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Incest DEV THE HIDDEN POWER

Dev the lover

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Tabhi, peeche se woh aaya jo maine toh kabhi socha bhi nahi tha.

Arav – "Bas! Band karo!"
Goliyaan turant band ho gayi. Woh mere paas aa gaya aur apni gun meri taraf taan di.

Arav – "Kyu be, meri life kharab karke yaha nayi zindagi shuru kar raha hai?"

Main Masoom ko apne paas chipka kar neeche pada tha.

Main – "Yeh tune kyun kiya, mujhe nahi pata. Par meri lene waala hai tu isske baad."

Arav – "Waise hi jaise meri biwi ki li thi!"

Main – "Haraamkhor! Kuch bhi mat bol samjha? Agar teri waali ko bachaya na hota, toh aaj tu apna ilaaj kar raha hota!"

Arav ne mujhe laat marne ke liye pair uthaya, par maine ek haath se uska pair pakad ke use door fek diya. Par woh palak jhapakte hi phir mere paas aa gaya.

Tab mujhe samajh aa gaya ki issmein mere blood ka effect aa gaya hai.

Arav – "Haramkhor, bata tune aisa kyun kiya?"

Ab main khada ho gaya.

Main (Masoom se) – "Baby, tum mandir mein raho main aata hoon."

Maine Masoom ko mandir teleport kar diya aur phir Arav ki taraf mud kar kaha:

Main – "Haan be, kya bol raha hai? Saale, jiske saath main aaj hoon, woh meri zindagi hai. Agar ek kharoch bhi aayi na, toh tujhe jaan se maar dunga!"

Arav – "Maar toh tu kab ka chuka hai. Aakhir tujhe meri hi Sheetal mili thi yeh karne ke liye? Kya kami thi meri behen mein?"

Maine ek thappad jadd diya.

Main – "Itna bhi ganda nahi hoon main!"

Arav – "Shaadi ke din hi laga tha ki tum dono ke beech kuch hai, par tum dono ne toh baccha bhi paida kar liya!"

Main dheere se bola: "Abbe, tujhe koi galat family mili hai."

Arav – "Saale! Maine DNA test karwaya hai. Bacche ka DNA mujhse match nahi hua, par jab maine tera test karwaya, toh match ho gaya!"

Main shock mein: "Accha! Toh aage kya?"

Arav – "Uss kutiya ko baad mein marunga, par pehle iss bacche aur tujhe maarunga!"

Usne ishara kiya aur do aadmi ek baccha le kar aaye.

Main – "Tu sach mein pagal ho gaya hai. Tujhe ab main kya, Bhagwan bhi nahi samjha sakte."

Arav – "Abbe, ek baar bhool jaata agar uska kissi aur se hota. Kyunki saali aurat jaat hi aaj kal aisi hai, aaj iske saath, kal uske saath."

Main – "Bhaag bosidike! Aurat jaat kahan se aa gayi iss mein? Us bechari ne toh tere pyaar ke liye CIA tak chhod di! Aur tu uske baare mein yeh sab keh raha hai? Tujhe sharam nahi aayi?"

Arav – "Kya bakwas hai! Kya main tujhe chutiya dikhta hoon kya?"

Main – "Toh kya karna hai tujhe?"

Arav – "Tera baja bajane aaya hoon!"

Main – "Accha hai, meri shaadi mein bajane waala bhi aa gaya."

Main – "Toh ab kya? In pannatro ko laya hai mujhe maarne?"

Arav – "Haan, pata hai ki inke bas ka kuch nahi tere saamne, par main tujhe zarur maar sakta hoon!"

Main – "Ohh my god! Haaahaa! Yeh mujhe maarega? Meri powers se bane mujh..."

Tabhi usne ek "Tok Tok" move maara, jo electrical tha. Main thoda peeche ho gaya.

Main – "Are baap re! Bacche, tune itna hi seekha hai?"

Tabhi ek aadmi ne mujh par gun taani. Maine haath upar kiya aur gayab ho gaya.

Main nikal kar uss gun waale ke peeche aa gaya aur rakh se uske gale par maara. Uski gardan turant toot gayi. Uske saath waale ne fire karne ki koshish ki, par maine magazine plug nikal kar uske maathe mein ghusa diya


Woh baccha Arav ke haath mein tha, par woh uske haath se chhut gaya. Maine turant usse pakad liya.

Arav – "Aa gaya na apni aukaat par? Aaj tum dono, baap-bete ko zinda gaad dunga!"

Usne apna haath ghumana shuru kar diya. Main samajh gaya ki woh kya karne ja raha hai.

Main – "Nahi, Arav! Yeh raginimanak hai, ise yaha mat la. Bahut nukasaan ho jaayega. Main toh bacha loonga, par tera yeh beta zarur mar jaayega!"

Arav – "Mera nahi, tera aur uss kamini ka hai! Tu hi rakh!"

Main – "Dekh, yaar. Main tujhe chot pahuchana nahi chahta."

Arav woh attack chhodne hi wala tha ki tabhi peeche se ek sena aati dikhayi di.

Woh mere peeche khadi ho gayi.

Main (shock mein) – "Arre! Yeh toh bhediyon ki sena hai. Tum sab yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

Manas – "Apni rani sahiba ka haq lene aaye hain!"

Main – "Kya matlab 'haq'?"

Manas (gusse se) – "Yeh baccha, yeh baccha kiska hai?"

Main (Arav ki taraf ishara karte hue) – "Ess ka hai!"

Arav – "Nahi! Yeh iska nahi, iska hai!"

Manas – "Yeh kya behuda si baatein kar rahe ho? Baccha ek hi ka ho sakta hai!"

Main – "Abey! Main kya bache ka delivery boy hoon? Joh yeh mujhe de raha hai! Yeh le, apna baccha!"

Maine woh baccha Arav ki god mein de diya.

