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Romance Ek Ajeeb si love story (completed)

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Update # 11


Apne apartment pahunch kar Himansh seedhe parking chala gaya aur wahi ki lift se Pari ko baahon me uthaye apne floor ki taraf badh gaya . Use na jane kyu apne andar kuchh badlta sa feel ho raha tha . Pari ko bed par lita kar pahle wo bahar jane ke liye palta lekin jane kaun si magnetic power use wapas Pari ki ore le gayi . Himansh ne Pari ke maathe par halke se kiss kiya aur " happy Valentines day my dear " bol kar teji se room se bahar nikal gaya .


Room se Bahar aakar Himansh seedhe terrace ki ore tej kadmo se badh gaya . Is wakt use taazi hawa ki sakht jaroorat mahsoos ho rahi thi . Uski dhadkne itni tez thi ki agar koi samne khada hota to bina stethoscope ke sun leta . Himansh ka poora sharir kamp raha tha aur lips par jaise smile chipak gayi thi .jo bhi thodi der pahle usne kiya tha uske liye bilkul naya ahsas tha . Wo khud se hi baatein karne laga .



Himansh - ye kya hua hai aaj mujhko . Pahle to kabhi bhi bhi aisa nahi hua tha . Ye mera pahla kiss nahi tha par mujhe kyu lag raha hai jaise aaj mera ye pahla ahsaas tha . Ye feelings Reveka ke sath kyu nahi aati hain . Aaj kyu meri aankhein us par se hat nahi rahi thi . Uski aankhein kitni badi hain aur uske lips kitne pyare hain , Wo sach me itni cute kyu hai :love: ohh my god kahi mujhe Pari se sach much wala pyar to nahi ho gaya . Nahi nahi ye kaise ho sakta hai par ho gaya to ?


Himansh khud ko badi mushkil se shant kara paya doosri taraf Reveka ne use 50 calls sath hi 10 " go to hell " ka msg kiye sari raat me par Himansh to Pari ke khayalon me khoya tha aur sote hi uske khwabon me kho gaya .

subah jab Pari uthi to uska sir bhari tha . Raat ki koi bhi baat use yaad hi nahi aa rahi thi ki wo yaha kab aur kaise aayi . wo baal bikhere aadhi khuli aankhon se Himansh ko khojte huye hall me pahunch gayi jahan Himansh sofe par so raha tha . Pari Himansh ke sir ki taraf farsh par baith gayi aur kisi chhote bachche ki tarah uska kandha hilane lagi .


Pari - sir uthiye na please dekhiye mera sir kyu ghoom raha hai aur meri aankhein bhi nahi khul rahi hai .



Himansh- aur peelo vine sharbat .


Pari- wo vine tha:eek:

Pari ko khud par joron se gussa aa rahi thi .


Himansh - hmm ruko tum mai tumhare liye nimbu pani banata hoon . tumko achha lagega .

Himansh ko Pari ab koi ajnabi ladki nahi uske sapno wali Pari lag rahi thi jabki Pari Himansh ki smile dekh kar uski wajah Reveka se patch up ko soch rahi thi .



Himansh - aaj mausam kitna achchha hai na Pari .



Pari- hmm kyu ki aap ko to Reveka madam ke milne ka nasha hai par mujhe to thand lag rahi hai upar ye ajeeb se kapde uff pahle mai inko change kar loon waise mujhe aap le kab aaye party se mujhe to kuchh yaad bhi nahi .



Himansh - Reveka koi sharbat thodi hai jo uska nasha hoga baki tumko god me utha kar laya kyu ki tumhare kiko aur tito ne chalne se mana kar diya tha .:lol:



Pari - dekhiye aap mujhe chidhayein nahi :( abb kya karu koi nahi hai jise apna kahti to kiko aur tito ko hi apna dost bana liya . Ye dono mera sara bojh uthate hain aur uff tak nahi karte .



Himansh- sorry mera matlab wo nahi tha .



Pari- pata hai mujhe sir aap bahut achchhe ho . Aap ke hi bharose to thi mai wahan . Aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada karu kam hai .




Himansh- mujhe tumhare sath ki jarurat hai Pari tumhare shukriya ki nahi baki maine jo kiya wo mera farz tha .


Pari - aap bahut achhe hain sir agar bura na mane to ek baat poonchhu ?

Himansh - hmm



Pari - Aap ko apne mom dad ki yaad nahi ati hai ?

Pari baat sun aaj Himansh ko gussa nahi aya balki uski aankhein nam ho gayi .




Himansh - kyu nahi aayegi yaar . Nafarat bhi to usi se ki jati ho jis se koi rishta ho . Mujhe bhi man karta hai ki maa ke aanchal ki chhanw mile . Papa ka margdarshan mile . Kyu Reveka jaisi ladki ke peechhe ghoom raha hoon mai yaar kyu ki akela hoon . Khalti hai ye tanhai mujhe . :( .kisi akele bande ka dard koi nahi samjh sakta hai .

Himansh emotional ho gaya .



Pari- mujhe pata nahi tha ladke bhi rote hain .



Himansh - to kya ladke insan nahi hote hai ?



