh moment sirf Karan ke liye nahi, mere liye bhi kaafi emotional tha kyunki uska dard aur confusion kaafi real lagta hai.

Lekin ye story sirf ek loss tak simit nahi hai. Jab Karan ko pata chalta hai ki uski maa Nandani ek alag duniya mein zinda hai Yeh twist se hi story chalu hoti hai...aur readers ke liye ek bada surprise leke aata hai. Jab Karan apni maa ko rescue karta hai usse ek aur shocking baat pata chalti hai Nandani sirf uski maa nahi, balki Vanraajya ki rani hai

Kahani ke peeche ka world building ekdum magical aur engaging hai. Har kingdom apne alag cultural aur geographical features ke saath story ko enrich karta hai. Vanrajya ke ghane jungle ek mystical vibe dete hain. In settings ka detailed description readers ko iss fantasy duniya ka ek hissa banata hai jaise woh Karan ke saath hi uski journey pe ja rahe ho. Kaalandard jo hell hai story mein ek terror ke feeling leje aata hai. Yeh sirf ek duniya nahi hai balki Karan ke liye ek test hai jo uski strength aur courage ko barabar challenge karega.

Kahani ka emotional core Karan aur uski maa ke rishtey mein hai. Nandani ek aisi maa hai jo apne bete ke liye apne parivaar se dur rahe. Lekin woh sirf ek maa nahi balki ek queen bhi hai jo apne rajya ke liye ladti hai. Karan ka confusion aur struggle bhi kaafi relatable hai kyunki ek taraf woh apne naye role ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha hai aur dusri taraf woh apni maa ke liye ek ache beta banne ki responsibility feel karta hai.


Uska sword Meher ek aur central element hai jo uski journey mein important role play karta hai. Yeh sword usse fire, water, air aur earth powers deta hai, aur jaise-jaise Karan apne powers ko samajhta aur use karta hai, story aur bhi thrilling hoti jaaege...kyuki Avatar is one of my favourites.

Payal jo Karan ki behen hai ek alag hi charm story mein laati hai. kyuki main sister incest hi jayda pasand karta hoon. Uska character ek warrior ka hai jo bina kisi magic ke hi dikhaya gaya hai abhi tak. Ek marketplace scene jahan woh ek gareeb aadmi se uska haal puchte hai mere dil ko chho jata hai. Yeh moment sirf Payal ke compassion ko nahi dikhata balki uski insaniyat ko bhi highlight karta hai.

Villains ka role story mein kaafi powerful hai. Traas jo Kaalandard ka lord hai ek formidable villain hai jo kahani mein apna terror failata hai. Uske generals Vinashika aur Tamasya story mein alag-alag types ka danger leke aate hain. Kaalraani apne intelligence aur terror se kahani ko intense banati hai. Inke alawa Agrahak, ek alag hi level ka destruction story mein leke aata hai. Yeh villains sirf evil nahi hain balki unke motives aur backstory unhe kaafi intriguing banate hain jo ke recent chapter 23 mein dikhaya hai.

Karan ki training scenes aur action sequences story ko aur bhi engaging banate hain. Ek moment jahan Karan apni maa ke saath spar karta hai ek memorable scene hai. Nandani apne spear ka use karti hai aur Karan Meher ke saath apne powers ko test karta hai. Yeh moments sirf action ke liye nahi hain yeh Karan ke growth aur uski capabilities ko dikhate hain.

Story mein sirf battles aur adventure nahi hai iska heart uske characters aur unke rishtey hain. Har character ka apna ek depth hai aur har rishtey mein ek alag emotion hai chahe woh Karan aur Nandani ka maa beta ka bond ho ya Karan aur Payal ke beech ka sibling love. Yeh emotions kahani ko real banate hain chahe story kitne bhi fantastical kyun na ho.

Karan ki kahani sirf ek heroic adventure nahi hai yeh ek deeply emotional journey hai jo family courage aur self-discovery ke themes explore karti hai. Iska world-building, characters aur storytelling itna rich aur engaging hai ki readers ismein pura kho jaate hain.

Last, mein itna kehna chaunga ke likes ke chinta mat kijiye because yeh story seedhe Hollywood ko touch karte hai toh iska base yahan pe kam hoga lekin jo readers hai woh ache se iske value smjte hai.

Waiting for next update
Thanks for this humongous review 💙😊
Will reply in detail la8er 🌠
 
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