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Adultery Dilawar- The king

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............ Dharm Singh intro..........
Dharm Singh ek taqatwar kabeele ka sardar hai or raja Narinder Singh ka purana dost hai. je apne kabeele ko apna pariwar maanta hai.
Dharm Singh ek taqatwar lekin nek dil insan hai.
Dharm Singh ka pariwar
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Patni- Roopa devi( je ek nek aurat hai)
Beta- Dev Singh( je abhi kabeele ke kulguru ke ashram me hai)
Beti- Maya ( je ek bohat hi khoobsurat ladki hai. je Sara din apne kamre me hi rehti hai or kabeele ki kuldevi ki murti ke samne bethi kisi mantar ka jaap karti rehti hai. kabeele ke log isko Devi ka avtaar mante hai. es ke kamre me koi nahi jata. kabeela ke kulguru ne Dharm Singh ko Maya ke kisi bi kaam ke beech me ane se mna kiya hua hai.,)


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Jaise hi vo teeno haveli dakhil hote hai. samne jashan ka mahol hai. Dharm Singh Darwaje pr khada unka hi intzar kr reha hota hai. vo teeno ko ander lekar jata hai. haveli ke haal me pounch kr vo teeno ko unke sathan pr bethne ko bolta hai. vo log Beth jate hai. kush or log bi akar teeno se milte hai. phir jashan shuru hota hai. do bohat ki khoobsurat ladkiyea vha ati Hain or teeno ko parnam krti hai. vo dono unke samne naachna shuru krti hai. sb log apni apni jga pr Bethe hai. ladkiya bohat hi Kamaal ka naach rahi Hain. teeno ke saamne tra tra ke sharbat or phal parose ja rahe Hain. Bheem Singh ki diyan Jo ki abhi Tak dono ladkiyeo pr the vo Dilawar ki tarf jata hai. vo dekhta hai ki Dilawar ka diyan ladkiyeo
pr tik chuka hai or uske chehre ka rang be laal hona shuru ho gya hai.
Bheem Singh samaj jata hai ki Dilawar ki kaam vasna jaagrit ho chuki hai. vo apne saath bethe Deva ko apne haath se ishara krta hai Deva ki nazar jaise hi dilawar pr padti hai vo sb samaj jata hai. ider ladkiyeo apni masti me naach rahi hai . Deva or Bheem Singh abhi kush soch hi rahe hote Hain ki Dilawar apni apni jga se uthta hai or dono ladkiyeo ki tarf Jane hi lgta hai abhi Bheem Singh Dilawar ko rokne ke liye khada hi hota hai itne me ek bohat hi khoobsurat ladki vha ati hai or Dilawar ka haath pakad leti hai. ladki ke vha ate hi vo ladkiya Jo naach rahi hoti Hain vo naachna band kr deti hai . haal me ek sarnata Sha jata hai. Dilawar gusse me peeshe ghoomta hai .
Ladki- kha ja rahe ho rajkumar. aou mere saath Chalo.
ladki ke itna bolte hi dilawar ek dum shaant ho jata hai or vo us ladki ke saath chal padta hai.
ladki ghoom kr Deva or Bheem Singh ki tarf dekhti hai or bolti hai.
Ladki- tum dono bi mere saath Chalo.
Bheem Singh or Deva Dharm Singh ki tarf dekhte Hain vo dono ko saath Jane ka ishara krta hai. phir vo dono us ladki ke saath chal dete Hain. ( je ladki koi or nahi balki Dharm Singh ki beti Maya hai)
Maya unko lekar ek kamre me jate hai jaise hi kamre ke ander dakhil hote hai Deva or Bheem Singh hairaan reh jate Hain. kamre ka mahol bilkul kisi tantrik ki guffa jaisa hai.
kamre ka darwaja apne ap band ho jata hai.
Jaise hi Maya Dilawar ka hath shodti hai Dilawar hosh me ata hai vo apne ap ko kamre me dekh kr hairaan ho jata hai. phir uska diyan Deva or Bheem Singh ki tarf dekhta hai. or apne dimag pr jor daalta hai usko sb yaad ata hai. sb ko chup dekh kr Maya bolti hai .
Maya - hairaan mat ho rajkumar abi tum ko sb pta chal jaiga.
Dilawar apni adat anusar chup chaap dekh reha hai. Maya apni Pooja wali jga pr Beth jati hai. or bolti hai.
Maya- Beth jao jha pr .
phir vo teeno Maya ke paas Beth jate Hain.
Maya -(Dilawar se) jis kaam ke liye tum ja rahe ho. usme sb se badi rukawat tumhari je vasna hi hai rajkumar. agar tum es pr kabbu na kr sake to je tumhare or tumhare dono sathiyon ke liye vinashkari hoga.

