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Nice and beautiful update....UPDATE 163
Uss adami ki awwaz aise aayi ki agar koi sune chhota bacha toh uska mut nikal jaaye maine apna pakada kahi mera toh naa nikala mai bhi utana bada nahi hu
woh ek khatarnak adami jaisa lag raha tha
toh
kaya be kutto kaahe chila rahe ho aur uth ladake kaya kiya hai esnai
ek bola maalik mere bete ko maar diya aur eske bhi
gand ke andhe yeh etna saa hokar tere ghode jaise beto ko maar dega pata hai kiske samane kadha hai tuh
maafi maafi maalik par esnai kiya
mai upper ki tarah dekh ke uska muh ekdum kala kala nazar aa raha tha andhere mai
Unn logo nai mujhe gher liya tha aur jaan sai marne wale the ess liye maine unhe kudh ko marne sai pehale maar diya
maalik yeh jhutt keh raha hunare bache aise nahi hai
sab esko maalik keh rahe sayad maalik eska naam hai
Maalik - teri maa ke naam kaa mantra padhu saale har kisi ko uska beta sidha aur beti dood ki dhuli lagti hai aur unn do chutiyo ko mardangi dikhane kaa mauka mila toh esske samane humare pass bhej deta
maalik ab aap hi naaye kare
Maalik aage gaye aur ussko haath sai utha liyaa - teri beti chodu saale edhar aa ladake
Mai usske paas gaya - ji
Maalik - kaya karna cahata hai eske saath
Mai - esnai mera banaya hua ghar jala diya essko toh mai akela hota toh jala deta
Usnai haath aage kiya aur uske haath mai aag aa gayi
Maalik - le jala
usnai etnai tezz bola aur samane koi haa naa bhi nahi keh raha tha maine haath mai woh aag ki masaal pakadi aur usnai uss adami ko uske upper rakh diya woh jal ke rakh ho gaya
Yeh aisa shaitani kaam maine aag tak naa dekha na kabhi socha rha yeh aakhir hai kon
woh chillaya aur waha sai sab bhaag gaye
Woh - kaya caahiye tere ko joh yaha bhaag ke aaya
Mai - kuch nahi .....
woh mujhe ghurane laga - tera koi hai nahi kaya be
Mai - nahi tuh kon hai
Woh mujhe pakad ke utha liya - chaar fati ke ande apne baap sai aise baat karata hai
Mai - meri toh naa hi nahi baap kaha sai aayega
Woh - acha tabhi saale etnai akad hai kabhi lagata londiya ko niche liya nahi joh etnai akad hai
Mai - haa mera toh hai par tere toh etnai age mai bhi etnai akad lagata tujhe bhi abhi tak nahi mili
usnai mujhe ped pe phek ke mara
Mai - phek aise raha jaise londiya bhi nagi naa dekhi tune be
Woh - chup kar machar ki jaat
Mai - sala chodu mere haath ek adami jala diya
Woh - tuh bola toh jhadu ki jalana hai tujhe pehale bada ji ji kar raha tha
Mai - haa pehale laga tuh koi raja waza hai par toh meri hi tarah chodu killer hai
Woh - tuh abb tak kitnai maara be
Mai soch ke - abhi tak 223 yeh adami laga hata ke esko tune jalaya
Woh - hat mai nahi manata
Mai - mat maan maa chuda
usnai pet pe laat mari aur mere muh sai khoon aya
maine haath pe liya khoon ko aur chaat gaya
Woh dekha phir mujhe azeeb sai
Woh - tuh lagata paidaishi harami hai
Mai - par tere jaisa harmi banana hai taki sabki gaand fate jaise abhi en logo sai fati
Woh - dusari ki gaand fatane sai pehale apni gaand mai guda hona caahiye
Mai - acha chhoda jane de phir
Mai etna bol paya ki woh aise roop mai aaya ki mai abb apna pakad bhi nahi sakata mut nikal hi gaya sach mai
Woh - mahashaitan hu mahashaitan shaitaan bhi mere aage jhuk ke jata hai