Aur mere muh se nikala - mera lund jiye aise jindagi jhand bhar ki dosti kaam puri zindagi

Arav – "Abey, kaha na! Yeh mera nahi hai! Report dekhi hai maine!"

Main – "Woh report galat hai."

Arav – "Tujhe kaise pata, haan?"

Main – "Abbe chutiye! Maine apni jagah tera blood sample RAW mein jama karaya tha!"

Arav ki aankhein fatt gayi,gand bhi fatti ho toh kisko pata chelega usko lag raha jaise uska dimag ekdum short-circuit ho gaya ho.

Main (mischievously) – "Yeh kya gaa... ohh sorry! Aise kya aankhein faad ke dekh raha hai?"

Arav (shaking his head) – "Maine itna bada chutiyapa kaise kar diya? Main shak ke chakkar mein kaha fas gaya... kya galti kar di maine yeh?"

(Arav ka gussa dheere dheere guilt mein badalne laga.)


Main – "Saale! Agar Masoom hai mera pyaar, aur tune ek baar bhi usse kuch kaha yaar, toh main bhool jaunga ki teri behen bhi thi mera pyaar!"

Manas (ek aadmi se) – "Yeh sala chakkar kya hai? Ek se shaadi ho rahi, doosri ka baccha tha jo ab nahi hai, aur upar se iski behen iska pyaar!"

Woh aadmi daant se maas ka piece kheechnte hue bola – "Aah! Ab nikala! Yeh subah se atka hua tha... waise, kya bola?"

Manas – "Tu bhaag dimag ki bhhaaji, pav mat kar!"

Aadmi – "Soch raha hoon chicken bhaji pav bana loon, kya?"

Main (gusse mein) – "Aeee! Shiiiiiiii! Ekdum chup!"

Arav apne bete ki taraf dekhte hue – "Maaf karna, mere bacche... main yeh kya karne ja raha tha."

Woh apne bete ke sar ko sahlaane laga, jaise guilt se bhar gaya ho.

Main – "Ab tera ho gaya hai, toh main jaun? Woh bechari mera intezaar kar rahi hai!"

(Main apni jagah se uth gaya, aur bhediyon ki sena aur Arav ko peeche chhodte hue, apne pyaar Masoom ke paas jaane ke liye tayyar ho gaya.)

Tabhi woh bhediyon ki sena "Ooooooohhhhooooowwoooowoowhhhhhhh" karne lagi, jaise pura jungle goonj utha ho.

Main (chillakar) – "Chup ho jao kutto! Oh sorry, tum toh bhediye ho, haan... chup ho jao bhediyon ke baccho! Kyun hala macha rahe ho?"

Manas – "Hum yeh shaadi nahi hone denge! Humari rani ka hak cheena ja raha hai!"

Main – "Abe pagal ho kya? Kisi ka hak nahi cheena ja raha! Aur tumhe kisne yeh sab bataya?"

Manas – "Maharani ro rahi thi aur aapko yaad kar rahi thi. Unhone toh woh vimpres ko bhi samjha-bujha kar shaant kar diya. Aapka kiya hua wada unhone pura kiya... yeh hoti hai ek bhediye ki pehchaan!"

Main – "Aree, mai samjha dunga! Bas thoda sa naraz ho gaya tha."

Manas – "Nahi! Hum sabne yaha aane se pehle yeh pratigya li thi ki pehle humari maharani ke phere honge aur shaadi bhi, warna hum bagawat karenge!"

Main (sar pakad kar) – "Iski maa ka! Yeh kya naya drama hai?"

Tabhi Arav dheere se mere paas aakar bola – "Yeh kya ho raha hai, be?!"

Main – "Tu chup! Peeche khada ho ja!"

Arav sunte hi chup-chaap apne aadmiyon ke paas chala gaya.

Manas – "Agar aap nahi maane, toh aapse ladte hue hum apni jaan de denge! Par apne waade se peeche nahi hatenge. Aur aapse jitna humare bas mein hai, utna kisi aur ke bas mein nahi!"

Main kuch sochne ke liye baitha, toh sena mere paas aane lagi.

Main (jhunjhla kar) – "Ab kya? Gaand mein ghusoge kya? Tab se rok raha hoon, gaali! Peeche hato!"

Woh peeche hue, par itne jada congested the ki apas mein lad-lad kar girne lage.

Main – "Loo, ho gayi bagawat!"

Main khada hua aur apne haath hawa mein kiye, aur badbadaya – "bhagwan bhala kare mera!"

Maine apne haath 4-5 baar ghumaye, aur kuch hi der mein waha Neha, Janu, Riccha, Shikha aur Devika aa gayi.

Neha zahir si baat hai, ro rahi thi.
Riccha ke haath mein aloo aur chaku tha, shayad sabji kaat rahi thi.

Devika paani ki tanki liye khadi thi – wahi jo phoolon ko paani dete hain (naam bhool gaya, ab itna sab yaad kahan se rakhu?).

Aur Shikha ji ajeeb sadme mein gum thi, jaise kisi alien ke intezaar mein ho.

Woh sab ladkiyan mujhe dekh rahi thi.

Riccha – "Aap yaha?"

Neha – "Aa gayi meri yaad?"

Devika – "Aare, aaj kaise yaad kiya iss waqt?"

Janu – "Jaan, tum yaha?!"

Main: "Aur koi bacha ho toh piche se woh bhi bol lo bhai."

Sab ek saath: "Nahi!"

Main: "Shhh! Ekdum chup! Mai kahi nahi, tum sab yaha filhaal chup hi rahna. Tum sab bilkul chup, aur yeh Maharani ji toh jaise kya lenge, muh kholani ka?" [kripya karna, naa kahe]

Shikha didi: "Chhodo, ab yeh formality hai. Kaaha the, Shikha?"