Dilawar- vasna muj pr tb hi bhari padegi jab koi sunder ladki usko badkane ka kaam karegi.

Maya- tumhari je kamjori shaitan pehchan lega. or tumhari taqat hi tumhari kamjori bn jaigi.
Dilawar- ( kush yaad krte hue) lekin abhi Bahar tumne Meri vasna ko kaise shaant kiya. je kaise sambhav kiya tumne.

Maya- vo Maine apne mantro ki Shakti se kiya . lekin mere mantar har baar tumko shaant nahi kr sakte.
dilawar- iska upay Kya hai.
maya- main tumko ek mala de rahi hu. je mala mantar Shakti se bni hui hai. tum isko dharan kr lo . ane wale teen din tk tum pr vasna bhari nahi hogi.
phir vo Dilawar ko ek mala deti hai . jisko vo apne gle me daal leta hai. phir vo ek mala Deva ko bi deti hai. vo bi usko dharan kr leta hai.
Maya- (Deva se) Jo mala tum ko di hai je tumhare krodh pr kaabu rakhegi. ab tum dono jao. main tum ko subha tumhare Jane se pehle milugi.
phir vo teeno uth jate hai or vha se Jane lgte hai. jaise hi vo mudte hai.
maya- shiyad tum logo ne Meri baat diyan se nahi Suni . main tum dono ko Jane ko bola hai. bheem Singh ko nahi. Bheem Singh ko jhi rehne do.
Dilawar or Deva mud kr dekhte Hain.
maya- ap dono jao Rajkumar . bheem Singh kush samye Tak aa jaiga.
phir vo dono kamre se Bahar chale jate Hain.
Bheem Singh akar pehle wali jga pr Beth jata hai.
Bheem Singh jb se kamre me ayea hai usko kush ajeeb sa lg reha hai. Maya ki awaz usko Jani pehchani lg rahi hai. lekin vo chup chaap Beth jata hai koi sawal nahi karta.

Maya- bohat samye lga diya ane me or ja bi rahe ho. hum to pishle 20 varsho se tumhara intzar kr rahe Hain.
Bheem Singh ko kush samaj nahi ata ki Maya Kya bol rahi hai. bs usko Maya ki awaz kush Jani pehchani lg rahi hai.
Bheem Singh- ap Kya bol rahi Hain main kush samja nahi. hum to aj pehli bar mile Hain. to phir ap mera intzar kaise kr sakti Hain.
Maya- intzar to hum tumhara bohat samye se kr rahe Hain. 20 baras to es jeevan ke hi Hain.
Bheem Singh- ap ki baate Meri samaj se pre Hain. ap kehna Kya chahati Hain.
maya- apna haath mere haath me do . or ankhe band kr lo.
Bheem Singh apna haath Maya ke haath me deta ha or ankhe band kr leta hai.
Bheem Singh ki ankho ke age uske pishle Janam ka ateet aa jata hai. kush samye baad jb Maya uska haath shodti hai to vo ankhe kholta hai. Maya uski tarf hi dekh rahi hoti hai.




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pishla Janam ki Kahani

Dosto main pishle Janam ki kahni bi es Janam ke naam ke saath hi bta reha hu



( jaise ki ap log jante hain ki Bheem Singh ka Dilawar or Deva se pishle Janam ka samband hai. lekin in teeno ka ek dost or bi tha. vo koi or nahi Samrat tha. in chaaro ki dosti ek misaal thi. Samrat Rajghar ka rajkumar tha. Dilawar or Deva ek kabeele ke sardar ke bete the. Bheem Singh ek jabaz yodha tha. Maya Bheem Singh ke premika thi. Maya ka Janam ek khaas samye me hua tha es liye Jo insan Maya se shadi kr uska kamuk bang karta usko harana namumkin ho jata. Samrat ne jab shaitan ki Pooja Kar usko khush kr diya to shaitan ne Samrat ko
Maya ke Janam ka raaj bta diya or kha ki agar vo Maya ko hasil kr lega to koi bi hra nahi sakega. Samrat jaanta tha ki Bheem Singh ke jinda rehte Maya uski nahi ho sakti . usne bheem Singh ko jaan se maarne ki baat Sochi lekin Dilawar or Deva ke rehte Bheema ko maarna sambhav nahi tha es liye Samrat me teeno ko ek saath khatam Karne ki yojna tyar ki. Samrat ne teeno ko rajghar ke rajmehal bulvayea or khane me zehar daal kr apne dosto ki hatyea kr di. or unki laasho ko jungal me fek diya. lekin Samrat ki kismat ne uska saath nahi diya. jungal ke jis hisse me Samrat ne teeno laasho ko feka tha vha se jungli kabeele ke log guzar rahe the vo log Dilawar or Deva ke kabeele walo ko jaante the in logo ne laasho ko pehchan liya. jb Maya ko bheem Singh ki mout ki khabar mili to usne bi mout ko gle lga liya.) Samrat ne dosto ko jis Shakti ko hasil Karne ke liye dokha kiya vo Maya ke saath hi khatam ho gai.

