Fantasy "DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)
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Bro maine story likhna band kar diya hai. Reader's ki soch achhi nahi lagi is liye maine update dena band kar diya. Ye meri first story thi kisi forum par but anyways.....
Dost ma to regular comment karta tha tum ko kisi aik ka comment acha nhi laga to story band wahBro maine story likhna band kar diya hai. Reader's ki soch achhi nahi lagi is liye maine update dena band kar diya. Ye meri first story thi kisi forum par but anyways.....
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Shubham bro sorry maine aapka ye comnt nahi padha tha..sach to ye hai ki maine kisi ka bhi cmnt nahi padha. Actually maza hi nahi aa raha tha is liye story likhna hi band kar diya. Waise bhi kaam se hi fursat nahi milti thi. Family ko time bhi nahi de pata tha. Bada jhanjhat ho gaya tha bro is liye story close kar diya.
Sorry to all but kuch apni problem kuch aap logo ki bhi galti.
Reader bane rahna jyada achha hai. Jab time mile aa jaao aur apni pasand ki story padho fir chalte bano. Kisi ki story par cmnt hi na karo. Bhaad me jaye ye sab hahahaha. Aise hi achha lagta hai na.
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Sorry dost but do chaar logo ke cmnt se shayad pet nahi bharta. Story me hamesha very nice, awesome update, wale cmnt kisi bhi writer ko motivate karne ke liye kafi nahi ho sakte. Uske liye jaruri hai tarike se review dena. Story ke bare me kuch baate batana.
Meri baat ka bura mat mano bro. Mujhe achha nahi laga is liye band kar diya isse kisi ko kya fark padta hai.
Bro yaha par bahut se aise log hain jo story padh kar bina cmnt kiye chup chaap kat lete hain. Ab aap bataao kya wo aisa karke achha kaam karte hain? Bro sirf writer bas hi galat nahi hota balke reader's bhi galat hote hain.
Anyways leave this topic bro and sorry for this....
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