Main: "Chalo, lo tumhari saari Maharaniyaan aa gayi. Ab baaki sab mandir mai milenge."

Sab pehle to ghoomne lagi, par baad mein Neha ko kuch dekh kar woh sab hala karne lage. Sun kar mujhe woh gaana yaad aa gaya jo maine chai ki dukaan par school ke time suna tha. Kuch aisa tha: hum leele, hum ba lelo... fuck off.

Maine dekha, piche se ek paaki sab apne upar se aage ki aur laa rahe the, aur hum sab ke saamne rak diya.

Udar, Arav aur uske aadmi:

"Boss, yeh kya hai? Aaj heart attack aa jayega hum sab ko!"

Arav has kar: "Tumko kya aayega heart attack? Mujhe jo lag raha hai agar isne woh kiya, toh yaha sab ke sab heart attack ke shikaar honge."

Aadmi: "Par yeh hai kya, ladkiyon ka jhamela? Aap aaye the kuch karne, aur yaha has rahe ho."


Arav: "Mera 'ellalj' abhi baaki hai. Mere dost, jis din akela mil gaya, isse meri vaat laga dega!"

Main un sab ko lekar baith gaya uss palaki mein (size bada hai) aur hum chal pade mandir par.


Mandir ke andar:

Saloni: "Yeh kaun si baraat aa rahi hai?"

Masoom: "Yeh kya afat hai? Abhi... aaj hi hona hai, kya sab?"

Sona: "Aree chinata kyun kar rahi ho? Sab accha hoga aur sahi hai na? Itne logo ke saath shaadi hogi!"

Saloni: "Ek minute! Dev ke saath kaun kaun hai?"

Sona (thoda zor daal kar): "Aarr yeh toh Janu aur Devika ji hai, aur saath mein Neha... uhh... Shikha didi... uhh... Riccha didi bhi hai."

Masoom: "Sabko didi mat bola karo, lagta hai sab ki sab sautaan hai apni."
 

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Thank you bhai pehle aapka yaha aane ke liye aur rahi story ki baat toh yaha yeh kahunga jaise old games ke remastered version aate hai same waise yaha bhi cheez wahi hai bus thodi presentation explanation me change aaya hai yehi kehanuga aur kuch event bhi change honge joh maine story me swad laane ke liye hi kiya hak kyuki maine dekha waha bhaut si cheeze mene secene bhaut baar repeat kiye the aage aasha ki aap mere saath jude rahenge 🫂
Ok bhai to story last update se kb continue hogi
 

Dev the lover

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Ok bhai to story last update se kb continue hogi
bus abb samjh lo start ho chuki hai bikul sahi samaye par pucha hai abb yaha se story kaafi changed hi lage kyuki mene phele thoda irritation me cheeze chhod di aur forum ke hisab se sex oriented jada kar di joh me abb tim rehate sahi kar raha hu ho sake abb se continued rahe
 

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Nice update dev bhai.....

Ab lagegi Watt
 
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bus abb samjh lo start ho chuki hai bikul sahi samaye par pucha hai abb yaha se story kaafi changed hi lage kyuki mene phele thoda irritation me cheeze chhod di aur forum ke hisab se sex oriented jada kar di joh me abb tim rehate sahi kar raha hu ho sake abb se continued rahe
Bhai connected rehne ke chakker mai 2 din mai puri story dobara padi hai thoda suspense badao or thoda acrion sex kam rakho to shi hai baki aapki marzi
 
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Dev the lover post stuck kardiya hoon. :check:


Btw aap khudse bhi post stuck aur unstuck kar sakte ho.. Bas karna ye hai ki Apne kisi bhi post ko edit karo jise bhi sticky karna hai yaa sticky se hatana hai (sirf tumhari thread mein) then □ Sticky Post ka option dikhega uspe click (right tick) karke post save kardo sticky ho jaayega..

Aur sticky se remove karna hai toh sticky waale post ko edit karke right tick hatao phir save kardo. Bas hogaya.
 

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UPDATE 218

Scene 1: Kitchen ki Khidki
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Main upar aaya aur khadhi ke patte Riccha ko de diye.

Main: "Yeh lo tumhare khadhi ke patte, bina kisi jadu waale."

Riccha: "Kahan the itni der tak?"

Main: "Arre baba, gussa kyu kar rahi ho? Thoda kaam tha aur ek dost mil gaya tha."

Riccha (taane maarte hue): "Accha toh wahi so kyun nahi gaye?"

Main (hans kar): "Paagal ho gayi ho kya? Itna nahi sota main. Waise badi achi khushboo aa rahi hai, kya banaya hai?"

Riccha (haath pe maarte hue): "Jaaiye, pehle naha kar aaiye. Mitti lagi hai haathon aur pairon par."

Tabhi Masoom, jo kitchen mein thi, sugar jar ke liye Riccha se maang rahi thi. Riccha ne jar usse de diya, lekin Masoom ne mujhe dekha. Maine usse muskurake dekha, par usne gusse mein muh bana kar jar le liya aur chali gayi.

Main irritate hoke andar ghus gaya aur Riccha ke paas se ho kar seedha apne room mein chala gaya. Maine socha, "Thank God, yahaan koi nahi hai."

Main room mein gaya, jakar shower liya aur aaram se bed par mobile chalane laga.

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Scene 2: C Chacha ka Mazaaki Andaz


Tabhi niche se awaz aayi.

C Chacha: "Arre aap bhi puchhte kya hain! Hamare gaav ki haweli itni badi hai ki pura gaav usmein aaram se aa jaaye."

Main: "Agar na bhi hue toh main intazaam kar dunga."

Tabhi Riccha kitchen se jhaank kar mujhe ishara karti hai andar aane ka. Kuch time baad Kriti mujhe khana khilane ke liye bulane aayi. Main uske saath niche gaya aur sabke saath baith kar khana khaya.