mere pair kaap rahe the usko aisa dekh ke
woh normal hua par abb normal bhi dekh usko mere taange kaap rahi thi
Mahashaitan - kaya lauda fas gaya muh mai bol be
Mai - ji ji kuch nahi
Mahashitan jor sai hasa - chal waise ess roop tak aane pe nahi sab pehale hi dar jaate hai tuh pehale joh uss roop tak gaya meri takkar waalo mai
Mai - ji ji
Mahashitan - chal ab tuh mere kaam aayeg aur mai tere
Mai uske piche piche jaane laga thodi der baad jab woh aage agaya uske mehal mai toh waha gate mai nagi ladkiya kadhi yeh sab daasi thi yaa raniya etnai sundar
Mahashitan - yaha akar tuh samajh gaya hoga mai ghusane naa jata kahi ghuswane waali kudh akar beth jaati hai
Mai - ji ji
Mahashitan - chodu abb darna band kar tujhe ess kiye laya kyuki tere andar dum hai
Mai - yeh sab mere ko bhi dega tuh ki nahi
Mahashitan - ha ha ha ha pehale aisa ban jaa ki enki mai jab daale toh baar baar tujhe maange jaise abhi mujhe managti hai
Mai - yaha koi adami nahi hai kaya
Mahashitan - chhup be unki kaya gaand sai gaand hilayega
Mai - nahi nahi
Mahashitan - woh dekh samane jisko tune aaj mara yeh uski beti hai
Mai - mai jaau kaya
Mahashitan - chhup abhi etna ho jaa ki pareshani naa ho
Mai - matlab
Mahashitan - tuh apni kahani banana chata hai toh jab kahi kahani batayega yaa likhega waha tera baalik hona jaruri hai na..
Mai - acha samajh gaya tab tak mai kaya karu ess mehal mai
Mahashitan - aee ramu ki edhar aa
Anu - ji maalik
Mai - esko woh roopnagar wala kaam de de aur eski thakaan mitnae ko kar kuch
woh mujhe ek kamre mai lekar gayi aur waha mujhe kuch taswire dikhayi
Anu - enn chaar logo ko marna hai
Ek aur flashback, saala samjh nahi aa raha hai ki flashback ki story present mein chal rahi hai ya present ki story flashback mein. Ae baba utha le re Dev the lover ke pen, copy, mobile, laptop aur desktop ko pata nahi kya kya likhta rahta hai.UPDATE 162
Uske baad hum log kaafi aage nikal gaye aise hi baate karate hue yeh log toh etna baate ki thak ke need lene lagi aur mai car cahate hue abb un palo ko soch raha thaa jis sai mai aaj yaha hu
Tabhi koi samane aya aur maine break mara sab jaag gayi
Maine car kaa gate khola aur dekha waha ek ladaka kadha tha
Mai - kon ho tum yaha kyu kadhe ho
Tabhi piche mere body pe ek laat padi aur laat marne waali ki taang sayad tut gayi aise giri woh
Yeh dekh woh ladaka mere pe fire karat uss sai pehale uske uski gun pakad ke uske kandhe par maari woh aage gir gaya
Mai - kaya kar raha hai ladake tuh majak samajh raha hai kaya
Ladka uss tutti taang waali ladaki ki taraf jata hai aur mere aas pass aur log aa gaye
Aur mujhpar war karne lage tarah tarah ke attacks sai par mere samajh mai nahi aa raha kyu maine haatho sai ek ek puch mai unhe wahi behosh kar diya
Woh taang tuti ladaki boli - kon ho tum janawar ho kaya joh aise maar rahe ho sako
Devika uske baal pakad ke - Chhup kar kudh hamala karati aur bolati hai ki woh janwar hai
Ladak devika ke haath pakadne wala tha maine ek laat maari usse aur woh ek ped sai takara gaya
Ladaki - nahi bhai please unhe chhod do
Maine niche jhuka aur devika sai baal chhodani ko kaha
uss ladaki ki awaaz mai woh dard tha joh mai pehale bhi dekh chuka tha
Mai - chhod do devika esko
Devika - par yeh ...