Pari- isi baat par aap abhi call kariye apne mom ko please .



Himansh- oh no no mujhse nahi hoga please change the topic .

Lekin Pari kahan man ne wali thi jid par ad gayi khud hi Himansh ka phone liya aur mom ka no bhi khoj liya aur call bhi kar diya . Call ko Speaker mode par kar ke wo uth kar jane lagi to Himansh ne uska haath pakad kar apne bilkul paas bitha liya .

Call ko Doosri taraf Himansh ki mom ne uthaya tha . Dono taraf se sirf siskiyon ki awaaj aa rahi thi .Pari ke bhi gaalon par aansu ki boonde ludhak gayi . Himansh ke liye bahut kathin samay tha . Uske 25 saalon ke gile shikawe aur gussa pal par me mom ke aansuon me bah gaya . Jab doosri taraf se rone ki awaaj tej hone lagi to Himansh ne badi mushkil se khud ka rona roka aur bade ki pyar se bola " mom " .

Himansh ke itna kahte hi phone ki doosri side se mamta aur aashirwad ki jhadi lag gayi . Himansh se ab ruka nahi gaya aur wo Pari ko jor se hug kar ke rone laga jabki Pari Himansh ke aisa karne se hairan thi par usne khud se Himansh ko alag nahi kiya balki uske peeth ko sahla kar chup karane lagi .wo khud bhi ro rahi thi par maa bete ko milwane par wo khush bhi bahut thi .
 

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Update # 11


Apne apartment pahunch kar Himansh seedhe parking chala gaya aur wahi ki lift se Pari ko baahon me uthaye apne floor ki taraf badh gaya . Use na jane kyu apne andar kuchh badlta sa feel ho raha tha . Pari ko bed par lita kar pahle wo bahar jane ke liye palta lekin jane kaun si magnetic power use wapas Pari ki ore le gayi . Himansh ne Pari ke maathe par halke se kiss kiya aur " happy Valentines day my dear " bol kar teji se room se bahar nikal gaya .


Room se Bahar aakar Himansh seedhe terrace ki ore tej kadmo se badh gaya . Is wakt use taazi hawa ki sakht jaroorat mahsoos ho rahi thi . Uski dhadkne itni tez thi ki agar koi samne khada hota to bina stethoscope ke sun leta . Himansh ka poora sharir kamp raha tha aur lips par jaise smile chipak gayi thi .jo bhi thodi der pahle usne kiya tha uske liye bilkul naya ahsas tha . Wo khud se hi baatein karne laga .



Himansh - ye kya hua hai aaj mujhko . Pahle to kabhi bhi bhi aisa nahi hua tha . Ye mera pahla kiss nahi tha par mujhe kyu lag raha hai jaise aaj mera ye pahla ahsaas tha . Ye feelings Reveka ke sath kyu nahi aati hain . Aaj kyu meri aankhein us par se hat nahi rahi thi . Uski aankhein kitni badi hain aur uske lips kitne pyare hain , Wo sach me itni cute kyu hai :love: ohh my god kahi mujhe Pari se sach much wala pyar to nahi ho gaya . Nahi nahi ye kaise ho sakta hai par ho gaya to ?


Himansh khud ko badi mushkil se shant kara paya doosri taraf Reveka ne use 50 calls sath hi 10 " go to hell " ka msg kiye sari raat me par Himansh to Pari ke khayalon me khoya tha aur sote hi uske khwabon me kho gaya .

subah jab Pari uthi to uska sir bhari tha . Raat ki koi bhi baat use yaad hi nahi aa rahi thi ki wo yaha kab aur kaise aayi . wo baal bikhere aadhi khuli aankhon se Himansh ko khojte huye hall me pahunch gayi jahan Himansh sofe par so raha tha . Pari Himansh ke sir ki taraf farsh par baith gayi aur kisi chhote bachche ki tarah uska kandha hilane lagi .


Pari - sir uthiye na please dekhiye mera sir kyu ghoom raha hai aur meri aankhein bhi nahi khul rahi hai .



Himansh- aur peelo vine sharbat .


Pari- wo vine tha:eek:

Pari ko khud par joron se gussa aa rahi thi .


Himansh - hmm ruko tum mai tumhare liye nimbu pani banata hoon . tumko achha lagega .

Himansh ko Pari ab koi ajnabi ladki nahi uske sapno wali Pari lag rahi thi jabki Pari Himansh ki smile dekh kar uski wajah Reveka se patch up ko soch rahi thi .



Himansh - aaj mausam kitna achchha hai na Pari .



Pari- hmm kyu ki aap ko to Reveka madam ke milne ka nasha hai par mujhe to thand lag rahi hai upar ye ajeeb se kapde uff pahle mai inko change kar loon waise mujhe aap le kab aaye party se mujhe to kuchh yaad bhi nahi .



Himansh - Reveka koi sharbat thodi hai jo uska nasha hoga baki tumko god me utha kar laya kyu ki tumhare kiko aur tito ne chalne se mana kar diya tha .:lol:



Pari - dekhiye aap mujhe chidhayein nahi :( abb kya karu koi nahi hai jise apna kahti to kiko aur tito ko hi apna dost bana liya . Ye dono mera sara bojh uthate hain aur uff tak nahi karte .