Dad bhi tab tak aa chuke the.

Dad: "Toh beta, kya socha hai aage ka?"

Main: "Dad, apni job start karunga aur kya?"

Dad: "Kaunsi job?"

Main: "Arre dad, DGP ki post, aur kya?"

Dad: "Arre, bahut accha hai bhai, bahut accha!"

Maine mann mein socha, "Accha hua RAW wali baat nahi boli, warna yeh bhi bhaashan dete."

Dad: "Accha, main sabko le kar ghar jaa raha hoon. Pita ji gussa ho rahe hain ki Diwali mein kuch din bache hain aur hum yaha hain."

Main: "Accha dad, le jao. Main kal aa jaunga. Thoda kaam hai."

Dad: "Riccha beta, apna bhai aur mom-dad ko bula lo."

Riccha: "Ji, jaisa aap kahe."

Dad: "Koi pareshani toh nahi hai na?"

Riccha: "Nahi, aisa kuch nahi hai. Main baat kar lungi."


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Scene 3: Badi Bahas
Maa aur dad khana khane ke baad baith gaye.

Maa: "Accha, toh samaan kya-kya mangaya hai?"

Dad: "Arre, tum kaise baatein kar rahi ho jaise pehli baar kar rahi ho?"

Maa: "Haan, par is baar bahuyein hain, woh bhi itni saari."

Main hasi nahi rok paya aur has pada. Sab mujhe aise dekhne lage jaise maine koi paap kar diya ho.

Tabhi baat Amit ki taraf chali gayi.

Dad: "Accha ek baat bata, Amit mila tujhe kabhi tab se?"

Main: "Nahi, mujhse kyun milne laga woh?"

B Chachi: "Usne jo kiya hai, uski saza usse milni chahiye thi. Par aap logon ne bhaga diya. Yeh kya koi saza hai?"

B Chacha: "Arre, toh kya karu, puri duniya mein dhindora pitu ki mera beta ek vahshi darinda hai?"

B Chachi: "Kam se kam itna toh mat kosiye usse."

B Chacha: "Tu apna muh band rakho."

B Chachi: "Arre Dev ne bhi toh kiya hai, toh usse kisi ne kuch nahi kaha. Par sab mere bacche ke peeche pad gaye hain."

Dad: "Mere bete ne koi zabardasti nahi ki hai kisi se."

B Chachi: "Maaf kijiye bhai sahab, ek taraf toh aapka beta itni ladkiyon se shaadi kar raha hai, aur upar se uski Saloni ke saath avedh—"

B Chacha: "Bas! Ab agar ek shabd aur bola na, toh accha nahi hoga!"

Main itna gussa tha ki chachi ko ek thappad de doon, par sanskaar bhi kuch hote hain. Sabke samne yeh baat aayi, toh mera gussa aur badh gaya.

B Chachi uth kar andar chali gayi, aur unke peeche C Chacha aur Chachi bhi chale gaye. Dad bhi bahar chale gaye.

Maa: "Sab meri wajah se hua hai na? Main tum dono ki woh baat karti na, yeh hota. Yeh bhi na jaane kahaan se uski baat lekar aa gaye."

Main: "Chhodo maa, kyun bekar mein tension leti ho?"

Maa: "Beta, sach mein tera aur Saloni ka kuch hai toh bata de."

Masoom mujhe ghur kar dekh rahi thi, aur Sona aur Riccha ka bhi wahi haal tha.

Mujhe laga, 'Kaise musibat mein phas gaya hoon, iska kya upaay hai?'

Masoom: "Maa ji, kuch puch rahi hain."

Main: "Haan, nahi."

Maa: "Beta, sach kyun nahi bata raha hai?"

Main: "Maa, mujhe aapse kuch akele mein baat karni hai."

Masoom: "Humare samne hi kyon nahi bol sakte?"

Maa: "Chal, tum sab yahin raho. Koi nahi aayega idhar."

Sab: "Ji."

Maa aur main kitchen mein aa gaye.

Maa: "Haan, bolo kya bolna hai?"

Main: "Maa, aap chahein toh baad mein maar lena, par filhaal sun lo."

Maa: "Bol jaldi, mera dil ghabra raha hai."

Main: "Maa, darasal baat yeh hai ki hum dono hi ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hain."

Maa ne haath uthaya, par maine rok liya.

Main: "Jaanta hoon maa, yeh galat hai. Par iske bina aapka na beta zinda reh sakta hai, na aapki beti. Maa, main khud nahi jaanta ki yeh sab kyun hai, par mujhe itna pata hai ki woh mere bina nahi reh sakti."

Maa ki aankhon mein aansu the.

Maa: "Beta, kya tum apni maa ke liye yeh sab nahi chhod sakte? Maine kitne sapne sajaye the ki main apni bahu ko dher saara pyaar dungi, par tumne use kai hisso mein baat diya. Aur ab toh apni... nahi, nahi, aisa mat kar."

Main: "Maa, aapko kaise samjhun? Ab ruk jaiye."

Maine unka haath pakda aur apne rajye pahuch gaya.

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Unka muh khula ka khula reh gaya, jaise kuch samajh nahi paayi ho. Maa ke muh se kuch sab nikla.


Maa: "Woh sahi bole the."

Main: "Kya Maa, kaun sahi bola tha?"

Maa: "Yeh ki tum bahut bada aur shaktishaali raja banoge, tere aage koi bhi tik nahi paayega. Bhagwan ki kripa tum par hamesha rahegi."

Main (mann mein): "Aaj mere jeevan ke saare sach khulne ka din aaya hai kya?"

Main: "Kon Maa?"

