Incest Destiny: The Last Stand (With AI Images)

[mistyvixen]

Latest Update 23
Beneath the Flow

 

[mistyvixen]

As you already know, I'm back!

Hello back I'm Misty

I'm reading the updates again, and I'll wait eagerly for the next one too!

For real...dikhte toh ho nhi kabhi thread mein

Kuch din apun gayab kya hua, yahan to khalbali macha daali tumne

But I missed you dummy
Tumhe mention bhi kiya tha dekha woh?

mistyvixen . Chalo new year me dono wapas punctual ho jate hain

Apne socho
Pata nhi mujhe aisa kyu lag rha hai main iska reply pehle kar chuke hoon.
Anyway...sab pending aaj khtm karne the...isko bhi le liya.

 

[mistyvixen]

Update 23

bhai mere v teen sawal the ...

Pehela- sachcha me aisa koi app hai jiska use karke wo sab kar sakte hai jiska zeekr tumne apni thread pe kiya tha..?

Dushar- agar hai to bata do main v apni adhuri story ko pura karlu or agar nahi hai to kyo hum garib logo ka chutiya kat rahe ho...??

tishar- bata de bhai ...chutiya mat kat...garibo ki haya kyo lena chahta hai...???

Aisa koi aap nhi hota...ek story pure soch ke hi likhe jaati hai ek ek word type kar ke...tumahre speed badh jayege...sochene ke. Pehle ek do short stories se likhna chalu karna. Mujhe bhi yaha tak aane mein ek saal lag gaya woh bhi jab roz 1k tak likh lete the. So it's a very slow process....apne aap thinking develop ho jayege...aur jaise story tumhe likhne hai usse genre ke saath mein padhte rhena tumhare thinking develop ho jayege apne aap.
There's no shortcut to it.

 

[mistyvixen]

Bahot badhiya update

Thanks

 

[Mrxr]

Because Payal was born first and in Anantpur the capital... Aakansha ke saamne nhi. Karan was born in Vanrajya when Subhadra was exiled from his kingdom. Aur jab tak Payal thodi badi bhi ho gye the? Yk there's enough age difference between them. (I'm a human too i can make mistakes too)
So, Akansha usually took care of Karan when he was a infant... there's a difference between a baby and 5-6 year old. So that's that.
Khud hi smjh sakte ho...ke kisi ko god mein khilane wali feeling alag hi hoti hai.

I'm not satisfied with your answer sis.....
My pov..... Nandini ne Karan ko Bola tha ki char rajya the aur charo rajya raaniya chalati thi aur raja anantpur se sabhi ko dekhta tha..... aur Nandini 2nd rani thi....toh ush hisab se Nandini ko van rajya me hona chahiye tha aur payal ka janm van rajya me hona chahiye tha,jo ki tum ne bataya ki nahi hua
2nd point is , ki Nandini aur Karan jab earth pe aaye toh Karan 7 saal ka tha toh jab Karan ka janm hua toh vanrajya me kyon thi anantpur me kyon nahi...

Haa Payal ke bahar bhi dimag chal rha hai

Mera focus sirf payal pe hi toh nahi rahta hai....

 

[jaman das]

Nice starting for new story

 

[mistyvixen]

आकांक्षा और रविशा की कहानी भी बड़ी अजीब है । एक वक्त मे दोनो एक दूसरे को पसंद करती थी , शायद अच्छी सहेली होगी दोनो , पर इस वक्त दोनो एक दूसरे की जानी दुश्मन है । शायद अजय के बहकावे मे आकर रविशा ने आकांक्षा को बंदी बनाया होगा !

Sharnita aur Ajay dono mile hue hai...Ajay yaha Vanrajya mein Ravisha ke saath...Sharnita kahan hai woh aage pata chalega. Ik bahut baar sun chuke hoon yeh. Ravisha ke past ke baare mein abhi tak mention nhi Kiya hai story mein. Toh usko abhi se judge Naa karein...jab aage pata chalega uske kya circumstances the...toh aapko usne jo kiya hai woh bhi shi lagega.

