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SHUKRIYA BHAI ......!!!!
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SHUKRIYA BHAI ...
Ha kuch chiz ho sakati hai missing aage aa jaaygi yaad woh sab bhi
Woh bus sona baato ko jada uljhana nahi caah rahi hogi may bee.....
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Shukriya bhai ...
haa meeting kaa dekhana hogaa hi
Sona abb kuch soch samajh ke hi kar rahi hogi ...
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Haa ek sone ki chaine ki tarah usske pass rahegi ...Sona Dev ko chain se jine neyi degi
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SUPER MEGA UPDATE 156
Mai - Pehale baat toh su....
Mere hotho ko roakte hue - koi bhi baat ho sab maan li
Mai - thik hai aaj ke baad tum mera man kabhi mat padhana
Sona nai apni ungliya hatta li aur shir nicche kar liya - maine vada kiya diya
tumnai meri jaan hi maang li
Mai - nahi sona mai nahi caahata ki kuch baate assi hai joh tum naa jaano toh
saayad sahi ho filhal ke liye
Sona muh latakaye hue - jaisa tum kaaho
Maine usska face pakada aur ek lip kiss le li
Sona - abb yeh kyu
Mai - kaya hua bura laga
Sona - haa
Mai - sorry maine bina pucche mujhe maaf karna abb hume chalana caahiye
Sona tezz sai has padi aur mujhe kiss karnai lagi mere haath apne aap usski
boobs ko masanai lage
Tabhi kuch khaat pat hui aur maine usse chhod diya
Mai - abhi toh tumhe bura laga
Sona - haa kyuki tab tumnai mere daabaye nahi the naa
Mai - daabaye.. kaya daa...ohhhhh badamash kahi ki etnaa sada hua face banaya ruko abhi
Sona ko pata tha ki mai ess baat par usse chhodnai wala nahi tha woh pehale hi
tayar thi aur bhaganai lagi
Mai toh usse palak jahapate hi pakad leta par kaya fayada assi shaktiyo kaa jo
aapke payaar ke pallo ko chhota kar de
Maine bhi usse bhagani diya aur ussi pakadnai ki kosis karnai laga
Kuch wkhat aur bitaya humanai aur phir vapas kabile pahuche maine waha sai neha ko liya aur manas sai phir sai aane ka wada karke ghar pahucha jaha log pareshai mai dubbe hue the
Sab edhar udhar phone karnai mai lage hue the jaaise ki koi humara pata bata
dega aakhir koi kitana kuch bhi kahe par pariwar hamesha aapki chinta karata
rahata hai
Mai dono ko lekar andar gaya aur maa ke kande par haath rakaha maa aur baaki sab abhi bhi soch mai pade the abhi bhi
Mai - maa hum aa gaye koi chinata ki baat nahi hai
Maa ekdum sai kadhi ho gayi aur mujhe marnai lagi mai smajaha nahi maa ke ess
bheviour ko payaar karnai ki jaagah mara kyu
Maa ki nazar jaase hi sona par padhi un
nka haath ruk gaya
Maa - tuh kab shudherga baata kyu khudh ko musibato mai daalata hai aur tuh hi nahi ess gahr mai ek aur aa chuki hai khudh ko musibato mai daalanai waali beta aisi shakatiya kis kaam ki joh tumhe apno sai dhur kare aur tumhe adharm karnai par majabur kare
Mai - nahi maa aisa kuch nahi hai maine kabhi koi galat kaam nahi kiya aur shaktiyoo kaa kaya hai yeh toh dhua naam matra hai aap sabake samnai aur haa bb sab phir sai mujhe samarat mat samajhana woh sab azeeb saa lagata hai
Dad - kuch nahi yeh kuch jada chinata karnai lagi hai aaj kal tumhari
Mai - acha abb etna bhi mat karo ki time kaa pata naa chale chailye sab soo jaaye abb kal sab baat hogi
B chacha - haa chaloo sab
Saloni - chaloo dev tum bhi soo jaao
Mai - haa chalo
Maa - nahi tum dono saath nahi so sakate abb
Mai - kyu maa
Dad - arre usske kahanai kaa matalab hai ki aaj teri maa saloni ke saath sona
cahati hai
Saloni - thik hai maa chalo
Sab dheere dheere chale gaye mai wahi soffe par beth gaya
Sona aur neha abhi bhi mere saath thi
Mai - dekh rahi hai neha jab sai mai aaya hu kabhi toh etna payaar deti hai ki
pucho mat aur aaj
Sona - bus karo abb mai tumhare saath hu
Neha - mai bhi abb aap soo jao
Mai sona ke goad mai shir rakh kar let gaya
Mai - kahi jana mat tum dono mujhe acha nahi lag raha maa ki baato sai mujhe woh kisi wajah sai saloni ko lekar gayi hai
Neha - nahi yahi hai humm app soo jaye
Aur neha nai mere pair apni goad mai rakh liya aur dabanai lagi mai soo gaya
assi hi
Karib 4:30 beje ke karib nai need khuli toh dekha dono bethi bethi soo gayi
Mai dheere sai utha aur kitchen ki taraf gaya paani lene
Mai panni lekar aaya aur pine laga ki tabhi saloni didi niche aa gayi
aakhe malati hui
Saloni - tum yaha kaya kar rahe ho aur woh dono yaha kyu soo gayi
