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Jish se tum likhti ho ush me voice type ka fiction hai toh......Acha mujhe laga ke koi voice type wala fiction mil gaya hai...
Akansha,akansha, akansha, idhar akansha, udhar akansha,jidhar dekho ankansha,har taraf akansha,ye akansha hai kya haan.... kya kiya hai akansha ne,aabhi tak ek baar bhi ushne Karan ke alawa kishi ka pucha ho toh bolo, na ushne payal ka pucha ki kaysei hai,na hi Nandini ka ki meri bahen kaysi hai ,pucha toh sir itna ki main is neele rang ke sath apni bahen se kayse milungi,bas ushko kisi se matlab hai toh wo Karan hai ,ravisha bhi ushke aage kuch nahiKaran was always the child she couldn't have. So, it's obvious that she would care about him even more than his real mother!
bhai I told i don't like to read stories which already had multiple updates like 50 or 100 because for those it feels like claiming a mountain of updates to catch up....plus if those having multiple characters it will be jarring to keep up with characters since I would try to read as much update as possible at once and I will loose on characters and if writer left it unfinished then it will feel like waste of time and effort .Main app ka name bata dunga par tum ye batao tumne meri story kholi kaise, jahan tak mujhe pata hai tumne kaha tha tum multi characters story nahi padhte ho!!!
Well Answer hai *Google Docs*. Par kaise wo khud hi tumhe sikhna hoga main explain nahi kar paunga, jab use karoge to khud samajh jaogJle.
Sabki apni apni pasand hoti hai mujhe wo story pasand nahi aati hai jisme *seduction* dikhaya jata hai. Sex na ho chalega lekin seduction bilkul nahi. Waisi story mujhe kabhi pasand nahi aati hai.bhai I told i don't like to read stories which already had multiple updates like 50 or 100 because for those it feels like claiming a mountain of updates to catch up....plus if those having multiple characters it will be jarring to keep up with characters since I would try to read as much update as possible at once and I will loose on characters and if writer left it unfinished then it will feel like waist of time and effort .
Aur galti ho gayi bhai maph karde, galti se khol lee thi tumhari story
I agreeed bro , when I read any long storys and then I know, it's not complete story so I feel like I was wasting my time ,efforts,feelings, emotions, everything I waste for this uncompleted storys.....bhai I told i don't like to read stories which already had multiple updates like 50 or 100 because for those it feels like claiming a mountain of updates to catch up....plus if those having multiple characters it will be jarring to keep up with characters since I would try to read as much update as possible at once and I will loose on characters and if writer left it unfinished then it will feel like waist of time and effort .
Wo toh hai bhai ,ye baat toh main bhi manta huSabki apni apni pasand hoti hai
Bhai thoda bahut toh seduction hona hi chahiye nahi toh story ka kya fayda,ab aysa toh hoga nahi ki har aurat ya mard apna khol ke bayth ho aur kah raha ho ya kah rahi ho aao mar lo meri ya aao marwa lo mujhe se apni .....mujhe wo story pasand nahi aati hai jisme *seduction* dikhaya jata hai. Sex na ho chalega lekin seduction bilkul nahi. Waisi story mujhe kabhi pasand nahi aati hai.
Nahi kiya hai brother, sirf tum hi meri comment ko nahi dekh pa rahe hoge. Lekin ab dekh paoge....dhalchandarun bhai ye kya kar diya, tum ne toh apni sari comments hi delete karwa di bhai