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dhannywaad shukriya bhai...and keep supportingBahut hi badhiya update diya hai aapne
dhannywaad shukriya bhai...and keep supportingBahut hi badhiya update diya hai aapne
alok bhai...time ki kami hai..abhi thoda time mila to readers ke comments ka reply de raha hoon...update aayega..bas thoda dhairya banaye rakkhenWaiting for next update siraj bhai
bhai...naina suraj ko shaalini ke thru nahi milegi..suraj ko ehsaas hai ki naina ke bagair sona mushkil hai..yahi baat aage chalkar naya mod laayegi..aur suraj ko naina ke pyar ka ehsaas hoga....dhannywaad sath bane rahiyyeSorry brother I just read your update from 57 to 64 due to busy schedule in my project. Now come to the story point. Name of this story is Dil and as you say that Naina is the heroine of this story and dil of Suraj. In 64 updates Suraj didn't realise his love with Naina how it's possible. He realised Shalini love and others also but didn't for Naina. Sill missing romance between Naina and Suraj which are main character. I know Shalini is one of main character of this story but she is not heroine it's very clearly you written in your story. Your story is going in a good way and I liked it most than others but think is it ok that Naina will get Suraj by Shalini. No man it's not justified to Naina's love that she will get Suraj as her husband by her mother Shalini. Thik about it 64 updates finished and no Love angle between hero and heroine. Still missing this thing otherwise your story is best. Please don't mind I have written which I realised
Thanks brother and keep posting
dhannywaad dear mehugLajawab update
kaam me busy hoon..aaj thoda update likhunga ho sakta hai..kal update post kar duwaiting for the next update....
aayega bas thoda kaam me busy hoonwaiting for the next update....
dhannywaad shukriya bhai1 nu
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lady Don nahi ye bahot pyaari ladki hai..she is good girlOhhh lady Don
thanks for the comment broNice
aapka dhannywaad bhaiBahut Badiya