Mai - bus assi par tum yaha kaise
Mere haatho sai paani ki bottle lete hue - esske liye kyu tumnai kaya socha
Mai - mai kaya sochunga tum bhi subah subah shuru ho gayi
Saloni paani pinne lagi kuch paani gir kar unnke gaale sai hota hua unnki
kamiz mai jaane laga jisnai mera morning boner bhi bana diya aur aakho sai thakan bhi mita di
Saloni mujhe bottle deti hui - abb subah suabh tuh apana mood mat banao
warana mai bhi ruk nahi paungi kal raat badi muskil sai kati tumhare bina
Tabhi piche ki awwaz nai humare rongate khadhe kar diye
Maa - toh tujhe abhi bhi chain mila joh esske saath phir sai rangraliya mananai
aa gayi
Hum dono ki jaban ko jaise lakawa mar gaya acha tha ki hum kitchen ke pass the
warana kahi neha aur sona nai yeh suna hota nahi nahi
Mai - kaya hua maa aap yaha aur yeh kaya anab sanab bak rahi hai
Maa mere pass aa gayi - kaya yahi shikaya tha maine tujhe haa kaya yahi hai humari parvarish ki saja ki humara dev joh ek samarat thaa woh aisa nikala
Saloni - maa aap esse kuch mat kaho sab meri vajah sai hua hai
Maa - aacha toh teri hawas nai mere ess kahanadan par daag laga diya
Mai chilla bhi nahi sakata tha
Mai - maa enhe aap kuch mat kaho yeh meri galati hai
Maa - nahi teri gaalti nahi essi ki ho sakati hai tuh toh mard hai tuh bhale
khudh ko naa rok paaya ho par esani yeh sab kyu nahi roka
Mai - nahi maa enki koi galati nahi hai mai hi bhatak gaya tha
Maa - sayad amit sumit sahi kehate hai tuh abb insaan nahi chalati firati hawas
ban chuka hai teri bhok nahi mitti etni ladkiyo ke saath sokar ki tune apni
badi behan ke shareer ko raund diya
Saloni - maa bus abb chup ho jaaye humare bich abhi aisa kuch nahi hua hai jaisa aap samajh rahi
Maa - kash tum dono uss gate ke sahi sai band kar lete uss din toh mai yeh sab
naa dekh paati
Mai - maa maine koi galat kaam nahi kiya hai enke saath
Maa - jis haalt mai tum dono the koi bhi ruk nahi sakata hai aur aaj ke baad meri
kisi beti ke pass mat jana samajha tuh maine socha saayad mera payaar tujhe
badal dega par galat tune meri neha chii chii dev tuh hai tere par woh toh amit
nai dhikha diya mujhe sab warna mai tujhe acha hi samajhati rahi aur woh sikha ki bachi hum sabko naa jaane kaya kaya dikha rahi thi faltu ki chize tuh samarat ho nahi sakata jiski log izzat kare
Mai - maa woh ganada insaan hai
Maa - kam sai kam apni behano ko chhod diya hai uss nai
Mai - maa mai appko sach bata deta hu
Maa - abb aur kahaniya nahi dev aur nahi yeh mai kaya kah rahi hu dev naam tujh par nahi nahi tuh tohh mere ghar kaa woh kalank hai joh abb saayad mit jaaye agar mai ess baat ko apane seene mai dafan kar loo
Mai - maa hum dono kaa payaar atut hai aur yeh pichale janam kaa hai
Maa - bus kar abb kitana girega tuh
aur saloni abb tujhe kabhi nahi dhikegi ess gahr mai kal hi esski shaadi hogi
Mai/saloni - kaya
Maa - haa akhil sai court marriage
Mai - nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakati ho
Maa - karungi kal aisa mai
Maa saloni didi ko khich kar le gayi joh ek murati ki tarah sab sun rahi thi
Mai wahi kadha rah gaya akkhir yeh sab etana jaldi kaise hua ek pal mai mujhe
sab milata hai aur agale hi pal kho jaata hai
Tabhi mujhe ek roshani dhikayi di mujhe laga gurudev honge toh mai usske piche
chal pada aur garadan mai pahucha
Woh roshani aur tezz ho gayi etnai ki meri aakhe bhi band ho gayi
Jab khuli toh samnai woh kadhi thi jise mai kaya koi bacha nahi bhul sakata
tha
Mai - maa aap yaha
Yeh mere pichale janam ki maa ke ansh tha joh yaha aaya tha
Maa - mere baacche kyu dhuki hai tuh
Mai - maa yeh duniya meri samajh sai bahar hai payaar karo toh galat hai naa karo toh bhi
Maa - mere baache mai bhale ess janam mai teri maa nahi ban paayi par mujhe aaj bhi garv hai ki mai ek mahan samarat ki maa thi
Mai - thi nahi abhi bhi ho aap mai aapka hi beta hu kaya bus peda karnai sai maa
banati hai
Maa - beta tuh keh sahi raha hai par mai abb tujh par hak nahi jata sakati hu
naa
Mai - maa etnai warso mai aaj yaad kiya apnai ess bache ko
Maa - yeh sumitra samaye ki bediyoo mai bhadhi hui hai warana tujhe apne seene sai laga leti
Mai - aaj aap ess liye aayi hai ki kahi mai koi galat kadam naa utha luh
Abb mai enko maa ki jagah sumitra likhunga taaki confusion naa ho
Sumitra - haa kyuki jab ek maa apne baache ko yeh sab kahati hai toh woh tut
jata hai
Mai - toh kaya mai kaya sach mai ek h....