Maa: "Beta, jab maine sab kuch manaya aur haar gayi, toh tab sab kuch itna sahi nahi tha. Sabko bas beta chahiye tha. Saloni ke hone ke baad teri daadi bhi mujhe bahut bura bhala kehati thi, toh main tere dad ke saath ek pandit ji ke paas gayi, jo ek bade shiv mandir ke pujari the. Unhone kaha ki agla baccha ladka hi hoga, lekin woh hamesha is duniya ke ritu-riwaj se alag hoga. Woh tumhare liye bahut dukhdayak hoga, par woh ek raja ki zindagi jeeyega. Uski zindagi mein kaafi musibatein aayengi, lekin woh jeetega. Bas ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna, ki uska saath tumhare liye sabse zaroori hai, nahi toh woh khunkhaar ban jaayega."

Yeh bol kar woh chup ho gayi.

Main: "Maa, kya hua?"

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Maa: "Beta, jab main ghar aayi toh teri daadi ne mujhe bahut kuch suna diya. Main mandir gayi aur wahan ro kar so gayi. Par uss din mujhe ek sapna aaya, jisme kai saari ladkiyan dikhayi di, jo ajeeb se kapdon mein thi. Unhone mere goad mein ek baccha diya aur kaha, 'Yeh hum sabke balidaan ki ek matra ansh hai, jo hum aapko de rahe hain. Hum aayenge lene, humein door mat kijiyega.' Aur woh chali gayi. Agle din jab main uthi toh ghar mein tere anne ki khushkhabari fail gayi, par..."

Main: "Par kya Maa?"

Maa: "Jisne tujhe mujhe soupa tha, woh bilkul Saloni jaise dikhati thi."

Main (soch kar): "Tabhi aap keval Pari aur Neha ko mere paas aane dete the, Didi ko apne room ya alag room mein rakhti thi. Yeh tak ki maine aaj tak unka room sahi se nahi dekha."

Maa: "Aaj wahi ho raha hai, jiska dar tha. Tum iss duniya ke kayade-kanun se alag chal rahe ho. Ab kahin tum nahi beta, nahi! Main teri har baat manane ko tayar hu joh mere parivar ko kushi rakh sakati hai ."
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[Dev aur Maa ke beech ek gehri baat]


Main: "Maa, main toh bilkul haka-baka reh gaya hoon. Aap yeh kya keh rahi hain? Akhir koi aur baat hai kya?"

Maa: "Beta, ab kuch mat puchh… sab kuch thik nahi hai."

Main (tez aur desperate): "Maa, ab aur mat chhupaiye mujhse. Sach bataiye."

Maa: "Baat yeh hai ki…"
Ek lambi chhup ke baad:
"Jab tu khunkhaar banega… tab tu sabko maar dega, beta. Sabko. Koi nahi bachega."

Main (shock aur disbelief mein): "Nahi, maa! Aap mujhpe vishwas kariye, main kabhi aisa nahi karunga. Main aapke saath hoon."

Maa: "Tabhi toh tere dad bhi tujhe RAW ke kaam mein shamil nahi karna chahte. Woh jaante hain ki yeh tujhe tabah kar dega."

Main (emotionally hurt): "Toh phir itne din kyun chup rahi maa? Mujhe kyun nahi bataya yeh sab?"

Maa: "Bas… dar lagta tha. Tujhe khona nahi chahti thi."

Main (samajhne ki koshish mein): "Tabhi main sochta hoon, meri shaktiyon ka pata chalte hi bhi aap log itne normal kaise the… jaise aapko sab pehle se pata ho."

Maa: "Jab tere saath woh haadsa hua tha, tab mujhe laga tha ki shayad sab jhooth kaha gaya hai. Par baad mein… sab sach nikla."
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[Emotional Tension - Saloni aur Mere Rishte ki Baat]

Main (thoda hesitant): "Maa… kya aapko mere aur Saloni ke rishte se koi problem hai?"

Maa: "Abhi tune hi kaha tha na… 'Woh hai toh tu hai, aur tu hai toh woh hai'? Toh mujhe kaise problem ho sakti hai? Yahan toh log apne balatkaari bete ko bhi bacha lete hain… aur main apne heere jaise bachchon ko dukh doon, yeh mujhse nahi hoga."

Main (andar hi andar kuch sochta hua):
"Neha ka sab bata doon…? Par abhi sahi waqt nahi hai. Jitna mila hai, usme khush rehna sikh raha hoon."

Maa: "Par Akhil ka kya karein?"

Main (thoda gusse mein): "Maine usse chhod diya hai, maa. Woh rishta tod diya maine."

Maa: "Waise tum dono (main aur Saloni) sach mein itna pyaar karte ho ki duniya walon ki koi parwah hi nahi hai tumhe."

Main (ek halki muskaan ke saath): "Maa, main toh sabse aise hi pyaar karta hoon, jaise mujhe kisi ki parwah hi na ho… aap aur papa ko chhodkar."

Maa (thoda hansi mein): "Mere shararati aur natkhat beta, bas ek baat samajh le. RAW ke kaam mein phir mat jaana. Woh tujhe khunkhaar banake teri zindagi ko chhod degi."

Main (andar hi andar sochta hua):
"Maa sahi keh rahi hai. Jab main kisi ko maarta hoon, toh ek ajeeb sa junoon chha jaata hai. Kahi naak kaat dena, aankhein phod dena, sab kuch barbaad karna… sab kuch alag lagta hai."

Main: "Maa, filhaal aap gusse mein rahiye mujhse aur Saloni didi se."

Maa (mere kaan pakad ke): "Abhi bhi 'didi didi' laga rakha hai?"

Main (muskarate hue): "Sorry maa, adat hai."

Maa (mere kaan chhodte hue): "Adat sudhar. Aur ghar mein koi awaragardi nahi."

Main: "Theek hai, maa. Chale ab?"

Maa: "Haan chal."

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[Shopping ka Plan – Maa ke Hukum aur Mere Ideas]

Ghar pahuchne ke baad Maa gusse mein boli:
"Sona, Masoom… tum dono iske saath shopping par jao. Aur main Riccha ke saath kuch aur kaam se ja rahi hoon."

