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mistyvixen

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Next update kab tak ayega
Kal! Try karti hoon...thodi der main final karti hoon :pepeez:
 
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Kal! Try karti hoon...thodi der main final karti hoon :pepeez:
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Chapter 9: Comment

Achcha Update tha - seduction, history, present situation, fight scenes, destruction and thrill sab tha....
All in one hi likh dete...lekin shukriya sirji💙
Last update ke baad laga ki Akansha aur karan ke beech kuch hoga... lekin hamari writer mahodya ne kuch aur hi socha aur usey itihas ka path mein badal diya... haha 😂
Itne jaldi aisa kuch nhi Milne wala (incest toh nhi).. bedroom mein bas xxx karne hi jate hai kya... hmmm:sip:
Akansha ke irade wese bhi thik nahi lag rhe (karan ko baar baar apne bade bade boobs dikha rahi hai)..... aur jis tarah us ne beech mein Karan ki baat kaati usse daal mein kala lag raha hai.. ya wo abhi kuch batana nahi chahti
Woh toh obvious hai...khud hi socho main aisa kyu likhungi itne easy koi mausi seduce ho jayege? 😴

Ab toh back story bhi aane baake hai uske Raaz toh aage aa hi gaya hai!
Payal chintit hai lekin usey apne bhai ki bhi fikr dikh rahi hai...
Love her ✨ she cares a lot about Karan
ab wo shehro ko suraksha check karne khud ground par utregi... aur apne bhai ko Vanrajya bhi dikhayegi lekin raat mein ..... yhaan to kuch hoga,,,, 🙈
Haha you're too gullible maine bhi yeh sab stories padh chuke hai...lekin woh sab baar baar padh ke I'm sure yahan sab bhi bore ho gye honge...thoda spice toh chaiye life mein bhi!
Wahi yhaan Vinashika ki jhalak humein dikhi.... aur uska sevak Agrahak... bhai gazab ka daanav hai yaar....
💀💀💀 Bro was in fear of his death too. Imagine Vinashaka's fury :wooow:
BC ye itni powerful hai to Traas ke baaki sevak ko kya power hoga...
Pura ek rajya tehes nehes kar diya.....
Tbh Thansala sabse weak tha...lekin usmein koi doubt nhi hai Traas cannot enter AnantRajya...nature has it's own laws against monsters like them.
Lekin ab Uski nazar Vanrajya par hai...

aur Karan ki talwar akhir gayi kahan... Meher ki to awaaz hi nahi suni last 2 update se....
Meher is just too lazy...jab usko feel hota hai tabhi kuch bolti hai...nhi toh mere tarah sote rhete hai 😂

Thanks a lot for this amazing review💙

Maza aaya padh ke :boobyattack:
 
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Dekh rhe hoon pata chal jayega thodi der main kal tak possible hai ke nhi 😴...status dal dungi
 
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all update is good 👍👍
Thanks Max 💙 (I wish you chose this name instead 🙃)
Why payal said" tum ne kuch kaha kya Karan " can payal feels Karen's mind thoughts
Aise hi silly humor...real life mein bhi hum persons ke expression se thoda guess toh kar hi lete hai ke woh man mein kuch soch rha hai :sip:
Akshaya and Sonali ne sirf Karan ko un narbhediyon se ladte dekhte rahe bas . Un ko to Karan ki madad karna chahiye thi kyonki wo dono hi rajkumar aur rajkumari the.
Why would someone meddle in someone's affair jab wahan ke sena hi un logon ko bacha nhi rhe the? Aur abhi sandhi nhi hue hai 😴
Aur vanrajya se rishta banana chapter hai to madad to karni hi chahiye thi lekin nahi kya unke liye praja kuch bhi nahi chair chhodo
I think aajkal stories mein bahut Jayda heroism dikhaye jane lage hai...jahan sab musibat mein fase logon ke madad karte hai...lekin I try to write somewhat based on true human nature.
Aur mujhe lagta hai aap Sonali ke sath Karan ki thodi hate chemistry Lana chahti hai tab kya hoga jab ye baat Karan ko Pata chale gi vo vivah ka prastav laye hai ,
Nooo...tumhe kaise pata chala...khair koi nhi abhi bhi bahut story hai unki 🙃
kya reaction hoga payal ka kuch feel hoga ush ko Karan ke liye ya nahi
Payal aur Akshaya? Should I do it🤔 love triangle laun kya
Sharavas is claver minded fighter because he is guardian of kaljay as logn time
No doubt...he is very cautious about his every move.
Aur ravisha(aakansha) ko jab ye Pata chalega ki ye sab Karan ne kiya hai tab mana ayga,kya kare gi wo..
Dekhte hai...Ravisha does not have a single ounce of mercy...main toh uske liye jayda excited hoon jab woh aur Nandani milenge :kekdog:
Last I honestly I don't like payal's look in this update ,so 🙏 sorry
I replied to his earlier.

