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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Bhai mujhy time boht kam milta hy isi waja say jitna likh sakta hon likh k post kar deta hon bur sorry mujhy lagta hy main ya story zaida nhi chala sakon ga Q k mujhy response thek nhi mill raha isi waja say bhi likhny ka dil nhi karta jab likhny waly ko response thek na mily to dil nhi karta
Bhai aap apna karm karo fal ki ichcha mat karo (aap likhte rahiye response apne aap mil jayega aap ne yeh baat khud not ki hogi jab aap ne purane update diye the jab ek ya do log hi response de rehe the lakin abhi bahut se log aap ki story ko like karne lage hai aap yeh dekho ki aap ki story ko padh kitne log rehe hai ant me yehi kahuga ki aap likhte rehi aap un logo ke liye likhe jo aap ke update ka bahut hi jayada intjar karte hai aur aakhir me nice update bhai)
 
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The rock

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Bhai aap apna karm karo fal ki ichcha mat karo (aap likhte rahiye response apne aap mil jayega aap ne yeh baat khud not ki hogi jab aap ne purane update diye the jab ek ya do log hi response de rehe the lakin abhi bahut se log aap ki story ko like karne lage hai aap yeh dekho ki aap ki story ko padh kitne log rehe hai ant me yehi kahuga ki aap likhte rehi aap un logo ke liye likhe jo aap ke update ka bahut hi jayada intjar karte hai aur aakhir me nice update bhai)
Isi lia bhai mainy likhna band nhi kia Q k mujhy bhi lag raha hy k jo like karty hain un k lia likhon ya ap bhi janty hain k jab tak response acha na mily likhny ka dil nhi karta
 
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Manojsharma

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Bhai updates kab take aayega
 
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Waiting bhai
 

The rock

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Update 35







Goli lagty hi wo chilany laga or apna paon pakr k beth gaya






Main.agr tery paisy na deny hoty to tujhy yahin garh deta shukar kar k sirf paon mai goli mari hy ab btaa kitny paisy banty hain tery







Admi darty hovy.20000






Mainy usy 50000 dy dia






Main.ya ly 20000 tery jo deny hain or baki k paison say apna elaj karwa lena or aj k bad kabhi kisi k sath bhi ghlat karny say pehly aj ka din yad kar lena






Rani mujhy herat say dakhti ja rahi thi usy yaken hi nhi ho raha tha k mainy abhi kia kiya hy usy andr ly jany k lia mainy jaisy hi us ka hath pakra mujhy khud ko jhatka laga Q k us ka jism boht garam tha jaisy kisi ny aag laga rakhi ho






Mainy dair na karty hovy usy utha lia or bahir ki taraf chal para







Sara.beta kahan ly ja rahy ho isy







Main.ap bas chalo mery sath main ap ki koi bat nhi suno ga ab ap dono yahan nhi raho gi






Rani.per kashif agr ham yahan nhi rahyn gy to kahan jayn gy






Main.shukar hy ap ko to main yad hon rahi bat ap k rehny ki us ki ap log fikr na kro abhi main zinda hon or ab ab koi bat nhi kro gi ai smjh






Main usy gari tak ly aya un dono ko gari mai betha k ghar ki taraf chal para rasty mai hi mainy alina ko call kar k dr ko ghar bulany ko keh dia hamary ghar pohnchny tak dr bhi aa gaya






Main rani ko utha k andr ly gaya wahan per bua or dada g bhi mojood thy






Dada g.ya kon hain beta






Main.bad mai btata hon Dada G






Main usy ly k aik room mai aa gaya usy bed per leta dia or dr usy check karny laga






Dr.ghabrany ki koi bat nhi hy mainy injection laga dia hy kuch din tak thek ho jay gi






Main.per hova kia hy






Dr.thek say na khany ki waja say kamzori or bukhar ho gaya hy kuch din tak in ko healthi food or rest karny say thek ho jay gi






Mainy dr ko wapis bhej dia us ny kuch medision likh k di rani k lia or chala gaya us k jany k bad main or sara bhi bahir aa gayr Q k wo bhi mery sath andr aa gai thi






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Hunterrrr69

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Bahut hi bdhia update Bhai I think ye Ali ki heroine bnegi
 
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Raj142

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NICE UPDATE BHAI
 
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