Sabne ek saath jawab diya: "Haan, maa."

Masoom: "Maa, kya main Saloni ko le jaaun?"

Maa (Masoom ko ghoorti hui): "Haan, le jao. Kayin dino se ghar mein padi hai."

Masoom upar ki taraf bhaagti hai jaise usse khazana mil gaya ho.

Maa (mujhse): "Beta, woh Rima didi ke liye kapde lena mat bhoolna."

Main: "Ji maa, le aaunga. Ab chalta hoon. Sona, jao tayaar ho jao."

Sona: "Par mere paas yahan kapde nahi hain."

Main: "Jao Neha ke pehno. Tumhe fit ho jayenge. Waise maa, Neha hai kahan?"

Maa (thoda irritate ho kar): "Main toh pareshaan ho gayi hoon iss ladki se. Aur inn dono pagal se."

Main: "Kya hua maa?"

Maa: "Ek toh woh hai jo ghar aati hi nahi. Dost ke saath gum rehti hai. Aur yeh dono (Pari aur Kirti) apne aap mein na jaane kya kya karti rehti hain."

Main (Pari aur Kirti ki taraf): "Kyun Pari, Kirti? Yeh sab kya hai?"

Pari (kuch chhupane ki koshish mein): "Kuch nahi bhai. Bas aise hi. Aap jaaiye."

Main (tez aur serious): "Aakar milunga tum dono se. Tayaar rehna jawab dene ke liye

A Tense Revelation

Shopping mall ke andar har taraf khushi ka maahol tha. Masoom, Pari, Kirti, Neha, Ritu aur Shikha ke liye saman lena aur unhe khush dekhna mere liye ek sukoon bhara pal tha. Lekin kahi na kahi sona ke sad chehre ne mujhe chinta mein daal diya tha. Main jaanta tha ki woh meri wajah se udas thi. Mujhe lagta tha ki meri decisions ne sabki zindagiyon ko thoda hila diya hai. Lekin main bhi insaan hoon, sab kuch theek karna meri kshamata ke bahar lagta hai.


(Masoom interrupts)

Masoom mujhe hilate hue boli, “Kya sochne lage?”

Sona ne haan bhari, “Yahi ki yeh (meri taraf ishara karte hue) humein khush nahi rakh paa rahe hai.”

Masoom hasi aur bola, “Pagal toh nahi ho gayi ho? Hum sab bahut khush hain!”

Main muskara kar unki baatein sun raha tha, aur bola, “Accha chal, tumne woh maa ke diye hue list ka saara saman le liya hai naa?”

Sona thoda khilkhilakar boli, “Haan, saloni ji le rahi hai udhar se.”

Main apni hansi nahi rok paaya, “Aur tumne apne liye sab kuch liya hai na, sab?”

Masoom ne fatafat jawaab diya, “Haan, aur Pari, Kirti, Neha, Ritu aur Shikha ji ke liye bhi le liya.”

Maine unhe takte hue bola, “Wah! Sabke liye bina bole samajh gayi!”

Sona ne aankhein chhoti karte hue bola, “Kyun naa samjhein? Apne pati ke saare gharwalon ka dhyaan rakhna toh hamara hi kaam hai!”

Masoom bhi chhedte hue boli, “Aur agar hum nahi karenge toh kya aap karoge?”

Main unhe rokte hue bola, “Arre yeh ‘aap-aap’ mat bola karo, kitni baar mana kiya hai!”

Sona thoda sharma kar boli, “Filhal toh theek hai, lekin shaadi ke baad humse ‘tum-tum’ mat bolna!”

Main mazaak mein haath jodkar bola, “Accha meri maa, thik hai, jaise mann aaye waise bolo. Ab chalo, late ho raha hai!”

Masoom boli, “Haan chalo, saloni ko le kar aati hoon.”


(A Sudden Turn of Events)

Main neeche parking mein car mein baith gaya aur gaane gungunane laga:
"Tere bina zindagi se koi shikwa toh nahi..."

Tabhi car ke sheeshe par ek aurat ne dastak di. Uska chehra pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha, lekin uske chehre par ek ajeeb si ghabrahat thi. Maine sheesha neeche kiya aur pucha, “Kya baat hai? Kya hua?”

Woh boli, “Main Deepika hoon.”

Main hairaan ho kar bola, “Toh? Kya karun main? Haan?”

Deepika ne kaha, “Main woh doctor hoon jisne tumhari girlfriend ka ilaaj kiya tha.”

Maine soch mein padh kar pucha, “Oh! Haan! Aap yaha kaise?”

Deepika ne apna haath saamne karte hue bola, “Badi mushkil se tumhe dhoonda hai.”

Uske haath ko dekhte hi meri saansein thami ki thami reh gayi. Uske haathon par ajeeb se bal aur nishan the. Woh normal insani haath nahi lag rahe the.

Main ghabra kar bola, “Yeh sab kya hai?”

Deepika ki awaaz mein ghabrahat thi, “Yahi toh main puch rahi hoon! Tum kaun ho? Tumhare khoon mein kya hai? Yeh sab mujhe kyun ho raha hai?”

Main ek pal ke liye chauk gaya, “Ek minute... mera khoon?!”

Maine uska haath zor se pakad kar dekha aur turant chhod diya. Gusse aur ghabrahat mein bola, “Tum pagal ho? Maine kaha tha, main apna khoon nahi de sakta tumhe!”

Deepika chillate hue boli, “Mujhe yeh sab kyun ho raha hai?! Tumne mujhe kuch kiya hai!”

Mujhe pata tha ki kuch toh gadbad hai. Deepika ke haath aur uska badalte behavior ek ajeeb rahasya buni rahe the. Maine car ke andar baithte hi kaha, “Yeh sab theek nahi lag raha. Mujhe sachai tak pahuchna hoga.”