Sumitra - beta apne liye uss sabd kaa pariyog mat kar woh maa abhi ghusse mai hai kyuki usski parvarish par sawal uthenge sirf sawal jinka woh jawab sayad nahi de paayegi essi kaa dar hai usse
Mai - mai kaya karu abb
Sumitra - sab uss uperwale par chhod do wahi tumhe sahi rasata dhikahyenge bus apni himmat ko kabhi kamzor mat hone dena khud ko jaise tum bhediya baan ke ho jaate ho kisi bhi chiz kaa ashar nahi hota ek pahad ki tarah baan jate ho bus assi hi rehana kyuki tumhari sabsai badi takat tum khudh ho
Mai bhaag kar apni maa ke gale lagnai laga par mere chutte hi woh gayab ho
gayi
Mai - nahi maa mat jao mujhe aapki jarurata hai bhaut jada please aa jao ma
Etnai saalo baad apni maa ko dekh kar mujhe aisa laga jaise jannat mil gayi thi
Mere aakho asshu the par yeh thode mile jule hue the khushi ki maa mila aur dukh ki un sai man mutabik nahi mil paya
Sona - abb kyu dhuki ho haa bolo
Mai - sona tumhe pata hai meri maa aayi thi
Sona - maa are maa to yahi hai naa
Mai - woh nahi pichale janam ki maa meri sumitra maa
Sona - toh milawaya kyu nahi maa ji sai
Mai - mai khudh nai mil paya hu unn sai sahi sai
Sona - tum bhaut gande ho jao mai baat nahi karti tumsai woh muh dusri taraf
ghuma deti hai
Mai - aisa mat karoo warana suabah suabah muh kon mitha karwayega
Sona muakurati hui - mujhe kaya pata
Mai - acha thik hai mai hi le leta hu
Maine usse piche sai pakad liya aur gol
gol ghumanai laga
Sona - dev ruk jaao mujhe chakkar aa rahe hai
maine usse nicche utara aur usse
pakade rakaha
Sona - abb majak ho gaya ho toh chale anadr nasata bana deti hu
Mai - saayad abb tak riccha kitchen mai pahuch gayi hogi
Sona - mai bhi chali woh andar chali gayi jaldi sai
waise mujhe bhi yeh pata chal chuka tha sona nai sayad sab sun liya aur usko sab pata hai bus woh mera man badalane ke liye aise kar ke gaye taki mera mood acha rahe
Mai bhi usske piche gaya aur apne room mai chala gaya jaha kirti aur pari soyi
hui thi
Mai bathroom mai gus gaya towel lekar
Mai naha kar fresh hua saala roj roj ki bhaag doud nai mujhe insaan kam robot
jada bana diya tha
Mai towel pehan kar bhar nikala apni ladko ki aadat hi yahi hai saala kabhi kapde lekar nahi jaate
Mai bhar aaya toh hamesh ki tarah yeh dono maharani jaag chuki thi
Pari kirti ko nochate hui - jaa naa
Kirti - nahi kaise jaau mai
Mai - kaha jaa rahi hai pari yeh
Pari - kaya bhaiya mujhsai kyu puch rahe ho essi sai puch lo
Mai aur jada mood kaharab karnai ke mood mai nahi tha
Maine jakar kapade nikale aur shirt phen li
Mai - kaya hua tum dono bhi jaao apne room mai naha dhokar niche breakfast par pahucho
Pari - mera toh room wahi hai joh aapka hai waise kirti aapsai kuch kehana
cahati hai
Mai - yahi ki mai bekar jahil gawar hu naa
Kirti khaadi hui aur bhagati hui mere gaale lag gayi aur ronne lagi
Mai samjaha toh nahi par saayad abhass ho gaya ki pari nai esse kuch samajahya
hi hoga
Maine usske shir ko sehalata hua - bus kar pagali bus kar tere aakho mai aashu
nahi nadani aachi lagati hai
Kirti rotte hue - ahh uuuhhhuhhh nahi bhaiaya mai gandi hu maine aapko bura
bhala kaha par mai sachayi nahi jaanti thi
Mai - koi baat nahi gam ess baat kaa hai ki tuh mujhe samajh hi nahi saaki abhi
tak
Kirti aur tezz ronne lagi
