Fantasy Devil
- Thread starterThe rock
- Start date
- 58,455
Kalyansurya
Well-Known Member
- 8,889
- 57,163
- 173
Nice update dost tum time la liya karo magar update bara diya karo jis parh ka maza a jaye 2 3 din baad beshak update da do
Nhi bro aesay hi tehk ha Kyu ka Jessi yeh story ha regular chalti rahay to acha
First of all I'm silent reader here and ma na aj hi yeh story read ki buht achi story ha Bahi Pehlay writer ka part to ha AP Jo likh rahay ho wo us sa acha ja raha ha AP likhty raho jitna time milay utna likh kr post Karo apki story top rank story ma sa so AP likho jab time melay or sath post Karo bas is incomplete na chorna Meri request ha
Arjun Singh 72
Well-Known Member
- 8,137
- 15,026
- 143
Killerpanditji(pandit)
Well-Known Member
- 10,277
- 38,702
- 258
- 72
- 219
- 33
Update 36
Main bahir aa gaya sara bhi mery sath thi main bahir aa k beth gaya
Dada G.ab btao beta kia bat hy tum kuch prashan lag rahy ho
Main.kuch nhi dada g ab sab thek hy
Bua.tum ny btaya nhi ya kon hain
Mainy un ko btaa dia sara k bary mai k ya kon hy or ab un ki mali halat bhi thek nhi hy jisy sun k un ko bhi afsos hova un ko sab btany k bad
Sara.ya kon hain kashif
Main.ya meri bua hain or ya mery dada g hain
Sara.to kia tumhri family mill gai
Main.g han mill gai hy
Sara.per kesy tum ny to us wakt btaya tha k tumhra koi nhi hy
Main.g btaya tha Q k us wakt mujhy khud ko pata nhi tha
Us k bad mainy sara ko bhi btaa dia k kesy mery family mili or kia hova tha bua or dada g ali say bhi mily us ko badla hova dakh k un ko bhi boht kushi hovi k chalo ya sudher gaya ham say mill k wo log sham ko wapis chlay gaye sham ko
Main alina say.api aj ap rani madam k sath so jana un ki tabyat thek nhi hy to kisi bhi chez ki zrorat par sakti hy
Alina.ok main so jaon gi
Sara.ary nhi beta tum Q prashan hoty ho main reh lon gi us k pass
Main.nhi ap ko khud aaram ki zrorat hy ap un k pass rahi to na ap so pao gi na wo isi lia ap bhi rest kro
Mainy usy bhi guest room mai sony k lia bhej dia or alina ko rani k pass jab alina rani k pass gai to us ka jism abhi bhi garam tha mainy alina ko keh dia tha k rani ko apny koi kapry dy dy us k lia bad mai shoping karni thi jab wo thek ho jay gi
Jab alina ny rani ko kapry change karny ka kaha tha us ny inkar kar dia per alina ny zabrdasti usy uthana chaha to us ka jism garam tha isi lia alina ny darwaza band kar k rani k kapry utar diye ab wo bimar thi naha to nhi sakti thi isi lia alina ny aik kapry ko gila kar k us ka jism saaf kar dia or usy kapry pehna diye apni itni care hota dakh k rani ki ankhon mai ansoo a gaye jab alina ny rani ko roty dakha to ghabra gai
Alina.kia hova ap ro Q rahi ho
Rani.kuch nhi
Alina.phr ap ro Q rahi ho
Rani.nhi bas aisy hi ankh mai kuch chala gaya tha
Alina ny mujhy wahin bula lia
Main.g kia hova
Alina.dakho na ya ro rahi hain main waja pochi to btati bhi nhi bas ro rahi hain
Main.kia hova kisi ny kuch kaha hy kia
Rani.nhi
Main.phr kia bat hy ap ro Q rahi ho
Rani.kuch nhi bas aisy hi
Main.btao kia bat hy jo ap ro rahi ho pls
Rani.aj tak mery kisi ny aisy care nhi ki yahan tak mainy tumhry sath bhi kabhi acha nhi kia or phr bhi tum hamary lia itna sab kar rahy ho