ab in logo ne Samrat ko khatam karne ke liye dubara Janam liya hai.

to be continue.........
Bohat hi Dhasu story hai aur kaam shakti ko as a taqat and woh bhi pre historic kal me accha laga. Aur ab usme bhi ounar janam ka angle. Khoob.
 

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Teeno meeting room me pervesh karte Hain.
Dilawar or Bheem Singh agge bd kr maharaj ko parnam karte Hain. or phir Baki sab logo ko bi parnam karte Hain. haseena bi jhi karti hai.
phir dilawar sb ko Haseena ke baare me batata hai.
uske baad sab log Maharaj ek daasi ko bulate Hain or Haseena ko uske saath maharani ke paas bej dete Hain.
Maharaj- Mahadev ki kirpa se hamare putar us shaitan ko hra kr sahi samye pr vapis aye hain. ab humko jaldi hi Seema ki tarf badna hoga. din ka ujala hone hi wala hai.
sb log maharaj se sehmat Hain. or apni sehmati dete Hain. tbi Deva bolta hai.
Deva- maharaj main kush kehna chahata hu.
Maharaj- bolo Deva Kya baat hai.

Deva - Maharaj Sher Singh ki sena hamari Seema ko gher chuki hai. vo ab tak poori tyari ke saath morche bna chuke honge. es liye humko bi Seema se Thora pehla morchabandi krni chahiye. Seema ke Paar hamari sena ko jiyada Hani hogi. humko kisi tra se Sher Singh ki sena ko khule me Lana hoga.
maharaj- khul kr bolo tumhare kehne ka Kya Matlab hai.
Deva- Sher Singh or uski sena ko Seema ke ander ane dijiea. rajghar ke durg Tak pounchne ke liye unko apne paharo wale khule maidaan se guzarna hoga. hum vha pr unka khatama krege.
maharaj- (sab se) Deva Jo bol reha hai. vo baat theek hai. ap sb log Kya sochte ho es baare me.
sb log Deva ki baat se sehmati dete Hain.
Deva phir bolta hai.
deva- je sb bohat hi gupt treeke se hoga. hum Sher Singh or Samrat ko je lagne denge ki hum haar rahe Hain. hum log peeshe hat te rahege. Samrat je nahi jaanta ki rajkumar Dilawar or Bheem Singh lout aye Hain. es liye vo jaldi se rajghar pounchna chahega. je hi uski sab se bdi galti hogi.
tabi Dilawar sari baat ko samjne ke baad bolta hai.
Dilawar- Deva theek keh reha hai Maharaj . jaise hi Samrat or Sher Singh paharo wale maidaan me ayege. main or Bheem Singh apne dal Bal ke saath unpar hamla krege.

sab log es baat pr sehmat hote Hain.

maharaj yudh ke liye hukam dete Hain. or sb log uth jate Hain. jaise hi Deva Dilawar or Bheem Singh haal me ate Hain . Sara rajpariwar unka intzar kr reha hota hai. vo teeno sab se milte Hain. or baate krte krte kush thori bohat pet Pooja bi kr lete hain. Rani maa je janti thi ki aise samye me bukhe pet Jung ladna mushkil hoga. es liye jb sab meeting room me the to unhone khane ka parbandh kr diya tha.
Dilawar Deva or Bheem Singh sb bdo ka ashirwad lete Hain or chal dete Hain.
Dilawar jate samye ek bar rajshri ki tarf dekhta hai Jo ki Dilawar ko hi dekh rahi hoti hai. phir Sb log chal dete Hain Jung ki tarf .
teeno yodha or senapati sena ki shawani me jate Hain. senapati sena ka 1/4 hissa pehle hi Seema ki traf bej chuke Hain.
Baki sena ko teen hisso me kr diya jata hai .
Dilawar or Bheem Singh apni apni sena ke saath chal dete Hain us pahardi maidaan ki tarf . sena ka bacha hua ek hissa rajghar ke durg me hi reh jata hai. Deva or senapati kush sainiko ke saath teji se Seema ki tarf badte Hain. .....
soraj ki roshni dharti pr padne se pehle hi Deva or senapati apni sena ke paas Seema pr pounch jate Hain. or sena ke commander ko sari baat samjate Hain. kush hi samye me din ka ujala ho jata hai.
ujala hote hi ek teer udta hua ata hai or senapati ke paas khade sainik ke kandhe me lagta hai.
senapati jaldi se sainik ko sambalte Hain. or teer ko uske kandhe se nikalte hai. teer pr ek sandesh bandha hua hota hai. ......
senapati us sandesh ko khol kr Deva ke paas le jata hai. Deva sandesh padta hai.