अजय भी कोई मामूली इंसान नही लगता है । जादू टोना और मायावी शक्तियों से लैस इंसान है यह ।

He is just a pawn in the scheme of big things. Asli pura jaal toh Sharnita ka hai...aapko kya lag rha hai ke Ajay bas Vanrajya ko control kar rha hai...jake Sharnita is playing with the entire Kingdom....aur woh kaise kyu...aur Ravisha ka kya role hai ismein...yeh sab season 2 ke plot hai.

इसका क्या मकसद है पता नही पर यह ट्राल का सिपहसलार अवश्य प्रतीत हो रहा है ।

Traas abhi tak story mein aaya bhi nhi hai abhi tak sabse chote mohron par hi hai kahani Vinashika ko chord ke. Lekin abhi woh apne physical powers ka use nhi kar skte... atleast baaki raajyon mein toh because of natural laws...yaad hai Nidhi ne bhi jab usko khud chuha tha tab?

आकांक्षा और रविशा के कन्वर्सेशन के दौरान एक शरनिता नामक व्यक्ति का जिक्र आया ; कौन है यह शरनिता ?

Season 2 again. Shayad characters thode badh gye hai...but maine pure koshish ke the starting ke 20 chapters bahut slow rkhun....base banane ke liye.

खैर , आखिरकार शहजादी आकांक्षा मैडम का उद्धार कर ही लिया गया और इस काम मे सबसे महत्वपूर्ण भुमिका निभाई रक्षक शर्वस साहब ने ।

Shravas itna simple nhi jitna woh dikhta hai.

पर दुख इस बात का रहा कि शर्वस साहब दुश्मन के कैद मे जा फंसे । करण साहब का कर्तव्य बनता है कि वह शर्वस साहब को दुश्मन के कैद से मुक्त करायें ।

Aage ka chapter padhein...ab bas itna hi bol skte hi iske jawab mein toh.

वैसे अजय और उसके सैनिकों ने जिस तरह से कंकाल रूप धरा और शर्वस साहब के साथ फाइटिंग करी वह बहुत ही खूबसूरत था ।

Thanks I read a lot of a medeival stuff so I have more or less a idea to how to explicitly write gore and fights...mera manana hai ke har move readers ko feel hona chaiye....writing mein

इधर करण साहब के हरम मे एक और महिला शामिल हुई और वह महिला कोई और नही उनकी ही मौसी आकांक्षा मैडम थी । इन दोनो के बीच का सेक्सुअल सीन्स भी अत्यंत ही इरोटिक था ।

Thanks ab incest hai tag toh yeh sab toh hona hi tha

Kya karun ab main incest ke alava koi aur type likh bhi nhi skte... beacause baki saree type ke mainstream stories padh ke thoda bore ho chuke hoon ab.

खुबसूरत अपडेट डियर ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट ।

Thanks a lot SS sir

 

[mistyvixen]

Nice starting for new story

Thanks and welcome to the thread
Keep liking and commenting

 

[mistyvixen]

I'm not satisfied with your answer sis.....
My pov..... Nandini ne Karan ko Bola tha ki char rajya the aur charo rajya raaniya chalati thi aur raja anantpur se sabhi ko dekhta tha..... aur Nandini 2nd rani thi....toh ush hisab se Nandini ko van rajya me hona chahiye tha aur payal ka janm van rajya me hona chahiye tha,jo ki tum ne bataya ki nahi hua.

Aree baba....chalne ka matlab yeh thodi hai ke wahan kingdoms mein rhenge...Raaniyan toh Capital mein hi rehte thein. Baaki woh unke under aate the mera MATLAB woh tha .
Bahut andar tak ghus chuke ho mere ek ek line mein Max...ek ek line ab aur sochke likhne padege. Baapre.

2nd point is , ki Nandini aur Karan jab earth pe aaye toh Karan 7 saal ka tha toh jab Karan ka janm hua toh vanrajya me kyon thi anantpur me kyon nahi...

Mujhe bhi yaad nhi ab toh yeh wali detail...check karte hoon. Pure story hi yaad kar le hai kya
Payal aur Karan ke aage mein kaafi difference hai.

Karan ka janam jab hua tab tak Uske chacha matlab Uske papa ke chote bhai...ke usse Anantapur cheen liya tha. Toh woh bachke wahan reh rhe the. Isliye nhi toh story chalu hi nhi hote yeh sab nhi hota toh.