Thanks a lot for this amazing review 💙 MX
Stay tuned!


PS; Rudra Roy kuch seekho mx se review dena :smartm:
 
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All in one hi likh dete...lekin shukriya sirji💙

Itne jaldi aisa kuch nhi Milne wala (incest toh nhi).. bedroom mein bas xxx karne hi jate hai kya... hmmm:sip:

Woh toh obvious hai...khud hi socho main aisa kyu likhungi itne easy koi mausi seduce ho jayege? 😴

Ab toh back story bhi aane baake hai uske Raaz toh aage aa hi gaya hai!

Love her ✨ she cares a lot about Karan

Haha you're too gullible maine bhi yeh sab stories padh chuke hai...lekin woh sab baar baar padh ke I'm sure yahan sab bhi bore ho gye honge...thoda spice toh chaiye life mein bhi!

💀💀💀 Bro was in fear of his death too. Imagine Vinashaka's fury :wooow:

Tbh Thansala sabse weak tha...lekin usmein koi doubt nhi hai Traas cannot enter AnantRajya...nature has it's own laws against monsters like them.

Meher is just too lazy...jab usko feel hota hai tabhi kuch bolti hai...nhi toh mere tarah sote rhete hai 😂

Thanks a lot for this amazing review💙

Maza aaya padh ke :boobyattack:
Thanks dear....this was just a comment not a review....hum jese tuchh reader kisi bhi writer ko koi review nahi de sakte..😀😀

And I appreciate your response on our comment...

Aagey padh kar comment karta hu ab..
 

Mrxr

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Thanks Max 💙 (I wish you chose this name instead 🙃)
Ok i change this name
I understand . I felt she feel his thought .🙄
Why would someone meddle in someone's affair jab wahan ke sena hi un logon ko bacha nhi rhe the? Aur abhi sandhi nhi hue hai 😴
Ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki sena ko Pata hi nahi chala ho abhi aur pahuchi hi nahi.aur vo ek yuvraaj hai aur kabhi ye rajya uska dost bhi tha
aur Karan ko dekh ke unto ye bhi Pata chal gaya ki ushne abhi jaldi hi yudh kala sikh hai aur Maher ko dekh ke ye bhi soch Liya ye koi aam yodha nahi hai .ek yuvraj hone ki Wajah se ushe Karan (jo unko nahi Pata tha yuvraj hai )madad karni cahiye wo kahta hai na kuch Lena hai toh Dena bhi padta hai .maybe
I think aajkal stories mein bahut Jayda heroism dikhaye jane lage hai...jahan sab musibat mein fase logon ke madad karte hai...lekin I try to write somewhat based on true human nature.
Toh use Tarah se to Karan bhi hero hi hai other storys ki Tarah sabse vohi lad raha hai vo bhi sirf mehar ki vajah se
Nooo...tumhe kaise pata chala...khair koi nhi abhi bhi bahut story hai unki 🙃
bas ayse hi vayse I like prachi's character more then Sonali.
Payal aur Akshaya? Should I do it🤔 love triangle laun kya
No....please, payal loves only Karan..🥺🥺 don't make love triangle (Akshay going with prachi or sonali my thinking🤔)
No doubt...he is very cautious about his every move.
Yes
Dekhte hai...Ravisha does not have a single ounce of mercy...main toh uske liye jayda excited hoon jab woh aur Nandani milenge :kekdog:
Me to
I replied to his earlier.
I am waiting
Thanks a lot for this amazing review 💙 MX
Stay tuned!
thank you kya hota hai..aur aysi koi baat nahi boli Maine 🙄
PS; Rudra Roy kuch seekho mx se review dena :smartm:
Bhai tu jaysa hai vaysa hi rah
 
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