Sandesh
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je sandesh nahi akhari chetavni hai. agar apna or apni janta ka bhla chahte ho to hathyar daal do varna rajghar ke durg ko mitti me milta Dekhne ke liye tum me se koi bi zinda nahi rahega.
Sher Singh

Deva sandesh padne ke baad apna teer kamaan uthata hai or ankhe band kr kush diyan lagata hai or teer ko usi disha me Chala deta hai jis disha se vo sandesh wala teer ayea tha. Deva ka teer Sher Singh ke paas khade uske sainik ke Shati ke Paar ho jata hai.
ek baat or Deva teer ko shodte hi apne sainiko ko apni dhaal sambalne ko kehta hai.
ider sainik ke marte hi Sher Singh apne teer andajo ki tukdi ko adesh deta hai..
Sher sin ka adesh milte hi hazaro teerandaj
apni kamano pr teer chada kr ek saath teer shod dete Hain.
Deva janta tha es liye vo pehle hi tyar tha. Deva ke ishara karte hi sab sainik.apni dhaal se apne ap ko dhak lete Hain.
Sher Singh ka hamla lagbhag bekar Chala jata hai. sirf eka duka sainik hi ghyal hote Hain.
ider Samrat bi Sher Singh ke paas pounch chuka hai.
Samrat bohat gusse me hai. vo Sher Singh se kehta hai.
Samrat- ab Kya soch rahe ho Sher Singh . humko seedha hamla kr Dena chahiye. abhi Tak Dilawar or Bheem Singh rajghar se door Hain. jhi moka hai rajghar pr hamla krne ka.
Sher Singh- ap theek bol rahe Hain . hum abhi seedha hamla krege.
Sher Singh pehle hi sena ko teen hisso me baant chuka hai. ek hissa Samrat sambalne wala hai or Baki ke do hisse Sher Singh or uska Bhai.
Sher Singh sena ko seedhe hamle ka adesh deta hai......
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To be continue......
Yudh arambh ho gaya hai magar Deva Dilawar n Bheem ne yah yudh pehlay hi aadhe se zada jeet liya hai ab intezar rahega ki kaisay woh ab apni ranneeti se aage badtey hai. Yudh kaisa bhi ho har jeet apni qeemat lekar aati hain aur yah qeemat kia hoga yah dekhna hoga coz nuqsaan to jeetne walo ko bhi hoga.
 

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Sher Singh ka adesh milte hi sena ke teeno dal apne apne commander ke saath hamle ke liye saj hote Hain or rajghar ki Seema ke ander pervesh karte Hain.
Deva or senapati sena ke saath Seema se Thora peeshe hat chuke Hain. Sher Singh ki sari sena rajghar ki Seema me pervesh Kar jati hai. tabi Deva apni poori taqat ke saath un par hamla kr deta hai . Sher Singh ka saamna Deva karta hai or uske Bhai Hira Singh ka saamna senapati. dono Sena apas me takra chuki Hain. maar kaat Mach chuki hai . dono tarf ke log dushman ko maar kr apne raja ko Vijay dilwane ke liye utavle Hain.
Deva or Sher Singh ka abhi Tak barabari pr chal reha hai.
lekin Hira Singh rajghar ke senapati pr bhari pad reha hai. Sher Singh ki sena bi Rajghar ki sena or bhari padne lagi hai.
Samrat je sb dekh kr bohat khush ho reha hai.

