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Kal ishi pe tho sher likha tha main neParty badal le...kuch der pehle toh Usha ke team mein the
Thanks and welcome brother, I hope you support this story till the endAwesome updated
Ha bhai meri bua Viram khand mein rahti hai yrrBhai meri older sister bhi gomtinagar me rahti hai bhai virat khand me...
Bhai wo angrej log hai yaar chhodo unko ....... apan toh ek hi thali ke chatte batte nikle yaar
yaar friend toh ham pahle se hi the lekin ab pakke waleHa bhai meri bua Viram khand mein rahti hai yrr
Now we are friends ?
Abhi bhi usike party me hu lekin kya hai khubsurat striyan dekh ke mann behak jata haiParty badal le...kuch der pehle toh Usha ke team mein the
Fir toh yeh story puri rollercoaster hoge aapke liyeAbhi bhi usike party me hu lekin kya hai khubsurat striyan dekh ke mann behak jata hai
Payal ke scenes? Payal ke story Karan ke baad sabse lambi hai...so jarurat ke hisab se dalun... Kaho birthday mana doon uska season end mein aise cheeze bas filler hote hai...plot mein koi contribution nhi hota.tum aysa kayse kar sakti ho, ayse hi payal ka kuch pata nahi chalta hai ,tum aur ho,lagta hai tum mere marne ka intezar kar rahi ho ,kab main nark me jau aur kab tum payal ke scene likho,main sab samajh raha hu.....
Yeh Kahan se gin liya...isse jayda hi honge har chapter pe naye naye likes aate haiI know very well, total 57 readers hai storys pe
Roller-coaster nahi ,hole wala hot air balloon bana diya hai kab niche aa jau pata nahi, Hawa me latka ke rakh diya hai tumne mujhkoFir toh yeh story puri rollercoaster hoge aapke liye
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Bhai agar aysa hai toh meri payal se dur hi rahna ,wo bahut hi masoom hai koi galat nahi bolega ushke bare meAbhi bhi usike party me hu lekin kya hai khubsurat striyan dekh ke mann behak jata hai
Haan manwao do na kam se kam ek scene se hi dil ko Rahat milegi.... aur jab first time tum ne mujhe choose karne ko Bola tha na toh roy ki tarah main bhi Nandini ko choose karne wala tha ,lekin dil ne payal ko choose kiya tha ..... aur introduction me jo likha hai na tumne ,destiny will bring them together again ush se hi pata chal gaya tha ki payal ke sath kuch toh gadbad honi hi hai , so I choose payal.....Payal ke scenes? Payal ke story Karan ke baad sabse lambi hai...so jarurat ke hisab se dalun... Kaho birthday mana doon uska season end mein aise cheeze bas filler hote hai...plot mein koi contribution nhi hota.
Ye ek ek chapter ke nahi Hai ye all chapters ke readers hai and over all Dekhen toh 78-80 ke aass pass hote hai......Yeh Kahan se gin liya...isse jayda hi honge har chapter pe naye naye likes aate hai