Pari mujhe eshara kiya kuch
Pari - abb kaya bhaiya ke kapde apnai aashuo sai gande karegi
Mai kirti ke aakho sai aashu saaf karte hue - esske asshu gande nahi karege balki essmai rang bhar dene khushi ke kyuki yeh hai assi meri natakhat kirti meri paayri behan
Kirti - haa bhaiya mai aapki hi kirti hu bus aapki kaya aapko aaj bhi mere haatho ki coffe pioyoge
Mai - piyunga tab jab tuh banaygi
Kirti nai mujhe chhoda aur gate khol kar bhaagnai lagi nicche ki taraf
Mai chilla - aram sai chhot mat mar lenna
Par woh toh jaise milkha singh sir sai race lagani ke liye bhagi thi
Pari - aap haste hue ekdum mast lagate ho ekdum hero maafik
Mai - chal abb bhakawas band kar aur
Tabhi meri jeb mai mujhe kuch dhikha
Pari - kaya hua bhaiya
Mai - kuch nahi tuh jakar naha kar aa
Pari - ok jaana nahi par aap kahi par bhi
Mai - haa baba abb jaa
Woh bathroom mai chali gayi
Maine woh kagaj nikala jeb mai sai esmai kuch likha hua tha
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Mere paayre dev tum jante ho ki mai abb apna aab kuch bus tujhe maan chuki hu par maa meri shaadi uss akhil sai karwa degi jis tumnai mara par saayad mera nasib uss ke saath likha tha woh bach gaya hai par tumhre siwa kissi aur ki nahi ho sakati maa bhale kuch kahe abb sab kuch tum par hai yaa toh mujh maar dena yaa mujhe apni bana loo chhodo tumhari liye aasan hi kar deti hui mai chali jaaungi ess ghar ko chhod kar taaki zinda toh rahu tumhari yaad mai kyuki saayad abb humara milana kabhi nahi hoga
- saloni
Maine sir pit liya jis ladaki ko mai sabsai strong samajhata tha woh aisi baate
karnai lagi ho sakata hai maa ki baato ko jhel nahi paayi hongi mujhe toh
sumitra maa nai samjha diya hai unnko abhi kissi nai nahi samjahya
Mai jaldi sai tayaar hua aur saloni ke room mai gaya taki baat kat saku
par waha toh meri soch sai sab kuch alag tha
Waha pariwar ke sabhi bade log bethe hue the
Mai - aap sab yaha ess wkhat
Dad - jab bache galat rasate par chal pade toh sab karna padata hai
Mai - toh maa nai sab ko bta diya
B chacha - yeh kaya kiya dev tunne
Mai - aisa kaya kar diya joh assi nazaro sai dekh rahe ho
Dad chilla kar - humari nazroo ko mat dekh tunne kis nazar sai dekha saloni ko
woh dekh
Saloni - nahi dad
Maa nai ek tapad mar diya didi - tuh ek sabd mat bolana payaar ke bare mai
duniya mai etani log hai ladake ladkiya hai par tujhe ye hi mila apana saga
bhai
C chachi - didi eski kaya galati bichari ladaki hai aag toh esske seene mai
lagi hogi naa aur humare beto ke baare mai naa jaane kaya kaya dikha diya meri beti nai woh bhi eski hi chaal hogi
Mai ess baat par chup raha
C chacha - jab pita ji ko yeh pata chalega toh kaya hoga kaya kaya soch ke bethe hai woh waha logo ko bula aur log bhi soch rahe family ke yeh bahut bada samarat hai
Dad - nahi yeh baat unko koi nahi baatyega
Maa - aap sab log abhi yaha ki baat karoge ki nahi
Mai - maa aap kuch jada react nahi kar rahi ho ess mamuli si baat par
Maa - dekh rahe ho aap sab log esse yeh mamuli si baat lagati hai
Note : - thanks sabhi kai support and 400 k views aur mast mast comment ke liye waise aap sabaka kaya kahyaal hai maa sahi kar rahi hai yaa dev aur saloni kaa joh pyaar hai woh sahi hai
Mai - Pehale baat toh su....