Tension Unfolds

Main ghar laaya tha sabko shopping ke baad, lekin ek ajeeb si chuppi thi. Sona ka chehra ab bhi udaas tha, aur woh chhup-chhup ke soch rahi thi. Main jaanta tha ki yeh sab mere wajah se ho raha hai, aur main kuch kar bhi nahi sakta tha. Mera dil bhar gaya tha, lekin insaan hoon, zindagi itni asaan bhi nahi hoti.

Deepika ke diye card ne mujhe aur bhi confused kar diya. Usne kaha tha ki mujhse baat karni hai. Main ne call kiya, aur uski awaaz thodi ghabrahat mein thi.

(Phone Call Dialogue)

Main: "Haan, hello. Bolo, kya baat hai?"

Deepika (dheere se): "Main kaise thik ho sakti hoon? Meri madad karo."

Main (thoda gussa ho kar): "Kisne kaha tha tumhe mera khoon khud mein inject karne ke liye?"

Deepika (rohte hue): "Agar main nahi karti, toh virus se mar jaati main. Tum nahi samajh rahe ho!"

Main (chhup kar, thoda taunting tone mein): "Hatho, abb toh wolf ban kar khush raho!"

Deepika (gussa ho kar): "Kya? Kya bakra rahe ho tum?"

Main (ek dam serious ho kar): "Madam ji, main ek werewolf hoon, samajhi? Aur bhi bahut kuch hoon. Tumhare andar wolf gene activated ho gaya hai. Mera woh virus sample nasht kar do, warna meri musibat badh jayegi."

Deepika (angry and scared): "Tu kyun mujhse aise baat kar raha hai? Kise kaimne ne mujhe thik kar diya, warna main tujhe maar dungi!"

Main (calmly): "Maine nahi kaha tha, dr. sahaiba."

(Sudden Twist)

Deepika ne phone par rone ki awaaz di, "Meri maa ka kya hoga? Please mujhe baccha lo!"

Main: "Kal raat... iss jungle mein milna samajhi, main kuch karunga. Tab tak tum apni tension ko thoda relax karna, Deepika." (Main phone cut kar deta hoon).

(Back to Room )

Main let kr sab kuch thoda sa shanti se samajhne laga. Lekin maa ka gussa abhi bhi Neha aur Saloni ko lekar chhupa hua tha. Main samajh gaya tha ki yeh sab misunderstandings thi, koi badi galti nahi thi. Neha aur Saloni ki intentions achi thi, bas thodi misunderstanding ho gayi thi.

Sona ka chehra ab bhi udaas tha, aur jab maine uska man jana, toh uske dard ka ehsaas hua. Woh chahti thi ki main sabse pehle usse pyaar karu, lekin yeh kaafi mushkil tha. Zindagi mein kabhi kabhi wo cheezein humare haath se nikal jaati hain jo hum chaahte hain, aur jise hum chaahte hain, woh aksar humse door ho jaata hai.

Riccha ke chehre par khushi thi. Usne apni maa aur dad se baat ki thi, aur usse laga tha ki ab sab kuch thik ho jayega. Uski wajah se ghar mein thodi shanti thi.


(Deep Emotional Conflict)

Mujhe yeh samajh aane laga tha ki har kisi ka apna dard aur apna raasta hota hai. Sabhi ko apni jagah par sab kuch sahi karna hota hai, lekin yeh mushkil hota hai. Neha aur Saloni ki dosti ne kuch confusion create ki thi, par ab mujhe lagta tha ki woh dono apne intentions mein saaf the. Lekin yeh sab samajhna aur apne emotions ko handle karna meri liye bohot challenging ho raha tha.

Mujhe laga ki sabko apni zindagi mein thodi space milni chahiye thi, taaki har koi apne problems ko samajh sake. Riccha ki khushi mein thodi shanti thi, lekin sabke dilon mein abhi bhi kuch chhupaa hua tha, jo waqt ke saath hi samajhna aur solve karna hoga.


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Emotional Confessions and Tensions

Mujhe yeh samajh aane laga tha ki meri zindagi ab sirf meri nahi rahi thi. Mere saath jo log the, unki khushiyan meri khushi ka hissa ban gayi thi. Masoom ki baat karo toh, uska man mere liye ek aisa safar tha jahan hum dono ek doosre ke saath har ek lamha jeena chahte the.

(Reflection)

Aaj meri zindagi mein sab kuch thoda complex ho gaya tha, lekin yeh bhi samajh raha tha ki meri sabhi maasoomiyaan, meri apni khushi, meri responsibilities se judi thi. Sona ki baat karo toh woh thoda ghabra gayi thi, par sab ka man tha ki hum apne rishton ko samajh sakein.

Pari ki baat bhi dilchasp thi. Uska mind ab bhi ek confusion mein tha. Main jaanta tha ki woh chahti thi ki main hamesha uske saath rahoon, lekin kabhi kabhi humare apne sapne aur apne dard humare saath raah nahi bana paate. Uske liye meri feelings kaafi complicated thi, aur main khud bhi ye samajh nahi pa raha tha ki mere dil mein kya hai.

Mai abhi aakhe band karne hi wala thaa ki wah pari akar kadhi ho gayi


(Conversation with Pari)

Main - aare mere paari gudiya kaha thi etnae dino sai pata hai chain sai soo nahi paaya hu mai

Pari (thoda gussa ho kar): "Kaha the, aaj itne dino baad tumne mujhe kabhi bulaya nahi. Saloni, Neha aur bhabhiyoon ke saath busy rehte ho."

Main (jokingly, lekin apne aap ko defend karte hue): "Aare meri Pari, yeh kya ho gaya? Tumhe pata hai na ki 13 saal se tumhare saath hoon, toh ab itna gussa kyun?"