Main.bas isi lia ap ro rahi ho kia ya koi rony wali bat thori hy rahi bat ap k care karny ki to ap bhi mery apnon mai say hain jinhon ny mujhy sahara dia tha main ap ko bhol to nhi sakta
Rani.phr bhi
Main.bas ap ab ya sab fazol sochna bnd kar do ok
Us k bad alina ny hi usy khichri khilai or dawai khila k sula dia main bhi ja k so gaya
Wait 4 next
Main bahir aa gaya sara bhi mery sath thi main bahir aa k beth gaya
Dada G.ab btao beta kia bat hy tum kuch prashan lag rahy ho
Main.kuch nhi dada g ab sab thek hy
Bua.tum ny btaya nhi ya kon hain
Mainy un ko btaa dia sara k bary mai k ya kon hy or ab un ki mali halat bhi thek nhi hy jisy sun k un ko bhi afsos hova un ko sab btany k bad
Sara.ya kon hain kashif
Main.ya meri bua hain or ya mery dada g hain
Sara.to kia tumhri family mill gai
Main.g han mill gai hy
Sara.per kesy tum ny to us wakt btaya tha k tumhra koi nhi hy
Main.g btaya tha Q k us wakt mujhy khud ko pata nhi tha
Us k bad mainy sara ko bhi btaa dia k kesy mery family mili or kia hova tha bua or dada g ali say bhi mily us ko badla hova dakh k un ko bhi boht kushi hovi k chalo ya sudher gaya ham say mill k wo log sham ko wapis chlay gaye sham ko
Main alina say.api aj ap rani madam k sath so jana un ki tabyat thek nhi hy to kisi bhi chez ki zrorat par sakti hy
Alina.ok main so jaon gi
Sara.ary nhi beta tum Q prashan hoty ho main reh lon gi us k pass
Main.nhi ap ko khud aaram ki zrorat hy ap un k pass rahi to na ap so pao gi na wo isi lia ap bhi rest kro
Mainy usy bhi guest room mai sony k lia bhej dia or alina ko rani k pass jab alina rani k pass gai to us ka jism abhi bhi garam tha mainy alina ko keh dia tha k rani ko apny koi kapry dy dy us k lia bad mai shoping karni thi jab wo thek ho jay gi
Jab alina ny rani ko kapry change karny ka kaha tha us ny inkar kar dia per alina ny zabrdasti usy uthana chaha to us ka jism garam tha isi lia alina ny darwaza band kar k rani k kapry utar diye ab wo bimar thi naha to nhi sakti thi isi lia alina ny aik kapry ko gila kar k us ka jism saaf kar dia or usy kapry pehna diye apni itni care hota dakh k rani ki ankhon mai ansoo a gaye jab alina ny rani ko roty dakha to ghabra gai
Alina.kia hova ap ro Q rahi ho
Rani.kuch nhi
Alina.phr ap ro Q rahi ho
Rani.nhi bas aisy hi ankh mai kuch chala gaya tha
Alina ny mujhy wahin bula lia
Main.g kia hova
Alina.dakho na ya ro rahi hain main waja pochi to btati bhi nhi bas ro rahi hain
Main.kia hova kisi ny kuch kaha hy kia
Rani.nhi
Main.phr kia bat hy ap ro Q rahi ho
Rani.kuch nhi bas aisy hi
Main.btao kia bat hy jo ap ro rahi ho pls
Rani.aj tak mery kisi ny aisy care nhi ki yahan tak mainy tumhry sath bhi kabhi acha nhi kia or phr bhi tum hamary lia itna sab kar rahy ho
Main.bas isi lia ap ro rahi ho kia ya koi rony wali bat thori hy rahi bat ap k care karny ki to ap bhi mery apnon mai say hain jinhon ny mujhy sahara dia tha main ap ko bhol to nhi sakta
Rani.phr bhi
Main.bas ap ab ya sab fazol sochna bnd kar do ok
Us k bad alina ny hi usy khichri khilai or dawai khila k sula dia main bhi ja k so gaya
Wait 4 next