Mere hotho ko roakte hue - koi bhi baat ho sab maan li
Mai - thik hai aaj ke baad tum mera man kabhi mat padhana
Sona nai apni ungliya hatta li aur shir nicche kar liya - maine vada kiya diya
tumnai meri jaan hi maang li
Mai - nahi sona mai nahi caahata ki kuch baate assi hai joh tum naa jaano toh
saayad sahi ho filhal ke liye
Sona muh latakaye hue - jaisa tum kaaho
Maine usska face pakada aur ek lip kiss le li
Sona - abb yeh kyu
Mai - kaya hua bura laga
Sona - haa
Mai - sorry maine bina pucche mujhe maaf karna abb hume chalana caahiye
Sona tezz sai has padi aur mujhe kiss karnai lagi mere haath apne aap usski
boobs ko masanai lage
Tabhi kuch khaat pat hui aur maine usse chhod diya
Mai - abhi toh tumhe bura laga
Sona - haa kyuki tab tumnai mere daabaye nahi the naa
Mai - daabaye.. kaya daa...ohhhhh badamash kahi ki etnaa sada hua face banaya ruko abhi
Sona ko pata tha ki mai ess baat par usse chhodnai wala nahi tha woh pehale hi
tayar thi aur bhaganai lagi
Mai toh usse palak jahapate hi pakad leta par kaya fayada assi shaktiyo kaa jo
aapke payaar ke pallo ko chhota kar de
Maine bhi usse bhagani diya aur ussi pakadnai ki kosis karnai laga
Kuch wkhat aur bitaya humanai aur phir vapas kabile pahuche maine waha sai neha ko liya aur manas sai phir sai aane ka wada karke ghar pahucha jaha log pareshai mai dubbe hue the
Sab edhar udhar phone karnai mai lage hue the jaaise ki koi humara pata bata
dega aakhir koi kitana kuch bhi kahe par pariwar hamesha aapki chinta karata
rahata hai
Mai dono ko lekar andar gaya aur maa ke kande par haath rakaha maa aur baaki sab abhi bhi soch mai pade the abhi bhi
Mai - maa hum aa gaye koi chinata ki baat nahi hai
Maa ekdum sai kadhi ho gayi aur mujhe marnai lagi mai smajaha nahi maa ke ess
bheviour ko payaar karnai ki jaagah mara kyu
Maa ki nazar jaase hi sona par padhi un
nka haath ruk gaya
Maa - tuh kab shudherga baata kyu khudh ko musibato mai daalata hai aur tuh hi nahi ess gahr mai ek aur aa chuki hai khudh ko musibato mai daalanai waali beta aisi shakatiya kis kaam ki joh tumhe apno sai dhur kare aur tumhe adharm karnai par majabur kare
Mai - nahi maa aisa kuch nahi hai maine kabhi koi galat kaam nahi kiya aur shaktiyoo kaa kaya hai yeh toh dhua naam matra hai aap sabake samnai aur haa bb sab phir sai mujhe samarat mat samajhana woh sab azeeb saa lagata hai
Dad - kuch nahi yeh kuch jada chinata karnai lagi hai aaj kal tumhari
Mai - acha abb etna bhi mat karo ki time kaa pata naa chale chailye sab soo jaaye abb kal sab baat hogi
B chacha - haa chaloo sab
Saloni - chaloo dev tum bhi soo jaao
Mai - haa chalo
Maa - nahi tum dono saath nahi so sakate abb
Mai - kyu maa
Dad - arre usske kahanai kaa matalab hai ki aaj teri maa saloni ke saath sona
cahati hai
Saloni - thik hai maa chalo
Sab dheere dheere chale gaye mai wahi soffe par beth gaya
Sona aur neha abhi bhi mere saath thi
Mai - dekh rahi hai neha jab sai mai aaya hu kabhi toh etna payaar deti hai ki
pucho mat aur aaj
Sona - bus karo abb mai tumhare saath hu
Neha - mai bhi abb aap soo jao
Mai sona ke goad mai shir rakh kar let gaya
Mai - kahi jana mat tum dono mujhe acha nahi lag raha maa ki baato sai mujhe woh kisi wajah sai saloni ko lekar gayi hai
Neha - nahi yahi hai humm app soo jaye
Aur neha nai mere pair apni goad mai rakh liya aur dabanai lagi mai soo gaya
assi hi
Karib 4:30 beje ke karib nai need khuli toh dekha dono bethi bethi soo gayi
Mai dheere sai utha aur kitchen ki taraf gaya paani lene
Mai panni lekar aaya aur pine laga ki tabhi saloni didi niche aa gayi
aakhe malati hui
Saloni - tum yaha kaya kar rahe ho aur woh dono yaha kyu soo gayi
Mai - bus assi par tum yaha kaise
Mere haatho sai paani ki bottle lete hue - esske liye kyu tumnai kaya socha
Mai - mai kaya sochunga tum bhi subah subah shuru ho gayi
Saloni paani pinne lagi kuch paani gir kar unnke gaale sai hota hua unnki
kamiz mai jaane laga jisnai mera morning boner bhi bana diya aur aakho sai thakan bhi mita di