Mai - chhod do jaane do
Devika nak usse chhoda aur woh joh uth nahi paa rahi thi bhaag ke apne bhai ke pass gayi
Ladaki - bhai tum thik toh naa
Ladak - haa diya mai thik hu bus kandhe mai chhot lagi hai
Diya - aapsai bola tha maine mujhe nahi lagata yeh koi mamuli insaan hai hume nahi lena caahiye tha yeh mission
Mai aage usske pass akar - kaya naam hai tumhara
Ladaka - Yash
Mai - haa tog yash aur diya etnai early age mai yeh sab krne ke liye kaya chiz tumhe majboor kar rahi hai
Yash apna haath pakad ke - sir aapke toh baal suit sab jaise gold ke hai humare liye toh aapke jutte ki bhi kimat saal bhar kahane ke barabar hogi
Mai apne jutte ki taraf dekh ke - nahi sayad jasie tum bol rahe ho uss hisab sai enki kimat tumhare liye 200-300 saal araam sai kahne ke liye hai
Diya mere taraf dekh ke shir jhuka ke - aap sayad koi raja yaa kuch aur lagate hai humsai kaha gaya tha ek insaan ko marana hai
Yash - chup raho diya hume yeh sab batana nahi hota hai caahe mar jaaye
Maine haath apne seene pe rakha aur mera suit gayab ho gaya yeh dekh dono aur chauk gaye
Mai - janu enn baaki logo ko rope of death sai baand do aur aaj andhera hone ko hai toh yehi camp laga dete hai devika tum enn dono kaa kahyaal rakho abhi sai 30 minute baad milata hu tum logo sai
Thodi der baad baaki sab logo ke saath shiva aur sandy bhi aa gaye mainee bola aaj raat yehi rukate hai sab apne enjoyed mood me the toh yeh sab batana kaa koi matlab bhi nahi tha
mai tent ko lagate lagate kuch soch raha thaa
Shiva - kaya baat hai bhai kuch pareshan sai lag rahe ho
Mai has ke - nahi aisa kuch nahi aur sabki sab thik hai aur chhoti kaha hai
Sandy - woh toh bhai thak ke soo gayi kirti ke saath khel khel ke
Mai utha - ach thik hai thoda aram karo aur thoda alert reaha
Sandy - ji bhai
Thodi der baad mai devika ke pass gaya
Mai - ae ladake chal mere saath jara
Diya - please enhe kuch mat kariye
Komal - shaant raho unhe marna hota toh abhi tak tum log bache nahi hote
Woh utha aur mere saath bahar chala thodi dur jaane ke baad
Mai - jis nai tujhe bheja hai woh tujhe barbaad kar dega
Yash - aisa kaya hai uss mai
Mai - kyuki uska kaam hai logo ko aisa bana dena
Yash - mai samjha nahi kaya keh rahe ho
Mai - woh tumhe aisa bana dega joh tum karoge tumhe wahi sahi lagega
Yash - oh sakata par aapnai hum dono ko kyu chhoda
Mai - kyuki tum abhi wahi ho jaha mai tha
Yash - matlab tum kaise logo ko marne soory aap kaise marane lage logo ko
Mai - maine bahut logo ko mara hai kudh ke liye logo ke liye ache ke liye bure ke liye
Yash - abhi aapnai kaha mere jaise uss sai matlab
Mai - matlab ki mai bhi kabhi aise logo ko marata tha bus farak etna hai tumhare pass abhi diya hai mere pass koi nahi tha toh bhaut wkhat laga
Yash - kis chiz mai wkhat laga
Mai - yeh janane mai kis asal mai zindagi hai kaya
Yash - sir aap kuch saaf saaf nahi bata rahe hai
Mai - matalb abb kaya sab bata du maine apni biwiyo ko nahi bataya
Yash - sir aap kaya cahate hai aap jaise halat kisi aur ki ho ek minute woh sab aapki biwiya thi kaya
Mai - haa aur mai nahi caahunga ki koi bhi waise bane
Yash - toh sir bata dijiye naa aage bhi kuch
Mai - acha chal beth
Hum dono wha beth gaye maine apna haath aage kiya aur waha ek memory plate aa gayi
Darsal mai dev ek time pe jisko aaj mai marana caah rha aur jis mahashaitaan yaani manohar jis sai tumhe bheja usska student tha