tabi vo hota hai Jo Samrat or Sher Singh ne bi nahi Socha tha. ladte ladte rajghar ke senapati ke haath se talwar shoot jati hai. senapati buri tra se ghabra jata hai. or vo yudh ko shod kr apne ghode ko bhaga deta hai. or jaate jaate unchi awaz me bolta hai.
senapati- (Deva se) apni jaan bacha kr bhagiye rajkumar. je log bohat shaktishali Hain. hum Inka mukabla nahi kr sakte.
Deva senapati ko rokne ke liye bohat awaze lagata hai. lekin senapati vha se baag jata hai.

tabi rajghar ka ek sainik senapati ko yudh shod kr baagte dekh kr unchi awaz me bolta hai.

sainik- vo dekho hamare senapati baag gye Hain. tum sab bi apni apni jaan bacha kr baago.
sainik ke itna bolte hi rajghar ki sena ka hosla toot jata hai. or sari sena baag khadi hoti hai.

Deva ke laakh rokne pr bi koi nahi rukta. sb ko baagta dekh kr Deva bi ghabra jata hai. Deva ko gabrayea dekh kr Sher Singh hasne lagta hai. or bolta hai.
Sher Singh- Kya hua rajkumar tumhari to sari sena baagh gai. chaho to tum bi baagne ki kosis kr sakte ho.
es baat pr Deva apni talwar se Sher Singh pr war karta hai. lekin ghabrahat ke Karan Deva ki talwal Deva ke haath se shut jati hai. Sher Singh hasne lagta hai. tbi vha pr ek shota sa damaka hota hai . or kush samye ke liye sb ko kush nahi dikhta.
jaise hi sb theek hota hai. Sher Singh dekhta hai ki Deva bi usi tarf ja reha hai jider rajghar ki sena or senapati baage the. Sher Singh apni sena ko adesh deta hai.....
Sher Singh- hum in kyaro ka peesha krege or inko khatam Karne ke baad hi rajghar ke durg pr hamla krege.
itna bol kr Sher Singh bi apna ghoda usi tarf mod leta hai jis tarf Deva or uski sena baaghi this.
tbi Samrat apna ghoda lekar Sher Singh ke paas ata hai.
Samrat- rukiyea Maharaj je jaroor dushman ki chaal hai. humko fasane ki. main in rajghar walo ko bohat ashi tra se jaanta hu. je log yudh me mar to sakte Hain. lekin baagh nahi sakte . inke baagne me jaroor koi na koi chaal hai. humko inke peeshe nahi Jana chahiye.

Sher Singh- to ab apka Kya vichaar hai.
Samrat- maharaj abhi Tak Dilawar or Bheem Singh rajghar se bohat door hain. humko abhi rajghar ke durg pr hamla karna hoga. hum rajghar ki tarf un paharo ke beech me se jaige.

Sher Singh or Samrat kush or baate karte Hain or phir vo log apni sena ke saath rajghar ki tarf chal padte Hain.
ider Deva apni sena or senapati ke paas pounchta hai.
Deva apne ghode se utarta hai. or senapati ke paas ata hai. (senapati or sena es samye ek shoti si pahardi ke peeshe ruke hue hain)

Deva- Kya samachar hai senapati ji.
senapati- hamara guptchr ata hi hoga rajkumar.
tbi vha pr ek admi ata hai.
vo Deva or senapati ko parnam krta hai.
Senapati- to Kya samachar hai guptchr

guptchr- hamari yojna safal rahi. dushman
pahardi maidaan wale raaste se rajghar ki or ja reha hai.
je baat sun kar sab logo ke chehre pr muskurahat aa jati hai...
phir vo guptchr vha se Chala jata hai.
Deva ( senapati se) ab humko apni agli yojna pr kaam karna hoga.
phir Deva ek kabootar ke pair me ek sandesh baandh kr usko uda deta hai
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ider Sher Singh or Samrat apni poori Sena ke saath rajghar ki tarf bd rahe Hain. Deva ki chali chaal ke Karan vo log usi pahardi maidaan ki tarf bd rahe Hain. jha pr Dilawar or Bheem Singh apni sena ke saath unka intzar Kar rahe Hain.
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......to be continue....
Yudh bal ke sath yukti se bhi jeeta jata hai aur aaj yahi hua hai yukti laga ker Deva samrat ki sena ko maidani me le aaya hai. Ab dekhtey hai agla charan bhi kamyab hoga hai ya nahi.
 
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Shukriya Bhai
Bhai Feb ka update de huay ho. Yaar kuch to socho ki kaisay chalega. Story ka interest khatam ho jata hai viewers bhi chale jatey hai. Aap ki story 2021 se shuru hui hai aur beech beech me lagbagh saal saal bhar gayab rahey hai aap story se.
 
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