Saloni mujhe bottle deti hui - abb subah suabh tuh apana mood mat banao
warana mai bhi ruk nahi paungi kal raat badi muskil sai kati tumhare bina
Tabhi piche ki awwaz nai humare rongate khadhe kar diye
Maa - toh tujhe abhi bhi chain mila joh esske saath phir sai rangraliya mananai
aa gayi
Hum dono ki jaban ko jaise lakawa mar gaya acha tha ki hum kitchen ke pass the
warana kahi neha aur sona nai yeh suna hota nahi nahi
Mai - kaya hua maa aap yaha aur yeh kaya anab sanab bak rahi hai
Maa mere pass aa gayi - kaya yahi shikaya tha maine tujhe haa kaya yahi hai humari parvarish ki saja ki humara dev joh ek samarat thaa woh aisa nikala
Saloni - maa aap esse kuch mat kaho sab meri vajah sai hua hai
Maa - aacha toh teri hawas nai mere ess kahanadan par daag laga diya
Mai chilla bhi nahi sakata tha
Mai - maa enhe aap kuch mat kaho yeh meri galati hai
Maa - nahi teri gaalti nahi essi ki ho sakati hai tuh toh mard hai tuh bhale
khudh ko naa rok paaya ho par esani yeh sab kyu nahi roka
Mai - nahi maa enki koi galati nahi hai mai hi bhatak gaya tha
Maa - sayad amit sumit sahi kehate hai tuh abb insaan nahi chalati firati hawas
ban chuka hai teri bhok nahi mitti etni ladkiyo ke saath sokar ki tune apni
badi behan ke shareer ko raund diya
Saloni - maa bus abb chup ho jaaye humare bich abhi aisa kuch nahi hua hai jaisa aap samajh rahi
Maa - kash tum dono uss gate ke sahi sai band kar lete uss din toh mai yeh sab
naa dekh paati
Mai - maa maine koi galat kaam nahi kiya hai enke saath
Maa - jis haalt mai tum dono the koi bhi ruk nahi sakata hai aur aaj ke baad meri
kisi beti ke pass mat jana samajha tuh maine socha saayad mera payaar tujhe
badal dega par galat tune meri neha chii chii dev tuh hai tere par woh toh amit
nai dhikha diya mujhe sab warna mai tujhe acha hi samajhati rahi aur woh sikha ki bachi hum sabko naa jaane kaya kaya dikha rahi thi faltu ki chize tuh samarat ho nahi sakata jiski log izzat kare
Mai - maa woh ganada insaan hai
Maa - kam sai kam apni behano ko chhod diya hai uss nai
Mai - maa mai appko sach bata deta hu
Maa - abb aur kahaniya nahi dev aur nahi yeh mai kaya kah rahi hu dev naam tujh par nahi nahi tuh tohh mere ghar kaa woh kalank hai joh abb saayad mit jaaye agar mai ess baat ko apane seene mai dafan kar loo
Mai - maa hum dono kaa payaar atut hai aur yeh pichale janam kaa hai
Maa - bus kar abb kitana girega tuh
aur saloni abb tujhe kabhi nahi dhikegi ess gahr mai kal hi esski shaadi hogi
Mai/saloni - kaya
Maa - haa akhil sai court marriage
Mai - nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakati ho
Maa - karungi kal aisa mai
Maa saloni didi ko khich kar le gayi joh ek murati ki tarah sab sun rahi thi
Mai wahi kadha rah gaya akkhir yeh sab etana jaldi kaise hua ek pal mai mujhe
sab milata hai aur agale hi pal kho jaata hai
Tabhi mujhe ek roshani dhikayi di mujhe laga gurudev honge toh mai usske piche
chal pada aur garadan mai pahucha
Woh roshani aur tezz ho gayi etnai ki meri aakhe bhi band ho gayi
Jab khuli toh samnai woh kadhi thi jise mai kaya koi bacha nahi bhul sakata
tha
Mai - maa aap yaha
Yeh mere pichale janam ki maa ke ansh tha joh yaha aaya tha
Maa - mere baacche kyu dhuki hai tuh
Mai - maa yeh duniya meri samajh sai bahar hai payaar karo toh galat hai naa karo toh bhi
Maa - mere baache mai bhale ess janam mai teri maa nahi ban paayi par mujhe aaj bhi garv hai ki mai ek mahan samarat ki maa thi
Mai - thi nahi abhi bhi ho aap mai aapka hi beta hu kaya bus peda karnai sai maa
banati hai
Maa - beta tuh keh sahi raha hai par mai abb tujh par hak nahi jata sakati hu
naa
Mai - maa etnai warso mai aaj yaad kiya apnai ess bache ko
Maa - yeh sumitra samaye ki bediyoo mai bhadhi hui hai warana tujhe apne seene sai laga leti
Mai - aaj aap ess liye aayi hai ki kahi mai koi galat kadam naa utha luh
Abb mai enko maa ki jagah sumitra likhunga taaki confusion naa ho
Sumitra - haa kyuki jab ek maa apne baache ko yeh sab kahati hai toh woh tut
jata hai
Mai - toh kaya mai kaya sach mai ek h....