Par mere liye toh uss time naa kuch galat thaa na kuch sahi
Flash back
Yeh mere pehale janam kaa hisa hai jis sai koi jaan paayega ki mai aur mahashaitaan yaa manohar kon the kyu the kis liye the
Mai naa kisi ke pet sai janama naa hi kisi nai mujhe banya tha mai ek shakti vishfhot sai nikala tha uss time pe kuch log mujhe jinka maine acha kiys woh mujhe shaktiyo kaa devata bolate aur jinka maine bura kiya tha woh mujhe shaktiyo kaa shaitaan bolate the
Baat hai hai ek din ki mujhe kuch logo nai mujhe gher liya marne ke liye aur kuch ko bachane mai maine do logo ko maar diya aur jab uske gaav waalo ko pata chala toh mere chhote sai bane ghar mai unn logo nai aag laga diya
Mai akela thaa toh kon hi bachane aayega mujh uss din pehali baar mujhe dar laga waha sabke pass dost the unke pariwar the par mere pass kuch nahi tha
Halaki aisa nahi ki mere dost nahi bane bane par bus faiyada lene le liye sab jab tak mere pass rehate the jab mere pass kuch thaa yaa kisi sai ladane ki jarurat hoti thi
Toh mai bahaga uss gaav sai bahar ki taraf aur bagate hue unn logo nai bahut kuch phek ke mara jis sai meri halat bahut kahrab ho chuki thi
Jaise hi mai gaav sai bahr nikala wha ek adami aa gaya mere samane uss din maine asali dar dekha joh gaav waale mujhe marane ko taiyaar the woh usske aate hi aise jhuk ke beth gaye jaise woh unka sab kuch hoo
Ye to saala contract killer tha matlab pahle janam mein. Ye ek aur nayi basad, jab itne logo ko mara hai to iske peechwaade mein bhi koi naa koi chatri daal ke khol hi dega. Sahi jaa re laa hai tu Dev the lover tu.UPDATE 163
Uss adami ki awwaz aise aayi ki agar koi sune chhota bacha toh uska mut nikal jaaye maine apna pakada kahi mera toh naa nikala mai bhi utana bada nahi hu
woh ek khatarnak adami jaisa lag raha tha
toh
kaya be kutto kaahe chila rahe ho aur uth ladake kaya kiya hai esnai
ek bola maalik mere bete ko maar diya aur eske bhi
gand ke andhe yeh etna saa hokar tere ghode jaise beto ko maar dega pata hai kiske samane kadha hai tuh
maafi maafi maalik par esnai kiya
mai upper ki tarah dekh ke uska muh ekdum kala kala nazar aa raha tha andhere mai
Unn logo nai mujhe gher liya tha aur jaan sai marne wale the ess liye maine unhe kudh ko marne sai pehale maar diya
maalik yeh jhutt keh raha hunare bache aise nahi hai
sab esko maalik keh rahe sayad maalik eska naam hai
Maalik - teri maa ke naam kaa mantra padhu saale har kisi ko uska beta sidha aur beti dood ki dhuli lagti hai aur unn do chutiyo ko mardangi dikhane kaa mauka mila toh esske samane humare pass bhej deta
maalik ab aap hi naaye kare
Maalik aage gaye aur ussko haath sai utha liyaa - teri beti chodu saale edhar aa ladake
Mai usske paas gaya - ji
Maalik - kaya karna cahata hai eske saath
Mai - esnai mera banaya hua ghar jala diya essko toh mai akela hota toh jala deta
Usnai haath aage kiya aur uske haath mai aag aa gayi
Maalik - le jala
usnai etnai tezz bola aur samane koi haa naa bhi nahi keh raha tha maine haath mai woh aag ki masaal pakadi aur usnai uss adami ko uske upper rakh diya woh jal ke rakh ho gaya
Yeh aisa shaitani kaam maine aag tak naa dekha na kabhi socha rha yeh aakhir hai kon
woh chillaya aur waha sai sab bhaag gaye
Woh - kaya caahiye tere ko joh yaha bhaag ke aaya
Mai - kuch nahi .....