Himansh- sorry mera matlab wo nahi tha .



Pari- pata hai mujhe sir aap bahut achchhe ho . Aap ke hi bharose to thi mai wahan . Aap ka jitna bhi shukriya ada karu kam hai .




Himansh- mujhe tumhare sath ki jarurat hai Pari tumhare shukriya ki nahi baki maine jo kiya wo mera farz tha .


Pari - aap bahut achhe hain sir agar bura na mane to ek baat poonchhu ?

Himansh - hmm



Pari - Aap ko apne mom dad ki yaad nahi ati hai ?

Pari baat sun aaj Himansh ko gussa nahi aya balki uski aankhein nam ho gayi .




Himansh - kyu nahi aayegi yaar . Nafarat bhi to usi se ki jati ho jis se koi rishta ho . Mujhe bhi man karta hai ki maa ke aanchal ki chhanw mile . Papa ka margdarshan mile . Kyu Reveka jaisi ladki ke peechhe ghoom raha hoon mai yaar kyu ki akela hoon . Khalti hai ye tanhai mujhe . :( .kisi akele bande ka dard koi nahi samjh sakta hai .

Himansh emotional ho gaya .



Pari- mujhe pata nahi tha ladke bhi rote hain .



Himansh - to kya ladke insan nahi hote hai ?



Pari- isi baat par aap abhi call kariye apne mom ko please .



Himansh- oh no no mujhse nahi hoga please change the topic .

Lekin Pari kahan man ne wali thi jid par ad gayi khud hi Himansh ka phone liya aur mom ka no bhi khoj liya aur call bhi kar diya . Call ko Speaker mode par kar ke wo uth kar jane lagi to Himansh ne uska haath pakad kar apne bilkul paas bitha liya .

Call ko Doosri taraf Himansh ki mom ne uthaya tha . Dono taraf se sirf siskiyon ki awaaj aa rahi thi .Pari ke bhi gaalon par aansu ki boonde ludhak gayi . Himansh ke liye bahut kathin samay tha . Uske 25 saalon ke gile shikawe aur gussa pal par me mom ke aansuon me bah gaya . Jab doosri taraf se rone ki awaaj tej hone lagi to Himansh ne badi mushkil se khud ka rona roka aur bade ki pyar se bola " mom " .

Himansh ke itna kahte hi phone ki doosri side se mamta aur aashirwad ki jhadi lag gayi . Himansh se ab ruka nahi gaya aur wo Pari ko jor se hug kar ke rone laga jabki Pari Himansh ke aisa karne se hairan thi par usne khud se Himansh ko alag nahi kiya balki uske peeth ko sahla kar chup karane lagi .wo khud bhi ro rahi thi par maa bete ko milwane par wo khush bhi bahut thi .
Superb and emotional update :superb:
 
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Nice lovely update.
Caring se hi pyar ata hai jo aapne bahut ache se dekhai hae update 10 aur 11 mai.
Pari ke lie Himansh ke caring aab pyar me badal geya hai.Pari bhi Himansh ke lie fikhr hai islie wo Himansh ko aapne mom se milanye ki khoshish kari.Aap dekhne wali bath hai ki pari himansh ki pyar ko sikar korega ya nahi?
Himansh reveka koi pyar nahi karta kiu usko koi care bhi nahi karta. Magar ye drama kitne din chalega ye dekhne wali bath hai?
AAPKE WRITING SKILL DAILY EK LEVEL KORKE BAR RAHA HAI,HATS OFF TO YOU.
THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL LOVE STORY.
 

Notebook

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Nice lovely update.
Caring se hi pyar ata hai jo aapne bahut ache se dekhai hae update 10 aur 11 mai.
Pari ke lie Himansh ke caring aab pyar me badal geya hai.Pari bhi Himansh ke lie fikhr hai islie wo Himansh ko aapne mom se milanye ki khoshish kari.Aap dekhne wali bath hai ki pari himansh ki pyar ko sikar korega ya nahi?
Himansh reveka koi pyar nahi karta kiu usko koi care bhi nahi karta. Magar ye drama kitne din chalega ye dekhne wali bath hai?
AAPKE WRITING SKILL DAILY EK LEVEL KORKE BAR RAHA HAI,HATS OFF TO YOU.
THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL LOVE STORY.

Thanks:yo:
Pyar ek ehsas ka naam hai jo duniya badal deta hai .pari aur Himansh ke beech jo bonding develop ho rahi hai wo ruhani hai . Lets see himansh kaise kahega usase apne dil ki baat :dost:
 

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Really I appreciate...
A very emotional & Heart touching update....

The way of execution... Of character in story.... Awesome....
 

Naina

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Woww, very lovely update.thodisi emotional ki tadka bhi bhi lag gayi .. Pari aur himesh ke bis jo chal rahi hai ushe dekh ek gana yaad ati hai... Do dil mil rahe hai, magar.. Chupke, Chupke.... Keep it up sir ji.... Such a wonderful story... :derisive:
 
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