Sumitra - beta apne liye uss sabd kaa pariyog mat kar woh maa abhi ghusse mai hai kyuki usski parvarish par sawal uthenge sirf sawal jinka woh jawab sayad nahi de paayegi essi kaa dar hai usse
Mai - mai kaya karu abb
Sumitra - sab uss uperwale par chhod do wahi tumhe sahi rasata dhikahyenge bus apni himmat ko kabhi kamzor mat hone dena khud ko jaise tum bhediya baan ke ho jaate ho kisi bhi chiz kaa ashar nahi hota ek pahad ki tarah baan jate ho bus assi hi rehana kyuki tumhari sabsai badi takat tum khudh ho
Mai bhaag kar apni maa ke gale lagnai laga par mere chutte hi woh gayab ho
gayi
Mai - nahi maa mat jao mujhe aapki jarurata hai bhaut jada please aa jao ma
Etnai saalo baad apni maa ko dekh kar mujhe aisa laga jaise jannat mil gayi thi
Mere aakho asshu the par yeh thode mile jule hue the khushi ki maa mila aur dukh ki un sai man mutabik nahi mil paya
Sona - abb kyu dhuki ho haa bolo
Mai - sona tumhe pata hai meri maa aayi thi
Sona - maa are maa to yahi hai naa
Mai - woh nahi pichale janam ki maa meri sumitra maa
Sona - toh milawaya kyu nahi maa ji sai
Mai - mai khudh nai mil paya hu unn sai sahi sai
Sona - tum bhaut gande ho jao mai baat nahi karti tumsai woh muh dusri taraf
ghuma deti hai
Mai - aisa mat karoo warana suabah suabah muh kon mitha karwayega
Sona muakurati hui - mujhe kaya pata
Mai - acha thik hai mai hi le leta hu
Maine usse piche sai pakad liya aur gol
gol ghumanai laga
Sona - dev ruk jaao mujhe chakkar aa rahe hai
maine usse nicche utara aur usse
pakade rakaha
Sona - abb majak ho gaya ho toh chale anadr nasata bana deti hu
Mai - saayad abb tak riccha kitchen mai pahuch gayi hogi
Sona - mai bhi chali woh andar chali gayi jaldi sai
waise mujhe bhi yeh pata chal chuka tha sona nai sayad sab sun liya aur usko sab pata hai bus woh mera man badalane ke liye aise kar ke gaye taki mera mood acha rahe
Mai bhi usske piche gaya aur apne room mai chala gaya jaha kirti aur pari soyi
hui thi
Mai bathroom mai gus gaya towel lekar
Mai naha kar fresh hua saala roj roj ki bhaag doud nai mujhe insaan kam robot
jada bana diya tha
Mai towel pehan kar bhar nikala apni ladko ki aadat hi yahi hai saala kabhi kapde lekar nahi jaate
Mai bhar aaya toh hamesh ki tarah yeh dono maharani jaag chuki thi
Pari kirti ko nochate hui - jaa naa
Kirti - nahi kaise jaau mai
Mai - kaha jaa rahi hai pari yeh
Pari - kaya bhaiya mujhsai kyu puch rahe ho essi sai puch lo
Mai aur jada mood kaharab karnai ke mood mai nahi tha
Maine jakar kapade nikale aur shirt phen li
Mai - kaya hua tum dono bhi jaao apne room mai naha dhokar niche breakfast par pahucho
Pari - mera toh room wahi hai joh aapka hai waise kirti aapsai kuch kehana
cahati hai
Mai - yahi ki mai bekar jahil gawar hu naa
Kirti khaadi hui aur bhagati hui mere gaale lag gayi aur ronne lagi
Mai samjaha toh nahi par saayad abhass ho gaya ki pari nai esse kuch samajahya
hi hoga
Maine usske shir ko sehalata hua - bus kar pagali bus kar tere aakho mai aashu
nahi nadani aachi lagati hai
Kirti rotte hue - ahh uuuhhhuhhh nahi bhaiaya mai gandi hu maine aapko bura
bhala kaha par mai sachayi nahi jaanti thi
Mai - koi baat nahi gam ess baat kaa hai ki tuh mujhe samajh hi nahi saaki abhi
tak
Kirti aur tezz ronne lagi
Pari mujhe eshara kiya kuch
Pari - abb kaya bhaiya ke kapde apnai aashuo sai gande karegi
Mai kirti ke aakho sai aashu saaf karte hue - esske asshu gande nahi karege balki essmai rang bhar dene khushi ke kyuki yeh hai assi meri natakhat kirti meri paayri behan
Kirti - haa bhaiya mai aapki hi kirti hu bus aapki kaya aapko aaj bhi mere haatho ki coffe pioyoge
Mai - piyunga tab jab tuh banaygi
Kirti nai mujhe chhoda aur gate khol kar bhaagnai lagi nicche ki taraf
Mai chilla - aram sai chhot mat mar lenna
Par woh toh jaise milkha singh sir sai race lagani ke liye bhagi thi
Pari - aap haste hue ekdum mast lagate ho ekdum hero maafik
Mai - chal abb bhakawas band kar aur
Tabhi meri jeb mai mujhe kuch dhikha
Pari - kaya hua bhaiya
Mai - kuch nahi tuh jakar naha kar aa
Pari - ok jaana nahi par aap kahi par bhi
Mai - haa baba abb jaa
Woh bathroom mai chali gayi
Maine woh kagaj nikala jeb mai sai esmai kuch likha hua tha
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Mere paayre dev tum jante ho ki mai abb apna aab kuch bus tujhe maan chuki hu par maa meri shaadi uss akhil sai karwa degi jis tumnai mara par saayad mera nasib uss ke saath likha tha woh bach gaya hai par tumhre siwa kissi aur ki nahi ho sakati maa bhale kuch kahe abb sab kuch tum par hai yaa toh mujh maar dena yaa mujhe apni bana loo chhodo tumhari liye aasan hi kar deti hui mai chali jaaungi ess ghar ko chhod kar taaki zinda toh rahu tumhari yaad mai kyuki saayad abb humara milana kabhi nahi hoga
