Madam ji jese khane me masala bina test nehi ata vasehi stories me masala bagar usme erotically maja nehi ayega. Or me janta hu real life or story me bohot farak hai per jese (sabdhan india)me sab sachhe ghatana pe adharit hai par us me intimate scenes us me dalte hai ki nehi? Base hi ap thora agr khud se na jode to wo ek apbiti ye docomintry film ban jaye ga jo kavi box office pe chalta hi nehi or flop ho jata hai. To madam ji ap jo mene impregnated hone ko ravi ki mummy or garima ko sujao diya us pe dhayn dijiyega baki ap badiya lekheka hai hi. Ap ne mera coment pe reply dia is ke liye sukriya. Ap ke reply ka intejar karu ga.or updete bandh mat kar na plees ei ful sab ap ke liye.mahesarpitaji, rahulji, jase lekhak ke sat ap vi mere chahite lekeka ban gai hai. Best of luck.Sukriya
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Mai ek aurat hi hu or ye kahani sach h jo jisme batayi unke pas huyi thi agar kuch or apne man se likha to fir isme sach nhi rahega mene sirf lund ke size ko bada likha h or kuch bhi apne man se nhi likha ab btao apne se bhi kuch jhodu ki nhi