Just read your updates 1-54 in 3 days despite having very packed busy day.
I even postponed my story update for it becoz your story is too good.
Ekdum mast story hai
Sabhi characters pasand aaye, Naina Shalini aur Suraj.
You mentioned that Naina is the heroine
Lekin main Manta hu ki Shalini aur naina dono heroine hai.
Kafi realistic, aur simple approach hai Story ki jo ki achi baat hai.
Isse pehle badla meri beizzati ka padhi thi kafi pehle.
You are a excellent writer.
I would love to watch a hot threesome among three main characters Naina, Shalini and Suraj.

Keep updating