- saloni
Maine sir pit liya jis ladaki ko mai sabsai strong samajhata tha woh aisi baate
karnai lagi ho sakata hai maa ki baato ko jhel nahi paayi hongi mujhe toh
sumitra maa nai samjha diya hai unnko abhi kissi nai nahi samjahya
Mai jaldi sai tayaar hua aur saloni ke room mai gaya taki baat kat saku
par waha toh meri soch sai sab kuch alag tha
Waha pariwar ke sabhi bade log bethe hue the
Mai - aap sab yaha ess wkhat
Dad - jab bache galat rasate par chal pade toh sab karna padata hai
Mai - toh maa nai sab ko bta diya
B chacha - yeh kaya kiya dev tunne
Mai - aisa kaya kar diya joh assi nazaro sai dekh rahe ho
Dad chilla kar - humari nazroo ko mat dekh tunne kis nazar sai dekha saloni ko
woh dekh
Saloni - nahi dad
Maa nai ek tapad mar diya didi - tuh ek sabd mat bolana payaar ke bare mai
duniya mai etani log hai ladake ladkiya hai par tujhe ye hi mila apana saga
bhai
C chachi - didi eski kaya galati bichari ladaki hai aag toh esske seene mai
lagi hogi naa aur humare beto ke baare mai naa jaane kaya kaya dikha diya meri beti nai woh bhi eski hi chaal hogi
Mai ess baat par chup raha
C chacha - jab pita ji ko yeh pata chalega toh kaya hoga kaya kaya soch ke bethe hai woh waha logo ko bula aur log bhi soch rahe family ke yeh bahut bada samarat hai
Dad - nahi yeh baat unko koi nahi baatyega
Maa - aap sab log abhi yaha ki baat karoge ki nahi
Mai - maa aap kuch jada react nahi kar rahi ho ess mamuli si baat par
Maa - dekh rahe ho aap sab log esse yeh mamuli si baat lagati hai
Note : - thanks sabhi kai support and 400 k views aur mast mast comment ke liye waise aap sabaka kaya kahyaal hai maa sahi kar rahi hai yaa dev aur saloni kaa joh pyaar hai woh sahi hai
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Nice and lovely update....
Nice update..!!
Amit, Sumit aur rahul inn ladko ne inki family ke sath itna bura kiya..aaj uss maa ko woh ladke achhe lag rahe hai aur jis dev ne inn sabko itni musibaton se nikala aur hamesha sabke liye khada raha usko woh sab galat samajh rahe hai..uski ek bhi baat nahi sun rahe hai..ek maa apne bete ke bare me jara bhi nahi soch rahi hai..uski baat bhi nahi sun rahi hai..ab dev ne bahot seh liya..ab usko saloni aur uski jitni biwiya honewali hai sabko lekar alag Ghar basa Dena chahiye..!! Sumitra jo uski pichhle janm ki maa thi woh samajh gayi lekin yeh maa nahi samajh payi aur apne bete ko hawasi bol rahi hai..!!
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Iss kahani ki main villain Dev Ki Maa hi hai. Uske liye Dev ko chhodkar sabhi Ram jaise hain aur Dev Raavan. Do baar usne Unn teenon kameene bhaiyon ko maaf kiya tha ye jaante huye bhi ke un logon ne Dev ke andar Cancer ki beemari paida ki thi. Saloni aur Pari ki izzat lootna chahte the wo teenon aur aaj wo kameene Dev se achhe ho gaye.
Waise galti Dev ki bhi hai, Maa bolne se hi nahi ho jaati. Sumitra bhi to Dev ko samajh gayi, par ye nahi samajh paayi. Dev ko ab apni Maa ko aayena dikha hi dena chahiye aur usse achhe se paath padhana chahiye. Haan theek hai ke un logon ke liye sage bhai behen ke beech ye sab hona acceptable nahi hai, wo sab theek hai par wo teenon kameene bhai in logon ke liye uss se achhe ho gaye jisne inhe kitni hi baar bachaya.
Poori kahani mein Shikha, Pari, Sona, Sona ki badi behen aur Masoom ke alawa koyi aisa female character nahi hai jo Dev par bharosa karta ho ya uss se sacha pyaar karta ho. Saloni to khud kitni hi baar bina poori baat jaane Dev par bhadak jaati hai. Baaki uske Chacha ki betiyan ho ya dono Chachiyan. Ya fir uski khud ki Maa... Khair, jo bhi ho mujhe lagta hai ke ab Dev ko sabse pehle Rahul, Amit, Sumit aur Akhil ka hisaab poora kar hi dena chahiye.
Especially jo kuchh unhone Pari ke saath kiya uske baad Dev ne unhe zinda kyun chhoda hua hai?
Bhai aapki kahani ye deserve karti hai. You're a superb writer!
Bro aapki story me ek baat samaj me nahi aa rahi hai ki aakhir dev hai kya kyu vo koi sachai kisi ko batata nahi bas ullu ki tarah idhar se udhar muh maar raha hai kya ye jo saktiya hai uske paas vo isi kaam ke liye hai chalo Amit ne sabko Jo dikhaya vo sabne sach Maan liya to kya dev sabko sach nahi dikha sakta kya uski bahene sabko nahi bata sakti
Aap aaj bhi pahele ke jese story ko lamba khich rahe ho aisa muje lag raha hai
Aap aaj bhi pahele ke jese story ko lamba khich rahe ho aisa muje lag raha hai