Pari (thoda upset ho kar, phir thoda playful): "Kahaan khoya tha? Tumne kabhi apne dil ki baat nahi kahi. Kya tumhe lagta hai ki main tumhare saath nahi rehna chahti?"

Main (thoda hairaan ho kar): "Aare baba, galti ho gayi, maaf kar do. Kabhi tumne kaha tha na, yeh sab? Main samajh sakta hoon, lekin apni feelings ko thoda samajhna zaroori tha."

Pari (seriously, apni baat rakhte hue): "Waise, maine notice kiya hai ki jab main tumse apne dil ki baat karti thi, tumne hamesha kaha tha 'attraction'. Par ab tum Saloni didi aur Neha ko dekh kar attractive feel kar rahe ho, yeh kya hai?"


(Dev's Internal Struggle)

Pari ki baat sunke meri duniya hil gayi thi. Kya main sach mein Saloni aur Neha ko apni taraf attract mehsoos kar raha hoon? Ya phir yeh bas ek misunderstanding thi? Mera dil yeh samajh pa raha tha ki main khud apne jazbaat ke saath khada hoon, aur agar maine yeh samajhna shuru kiya toh yeh sab aur mushkil ho sakta tha.

Mujhe ab yeh samajh aane laga tha ki apni feelings ko samajhna aur doosron ko batana zaroori hai, varna hum apne rishton ko kho dete hain. Main apne dil ki baat sabse pehle Pari se karna chahta tha, par us waqt jo confusion tha, woh sabko samajhna aur unhe apne jazbaat samjhana zaroori tha.


(The Truth About Feelings)

Masoom ka man bilkul saaf tha. Woh har ek din meri khushi ke liye jeeti thi, aur main uski zindagi mein ek aise shakhs ki tarah tha jo kabhi apne emotions ko samajh nahi paaya. Uska pyaar aur uska jazba mere liye zaroori tha, lekin main apne dil ko puri tarah samajh nahi pa raha tha.

Pari ki baat thi, toh woh apne chhote dard ko mere saath share karna chahti thi. Woh meri chhoti si behen thi, jo hamesha mere saath rakhna chahti thi, par kabhi usse apne emotions ko pura samajh kar uski feelings ko jawab dena mushkil ho gaya tha.


(The Decision)

Masoom ne apne dad se baat kar li thi court marriage ke liye, aur yeh mere liye ek nayi zindagi ka shuruat tha. Main samajh raha tha ki har ek decision, har ek feeling ab sabki zindagi ko shape dene wala tha.

Mujhe apni zindagi ko samajhne ka waqt mil raha tha, par yeh sab humari jo khushiyan thi unhi par nirbhar tha. Mera kaam tha ki main apne relationships ko samajh kar apni decisions loo.

Main - kaisi baate karati hai aisa kuch nahi hai
pari mujhe pakad kr apna shir mere senne par rakh kar let gayi
Main - kaya hua udas mat hoo abb tera dhyaan rakhunga mai


Dev and Pari's Tender Moment

Dev (thinking to himself):
"Yeh kya ho raha hai? Pari ki saath har pal kuch alag hi ho raha hai. Yeh jo ehsaas hai, isse pehle kabhi nahi mehsoos kiya. Aaj tak main apne emotions ko samajh nahi paaya tha, par ab lagta hai sab kuch ek nayi direction mein jaa raha hai."

Pari (holding Dev's shirt, her head resting on his chest, softly):
"Sii... ab mujhe sohne dijiye. Bade din baad, aapki dhadkano ko sun kar so rahi hoon. Aaj jo sukoon hai, uska koi hisaab nahi. Main yeh baatein aapko bekar nahi keh rahi hoon. Aapke saath bas thoda aur waqt guzarna chahti hoon. Jaise aapko jo achha lage, aap wo karo. Par, please thoda time mere liye nikaal liya karo. Ab jawab mat dena, bas soo jaaiye."

(Dev, gently caressing her hair, feeling her warmth)
Dev ne apne dil ki baat ko apni chaahaton ke saath jhela, lekin woh samajh gaya ki uska pyaar Pari ke liye kis tarah ka tha. Jaise hi Pari uski dhadkan ko mehsoos kar rahi thi, Dev ka dil ek alag hi raah par chalne laga. Woh waqt ab kisi aur cheez ka tha, jo sirf un dono ke beech tha.

(Dev's Inner Thoughts)
"Aaj meri aankhon ke samne ek nayi duniya khuli hai. Pari ki muskaan, uska yeh pyaar — yeh jo sukoon hai, yeh pehle kabhi nahi tha. Kabhi yeh nahi socha tha ki mere liye koi itna khaas ho sakta hai."

Pari (whispering as she drifts into sleep):
"Mai bas aapko apni duniya mein rakhna chahti hoon, Dev. Yeh sab kuch aapke saath... jaise ek nayi kahani ka shuruat ho. Main har din yeh samajhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon ki hum dono ka saath kis tarah se badhega."

(Dev softly smiling, realizing the depth of her feelings)
"Pari, tum jitni samajhdar ho, utni hi thodi confused bhi ho. Tumhein apni feelings samajhna hoga. Tumse zyada apni feelings samajhna mujhe bhi thoda mushkil lagta hai. Par main tumhare saath hoon."


(Dev falls asleep with a calm sense of peace, knowing his bond with Pari is now growing deeper)

"Yeh jo ek sukoon ka ehsaas hai,
Shayad yeh hum dono ke beech ki rishton ki shuruaat ho.
Aur aage hum dono ki naa khatam hone waali baat ho.
Aaj ka din, yeh raat...
Inka apna ek rang tha.

Ess raat mein, har ek behati hawa ka,
Apna-apna ek dhang tha,
Jahan har dukh ko mohabbat ki roshni mil si gayi,
Aur teri har khushi meri har dhadkan tham si gayi."

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