woh mujhe ghurane laga - tera koi hai nahi kaya be
Mai - nahi tuh kon hai
Woh mujhe pakad ke utha liya - chaar fati ke ande apne baap sai aise baat karata hai
Mai - meri toh naa hi nahi baap kaha sai aayega
Woh - acha tabhi saale etnai akad hai kabhi lagata londiya ko niche liya nahi joh etnai akad hai
Mai - haa mera toh hai par tere toh etnai age mai bhi etnai akad lagata tujhe bhi abhi tak nahi mili
usnai mujhe ped pe phek ke mara
Mai - phek aise raha jaise londiya bhi nagi naa dekhi tune be
Woh - chup kar machar ki jaat
Mai - sala chodu mere haath ek adami jala diya
Woh - tuh bola toh jhadu ki jalana hai tujhe pehale bada ji ji kar raha tha
Mai - haa pehale laga tuh koi raja waza hai par toh meri hi tarah chodu killer hai
Woh - tuh abb tak kitnai maara be
Mai soch ke - abhi tak 223 yeh adami laga hata ke esko tune jalaya
Woh - hat mai nahi manata
Mai - mat maan maa chuda
usnai pet pe laat mari aur mere muh sai khoon aya
maine haath pe liya khoon ko aur chaat gaya
Woh dekha phir mujhe azeeb sai
Woh - tuh lagata paidaishi harami hai
Mai - par tere jaisa harmi banana hai taki sabki gaand fate jaise abhi en logo sai fati
Woh - dusari ki gaand fatane sai pehale apni gaand mai guda hona caahiye
Mai - acha chhoda jane de phir
Mai etna bol paya ki woh aise roop mai aaya ki mai abb apna pakad bhi nahi sakata mut nikal hi gaya sach mai
Woh - mahashaitan hu mahashaitan shaitaan bhi mere aage jhuk ke jata hai
mere pair kaap rahe the usko aisa dekh ke
woh normal hua par abb normal bhi dekh usko mere taange kaap rahi thi
Mahashaitan - kaya lauda fas gaya muh mai bol be
Mai - ji ji kuch nahi
Mahashitan jor sai hasa - chal waise ess roop tak aane pe nahi sab pehale hi dar jaate hai tuh pehale joh uss roop tak gaya meri takkar waalo mai
Mai - ji ji
Mahashitan - chal ab tuh mere kaam aayeg aur mai tere
Mai uske piche piche jaane laga thodi der baad jab woh aage agaya uske mehal mai toh waha gate mai nagi ladkiya kadhi yeh sab daasi thi yaa raniya etnai sundar
Mahashitan - yaha akar tuh samajh gaya hoga mai ghusane naa jata kahi ghuswane waali kudh akar beth jaati hai
Mai - ji ji
Mahashitan - chodu abb darna band kar tujhe ess kiye laya kyuki tere andar dum hai
Mai - yeh sab mere ko bhi dega tuh ki nahi
Mahashitan - ha ha ha ha pehale aisa ban jaa ki enki mai jab daale toh baar baar tujhe maange jaise abhi mujhe managti hai
Mai - yaha koi adami nahi hai kaya
Mahashitan - chhup be unki kaya gaand sai gaand hilayega
Mai - nahi nahi
Mahashitan - woh dekh samane jisko tune aaj mara yeh uski beti hai
Mai - mai jaau kaya
Mahashitan - chhup abhi etna ho jaa ki pareshani naa ho
Mai - matlab
Mahashitan - tuh apni kahani banana chata hai toh jab kahi kahani batayega yaa likhega waha tera baalik hona jaruri hai na..
Mai - acha samajh gaya tab tak mai kaya karu ess mehal mai
Mahashitan - aee ramu ki edhar aa
Anu - ji maalik
Mai - esko woh roopnagar wala kaam de de aur eski thakaan mitnae ko kar kuch
woh mujhe ek kamre mai lekar gayi aur waha mujhe kuch taswire dikhayi
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Anu - enn chaar logo ko marna ही हीai
Ek ghante mai deta hu warna Lib am toh bol hi chuke chtari kholane ke liyeEagerly waiting for next update