Mera focus sirf payal pe hi toh nahi rahta hai....

Good job. Ab agle baar kuch puchna hoga apne story ke baare mein toh tumse puch lungi

 

[Mrxr]

Aree baba....chalne ka matlab yeh thodi hai ke wahan kingdoms mein rhenge...Raaniyan toh Capital mein hi rehte thein. Baaki woh unke under aate the mera MATLAB woh tha .
Bahut andar tak ghus chuke ho mere ek ek line mein Max...ek ek line ab aur sochke likhne padege. Baapre.

Ok maan li ye baat

Mujhe bhi yaad nhi ab toh yeh wali detail...check karte hoon. Pure story hi yaad kar le hai kya
Payal aur Karan ke aage mein kaafi difference hai.

5 years ka age difference hai dono me aur ye Mayne ishliye bola kyonki Nandini 15 saalon se nahi mili thi apne Pati se so I ask

Karan ka janam jab hua tab tak Uske chacha matlab Uske papa ke chote bhai...ke usse Anantapur cheen liya tha. Toh woh bachke wahan reh rhe the. Isliye nhi toh story chalu hi nhi hote yeh sab nhi hota toh.

toh hawan ish ke baad hua ,toh kya Nandini prithvi pe ane ke baad bhi 8 Sal tak Karan ke pita se milti rahi kya

Good job. Ab agle baar kuch puchna hoga apne story ke baare mein toh tumse puch lungi

Sure why nit
Abhi mera sir dard ho raha hai toh abhi kuch aur soch nahi paa raha hu jyada?....

 

[mistyvixen]

Update 22
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Oh fuck!! Yadi Akshay ka Akansha ko apne gaud mein lena pasand nahi aaya to phir tab kya hoga yadi Akshay, Payal ke karib jane ki koshish karega aur Karan uska gawah banega???

Yeh wala arc cancel kar diya ab? Woh jealousy ke liye hi tha ab spoil kar skte hoon kyuki Aisa kuch hone wala hi nhi hai ab. Payal, Sonali ke wajah se jealousy feel karte aur Karan, Akshaya ke wajah se...lekin thoda jayda azeeb sa Sister hunting jaisa ho gya
isliye cancelled...kuch aur Naya socha hai...woh toh bas ek do line beech mein aise hi jalane ke liye daal dete hoon.

Diplomacy kahti hai yadi kisi kingdom ko bachane ke liye kisi ek sahar ka balidan karna pade to kar deni chahiye phir yahan to sirf ek vyakti Sarvas ka hi sawal hai,

Truer words have never been spoken! Exactly. Lekin Shravas itna simple nhi.

khair main bhi ye chahta hoon ki Sarvas yudh se jeevit bahar nikal aaye aur Karan ko aur bhi apna warfare experience deta rahe.

Uske plans kuch aur hi hai...jo ke pehle ke chapters mein aa chuka hai. He already planned ke woh Kaalandard jayega. Aur use pata tha ke AnantRajya se wahan Jane ka bas ek hi raasta hai...woh hai Thanasala ke maze.

Karan aur Akansha ki love making scenes mujhe Rashmika ki yaad dila gayi hahaha .

Hmm...kyun...konsi movie ke baat kar rhe ho tum...sorry main movies wagarh ab Kam hi dekhte hoon...toh mujhe utna idea nhi hai

Ek baat aur Akansha ka character mujhe mere sath padhne wali Akansha ki yaad dila deti hai.

The world's a really small space. Uske story baad mein batana. Itne ache se yaad hai toh kuch special hi hogi

Karan ke haram list mein ab tak

Harem hota hai woh

1. Prachi.
2. Akansha shamil ho chuki hai.

Yesss!

Let's see how many more will include in his haram list???

The list does on....tudu tudu

Wonderful update saltyvixen , you have brought something new in this forum.

thanks a lot. Mera goal bas tum jaise ache friends banana tha yaha.

Hope you will give us more surprising and thriller episode and make this story unique and most importantly have to complete the story, because a story is worthless if it is incomplete.

Thanks again a big wala
I'll do my best!!
Also, you have to continue your second Story "Kings of Kings" that's exactly my type